作文一:《一个作文题目的反思》1200字
一个作文题目的反思
一个作文题目的反思
一个作文题目的反思
2006-12-8 上午 06:40:55
内容摘要: 目一新,真有“山重水复疑无路,柳暗花明又一村”感觉,欣喜之情油然而生,很容易吸引读者的眼球。 命题不新,一方面是因为学生依赖性强,思维囿于定势,往往受作文提示的暗示性影响。如这次作文的提示是:“在我们成长过程中,所走过的每一步,都会得到别人的给予和馈赠,如来自父母的关爱,朋友的帮助,老师的教诲,甚至陌生人的温暖??在你这段人生旅程中,你最想感谢的是谁,”不难设想,绝大多数学生最先想到的首先是父 第一次模拟考试的作文题目是“感谢”。一看题目,比较熟悉,内容也较浅近,值得感谢的自然不少,学生不愁写不出东西来。 考试时,不少学生提前半小时就答完了试卷,仿佛稳操胜券似的,三番五次扭头看墙上的石英钟,一副百无聊赖的神情。 每次阅卷往往满怀期待,总想不断看到新颖别致之作。可是,期望越高,失望越大。这一次也不例外,看到最后一篇,可心的作品没几篇。总的感觉是,平淡无奇。 首先,命题太俗,千人一面,难以让人一见倾心。从五班考场作文来看,近80%的学生“感谢”所熟悉的人。写谁,横线上就填谁,《感谢父母》的就30人,《感谢老师(恩)》的也20人。避熟就生,独辟蹊径,写人之所未写的较少,感谢“姐姐”“姨妈”“姥娘”的,有,人;写同学的有,人,如感谢“她们”“朋友的帮助”“同学们对我的关心”。更新颖的题目,有张富泽的《感谢警察》、弭兆聪的《感谢您,不知名的叔叔》、冯骁的《感谢那个陌生人》、赵煜的《感谢她给予我坚强的意志》、徐昊的《感谢储蓄罐》、魏伟的《感谢电脑》等。一看这些题目,让人耳目一新,真有“山重水复疑无路,柳暗花明又一村”感觉,欣喜之情油然而生,很容易吸引读者的眼球。 命题不新,一方面是因为学生依赖性强,思维囿于定势,往往受作文提示的暗示性影响。如这次作文的提示是:“在我们成长过程中,所走过的每一步,都会得到别人的给予和馈赠,如来自父母的关爱,朋友的帮助,老师的教诲,甚至陌生人的温暖??在你这段人生旅程中,你最
想感谢的是谁,”不难设想,绝大多数学生最先想到的首先是父母,其次是老师,再次是朋友。鉴于考试,时间紧迫,更出于稳妥起见,有现成的自然首选。至于其他值得感谢的人、事、物等等,目前是遥不可及;对于才思不很敏捷的考生来说,其思维的触角也很难伸向“远水”。 另一方面,审题、命题的专项训练较少,学生不知深浅,命题往往“随行就市”,缺乏创意。平时提倡“自拟题目”,所命题目也常常五花八门。但是,经过深思熟虑后高度概括出来的凝练题目不多,真正起到“眼睛”作用的“神来之笔”更是少之又少。即使每次有几个富有创意的题目,也很少及时表扬,当堂展示,许多创造性的火花,只是在个别学生的思维一隅闪烁了一下,如同彗星扫过一样,转瞬即逝??教学反思《一个作文题目的反思》一文
作文二:《一个作文题目的反思》900字
第一次模拟考试的作文题目是“感谢????????”。一看题目,比较熟悉,内容也较浅近,值得感谢的自然不少,学生不愁写不出东西来。
考试时,不少学生提前半小时就答完了试卷,仿佛稳操胜券似的,三番五次扭头看墙上的石英钟,一副百无聊赖的神情。
每次阅卷往往满怀期待,总想不断看到新颖别致之作。可是,期望越高,失望越大。这一次也不例外,看到最后一篇,可心的作品没几篇。总的感觉是,平淡无奇。
首先,命题太俗,千人一面,难以让人一见倾心。从五班考场作文来看,近80%的学生“感谢”所熟悉的人。写谁,横线上就填谁,《感谢父母》的就30人,《感谢老师(恩)》的也20人。避熟就生,独辟蹊径,写人之所未写的较少,感谢“姐姐”“姨妈”“姥娘”的,有4人;写同学的有3人,如感谢“她们”“朋友的帮助”“同学们对我的关心”。更新颖的题目,有张富泽的《感谢警察》、弭兆聪的《感谢您,不知名的叔叔》、冯骁的《感谢那个陌生人》、赵煜的《感谢她给予我坚强的意志》、徐昊的《感谢储蓄罐》、魏伟的《感谢电脑》等。一看这些题目,让人耳目一新,真有“山重水复疑无路,柳暗花明又一村”感觉,欣喜之情油然而生,很容易吸引读者的眼球。
命题不新,一方面是因为学生依赖性强,思维囿于定势,往往受作文提示的暗示性影响。如这次作文的提示是:“在我们成长过程中,所走过的每一步,都会得到别人的给予和馈赠,如来自父母的关爱,朋友的帮助,老师的教诲,甚至陌生人的温暖……在你这段人生旅程中,你最想感谢的是谁?”不难设想,绝大多数学生最先想到的首先是父母,其次是老师,再次是朋友。鉴于考试,时间紧迫,更出于稳妥起见,有现成的自然首选。至于其他值得感谢的人、事、物等等,目前是遥不可及;对于才思不很敏捷的考生来说,其思维的触角也很难伸向“远水”。
另一方面,审题、命题的专项训练较少,学生不知深浅,命题往往“随行就市”,缺乏创意。平时提倡“自拟题目”,所命题目也常常五花八门。但是,经过深思熟虑后高度概括出来的凝练题目不多,真正起到“眼睛”作用的“神来之笔”更是少之又少。即使每次有几个富有创意的题目,也很少及时表扬,当堂展示,许多创造性的火花,只是在个别学生的思维一隅闪烁了一下,如同彗星扫过一样,转瞬即逝……
作文三:《作文题目_二十年后的我》2300字
作文題目,二十年後的我
二十年,是一段不短的時間。在這二十年中,身高、外貌可能會轉變,甚至個性、想法也可能變得不一樣,而二十年後,會在哪裡,會正在做什麼事情,沒有人知道,沒有人能預料。所以,只能用夢想的方式,期盼二十年後的我,有什麼樣的成就。有些人在二十年後,會有驚人的事業,闖出一片天,也有可能在國外,拿到了博士學位,有著崇高的學術地位。沒錯,二十年後的自己,是值得期待的。
◎第一段:先假設自己已經在二十年後了‥‥
◎第二段:描述二十年後的自己。長相、工作、生活‥‥
◎第三段: 想要做到二十年後的樣子,應該做哪些努力,
範文一,
十年前,我還是個寶寶,一轉眼,現在卻已經是位小學生了,時間過得可真快,那二十年後的我究竟是個什麼樣的人呢,
二十年後的我,可能會有一頭烏黑亮麗的短髮和兩顆明亮的眼睛,長得瘦瘦的,身高不高也不矮。那時,我還是擁有一男一女的家庭主婦,女孩比男孩大。週休二日,我會帶孩子出去玩,寒暑假時,我會帶孩子到國外旅遊,欣賞異國不同的風情。我不會讓孩子學太多的才藝,因為這樣孩子就可以擁有較多自己的時間。
我的職業是中年級的老師,小朋友每天忘記帶東西,這會把我氣得火冒三丈。可是看到他們每天都生龍活虎、天真無邪的樣子,我的氣又全消了。我是十分喜愛這份工作的。
現在我把二十年後的我按照我所想的寫出來,但是不是真的會這樣發生,沒有人知道,所以我們應該要把握現在,更努力的讓自己的夢想實現。
範文二,
現在的我,是二十年後的我。我有一個美滿的家庭環境,兩個小孩和一個妻子,我的職業是「開發工程師」。
早上起床,我隔著窗戶看到我所研發出來的「恐龍」在和我的小孩玩,還看見許多人開著我們「不可思議開發公司」製造的飛行車,正載著全家人出門兜風。不禁想起二十年
前我還是個乳臭未乾的小學生,二十年後竟然成為一個專門創造各種便利道具公司的董事長。
吃完妻子準備的早餐後,我開著飛行車前往公司,進了公司大門,按了按遙控器,隨即看到一個機器人端著茶走過來。我每天埋首於各式各樣的機械零件下,不過只要吃下我們公司獨特的「清爽丸」就會馬上恢復精力。工作之餘,我會搭著速度極快的飛行車回家和孩子玩碰碰車,但不是去遊樂場玩,而是在我家前院裡。只要在紙箱下裝上遙控輪子就會動了。
我家前院彷彿是動物園似的,有人造獅子、大象、鯨魚等,這些動物的大小都是仿造真實動物的體型,所以為了增加生活空間,我們把月球當作別墅。食物方面呢,我總是收買月兔,好利用牠搗麻糬給我們吃,
因為有這份工作,才會使我們的生活更便利,因為有這份工作,才能使孩子的興趣更多元。只要見到孩子們玩得高興、妻子也笑得開心,就算工作再累,我也再所不辭。這,就是現在的我。那麼,二十年後的你,又是什麼模樣呢,想想看吧,
範文三,
現在的我是一位十二歲的小孩,在家裡是爸爸、媽媽心目中最乖巧、可愛的女兒,是哥哥最調皮的妹妹,因為我每天都煩他。在學校是同學眼裡一位平凡的學生,在爺爺、奶奶心目中是活潑、懂事的孫女,是弟弟、妹妹心中對他們最好的姐姐,因為每次都會陪他們玩遊戲、教他們作功課。還有為了減輕父母的辛勞,我會幫忙做家事,因此我是人見人愛的十二歲小女孩。那二十年後的我又會變成什麼樣子呢,
二十年後的我是一位富翁,因為工作努力賺了很多錢,加上在地上撿到一張樂透彩券,意外中了頭獎彩金十二億。所以我帶著全家搬到美國,我送家人每人一棟別墅,我也
在那裡買了一棟別墅。裡面有游泳池、健身房、餐廳…等等,家裡還有傭人、私人司機、養了很多的寵物以及收藏珍貴的古董,我還投資開餐廳、高爾夫球場、遊樂園、蓋公園…等等。
我的別墅很豪華,要使用特別的證卡才可以隨意進出。特別的證卡一張要美金二萬元,除了我的家人可以免費送一張,其他人別想。我還和同學們保持聯絡,約同學來我家玩,並且免費送他們一人一張來回機票和十萬元美金。我還捐贈一百萬元美金給孤兒院、養老院,還要參與很多的公益活動來回饋社會。
如果我要完成二十年後的夢想,現在就必須努力用功的讀書,有了良好的基礎後才能賺更多錢,來救濟可憐貧困的人和孤兒院的孤兒,來完成我的夢想和理想囉, 範文四,
我常常在想,二十年後的我會變成什麼樣子呢,也許那時候的我是早婚,丈夫是NOKIA的老闆,我自己是位歌手,有兩個就讀國中的雙胞胎女兒,大女兒叫宜真,二女兒叫宜靜。家裡有三層樓高,有兩棟大別墅,還有三輛保時捷,養了兩隻活潑好動的黃金獵犬和一隻可愛的哈士奇,還有一隻像雪一樣潔白的白文鳥。
我每天都在趕通告,一天只睡了四個小時,我明天要去巨蛋開演唱會,所以必須睡飽七個小時,當然會有很多藝人、朋友、家人到現場為我加油,使我更有戰鬥力。我的丈夫是NOKIA的老闆,工作回來都很勞累,所以我都會買一些營養又好吃的食物給他,使他每天充滿朝氣與活力。我的一對女兒宜真和宜靜都很乖巧,兩個人的成績也很優秀,她們長得一模一樣,而且都很漂亮,我常會被她們耍得團團轉,
我們的別墅一棟在海邊,在那裡可以看海景、游泳、玩沙,另一棟別墅在陽明山上,冬天可以泡溫泉、爬山、看美麗的晚霞,我們家有很多隻狗,有二隻黃金獵犬,一隻公的,
一隻母的,還有一隻哈士奇的幼犬,牠的眼睛是水藍色,非常可愛,最後是白文鳥,因為我小時候養過鳥,所以長大也要持續下去,不過呢,我決定要再多養幾隻鳥,讓牠們增加一點安全感,免得牠們嚇得心臟病發作,
以上都是我的夢想,不知道能不能成真,也許可以看著流星一邊祈禱,或是生日的時候吹蠟燭許願。不過我相信,夢想是要用雙手去開拓實現,雖然二十年還很長,只要憑著意志力,努力不懈,沒有不可能的事。
作文四:《作文题目:二十年后的我》1000字
作文題目:「二十年後的我」
20年,是一段不短的時間。在這20年中,身高、外貌可能會轉變,甚至個性、想法也可能變得不一樣;而20年後,會身在哪裡,會正在作什麼事情,沒有人知道,沒有人能預料。所以,只能用夢想的方式,期盼20年後的我,有什麼樣的成就?
●寫作步驟
(一)認清題目:小朋友作文時,先要認清題目,了解題目字面的意思和其中所包含的意義以後,才能動筆寫作。比如作文題目是「最難忘的一天」,切不可看做「最難忘的一件事」來寫,因為前一個題目的重點是「一天」,後一道題目的重點是「一件事」,兩個題目所要表達的內容,各有不同。
(二)把握題旨:作文的內容,最重要的是把握題旨,作文把握題旨的要領,一定要想通整個題目的意義,在題目意義沒有想通以前,千萬不要下筆寫作,以免所寫的東西抓不到重點。作文題目想通以後,文章的條理才會清晰,才能把握題旨,根據重點來發揮。
(三)擬定大綱:作文時,要在腦海裡擬定大綱,然後依據大綱蒐集有關的材料,材料蒐集來以後,還要下一番剪裁、取捨的工夫,凡是跟題旨無關緊要的東西,應該忍痛割愛。
(四)佈局分段:依照大綱,材料決定取捨以後,應該注意佈局和分段,看看文章的前後是否呼應,內容有沒有矛盾的地方,條理是不是清楚,段落的畫分是不是恰當。如果有不理想的地方,要加以修改或補正。
(五)注意修辭:作文寫完以後,自己念一念,是不是順口,是不是有意思不夠明白的地方,有哪些詞句不妥,需要更換,有沒有錯別字需要改正,標點符號的使用是不是妥當。這些地方如果都沒有問題,所作的文章,才算是一篇好作文。
●寫作指南
1.我能做那些事情,或我喜歡做什麼事?
2.我會有那些改變,或是哪些有趣的事會發生
3.我有什麼希望和感想?
●寫作錦囊(夢想成語或名言)
1.有夢最美.築夢踏實...
2.機會是給準備好的人...
3.眼光放遠.就不怕眼前的困難...
4.為自己的夢想而去想.到自己想到的地方.
做自己想做的事.因為我門只有一次人生...
5.機會就像流水.像飄雲...
它不會為任何人停留...
就看你抓不抓的住它...
6.今天的進步來自於昨天的學習...
今天的學習將造就明天的進步...
7.若這是我的人生夢想之一...那麼就勇敢的踏出去...
好歹讓這夢想和我的人生有所交集...而不是失之交臂.扼腕嘆息...
8.人因夢想而偉大
9.夢想的實現 需要人生不斷的磨鍊
10.夢想的起飛 要靠人生過程來累積
●寫作大綱
第一段:
第二段:
第三段:
第四段:
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作文五:《高中作文题目:雨后,新的起点》2200字
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刚起床,就发现天空积压了一大片乌云,凉风,让人清醒。
又是重复的动作,可是天公作美,一阵阵的风不曾止歇,也开始习惯了。是否证明,我坚强了,
下午,四点钟大雨就滂沱而下,哨声后,我们四下逃窜,淋湿了衣服——可是毫无抱怨,雨,头一次让人感觉透彻的爽。
不再抵触于军训枯燥的动作,反而觉得,很有意思。
2010.8.27星期六阴
……
早上的汇操,我班得了第一名~早就预言,早就期许,捧回奖状,这三天的辛苦仿拂一扫而光~自豪充斥了整颗心~
未上高中前,就期待军训,可是军训中又感到累,最后习惯,干每一件事,我又何尝不是这样,总把过程想的太简单,而忽略了其中的艰辛。
住宿的四天,也曾躲在被窝里偷偷哭泣,第二天,又精神抖擞地迎接崭新的朝阳。每一次训练,都是一个起点,整齐一点,再整齐一点~没有最好,只有更好。
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忆及起初为进入海职高而抱怨自己的中考失利,晚会后才渐悟,这,是个追梦的地方,新的起点,同样能重新起跑~不再患得患失,不再一蹶不振,既然选择这里,何不发奋学习~
军训是一场考试——只有付出百倍的精力,投入其中,并且好好地答完这张试卷,你就能博得好分数。
职高生活也是一场考试——只有遵守校规,好好学习,才会被留在考场,反之,是被淘汰的厄运。
军训中,我们互开玩笑,互相帮助,席地而坐——也是一种享受,开始融入105班,“不以物喜,不以己悲”,而是为班自豪。
在雨中,我曾那么努力地奔跑。我在雨中哭,泪水融入雨中,它就消失了踪迹,可在我心里,有更宏大的泪水涌动。
时隔两个月,也是在雨中,我哭。两个月的浑浑噩噩,原本有些自暴自弃。可是这烈日,这汗水,这同学之间的关爱,又一次燃起了我的求学之心,不再埋怨中国的教育制度。
雨停了,唯我站在空旷的操场,碧蓝如洗的天空,青葱的草地,我的心,从未如此的空灵,望着高高矗立的教学楼,我发誓:
“这一次,我定要好好学习,为了自己。”
然后我看见,四周的小虫互相追逐,大片大片绿色植物的清香向我聚拢,这个校园,有那么悦耳的虫鸣。不再后悔-自责、与埋怨,我向着教学楼、向着东边,努力奔跑。
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一个作文题目的反思
第一次模拟考试的作文题目是“感谢”。一看题目,比较熟悉,内容也较浅近,值得感谢的自然不少,学生不愁写不出东西来。 考试时,不少学生提前半小时就答完了试卷,仿佛稳操胜券似的,三番五次扭头看墙上的石英钟,一副百无聊赖的神情。 每次阅卷往往满怀期待,总想不断看到新颖别致之作。可是,期望越高,失望越大。这一次也不例外,看到最后一篇,可心的作品没几篇。总的感觉是,平淡无奇。 首先,命题太俗,千人一面,难以让人一见倾心。从五班考场作文来看,近80%的学生“感谢”所熟悉的人。写谁,横线上就填谁,《感谢父母》的就30人,《感谢老师(恩)》的也20人。避熟就生,独辟蹊径,写人之所未写的较少,感谢“姐姐”“姨妈”“姥娘”的,有,人;写同学的有,人,如感谢“她们”“朋友的帮助”“同学们对我的关心”。更新颖的题目,有张富泽的《感谢警察》、弭兆聪的《感谢您,不知名的叔叔》、冯骁的《感谢那个陌生人》、赵煜的《感谢她给予我坚强的意志》、徐昊的《感谢储蓄罐》、魏伟的《感谢电脑》等。一看这些题目,让人耳目一新,真有“重水复疑无路,柳暗花明又一村”感觉,欣喜之情油然而生,很容易吸引读者的眼球。 命题不新,一方面是因为学生依赖性强,思维囿于定势,往往受作文提示的暗示性影响。如这次作文的提示是:“在我们成长过程中,所走过的每一步,都会得到别人的给予和馈赠,如来自父母的关爱,朋友的帮助,老师的教诲,甚至陌生人的温暖??在你这段人生旅程中,你最想感谢的是谁,”不难设想,绝大多数学生最先想到的首先是父母,其次是老师,再次是朋友。鉴于考试,时间紧迫,更出于稳妥起见,有现成的自然首选。至于其他值得感谢的人、事、物等等,目前是遥不可及;对于才思不很敏捷的考生来说,其思维的触角也很难伸向“远水”。 另一方面,审题、命题的专项训练较少,学生不知深浅,命题往往“随行就市”,缺乏创意。平时提倡“自拟题目”,所命题目也常常五花八门。但是,经过深思熟虑后高度概括出来的凝练题目不多,真正起到“眼睛”作用的“神来之笔”更是少之又少。即使每次有几个富有创意的题目,也很少及时表扬,当堂展示,许多创造性的火花,只是在个别学生的思维一隅闪烁了一下,如同彗星扫过一样,转瞬即逝??教学反思《一个作文题目的反思》
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图表题 书信题 对比观点选择题 格言题 ?.对比观点选择题:
1.有人认为……; 2.另外一些人认为……; 3.谈谈你的观点和看法。(最好写成4
段) 实例二 99年6月真题 Reading Selectively or Extensively? Outline: 1.有
人认为读书要有选择 2.有人认为应当博览群书 3.我的想法 Score: 8分
Some people think reading shall be chosen. Because some books are good to human beings and some books are harmful to people. Some people think that men should read books
widely. Because wide reading can help man get much knowledge. And man can use it to change the world. It is my point that reading must be selectively. Because reading is important to man. Some books can help man but some books can lead some people to crime. It can be seen in the newspapers and watched on TV. We can make full use of some good books and gain more useful knowledge. It can make our life more beautiful. We must give up those unhelpful books. They are not good to us. Reading them is wasting time and money. So reading selectively is an important part in reading. 失分原因:结构失调,表述方式单一 典型的对比观点选
择题的文章逻辑结构: (启)Paragraph ?: (1)引出将要评论的事物或者是
观点; (2)简明扼要地提出人们在这个问题上的两种不同看法。 Score: 14分
How should we read? Should we read selectively or extensively? Everyone has his own view.(启)
注:第一句提出问题,第二句提出两种见解 典型的对比观点选择题的文章逻辑结构:
(承)Paragraph ?: (1)提出一种观点或优点; (2)本段的支持性分论点;
(3)本段总结(可以省略)。 Some people think we should read selectively. They argue that with the development of modern science and technology, more and more books are published. It is impossible for us to read all the books. What’s more, there are many bad books that are poisonous
to our mind, and we shouldn’t read them. Since we can’t read all the books and we shouldn’t read bad books, we must read selectively.(承) 注:1.本段总分总结构 2. they argue that =
they think that 3. with the development of…… 随着……的发展 4. what’s more 递进
关系,moreover 5. bad = pornographic 色情的 & violent 暴力的 典型的对比观点选
择题的文章逻辑结
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社会热点话题
图表题
书信题
对比观点选择题
格言题
Ⅰ.对比观点选择题:
1.有人认为??;
2.另外一些人认为??;
3.谈谈你的观点和看法。(最好写成4段)
实例二 99年6月真题
Reading Selectively or Extensively?
Outline: 1.有人认为读书要有选择 2.有人认为应当博览群书 3.我的想法
Score: 8分
Some people think reading shall be chosen. Because some books are good to human beings and some books are harmful to people.
Some people think that men should read books widely. Because wide reading can help man get much knowledge. And man can use it to change the world.
It is my point that reading must be selectively. Because reading is important to man. Some books can help man but some books can lead some people to crime. It can be seen in the newspapers and watched on TV. We can make full use of some good books and gain more useful knowledge. It can make our life more beautiful. We must give up those unhelpful books. They are not good to us. Reading them is wasting time and money. So reading selectively is an important part in reading.
失分原因:结构失调,表述方式单一
典型的对比观点选择题的文章逻辑结构:
(启)Paragraph Ⅰ:
(1)引出将要评论的事物或者是观点;
(2)简明扼要地提出人们在这个问题上的两种不同看法。
Score: 14分
How should we read? Should we read selectively or extensively? Everyone has his own view.(启)
注:第一句提出问题,第二句提出两种见解
典型的对比观点选择题的文章逻辑结构:
(承)Paragraph Ⅱ:
(1)提出一种观点或优点;
(2)本段的支持性分论点;
(3)本段总结(可以省略)。
Some people think we should read selectively. They argue that with the development of modern science and technology, more and more books are published. It is impossible for us to read all the books. What's more, there are many bad books that are poisonous to our mind, and we shouldn't read them. Since we can't read all the books and we shouldn't read bad books, we must read selectively.(承)
注:1.本段总分总结构
2. they argue that = they think that
3. with the development of?? 随着??的发展
4. what's more 递进关系,moreover
5. bad = pornographic 色情的 & violent 暴力的
典型的对比观点选择题的文章逻辑结构:
(转)Paragraph Ⅲ:
(1)承上启下的过渡句;
(2)提出另一种观点或缺点;
(3)本段的支持性分论点;
(4)本段总(可以省略)。
But others may not agree, they emphasize that today's society is not what it was. If one man has many kinds of knowledge, he will have more chances to succeed. If a man knows much in one field but knows nothing in other fields, he may be useless. Since we must have many kinds of knowledge, we must read extensively.(转)
注:1. But 转折词(信号词)
2. they emphasize that = they think that
3. today's society is not what it was 现代社会今非昔比
4. 许多知识 a wide range of knowledge/ a large scope of knowledge/ much knowledge; 获取知识 acquire/ get knowledge
5. knows nothing→little;he may be useless→he may not be of great use to the society 后者比前者更委婉,尽量不要绝对化
典型的对比观点选择题的文章逻辑结构:
(合)Paragraph Ⅳ:(1)平衡两种看法; (2)给出自己的观点。
Who's right? I think both of them have something right. But I think we should read extensively first. We should read books in many fields, and read selectively in one field.(合)
Score: 11分
When it es to reading, some people think that reading selectively is a good way, but some other people do not agree with them, they think that reading extensively is better.
注:结构非常好,可以套用。
Those people, who think that reading selectively is better, believe that good books are as many as bad books. Those good books can give us pleasure and knowledge, while those bad books can only lead us to the wrong way. So, they suggest that we should only choose the good books to read and never touch the bad books.
注:1.
2. as many as bad books 改为 as many as bad ones
3. lead us to the wrong way 改为 lead sb. astray
4. they suggest that = they think that
5. touch 碰(闪光点词汇)
But, the other people, who hold that reading extensively is better, think that one kind of books can only give us one aspect of knowledge. Even the best book only contains one field of information. So, they can easily e to the conclusion that
注:1. hold
2. the best book 在西方国家是
3. to know more, to read more 错误,中式英语
To my point, we should choose good books to read and read good books as many as possible. By this way, we can increase the quality and quantity of reading.
范文 Is Television a Blessing or a Curse?
Now, it is generally accepted that television plays an important part in people's lives. But, there is an ongoing heated discussion as to whether television is a blessing or a curse.
注:it is generally accepted that 人们通常认为
As is often pointed out by some people, television keeps one better informed about current events, allows one to follow the latest developments in politics and science, and offers an endless series of programs which are both instructive and
stimulating.
注:1. As is often pointed out by some people = Some people think that
2.
However, other people insist that television is a curse rather than a blessing. They argue that it has brought about many serious problems. The major one is its effects on young people. They are now so used to getting their information, education and entertainment from television that their literacy as well as physical ability has been greatly weakened.
In summary, television has both advantages and disadvantages. Whatever effects it has, one thing is certain, television in itself is neither good nor bad. It is the use that determines its value to society.
范文 Traveling
People who like traveling have their reasons. They maintain that traveling can help them expand their scope of knowledge, especially geographical and historical learning. They go on to point out that touring will provide more chance for them to enjoy food and try on clothes that they otherwise cannot possibly have.
注:geographical and historical 押尾韵,如:押头韵 clean & clear
Those who dislike traveling have their reasons. They would argue that traveling means a considerable amount of money and energy. For example, traffic and acmodation require money and walking while seeing sights often tires you.
In practice, traveling does more good than harm. If your finance and health permit, you might as well do some traveling from time to time. It will at least enable you to get familiar with people and things that you will probably grow to like and love.
注:1. in practice = I
2. does more good than harm 好处比坏处多,其他表达方法:be superior to/ inferior to 比如:The advantages are superior to the disadvantages.
3. enable 使
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社会热点话题 图表题 书信题 对比观点选择题 格言题 ?。对比观点
选择题: 1.有人认为……; 2.另外一些人认为……; 3.谈谈你的观点和看法。(最
好写成4段) 实例二 99年6月真题 Reading Selectively or Extensively,
Outline: 1.有人认为读书要有选择 2.有人认为应当博览群书 3.我的想法 Score: 8分
Some people think reading shall be chosen. Because some books are good to human beings and some books are harmful to people. Some people think that men should read books widely. Because wide reading can help man get much knowledge. And man can use it to change the world. It is my point that reading must be selectively. Because reading is important to man. Some books can help man but some books can lead some people to crime. It can be seen in the newspapers and watched on TV. We can make full use of some good books and gain more useful knowledge. It can make our life more beautiful. We must give up those unhelpful books. They are not good to us. Reading them is wasting time and money. So reading selectively is an important part in reading. 失分原因:结构失调,表述方式单一 典型的对比观点选择题的文章逻辑结构: (启)
Paragraph ?: (1)引出将要评论的事物或者是观点; (2)简明扼要地提出人们
在这个问题上的两种不同看法。 Score: 14分 How should we read, Should we read
selectively or extensively, Everyone has his own view.(启) 注:第一句提出问题,第二
句提出两种见解 典型的对比观点选择题的文章逻辑结构: (承)Paragraph ?:
(1)提出一种观点或优点; (2)本段的支持性分论点; (3)本段总结(可以省
略)。 Some people think we should read selectively. They argue that with the development of modern science and technology, more and more books are published. It is impossible for us to read all the books. What’s more, there are many bad books that are poisonous to our mind, and
we we shouldn’t read them. Since we can’t read all the books and we shouldn’t read bad books,
must read selectively.(承) 注:1.本段总分总结构 2. they argue that = they think that
3. wi
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英语四级考试常考的几种作文题目
社会热点话题
图表题
书信题
对比观点选择题
格言题
?.对比观点选择题:
1.有人认为……;
2.另外一些人认为……;
3.谈谈你的观点和看法。(最好写成4段)
实例二 99年6月真题
Reading Selectively or Extensively?
Outline: 1.有人认为读书要有选择 2.有人认为应当博览群书 3.我的想法
Score: 8分
Some people think reading shall be chosen. Because some books are good to human beings and some books are harmful to people.
Some people think that men should read books widely. Because wide reading can help man get much knowledge. And man can use it to change the world.
It is my point that reading must be selectively. Because reading is important to man. Some books can help man but some books can lead some people to crime. It can be seen in the newspapers and watched on TV. We can make full use of some good books and gain more useful knowledge. It can make our life more beautiful. We must give up those unhelpful books. They are
not good to us. Reading them is wasting time and money. So reading selectively is an import
ant part in reading.
失分原因:结构失调,表述方式单一
典型的对比观点选择题的文章逻辑结构:
(启)Paragraph ?:
1)引出将要评论的事物或者是观点; (
(2)简明扼要地提出人们在这个问题上的两种不同看法。
Score: 14分
How should we read? Should we read selectively or extensively? Everyone has his own view.(启)
注:第一句提出问题,第二句提出两种见解
典型的对比观点选择题的文章逻辑结构:
(承)Paragraph ?:
(1)提出一种观点或优点;
(2)本段的支持性分论点;
(3)本段总结(可以省略)。
Some people think we should read selectively. They argue that with the development of modern science and technology, more and more books are published. It is impossible for us to read all the books. What's more, there are many bad books that are poisonous to our mind, and
we shouldn't read them. Since we can't read all the books and we shouldn't read bad books, we must read selectively.(承)
注:1.本段总分总结构
2. they argue that = they think that
3. with the development of…… 随着……的发展
4. what's more 递进关系,moreover
5. bad = pornographic 色情的 & violent 暴力的
典型的对比观点选择题的文章逻辑结构:
(转)Paragraph ?:
(1)承上启下的过渡句;
(2)提出另一种观点或缺点;
3)本段的支持性分论点; (
(4)本段总(可以省略)。
But others may not agree, they emphasize that today's society is not what it was. If one man has many kinds of knowledge, he will have more chances to succeed. If a man knows much in one field but knows nothing in other fields, he may be useless. Since we must have many kinds of knowledge, we must read extensively.(转)
注:1. But 转折词(信号词)
2. they emphasize that = they think that
3. today's society is not what it was 现代社会今非昔比
4. 许多知识 a wide range of knowledge/ a large scope of knowledge/ much knowledge; 获取知识
acquire/ get knowledge
5. knows nothing?little;he may be useless?he may not be of great use to the society 后者比前者
更委婉,尽量不要绝对化
典型的对比观点选择题的文章逻辑结构:
(合)Paragraph ?:(1)平衡两种看法; (2)给出自己的观点。
Who's right? I think both of them have something right. But I think we should read extensively first.
We should read books in many fields, and read selectively in one field.(合)
Score: 11分
When it es to reading, some people think that reading selectively is a good way, but some other
people do not agree with them, they think that reading extensively is better.
注:结构非常好,可以套用。
Those people, who think that reading selectively is better, believe that good books are as many as bad books. Those good books can give us pleasure and knowledge, while those bad books can only lead us to the wrong way. So, they suggest that we should only choose the good books to read and never touch the bad books.
注:1. "people, who……,"应去掉逗号,改为限定性定语从句。
2. as many as bad books 改为 as many as bad ones
3. lead us to the wrong way 改为 lead sb. astray
4. they suggest that = they think that
5. touch 碰(闪光点词汇)
But, the other people, who hold that reading extensively is better, think that one kind of books can only give us one aspect of knowledge. Even the best book only contains one field of information. So, they can easily e to the conclusion that "to know more, to read more". So they believe that reading extensively is better.
注:1. hold "认为"同样表示"think"的词还有argue, emphasize, believe, suggest, claim, insist, maintain,
agree, hold
2. the best book 在西方国家是"圣经"的意思
3. to know more, to read more 错误,中式英语
To my point, we should choose good books to read and read good books as many as possible. By this way, we can increase the quality and quantity of reading.
范文 Is Television a Blessing or a Curse?
Now, it is generally accepted that television plays an important part in people's lives. But, there is an ongoing heated discussion as to whether television is a blessing or a curse.
注:it is generally accepted that 人们通常认为
As is often pointed out by some people, television keeps one better informed about current events, allows one to follow the latest developments in politics and science, and offers an endless series of programs which are both instructive and stimulating.
注:1. As is often pointed out by some people = Some people think that
2."使……"不用make,而用keep, allow, offer
However, other people insist that television is a curse rather than a blessing. They argue that it has brought about many serious problems. The major one is its effects on young people. They are now so used to getting their information, education and entertainment from television that their literacy as well as physical ability has been greatly weakened.
In summary, television has both advantages and disadvantages. Whatever effects it has, one thing is certain, television in itself is neither good nor bad. It is the use that determines its value to society.
范文 Traveling
People who like traveling have their reasons. They maintain that traveling can help them expand their scope of knowledge, especially geographical and historical learning. They go on to point out that touring will provide more chance for them to enjoy food and try on clothes that they otherwise cannot possibly have.
注:geographical and historical 押尾韵,如:押头韵 clean & clear
Those who dislike traveling have their reasons. They would argue that traveling means a considerable amount of money and energy. For example, traffic and acmodation require money and walking while seeing sights often tires you.
In practice, traveling does more good than harm. If your finance and health permit, you might as well do some traveling from time to time. It will at least enable you to get familiar with people and things that you will probably grow to like and love.
注:1. in practice = I
2. does more good than harm 好处比坏处多,其他表达方法:be superior to/ inferior to 比如:The
advantages are superior to the disadvantages.
3. enable 使