词都用错了 succeed是动词 名词时success

succeed sets up of hard work 改成 diligence is the basis of success.

then you will don’t have sweet 改成 then you won't have sweet

sweat waters flowers of succeed. 改成sweat waters flowers of success.

someone has good condition when he was junior时态要一致改为 someone had good background when he was junior.

, he has nothing to do everyday最好改为 , he is unaccomplished.

and someone doesn’t have good condition when he was junior中的condition改为background.

it is clean that succeed doesn’t consist in condition, but consists in hard work.改为it is clean that success doesn't result from family background but lie on diligence.

why do we study such long time? the answer is very simple: we wish to realize our dream.改为 the reason is obvious why we have been learning for such a long time. we hope that we could realize our dreams by assiduous learning.

but do you know? liu qian performed magic to passerby on the street when he had worked in starry sky star-tv. 改为 but do you know that liu qian performed magic to passersby in the street when he worked in starry sky star-tv.

and jay zhou has learnt the piano for ten years, he was a waiter after he had finished high school.改为

and jay zhou has been practising playing the pinao for ten years. he was a waiter after he had finished high school.

many singers refused tossing the songs that he write. 改为 many singers refused to toss the songs that he write.

i believe in every famous peason all has a experience that he chase his dream.改为 i believe that every famous person have a experience of chasing dream.

i’m not sure of hard work will succeed, but don’t hard work centainly can’t succee.改为 i'm not sure

that if you work hard, you must succeed.

but don’t hard work centainly can’t succee. 改为 but without diligence, there must be a failure.

if you pay out your sweat, it won’t without harvest, however it doesn’t reach harrest season.改为

it pays to diligence when the time comes.

please remember: light of succeed won’t shine someone while without reason, only hard work will succeed. 改为 please remember that light of success won't shine anyone without diligence, only hard work will lead to succeed.

then please remember: no sweet without sweat. 改为 then please remember that no sweet without sweat.