不太确定。 3.2 improve cognitive function 3.3 So that the development of A.I. ensures that it's under control
求在线修改英语作文
Nowadays with the rapid development and increasing popularity of the information technology, shopping on the internet has been a fashion, especially among the young. As far as I am concerned, there are some merits and demerits of online shopping.On the one hand, it is more expedient in that you can buy anything you want within a click instead of stepping into stores, and it saves much time. Plus, online shopping is only determined by your mood. There is no need thinking about the weather, opening and closing time or even places. Sometimes online shopping is also a genuine economy and saves money.However, on the other hand, you can't touch the thing so you do not know how it feels, which can be avoided in the stores. Then the drawback of online shopping is that we can only picture to understand the shape of goods, rather than actually examine the quality of the goods! In the store, however, we can understand the specific situation of the commodity.To sum up, everything has shortcomings! You can choose either way of shopping according to yourself. However, from my perspective, online shopping will be an irreversible trend in the new future.
写一篇自己改的英语作文,我的改变,不少于5句话,并写意忠
Everyone has their own habits, my habit is to watch TV. Watch TV, have the habit of sometimes good, sometimes bad, because many people watch TV and become nearsighted. I watch TV, as long as nobody, I can watch for several hours. It is because watching TV, my eyes now look on the blackboard the word do not know the look; is because watching TV, I am every day for my eyes to worry about, there are so afraid of the day, my eyes to develop into high myopia. But one day I do not watch TV, my mind is always uneasy, just as ants are the same as scratching, even in the homework, I can not help but turn on the TV to watch a little while. I can do homework, the grandfather in the side, did not dare go to open TV. I remember one occasion, grandfather accompanied my homework at home, this time, my favorite look of the TV drama ＂亮剑＂ soon began to open their hearts always want to go watch TV. I'd like to see on TV, Grandpa took a phone call is my Ho table go public and tell him to play chess, Grandpa went. One grandfather, and I opened the TV on. I have read, such as drama, it is already 22:00 o'clock. At this time, I did not expect to do work. Just then, Grandpa returned, he found that not to do my work, I criticized him. I really wanted to give up the habit watching TV and less watching TV, the protection of eyesight, healthy and happy to do a small man.
把我改一下英语文章,要给分数哦！
1. 内容得8分。
2. 注意拼写，大小写，标点。
这部分扣分：-0.5x8=-43. 严重语法错误扣分：-1x4=-44. 另外的3分基本得不到了。
所以总分是：8+12-4-4=12，其实你可以做得更好，第2点完全可以捡回来4分，只要你写完检查一下就好了。
语法错误要尽量避免，平时多读一下课文，培养语感，对于不确定的东西尽量不用，换个说法很多时候是最好的选择。
对于高考作文，一般没必要追求后面的那个附加的3分（内容充实，连贯，用词准确等）。
但是第2项和第3项应该尽量得分，控制在各扣1分的水平，这样你可以得到：8+12-1-1=18分就很好了。
================================================================Ladise and gentlemen==>Ladies写错了I'm glad to be your guide. Today is a rainny day.==>rainny写错了，应该是rainy（一般重读的单音节才会双写.如fun=>funny，而sleep变为sleepy时不双写p）.So I'm afriad wn can't visit the country lives. ==>wn写错了，是we;afriad写错了，应该是afraid. 这里的country lives不是中国人看不懂，你应该指的是参观乡土生活，不过visit要么是参观具体的地点，要么是拜访人，不能这样用。
可以这样改：I'm afraid we can't show you the country lives.或者：I'm afraid we can't visit the countryside. And we have a new plan for it since this morning. ==>严重语法错误，后面有完成时标志since，主句用完成时态=>And we have had（或got） a new plan for it since this morning.Ok !everybody please liten to me carfully: ==>Everybody大写，与句子要用逗号隔开，listen,carefully写错了。
改成： Everybody, please liten to me carfully:We plan to visit the country lives changed into tomorrowm，==>严重语法错误，句子有两个谓语，变为：Our plan to experience（动词，体验） the country lives is changed to tomorrow. change into是变成什么事物（本质变化：如物理的，化学的），这里用change to较合适。
and today please doon't forget to get to gethet at 8:00at the hotel gate,and we are going to by bus.==>doon't写错了。
together合写是副词，分开变成了动词不定式，但to gether在这里不能表意，gether也写错了。
8:00注意与后面的内容分开写。
be going to后面接动词不定式，不能跟介词by，严重语法错误。
全句改为：and today please don't forget to get together at 8:00AM（注意是上午8:00） at the hotel gate,and then we will take bus.(will和be going to有区别，参见：http://zhidao.baidu.com/question/4886343.html)The first we will go to visit a mid-school which ahs 85 years history schoolin the morning. ==>we will go to visit是主语的定语从句，中心词是The first place(first可以作名词，但不能作代词，作名词用是第一名/首先/开头、开始，这里应该加place)，所以本句缺乏谓语is，严重语法错误。
has写错了。
注意书写，school多余导致句意不通，而且跟in连到一起了。
in the morning是visit的时间状语，不要放到从句which has 85 years history之后。
中学不能用：mid-school吧？是middle school.全句改为：The first place we will go to visit in the morning is a middle school which has 85 years history. And in the afternoon we'll cisit a factory exhibition. ==>工业展览是：industrial exhibition（强调展览性质是关于工业的）或industry exhibition（强调展览的职能是展览工业产品）。
对于名词限定词和形容词限定词，你暂时没有必要掌握，就用industry exhibition就可以了。
visit又写错了。
另外状语前置，一般要用逗号隔开；放在后面可隔开可不隔开，结构简单的一般不隔开。
全句改为：And in the afternoon, we'll visit an industry exhibition.There are some different kinds of new products. Some of them won the national prizes for invention. ==>kind要用单数，量词表示很多的概数时用复数，如all kinds of（各种各样的）， kinds of new products（很多种产品），但前面有限定词some和different一般要用单数了。
Some of them won the national prizes for invention.==>跟上文的现在时态有联系，用完成时较好。
Please be there on time. Don't forger to bring the thongs you need with you .==>things写错了，这里不是特指，不需要定冠词the。
注意标点符号：不管是英语还是汉语，都是标点紧跟最后一个词，逗号之前要空一个字符。
bring强调带到说话的地方，这里用take较合适。
全句改为：Don't forger to take things you need with you. if you have my guestions ,you can ask me. ==>if要大写，suggestions写错了，my应该是any. 这句最好要用敬语。
注意中间的逗号的位置。
跟前面的suggestions搭配，用tell不用ask.全句改为：If you have any suggestions, please tell me（或please let me know）. Thank you !
能帮我改改英语作文吗？很简单的~
Elderly teacher(s) and young teacher(s) With the [development of society](social development),teachers play an important role in society.Some students may like elderly teachers(') [reaching] because they think elderly teachers have more [teching](teaching) experience(s) and [that they] tend to be patient and careful with explanations (given to the students).However,I prefer to be tanght by young teachers.Firstly,we students have much in common with them,so they are our friends as well as our teachers.Secondly,they are more energetic and enthusastic.Usually they can make their classes lively and interesting.Besides,they are more ready to accept or create new ideas (than elderly teachers),including teaching (techniques).Thirdly,most young teachers devote themselves to their work,making them teach creatively and [effectivelly](effectively).In a word,I prefer young teachers to elderly teachers.[] 有问题的部分，可能是需要改写，或拼写问题.（） 实际改动的地方.
英语高手帮我改下这篇自己写的英语作文,有很多问题呢~
Dream is sun.Dream is light.Dream is_______（写一个和前者适合的单词）.(Dream is the light and is the sun as well.如果你非得要排比句的话，那就：Dream is the candle;Dream is the lamp; Dream is the sun as well; because the lamp is brighter than the candle,and the sun is the brightest.)When I was a little a girl.I had a dream.I think the dream is very wonderful.Can you guess it? Yes,I want to be a singer.(i have had a wonderful dream that i will become a super singer one day since my childhood.Do you think so?)When I was nine years old.I listened one of Rong zu'er's songs.Its name is ＂Hui Zhe Chi Bang De Nv Hai（请用英文翻译一下歌名，是挥着翅膀的女孩）＂Since then,I have started learning to sing songs.(A girl flies with her wing)To learn to sing is very difficult.I spent a lot of time on it.I had a sorethroat soon.I had to eat so many medicine.But I'm not afraid（害怕，貌似写错了）of it.I still practied it hard.Because I belived if I practice hard,my dream will come ture（这里要用到“主将从先”这个语法，但我不会。
i don't understand what you said.）.I always say＂Come On＂ to myself.I also learned how to play the drums.It helps me a lot in music.After two years,I did well in singing .I began to take part in the singsing games.I did my best and won second places.I felt so exciting that couldn't help crying.I thing my efforts were not in vain.Now, I want to sing a song to my efforts and everybody:（挥着翅膀的女孩英文版，这个歌词我有，不用管这点。
）I can fly I'm proud that I can fly To give the best of mine Till the end of the time Believe me I can fly I'm proud that I can fly To give the best of mine The heaven in the sky前两句修改的在括号里，后面的直接在你的句子修改，你写得不错作为一个初二生。
帮忙改篇英语作文：whoshoulddothehousework？
It is generally believed that mothers should do the whole housework but I dont't think so . I think children ought to do more .At first,I have a thought that we can learn life skills from doing housework.As a new era of boys,I'll be able toa good family man so that I won't starve to death 。
Another advantage is that I think doing housework can lose my mother's temper. That is because too much housework often make（改为makes） my mom be（去掉be） mad and maybe help（改为helps） her do it （加上逗号）which is a good way. All in all,I think children should do the（去掉the） housework more,don't you think so?
帮忙把作文改成初三英语的文体！帮忙改成初三的英语作文文体,例如...
My name is Sam. I've been in Beijing for the last time and gone to Wangfujing. I was surprised to find that great changes have taken place here. The living conditions improved a lot here, has a very big change.Road is no longer a crowded, they created the ring road, building was built high also, shops in the city, capacious and bright.There are many beautiful flowers in the market.Success in the Olympic Games to Beijing people are very proud of. I am very happy to visit Beijing again and hope that it will change more and more.
大家来帮我改改我的英语作文啊...
题目是：乘坐公共交通工具旅行有哪些优点或缺点？这个问题我高三时也写过.你的作文意思是：目前，我们的生活离不开公共交通.当我们去上学或上班时，我们通常采取做公交车和地铁的方式.我们使用它们是因为它们都非常方便，安全.但其实是不舒服的.因此，我认为开我们自己的汽车旅行更方便，舒适.公共交通十分缓慢.我们年轻，所以我们不能浪费任何时间.At present,we can not live without public transport.When we go to school or work,we usually take the bus and subway to do way.This is because they give us the convenience and security.However,this is uncomfortable.Because a lot of people by bus,car is very crowded,and delays on the way a lot of time.On the contrary,if we are to open your own car travel will be more convenient and comfortable.As the saying goes,＂a coin has two faces.＂Take public transport vehicles to fulfill their advantages and disadvantages!Therefore,we can take different situations to take a different approach.仅供参考，也许也有语法错误，能力有限了.不知道你们的评分标准，自己选合适的内容改吧！
请哪位老师帮忙改改英语作文,指出错误指出,十分感谢！！
改在括号里Dear Henry,I'm glad to receive【 you】（your） letter. It's a pleasure 【for】 me to tell you my plan of this coming summer vacation after the college entrance examination. First of all， 【a good rest is needed because I do feel tired after the hard work of all these years.】（ being hardworking for all these years,I do need a good rest ） ，【Of course，】（but I would not forget my mission as a student）, I'll do more reading as well.what's more, I'll spend some time 【 staying】（ in company with ）my parents, chatting with them and doing some house work for so much things they 've done for me, and If possible, I'll take part in some social 【arteritis 】（activities?）so that I can know more about the society.Best wishes!Li Hua【】中的是我觉得可以改进的，（）里的是我修改的，希望对你有帮助哦望采纳
