你觉得我这朵菊花看起来美闻起来香吗
这篇作文是我写的，如果有不好的地方，请指教：内容是在暑假的一个星期天，我们去参加小明（化名）的生日会，我们大家给他带去许多食物，饮料和水果。还送他礼物。我们唱歌，跳舞，还玩了各种游戏。我们玩得很开心。直到晚上九点钟才回家！这真是难忘的一天啊~~
正文：
In the smmmer of a sunday .Iwent to Xiao ming's birthday party with some of my friends.
We took a lot of food, drinks and fruits to him .Everyone also give a card . We made the cards
by hand .At the party, we sang, danced and played many games .We didn't come back home
until 9:00 in the evening.We were all tired ,but we had a good time ! What an unforgettable day!
那么晚还提问哦，不错嘛，是爱学习的孩子咧！不过这个东西要自己写才会熟练，我也是一个学生，希望你可以通过自己的笔尖写出属于自己的文章，英语作文这个东西不是很难掌握一些基本句式句型，再用句型翻译你的想法，一篇简单的英语作文就出炉了!
个人觉得上面那片作文存在多处语法错误！！！而且真的是不太好！！（一楼那个，不好意思，说你的不是了！）我在这按照上面那个中文写一篇吧，希望你是参考，不要抄哦！（可以就采纳我的答案吧！嘻嘻）
it`s summer holiday now and i went to xiaoming`s birthday party with some friends on last sunday ! On the morning we bought lots of food ,juice and fruits for him as well as other gifts like birthday cards !the party was interesting that we sang songs and danced during the party ,and we also played some kinds of games which made us happy ! we said goodbye at 9 o`clock with lauthter ！we felt happy when we saw xiaoming`s happiness.in a word,it was an unforgettable day !
记得努力学习哦！！！
A Day to Remember
It was Sunday. Our teacher Mr Zhu led us to a park nearby.Usually we go to the park to spend our holiday. But today we went there to take part in voluntary labour.
We got there at nine o'clock. Mr Zhu divided us into three groups and then we began working.
The students in Group One planted trees and watered flowers. The studentsin Group Two were busy collecting litter left by the tourist. They also cleaned the benches in the park. I was in Group Three. We went to the children's playground and cleaned all the equipment there. We worked very hard.
At about eleven we finished working. We met at the gate of the park. We all felt tired but very happy.
An Unforgetable Thing 一件令人难忘的事
One day I was taking a bus to the park. Therewere so many people on the bus that some people had to stand.
Suddenly an old man got on the bus. The driver said to the passengers,"Please give the old man a seat." But nobody gave his seat to him.
I was angry at this. In our society respecting the old and cherishing the young is a traditional virtue.
I'd like to say "Please offer your love to others!"
【参考译文】
一天我乘公交车去公园。车上人很多，以致一些人不得不站着。
突然一位老人上了车。司机对乘客们说：“请给老人让个座”。但是没有人给老人让座。
我看到这非常生气。在我们国家，尊老爱幼是一种传统美德。我向说，“请把你的爱奉献给别人吧！”
An Unforgettable Day
Today is Sunday. My whole family had an unforgettable day.
We went shopping together. We bought many things, such as lollipops, ice creams, cornflakes, oranges, milk and bread. Besides, my mother bought many toys for me. I liked them very much.
After that we went to the zoo. I saw many animals. The monkeys were very interesting, the lions were very fearful, and the hamsters were very cute.
We had our lunch under a big tree. My father told us some jokes. They were very funny.
We had a wonderful and unforgettable day.
FUCK YOU
