my day
I always get up early in the morning.I usually have my breakfast at 6:30.I'm never late for school,I have lunch at 12:00,I have dinner with my family.After I finish my homework I often play some games with my family.Only then will I to relax.Although this is a busy day, but I feel full and satisfied.
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我的一天
我总是早上早起。我通常在6点半吃早餐。我上学从不迟到,我在12点吃午饭,我和我的家人共进晚餐。我做完作业后我经常玩一些游戏与我的家人。我才会放松。 虽然这是一个忙碌的一天,但我感到完全满意
小学英语六年级上册各单元作文范例及点评
PEP小学英语六年级上册各单元作文范例及点评
Li Ying ’S Hobby
Li Ying likes English very much. She works hard at it. She reads English every morning. She likes speaking English. She often listens to the radio. She watches TV only on Saturday evening.
Does she like dancing? No, she doesn’t. But she likes drawing and singing. Her parents love her. And all the teachers and her friends like her, too. She says her hobbies make her happy.
【要领点评】
这一篇写爱好的文章,小作者的写作思路很值得我们学习,他没有具体写到刘莹的某一种爱好,而是从学习到课余的多种爱好入手,对刘莹的各种爱好进行了粗线条地勾画.从“爱好”这个角度来看刘莹的话,我们会觉得这个形象很饱满。
小朋友们写这种“叙事写人”作文时,可以从两个角度下手:一是具体地描绘;二是和上面小朋友一样,粗线条地勾画,二者各有所长,另处在行文中使用一些问句,使用一些转述的话,可以使作文更有灵气,避免了平铺直叙的缺点。比如上文的“Does she like dancing? No, she doesn’t.”和“she says her hobbies make her happy.”就是十分不错的句子,使读者眼前为之一亮。
Don’t be against the traffic rules
I go to school from Monday to Friday .I go to school by bike at 7:30 in the morning .I must cross two busy roads .If the traffic light is red or yellow,I know I can’t cross the road ,so I wait.
If the light turns green, I know it means “Go”, and then I walk across the road .I always ride on the right side of the road .I am never against the traffic rules.
【要领点评】
这篇作文的题目是“不要违反交通规则”,小作者没有说一些空话,而是从自己的经历写起,叙述自己以什么方式去上学,在上学的路上是怎么做的,很形象。
小朋友们在作文时注意不要图大,那样很容易使文章显得空洞,而要写自己身边熟悉的事情。要注意行文中字母的大小写、句子的标点符号等。
I Love My Family
Here is a photo lf my family. These are four people in my family. They are my father, my mother, my brother and I.
My father is a doctor. He works in a hospital far away. He goes to work by subway. My mother is a teacher. She works in a school near my home. She goes to work by bike. After work, they like reading books. Who is the tall boy? He is my brother. He is five years older than me. He is a singer. He’s now in Beijing. He goes there by plane.
I love my family.
【要领点评】
一个平凡的题材,一篇生动的作文。这样的命题,我们可能面对几次,甚至几十次了。但这位小朋友的笔端很是灵巧,了了数言,让一个幸福的家庭跃然纸上,很值得我们去思考,我们能做到吗?
小朋友的这篇作文除了语言优美之外,在结构上也有闪光之处。先总说,将自己的家人逐个介绍一遍,后分说,把家人的工作、上班方式,爱好一一细说。最后以一句话进行概括,起到点题的作用。我们在写类似的作文的时候是不是也可以借鉴呢?
How to get to the science museum
We are going to the science museum tomorrow. There is an old thing show in the Museum. Do you know how we can get to the science museum?
The science museum is next to the People’s Park. It’s isn’t far from our school. So we can go there on foot .Walk straight to the west from our school, next turn left at the post office and walk for about 5 minutes, then turn right at traffic lights. You can find the People’s Park on the right . Walk straight, and you’ll see the science museum.
【要领点评】
这篇作文的题目是“怎样去科学博物馆”。怎样才算是一篇好作文呢?通过你的叙述,能让别人很容易找到博物馆,这应是最基本的要求。小作者在文中告诉我们什么呢?首先他写了去博物馆的位置,最后浓墨重彩,指明从学校去博物馆的具体路线,这条路线够清晰吧!
小朋友们在写这类作文的时候,总有些无从下手的感觉,不知从何说起。其实介绍路线,无非就是告诉他人某段路的起点和终点,还有就是如何从起点走到终点。要给他人说清楚,你自己首先得清楚,然后再通过自己的叙述,将路线清清楚楚得呈现出来。一定要注意行文中一些关键的地方,如在哪儿转弯,向哪儿转,经过哪些重要的交通标志或显眼的标志建筑等。这样,你就能说清,别人也能弄明白。
Planting Trees
It’s spring. It’s time to plant trees.
I want to plant a tree in our garden. Dad and Mum are very happy. They like green. Dad helps me plant the tree. First, we dig the soil. Then I put a little tree into the soil. Next I water it. I am so excited and I wait for the tree to grow. Two weeks later, my tree has some little leaves. I water it every day. Now it has lots of leaves. It grows fast.
We should plant more trees. They make our world beautiful.
【要领点评】
小作者写了一次植树的经历,但他并没有单纯拘泥于植树的过程。既有过程,也有感觉,能使文章打动读者,给人以启发。作文的最后一段就非常好,两句话胜似千言万语。我们可以学习一下这种写法。
既描述过程,又适时提自己的看法或想法的写法,在作文中叫做“夹叙夹议”,描述过程为了提出一种思想服务,提出看法或想法使原本平实的描述有了意义。我们在以后的写作中也可以试一试。
Let’s have a nice day
It’s Sunday tomorrow .I’m going to the bookstore with my friends tomorrow morning .We are going to look for some good books .We all like reading books .We are going to eat our lunch at the restaurant. I like chicken, beef and vegetables .After lunch, we are going to the Summer Palace by bus. We are going to play near the Kunming Lake. Maybe we are going to row a boat on the lake .Wow, that will be relaxing. We are coming back at 5pm.
【要领点评】
怎样才称得上是“美好的一天”?有两点不能忘记,一是安排得充实,二是安排得有意义。这两点小作者无疑都想到了,上午去书店看书买书,中午在饭店吃饭,下午去颐和园玩耍、划船,丰富多彩!文章以时间为线索,叙述清楚,文笔也很优美。
小朋友们在写这种叙事的文章时,要尽量给读者交代好时间、地点、人物和活动等,使文章有血有肉。要看好是写过去发生的事情,还是现在正在做的事情,或计划、打算要做的事情,以选择适当的句型。如果是写将来的事情,那么就要注意在表述时多用“be going to+动词原形”这种句型。还有一点也很重要,那就是故事的线索要交代好,让读者在阅读时对整个过程一目了然。
五年级上册英语作文
My roomMy room is always clean and tidy. It isn't very big but I like it very much. There is a bed in it. Beside the bed, there is a desk and a chai. I always study and surf the internet there. There is a lamp, a computer and some books on the desk. There is a bookshelf with lots of books between the desk and the bed. There is a picture of film star on the wall.My favourite seasonWinter is my favourite season because I can skate and ski in winter. Besides, when is snows, the scenery is very beautiful and I can play with the snow. I can also make a snowman and have a snow fight with my friends. What's more, I always have a long winter holiday and I can spend a happy Spring Festival in winter. So although it is cold in winter, I like winter best.
五年级上册英语作文?
They said she will also teach me next year. She is really a good teacher. There are six people in my family. I have two older sisters and one younger brother. My father is tall. She is very beautiful and she has long hair. She also has glowing eyes and a kind heart. She always teaches me how to get along with people, so I learn from her how to live a better life and know what'. I like math and Chinese because my Chinese and math are very good. I want to be a doctor in the future because i want to help sick people. I want to go to New Zealand because the air is very fresh and there are many cute calves there! I will go there by airplane. I am in the sixth grade of Chung-chen Elementary School. I study Chinese. I am a student;s wrong and right. I like to go to school because I have many friends at school. My mother is good. My grandmother is old. She likes to water flowers. She has taught Chinese at my junior high school for more than one yearSelf Introduction(自我介绍)About Me(关于我My name is Sandy. I'.题目:My Favorite Teacher(我最喜爱的老师)Among all my teachers, Miss Ju Mei-yian is my favorite;m 12 years old. My birthday is on April 7, science, math, social science, etc
小学五年级英语作文
I love my bedroom I have a bedroom .It is not big , but it is nice .There is a bed in my bedroom . A yellow dog is on the bed .Every night,I sleep with it . Next to the bed, there is a desk. A bear lamp is on the desk .I like the bear lamp. It's cute. I like to do homework under the lamp every evening. I have a new computer in my bedroom .It is my best friend . Because I study at it, play at it . There are also several beautiful pictures on the wall.I like my bedroom. Do you like it?Today is Children's Day) Today is Children's Day.My father takes me to the zoo.There are many kinds of animals,the tigers, the pandas,the lions, the elephants,the giraffes and the bears. They are different from each other ,some are shy, some are beautiful, some are interesting , some are friendly, some are so cute. But i think these animals are unhappy, they should live in the forest,because the life in the zoo are different from that in the forest.I had a long holiday for May Day .I was very happy, because I could do anything I want. During those days. I enjoyed myself. At first, I went to the zoo to see lovely animals. And then. I went to the sea world to see beautiful fishes. That was very interesting. Secondly I went for a trip with my parents, we went to Linxia to visit my grandparents and to eat minority's foods. We rode horse on the grassland and had a fun with local children. It was very exciting. After that, I held a party and invited some of my best friends to visit my house. My mother bought a lot of tasty foods for us, we also took many photos on the party.Snow It was snow just now, there are lots of snow in the sky. The rivers are stopping flowing. The ground is covered with a layer of snow. The snow looks like smoke, it's white. It likes a piece of paper. The snow fall from the sky. It kisses the ground. How white the snow is! How beautiful the snow is! I like snow! I like winter!
五年级上册英语小作文
展开全部 my dayI always get up early in the morning.I usually have my breakfast at 6:30.I'm never late for school,I have lunch at 12:00,I have dinner with my family.After I finish my homework I often play some games with my family.Only then will I to relax.Although this is a busy day, but I feel full and satisfied.翻译我的一天我总是早上早起。
我通常在6点半吃早餐。
我上学从不迟到,我在12点吃午饭,我和我的家人共进晚餐。
我做完作业后我经常玩一些游戏与我的家人。
我才会放松。
虽然这是一个忙碌的一天,但我感到完全满意...
五年级上册英语作文要简单点的少点要五篇我们老师给留的寒假作业急...
MY GOOD LifeMy Good Life In my good life, I want to eat some more food. I want to go to the moon. On the moon, we will have supper. From the moon, we will go to the sun by a rocket. In the world I want to go to my grandma and grandpa's house. I play with my brother. My aunt and uncle will go around the world. I want to see at the wide grassland. I want to go to the sea to see the dolphins and the crabapples. And I like seafood very much, too. MY pet have a new pet.It is a dog.It is Ming Ming.It is one year old.It is very cute.It has short fut.It has big eyes and long ears.It's very small.It has a short tail.It likes eating bone.It likes running.Sometimes It likes playing boat.I like my pet very much. my dayI have a busy day . It's Saturday . On Saturday , I eat breakfast at six o'clock.For breakfast , I have milk , bread , eggs and apples. I go to school at seven o'clock .I'm student.I'm in the middle school . I learn English very well. I'm a class monitor.All teacher very like me,because I study very well.But I only 12 years old . I eat lunch at 12 o'clock . I do my homework from one o'clock to four o'clock .I eat dinner at six o'clock . After dinner , I watch TV from 6:30 to 8:30.I go to bed at nine o'clock.This is my busy day. my selfHello ! My name is qu xue wen ,I'm a girl. I like eat apples bananas and Oranges. I like play computer games.I'm tall but me is very fat.I have very big eyes,A small nose and a small mouth.My math is very good.I'm 13 years old.I like read books.I ride my bike go to school. This is me.Do you like me? my teacherI have a new teacher.She is an English teacher,her name is Miss He.She is young and beautiful.She is strict but kind.She often goes to work by motor bike.But sometimes she likes piaying sports.Usualli she likes reading book.I like my English teacher very much.What about you?
五年级英语作文
there are two classroom buildings and a school library.Because I'm very happy to live with my parents together:30 p.m. every day, many students play football, basketball and some of them play tennis. In the library there are thousands and thousands of books. After class you can borrow the books you want and also you can read them in the reading room at any time. Beside our classroom, there is a big playground,she is thirty-seven. At about 4. All the playground is alive. Our school is a model school in Jiangsu!我是初中生哩~~My Good Friend My name is ZhangYing.I have a good friend . Her name is Liu Yun.His name is Jacky. I like my school very much!My mother is very kind and nice. 长了点~~慢慢抄啦~. There are forty-three classes in it. When you come to our school.He is thirty-eight.He likes playing basketball.What's my mother jop,My father go to play basketball?Is she a teacher?Yes,you're right.My mother is always laborious work.I love my parents! On Staurday and Sunday,I often go to the library and play the piano. I love my family.Sometimes,we watch TV and listen to music at home. She lives in China . Her mather is a singer. She likes swimming. Her father is a TV reporter. He likes listening to mnsic. Liu Yun likes piaying the violin and riding her bike. Every morning , she goes to school on foot. Every evening, you can see the modern teaching building. It is very big and beautiful!(*^__^*)I love my family,because I have a happy family. My father is an English teacher. Our teachers work and do practice in it. Behind the buildingMy School 英语作文 My school is at Haimen Town
小学五年级英语作文60词 带翻译 12篇
reading is very important to everyone. I know this pretty well. And I take actions, too. The books I love is something a little bit wise and interesting. Let's read the following one together. “There are two rabbits in the wood. They are good friends. They go to find food together. They go to school together. They do all the things together. But there is only one thing they do it by oneself. What is it? Do you know? They don't eat together. Because one of the rabbits is a toy rabbit. ” do you like this story? Show me one which you love very much. Thanks. 阅读对每个人都是非常重要的。
这点我知道的很清楚。
我也付诸行动了。
我喜欢的书是有点小睿智和有趣的。
我们一起读读下面的这个故事吧。
“在森林里有两只小兔子。
他们是好朋友。
他们一起去找食物。
他们一起去上学。
他们一起做所有的事情。
但是只有一件事情他们是独自做的。
它是什么?你知道吗?他们不一起吃饭。
因为其中的一只小兔子是玩具兔子。
”你喜欢这个故事吗?给我展示一个你喜欢的故事吧。
谢谢。
What the things we can do much more in vacation? of course, that is watching TV. and this day-offs the programs we watch the most are the sports matches. i like ping-pong most. which one do you love best? for the time with the games, my homework is far away from the real end. but you know, it's worth! now i'm making the efforts. how about you? do you have the same problem with me? aha~(watch TV)什么事情在假期里我们能(光明正大的)做的更多?当然,是看电视。
今年的假期我们看的最多的节目肯定是体育比赛。
我最喜欢乒乓球。
你最喜欢什么?和比赛一起度过的时光,我的作业明显的,离它结束的日子还很远。
但是你知道的,它值得!现在我不就正在努力着嘛。
你呢?你有跟我同样的烦扰吗?哈哈。
求一篇五年级上水平的英语作文
My School 英语作文 My school is at Haimen Town. It is very big and beautiful. There are forty-three classes in it. When you come to our school, you can see the modern teaching building. Our teachers work and do practice in it. Behind the building, there are two classroom buildings and a school library. In the library there are thousands and thousands of books. After class you can borrow the books you want and also you can read them in the reading room at any time. Beside our classroom, there is a big playground. At about 4:30 p.m. every day, many students play football, basketball and some of them play tennis. All the playground is alive. Our school is a model school in Jiangsu. I like my school very much. 长了点~~慢慢抄啦~!(*^__^*) I love my family,because I have a happy family. My father is an English teacher.His name is Jacky.He is thirty-eight.He likes playing basketball.What's my mother jop?Is she a teacher?Yes,you're right!My mother is very kind and nice,she is thirty-seven.My mother is always laborious work.I love my parents! On Staurday and Sunday,I often go to the library and play the piano,My father go to play basketball.Sometimes,we watch TV and listen to music at home. I love my family.Because I'm very happy to live with my parents together! 我是初中生哩~~ My Good Friend My name is ZhangYing.I have a good friend . Her name is Liu Yun. She lives in China . Her mather is a singer. She likes swimming. Her father is a TV reporter. He likes listening to mnsic. Liu Yun likes piaying the violin and riding her bike. Every morning , she goes to school on foot. Every evening, she reads newspaper ai home. Then she goes to bed at nine. This is my good friend Liu Yun.
五年级的英语作文题
My family winter holiday is not so colorful, but it is warmful.In winter holiday, all the members got together. We chatted, with grandma and mom busy in the kitchen. When it comes to lunch, we were very happy at table.I go to Hongkong this winter holiday, the scerery of there is very beatuiful, anywhere is brimming with New Year's air. The Disneyland was certainly I most likes, the cartoon of there is acted by really person, it's very loveliness! The Tedbud Square of Hongkong is a luminescent spot, although it is a quite small square, it is very characteristic. This winter holiday I have been is very happy! Although it's winter, I can feel the sense the warmth everywhere!
五年级英语作文
Football is my favorite sport. Every time I play football with my classmates in the playground, we are very excited. During this summer vacation, I usually play football at four o'clock in the afternoon. I usually play it with Xia Haoran. He is one of my good friends. I haven't got a football. But Xia Haoran has a good one. He always plays with me and we are happy. I watched the FIFA World Cup 2006 on TV in this summer vacation. My father and my mother are all football fans. They made me into a little fan. I like the German football team, but they didn't win the champion in the end, and I was very disappointed. I love this game, and I hope that I can be a football star in my school
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