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Shoes
My
mother
usually
are
busy,
no
one
inside
was
not
too
busy
the
past
few
days,
but
back
home
she
will
be
busy
to
do
this
and
that,
no
free
time,
but
also
in
their
lives
and
show
concern
for
my
learning
.
On
one
occasion,
the
weather
has
turned
warm,
the
original
repulsive
thermal
wear
shoes
that
are
tired
of
single
shoes
not
to
wear
a
small.
Mom
raised
me
to
buy
a
pair
of
larger
shoes.
Mom
always
agreed
to
my
request,
that
is,
there
is
no
time
for
me
to
buy
shoes.
Nothing
I
can
do.
On
this
day,
my
mother
came
back
from
work
earlier
than
usual
to
see
I
have
to
go
home
after
school,
said:
"Xiaoli,
eat
dinner,
I
will
take
you
to
buy
shoes!"
"Good,
good
mother!"
Said,
two
of
us
hurried
dinner.
Eat
dinner,
my
mother
settled
down
to
go
on
to
take
me
off
We
are
two
people
to
the
streets,
while
away
while
watching.
At
this
time,
I
saw
a
roadside
shops,
is
a
store
specifically
to
buy
shoes.
On
the
night,I
told
my
mother.
Mother
took
me
to
go
inside.
I
see
there
are
a
pair
of
shoes
I
disdain.
I
shook
his
head,
went
out.
Mom
took
me
to
continue
to
move
forward.
Came
to
the
second
shoe
shop.
Her
mother
a
pair
of
eyes,
I
feel
satisfied
with
sitting
on
the
edge
of
the
bench
to
try
to
wear
again.
Alas,
this
is
too
small
pairs
of
shoes,
clothing
feet
get
hurt.
Asked
the
shop
owner
asked,
he
said
that
this
type
of
the
double
greatest.
I
had
also
followed
her
mother
went
out.
Mother
encouraged
me,
said:
"Son,
it
does
not
matter,
there
are
a
lot
of
shops
can
buy."
Mom
also
took
me
to
several
other
shops
turn
a
switch.
Is
not
a
style
not
to
one's
liking,
that
is,
the
size
is
inappropriate,
Alas,
a
pair
of
shoes
is
so
difficult.
I
too
feel
that
there
are
some
tired,
then
see
the
mother
or
confidence,
so
I
had
to
follow
her
mother
to
continue
to
move
forward.
Walk
more
than
a
dozen
stores,
I
still
did
not
get
my
favorite
shoes.
I
saw
almost
the
whole
street
to
go
over,
shops
will
also
be
emptied.
How
do?
Mother
said:
"go,
and
then
take
a
look
at
the
past!"The
god
really
pays
off,
I
am
in
the
final
of
a
store
and
I
buy
a
pair
of
shoes
like
her
mother.
At
this
time,
we
have
visited
in
the
streets
more
than
two
hours,
and
has
come
to
a
little
over
9:00,
and
many
stores
have
closed
the
shop.
From
time
to
buy
shoes,
I
realized
that
the
mother
really
hurts
me!