暑假兼职的英语日记

This summer vacation I got a part-time job in a snack bar. At the beginning, I couldn't do well at all often made mistakes. I was very low-spirited,father mother encouraged me a lot. So I began to try my best. Gradually, I could do a very good job. I felt very excited when I received my pay for the first time. I already made up my mind to find another part-time job in this winter vacation. I believe I can do better next time.
这个暑假我在一个餐吧里得到了一个兼职。开始，我经常出错做不好工作。我有点意志有点消沉，父亲母亲都鼓励我。所以我尽力做到最好。渐渐的，我可以把工作做得很好。当我收到工资我感到很开心。我已经有信心在这个寒假找到另外的兼职了。我相信下次我可以做得更好。

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