I am planing to travel to Suzhou a city called Eastern Venice.I wan to see the beautiful rivers with different kinds of bridges across it ,Then most attracting scene is the Lining Park ,i will be excited once i hear the name .The beautiful and ancient house with the green trees arounded will make the visit very comfortable .The other reason of my choosing Suzhou as my travel place is that it is quite close to my place ,i can save a lot money while enjoy my fabulous life .To make a short trip to Suzhou would not make me tired and i can also enjoy the life ,why not go there ?

随便写写，注意，我写的地点，你如果是离苏州比较远的话，就不要全盘照抄啦，改改好了，呵呵……

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　　I am Nancy and I come from America. These days, I am traveling in China, the beautiful and ancient country in Asia. I really want to visit every parts of China. And first, I plan to go to Xi’an province. Secondly, I will visit the Suzhou Gardens. Because they are so outstanding and famous. What’s more, the Great Wall is the most important. I’ll go to Beijing, the capital city of China, to see it. I have a wonderful time here and I love China indeed.
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　　last saturday, i went to the zoo and parents. that morning, the weather was fine. we decided to go by bike, environmentally friendly and convenient. to the zoo, originally planned with the animals according to a like, a lot of zoo visitors, not the camera. in the afternoon it began to rain, the animals are sleeping. no umbrella, feeling tired and hungry. so we will return home.