一篇好作文,要么有一个吸引人的主题,要么文情并茂。或者兼而有之。兼而有之的作文通常被称为极品作文,可以叫做写作或创作。作为学生,我想,能够达到好作文的水平已经属于不容易了。下面就结合一些文章或诗歌简单谈谈写作文问题。% l8 {$ H1 w: E3 Z* V6 E
我很欣赏《意林》或《读者》中的一些文章,说通俗一点,叫做极品作文。为什么欣赏它?因为它确实属于既能打动人、有给人以深刻思考的一类。比如,有一篇写课堂上老师的尴尬的文章,故事很通俗,说是一天上课时老师点名,遇到一个不认识的学生名字,就用他教了几十年学的经验应付——把他隔过去,待点完名后,公开向学生询问:刚才点名时漏掉了谁?你可以设想,如果那个同学立即站了出来说,把我的名字点掉了,这就落了俗套,因为大家都知道这个故事。但是作者没有这样写。老师的询问,下面鸦雀无声。如何收场?老师自然是教了几十年的人,他随机应变说,既然都点过了,也可能有的同学碍于情面不肯当众说,这样吧,下课到我办公室单独报到一下也行。这篇文章如果再写这位被漏掉的同学到办公室后说了自己的名字,还是没有什么意思。作者写的之所以出人意料,原因就是这位同学下课后去到办公室找老师,只说了几句话就走了。他说:“老师,我从上小学一年级到现在上初二,每年都会遇到同样事情。你说老师,我的名字确实是生僻,当老师的为什么不肯直接向我询问呢?难道老师都是这样碍于情面吗?”文章就此戛然而止。同样是大家都听到的故事,同样是一个老生常谈的问题,作者这样一写却反映了一个新鲜的主题,就是老师应该和学生教学相长,不应该以虚荣掩盖自己知识上的缺陷。一篇好的文章就是这样,有一个好的主题,作文就成功了一大半。
一个好的主题,通常都是采用滴水映海洋,粒沙藏世界的手法。从一滴水里能看到大海的样子,从一粒沙中能展现整个世界,这是多么地不容易呀!但是,好主题通常就是这样表达出来的。你想写时代的变迁,写社会变化之大,如何写?你不能面面俱到地都写吧。老舍可谓是文章大家了,他就是用一个茶馆来写出了那个时代不能改变命运的原因,写了只有彻底推翻旧社会,才能结束悲惨命运的真理。我看到一位学生写的作文就很好。她只用洗衣服这件事就说明了很多内容。奶奶是清闲的,因为她怕家里惟有的一件外出见人的衣服洗烂,不敢多洗,更不敢多穿,也不固定那个人,是家里的唯一宝贝,只有家里出去见人的时候才穿它一次。她也是清闲的,因为现在的衣服虽然多,只要你把它填进洗衣机缸桶,按上程序,两个小时便是甩干的衣服,还不耽误读读报纸,看看小说。而最辛苦的是她的妈妈,从石头板到木头板,她不知道揉搓过多少衣服,因为在她妈妈的生活里,家里已经富裕,每个人的衣服就有六七套,有冬天穿的,春天穿的,还有夏天穿的,秋天穿的;有在单位穿的,还有在家时穿的,有工作服,也有休闲装。但是她所处的那个时代,洗衣机还没有发明出来,后来有也因为很贵买不起。这样,从洗衣这一件事就写了旧社会、新社会和当代的巨大变化,这不能说不是一个好的主题。你如果想写一个好的主题,首先就是应该从一个人、一件事、一个物品着手,不要贪大求全,贪大求全的文章反而不是好文章。
其次是要文情并茂。文,是指文采。文采怎样显现?就是要靠作者的功力。写作能力很强的同学,通常的一件事会把握怎样写,如何写,哪些该祥,哪些该略,哪些该修饰,哪些该平白,驾驭文字的功夫很是了得。文采不是每个人天生就有的,它是一个逐步积累、逐步升华、逐步成熟的过程,需要去大量阅读、长期积累、心灵感悟、凝练提取的再创造本领,这要在日常学习中逐步提高。俗话说,学会唐诗三百首,不会写诗也会偷,就是这个道理。情,指感情。感情是最能打动人的地方,通常来说你要把心掏给别人看,别人也会把心掏给你看,你要带着感情去写一个事物,这个事物就有感情,这种感情也会传达给读者。俗话说,投之以桃,报之以李,投我以木瓜,报之以琼琚,也就是这个道理。有一首诗歌,目的在于歌颂一位功赫名著的将军,战争年代,他是英雄;和平年代,他却成了一名普通的再不能普通的老百姓了。这首诗他这样写,题目是“一把扫帚”,说它也曾纵横过王庭御院,也曾斗落过马路星辰,也曾抗击过风沙入侵,也曾荡涤过死亡书信(落叶),趋走的是肮脏的污垢灰尘,迎来的是五彩的阳光、净洁的空气、和平的声音,等世界都干净了,它却静卧在墙角门后,无声无息,无怨无悔,无迹无痕。你看,写得多好呀!他就是把自己感情赋予了这把扫帚,把这把扫帚写成了有感觉的事物,能感受整个世界。所以,好的作文也应该具备这个条件。
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要写出好作文,同时要求都做到既有一个好的主题,又能文情并茂,实在不是一件很容易的事。如果做到了这两点,任何文章都可以称作为创作作品,都可以在文艺刊物上公开发表。所以,对于正在学习阶段的少年朋友们来说,不必要求他们必须具备这些条件,我认为,能具备其中一条已经算得上好作文了。
最后,胡乱给大家总结几条,请参考:文贵新,发人深思动人心;文贵奇,使人入彀着人迷;文贵精,如果删句一场空;文贵真,热情打动石头心。^_^ 3 A
看图写英文作文
One day, the weather was really good. Birds were singing in the trees. A boy finished his homework, so he went outside to play football. His name is Peter, and he is a great football player. Suddenly, he used too much force and kicked the ball to the tree. However, the ball was stuck on there. He did not know what to do. Just that time, an old man holding an umbrella passed by. The boy asked him for help. After the consideration, the old man threw his umbrella to the ball, and the ball fell down. But the umbrella was stuck there. The little boy saw the umbrella and did not know what to do. So he turned around and ran away. The old man shook his head desperately.
英文看图写作文
您好,很高兴能回答您的问题,希望对您有帮助团队刚刚创立,希望得到您的支持!以下是您需要内容的参考:Last Saturday we had no lessons. My friends and I decided to help the farmers pick the apples. They were very busy. Li Hong and I climbed up a big apple tree. There were a lot of apples on it. After a short time we picked a lot of apples. Xiao Zhuan couldn't get the apples because they were too high. Li Lei carried a ladder for her. Soon we picked many baskets of apples and the trucks arrived. We all got down and helped to carry the apples onto the trucks. These trucks would carry the apples to the cities and change back much money for the farmers. The farmers had a harvest time!【我们全心全意,愿您10分满意】【更多英语问题也欢迎求助】——【百度懂你】英语二团提供
求一篇看图写作的英语作文。
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On online chattingWith the development of IT, online chatting is becoming increasingly popular with many people. However, people's opinions about it vary from person to person. Some think that it has more problems than benefits. First, it is a waste of time, energy and money as it doesn't produce any useful information and products. Second, it is misleading to its users because cyberspace is actually an imaginary space where things are unreal or fictional. But the advocates of online chatting support it because it is another way of recreation which is both exciting and relaxing. Besides, it helps them release their emotions and worries freely and safely. To them, it is very useful and wonderful. As far as I am concerned, whether online chatting is good or bad depends on the person who does it. So long as we can keep ourselves under good control, we can use it scientifically and properly without its bad effects 或 Attitudes on computers and middle school studentsIn modern times,vidie games are very popular amoung students.Many of them are interested in them a lot.Some regard them as a kind of small games ,when they have time they play them .But some of them are addicted to play vidie games. They spend all day in play them,so that they not only do bad in study butalso lead to a bad body.I think we had better be away from the vidie games to have a health body and a satisfied study. video game is beciming more and more popular.some students are intrested in it,even become addicted with it,spenging more time on it comparing with the time spending on study.I don't think student shoud say good bye to it,some time when you are tired with study, you can have a rest by playing it sometime .but if you are a person who is lacking of master youself,you'd better not touch it. fran is an the reordering of religion and the sundering of the social unity that it had once provided to European culture was the most significant development of the sixteenth century. It is impossible to understand the time without taking a look at this. Religion was not a matter of personal preference or opinion, it was the very basis of society. The Pre-Reform The rediscovery of the learning of the ancient world, the printing press, and all the other forces that came together to create the Renaissance also affected the Church. At the end of the fifteenth century and the beginning of the sixteenth, Christian humanists sought to apply the new style of scholarship to the study of scriptures in their original languages and to return to the first principles of their religion. In the interests of spreading religious understanding, they began to translate the Bible into the vernacular languages.
我的房间作文看图写话英语作文
I have a lovely bedroom. 我有一间漂亮的卧室 。
There is a big bed in my room. 有一个大床在我的房间。
There are some shoes under the bed. 有一些鞋子在床底下。
There is a yellow desk in my room. 有一个黄色的书桌在我的房间。
There are some pens on the desk. 有一些钢笔在书桌上。
The bed ahd desk are near the window. 床和书桌靠近窗户。
The bed is next to the desk. 床紧挨着书桌。
There are some wardrobe in my room. 有几个衣柜在我的房间。
There are some clothes on the wardrobe. 有一些衣服在衣柜里面。
I have a bookcase in the room. 我有一个书架在房间里。
I like reading book very much. 我非常喜欢读书。
Do you like reading book? 你喜欢读书吗? My bedroom is so nice.I like it. 我的卧室很好。
我喜欢它。
关于看图写英语作文 一天,我和家人在拍照,然后我看见盲人过马路,...
One day, a little boy with his father andmother were taken photosin front of a building, when he happened to see an oldblind man going across the street. Without saying anything, the boy ran over tothe grandpa and led him by the stick in his hand to get to the other side ofthe street. His parents showed the boy an understanding smile. The boyaskedhis father to take a group photo with the old man. The family all laughedgleefully because the boy did a good deed.一天,一个小男孩和他的父母正要在一座大楼前拍照,这时候正好看到一位上年纪的盲人要过马路.小男孩二话没说就跑过去牵着老爷爷手中的拐杖带他走到马路的另一边.他的父母会心地笑了笑.小男孩让他的父亲给他和来人拍了一张合影.因为他做了一件好事,全家人都开心的笑了起来.
看图写英语作文。
一个小女孩看日历发现她妈妈明天生日
I had a trip with my classmates last sunday. The weather was sunny and we were excited.First we went to the mountains .And we had a picnic there.Look at the picture,there are many trees and flowers.We had bread and some water and the food was delicious.We have a good time.We were really happy!┏ (^ω^)=?
看图写英语作文:描述帮助一位外国人讲价的故事
I had a happy summer holiday because I did many interesting things.I went to the beach and I swam in the sea.I called my friend and played with them.I visited my grandparents and ate much delicious food.Then I went to the zoo whit my sister.I was very happy.Because I saw a lot of animals.They were very lovely.So I took photos of all animals.I liked the butterflies best.They were colourful and beautiful.My sister liked it too.I had a wonderful summer holiday this year.What about you? Can you tell me somthing about it?
急急急!求一篇简单的英语看图作文 有急用啊
某个正在上课的教室里,年轻的英语教师CC先生突然发现XXX低着头趴在桌子上,于是就走过去。
细心的问XXX同学身体是不是不舒服。
原来XXX吃坏了肚子,正在闹肚子。
关心,爱护同学的CC先生立刻让英语课代表安排同学自习。
然后亲自带着XXX同学到了学校医务室。
从医务室出来后,还亲自骑着自行车把XXX同学送回了家。
Young english instructor CC Sir discovers XXX abruptly bending over table to go ahead being lowering self head , walks thereupon right away over in some's classrooms being giving lessons. Careful ask XXX that the schoolmate body whether be or not is uncomfortable.It truns out that XXX having been spoiled an abdomen , is suffers from diarrhoea.CC Sir who cares for , treasures a schoolmate lets the English class representative arrange a schoolmate to study by self immediately. And then have arrived at the school infirmary in person with XXX schoolmate.From the infirmary the queen has come out , has sent XXX schoolmate back to a family be riding a bicycle in person.文采不怎么好,看在我这么辛苦的份上,给分不?