关于建议的英语作文

Dear Zhang Hua,I am sorry to know your spoken English is not good.I think should study hard first.Then your father is very strict with your study.Because it will push you to learn English. You can on the way to school talk about the English.It can practice your eloquence.OK.You can also listen to some of the things in English in the morning or read aloud in English.It can exercise your pronunciation.This is my three suggestions.I hope you can learn English well, and especially to learn oral expression.Good luck! Yours,Li Lei对不起，这是我以前的作文，是有关如何学好英语的（初二水平）

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 i hear that you want to learn dancing while your parents don't agree with you .however ,i don't think this is a big difficulty .you can have a heartest talk with them ,telling them that you can persisit on studying hard and dancing is just an interest in your free time .you can become more athletic ,happier and healthier through the acitivity.the daily life will be more colorful,and at the same time ,you can get well with some new friends .it will be an important experience in your memory...

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