我是同济大学的在校生，像英语这类的课程应该比较提高（当然，英语是我初高中时候最有把握的一门课，在高手如林的重点高中，英语卷面成绩第一总能帮我拉一拉总分），只要你真的花时间了，肯定可以较快提高，这一些心得体会我已经跟很多人分享过了（通过交谈、邮件、百度知道），所以我的学习经验真的是“复制..复制..再复制.”如果你觉得靠谱的话就去试试吧，希望对你也有所帮助。我们今天就讲讲作文的写法


【英语作文的考试重点】
初高中的英语作文重在展现你自己的水平：1.语法，尽可能不出现语法错误。2.书写，书写尽量工整，这个一方面能够让老师看得舒服，另一方面也表明了你写作的思路流畅。3.从句、长句、优美的句子、高级词汇的灵活运用。

【万金油句子举例】
1.___has been brought into focus,and ____ always aroused the greatest concern

2.Among the various reasons contributing to this phonomenon, ____ plays an important part.

3.There is no complete agreement among people as to ____ .Some people take it for granted that _____________ while others hold the opinion that ___________ .

4.Taking above metioned factors into consideration, I think ________

5.In a whole, ___________


【提高的方法】
我高二的时候买了一本书《王长喜十句作文法》讲的是关于四六级考试的，应用优美的模板来写作的技巧（说实在的这个有点儿投机取巧，但是应对考试绰绰有余）。我分析了一下平时的考卷，发现作文的题材有六七成都和里面所介绍的五种相关，我就把他里面提供的相同题材的几个不同模板做了一下整理，每种题材整理出一个我自认为最完美的模板（模板中不乏显摆自己高超语法技巧的闪光点）然后每一次考试尽量套上一个适合的模板，结果是十有八九我的作文会成为范文之一。

所以，建议你买一本类似于模板的书，这种书市面上现在很多的，不仅是王长喜的，其他的也有。你现在要万金油句子你也不一定会运用得很自然甚至巧妙，因此，整理出几套模板，然后就这几套模板好好看一些优秀的例文。相信不久你的作文水平会得到很大的提升

真希望说了这么多对你有实质性的帮助，加油啊，期待你如愿以偿，加油！

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【英语作文八种常用句型】

一) 原因 

1.A number of factors are accountable for this situation. 

A number of factors might contribute to (lead to )(account for ) the phenomenon(problem). 

2. The answer to this problem involves many factors. 

3. The phenomenon mainly stems from the fact that... 

4. The factors that contribute to this situation include... 

5. The change in ...largely results from the fact that... 

6. We may blame ...,but the real causes are... 

7. Part of the explanations for it is that ... 

One of the most common factors (causes ) is that ... 

Another contributing factor (cause ) is ... 

Perhaps the primary factor is that … 

But the fundamental cause is that 

二) 比较 

1.The advantage far outweigh the disadvantages. 

2.The advantages of A are much greater than those of B. 

3.A may be preferable to B, but A suffers from the disadvantages that... 

4.It is reasonable to maintain that ...but it would be foolish to claim that... 

5.For all the disadvantages, it has its compensating advantages. 

6.Like anything else, it has its faults. 

7.A and B has several points in common. 

8.A bears some resemblances to B. 

9.However, the same is not applicable to B. 

10. A and B differ in several ways. 

11. Evidently, it has both negative and positive effects. 

12. People used to think ..., but things are different now. 

13. The same is true of B. 

14. Wondering as A is ,it has its drawbacks. 

15. It is true that A ... , but the chief faults (obvious defects )are ... 

三) 批驳

1)It is true that ..., but one vital point is being left out. 

2) There is a grain of truth in these statements, but they ignore a more important fact. 

3) Some people say ..., but it does not hold water. 

4) Many of us have been under the illusion that... 

5) A close examination would reveal how ridiculous the statement is. 

6) It makes no sense to argue for ... 

7) Too much stress placed on ... may lead to ... 

8) Such a statement mainly rests on the assumption that ... 

9) Contrary to what is widely accepted, I maintain that ...

四) 后果 

1. It may give rise to a host of problems. 

2. The immediate result it produces is ... 

3. It will exercise a profound influence upon... 

4. Its consequence can be so great that... 

五) 举例 

1) A good case in point is ... 

2) As an illustration, we may take ... 

3) Such examples might be given easily. 

4) ...is often cited as an example. 

六) 证明

1) No one can deny the fact that ... 

2) The idea is hardly supported by facts. 

3) Unfortunately, none of the available data shows ... 

4) Recent studies indicate that ... 

5) There is sufficient evidence to show that ... 

6) According to statistics proved by ..., it can be seen that ... 

七) 开篇 

1) Many nations have been faced with the problem of ... 

2) Recently the problem has been brought into focus. 

3) Recently the phenomenon has become a heated topic. 

4) Recently the issue has aroused great concern among ... 

5) Nowadays there is a growing concern over ... 

6) Never in our history has the idea that ... been so popular. 

7) Faced with ..., quite a few people argue that ... 

8) According to a recent survey, ... 

9) With the rapid development of ..., ... 

八) 结尾 

1) From what has been discussed above, we can draw the conclusion that ... 

2) It is high time that strict measures were taken to stop ... 

3) It is necessary that steps should be taken to ... 

4) In conclusion, it is imperative that ... 

5) There is no easy method, but ...might be of some help. 

6) To solve the above-mentioned problem, we must ... 

7) In summary, if we continue to ignore the above-mentioned issue, more problems will crop up. 

8) With the efforts of all parts concerned, the problem will be solved thoroughly.

9) We might do more than identify the cause ; it is important to take actions to ... 

10) Taking all these into account, we ... 

11) Whether it is good or not /positive or negative, one thing is certain/clear...