National Day
October 1st is National Day in China every year.On that day ,Chinese people are quite happy to celebrate their motherland's birthday.and most people have seven days ' time to spend their holiday .they can go travelling ,visit their relatives or friends,shopping,relaxing or staying at home to have a good rest .During the holiday people raise national flags and red lights everywhere
国庆节
十月一日每年在中国是国庆节.在那日子,中国人相当快乐庆祝他们的祖国生日.大多数的人有七天时间度过他们的假日.他们能去旅行 ,叁观他们的亲戚或者朋友,购物,放松以及待在家有好休息.在假日人期间各处升起国旗和红灯
这个可以吗？

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　　A visit to Beijing
On Oct 1st, the National Day of China this year, dad, mom and I went to Beijing on a package tour arranged by the travel agency. I was so happy because it's the first time that I visit the Great Wall.
The Great Wall, one of the greatest wonders of the world, was enlisted in the World Heritage in 1987.We took the bus to arrive at the foot of the Great Wall. I began to climb the dreamed Great Wall. At first I did not feel tired, but after I stepped a thousands of steps I felt tired and thirsty. At last, we stood on the highest point of the Great Wall. A Chinese saying goes like that, “you are not a real hero until you have climbed the Great Wall”. The landscape outside and inside the Great Wall was so beautiful in this autumn!
访问北京
今年在10月1日中国国庆日，爸爸妈妈和我由旅行社安排旅行到北京。我非常高兴，因为这是我第一次参观长城。
长城，是世界上最伟大的奇迹之一，在1987年被列入世界遗产。我们是乘坐公共汽车到达了长城脚下。有那么多人到过这里。起初我并没有感到疲倦，但在我走了数千步后我感到又累又渴。最后，我们站在长城的最高点。中国有句谚语“不到长城非好汉”。在今年秋天长城内外景观是如此美丽！

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　　Today is National Day.We have no classes. In the morning, I went to the People's Park with my mother.We had a good time. In the afternoon, I helped my parents to cook supper.I had a busy day today.
今天是国庆节，我们没有课，早上，我和妈妈去了人民公园，我们玩得很开心，下午，我帮父母做晚饭，我过了忙碌的一天

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　　今天是国庆节，我们没有课，早上，我和妈妈去了人民公园，我们玩得很开心，下午，我帮父母做晚饭，我过了忙碌的一天

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　　Dear ann:
Hello, very glad to receive your letter. From the letter, I know you live a very happy holiday. I also feel very happy.
I have seven days holiday national day, our whole family went to Xiamen. We have a lot of sightseeing attractions: Gulangyu Islet, the road around the island, Garden Show Park, hero Mishima etc.. We are very happy to play. Xiamen is a beautiful place, people are very warm, civilization. I like it very much.
Best wishes
Jeanne