高一,英语作文大概也就80--120 吧。别急!首先,给你说一下,作为一个中国人要写什么程度的英语作文。 1.作为一门外语,不像我们写母语作文那么长(一般100左右就差不多), 也不必那么细(说上几点就可以)。 2.最为一门外语,如果你的作文条理分明,就能拿好分。如果没有太大的语法错误的话,就那高分。而条理分明一般就是三大段。对于记叙文来说,第一段总结,第三段总结,第二段细述。也可以按时间段来写。对于阐明你的观点的那种,更好办。第一段,一部分人的观点,第二段另一部分人的观点(一般题目前两段都是两中持相反的观点),第三段,阐明你的观点,注意,对于积极向上的那种题目,说积极的观点,不积极的采取中间态度。但一定要说出原因,因为这片作文里,你的观点才是主角儿。 3.没有低级的语法错误。 4.如果实在不行,胡编乱写也行但不要有语法的低级错误。老师也会给你几分的(这是考试时,实在没办法才使用的)。再,人家要求是你的开学第一天,我不太清楚你的感受,所以就写我的了。你完了课根据你自己的修改一下。 The First Day of A New Term It is a fine day today.And I will go to my new school,(学校名字)High School.I wish I could make many friends ,and have a great study experience,learn more things there. I get up at 6:00, earlier than usaul.because I was so excited that I couldnot wait to school.(学校名字)High School ,I am coming.At 8:00 ,my father drive me to my school.All the birds I meet is smileing to me,and the sunshine is very bright.I say Hello to everybody I meet,and they smile to me. Oh,that is my new school,I will spend three years here to study,make friends.The school gate is very beautiful.There are so many students.The school yard is full of green plants.The students are very friendly.Oh,I love it. I togather with my father do all the things a new student should do.Thank godness,all the things is good. I soon make friends with the other seven of my roommates. It is a lovely day,isn'it?
除了去公园之外,我的活动范围仅限于邻近地区。(apart from going to the park, my scope of movement is confined to the neighbourhood) 2.没有足够的证据很难作出结论。There is insufficient evidence to (draw a conclusion) 3.这些科学家的探寻将有助于我们项目的成功。(The scientific enquiry by the scientists contribute to the success of our project) 4.居斯特夫.埃菲尔(Gustave Eiffel)对他修建铁塔的计划满怀热情,而这座塔使他闻名于世。(Gustave Eiffel is enthusiatic about his plan to construct the tower. This tower will let him well renown in the world ) 5.他常提出些不同寻常的计划。你加入之前要慎重对待。(He always put forward unusual plans, so be cautious to this before you join in the plan) 6.谁是第一个反对“地心说”的人?(Who is the first person to reject the theory of the earth as the center of the universe) 7.虽然他的写作没什么意思,但弗雷德还是确信自己的作文会得高分。(Although his writing does not make sense, however Federick is positive about scoring high marks for his writings)
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