作文一:《社会现象英语议论文》2700字
随着互联网的发展和普及,网络购物在中国也变得越来越普遍了,甚至已经成了我们日常生活的一部分了;相信同学们身边一定有不少同学已经通过网络进行购物了,比如*****网,京东商城等;但是网络购物究竟有何利弊呢? 请写一篇短文,谈谈网上购物的好处与坏处。 _______________________________________________________
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We talked about the advantages and disadvantages of internet shopping these days. Some students think it's very convenient for us to go shopping on the internet. The shops on Internet ,for example taobao., 360buy. are open for almost 24 hours a day, so we can buy something we want at any time if we like. What's more, we needn't to wait in a queue.
However, some students disagreed with them. We can't see the things while we are shopping. So we are not sure whether they are good or not.. Besides, we can't enjoy the happiness of shopping with our friends.
近年来,我国火灾频频发生。2010年11月15日,上海胶东路一座高楼起火,损失严重。这个事件提醒注意防火安全很重要。请你根据以下提示,写一篇短文来分析引起火灾的原因并谈谈你对火灾中自救的建议。
要求:
1.词数不少于90,短文开头过渡已为你写好,不计入总词数;
2.要点完整、层次清楚、语法正确、上下文连贯。
提示:
防火安全fire safety 电 electricity 燃放烟花爆竹 set off fireworks
爬行crawl on one’s knees 消防栓 the fire hydrant
Usually fire accidents are caused because of carelessness. For example, ______________________
What can we do to protect ourselves when there is a fire?____________________________
2011年初,我国南方大部分地区遭受冻雨(freezing rain),特别是贵州、湖南和四川,灾情失分严重。公路、铁路、机场都被迫关闭,电网瘫痪。冻灾致使贵州40万人饮水难,四川两电厂停运。部分山区人民生活异常困难,在各级政府的带领下,人民群众、解放军战士英勇抗击冰灾,涌现出大批可歌可泣的英雄事迹。作为一名中学生,你有何感想?有何打算?能不
能改变这种状态?
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参考范文
As we know, our country suffered heavy ice early 2011. Everything was covered with freezing rain. Guizhou, Hunan and Sichuan suffered the most. It caused the buses, trains and
planes stop service. The disaster destroyed power facilities, cutting power supplies in many areas. As a result, huge economic loss was caused. Many people could not work and live normally. There was no food, water or light in some places. Our government called on people to fight
against heavy snow. As a student, I think we should learn from those heroes. We must study hard at school. We should learn all kinds of knowledge to make our motherland stronger, better and richer.
据报道,从2011年开始韩国除了向所有小学和初高中学生发放纸质的语文、英语、数学教科书之外,同时还将发放光盘形式的电子教科书。这表明,在韩国,电子图书即将走进寻常百姓家。某英文论坛发起了一次主题为“E-Books, Good or Bad?”的讨论,请你写一篇80词左右的短文,表达你对这件事情的看法。
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E-Books Are Good
It’s reported that school students in Korea will use e-books from 2011. What good news this is! E-books have many advantages.
Most importantly, they are good for the environment, since they can save lots of paper and trees. Besides, they are very convenient. To get a paper book, one has to spend a lot of time searching for it in a bookshop. But we can find e-books very quickly on the puter.
In short, e-books can help us enjoy our life more.
作文二:《英语议论文》15100字
400字的英文作文可以这样分配:这是一种比较经典的写作方式
introduction 50字,可以用close tunnel的方式,以一个问题开头吸引读者眼球,引出议论文正题。然后以概括的方式写出自己要讨论的论点。
中间一般分三个段落,3 paragraphs ,3 个论点。每个段落大概一百字。每个段落开头以论点开始阐述,然后道出论据。一般一个论点2-3个论据。
最后conclusion 50字,用open tunnel 的方式。先重新阐述你的论点。最后以一个bigger subject 结尾。或是引人深思的,与议论文主题有关的句子或问题。
模版1
Some people believe (argue, recognize, think) that 观点1. But other people take an
opposite side. They firmly believe that 观点2. As for me, I agree to the former/latter idea. There are a dozen of reasons behind my belief. First of all, 论据1.
More importantly, 论据2.
Most important of all, 论据3.
In summary, 总结观点. As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心.
或 From above, we can predict that 预测.
模版2
People hold different views about X. Some people are of the opinion that 观点1, while others point out that 观点2. As far as I am concerned, the former/latter opinion holds more weight.
For one thing, 论据1.
For another, 论据2.
Last but not the least, 论据3.
To conclude, 总结观点. As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心.
或 From above, we can predict that 预测.
模版3
There is no consensus of opinions among people about X(争论的焦点)。Some people are of the view that 观点1,while others take an opposite side, firmly believing that 观点2。As far as I am concerned, the former/latter notion is preferable in many senses. The reasons are obvious.
First of all, 论据1。
Furthermore, 论据2。
Among all of the supporting evidences, one is the strongest. That is, 论据3。
A natural conclusion from the above discussion is that总结观点。
As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心.
或 From above, we can predict that 预测.
议论文写作基本范式
As is known to all, it is important to be/ do… I think there are at least two reasons for… For one thing,… For another,…. Let’s take… for example… From what I have mentioned above we can see that without… we can not … it is clear that…. play an important part in…
Different people, however, have different opinions on this matters. Some people think that … According to them all of us should… Others argue that … in their point of view, nobody can without … Compared with…, has a lot of advantages over… There is no doubt that … As a consequence, ….
In short, I firmly support the view that … It is because… So my conclusion is
that ….(109words)
议论文写作要有模板的 还要有好的词组
以下是一种套路 希望对你有帮助哦
1. 两种观点针对的争论焦点 There is a heated debate over _______. And different people offer different ideas.
2. 观点一 It is monly accepted that ________.
3. 与观点一对立的观点二 In contrast, others __________.
4. 观点一的理由 Those who hold the first opinion suggest ___
5. 深入阐述观点一的理由 In their view, __________.
6. 观点二的理由 However, others think __________.
7. 深入阐述观点二的理由 They argue that _________.
8 我的看法 As far as I am concerned, I agree with…
9. 个人看法的依据一 First of all, _________.
10.个人看法的依据二 Further more, ___________.
11.个人看法的依据三 Thirdly, ____________.
12.个人结论或文章的结论 In a word, ___________.
不同类型的议论有不同的模板 以上那个是万能模板
作文常用句式的总结
开头
Recently, the problem of … has aroused people’s concern.
最近,…问题已引起人们的关注.
Internet has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. It has brought a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.
互联网已在我们的生活中扮演着越来越重要的角色.它给我们带来了许多好处,但也产生了一些严重的问题.
Nowadays, (overpopulation) has bee a problem we have to face.
如今,(人口过剩)已成为我们不得不面对的问题了.
It is monly believed that… / It is a mon belief that…
人们一般认为…
Many people insist that…
很多人坚持认为…
With the development of science and technology, more and more people believe that… 随着科技的发展,越来越多的人认为…
A lot of people seem to think that…
很多人似乎认为…
引出不同观点:
People’s views on… vary from person to person. Some hold that… . However, others believe that…. 人们对…的观点因人而异.有些人认为….. 然而其他人却认为...
People may have different opinions on… 人们对…可能会有不同的见解.
Attitudes towards (drugs) vary from person to person. 人们对待吸毒的态度因人而异.
There are different opinions among people as to… 关于…. 人们的观点大不相同.
Different people hold different attitudes toward (failure). 对(失败)人们的态度各不相同.
结尾
Taking all these factors into consideration, we naturally e to the conclusion that… 把所有这些因素加以考虑,我们自然会得出结论…
Taking into account all these factors, we may reasonably e to the conclusion that… 考虑所有这些因素,我们可能会得出合理的结论…
Hence/Therefore, we’d better e to the conclusion that…
因此,我们最好得出这样的结论…
There is no doubt that (job-hopping) has its drawbacks as well as merits.
毫无疑问,跳槽有优点也有缺点.
All in all, we cannot live without… But at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with the problems that would arise.
总之,我们没有…是无法生活的.但同时,我们必须寻求新的解决办法来对付可能出现的新问题.
提出建议:
It is high time that we put an end to the (trend). 该是我们停止这一趋势的时候了.
It is time to take the advice of … and to put special emphasis on the improvement of … 该是采纳…的建议,并对…的进展给予特殊重视的时候了.
There is no doubt that enough concern must be paid to the problem of …
毫无疑问,对…问题应予以足够的重视.
Obviously,…. If we want to do something… , it is essential that…
显然,如果我们想做某事,很重要的是…
Only in this way can we… 只有这样,我们才能…
It must be realized that… 我们必须意识到…
预示后果:
Obviously, if we don’t control the problem, the chances are that… will lead us in danger. 很明显,如果我们不能控制这一问题,很有可能我们会陷入危险.
No doubt, unless we take effective measures, it is very likely that…
毫无疑问,除非我们采取有效措施,很可能会…
It is urgent that immediate measures should be taken to stop the situation.
很紧迫的是,应立即采取措施阻止这一事态的发展.
论证
From my point of view, it is more reasonable to support the first opinion rather than the second.
在我看来,支持第一种观点比支持第二种观点更有道理.
I cannot entirely agree with the idea that… 我无法完全同意这一观点….
Personally, I am standing on the side of … 就个人而言,我站在…的一边.
I sincerely believe that… 我真诚地相信…
In my opinion, it is more advisable to do … than to do….
在我个人看来,做…比做…更明智.
Finally, to speak frankly, there is also a more practical reason why…
给出原因:
This phenomenon exists for a number of reasons. First, … Second, … Third, … 这一现象的存在是有许多原因的.首先, … 第二, … 第三, …
Why did… ? For one thing… For another…. Perhaps the primary reason is…
为什么会…? 一个原因是… 令一个原因是… 或许其主要原因是….
I quite agree with the statement that… the reasons are chiefly as follows.
我十分赞同这一论述,即…,其主要原因如下:
列出解决办法:
Here are some suggestions for handling… 这是如何处理某事的一些建议.
The best way to solve the troubles is… 解决这些麻烦的最好办法是…
People have figured out many ways to solve this problem. 人们已找出许多办法来解决这个问题.
批判错误观点和做法:
As far as something is concerned, …. 就某事而言,…
It was obvious that… 很显然,….
It may be true that…, but it doesn’t mean that… 可能…是对的,但这并不意味着…
It is natural to believe that… , but we shouldn’t ignore that…
认为….是很自然的,但我们不应忽视….
There is no evidence to suggest that… 没有证据表明…
英语议论文范文
New car problem
Nowadays more and more families own their private cars. Most people would find it hard to think what life could look like without a car. Although cars have led us to a better life, they have also brought us many new problems.
Cars produce wasted gases and smokes, which pollute air seriously. The polluted air bees poisonous and dangerous to our health. With the increasing development of cars, cities are
being more and more crowded. There is not enough room for cars to be parked. Worse still, more traffic accidents happen in big cities, even in the countryside.
More cars need more gas. Energy resource will run out one day if more gas is needed. At the same time, some old and damaged cars are thrown away as rubbish. That will cause another new pollution.
Plastic surgery.
As megical technics has been improved, plastic surgery has became more and more porpular. You can always this on your magzin: One of those celebrities was discovered going to a famous plastic surgery hospital. And maybe this phenomenon does not only belongs to celebrities, maybe one day, you bump into a stranger who claims knowing you turn out to be your high school friend, and out of the blue, she did a plastic surgry.
I cannot help asking myself: What is wrong with this world? Why do people bee so desperate to change something that is given by nature? After all, i'm against plastic surgery.
First, in my opnion, plastic surgery is a waste of resources. What's the point of making so many doctors and nurces around you when there are so many people in somewhere else are wating for doctors to save their lives?
Seoconly, beauty is skin deep, one can never change into a better person only by changing his/her apearence!
At last, i wanna say to all these who are eger to do a plastic surgery: If you use your money to
save people who need it, you will find yourself bee to a person not only beautiful by the cover, but also deep inside.
Trees Are Important to Use
Trees are very useful to people. They provide us with wood and other products. They give us shade and they help to prevent drought and floods.
Unfortunately, in many parts of our country, people haven't realized the importance of trees. They cut them down at will. They are usually too lazy or too careless to plant and look after new trees. As a result, the forests continue to disappear.
Where there are no trees the rain falls on the surface, causing floods, and carries away with the rich topsoil, in which crops grow so well. When all the topsoil is gone, nothing remains but worthless deserted.
The big floods of 1998, in parts of China, have already taught us a good lesson. So every one of us must love trees, protect forests, and keep on planting trees each year.
1.城市生活与市郊生活
It is really hard to say which is better than the other, city life or rural life, because each has its merits and shortings.
Living in a city, people have certain advantages. First, people enjoy various entertainments, both foreign and domestic. Second, there are more cultural activities in a city. Third, city dwellers gain access to better information service and educational facilities. However, problems exist. The overcrowded population, traffic jam, housing problem, industrial pollution and other issues may result in depression, nervousness and diseases. laving in the country, people can enjoy living in pure nature. They lead a simple and trouble free life. But rural life may not be that perfect. People usually lack cultural activities. They are relatively ill informed . Things go fairly slowly there. And people miss some golden opportunities of making a fortune. The chances of their children being admitted to colleges are slim.
Obviously, whatever life they lead, people can never feel perfectly satisfied, for conveniences and inconveniences always coexist. People wish that they could enjoy the pleasures of both lives. With the rapid economic development, nowadays city dwellers can relax themselves in the
country during vacation; and country people have chance to experience city lifestyle when they e to cities.
Life in the city is very different from life in the villages and on the farms. People in large cities are much more careful to respect the privacy of the individual. Sometimes this feeling seems to be one of indifference, but it is a convention of city life to curb one's curiosity about the personal affairs of strangers. Villagers and farmers are likely to show a great deal of interest in all their neighbors. Opportunities for bright young people are greater in the cities and there has been a steady stream of hopeful jobseekers from the villages and farms to the large metropolitan areas.
2. As students, we always have a lot of exams/tests every term. Tests are used nowadays to check/examine/measure how well /effectively students study. Exams are a very useful and important educational tool of measurement.
However, exams have some side effects of their own. First, some exams can’t reflect the real progress students make. Second, too difficult or too many exams force students to cheat in exams. Too many exams force students to study for the sake of exams only, to name just a few.
In my opinion, advantages of exams far outweigh their disadvantages. Despite their side effects, exams can on the whole check and show how well students study scientifically and
accurately. At least so far there has been not any method that take their place in education. Besides, exams seem to be fair to all students as they are objective and everyone is equal before test results. To conclude, exams may continue to exist in our education for a long time before they are replaced by some better measurement methods.
3.How to Develop Urban Tourist Industry
Tourist is developing very fast with the development of the economy in our country.People are popular with travelling at weekend or especially in their long holidy such 7-day National day,May Day or New years Day .In order to meet the increasing need of people's tracelling, We should
make great effort to develop the Urban tourist industry.In my opinion, we ought to pay attention to the disadvantages and disadvantages while speeding up the tourist industry.
First, research is to be done to lear about the people's requirements.What kind of scene people prefer to go? Do the present places of interest meet the need of the most people?Are the service done well enough?
Second, careful plans are to be made make ful use of the natural resources.While developing the tourist,emphsis should be laid on how to protect the enviroment from being destroyed.
In all, we should't take no notice of the others while emphasising tourist industry.We have to take them as a whole.
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2. 人际交流的重要性
3. 结论
Entering the 21st century, man is now in an age of information and knowledge. In such an age, interpersonal munication plays an increasingly important role and all people have to municate with others.
Why is interpersonal munication so important? First, it helps people understand each other better. Second, it helps people get more information and knowledge. Third, without
interpersonal munication, our life would bee a desert of emotion and friendship. Last but not the least, munication between people makes our life lively, interesting and lovely.
In a word, humans, as social animals, have to municate with each other, the importance of which can never be overemphasized.
Why is interpersonal munication so important? Interpersonal munication is just like a bridge of understanding between people. For example, it helps students to learn more effectively if one can municate more with his teachers and classmates. In a family, munication makes the family members understand each other better and get closer. In the workplace, munication between the employer and the employed creates a friendly and helpful working environment.
5.How to Study Effectively
As students, we have to study almost every day. However, how can we study effectively? Probably not everybody knows. Have a look at the following graph and we may know better about this.
This graph shows the relationship between the amount of study efficiency and the hours spent in studying in a day. From it, we can see that more hours of study do not necessarily result in better or higher study efficiency. In the graph, the best amount of efficiency or the optimum of efficiency es when one has studied for about 5.5 hours. However, the efficiency begins to drop as he studies longer than 5.5. By the time when one has studied for 10 hours in a day, his efficiency of study may bee nothing or zero.
In conclusion, there is always a maximum of efficiency and time for study in a day. More time spent in study doesn’t always mean better efficiency. This may tell us how we can study effectively.
作文三:《英语议论文》12000字
议论文:文无定法,关键在于能否解决人们不知道的问题和信不信的问题。
有理有据:理是来说明深度,据避免空谈,提供论据。
内容上有条有理,层次清楚,结构得体恰当。
以鲜明的态度表达自己的主张和观点,以充分的材料证明其观点。
论点、论据、论证。
引论-开头部分,提出问题。本论-主体部分,分析问题,结论-结尾,解决问题。 整体布局,总分总。
中国应该放弃计划(独生子女)生育政策
众所周知,中国(世界上人口最多的国家)严格实施独生子女政策已有三十五之久,在这三十五年里,中国较好的控制的人口规模总数,并且取得了巨大的经济成就。 然而,我却依旧认为我们国家应该取消独生子女政策。
因为,按照现在的生育政策发展下去,
首先,中国现在的人口结构及其不合理,老龄化严重,男女性别比例不均衡,这些都是有独生子女政策所导致的,,因为只允许生育一个子女,因此形成了4-2-1家庭,即四个祖父母,两个父母,一个子女,这样就导致中国未来未来缺少劳动力。因为中国普遍存在的重男轻女的家庭观念,以及政策上的偏向,在广大的农村地区,第一台是女儿的,允许生育第二胎,而大多数家庭则会一直选着生育第二胎,第三胎甚至是第四台,直到生出男孩。 事实上,当年中国制定独生子女政策时的依据是错误的,中国的领导层患有“人口恐怖症”,认为中国人口越多,那么中国的人均所占有的资源会越少,那么中国就会越穷,所以,“一胎化”的出台在缺乏专家严密论证的情况下,迅速出台。然而事实证明中国近年来的快速发展,正是由于中国庞大的人口所造就的廉洁劳动力。人口规模会集聚规模效应,推动经济发展。例如,迪拜,一个既缺水并且石油储备并不丰富的国家,却依靠旅游和购物成为世界上最有钱的地区。商贸旅游
因为,按照现在的生育政策发展下去,中国是没有未来的,在1840年时,中国的人口占世界的四分之一,上世纪九十年代,中国人口占世界21%,然而,据统计截止2012年,中国人口占世界人口比例的19%。,如果这样继续下去,那我们的民族怎么有未来?Years of one-child policies have left the Chinese population nastily unbalanced.
所以,我们认为独生子女政策应该放开,甚至应该全面放开计划生育政策,事实上,在上个月,中国官方已经明确表示取消独生子女政策,这样我们看到了这个民族的希望。我们相信这个未来会采取宽松的生育政策的。
The One Child Policy
As we know,the one child policy has been implemented over 35 years,which was
thought to contribute to the development of our country. However,I don’t agree with this argument.And I consider the policy should be abolished.
Actually,the basis of drawwing up the one child policy was wrong. The chinese
leadership has a
In fact,That china has developed rapidly in recent years benfits from the large
populartion of people which lead to the cheap labors.But those people,most of them belongs to our parents’ generation,were born before the one child policy. Population size will gather the scale effect, and promote the economic development. For example, Dubai, a country that is not rich in oil reserves and short of water, is the world's most rich because of the prosperous tourism and trade.
Thinks to the one child policy,china has to face a series of problems,such as the
serious aging, the imbalance sex ratio between men and women.It is reported that there will be thirty million men's singles in the future which is the result of the mon ideas, Man is superior to woman. This will bring great risks to China's social stability in the future.The disappearance of the demographic dividend will restric development of our society.
According to the current fertility policy development, There is no future for China.
In the past 2000 years, China's population has been the world's 20% or more. However, the proportion has declined amazing rapidly. In 1840, China's population accounted for 1/4 of the world.the last century ninety's, It is 21% , however, according to latest statistics, as of 2012, China's population merely accounted for 19% of the world's population. , if this continues, that our nation how have the future?Who will Inherit and carry forward Chinese culture?
All in all, we believe that the one-child policy should be released, and even the full
liberalization of family planning policy, in fact, in the last month, the Chinese government has made it clear that the abolition of the one-child policy, thus make we see the hope of the nation. We believe that the government will adopt a looser policy of fertility in the ing future because China's younger generation is reluctant to have children. Let's see it.
The One Child Policy
As we know,the one child policy has been implemented over 35 years,which was thought to contribute to the development of our country. However,I don't agree with this statement. And I consider the policy should be abolished.
Actually,the basis of drawing up the one child policy was wrong. The
chinese leadership has a
finite. Thus the policy related to the future of our nation is hastily published without being testified strict by the relevant expert and scholars..
In fact,that china has developed rapidly in recent years benefits from the large population of people which lead to the cheap labors. But those
people,most of them belongs to our parents' generation,were born before the one child policy.Population size will gather the scale effect, and promote the economic development. For example, Dubai, a country that is not rich in oil reserves and short of water, is the world's richest because of the prosperous tourism and trade.
Thinks to the one child policy,china has to face a series of problems,such as the serious aging, the imbalance sex ratio between men and women. It is
reported that there will be thirty million men's singles in the future which is the result of the mon ideas, Man is superior to woman. This will bring great risks to China's social stability in the future. The disappearance of the demographic dividend will restrict development of our society.
According to the current fertility policy development, there is no future for China. In the past 2000 years, China's population has been the world's 20% or more. However, the proportion has declined rapidly. In 1840, China's
population accounted for 1/4 of the world. the last century ninety's, it is 21% , however, according to latest statistics, as of 2012, China's population merely accounted for 19% of the world's population. , if this continues, do our nation have the future?Who will Inherit and carry forward Chinese culture?
All in all, we believe that the one-child policy should be released, and even the full liberalization of family planning policy, in fact, in the last month, the Chinese government has made it clear that the abolition of the one-child policy, thus make we see the hope of the nation. We believe that the government will adopt a looser policy of fertility in the ing future because China's younger generation is reluctant to have children. Let's see it.
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Students Should Have Equal Right with Teachers on the Priority of Take
School Bus
School bus is convenient for students and teachers between two campuses. It has no
pause during the whole way, and it spends less time than other transportation. Because of this, it is very popular among students and teachers. But people have different opinions about whether there should be priority for teachers to get on the school bus. Some people agree that teachers should get onto school bus firstly. While the others keep opposite points. In my opinion , students should have equal right with teachers on the priority of take school bus.
Students have to queue up for more than half an hour before they have a chance to
get on the school bus ,even in the cold winter. While students have no choice but waiting if they want to take school bus. When it is time to get on the bus ,the students must wait until all teachers get on the school bus ,while teachers do not queue. If there are too many teachers , there will not enough seats for students even they have queued up for a long time . It is not fair for students because there always left only a few seats for the students so most of the students who have waited for a long time must take the metro or taxi. Some students who fail to take school bus may be late for important meetings, interviews, and
so on. It maybe leads to serious consequences. Why students have no equal right even if they pay more than teachers?
This issue not only happens in our university. Students in Guangdong Ocean
University have a heated discussion in forum. Most students agree that everyone is born equal. No matter who should stand in line for school buses. They also argue that teachers always jump the queue in school buses without order. The teacher should be the model of virtue for students. But many teachers' behaviors make students very disappointed. The same issue also happened in Guangdong polytechnic normal university, Chongqing normal university, and so on.
More than one my schoolmate express their angry about this problem on Internet,
such as friend circle, QQ zone, microblog, and so on. Lu xun, a famous writer, said,
The opponent thinks teachers are always tired after a whole morning's classes and
they have no extra time to line up for school buses. Students also feel tired after they finish their mission. And not all the students have more spare time. They also have to take many classes, take part in many activities, and other interesting thing they want to do in the university. Even if students have more spare time, I fear no one is glad to spend time in vain waiting. Otherwise, some one plays fun on himself
In my view, it is natural to show respect to teachers. But it is not necessary at the
cost of students' time. And school should pay attention on this issue. The relevant apartment should take some measures to resolve this problem. For instance, adding to the number of school bus to insure most students can take school buses. Observing the rule 'first e, first served'.
Students, not just teachers, are the object of service in school. It is unwise to attach
importance to teachers while lose insight of students. I think student should have equal right with teachers on the priority of take school bus.
I think this topic is very close to our life and full of controversy.It is very good for
you to think of it.
But there still are some detials to be care about.For example,“In my opinion ,
students should have equal right with teachers on the priority of take school bus.” The phrase “the priority of take school bus.” Should be the priority of taking school bus.Do you think so?
Secondly,I consider that you paper have some convincing arguments? I mean you
just explain the reason over and over again without a number of facts or datas to support you idea. Meanwhile,you should ask some teachers the question and get their voice heard.I think that will be more perfect.
In fact,I agree with you.I think the university can provide some special buses for
the teachers.If any teacher didn’t get on the buses,he or she should wait for the buses for in quene like other students. does it sound great?
The One Child Policy
As we know,the one child policy has been implemented over 35 years,which was thought to contribute to the development of our country. However,I don't agree to this statement. And I consider the policy should be abolished.
Actually,the basis of drawing up the one child policy was wrong. The
chinese leadership has a
In fact,that china has developed rapidly in recent years benefits from the large population of people which lead to the cheap labors. But those
people,most of them belongs to our parents' generation,were born before the one child policy.Population size will gather the scale effect, and promote the economic development. For example, Dubai, a country that is not rich in oil reserves and short of water, is the world's richest because of the prosperous tourism and trade.
Thinks to the one child policy,china has to face a series of problems,such as the aging population, the imbalance sex ratio between men and women. It is reported that there will be thirty million men's singles in the future which is the result of the mon ideas, Man is superior to woman. This will bring great risks to China's social stability in the future. The disappearance of the demographic dividend will restrict development of our society.
According to the current fertility policy development, there is no future for China. In the past 2000 years, China's population has been the world's 20% or more. However, the proportion has declined rapidly. In 1840, China's
population accounted for 1/4 of the world. the last century ninety's, it is 21% , however, according to latest statistics, as of 2012, China's population merely accounted for 19% of the world's population. , if this continues, will our nation have the future?Who will inherit and carry forward Chinese culture?
All in all, we believe that the one-child policy should be released, and even the full liberalization of family planning policy, in fact, in the last month, the Chinese government has made it clear that the abolition of the one-child policy, thus make we see the hope of the nation. We believe that the government will adopt a looser policy of fertility in the ing future because China's younger generation is reluctant to have children. Let's see it.
作文四:《英语议论文》3400字
解读“读写任务”的概括技巧
来源:08-09学年度第一期 作者:清远市华侨中学 何燕萍 2008-11-06
关于读写任务的概括,许多学生觉得茫然,不知该从何下手。其实,读写任务的概括并不难。从2007年和2008年的高考卷中,我们不难发现,所给的阅读材料在长度上、难度上都不能达到阅读理解题型的难度要求。一般说来,读写任务中所提供的阅读材料词数不超过250(2007年所提供的阅读材料有238词,2008年则为186词),要求概括的内容不超三段(2007年只有一段话是要求概括的,而2008年则有三段),而且是生词极少、句型相对简单、几乎每一位学生都能理解的文章。因此,各位学生首先要增强信心,相信自己能很好地理解所给的阅读材料;再者,应了解概括的要求并掌握一定概括技巧,从而更出色地完成任务。
一、概括的要求:
简洁明了,主题突出。
概括可采用总→分的形式,即第一句话是主题句,清楚明白地告诉了读者文章的写作目的(这句话举足轻重),后面的句子对主题句进行解释和支撑,主题之外的内容要毫不吝啬地予以删除。
二、概括的方法:
1、使用意义相同或相近的单词、短语或句式,或使用不同的句子结构表达同一意思,如改变语态、肯定变否定等,避免抄袭原文句子。
2、议论性或论说文,概括时则要尽可能客观简要地转述阅读材料的观点。 概括对方观点首先是要转换视角,即以“第三人称”或“无人称”来概括。
3、如果给的阅读材料是一则故事,应该用最简练的语言来说明故事讲述了什么,不能拖泥带水讲细节,而且最好讲出故事给你的启示或其中的一个道理。
4、如果是说明性或描述性短文,就必须用概括性的文字说明一现象。
三、概括的写作步骤:
1、寻找关键词。文章的关键词可结合“写”的任务中的“就??”主题发表自己的看法的要求来确定。如,要求你“以约120词谈谈你理想的大学生活”,那么所阅读的文章的主题词就应是“college/university life”。
2、确定主题句。文章的主题句首先可通过所给阅读材料的标题来确定, 阅读材料的标题即是文章的论点或主题句。没有标题的文章,我们就尤应注意议论文、夹叙夹论文和说明文的第一段(总起段)和最后一段(总结段),或每一段的第一句或第二句(总起句)和最后一句(总结句)。没有主题句的需要自己组合。
3、重构主题句。概括的主题句要归纳总结性强,能涵盖后面所有的支撑句的内容。
4、重组支撑句。支撑句的意义在逻辑上受制于主题句,可以是补充过程或者提供证据。
四、概括的形式:“主题句+支撑句” 即“主题+主题的什么”。
五、概括的常用句式:
记述文: “主题+故事简述”,其主要句型为:The story tells /emphasizes /focuses on the importance/ necessicities / advantages, disadvantages, reasons, ways, ideas, ?
议论文: “主题/论点+论据”,其主要句型为:论点/主题:The mainly conveys the idea /discusses the problem/ reasons/ways/ideas,
importance/effect?/focuses on the idea/ tells us the fact that? 论据:For example,? /such as?
说明文:“主题+解释/分述”,其主要句型为:主题:This points out/ talks about/tells about the mon phenomenon that? 解释/分述:for example,?
下面以2008年广东卷为例:
阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
Hi, I am Mike. I just t through my first year of college. The toughest part on me at first was the general adjustment. I t to a very small high school where my mom was a teacher and she did practically everything for
me. But at the college I need to know some basic life skills, such as balancing a check-book, laundry, and the things you have to be able to handle that I never thought of in the high school! It was really tough for me at first and I got badly homesick.
Once that first semester was over and I got used to the college life, I loved it –good facilities, helpful instructors, and a good library. The Students’ Union organized various parties every week. I also go to cinemas and concerts, and often spend Saturday nights in pubs and clubs.
One thing I think is important is to get yourself active in things. I was on the dance team in college and met a ton of people that way?it was so much easier to make friends when you had a mon ground.
[写作内容]
学校最近组织了一次中美学生交流活动,你参加其中的“大学校园生活”讨论。听完Mike 的发言之后,你准备写一份发言稿,题目是“Preparing Myself for College Life”, 内容要点包括:
1. 以约30个词概括Mike 的发言要点;
2.然后以约120个词谈谈你理想的大学生活,内容包括:
(1) 对中学生活的感受;
(2) 理想的大学生活;
(3) 中学生活和大学生活的差别,以及你打算如何适应。
因为写作内容中已规定了你将进行的演讲的标题 “Preparing Myself for College Life”, 而且还要求以120个词谈谈你理想的大学生活,所以,毫无疑问,此阅读材料的关键词为“College Life”。而此阅读材料主要表述Mike 对大学生的看法或认识,是一篇夹叙夹议型的发言稿。此发言稿共有三段,其中,第一段讲述了适应大学生活的困难,第二段则阐述了适应期过后大学生活的优点,在第三段中Mike 对大学生活提出了一个建议。而且,我们不难从文中找到主题句:第一段:The toughest part on me at first was the general adjustment.第二段:Once that first semester was over and I got used to the college life, I loved it. 第三段:One thing I think is important is to get yourself active in things.
找到主题句后,我们所要做的就是用自己的语言将这些每段话的主题句串联成文,从而我们得出如下概括:
In his talk, Mike talks about how hard it was for him to adjust to college life and that he finds college life interesting after his tough adjustment. Also, he advises college students to be active on campus. (37 words)
作文五:《英语议论文~~》18000字
英语议论文常用句型
I. 开篇
1) Many nations have been faced with the problem of ……
2) Recently the problem has been brought into focus.
3) Recently the phenomenon has bee a heated topic.
4) Recently the issue has aroused great concern among ……
5) Nowadays there is a growing concern over ……
6) Never in our history has the idea that …… been so popular.
7) Faced with ……, quite a few people argue that ……
8) According to a recent survey, ……
9) With the rapid development of ……,
10) When it es to…, (当说到…)
二、列举观点
I. Some people think/believe that…,
Other argue/claim that the opposite/reverse is true
1.Obviously television has both advantages and disadvantages.
2.Living in a city has both advantages and disadvantages.
3.Compared with cars,bikes have their advantages and disadvantages. ,
4.Although puters bring people a lot of convenience,they have many disadvantages.
5....has many advantages.For example,…
6. However,just as every coin has two sides,…has it’s disadvantages.
II…play(s)an important role/part in……
1.Computers play an important role in science and technology.
2.Computers play a more and more important role in our life.
3.Computers play an increasingly important role in our studies.
4.Education plays an important part in developing our mind.
5.Addiction to alcohol and drugs plays a role in homelessness.
6.Advertisement plays an informative role in our daily life.
7.In the past,letters played a decisive role in long-distance munication.But now,telephone,email,and fax have taken their place.
III.With the development of…
1.With the development of our economy,many Chinese families can afford a car.
2.With the development of our economy and society,pollution is more and more serious.
3.With the rapid development of Science and technology,people can get a college degree by taking online-courses at home.
4.With the current social and technological developments,employees with more knowledge and higher academic degrees are needed.
5.With the rapid increase of China's population,housing problem is being more and more serious.
6.With more and more women entering the society,people's attitude towards women is changing.
7.With the deepening of Chinese reform and opening up, an increasing number of (a growing number of,a significant number of ) families can afford a car.
三、陈述自己观点
There is probably some truth in both arguments/statements,but…
四、批驳
1)It is true that ……, but one vital point is being left out.
2) There is a grain of truth in these statements, but they ignore a more important fact.
3) Some people say ……, but it does not hold water.
4) Many of us have been under the illusion that……
5) A close examination would reveal how ridiculous the statement is.
6) It makes no sense to argue for ……
7) Too much stress placed on …… may lead to ……
8) Such a statement mainly rests on the assumption that ……
9) Contrary to what is widely accepted, I maintain that ……
10) No one can deny the fact that ……
11) The idea is hardly supported by facts.
12) Unfortunately, none of the available data shows ……
13) Recent studies indicate that ……
14) There is sufficient evidence to show that ……
15) According to statistics proved by ……, it can be seen that ……
五、结尾句型 :
英语议论文多以简要总结全文或对所讨沦的问题提出解决办法来结尾。总结全文时除常用到in one/a word,generally speaking,to conclude等外,没有固定模式。提出解决办法时却常使用下一句型:
1) From what has been discussed above, we can draw the conclusion that ……
2) It is high time that strict measures were taken to stop ……
3). We should take measures to control the rapidly increasing world population.
4). We’d better take effective measures to prevent students from cheating on exams.
5). The government decided to take strong measures against drug abuse.
6). Urgent measures should be taken to prevent terrorists from carrying out further attacks.
7) It is necessary that steps should be taken to ……
8) In conclusion, it is imperative that ……
9) There is no easy method, but ……might be of some help.
10) To solve the above-mentioned problem, we must ……
11) In summary, if we continue to ignore the above-mentioned issue, more problems will crop up.
12) With the efforts of all parts concerned, the problem will be solved thoroughly.
13) We might do more than identify the cause ; it is important to take actions to ……
14) Taking all these into account, we ……
15) Whether it is good or not /positive or negative, one thing is certain/clear……
六、其他句型
I、There be结构
There+be+主语+(修饰成分),表示客观存在的人或事物。
There must be a lot of fuel in the tank.
There remains nothing more to be done.
There is no point in talking about it again.
There is something you don't know.
There is not enough time to do the work.
There are some Y.
II、名词化结构
名词化结构用以表明抽象思维的逻辑性和概念化,从而使语体更加正式、更加具有书面语风格。
1.由of连接主谓关系
That the earth revolves around the sun causes the changes of the seasons.
名词化:The revolution of the earth around the sun causes the changes of the seasons.
2.由0f连接动宾关系
One of the most important natural phenomena is that energy is transmitted from one point to another in waves.
名词化:One of the most important natural phenomena is the transmission of energy from one point to another in waves.
3.用of连接含有by的短语,把简单句转换成名词短语
That James Watt invented the steam engine started the Industrial Revolution in the 18th century.
名词化:The invention of the steam engine by James Watt started the Industrial Revolution in the 18th century.
4.被动结构转换成名词
It has been suggested that red and green be applied to the design to produce a pleasant effect.
名词化:A suggestion has been made that red and green be applied to the design to produce a pleasant effect.
5.副词与动词一起转换成名词
The electronic puter is chiefly characterized by accuracy and quick putation.
名词化:The chief characteristic of the electronic puter is accuracy and quick putation.
6.介词短语与动词一起转换成名词
The professor explained the Theory of Relativity to his students in detail.
名词化:The professor gave his students a detailed explanation of the Theory of Relativity.
7.动词转换成介词短语
Some power plants are being constructed.
名词化: Some power plants are under construction
英语议论文写作模板
一、不同观点列举型(选择型)
There is a widespread concern over the issue that_____作文题目_____. But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person. A majority of people think that_____观点一________. In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows:in the first place,_____原因一_______.Furthermore,in the second place, ___原因二_____. So it goes without saying that _____观点一_____.
People,however,differ in their opinions on this matter.Some people hold the idea that _____观点二_______. In their point of view, on the one hand,_____原因一_______. On the other hand,_____原因二_____. Therefore, there is no doubt that _____观点二______.
As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that_____观点一或二______.It is not only because ________, but also because _________. The more _______, the more ________.
二、利弊型的议论文
Nowadays,there is a widespread concern over (the issue that)___作文题目______. In fact,there are both advantages and disadvantages in __题目议题_____. Generally speaking,it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows. Firstly,___优点一______. And secondly ___优点二_____.
Just As a popular saying goes,every coin has two sides,__讨论议题______ is no exception,and in another word,it still has negative aspects. To begin with,___缺点一______. In addition, ____缺点二______.
To sum up,we should try to bring the advantages of __讨论议题____ into full play,and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time. In that case,we will definitely make a better use of the ____讨论议题___.
三、答题性议论文
Currently,there is a widespread concern over (the issue that)__作文题目_______ .It is really
an important concern to every one of us. As a result,we must spare no efforts to take some measures to solve this problem.
As we know that there are many steps which can be taken to undo this problem. First of all,__途径一______. In addition,another way contributing to success of the solving problem is ___途径二_____.
Above all,to solve the problem of ___作文题目______,we should find a number of various ways. But as far as I am concerned,I would prefer to solve the problem in this way,that is to say,____方法_____.
四、谚语警句性议论文
It is well know to us that the proverb:___谚语_______has a profound significance and value not only in our job but also in our study. It means ____谚语的含义_______.The saying can be illustrated through a series of examples as follows. (also theoretically )
A case in point is ___例子一______. Therefore,it is goes without saying that it is of great of importance to practice the proverb ____谚语_____.
With the rapid development of science and technology in China,an increasing number of people e to realize that it is also of practical use to stick to the saying: ____谚语_____. The more we are aware of the significance of this famous saying,the more benefits we will get in our daily study and job.
五、图表作文的框架
As is shown/indicated/illustrated by the figure/percentage in the table(graph/picture/pie/chart),___作文题目的议题_____ has been on rise/ decrease (goesup/increases/drops/decreases),significantly/dramatically/steadily rising/decreasing from______ in _______ to ______ in _____. From the sharp/marked decline/ rise in the chart,it goes without saying that ________.
There are at least two good reasons accounting for ______. On the one hand,________. On the other hand, _______ is due to the fact that ________. In addition,________ is responsible for _______. Maybe there are some other reasons to show ________. But it is generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are monly convincing.
Directions: Some people say that the best preparation for life is learning to be petitive. Others take the opposite view and say that learning to be cooperative is the best preparation. Tell which one you agree with and explain why. (120-150 words)
Some institutions traditionally place more emphasis on the petitive spirit; others use cooperative methods. If I were forced to agree with just one of the two methods, my choice would be for a petitive environment.
The main reason why I feel that petition is important for the learner is that I know adult life to be difficult. Finding a good job, for example, is an extremely petitive activity. The potentially successful job applicant has to weigh up the petition from others. He then has to place himself in a stronger position by gaining more qualifications and experience.
A further reason why I advocate an attitude of petition is that people often make great efforts in a contest, particularly if there is a prize or chance of recognition. Official contests can provide a goal and framework for learning.
What is more, the essence of open petition is that, although we cannot win at everything, most of us do well in something. By attempting to pete at different activities, the student learns to win and to lose. He learns his strengths and his weakness.
To conclude, petitive learning prepares the student for the tough things in life. Once he is strong, he can begin to help others in a way that does not do harm to himself.
模版1
Some people believe (argue, recognize, think) that 观点1. But other people take an opposite side. They firmly believe that 观点2. As for me, I agree to the former/latter idea.
There are a dozen of reasons behind my belief. First of all, 论据1.
More importantly, 论据2.
Most important of all, 论据3.
In summary, 总结观点. As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心.
或 From above, we can predict that 预测.
模版2
People hold different views about X. Some people are of the opinion that 观点1, while others point out that 观点2. As far as I am concerned, the former/latter opinion holds more weight.
For one thing, 论据1.
For another, 论据2.
Last but not the least, 论据3.
To conclude, 总结观点. As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心. 或 From above, we can predict that 预测.
模版3
There is no consensus of opinions among people about X(争论的焦点)。Some people are of the view that 观点1,while others take an opposite side, firmly believing that 观点2。As far as I am concerned, the former/latter notion is preferable in many senses. The reasons are obvious.
First of all, 论据1。
Furthermore, 论据2。
Among all of the supporting evidences, one is the strongest. That is, 论据3。
A natural conclusion from the above discussion is that总结观点。
As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心.
或 From above, we can predict that 预测.
e.g. should women be regarded as inferior to men?
(1)
I never think that women should be treated as the second-class citizens. observing objectively, you’ll find that women have succeeded in virtually any existing occupation you care to name: politicians, soldiers, doctors, university professors, lawyers, business executives, scientists and even presidents of countries. today’s intense petition in jobs is not only between men, but also between men and the ’weaker sex’, who have often put men to shame in almost every field. yet men refuse to acknowledge them and give women their due, and their attitude towards women BEComes even more hostile. the only sound explanation for this is that men shun (回避,躲避) real petition-they are afraid of being beaten at the games that they consider to be their own.
if there is anything that men are better than women, it is their physical strength. no other things that men claim to excel in are borne out by statistics. physical strength excluded, the fact is that men and women are basically equal in all kinds of a
bilities except when it es to language art and negotiation skills, at which women are better. you can be sure that if negotiation tasks were left to women who are gentler, more graceful and levelheaded, they would succeed brilliantly, where men have failed for centuries, and therefore war has been a frequent scene on this planet. believe it or not, it is women who could turn those filthy and bloody battlefields into lands of joy. so some things are too important to be left to men! (252 words)
(2)
it sounds pretty ridiculous to claim that men and women are equal and have the same abilities. men have excelled in every field of work. plato, freud, beethoven, einstein, pavarotti and li ning are the names of great men in different fields, to name just a few. can you effortlessly think up a woman’s name that can match those brilliant names? you may argue that you can name a dozen of great women athletes. well, yes. however, they look great simply because they have never run or played against men. see what happens if you group men and women together in the same race. women are justifiably called the weaker sex not only because they are physically weak, they are mentally fragile as well. they depend too little on cool reasoning and too much on intuition and instinct to arrive at decisions. sometimes they are not even capable of thinking clearly. that is why they often gossip and chatter and scream whenever they talk, which men seldom do, and that is also why there are eMBArrassingly few women politicians in any country you can think of. big decisions are always left for men to make, for they are more reliable, rational, and levelheaded.
many women plain that they look inferior because they have never been offered equal opportunities in jobs. this may have been true in the long past, but not now. the fact is that jobs are open to both sexes, but it is almost impossible for women to be wives, mothers and successful career women all at once. actually most women are glad to let men support their families. they know that bearing and rearing children are more important. and that is why men outnumber women in practically every kind of job. they are not excluded; they exclude themselves. (299 words)
Graduates’ pressure in finding jobs
Nowadays, more and more university graduates plain that graduation does not equate to employment. They experience great difficulties finding satisfactory jobs. What is the cause of this phenomenon
In my opinion, there are four causes:
First, graduates lack experience. They spend most of their time at school studying academic subjects and lack relevant job training. Only after graduation do they realize it’s hard to find jobs.
Second, petition among graduates grows more bitter and more bitter and bitter. The supply of university graduates exceeds social demand. This results in a decreased chance for any individual graduate to find a job.
Third, some students don’t study hard. Some of them skip classes just because they have no interest in certain subjects. Some play puter games or pursue other interests. Some sleep in class or in the library. Then they leave the sheltered environment of the university campus, to discover they don’t have adequate knowledge to apply for many positions, which makes them feel lost and frustrated.
Finally, some graduates are conceited. They lack experience but ask for a high salary, which is impractical.
So, university students should try their best to change this situation. When they are in school, they should make the most of their time and put their heart into their studies. They can hold part-time jobs in their spare time to accumulate relevant work experience. They should take part in some social activities and provide themselves with special training, if possible. When they graduate and apply for jobs, they should attach more importance to accumulating experience than to their starting salary.
On University Students’ Pressure in Finding Jobs
About a decade ago, university students could find satisfactory and enviable jobs after their graduation. But now, things are different. Today's university students usually have much pressure in finding fairly good jobs. They always say disappointedly that graduation means joblessness. Why nowadays university students have so much pressure in finding jobs?
In my opinion, this kind of pressure is mainly caused by three reasons. Firstly, the government is enrolling more and more university students year by year. And the growth of the students' number has surpassed that of the need of the society. So, when so many students graduate at a time, the chance of finding jobs bees tiny. Secondly, today's university students, most of them are the
作文六:《英语议论文》3300字
备战英语写作 直击议论文体
⊙ 重庆市巴川中学 潘云芬
纵观近几年中考英语书面表达,命题有向议论文转向的趋势,而考查议论文的写作,侧重于评论和感想。其命题呈现的方式灵活多样。可能是要点式,也可能是表格式或图画式。其内容多以联系同学们生活、环境保护和社会现象为主体。
一、高分指南
1. 确定主题,明确观点
针对题目提出或引出一个令人关注的问题,简单说明问题的严重性和重要性。
2. 谈论现象,找足论据
文章的重点写作部分。根据题目中所提及的现象,进行分析推理,运用事实支持观点,常用first, second, third, in fact, however等引起阐述。
3. 得出结论,发表观点
对主体进行概括,发表自己的看法或见解。常用we should ?, I suggest / think ?, If we ?, we’d better ?, In a word?表现出来。
二、试题回放
“世界无烟日(Non-smoking Day)”那天,某中学对该校学生吸烟情况进行了一次调查,结果如图所示。请就此话题用英语写一篇短文。
要求:1. 对调查结果进行描述。
2. 表明自己的看法并提出建议。
3. 所写内容符合“世界无烟日”主题
4. 词数80个左右。
提示词语:do a survey about?(做一个有关??的调查),
3% of the students(百分之三的学生)
(2006年中考·河南卷)
●思路点拨
1. 审图:认真看图,弄清图传递给读者的信息,并善于从图中列出要点。
2. 要点:①阐述调查结果。
②根据现象,进行论证。
③表明观点,提出建议。
提示:正确传递写作目的(即论点),并针对论点进行有力论述。
3. 时态:一般现在时态为主时态。
4. 人称:第一人称和第三人称。
5. 目的:中学生不应该吸烟。
●佳作欣赏
On Non-smoking Day, our school did a survey about the students’ smoking. According to this survey, we find 90% of the students never smoke while 7% of the students smoke sometimes. They say smoking is just for fun and they look cool while smoking. It’s a pity that still 3% of the students often smoke.
As students, we shouldn’t smoke at all. First, smoking is harmful to our health, especially for teenagers who are growing up. Second, it will make students lazier and lazier if they fall into the habit of smoking. As a result, they will lose interest in study. Third, they spend the money given by their parents on smoking. But not every students is lucky enough to get enough money from their parents, they begin to take away others’ money and bee thieves. I want to say those students who smoke should give it up. Schools and parents should stop them from smoking. Students who didn’t smoke before should never try it.
●精彩点评
①观点鲜明,理由充分,有说服力。
②语言表达丰富,行文流畅,有感染力。
③好词:according to, be harmful to, as a result, fall into the habit of, lose interest in, given by?
好句:We find 90% of the students never smoke while 7% of the students smoke sometimes. It’s a pity that still 3% of the students often smoke.
Especially for teenagers who are growing up.
As students, we shouldn’t smoke at all.
三、同步评析
阅读理解电视广告词:“If we don’t save water, the last drop of water will be a tear-drop.”根据提示,写一篇60~80词的短文。
提示:1. 生活离不开水。
2. 可饮用水在减少。
3. 水污染严重。
4. 应保护水源,再利用水。
●佳作欣赏
Water is very important to us. We can’t live without water. But some people don’t care about this. They often waste a lot of water. They pour dirty water into rivers and lakes, and pollute them. They throw rubbish into them, too.
As a result, many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted. That is not safe for people to drink. The water we can drink is being less and less. So we must do something useful to stop the pollution. We must protect the water. We must find ways to reuse it. Let’s do everything we can to keep the water clean and make good use of it. If we don’t, the last drop of water will be our tear. ●考点透析
1. 广告词的含义:______________
2. 时态:______________________
3. 写作思路:(1)______________;
(2)__________________________;
(3)__________________________。
●精彩积累
好词:________________________
好句:_________________________
_________________________________
一句多译:把文中划线句子转换成其它表达方式。
(参考答案见本期《考点随身带》P19)
四、预测演练
预测一
如今,越来越多的中学生拥有手机,发短信、打电话已成为中学生日常生活的重要组成部分。针对这一现象,发表你自己的看法,写一篇80词左右的短文。
预测二
现在很多中学生抱怨“考试”太多,请以“考试”为题,写一篇100词左右的短文,发表你自己的看法,要求含以下要点:
1. 考试有利有弊。
2. 学生抱怨考试太多,压力太大。
3. 老师认为有必要。
4. 无论对老师或是学生,考试都反映出学生掌握了什么,掌握了多少。
作文七:《英语议论文》17300字
英语议论文
(1) 不同观点列举型( 选择型 )
There is a widespread concern over the issue that __作文题目_____. But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic
varies from person to person. A majority of people think that _ 观点一________. In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude
as follows: in the first place, ___原因一_______.Furthermore, in the second place, ___原因二_____. So it goes without saying that ___观点一_____. People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter. Some people hold the idea that ___观点二_______. In their point of view, on the one hand, ___原因一_______. On the other hand, ____原因二_____. Therefore, there is no
doubt that ___观点二______.
As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that __观点一 或二______. It is not only because ________, but also because _________. The more
_______, the more ________.
(2)利弊型的议论文
Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over (the issue that)___作文题目______. In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in __题目议题_____. Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive
aspects as follows. Firstly, ___优点一______. And secondly ___优点二_____.
Just As a popular saying goes, "every coin has two sides", __讨论议题______ is no exception, and in another word, it still has negative aspects. To begin with, ___缺点一______. In addition, ____缺点二______.
To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of __讨论议题____ into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same
time. In that case, we will definitely make a better use of the ____讨论议题___.
( 3 ) 答题性议论文
Currently, there is a widespread concern over (the issue that)__作文题目_______ .It is really an important concern to every one of us. As a result, we must spare no efforts to take some measures to solve this problem.
As we know that there are many steps which can be taken to undo this problem. First of all, __途径一______. In addition, another way contributing to success of the solving
problem is ___途径二_____.
Above all, to solve the problem of ___作文题目______, we should find a number of various ways. But as far as I am
concerned, I would prefer to solve the problem in this way, that is to say,
____方法_____.
( 4 ) 谚语警句性议论文
It is well known to us that the proverb: " ___谚语_______" has a profound significance and value not only in our job but also
in our study. It means ____谚语的含义_______. The saying can be illustrated through a series of examples as
follows. ( also theoretically )
A case in point is ___例子一______. Therefore, it is goes without saying that it is of great of importance
to practice the proverb ____谚语_____.
With the rapid development of science and technology in China, an
increasing number of people e to realize that it is also of practical use
to stick to the saying: ____谚语_____. The more we are aware of the significance of this famous saying,
the more benefits we will get in our daily study and job.
议论文是作者对某个问题或某件事进行分析、评论,表明自己的观点、立场、态度、看法、主张的一种文体。写议论文要把握三性和三要素。三性指准确性、鲜明性和生动性。三要素指论点、论据和论证。
论点的基本要求:观点正确,概括全面,见解新颖,有实际意义,要恰当地综合运用各种表达方式。
论据的基本要求,真实可靠、充分典型。
论证的基本要求:推理必须合乎逻辑,论证要讲究顺序,论证要符合正确的推理形式。 简而言之,英语议论文共有三大特点:
1、 观点鲜明的开头;
2、 紧扣主题的结尾;
3、 有主题句并且衔接自然的中间段落。
这三点当中,第1、2点早已为绝大多数中国学生所熟知,因为开头点题和结尾扣题同样也是汉语文章的要求。但在长时间的学习过程中,这样的要求被很多学生以为是“老土”而得不到足够的重视。如果将这种思想带到英语议论文写作当中,直接的后果就是中心分散、观点不明确,加上中国学生普遍英文表达能力不强,这些因素就为整篇文章的失败埋下了隐患。
另外,英语文章和汉语不同的是段落的主题句一定要放在段首,而不能按照中文的写作习惯放在段落的中间或者最后,在英文应试写作中更加如此。正因为没有“主题句”的思想,所以中国学生在写英语文章时经常“想到什么,就写什么”,这在英语议论文中是不能接受的。
(二) 中心统一
在中心统一这个问题上,英语议论文和汉语议论文的概念也有所不同。中国人在写议论文时常常遵循“中庸”的原则,其具体的表现就是认为世界上没有任何事情是绝对的。当他们在文章中表扬一件事物或一种现象的时候,总要指出其不足;同样,在批评一件事物或一种现象的同时,也总不忘记指出其也有合理之处。这种做法从道理上来讲并没有什么不妥,但却不符合英语议论文的写作习惯,因为英语作家在写议论文时关注的是自己的辩论技巧和其结果对公众的影响力。换句话说,如果作者告诉大家两面都有道理也就等于说两面都没有道理,因为读者在读了文章之后仍旧不知道作者的看法是什么,以及自己在这种情况下到底该怎么做。
所以,既然四级考试考的是英语文章,大家就应该遵循英文议论文的写作思路和习惯:表示支持则旗帜鲜明地支持;表示反对就彻彻底底地反对,而不能采取“墙头草两边倒”的做法。
(三) 段落的连贯性文章引用自:
在确定好一条条的扩展句后,怎样把这些句子流畅而连贯地组合在一起呢?
这便是关联词发挥作用的时候了。在英语中,句与句之间、段与段之间一般都有连词或关联词连接,通过这些词读者能够很清楚地明白文章前后的逻辑联系。
适当使用关联词是四级写作必备的技能,大家应该要引起特别重视。
常用的关联词分为四类:
1、列举类
列举法常用在议论文中,当作者提出一个论点后,可通过列举出一系列事实对其进行说明或论证。
列举类关联词有:
first(ly), second(ly),... finally; for one thing, for another; on the one hand, on the other hand; moreover; furthermore; what's more; in addition; besides; first of all; in the first place, in the second place; (at)last; then; next; the last but not the least
2、举例类
举例法是用事例或数据对中心观点进行说明论证的方法,举例类关联词有:
for example; for instance; such as; like; take...for example; a case in point; namely; in other words; that is; especially; in particular
3、比较和对比
比较是把两种或两种以上的事物进行比较,以辨别出它们的相似之处;对比是将这些事物进行对照,辨别其差异而指出各自的特征和本质。这类关联词有:
but; however; yet; otherwise; while; in contrast; by contrast; on the contrary; similarly; likewise; like; conversely; rather than; instead; on the other hand; equally; nevertheless; nonetheless; unlike; still; in the same way; pared with...
4、因果类
as a result; since; because(of); thanks to; due to; owing to; for this reason; hence; thus; therefore; on this/that account; on account of; consequently
5、总结类
总结法是指在表达了一个观点或举了一个例子后,进行总结、给出概括,这类关联词有: in this case; according to; in a word; in brief; in short; to sum up. 范文1:
“Do’ Lucky Numbers’ Really Bring Good Luck?”
Some people think that certain numbers will bring good luck to them. Numbers such as six, eight, sixteen and eighteen are regarded as lucky numbers. There are also people who think that their success is related to certain numbers.
However, some other people think numbers have nothing to do with their luck. They believe in their own rather than” lucky numbers”. They don't do things according to certain numbers.
As far as I am concerned, I think it is a person's own business whether he believes in a certain number or not. The most important thing is that he has done the work by himself and has done it quite well. As to the belief in numbers, it is his personal choice.
范文2:
Career or Family: which is more important?
When asked about their opinion of career and family, people always respond differently. Some people deem it more important to pursue their career, while there are always other people who argue that family should be the number one in one’s life.
It goes without any question that career plays a key role in our life. In the very first place, career can give us an aim to live on. Without career, much of our living time will be certainly wasted. What’s more, career can provide us with a means to live on. Most of the people earn their ine from a job. On the other hand, family is also an indispensable part of life, as many people will admit. Family is always regarded as a place where we can escape from troubles in life. In addition, we can obtain a sense of belonging to from family. Without it, anyone will feel lonely and desperate.
In my opinion, career and family are not in opposition to each other. Rather, they can enhance each other so that one’s life can bee better and better.
Therefore, it’s not a choice between right and wrong, but one between ideal and practical. 英语说明文
英语作文说明文
大学英语作文 更新:2007-2-8 阅读:
英语作文说明文
说明文类
写作指导
说明文的出题形式为文字提示或图表,文体有报道、投稿、书信等。写作步骤如下: 第一步:审题,确定主题句、主体时态(一般以现在时态为主)和中心人称;
第二步:在主题句后按提示顺序将各要点以完整的句子表达出来;
第三步:用过渡词将上下文的逻辑关系体现出来。
常用词有:
①表示时间:now, then, afterwards, soon, five minutes later, before long, shortly after that, soon after supper, to this day, just now, just then
②表示顺序、动作过程:first, firstly, first of all, second, secondly, at first, at last, next ③表示转折:but, yet, and yet, however, although, otherwise, in spite of
④表示结果:thus, therefore, so, as a result, seeing that, luckily, unfortunately ⑤表示强调: above all, indeed, surely, certainly, of course, after all, without any delay, at least, at most
⑥表示并列: and, also, as well as, and then
⑦表示递进: besides, what's more, in addition, even, once more, what was worse ⑧表示解释和说明: that is to say, namely, for example, actually, and so on, such as, believe it or not, to tell you the truth, according this, for this reason
⑨表示比较、对比: just like, just as, in the same way, more or less, sooner or later, on the contrary, on the other hand
⑩表示: finally, in conclusion, in a word, in general, generally speaking, in short, as you know, in the end
需要注意的是:使用上述过渡性词必须根据上下文需要的原则,力求自然,决不可牵强附会,让人感觉别扭。
精选范文
以“早起是好习惯”为题写篇议论文。请围绕以下几点来写:
①早起与健康;
②早起与学习;
③早起与一天的活动。
(字数80~120,要求自拟标题)
Getting Up Early Is a Good Habit
Getting up early is a good habit. It is very important to our health, our study, our life and so on. First, getting up early helps to keep us strong. We can do morning exercises in the open air in the morning and breathe fresh air to build our bodies. Second, getting up early helps us to memorize what we have learned in class by reading aloud in the morning. Third, getting up early can help us to find enough time to prepare our work of the day. If we stick to getting up early every day, it will do
重点诠释
1.说明文是以说明为主要表达方式,用简洁明了的语言来解释说明事物,阐明事理,从而给读者提供知识的一种文体。
2.在高考书面表达中,其主要命题形式为图表式作文,有时也以图画式和提纲式作文来呈现写作材料。
3.它要求语言要简明扼要,通俗易懂,说明过程讲究层次性和条理性。
4.这种文体通常用第三人称,时态以一般现在时为主。
写作典例:
根据以下图画,写一篇英语短文,描述今昔通讯方式的变化,以及这些变化给人们生活带来的影响。(广东06)
注意:
1.词数:100左右
2.生词:通讯:municate (with sb.) vi. munication n.
互联网:the Internet n.
案例分析
从材料的呈现方式(两幅图对比)及材料所提供的要求“描述变化及影响”可知,本文应该用说明文体来写作。时态的把握是本文的一大难点,一般情况下,说明文应用一般现在时,但本文描述的是今昔通讯方式的变化,所以在描写过去通讯方式的时候要用一般过去时,例如
in the past, people kept in touch with each other mainly by writing letters
or using the public telephone 及It used to take several days to hear from each other.在描写过去发生的动作对现在造成的影响时,谓语动词要用现在完成时,例如本文的起始句可用“Great changes have taken place in the way of munication in people’s life in recent years”及讲述影响的过渡句“with these changes, people’s pace of life has been quickened and people’s work has been made more dfficient”. 相对来说,本文用第三人称容易把握。
高分范文
Great changes have taken place in the way of munication in people’s life in recent years.
In the past, people kept in touch with each other mainly by writing letters or using the public telephone. But now almost everyone has his own mobile phone.People can municate with each other almost at any place and at any time. What’s more, people have easy access to the Internet, which enables them to send and receive e-mails whenever they like.With these changes, people’s pace of life has been quickened and people’s work has been made more efficient. It used to take several days to hear from each other, but now it takes only several minutes, even if they are in two different continents.
In a word, people have an easier life nowadays.
针对练习
1.下表是你根据平时了解所得到的中国高三学生选择高考志愿的信息。请你根据该表用英语写一篇简要介绍,向编辑部反映该情况。
注意:
1.文章的开头已为你写好。
2.词数:100词左右。
Chinese senior middle school graduates have different opinions on how to choose their courses and universities.
【预测依据】
在高考中,图表类写作经常出现。其内容上多为中学生日常生活中熟悉的生活经历,以及社会热点。高考志愿填报问题,是考生、家长、社会等非常关注的一个热门话题,对于该话题的报导以及争论是人们经常耳闻目睹的。
【解题指导】
本文从体裁上看属于议论文,其命题方式属于图表类。图表类作文多以说明文和议论文为主,要求考生根据所给的图表、数据及标题进行分析、研究,阅读其中的文字和说明,弄清各种信息之间的关系,提炼和确定出文章的中心思想。然后进行分析、概括和归纳。 注意:(1)图表和数据内容不一定要全部描述。(2)善于抓住总的规律,趋势,归纳增减率。(3)时态:特定时间用过去时。经常出现的情况或自己的评述用一般现在时。
(4)要适当运用一些高级词汇并灵活使用图表类写作常用的经典好句型。
【参考范文】
Chinese senior middle school graduates have different opinions on how to choose their courses and universities.
A survey has been done to study it. We can see from the table that about 35% of the students believe the choice should be based on their own interest. They say interest is the mother of success. Besides, it is a miserable thing to have to spend most of your time studying what you have no interest in.
More students (around 45%), however, insist that main consideration should be given to the needs of the society, for, they argue, not everyone can find the job they like best. What’s more, interest can be born and lost.
Interestingly, there are about 20% who find it too difficult to make a choice and would rather depend on their parents or teachers to make a decision.
【范文点评】
该篇文章从总体上来讲,能够把握议论文的特点。语言流畅,能够正确地利用一些较为高级的词语以及一些精彩短语、句型(文中黑体字)。人称使用正确,为第三人称。能够把握主体时态:用一般现在时。因为是经常出现的情况。能够按题目的要求,涵盖所要求的内容,并适当增添了一些相关内容,较好地完成了写作任务,达到了预定的写作目的。
2.根据漫画,请以“烟”为题,用英语写一篇短文,描述下面的内容,并就此发表你的评论。
要求:1. 文章必须包括描述和评论两部分;根据内容适当发挥,注意行文连贯。
2. 词数:100词左右。
【预测依据】
看图类写作是高考写作的热点之一,具有一定的难度。内容上多为中学生日常生活中熟悉的经历,社会热点,具有一定的交流性、应用性、时代性、教育性。
【写作指导】
1.要审清写作要求。
2.此题只提供了一幅相关的图画信息。通过观察及写作要求,我们可以确定:(1)体裁:夹叙夹议;(2)人称:须用第三人称;(3)时态:可用一般现在时。
3.审清图画的主题和梗概:一个年轻人在工厂,嘴里正吸着烟,这时他看到工厂里的一个禁止吸烟的标志牌,而工厂本身也正向大气中排放滚滚浓烟。年轻人顿时觉得困惑不解??由此,作者发表评论:相关部门应当采取措施禁止工厂污染自然环境的行为!
4.增加细节,连贯成文,做到层次分明,结构严谨,并准确选用相关词语、句型表达图画内容。
【参考范文】
Smoke
This is a funny and instructive picture. In the picture, a young man is smoking happily in a factory when he sees a sign which means “No smoking” on the wall. But he finds that the factory is giving off large quantities of heavy smoke which makes him feel very puzzled, “Why does the factory forbid people to smoke while the factory itself emits so much poisonous smoke?”
Nowadays, many factories know the danger of smoking to themselves and don’t allow people smoking in the factory. However, they don’t pay any attention to the danger that they cause to the whole society. And they let out lots of polluted smoke which does great harm to our environment.
In my opinion, we could live without most of the industrial products, but we could not survive without nature! Therefore, something must be done to prevent the pollution caused by all factories!
【范文点评】
本文首先对图片内容进行了简短的介绍,接着发表了作者的简短评论。文章结构严谨,审题准确,语言流畅,过渡自然。文章的得分亮点也较多。如最后一段,一句“In my opinion, we could live without most of industrial products, but we could not survive without nature.”,便不入俗套地点明了要采取相关措施的原因!可谓一语惊人,令人深思!
3.下面是一个学生的情况登记表,请用英语将表中所列情况进行全面介绍。
要求:
1.层次要清楚,条理性要强; 2.字数在100~140字。
Li Gang, a boy student of 21, is now studying in the English Department of Beijing Foreign Languages University. He likes sports and games, singing and dancing, and can speak English fluently. As a League secretary, he is highly spoken of by the teachers and students and regarded as an outstanding student with great ability. Li Gang is from Shandong Province. His parents are both teachers. They are dearly loved and respected by the students for their wonderful teaching work. Li Gang's elder sister, a famous doctor, works in a big hospital.
Li Gang has made up his mind to be a good translator after graduation and serve “the four modernizations”of our country.
4。根据下列图示以“The New Grading System in Our School”为题为你校英语报写一篇短文,说明这一举措以及你对学校实施这一举措的认识.
要求: 1.词数100字左右, 已给出部分不包括在内。生词: 评分体制grading system 参与participation(n.)
The New grading system in Our School
In order to help students develop their abilities in all fields, our school now has asked the teachers to make some changes in the grading system. This chart shows how it works.
The students’ final score will be made up of 5 parts. About 30% of it will e from their test results. The rest of the score is decided by the performances of the students in the following parts: 20% es from your notes, and another 20% is decided by how you do your homework. If you take an active part in classroom activities, you can get another 20% of the score. Teamwork in class is also important. If you want a higher score, you should be good at working together with your classmates.
5.下面的饼状图(pie chat)显示了你对你校学生兴趣爱好的调查结果。请你用英语给English Weekly写一篇短文,报道你的调查结果,并对此结果发表你的看法或建议。字数120词左右。首句已给出(不计入词数)。
A recent survey shows what the students of our school like to do in their spare time.
In my opinion, our school has made a good decision. This new grading system will certainly help to improve ourselves in all ways.
From the pie chat, we can see 53% of the students like sports, so doing sportsis the most popular activity in our school. The second popular activity for students is surfing the Internet and 36 % of the students have interest in it. Only a few students, about 8 percent of them, takereading asa hobby. And even fewer are fond of playing musical instruments.
In my point of view, our school should havemore sports facilities builtto satisfy the need ofthe students. Guidance should be given to students on surfing the Internet and ways must be found to arouse students’ interests in reading and music.
6.联合国教科文组织某考察团正在我国某乡村参观考察。假定你是接待人员,请根据下列提示以发言稿的形式简要介绍这个村的情况:
1)大小:近100户人家,约500口人。
2)变化:过去很穷,78年后变化很大。人们生活比以前好多了。现已旧貌换新颜。
3)教育:原来的学校很小,现已经过改建。新建的教学楼有4层,是村里最美的建筑物。村所有学龄儿童在此免费就读。
注意:
1)要点齐全,前后连贯。
2)词数:100-120之间。
Ladies and gentlemen,
Wele to our school ! ①This village is a small onewith/which hasnearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. ② However,it has changed
a lot since 1978 ③ and has been developing very fast.④ People herelive a much better lifethan before . Now it is taking on a new look.
In the past, the school here was very small ⑤ and most children couldn’t afford to go to school. ⑥But now it has been rebuilt ⑦ and the newly built teaching building ⑧ which has 4 storeys is the most beautiful one in the village. All the school-age children can study here. ⑨ What’s more,they enjoy free education. ⑩May you enjoy your stay here / May you have a pleasant time here! Thank you. 写作模板——图表式作文
It is obvious in the graphic/table that the rate/number/amount of Y has undergone dramatic changes. It has gone up/grown/fallen/dropped considerably in recent years (as X varies). At the point of X1, Y reaches its peak value of ?(多少).
What is the reason for this change? Mainly there are ?(多少) reasons behind the situation reflected in the graphic/table. First of all, ?(第一个原因). More importantly, ?(第二个原因). Most important of all, ?(第三个原因).
From the above discussions, we have enough reason to predict what will happen in the near future. The trend described in the graphic/table will continue for quite a long time (if necessary measures are not taken括号里的使用于那些不太好的变化趋势).
Good luck.
作文八:《英语议论文》17000字
写一篇以 About Examinations 为题的议论文。要求 200 个词左右。
提示:
1. 自从我上学以来不知经历了多少次考试。
2. 有人认为考试是老师的秘密武器,我却不以为然……
3. 这是我国的制度问题,……要改革考试。
4. 建议必要处增加一些细节。
拟用词语:
1. magic weapon 秘密武器
2. reform the entrance system 改革考试制度
About Examination
I don't remember how many examinations I've taken since I began my schooling. To tell the truth , I don't like examinations at all. I dare say that, in fact, no student likes examinations. We often hear people say “Examinations are teachers' magic weapon”, so most of us may think it is our teachers who give us students so many examinations. But I don't think so. Almost all of them have once been students before they became teachers. We don't like examinations, and neither do our teachers, which may be reasonably concluded. What's more, the more examinations we take, the more time will be taken from our teachers and the more trouble our teachers have to take.
It is the system in our country, I think, that gives us students so many examinations. If there were no entrance examinations, and all the students could go up to the higher grades without petition, there would not be so many examinations in primary and middle schools. So it is important and necessary to reform the test system. Only in this way can examinations be greatly reduced, and then all the students will be happier.
议论文的写作
议论文的三要素
论点,论据和论证是议论文的三要素,论点是作者对所论问题所持的见解和主张;论据是用来证明论点的事实和道理的根据;论证就是用论据来证明论点的方法和过程。一般来说,议论文每段应有主题句(topic sentence)来确定论点。文章结尾往往提出自己的看法、意见或建议,表示对某一现象或论点的赞成或反对。论证有立论和驳论两种,作者证明自己的论点正确,是立论;反之,证明别人的论点错误,是驳论。
议论文的注意事项
1. 论点要鲜明,不可含糊其辞;论据要充分,要能充分证明观点的命题性,论据过程要条理清晰。
2. 文章安排逻辑性要强,推理要严密。
3. 重在说理,以理服人。
4. 主要使用现在时态。
5. 中学英语书面表达所要求的议论文,是一种限定性的写作,其论点、论据和论证都比
较明确,有的文章提出问题,如:??为什么?/??怎么办?/??该采取什么措施?考生可以结合题目要求阐述相关的观点,切忌随意发挥。
议论文模板
一、正反观点式议论文模板
导入:第1段:
Recently we’ve had a (heated) discussion about whether we should…(导入话题)
Our opinions are divided on this topic.(观点有分歧)
正文:
第2段:Most of the students are in favour of it.(正方观点)
Here are the reasons. First… Second…Finally …(列出2~3个赞成的理由)
第3段:
However, the others are strongly against it.(反方观点)
Their reasons are as follows. In the first place…What ’s more… In addition…(列出2~3个反对的理由)
结论:第4段:
Personally speaking ,the advantages overweigh the disadvantages, for it will do us more good than harm, so I support it (个人观点)
二、“A ”或者“B ”类议论文模板:
导入:第1段
Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways. Others, however, argue that B is much better. Personally, I would prefer A because I think A has more advantages.
正文:第2段
There are many reasons why I prefer A. The main reason is that … Another reason is that …(赞同A 的原因)
第3段:
Of course, B also has advantages to some extent…(列出1~2个B 的优势)
结论:第4段:
But if all these factors are considered, A is much better than B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that…(得出结论)
三、观点论述类议论文模板:
导入:第1段:提出一种现象或某个决定作为议论的话题
As a student, I am strongly in favour of the decision. (亮明自已的观点是赞成还是反对)
The reasons for this may be listed as follows. (过渡句,承上启下)
正文:第2段:
First of all… Secondly…Besides …(列出2~3个赞成或反对的理由)
结论:第3段:
In conclusion, I believe that…(照应第1段,构成“总—分—总”结构)
四、连贯地连接信息
(1)常用的过渡词(组)
1. 表示并列 what ’s more, in addition, too ,as well ,besides, furthermore, moreover ,what ’s worse.
2. 表示因果 therefore, for this reason, thus, consequently.
3. 表示转折 but, however, on the contrary, instead, on one hand… on the other hand
4. 表示时间顺序 later, afterwards, from then on ,eventually, in the meantime, then, at the same time, after a while, at present, after that, finally
5. 表示列举 first, to begin with, secondly, first of all, then, next, finally
6. 举例说明 such as, for example, for instance, take… for example
7. 表示让步 nevertheless, still
8. 表示对比 on the contrary, in contrast, similarly
9. 陈述事实 in fact, actually ,as a matter of fact, to tell you the truth
10. 表示总结 in a word, in short, to sum up, in conclusion, on the whole, to conclude, in brief, in summary, in general, all in all
11. 表示意义重复 that ’s to say, in other words, to put it in another way, to put it differently
12. 表示强调 above all, more importantly, indeed, without any doubt
(2)常用的过渡句式有:
1. I do agree with…
2. In some way, I agree with…,but …
3. This point sounds right, but…
4. However, I think…
5. I definitely believe…
6. In my opinion/view…
7. Personally, I feel that…/ Personally, I agree with…
8. As far as I’m concerned,…
9. I can’t agree more with the father. Such cases are often seen in our life
10. Attitudes towards…are various.
11. for one thing. …..for another
12. last but not the least….
(4)引用 俗话说/常言道
There goes the old saying… As the saying goes… There is a saying…
As a proverb says… As we all know…
(5)常用句子
1. Different people (students) have different ideas.
2. Different people look at …in different ways.
3. 60% of the students hold the view that…
On the other hand, 40% believe that …
4. Opinions on the question are divided as follows: 70% of the students think that…..
On the other hand, 30% don’t like the idea of….
5. I’d loke to give my opinion about…..
6. There are many advantages in… First,….Second, … Third,…
However , there are some disadvantages as well……. Besides,….
7. It would be much better if teenagers know the ine of their parents.
五、写作模板(优缺对比)
Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over ( the issue that) (作文主题).In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in (题目议题).Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows. Firstly, (优点一). And secondly (优点二).
Just as a popular saying goes, “every coin has two sides”, (讨论议题) is no exception, and in another word ,it still has negative aspects. To begin with, (缺点一).In addition, (缺点二).
To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of (讨论议题) into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time. In that case, we will definitely make a better use of the (讨论议题)
六、书面表达:(范文)
假如你是某中学学生李华。最近,你班同学正在参加《21世纪报》“大家谈”栏目的一个讨论。本次活动题目为:父母的收入有没有必要让孩子知道?
(1)信的开头和结尾已经为你写好,不计入总词数。
(2)词数:100左右
(3)参考词汇:收入ine.
Dear Editor,
I ’m writing to tell you about the discussion we recently had about whether we should know our parents’ ine.
We have different opinions on this matter. Most of us(about 70%)think we should know our parents ’ ine since it will help us understand how hard our parents have to work , no matter how much they earn. Then we will study harder and will not waste money any more. We may also learn to share our parents’ trouble.
About 30% of my classmates think it unnecessary to let the children know how much their
parents earn, If they know their parents have enough money to support the family , they will not study hard since they needn’t worry about the future. It is said, especially when their parents have a relatively high ine ,the children will easily form a wasteful habit.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
七 作业
作文题目
最近,你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。讨论的主题是:公园要不要收门票? 请你根据下表所提供的信息,给报社写一封信,客观地介绍讨论情况。
注意:1.信的开头已为你写好。
2.词数:100左右。
3.参考词汇:门票---entrance fee
Dear Editor.
I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether
an entrance fee should be charged for parks.
11 根据以下要点写一篇议论文,阐述一下广告已成为当今社会很重要的一种行业,词数 100 左右。
(1)广告不仅能促销,还能提供给我们各种最新消息。
(2)广播、电视及电脑使广告成为我们日常生活中的一个重要部分。
(3)广告业还提供了许多了就业机会。
12 写一篇关于礼貌的文章,大致内容如下:礼貌对每个人来说都非常重要。有礼貌的人从来不在别人危急的时候讥笑他,相反却去帮助他。办事的时候要说“请”,“谢谢”。在公共场合不要大声喧哗。当你打喷嚏时或吐痰时要用手帕。作为一名学生上课不要迟到。如果迟到了,要向老师道歉。
可以合理添加相关内容,词数 100 左右。
提示:打喷嚏— sneeze ;吐痰— spit
13 设想你是一名学生,有一段打工的经历。开学初在英语课上你用英语向同学们讲述你的体会,请根据所给短语,写一个 100 词左右的讲话稿。
1. keep on asking parents for money
2. learn the value of money
3. get along with others
4. find its good preparation for/ get prepared for
5. get a little bit working and social experience
14 体育运动能使我们身体健康,工作学习精力充沛。大家都喜欢运动,但许多人不知如何正确锻炼,有时甚至出错。
你很幸运,上学后得到体育老师的正确指导,运动起来相当愉快,所以身体健康。你一年中几乎天天游泳,你还喜欢其他运动,并计划在今年秋季中学运动会上参加几个项目的比赛。
请根据以上内容用英语写一篇 80~120 词的短文,不要逐字翻译。
15 写一篇短文,论据是动物濒临绝种的危险,最重要的原因是人为因素,应包括以下内容:
1. 许多动物过去生存的地方遭到破坏。
2. 许多动物被人捕猎而死亡。
3. 许多树木被砍伐了。
4. 被污染的河流和湖泊也是引起动物死亡的原因。
16 以“ If You Want to Be Strong and Healthy”为题写一篇短文,内容须包括以下要点:
充分的睡眠、早操、淋浴或冷水擦身;吃饭定时;看书写字要注意光线;多呼吸新鲜的空气;讲究卫生。
17 以“ Trees Are Important to Us”为题,写一篇保护森林资源的短文,要点如下:
1. 树木与人类的关系。
2. 滥砍树木的害处。
3. 为保护土壤防止干旱,人人应爱护树木。
18 4 月 7 日是世界禁烟日,为配合世界禁烟日活动,请根据下列提示,用英文写一篇 120 词左右的短文,以便刊登在“ CHINA DAILY ”上。
据报道,世界上有四分之一的人吸烟,而中国 15 岁以上的人,有 33.9% 的吸烟。不仅老人、青年抽,中学生也抽。
许多酗烟者明知吸烟有害于健康,但他们一次又一次的戒烟,就是戒不掉。
科学研究表明,吸烟不仅对吸烟者有害,而且对公众健康特别是对妇女、儿童健康危害更大。烟中的毒气是多种疾病的致病原因。现在许多国家禁止在影院、医院、车站等公共场所吸烟。
19 请根据以下表格,以“ How to Reduce the City Present Population ”为题,用英语为“中学生报”写一篇短文阐述你对这个问题的见解。
建议项具体措施目的
I A. 晚婚 B. 一对夫妻生一个孩子减少人口自然增长率
II 严格控制外地人口进城务工经商减少外地人口对城市的压力
III A. 在郊区,建造生活、商业、文教、卫生、娱乐、休闲生活小区B. 在城外的县区建造卫星城吸引城市居民到郊区和卫星城工作和生活
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某学校附近拟兴建一化工厂。请你以该校学生的名义写一篇短文,陈述反对兴建化工厂的理由。短文要包括以下要点:
1. 不仅你本人,而且大部分同学都反对在学校附近建厂。
2. 尽管该厂可以为本市赚不少钱,但危害大于好处。
3. 防范措施不利,严重污染饮用水。
4. 侵占学生们游戏、玩耍的场所。
21 有些人以为某些数字,比如 6 、 8 、 9 等会带来好运。他们在选择车牌号、电话号码时不惜花费“择号费”要这些数字。而你本人却不相信这些。你认为成功和财富与所谓的吉详数字无关,要靠自己艰辛的劳动和努力。
请你根据以上内容写一篇文章,题目是 Do “ Lucky Numbers ” Really Bring Good Luck ?
22 2000 年 1 月 19 日至 22 日,国务院西部地区开发会议召开。请根据下列提示,用英语写一篇短文,说明西部地区开发的重要意义。
改革开放以来,东部地区发展迅速。中国幅员辽阔,有 56 个民族,要实现中国的现代化,就必须加快西部地区的发展。西部地区资源丰富,但降雨少。在开发西部地区的同时,必须保持生态平衡。应该依靠科技教育,促进西部经济的健康发展。
注意:
1. 词数: 100~130 .
2. 题目自拟。
3. 提示词:资源— resource ;现代化— modernization .
11 No one can avoid being influenced by advertisements. On one hand, advertising greatly promotes sales. On the other hand, in their efforts to tell people about products and events , advertisers provide us with great amount of the latest information. Radio, television and puter have made it possible for advertisers to attract the attention of millons of people. Therefore , it has bee part of our daily life. Meanwhile , to make an advertisement , a lot of people will work together on it. So with the development of advertising a lot of jobs are being provided.
Advertising is an important business.
12 Manners are important to happy relations among people. No one likes a person with bad manners. A person with good manners never laughs at people when they are in trouble. Instead, he tries to offer help. When he asks for something, he says “please ” and when he receives something , he always says “thanks ”。 He does not interrupt other people when they are talking. He does not talk loudly or laugh loudly in public. When he sneezes or spits , he uses a handkerchief. As a sutdent, it is a bad manner to e late to class. If you are late you should say “I'm sorry. ” to the teacher at the time or after class.
13 Nowadays it is not unusual for many students to find part-time jobs. During the past winter holiday, I worked as a waiter at a McDonald.
I used to keep on asking my parents for money. It is the first time that I've earned money , so I was quite excited. Now I can buy whatever I need without asking others for money. From my working experience , I found it's a great preparation for the world outside schools. I understood not only the value of money but also the way of getting along with others. What's more , I have got some working and social experience. It's good for my future work. In a word , I've had a wonderful vacation. 14 Sports keep us fit land fresh. Everybody likes to do one kind or another. But not all people know how to do them correctly and sometimes the advice we got may be wrong.
I'm lucky, for since my first day at school I have always had a good teacher of physical education. I have always been very strong.
I go swimming almost every day all the year round , of course I like many other sports too. I am thinking of taking part in a few items at the school sports meeting this autumn.
15 Why Are Many Animals Dying out?
There are many reasons for animals dying out, but the most important one is the part that humans have played. First, many animals have been killed for food. Second , many of the places where animals used to live have been destroyed. Wet land has been turned into field. More and more trees in the forests have been cut down, but few trees are planted. Much land has either been changed into agricultural land or used for building factories and houses. Polluted rivers and lakes have also been a cause of death of some of the animals.
16 If You Want to Be Strong and Healthy
If you want to be strong and healthy , you must pay attention to the following. First , you should get enough sleep , and do morning exercises every day. Have meals at regular time and do not hurry when you eat. Remember to sit straight when you read and write. Breathe in as much fresh air as you can. When you e home from school , go out into the open air and play for an hour or so. Keep your body clean. Have a cold shower every morning. Wash your hands before meals.
If you do all these above, you will be strong and healthy.
17 Trees Are Important to Use
Trees are very useful to people. They provide us with wood and other products. They give us shade and they help to prevent drought and floods.
Unfortunately , in many parts of our country, people haven't realized the importance of trees. They cut them down at will. They are usually too lazy or too careless to plant and look after new trees. As a result, the forests continue to disappear.
Where there are no trees the rain falls on the surface, causing floods, and carries away with the rich topsoil , in which crops grow so well. When all the topsoil is gone, nothing remains but worthless deserted.
The big floods of 1998, in parts of China , have already taught us a good lesson. So every one of us must love trees, protect forests, and keep on planting trees each year.
18 Smoking and Health
Today cigarette smoking is a widespread habit all over the world. It was reported recently that smokers make up one quarter of the world population , while in China , 33.9 precent above the age of 15 are smokers. It's a very serious problem because not only the old , the youth , but also middle school students and girls have been engaged in smoking.
Many heavy smokers say they cannot leave off, although they know smoking is harmful to their health and they have tried again and again to stop.
Scientific research shows that smoking is not only harmful to smokers
themselves , but also a threat to public health , especially to women and children. The poisonous gas from smoking is one of the major causes of many kinds of diseases. Therefore , many countries have worked out laws forbidding smokers to smoke in public places such as cinemas, hospitals and stations.
19 How to Reduce the City Present Population?
Our modern city is too crowded , and to solve the problem , three proposals are put forward. Most people believe that we should fist practise the policy “Late Marriage ” and “One Couple , One Child ” in order to reduce the birth rate. Secondly , the city government must have a tight control over rural people entering cities to engage themselves in trade or do various physical jobs so as to lessen the pressure on the city caused by the increased population. Finally more and more people suggest that living blocks with shopping centers, schools, hospitals as well as cinemas and theatres round them or even satellite towns should be built in city suburbs or the countryside round the cities. In this way city citizens will be encouraged to move there to live and work. If these three proposals are well carried out, the city population will be greatly reduced.
20 Most students of our school , including me , think it is not right to build a chemical works near our school. Although the works will make a lot of money for our city, we do think it will do us more harm than good. The drinking water will be badly polluted. Of course, they have promised to do something to prevent the water from being polluted. But it is far from enough. On the other hand, the air over the city will be polluted , too. We'll never be able to breathe the fresh air. How can we live here any longer? What's more, the site of the chemical works has been the only place where we students play games and have sports after school. If it is occupied, we will have no place to play in.
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Do “Lucky Numbers” Really Bring Good Luck?
Some people think certain numbers may bring good luck. These numbers include “6”, “8”, “9” and so on. Therefore , when they want to choose a car number or a phone number, they buy the number which ends with these lucky numbers at a higher price.
In my opinion , there are no relations between the so-called lucky numbers and luck. The only key to success on wealth lies in hard work. If we are too dependent on it, we may bee lazy or easily discouraged when these numbers proved to be useless. We should believe in our own efforts to struggle for the success. 22
The Chinese Government has decided to quicken the development of the western region. In recent years, the eastern region of China has been developing rapidly since its reform and opening up to the outside world. But the western region remains undeveloped. China is a large country with 56 nationalities. We must quicken the progress of China as a whole to realize the modernizations. Although the western region is rich in resourses , yet it is short of water. With its development we must
keep the balance of nature. Only by relying on science and technology , can we develop the western part of our country soundly.
作文九:《英语议论文》8100字
① 网上聊天越来越流行
② 有人反对它,有人赞同。
③ 我的看法
With the development of IT, online chatting is being increasingly popular with many people.
However, people’s opinions about it vary from person to person. Some think that it has more problems than benefits. First, it is a waste of time, energy and money as it doesn’t produce any useful information and products. Second, it is misleading to its users because cyberspace is actually an imaginary space where things are unreal or fictional.
But the advocates of online chatting support it because it is another way of recreation which is both exciting and relaxing. Besides, it helps them release their emotions and worries freely and safely. To them, it is very useful and wonderful.
As far as I am concerned, whether online chatting is good or bad depends on the person who does it. So long as we can keep ourselves under good control, we can use it scientifically and properly without its bad effects.
议论文范文 2
As students, we always have a lot of exams/tests every term. Tests are used nowadays to check/examine/measure how well /effectively students study. Exams are a very useful and important educational tool of measurement.
However, exams have some side effects of their own. First, some exams can’t reflect the real progress students make. Second, too difficult or too many exams force students to cheat in exams. Too many exams force students to study for the sake of exams only, to name just a few.
In my opinion, advantages of exams far outweigh their disadvantages. Despite their side effects, exams can on the whole check and show how well students study scientifically and accurately. At least so far there has been not any method that take their place in education. Besides, exams seem to be fair to all students as they are objective and everyone is equal before test results.
To conclude, exams may continue to exist in our education for a long time before they are replaced by some better measurement methods.
记叙文范文
Eye-witness account of a traffic accident
假如你在某日某地某时目击一起车祸,就此写一份见证书。见证书如下:
1. 车祸发生的时间和地点
2. 你所见到的车祸的情况
3. 你对车祸原因的分析
I witnessed a traffic accident on the street at about 5p.m. yesterday. Here is my account of it.
It happened at 5p.m. yesterday at the Xiao Zai intersection when I was on my way back to my school. A taxi ran into a cycling boy riding across Chang An Road near the crossroad. When the taxi pulled up abruptly after the driver realized what had happened, the boy was already lying on the ground, bleeding and crying aloud. In 5 minutes, an ambulance came and took away the wounded boy.
There is no knowing how it came about. But I suppose it was because
the boy ran the red light and the taxi driver took it for granted that there would be no pedestrian or cyclist would cross the road at that moment. This accident warns us of the danger of ignoring traffic regulations.
图表文范文
1. 描写该图并用数字说明
2. 分析其原因及未来的趋势
3. 结论
With the rapid economic growth in China, there has been an increasingly great demand for fuel resources. Among them, natural gas is clean, convenient and inexpensive. The above graph shows the output of natural gas in China between 1991 and 1995.
As can be seen from the graph, there had been a steady increase in its output since 1991. In 1991, there was only 15.5 billion cubic meters of natural gas produced in China. After that, almost every year witnessed a steady increase by 0.5 billion cubic meters. By 1995, the output had increased to 17.5 billion cubic meters, an increase by about 13% over that of 1991.
There are many factors leading to this sharp increase in its output. To name only a few, the greater industrial demand, demands from daily life, convenience and cleanness in itself, etc. stimulate its output increase.
In conclusion, we can safely predict the output will continue to increase in the foreseeable future because of the greater demands for it.
Sample 5. A Letter of Complaint
Directions: Write a letter of no less than 120 words to your neighbour, who lives above your apartment in the same building and makes a lot of noise recently at night. Your letter should be polite but tell him or her clearly that you want him/her to stop making noise at night and why. Write a letter in the space provided on the Answer Sheet.
Dear Sir/Madam:
I am your neighbor living downstairs under your apartment in the same building. I am writing you to make a plaint to you./I am writing you to plain of the noise you make during the night.
Recently you are making noise during the night that has disturbed my rest. Almost every night, there es some noise from your apartment just as I go to bed and am on my way to a dream. I wonder what the noise is. Are you repairing your furniture? Are you doing physical exercises? However, whatever you do at that time of the night, you have to take your neighbors and their rest into consideration. In a word, you are disturbing both your other neighbors and me.
Therefore/So, please stop making noise at night.
Take care.
Yours friendly neighbor
Sample 6. Natural Gas Output in China
With the rapid economic growth in China, there has been an increasing demand for fuel resources. Among them, natural gas is clean, convenient and inexpensive. The above graph shows the output of natural gas in China between 1991 and 1995.
As can be seen from the graph, there had been a steady increase in its output since 1991. In 1991, there was only 15.5 billion cubic meters of
natural gas produced in China. After that, almost every year witnessed a steady increase by 0.5 billion cubic meters. By 1995, the output had increased to 17.5 billion cubic meters, an increase by about 13% over that of 1991.
There are many factors leading to this sharp increase in its output. To name only a few, the greater industrial demand, demands from daily life, convenience and cleanness in itself, etc. stimulate its output increase.
In conclusion, we can safely predict the output will continue to increase in the foreseeable future because of the greater demands for it.
Sample 7. The Importance of Interpersonal Communication.
1. 人人需要与他人交流
2. 人际交流的重要性
3. 结论
Entering the 21st century, man is now in an age of information and knowledge. In such an age, interpersonal munication plays an increasingly important role and all people have to municate with others.
Why is interpersonal munication so important? First, it helps people understand each other better. Second, it helps people get more information and knowledge. Third, without interpersonal munication, our life would bee a desert of emotion and friendship. Last but not the least, munication between people makes our life lively, interesting and lovely.
In a word, humans, as social animals, have to municate with each other, the importance of which can never be overemphasized.
Why is interpersonal munication so important? Interpersonal munication is just like a bridge of understanding between people. For example, it helps students to learn more effectively if one can municate more with his teachers and classmates. In a family, munication makes the family members understand each other better and get closer. In the workplace, munication between the employer and the employed creates a friendly and helpful working environment.
Sample 8 How to Study Effectively
As students, we have to study almost every day. However, how can we study effectively? Probably not everybody knows. Have a look at the following graph and we may know better about this.
This graph shows the relationship between the amount of study efficiency and the hours spent in studying in a day. From it, we can see that more hours of study do not necessarily result in better or higher study efficiency. In the graph, the best amount of efficiency or the optimum of efficiency es when one has studied for about 5.5 hours. However, the efficiency begins to drop as he studies longer than 5.5. By the time when one has studied for 10 hours in a day, his efficiency of study may bee nothing or zero.
In conclusion, there is always a maximum of efficiency and time for study in a day. More time spent in study doesn’t always mean better efficiency. This may tell us how we can study effectively.
作文十:《社会现象议论文》21900字
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社会现象议论文
近年来有些低俗话语开始在一些校园流传。“日照香炉烤鸭店,鸡鸭鱼肉在眼前。口水流下三千尺,一摸口袋没有钱。”“春眠不觉晓,处处蚊子咬??”
无独有偶,无论在《水浒传》还是在《金瓶梅》里,都是一个地痞恶棍形象的西门庆,眼下却成了“红人”。山东临清市推出“金瓶梅文化旅游区”招商项目,“西门庆院落”是重点内容之一;山东阳谷县即将向游人开放的狮子楼旅游城扩建工程中,“西门庆府院”也成为一大看点。
而今年,与低俗文化有关的事件接二连三:电视的相亲节目被叫停,“凤姐”和“伪娘”相继走红,日本女优苍井空访问上海时受到热捧??
你是怎样看待这类现象,请谈谈你的看法。请写一篇不少于800字的作文。
? 一、 感受社会现象类作文
社会现象类材料作文是近几年高考作文的一个热点题型。如:2009年辽宁卷的“明星代言”,江西卷的“圆明园铜兽首拍卖”事件;2011年课标卷的对“中国变化”所见所思所闻所感,大纲卷的“彩票最诚信业主” 等。
我们必须明白:这种直击社会热门话题的新的高考作文命题形式,我们必须面对;这种充分体现公民意识、彰显大语文教学理念、洋溢着强烈时代责任感的“社会现象类”作
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文模式,我们必须掌握~
二、社会现象类作文特点
社会现象类作文强调“时效性、针对性、准确性、说理性、思想性”,对于中学生写作时评来说,尤其要注意针对性和说理性。
? 1、要有针对性。它不能像一般材料作文那样,从材料中引出一个道理,然后哲理化写作。而是必须针对材料所列出的现象进行评论,有的放矢;
?、要有准确立意角度。甚至你的评论标题能让读者清楚地知道你的鲜明的态度或观点;
?、要有说理性。定是以理服人,让读者能一目了然地知道这种现象的本质是什么,原因是什么,如何解决。
? 三、社会现象类作文写法
? 1、概括出现象
? 、分析现象:
反映了什么,
? 、如何解决,
? 、写作要小角度切入立意:
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1、概括现象:低俗文化在社会中普遍存在
2、为什么:
由果索因,透过现象看本质。为什么低俗文化在社会中
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普遍存在, ?寻求自身感官刺激而选择低俗
?个人对名利的不当追求造就低俗
?媒体为自身经济利益而造就低级趣味
3、反映了什么
健康新颖的文化形式的缺失,社会信仰的缺失,审美趣味的低迷。
措施:?个人要有健康高雅的追求;?商家要有社会文化责任感,不能只追求经济利益;?有关部门应积极引导,加强监管。
4、小角度切入立意:
?还我一片晴空
不知从何时起,“低俗文化”的乌云几乎遮蔽整个晴空;也不知从何起,“低俗文化”搭乘网络快车占据人们心灵的净土。忍受着低俗文化之风,仰望着天空厚厚的阴霾,我发出内心沉积已久的怒吼:“还我一片晴空~”
? ?不落“俗”套
多元化的社会,必然会有多元化取向和多元精神需求,难免有高雅、低俗之分,但低俗之风绝不是一个健康文明社会的主流,我们绝对不能落入“低俗风气”的套子里。
? 别让低俗文化扎根校园
别让低俗文化扎根校园,让诗魂溶入学子的血液,让他们成为中华文化真正的继承者。
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别让低俗文化扎根校园,让学子认清是非,辨明真假,坚守自己的一方净土,在中华文化中再创一朵奇葩~别让低俗文化扎根校园,留给他们一片蓝天。
别让低俗文化扎根校园,留给学子一方净土,一片蓝天
社会现象类议论文习作例析
余明朝 陕西省商南县高级中学
一、习作原文
Students Grading of Their Teachers
1(学生给老师打分已很普遍;
2(人们对其持不同态度;
3(你的看法。
显然,此任务是写一篇议论文,主题为对学生给老师打分的现象进行议论,开放性较大。学生应根据实际情况,从多个方面阐述其原因并表达自己对这种现象的观点和态度。该话题更加贴近学生的实际生活,但有一定的语言难度,也有一定的思想深度。通过此文的写作,也从侧面提示了学生在注重写作基础训练的前提下,也应该注重培养积极思考、灵活运用、自由发挥等能力。
此次的写作任务出题相当巧妙,写作内容涉及的词汇和句型都属于新课程标准范围。题目在考查学生写作能力的同
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时,也在考查学生的分析判断能力及高度概括能力。富有想
象力的学生写出的文章可能生动而富有灵性。此题目能引发
学生对平日习以为常的行为进行反思,学会换位思考,这对
中学生的性格和品德培养非常重要。
Students Grading of Their Teachers
Nowadays, a lot of schools ask their students to contribute to grading their teachers. As a teacher, it is their responsibility to satisfy their students in all aspects. Meanwhile, it is admirable that school teachers prefer to expose themselves to their students.
If the system of grading of teachers by students is introduced, it will benefit students, teachers and the administration of the school for a number of reasons. For one thing, the system will give teachers and the administration of the school an insight into the minds of the students and show whether the teachers are successful in getting their lessons understood by the students; for another, it will also encourage the good teachers to continue their efforts and motivate themselves. What is more, it will expose those who are not doing enough and will lead them to correct their
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teaching methods as well as their attitude towards students. Thus the quality of teaching will certainly improve.
In a word, it is a promising concept and will bring
surprisingly good results if applied with the right conditions.
作者观点明确,赞成学生给老师打分。作为老师,就要
做一个让学生满意的老师。这样,不仅对学生、学校有利,
而且对老师本人也有利。这样,老师就会从另一个角度重新
审视自己,看自己是否是一个成功的老师。如果得到学生的
认可,这将是对自己的一次鼓励,为继续前行增添动力。如
果学生的认可度不高,老师就应进行反思,调控教学方法和
教学态度。这样,教学质量肯定会提高。作
者用简洁、明快的语言以及自己的经历列举了充分
的论据,内容充实,贴近生活。For one thing, for another, what is more, in a word等过渡词的使用,是短文结构清
晰,层次分明。最后,最值得一提的是,文中多次正确运用
的高级词汇和复杂句式,给文章增添了不少文采。综上所述,
这是一篇不可多得的佳作,值得向大家推荐。
二、写作模板
此模板适用于社会现象类议论文。参考模式如下:
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Nowadays, there exists an increasingly serious social/economic/environmental There are a couple of reasons behind this problem/phenomenon. For one ;Based
on the above discussions, I can easily forecast that more and more people
Nowadays, there exists a mon phenomenon—with
the development of the Internet, more and more people tend to send electronic cards instead of paper ones to their friends and relatives when an important holiday es.
There are a couple of reasons behind this phenomenon. For one thing, pared with the traditional cards, electronic cards are more lively and interesting. They can give not only pictures but also sound and animation. For another, there are many websites online which offer varieties of cards for you to choose from. What is more, with the popularity of the electronic cards, less paper is used in making paper cards, which does good to our environment.
Based on the above discussions, I can easily forecast that sending greetings by using electronic cards will be accepted by more and more people, not only
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the young ones.
三、写作指导
写作思路是先列出一个具体的社会问题或者现象,然后分析产生的原因和产生的影响,最后提出解决问题的办法,或者得出结论,或者提出个人看法,或者预测前景。
论点、论据、论证是议论文的三要素。论点是作者对所议论问题所持有的见解和主张,论据是用来证明论点的事实和道理的根据;论证是用论据来证明论点的方法和过程。一般来说,议论文每段都有主题句来确定论点。论证的方法很多,但最常用的是因果分析法。即:分析事实与论点的因果关系,指出取得结果的原因是所要证明的论点,从而达到论证的目的。
在近几年的高考中,议论文的比重占得越来越多,议论文的出题形式可以多种多样,有看图写作、图表、表格、书信等各种类型,但文体实际是议论文,而有时是夹叙的议论文。议论文的写作要点是:
1. 观点鲜明,文章一定有一个明确的中心论点。
2. 层次分明,一个中心论点通常有几个分论点支持,不同层次之间要分明,过渡清晰自然。
3. 最后一段一般要总结全文,得出一个符合逻辑的结论,突出中心思想。
4. 一般采用一般现在时。
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5. 语言简洁有力,一般不采用口语。
四、巩固练习
1.
2010年上海世界博览会期间,上万的青年志愿者参加志
愿工作,请你谈谈对此现象的看法。
During the period of holding the010 World Expo in Shanghai, tens of thousands of young citizens are participating in volunteer work, hoping to devote themselves to the grand occasion. As far as I am concerned, everyone ought to enter for it. Here are the reasons I want to mention.
It can be argued that the advantages of doing unpaid volunteer work are enormous, because volunteer work is actually a two-way street. First of all, volunteer work should always benefit people who need help. Those who need help will feel happier due to our immediate help. On the other hand, as far as the young people ourselves are concerned, we have more opportunities to develop the sense of responsibility, independence as well as interpersonal skills in the process of helping others.
Through this kind of work, we bee confident and
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mature. In addition, we can make many friends and increase our chances of getting the jobs of our dreams. Furthermore, volunteer work plays an active role in building up a harmonious society.
In a word, it is of great value for the young adults to offer volunteer work. The youth volunteers do make a difference by the voluntary work! Why not join them and do something for our country?
2.
某些中学生为了显示自己成熟或表明自己醋而吸烟。请
写一篇120词左右的短文,列举吸烟的危害,并提出建议。
I am sorry to know that more and more middle school students begin to smoke. I think it is wrong to believe that smoking is cool and even think that smoking makes you appear to be mature. In fact, smoking is not cool but very dangerous.
First, smoking can do much damage to health. Scientific researches show that smoking can lead to heart diseases, cancers and other problems. It is reported that about million people die of diseases related to smoking each year all over the world.
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Second, it is a waste of money to smoke cigarettes. Smoking can cost a great deal of money. Once you are addicted to it, it is difficult to give it up.
What’s more, smoking can cause fires easily, which may do great damage to your life and your surroundings.
So give up smoking at once! Only in this way can you keep healthy forever.
3. 近年来,越来越多的中学生出国学习,出现了所谓
的中学生“出国热”。请根据以下提供的信息,谈谈自己的
看法。
1)良好的语言环境,更利于语言学习。
2)拓宽视野,学习国外先进的科学技术。
3)传播各民族间的不同文化。
参考词汇:媒介,中间人:mediator
In recent years, studying abroad has been popular. Tens of thousands of Chinese middle school students have gone to foreign countries to study(Many people
are trying their best to apply to go abroad.
There are a number of reasons for attending schools abroad(First, students who are studying abroad can act as mediators between people of different cultures. They
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can municate with each other directly and learn about different cultures. Second, they can learn much more advanced knowledge of science and technology from foreign countries and experience different education methods(Third, they live in foreign countries and take classes given by foreign teachers. As a result, they can learn foreign languages much more quickly.
Therefore, it is advisable to attend schools abroad.
4.随着经济和社会的发展,道路上的私人小汽车越来越
多。请根据自己的观察和理解,谈谈自己的观点。
With the fantastic development both in economy and in society in China, the number of people who own private cars is on the rise. Some people have bought cars of their own, and others are planning to buy cars. But I strongly object to the increase in developing private cars.
I hold that automobiles will give rise to a series of problems. In the first place, as more and more cars are produced and run on the road, a large volume of poisonous gas will be given off, polluting the
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atmosphere and causing actual harm to the health of people. Next, private cars contribute to traffic jams so greatly that the advantages gained in fort and freedom are often cancelled out by the frustration caused by traffic jams. The last problem is the increasing number of car accidents that have killed and will kill a lot of people in a friction of a second.
In a word, although automobiles have been playing a vital part in the daily activities of our society, they also bring us numerous troubles such as more serious environmental pollution, more traffic accidents and more energy consumption. They drink up huge amounts of fuel and throw out huge amounts of pollutants. Jams waste our precious time. Therefore, I am against developing private cars.
?????社会现象式作文写作模板?????
潍汸?狆尒房
篇章结构解析:
1 一个社会问题或者现象
产生的原因
对社会和我们生活的影响
如何杜绝 /解决措施/个人观点
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前景的预测
社会现象式作文写作套语
叙述社会存在的现象
1 Nowadays, there exists an increasingly serious social/ economic/ environmental problem.
No one could have failed/ denied to notice the fact that????.
???has increasingly bee a mon concern of the public.
There is a consensus in society that????
说明某种现象的原因
1 There are a couple of reasons booming this problem.
there are several reasons accounting for this phenomenon
A number of factors account for the phenomenon mentioned above.
The main reason probably lies in ???.
OO介绍对社会的影响
1. ??.has caused a notable impact on society and our daily life in the following aspects.
\/ 采取措施
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1 A dozen of measures are supposed to take to prevent??..from bringing us more harm.
Measures/ action must be taken to meet the situation. 、deal with /solve/cope with
??? should take steps to prevent /
control/ ??.
随着互联网的发展和普及,网络购物在中国也变得
越来越普遍了,甚至已经成了我们日常生活的一部分了;相
信同学们身边一定有不少同学已经通过网络进行购物了,比
如*****网,京东商城等;但是网络购物究竟有何利弊呢? 请
写一篇短文,谈谈网上购物的好处与坏处。
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参考范文:
We talked about the advantages and disadvantages of internet shopping these days. Some students think it's very convenient for us to go shopping on the internet. The shops on Internet ,for example
taobao.,60buy. are open for almosthours a day, so we can buy something we want at any time if we like. What's more, we needn't to wait in a queue.
However, some students disagreed with them. We
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can't see the things while we are shopping. So we are not sure whether they are good or not.. Besides, we can't enjoy the happiness of shopping with our friends.
近年来,我国火灾频频发生。2010年11月15日,上海
胶东路一座高楼起火,损失严重。这个事件提醒注意防火安
全很重要。请你根据以下提示,写一篇短文来分析引起火灾
的原因并谈谈你对火灾中自救的建议。
要求:
1.词数不少于90,短文开头过渡已为你写好,不计入总
词数;
2.要点完整、层次清楚、语法正确、上下文连贯。
提示:
防火安全fire safety 电 electricity 燃放烟花爆竹
set off fireworks
爬行crawl on one’s knees 消防栓 the fire hydrant
Usually fire accidents are caused because of carelessness. For example, ______________________
What can we do to protect ourselves when there is a fire?____________________________
2011年初,我国南方大部分地区遭受冻雨,特别是贵州、
湖南和四川,灾情失分严重。公路、铁路、机场都被迫关闭,
电网瘫痪。冻灾致使贵州40万人饮水难,四川两电厂停运。
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部分山区人民生活异常困难,在各级政府的带领下,人民群
众、解放军战士英勇抗击冰灾,涌现出大批可歌可泣的英雄
事迹。作为一名中学生,你有何感想?有何打算?能不
能改变这种状态?
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参考范文
As we know, our country suffered heavy ice early011. Everything was covered with freezing rain. Guizhou, Hunan and Sichuan suffered the most. It caused the buses, trains and
planes stop service. The disaster destroyed power facilities, cutting power supplies in many areas. As a result, huge economic loss was caused. Many people could not work and live normally. There was no food, water or light in some places. Our government called on people to fight
against heavy snow. As a student, I think we should learn from those heroes. We must study hard at school. We should learn all kinds of knowledge to make our motherland stronger, better and richer.
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据报道,从2011年开始韩国除了向所有小学和初高中
学生发放纸质的语文、英语、数学教科书之外,同时还将发
放光盘形式的电子教科书。这表明,在韩国,电子图书即将
走进寻常百姓家。某英文论坛发起了一次主题为“E-Books,
Good or Bad?”的讨论,请你写一篇80词左右的短文,表
达你对这件事情的看法。
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参考范文:
E-Books Are Good
It’s reported that school students in Korea will use e-books from011. What good news this is! E-books have many advantages.
Most importantly, they are good for the environment, since they can save lots of paper and trees. Besides, they are very convenient. To get a paper book, one has to spend a lot of time searching for it in a bookshop. But we can find e-books very quickly on the puter.
In short, e-books can help us enjoy our life more.
高考“社会现象类”材料作文专题复习
2013年18套作文试题,以“社会现象类”居多,这类
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试题贴近现实,贴近考生的生活,跳动着时代的脉搏,占2013年高考试题数量的三分之一。回顾七年来宁夏卷高考作文,几乎均为社会现象类材料作文。显而易见,此类试题将代表着2014年的命题方向,那么如何写好“社会现象”类材料作文,我认为最佳的写作方法是“就事论事,同类拓展”。
2013年高考“社会现象类”材料作文统计分析
类 型 数量 卷 类 话 题
特 点
社会现象类材料作文 正面材料 全国课标II卷
同学关系调查 感情倾向明显,表现积极向上的价值观。
山东卷 莫言被“咬”
广西卷 捡手机
反面材料 1 浙江卷 “童心”
感情倾向明显,从侧面呼吁正面价值观。
开放性
材料 广东卷 富翁捐助 无明显感情倾向,仁者见仁,智者见智。
北京卷 文学家与科学家对手机的认识。
“就事论事”就是指考生的写作对象必须是试题材料所展示的社会现象。一事一议的最大缺陷就是文章内容单薄,为了弥补这种缺陷,考生必须运用相似联想或相反联想,寻
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找一些和试题材料同类的素材以充实文章内容,支撑自己的观点,这就是“同类拓展”。
考生们在写“社会现象类”材料作文时由于思虑不全,往往会踏入一些误区,从而导致作文分数低迷。其实这些“陷阱”是完全可以避免的。
误区一:盲目地提某些大道理。社会现象类材料作文要求考生“就事论事”,不能让文章的中心游离于“事件之外”,但是在考场上一些考生所谈的话题和材料事件毫无关系,以致文章跑题。比如2013年高考:广东卷考生所谈的话题必须是“慈善”;全国课标II卷考生所谈的话题必须是“同学关系”;北京卷考生所谈的话题必须是手机等等。如果考生所谈的话题游离于“事件”之外,那必定是跑题作文。
误区二:内容空洞,走不出对试题材料的论述。既然社会现象类作文要求就事论事,那么有些考生就会就着材料大谈特谈,甚至对材料反复的叙述,缺乏对文章中心必要的拓展,进而导致文章内容单薄。要避免文章内容空洞无物,必须拥有自己独特的生活体验和对各类社会现象有一定的深度思考。考生平时不妨多看一些新闻、时
评、社论等,提高思维能力与社会认知度,在写作时便可围绕材料进行主题升华。 误区三:结构比例严重失衡。开篇引述试题材料,这仅仅是个引子,因而需要略写。选择材料的一个角度分析解读,提出自己的观点,联系社会
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现实的类似现象向外拓展,阐释自己的观点才是文章的重点,此部分需要详写。可一些考生却恰恰相反,大肆地叙述试题材料,而向外拓展的部分极少,进而造成文章在结构,材料安排上比例严重失衡。所以在文章结构上,考生不妨采取“起承转合”的结构来行文,请参照下表:
构思 文中位置 文 章 内 容
比例
起 第1段 用简洁的语言转述试题材料。
10%
承 第2、3段 找准角度,对试题材料做简单分析,提出自己观点。 15%
转 主体部分 联系现实,阐释所提观点。
5%
合 结尾部分 再回归试题材料与自己的观点材料,总结全文。 10%
上述这种行文方法,使得文章结构严谨,不失为一种复古的创新。而且此类手法适合许多题目,也就是说许多文章都可用这种结构。正在备考的高三学子们不妨学习此法,相信会大有裨益的。下面就以“社会现象类”材料作文为例谈谈这种写法的运用。
“社会现象类”材料作文,从试题所给的材料性质来看,可分为三类:
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一、正面材料。如全国课标II卷的“同学关系调查”,对于增进同学间的友好关系,营造和谐氛围,72%的人表示非常有信心;山东卷莫言在被“咬”之后表达了自己的谢意,并认为请别人挑错,是消除谬误的好办法;广西卷中捡手机者认为不能用贪心来对待爱心。这类材料感情倾向明显,具有积极向上的价值观。
此类材料作为正面材料,考生可把它作为一般议论文来写,下面就以2013年全国课标II卷为例,进行构思立意。
阅读下面的材料,根据要求写一篇不少于800字的文章。
高中学习阶段,你一定在班集体里度过了美好的时光,收获了深厚的情谊。同窗共读,互相帮助,彼此激励,即便是一次不愉快的争执,都给你留下难忘的记忆,伴你走向成熟。
某机构就“同学关系”问题在几所学校作了一次调查。结果显示,60%的人表示满意,36%的人认为一般,4%的人觉得不满意。
如果同学关系紧张,原因是什么,有人认为是自我意识过强,有人认为是志趣、性格不合,也有人认为缘于竞争激烈,等等。
对于增进同学间的友好关系,营造和谐氛围,72%的人表示非常有信心,他们认为
互相尊重、理解和包容,遇事多为他人着想,关系
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就会更加融洽。
要求:选好角度,确定立意,明确文体,自拟标题,不要脱离材料内容及含意的范围作文,不要套做,不得抄袭。
第一步:引述材料,摆出现象。
某机构就“同学关系”问题调查结果显示,对于增进同学间的友好关系,营造和谐氛围,72%的人表示非常有信心,他们认为互相尊重、理解和包容,遇事多为他人着想,关系就会更加融洽。
第二步:从现象中提取论述的观点。
确实如此,同学之间只有互相尊重、理解和包容,关系才能变得融洽,这是我们为人处世的基本原则。
第三步:分析、阐释观点。
考生可选取的拓展素材有:?中国心理卫生协会大学生心理咨询专委会的调查表明,近40%的大学生和50%以上的毕业生存有不同的心理问题;?马加爵事件、复旦投毒案;?清华朱令案;?网友给同室的大学同学发短信感谢;“感谢当年的不杀之恩”。
第四步:总结全文,提出倡议。
要成才,先成人,一个心智健全、人格高尚的人,其之于社会的作用,恐怕是大于那些学富五车、却不惜为了自己而损害他人利益的人。让我们用尊重、理解、包容,建立融
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洽的同学关系。
阅读下面的文字,根据要求写一篇不少于800字的文章。 杭州图书馆十年来对所有读者**开放,因此也有了乞丐和拾荒者进门阅览。图书馆对他们的唯一要求就是把手洗干净再阅读,可有读者无法接受,于是找到馆长褚树青,说允许乞丐和拾荒者进图书馆是对其他读者的不尊重。褚树青回答:我无权拒绝他们入内读书,但您有权利选择离开。
图书馆是唯一能将贫富之间获取知识的鸿沟消弭的机构。阿根廷诗人、阿根廷国立图书馆馆长博尔赫斯曾说:如果有天堂,天堂应该是图书馆的模样。
要求选好角度,确定立意,明确文体,自拟标题;不要脱离材料内容与含义的范围作文,不要套作,不得抄袭。
1.平等待人,公平处事
第一步:引述材料,摆出现象。
杭州图书馆十年来对所有读者**开放,馆长褚树青不拒绝乞丐和拾荒者进门阅览,并对所有读者一视同仁。
第二步:从现象中提取论述的观点。
毋庸置疑,馆长褚树青的做法令世人敬佩。他不歧视乞丐和拾荒者,他平等对待所
有读者的态度使我明白了人生来平等的道理。是啊,人生来平等,谁都拥有获得尊严的权利,因此,我们应该以
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公平的心态去对待每一个人,每一件事。
第三步:分析、阐释观点。
考生可选取的拓展素材有:?吴冠中对学生的批评;?央视“星光大道”:只要你有才华,不论你的出身、社会地位、经济贫富等均可上“星光大道”;?82岁的香港大学宿舍服务员“三嫂”袁苏妹,被香港大学授予“荣誉院士”;?美国国民选黑人奥巴马当总统。
第四步:总结全文,提出倡议。
每一个生命,无论是尊贵的,还是卑微的,都有其自身的价值,都应该享受平等的权利。杭州图书馆馆长褚树青、著名画家吴冠中、“星光大道”节目宗旨等赢得世人最真诚的感动,其原因就在此吧。平等待人,公平处事,会使人与人之间距离缩短,会让人们的生活变得简单而美丽。
尊重每一个人吧,让每一个人都能够平等地生活在同一片蓝天下,我相信,这是我们人类共同的理想~
2.尊重,画出天堂的模样
第一步:引述材料,摆出现象。
杭州市图书馆馆长褚树青,十年坚持**开放图书馆,将知识惠及每一位市民,他做到了平等;面对部分市民拒绝乞丐和流浪者入内的要求,他说:“我无权拒绝他们入内读书,但您有权利选择离开。”
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第二步:从现象中提取论述的观点。
每一个生命,无论是尊贵的,还是卑微的,在馆长褚树青眼中,都有其自身的价值,都应该享受被尊重的权利。尊重生命,我们自己的生命才会得到尊重。尊重,会使人与人之间距离缩短,会让人们的生活变得简单,更会给整个世界带来最真诚的感动。
第三步:分析、阐释观点。
考生可选取的拓展素材有:?奥地利的小草真幸福~白天有人关心它们是否晒得太阳,夜里有人关心它们能不能安然入睡,一旦受到侵犯,还有人替它们主持公道。这种生活谁能不羡慕呢,奥地利政府部门对生命的尊重是值得我们借鉴的,他们在考虑问题时首先想到的不是美观,而是小草的生长规律,可谓真正的尊重。?玛丽.安东涅特王后在走向断头台的时候,不小心踩了刽子手的脚,立即轻声向他道歉。法国人民至今对此念念不忘。在王后的眼里,刽子手与她是平等的,一声道歉,让她最终成为法国人民永远的王后;?年轻人哈斯汀工作非常卖力,自己喝过的咖啡杯通常随手一放,懒得清洗。老板发现后,悄悄替他洗干净。哈斯汀这个年轻小伙子和他的老板都是懂得尊重的人,所以他们也都获得了
对方的真正的尊重;?拿破仑秘书布里昂的反问,
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既维护了自己的尊严,又给上级留了面子,这种尊重,让他获得的是称赞。
第四步:总结全文,提出倡议。
尊重使人们之间的距离缩短,让生活变得更加简单,给整个世界带来最真诚的感动,我们需要坚持下一个十年,二十年,直至永远。正如阿根廷诗人、阿根廷国立图书馆馆长博尔赫斯曾说:如果有天堂,天堂应该是图书馆的模样。只因这里没有鸿沟,只有平等与尊重。
二、反面材料。如浙江卷三句话都是对童心的论述,并且共同揭示了一个社会现实即少男少女的心灵在提前硬化。而材料的背后又具有明显的感情倾向,那就是“世界一旦失去这个伟大的孩提王国,那就是真正的沉沦”。所以材料对世界失去这个伟大的孩提王国的社会现实是充满着否定态度的。此类材料作为反面材料,考生可采用先破后立的结构模式来行文立意。下面就以2013年浙江卷为例,进行构思立意。
阅读下面的文字,根据要求作文。
中国作家丰子恺:孩子的眼光是直线的,不会转弯。
英国作家赫胥黎:为什么人类的年龄在延长,而少男少女的心灵却在提前硬化。
美国作家菲尔丁:世界正在失去伟大的孩提王国,一旦失去这一王国,那就是真正的沉沦。 综合上述材料,你有
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什么所思所感,写一篇不少于800字的文章。
要求:?选好角度,确定立意,自拟题目。?不得脱离材料内容及含意的范围作文。?明确文体,但不得写成诗歌。?不得抄袭、套作。
第一步:开篇引述材料。
美国作家菲尔丁说:“世界正在失去伟大的孩提王国,一旦失去这一王国,那就是真正的沉沦。”
第二步:找准角度对材料进行分析,剖析其谬误,进而提出自己的观点。
是的,为什么人类的年龄在延长,而少男少女的心灵却在提前硬化,放眼身边,有多少孩子逐渐丧失了童真,他们过早的世俗化,梦想不再,锐气不再,暮气沉沉。所以我们一定要留住童真,留住初心,留住曾经的美好。
第三步:联系社会现实中的类似现象,阐释所“立”的观点。
考生可选取的拓展素材有:?在丰子恺白发苍苍时所作的画中仍可寻找到童真世界;?热播电影《致青春》引发全民大怀旧;?当孩子从老人那儿听到神奇的童话故事、神话传说后,大人们往往一句“这个世界是没有神仙的”,就会使那个童年栖居的诗意空间轰然崩塌;?中小学甚至幼儿园里的孩子们都过早地学会了人情世故,例如攀比家长的地位
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和财富、相互妒忌拆台等等。
第四步:结合试题材料再次强调所“立”观点,总结全文。
中国作家丰子恺:“孩子的眼光是直线的,不会转弯。”泰戈尔也曾说“在孩子的眼睛里能找到天堂”。让我们留住童真,捍卫最初的人性家园,回归生命的本真,只有这样,往前走,
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