希望对你有所帮助:段首句常用句式如下:
1. 关于……人们有不同的观点。一些人认为……
There are different opinions among people as to ____ .Some people suggest that ____.
2. 俗话说(常言道)……,它是我们前辈的经历,但是,即使在今天,它在许多场合仍然适用。
There is an old saying______. It"s the experience of our forefathers,however,it is correct in many cases even today.
3. 现在,……,它们给我们的日常生活带来了许多危害。首先,……;其次,……。更为糟糕的是……。
Today, ____, which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life. First, ____ Second,____. What makes things worse is that______.
4. 现在,……很普遍,许多人喜欢……,因为……,另外(而且)……。
Nowadays,it is common to ______. Many people like ______ because ______. Besides,______.
5. 任何事物都是有两面性,……也不例外。它既有有利的一面,也有不利的一面。
Everything has two sides and ______ is not an exception,it has both advantages and disadvantages.
6. 关于……人们的观点各不相同,一些人认为(说)……,在他们看来,……
People’s opinions about ______ vary from person to person. Some people say that ______.To them,_____.
7. 人类正面临着一个严重的问题……,这个问题变得越来越严重。
Man is now facing a big problem ______ which is becoming more and more serious.
8. ……已成为人的关注的热门话题,特别是在年青人当中,将引发激烈的辩论。
______ has become a hot topic among people,especially among the young and heated debates are right on their way.
9. ……在我们的日常生活中起着越来越重要的作用,它给我们带来了许多好处,但同时也引发一些严重的问题。
______ has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life.it has brought us a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.
10. 根据图表/数字/统计数字/表格中的百分比/图表/条形图/成形图可以看出……。很显然……,但是为什么呢?
According to the figure/number/statistics/percentages in the /chart/bar graph/line/graph,it can be seen that______ while. Obviously,______,but why?
万能句已经没有用了。
Part I Writing (30 minutes)
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled The Significance of Love by explaining the following metaphor with an exact example, “Love is light, being brighter in darker places .” You should write at least 120 words but no more than 200 words.
解析:按照四、六级考试委员会所给内部资料中的评论标准,此类考题考查两方面的内容:即理解和表达能力。
高分作文必须按照题目要求展开,需包含以下内容:1)题目,即爱心的重要性(题目要求需有例子支撑);2)评论:对于所给名言或警句的评论。
如果只写其中一部分,作文最高得分不超过9分。(注:阅卷时采用原始赋分满分15分。之后经过标准分转化成710分制,写作部分满分106.5分)
从六种功能段落备考角度看,该类作文其实和以前考题没有本质性区别。原来是汉语提纲提出写作内容上要求,如今是英文形式提出写作内容上的要求。
既然都是命题要求,英汉要求只是形式上的变化,本质还是:按照题目要求去写相应的功能段落。
如果写模板作文,本篇作文建议写作思路如下:
首段:现象(该警句所对应现象)+评论
A host of people find it beneficial and rewarding to take part in various activities of love. Meanwhile, there is a metaphor/saying describing the significance of love: Love is light, being brighter in darker places. From my point of view, people in darker places need more love and even a little help can give them hope.
很多人发现参加爱心活动颇为有益。而且,有一句比喻/话可以描述爱心的重要性:爱心就是一盏灯,越是黑暗的地方越明亮。在我看来,身处黑暗中的人需要更多爱心,即便是一点帮助也能给他们带来光明。
二段:意义阐述:阐述爱心的重要意义。
(意义主题句)Love is the key to building a harmonious society, and it can be likened to light in dark places. (具体意义1:词汇排比)To begin with, as a vital quality, it bring people power, arouses their enthusiasm for life, and helps them to create a promising future. (具体意义2:强调句式)In addition, it is love or others’ help that enables people in difficulties to build up confidence, courage and hope. (万能表达:)As a matter of fact, individuals in mounting numbers have come to realize the significance of love: love from friends, classmates and family.
爱心是建设和谐社会的关键,而且爱心可以被必做黑暗中的一盏灯。首先,作为一种重要素质,爱心带给人们力量,唤醒人们的生活热情,帮助人们创造光明的未来。此外,也正是爱心是的人们积累起信心,勇气和希望。事实上,越来越多的人们已经意识到爱的重要性:朋友之爱、同学之爱、家人之爱。
尾段:举例说明爱心(即现象)+建议
(举例)A case in point is Hope Project. (调查法描述)According to a survey, a majority of people in China admit that they are willing to help those children, who can not afford tuition. (建议)Thus, we should educate, advocate and encourage more people to be involved in activities of love. (展望未来)If we try our utmost to do so, the future of our nation will be promising and rosy.
爱心的典型例子就是希望工程。根据一项调查,绝大部分中国人都认可帮助那些交不起学费的童鞋完成学业。因此,我们应教育、倡导和鼓励更多人参加爱心活动。假如我们进全力这么做,我们国家未来将更美好和光明。
黑体部分是模版句式表达,建议考生在明确其功能的前提下进行背诵。这个模版可以帮助童鞋完成如下主题作文的写作:
A strong will(11年12月), confidence, optimism, cooperation or teamwork, courage, patience, practice(97年),a good preparation(11年12月六级主题),perseverance, modesty, diligence, unity, knowledge, sense of happiness.
笔者建议:四六级考试中所考段落中频率最高的两种段落是现象和建议。可以说2012年6月四、六级现象段写作必考,建议句必写。
Efforts at ordinary times
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