Dear John,
Hello.I am glad to hear that you are going to travel.Now I'd like to share my view on traveling with you.Traveling is a very good activity.You can enjoy the beautiful scenery,breathe the fresh air,make many friends and relax yourself by traveling.But before starting out,you should know about the weather there,take enough clothes,camera and some medicine with you.Besides,you should also pay attention to the food and your safety.Do you agree with me?wish you a good journey.
Yours,
LiHua

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　　a busy day
it was a busy day for eddie last sunday.called up by his mom,he was very tired because he stayed up yesterday evening.but he must woke up.about 7 o'clock,he had his breakfast with his mom and dad.it wasn't a long time after he had it.he went to the small shopping mall to buy some necessities for the family.by the time he got home,his mom has already prepared lunch.it's about 1 pm,when he thought he will have a rest after whole morning's work.he was told to go to visit his grandparents at 1:30pm.thought he was not willing to do it,but he had to.after that ,he was exhausted.but he was just got a message that he will be in the gym in time in order to do some martial arts.he was crazy.

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　　1 travelling around is really an exciting activity.
2 when you are tired or free,you could walk around ,appreciate the beautiful scenery and breathe the fresh air.
3 you also could make friends and relex yourself,which is really beneficial to you health.
4 the preconditions are that you should know the weather,bring relevant clothes you need ,the camera and common medicine.
5 besides,you also should pay more attention to your food and safety.