Hard workis more important, if you have not acquired the hard work, your talent will not get raise, but will be devoid of silence. Edison said, "Success is 1% inspiration and 99% perspiration", which shows the importance of the day after tomorrow. Also be said that God rewards the diligent.
Without a doubt, hard work is a much better predictor of success than natural ability. In my experience, I have seen this at work in sports, school, and work.
Many athletes have a natural ability to run the fastest mile or kick the ball the most accurately. Unless they work hard though, they will not be stars. They need to train daily, eat properly, live correctly. It takes hard work to be Number One.
At school, I have seen many very bright students do poorly on exams. They count on their intelligence to get them through. However, unless they do their homework every day, participate in class discussions, and study for exams, they will be the bottoms of the class.
Many salespeople can talk with anyone and convince him or her to buy something. They have a natural ability to sell. They must however apply some hard work to this skill. They must learn a lot about their
customers, about the product they are selling, and about the market, they must put some effort into the paper work that goes along with the sale. If they don’t follow through, the sale will not be made.
Whatever the area, whether on the playing field, at school, or on the sales floor, a person must not rely on his natural ability along if he or she wants to succeed. They must work hard to be a success.
10大技巧提升你的英语作文水平!
我们都知道,在高考的英语试卷中,作文占25分,相较于语文作文不低于800字,还要文笔流畅语句优美情感真实等一系列的要求,英语作文真的就简单得多,今天,优思1对1就为大家分析,英语作文的高分都是如何得来的!
首先,我们来看看,英语老师在阅卷的时候,所关注的点可以分为4大部分:内容7分,结构6分,词句6分,卷面6分。
1、内容分:7分
也就是我们常说的贴合主题,没有跑题,想要拿到这部分的内容,那么下笔之前就要仔细审题,不要漏掉题目中所给的信息,并且写好之后要检查再检查。
2、结构分:6分
这部分主要考量学生的逻辑能力,还有就是连词的使用,不管是承上启下,还是转折的连词,其实我们在背作文的时候,都很熟悉了,所以这部分的6分,其实也不难。
3、词句分:6分
这部分是整个作文的难点,也是决定你是优秀还是一般的重要分水岭,考察的是学生的基本功,所以,要拿到这部分的分,全靠平时的积累,有时候老师会根据你句子的数量来 给分的,虽然满分很难得到,但是2-4分还是可以的。
4、卷面分:6分
不管是英语还是语文,字迹工整美观都是老师所喜欢的,如果在这里被扣分了,得用好几个准确的单词和高级语法才能换回来。真的是很不划算的。所以,再规划整个考试的时间的时候,记得空出足够的时间来打好草稿。
分析了整个作文的得分点和扣分点,我们再来看看,哪些技巧可以帮助我们提高英语作文的分数:
技巧1、三段论
现在的英语作文大部分都是三段论。开头简单几句话引出主题、中间一段是正文,篇幅一般最长、最后写一段总结。结尾或是希望建议被采纳、希望尽早收到回复、或是衷心祝愿等等。写得多了之后,发现英语作文很好写,就把事情表达清楚,完成给你的任务,三段论的形式,不难的。
技巧2、审题
许多学生不注重作文审题,尤其是英语。认为没有必要,耽误时间。但是,记住,磨刀不误砍柴工,审好题才会下笔自在。审题怎么审?
u 看人称,是第一人称写作,还是第二、第三人称
u 看时态,过去时、现在时、将来时?
u 看身份,如果是书信,要称呼对方什么,用什么口吻
u 看主题,是书信、是申请、是道歉、还是建议?
技巧3、高级句型、高级词汇
作文的亮点之一,基于平时的多积累,会为你的文章增彩。而且评分标准上明确,可以有为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇而致的错误出现。
技巧4、句式多变
试想一下,如果考试那么多卷子里都是清一色的主语“I"都以“Ithink”开头,那阅卷人岂不是乏味至极,那他怎么会给你高分?所以,句式多变能使得文章富于变化,错落有致,吸引阅卷老师。多变主要是长短句结合、主被动结合、简单复合句结合,穿插着可以用些否定句。
技巧5:运用非谓语
非谓语动词包括动词不定式、动词-ing、动词过去分词等几种形式。高考作文非谓语动词的运用使得语言表达更地道精炼,加分不少。
技巧6:使用短语
固定短语的使用同样会使文章更地道,而且表达更流畅,让阅卷老师读起来朗朗上口,很喜欢。
技巧7:衔接自然
怎样衔接自然?我们需要学会恰当的使用过渡词语。就像语文中讲究起承转合一样。
技巧8:书写工整
有的省市直接把书写是否工整,卷面是否清晰好看列入评分标准中。而且即使评分标准中没有这一项,书写工整,卷面整洁的作文总是会给阅卷者良好的第一印象,在此基础上,以一颗愉悦的心审读你的文章,又有亮点出现,想不给高分都难。
技巧9:避免低级错误
尤其怕的是开头来一句错的“as we known "不管你后面写的多好,阅卷老师已经把你定格为不通语法的学生了,想得高分,难啊!
技巧10:内容充实具体不跑题
如果是给内容的作文,一定要把要求的内容写全。不能光用些套句,没有自己区别与别人的思想(这是写作更高的要求),做到内容具体不空洞。不能偏离主题。
以上内容如果你能够掌握,那么,想不拿高分都难。
小、初、高在线辅导,就选优思在线1对1。
英语作文,决定你高度的不是你的天赋,而是你的态度
展开全部I sing when I am free,especially when I am alone.That way my voicebecomes beautiful little by little.During the holidays,the villagers often ask me to sing for them.They enjoy my songs very much.I am very happy because I can do something for others.We are ordinary men,but we have genius more or less,We must use it to do something for the people.If everyone can use his genius to do something for others,I believe that the world will be more beautiful....
急求~4篇英语作文
您好,希望可以帮您:暑假旅游见闻LastSunday,I went to guangzhou to visit my uncle and aunt.We had a good time .The first day,we got to the airport of Zhengzhou and flew to guangzhou.I sat down the chair which was near window.Then it was dark.We found hotel to rest. The second day,we visited my uncle 、aunt and zhu jiang.The scene of zhu jiang is very beautiful.We all love there.The third day,we went to shenzhen by power car. We visited The window of the world.there are many interesting places of different countries.we are happy in it.finally,we went shopping.my mum bought four bags.mysister bought a trolley case.I bought nothing because they not fit in me.this travel tell me:the world is very big!I should thank my grand parents for giving me this time to go to guangzhou,thank you very much!星期天,我去广州去拜访我的叔叔和婶婶。
我们玩的很开心。
第一天,我们抵达机场飞往郑州、广周。
我坐在靠窗边的椅子上,。
然后它是黑暗的。
我们发现酒店休息。
第二天,我们参观了我的叔叔、婶婶和朱江中。
现场的朱江非常漂亮。
我们都有一种爱。
第三天,我们去深圳由电力车。
我们参观了世界之窗。
有许多有趣的地方不同的国家。
我们很高兴。
最后,我们去买东西了。
我妈买了四包。
姐姐买了一个手推车案件。
我什么也没买,因为他们不适合我。
这次旅行告诉我:世界是非常大!我要感谢我的父母给了我这个时间去广州,非常感谢!暑假学习生活In the morning, it is very fine! Then I climb the mountain with family, the air on the mountain is very fresh, the flowers plants and trees on the mountain all seem extremely beautiful. In the afternoon, I go to friend's home to play, the friend entertains me warmly, show me a lot of books of his , has listened to his CD for me , then also ask me to eat a sumptuous dinner. Coming back home in the evening, family and I sat and watched TV together, we are returning and eating the fruit while chatting, the whole family is happy and harmonious! 早上,天气非常好!于是我和家人一起去登山,山上的空气非常清新,山上的花草树木都显得格外美丽。
下午,我去了朋友家玩,朋友热情地招待我,给我看了他的很多书,给我听了他的CD,然后还请我吃了一顿丰盛的晚餐。
晚上回到家,我与家人坐在一起看电视,我们还一边聊天一边吃着水果,全家其乐融!对中学生玩电脑的看法I like playing Games on the internet.Playing Games on the internet can help people relax themselves from all the world as many as they can .also,it can save people's time and money.And it can pratice people's skill of competing something..But it also has its disadvantages.when people sit in the front of the computer ,they can not help to opening their QQ.some even chat many hours on the internet.what is more,friends on the internet often like to chet and bring unhealthy news to you.and it can hanve an effect on your study and work.In my opinion ,we must find out a balance between playing games and studying,if we know this,our life would be very wonderful and valueable.我爱玩游戏在互联网上。
玩游戏,互联网可以帮助人们放松自己从全世界许多。
同时,它可以节省他们的时间和金钱。
并且可以实践人民技能竞争的东西…但它也有它的劣势。
当人们坐在电脑前,他们不能帮忙打开自己的QQ。
有些人甚至很多时间上网聊天。
更重要的是,朋友在互联网上常常喜欢你,使不健康的消息给你。
并且可以影响你引以为荣学习和工作。
在我看来,我们必须找到一个平衡和学习玩游戏,如果我们知道这一点,我们的生活就会非常美妙和珍贵。
怎样学好英语的建议Learning English takes time so if we want to learn it well, we should spend much time practicing using English every day. Besides, we should listen to the teacher and take notes carefully in class. Go over what is learnt regularly and finish doing our homework carefully. If we have time,we'd better isten to English radio programmes, read English stories and newspapers, watch English films and TV programmes ,keep a diary in English . If we make mistakes, correct them at once and try not to make the same mistakes. What's more, we should look up new words in the dictionary before class and prepare each lesson carefully before class. I believe if we work hard and have good ways of learning English, we will learn English well.学习英语需要时间,所以如果我们想学得很好,我们要用很多时间练习使用英语每一天。
除此之外,我们应该听老师讲课,认真记笔记的教室里上课。
定期复习好并完成是学会做作业,小心。
如果我们有时间,我们最好isten英语广播节目,读一些英语故事和报纸,看英文电影和电视节目,用英语记日记。
如果我们犯错误,改正一下,不要再犯同样的错误。
更重要的是,我们应该查找新单词在字典里,每节课上课前准备前仔细班。
我相信如果我们努力工作,...
求一篇关于交流技能的英语作文o(∩
It goes without saying that English plays an important role in our modern society. English is an international language. Wherever you go, you can hear English spoken by many people. From this point of view, it is true that English is important to our daily life. Learning English is like learning to swim or learning to play ball. Our primary trouble is that we have tackled the study of language from the wrong end. We are like the man who thinks he can learn to swim only by reading books about swimming. In actuality, we learn by doing. The grammatical rules are valuable as we plunge into the language and need some assistance. In the same way, advanced instructions about swimming are helpful as we learn something from actual experience in the water. But reading books never makes a swimmer and learning rules never makes a practical linguist. The regular procedure in learning English involves listening first, to be followed by speaking. Then comes reading, and finally the writing of the language. The way you learn English is much the same as the way you learned your own language. First of all you must listen and then repeat and repeat until you can use the language easily. In other words, you have to build up language habits in English just as you build up English habits in your own language. To sum up, we must bear in mind that nobody can learn to swim for you. Nobody can learn to play ball for you. Nobody can learn English for you. It's up to you. You must learn for yourself and you will learn if you really want to and are willing to practice.
如何写好英语作文
写作是本人的老本行,高中一般都是21-23这个级别,大学英语作文被老师在班上推介为范文!!对于作文,我说的最多的就是:不走寻常路!你不要以为在网上下载那些所谓的优秀作文,拿来背背,你就成为高手了,其实大错特错!因为我看了之后也觉得一般,甚至有些拙劣,哗众取宠的味道,比如有的所谓优秀作文竟然还用什么be good at ,importance,very much,depend on,in my opinion ,completely 这样低等的写作词汇,说它低等,那是因为这些词汇已经广为人知,阅卷老师已经看的麻木不仁了!要写出高人一等的作文,我觉得并不难,只要你有一定的语法基础和一定量的写作词汇(越高级越好),写作句型,就足可以应对常规的高考,四六级考试……(我记得高中25分满分的作文我可以保持在21-23这个级别,四六级的作文都是110多分)首先是语法,在你的语法达到一定层次之后,你就可以追求更多的变化了,比如,用虚拟语气句型it is high time that we……代替常用的it is necessary that we should……,又如用倒装句代替常见的平铺直叙等,这样可以增加你的语法亮点,让已经有些麻木一直想睡觉的阅卷老师眼睛一亮,在你的试卷上多扫射一番!其次,是词汇,我觉得,在你的语法达到基本不会出错的程度上,作文便应该以词汇取胜,因为在这个层次上,大家的语法都差不多,没什么变化,唯一有变化的就是你的词汇!给你打个比方吧,很多想到“许多”就用many,但是你别忘了many a ;handsome;massive,innumerable,a multitude of ;很多人想到“专家”就写expert,但很少人会想到specialist,很多人在想到“擅长”这词,就写be good at ,却不知还有更高级的表达法:be expert at 或者excel in …高手和庸才,就体现在这些细微的差别上!再次,是怎么将文章润色,从而使你的文章大放异彩!!关于这方面,我觉得我自己使用最多的,也是我自创的------叫做“添油加醋”,包括如下几个方面:尽可能地在形容词前使用副词,在介词短语中加入适当的形容词和副词,在过去分词前加入副词,在名词之前尽可能多用形容词……,总之就是尽可能地使用形容词和副词。
我觉得这样做有一个好处,那就是使原本干巴巴的句子变得血肉丰满,比如:1.The regular physical exercise contributes to our health 改成The regular physical exercise contributes tremendously to our health!2.In my opinion,the driver's carelessness should be responsible for this road accident改成3For my part,the driver's negligence should be dominantly responsible for this unexpectedly horrible accident4The majority of students believe that the part-time job will provide them with more oppportunities to develop their interpersonal skills改成The majority of students firmly believe that the part-time job will undoubtedly provide them with golden opportunities to develop their interpersonal skills tremendously!………………………………………………………………………………………………………………最后,我建议你,平时读报,或者做题的时候,发现有好的句子好的词汇,你要抄下来,长期下来,你的作文会有提高的,需要说明的是,这个提高过程可能很缓慢,但是最后能收到很好的效果,以前25分的作文我都能保证在21-23这个级别,靠的就是对语法的熟练掌握和积累了许多较高级的词汇,句型,句子。
专业技能还是个人技能重要英语作文
Talk about knowledge, skills, ability relationship And higher education and vocational education, compared based education three features: One is technology-oriented, rather than academic type; 2 it is technology type, rather than design type; Three is management, rather than decision-making. From these three features, vocational school The goal should be to train students, enables the student to master certain culture, AD Industry theory knowledge, professional skills, skilled indeed with skill Will have to adapt to, and the ability to participate in modern social activities. In teaching after Cheng thorough understanding and correctly handling the knowledge, skills, and abilities, the relationship Learning knowledge, training skills and cultivating ability of throughout the teaching processIn the teaching activities, to coordinate, is advantageous in raises the realization of the goal.
英语作文能力
英语写作能力是英语听、说、读、写四种基本能力之一,英语写作能有效地促进语言知识的内化。
Swain(1985)提出“可理解输出”假设,认为包括写在内的语言产生性运用有助于学习者检验目的语句法结构和词语的使用,促进语言运用的自动化,有效地达到了语言习得的目的。
通过写作,英语知识不断得到巩固并内在化,有利于英语技能的全面发展。
但是,英语写作又是广大英语学习者最感头痛的问题之一,且容易被教师忽视,笔者以为如何提高英语写作能力值得我们认真研究。
本文就此谈谈初浅的看法。
一、提高英语写作能力的原则(一)渐进性原则。
要坚持“句—段—篇”的训练程序,由易到难,循序渐进。
在英语写作的初始阶段,要始终注意培养学生良好的写作习惯,狠抓基本功训练。
在学生掌握了基本句型并能写出简单句子后,再要求学生根据一些体例写出小段的文章。
在段落写作中要引导学生分析段落的结构、段落的中心句、句与句之间的逻辑关系、写作手法等,这样有利于下一步一篇文章的写作。
在文章写作中要教会学生如何构思文章、如何运用正确的写作技巧等。
(二)多样性原则。
要坚持训练形式的多样化及写作文体的多样性。
从形式上而言,可以用回答提问的口头作文,也可以用续写故事;可以改写课文,也可以仿写课文;可以写提纲训练谋篇布局,也可以写拓展段训练发散思维……。
从文体上而言,可以写说明文、议论文、记叙文,也可以写书信、便条、通知等实用文体。
(三)结合性原则。
要坚持听说读训练和写训练相结合。
根据语言习得理论,学习者在学习时常先通过听和读吸取语言知识,从而了解别人的思想,再通过说和写来表达自己的思想,让别人了解自己。
大量的听说训练能促进读写能力的提高。
因此,写与听说读紧密结合,进行多元化的能力训练,可使学生的各项能力互相影响、互相渗透、互相促进。
(四)控制性原则。
要坚持写作前的指导,控制学生的汉语语言思维,发展英语语言思维。
语言学习在很大程度上主要是模仿,而非随心所欲地自由表达。
教师要加强写作前的指导,可给出范文让学生模仿,以熟悉其语篇结构。
同时要控制其汉语语言思维,尽可能让学生习惯英语语言思维,以便于学生学习和掌握地道、正确的英语。
(五)持久性原则。
要坚持长期、正确的写作训练。
英语写作能力的提高并非一朝一夕之事,而是一个长期的、艰巨的、渐进的过程。
这就要求教师、学生都要有充分的思想准备,要有坚韧不拔的意志和必胜的信心。
二、提高英语写作能力的方法。
(一)通过积累词汇量,提高英语写作能力。
犹如土木砖石是建筑的材料一样,词汇是说话写作的必需材料,也是制约写作能力提高的瓶颈。
可以想象,如果要写一个句子,10个单词有8个单词拼写错误或拼写不出,有2 个单词用法不当,又怎么能清楚地表达自己的思想呢?因此,在平时的教学中要强调学生记忆单词,记住单词的拼读、用法、意思等。
记忆单词的方法有很多,各人有各人的记忆方法和习惯,可因人而异。
教师可通过要求学生朗读单词、听写单词、默写单词、遣词造句、词汇竞赛等多种方法促进学生记单词。
记忆单词是一个长期的反复的过程,要长期地坚持下去,才能不断积累大量的词汇,为英语写作打下坚实的基础。
(二)通过扩大阅读量,提高英语写作能力。
古人云“熟读唐诗三百首,不会作诗也会吟”,这是汉语的一种学习方法,同样可借鉴于英语写作。
多阅读是学生增加接触英语语言材料、接受信息、活跃思维、增长智力的一种途径,同时也是培养学生英语思维能力、提高理解力、增强语感、巩固和扩大词汇量的一种好方法,有利于促进英语写作能力的提高。
在阅读训练中,教师要注意以下问题:一是指导阅读方法,分析文章结构、中心思想、段落中心句、写作方法等,帮助学生掌握各类文章的结构及写作方法。
二要精读与泛读相结合,通过推敲优秀的文章来学会写作方法和选词用词;通过大量的泛读来吸取信息量,扩大词汇量。
三要扩大阅读量。
提供阅读的材料涉及面要广,才能不断扩大学生的知识面,使学生适应各种题材的写作。
(三)通过提高听说能力,提高英语写作能力。
英语听说读写四种能力是相互影响、相互促进的,提高听说能力必定会促进写作能力的提高。
要提高听说能力关键在于创设一个良好的英语环境。
教师要尽可能地用英语授课,多开展专门的听说训练,同时开展丰富多彩的课外英语活动,让学生沉浸在英语海洋中去领略、去体会、去使用英语,久而久之,学生自然能使用正确的、地道的英语进行交谈与写作。
(四)通过重视写作过程,提高英语写作能力。
长期以来,英语写作成果教学法(THE PRODUCT APPROACH)在我国居于主导地位,教师根据写作的终成品来判断写作的成败,重视写作的技术性细节(如格式、拼写、语法等),忽视写作过程的指导。
根据D.Rumechart和J.McClelland提出的连通论(Connectionism)理论,写作包括写前阶段、具体写作、文章修改三个基本过程,这三个过程并非是线性排列,而是循环往复,穿插进行的。
教师只有重视加强对写作三个过程的指导,才能更好地提高...
写一篇不少于100字的英语作文,关于某个人(可以是你或者朋友亲戚...
I'm not that kind of student who good at English and learn very quickly.I can't say that I love English more than other subjects.Even I can say English is a headache for me in the passed days.我不是那种学习英语有天赋的学习很快的学生。
我也不能说我非常喜欢英语更甚于其他,或者说曾经对于我来说,英语是一个头痛。
However, this not last long since I met the current English teacher.He/She's such a good teacher who can absorb student's attention to the lecture.And make the class so vivid that we don't feels so boring.And she/he can make us feel relax and being encouraged, nobody has the feeling as a looser.这种状况没有持续太久直到我遇到现在的英语老师。
他是一个能够吸引学生注意力到讲堂上来的好老师,让我们觉得课程并不枯燥。
最重要的是他能让我们感到放松并受到鼓励,没有人感到自己是差生。
I'm really appretiate the god arranged such a teacher for us.我十分感激上天赐给我们这样一个老师。
小鬼,你应该要把这个老师的情况说一下别人才好写嘛...
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