一、概述
在四级考试中,最难拿分的也许就是作文了。其原因大致有三:一是作文是一项综合考察的项目,既考察学生对词汇、语法的掌握情况,也考察句型、篇章的能力;二是有的考生过分自信,认为只要写足字数,大体写一写,就能得个八、九分;三是有的考生过于缺乏自信,觉得这个部分太综合了,平时也懒得写,考试时能写到哪儿就写到哪儿,结果造成了“活马当作死马医”,自然是“医死”了。
诚然,在四级作文中想得高分是很难的,但无论如何也应当拿到6分。这是一个底线,否则就要被倒扣分了,那是大大划不来的。(请见后面我所讲的作文最低分的规定)。
但是笔者认为,要想拿到6分(或者更高一点)也并非难事,关键在于掌握正确的方法、多写多练,再加上考试时的细心。
我们先来了解一下四六级考试作文的一些常识。
二、试卷要求
CET试卷短文写作部分,一般用英语给出题目,然后用以下三种形式之一说明内容要求:
1. 用英文列出写作提纲;
2. 用英文段首句给定每段的大意;
3. 用英文说明图表,给出信息范畴和要求。
考试时间为30分钟,要求学生写出一篇不少于100词的短文。要求切题,能正确表达思想,意义连贯,文理基本通顺,无重大语言错误。写作内容为科技、社会、文化等方面的一般常识。
三、评分原则
1. 大学英语考试的目的是检查考生是否达到大学英语教学大纲规定的四级和六级教学要求,对作文的评分应以此要求为准则。
2. 大学英语考试作文题采用总体评分(Global Scoring)方法。阅卷人员就总的印象给出奖励分(Reward Scores),而不是按语言点的错误数目扣分。
3. 从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评判。内容和语言是一个统一体。作文应表达题目所规定的内容,而内容要通过语言来表达。要考虑作文是否切题,是否充分表达思想,也要考虑是否用英语清楚而适切地表达思想,也就是要考虑语言上的错误是否造成理解上的障碍。
4. 避免趋中倾向。该给高分的给高分,包括满分;该给低分的给低分,包括零分。一名阅卷人员在所评阅的全部作文卷中不应只给中间的几种分数。
四、评分标准
1. 短文写作部分满分为15分。
2. 阅卷标准共分五等:14分、11分、8分、5分、及2分。各有参照卷一至二份。
3. 阅卷人员根据阅卷标准,对照参照卷评分,若认为与某一分数(如8分)相似,即定为该分数(即8分);若认为稍优或稍劣于该分数,则可加一分(即9分)或减一分(即7分),但不得加或减半分。
l 给分档
14分—— 切题。表达思想清楚,文字通顺,连贯性较好。基本上无语言错误,仅有个别小错。
11分—— 切题。表达思想清楚,文字连贯,但有少量语言错误。
8分 —— 基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚, 文字勉强连贯;语言错误相当多,其中有一些是严重错误。
5分 —— 基本切题。表达思想不清楚,连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。
2分 —— 条理不清,思路紊乱,语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误,且多数为严重错误 来源:考试大-英语六级考试
六级作文万能模板
一、引出开头
1:It is well-known to us that……(我们都知道……)==As far as my knowledge is concerned, …( 就我所知…)
2:Recently the problem of…… has been brought into focus. ==Nowadays there is a growing concern over ……(最近……问题引起了关注)
3:Nowadays(overpopulation)has become a problem we have to face.(现今,人口过剩已成为我们不得不面对的问题)
4:Internet has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. It has brought a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.(互联网已在我们的生活扮演着越来越重要的角色,它给我们带来了许多好处但也产生了一些严重的问题)
5:With the rapid development of science and technology,more and more people believe that……(随着科技的迅速发展,越来越多的人认为……)
6:It is a common belief that……==It is commonly believed that……(人们一般认为……)
7:A lot of people seem to think that……(很多人似乎认为……)
8:It is universally acknowledged that + 句子(全世界都知道...)
二、表达不同观点
1:People's views on……vary from person to person. Some hold that……However, others believe that……(人们对……的观点因人而异,有些人认为……然而其他人却认为……)
2:People may have different opinions on……(人们对……可能会持有不同见解)
3:Attitudes towards (drugs)vary from person to person.==Different people hold different attitudes towards(failure)(人们对待吸毒的态度因人而异)
4:There are different opinions among people as to……(对于……人们的观点大不相同)
三、表示结尾
1:In short, it can be said that……(总之,他的意思是……)
2:From what has been mentioned above, we can come to the conclusion that……(从上面提到的,我们可以得出结论……)
3:Taking all these factors into consideration, we naturally/reasonably come to the conclusion that……(把所有的这些因素加以考虑,我们自然可以得出结论……)
4:Hence/Therefore, we'd better come to the conclusion that……(因此,我们最好的出这样的结论……)
5:There is no doubt that (job-hopping)has its drawbacks as well as merits.(毫无疑问,跳槽有优点也有缺点)
6:All in all, we cannot live without……,but at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with the problems that would arise.(总之,我们没有……无法生活,但同时我们必须寻求新的解决办法来面对可能出现的新问题)
四、提出建议
1:It is high time that we put an end to the (trend).(该是我们停止这一趋势的时候了)
2:There is no doubt that enough concern must be paid to the problem of……(毫无疑问,对……问题应予以足够重视)
3:Obviously ,if we want to do something … it is essential that……(显然,如果我们想要做么事,很重要的是……)
4:Only in this way can we ……(只有这样,我们才能……)
5:Spare no effort to + V (不遗余力的)
五、预示后果
1:Obviously,if we don't control the problem, the chances are that……will lead us in danger.(很明显,如果我们不能控制这一问题,很有可能我们会陷入危险)
2:No doubt, unless we take effective measures, it is very likely that ……(毫无疑问,除非我们采取有效措施,否则我们很可能会……)
3:It is urgent that immediate measures should be taken to stop the situation(很紧迫的是应立即采取措施阻止这一事态的发展)
六、表示论证
1:From my point of view, it is more reasonable to support the first opinion rather than the second.(在我看来,支持第一种观点比第二种更有道理)
2:I cannot entirely agree with the idea that……(我无法完全同意这一观点)
3:As far as I am concerned/In my opinion,……(就我来说……)
4:I sincerely believe that……==I am greatly convinced (that)子句.(我真诚地相信……)
5:Finally, to speak frankly, there is also a more practical reason why ……(最后,坦率地说,还有另外一个实际的原因……)
七、给出原因
1:The reason why + 句子 ~~~ is that + 句子 (...的原因是...)
2:This phenomenon exists for a number of reasons .First,…….Second,…….Third,……。这一现象存在有很多原因的,第一……第二……第三……
3:For one thing,…… For another thing,…… ==On the one hand,……On the other hand……一方面……另一方面……
4:I quite agree with the statement that……The reasons are chiefly as follows.我十分赞同这一论述,即……。其主要原因如下。
八、列出解决办法和批判错误观点做法
1:The best way to solve the troubles is……解决这些麻烦的最好办法是……
2:As far as something is concerned,……就某事而言,……
3;It is obvious that……很显然……
4:It may be true that……but it doesn't mean that……可能……是对的,但这并不意味着……
5;It is natural to believe that……but we shouldn't ignore that……认为……是自然的,但我们不应忽视……
6:There is no evidence to suggest that……没有证据表明……
九、表示好处和坏处
1:It has the following advantages.它有如下优势
2:It is beneficial/harmful to us.==It is of great benefit/harm to us.它对我们有益处
3:It has more disadvantages than advantage.他有很多不足之处
十、表示重要、方便、可能
1:It is important(necessary/difficult/convenient/possible)for sb to do sth.对于某人做……是……
2:It plays an important role in our life.
十一、采取措施
1:We should take some effective measures.我们应该采取有效措施
2:We should try our best to overcome/conquer the difficulties.我们应该尽最大努力去克服困难
3:We should do our utmost in doing sth.我们应该尽力去做……
4:We should solve the problems that we are confronted/faced with.我们应该解决我们面临的困难
十二、显示变化
1:Some changes have taken place in the past five years.过去五年发生了很多变化
2:Great changes will certainly be produced in the international communications.在国际交流中理所当然会发生很多大的变化
3:It has increased/decreased from…to…他已经从…增加/减少到…
4:The output of July in this factory increased by 15%.这个工厂7月份产量以增加了15%
十三、表明事实现状
1;We cannot ignore the fact that……我们不能忽略这个事实……
2:No one can deny the fact that……没人能否认这个事实……
3:This is a phenomenon that many people are interested in.
4:be closely related to ~~ (与...息息相关)
十四、进行比较
1:Compared with A,B……与A比较,B……
2;I prefer to read rather than watch TV.
十五、常用英语谚语
1:Actions speak louder than words.事实胜于雄辩
2:All is not gold that glitters.发光的未必都是金子
3:All roads lead to Rome.条条大路通罗马
4:A good beginning is half done.良好的开端是成功的一半
5:Every advantage has its disadvantage有利必有弊
6:A miss is as good as a mile.失之毫厘,差之千里
7:Failure is the mother of success.失败是成功之母
8:Industry is the parent of success.勤奋是成功之母
9:It is never too old to learn.活到老,学到老
10:Knowledge is power.知识就是力量
11:Nothing in the world is difficult for one who sets his mind to it.世上无难事,只怕有心人
大学六级作文
There are more and more dispute on the issue of more courses or fewer courses.The daliy life is the same as the issue.
Many examples can be found to prove that no gain without gain! Taking our author as a typical example, most of them reading numerous of books and did a sea of practice to become a author! People usually realize the necessity of studying for earn a better life after they have experienced hardships and overcome difficulties. On the contrary, on person who was born with a silver spoon in his mouth will hardly know it is studying that makes people more powerful, more confident and more faithful.
So to sum up, it is a truth beyond dispute that a better life often comes froms today's conscientiousness in study.
Remember this proverb:Idle young, needy old.
六级写作
呵呵,楼上的都给你翻译出来了
1.....had shown that the amounts of the traditional classic readers has got decreased.....
这句话中首先有个问题是容易引起误解,the traditional classic readers,是传统的经典读者呢,还是读传统名著的读者;所以改成the traditional classics' readers
另外,....的数量,修饰人的话,更常用的是the number of
整句修改如下:
....had shown that the number of the traditional classics' readers has been decreasing....
2.seriously不是seriousely,尽量减少这样的失误.
3.because reading classic is very important (for us to widespread our traditional culture,and especially) in our growing progress.
首先要保证前后一致,所以reading classic应该和前文一致,是reading classics
widespread是形容词,要用有把握的词,enlarge,extend,increase都可以用.
整句修改如下:
because reading classics is quite important for us to extend our knowledge of traditional culture,and.....
4.for example recent years there has risen a lot of "new showers" which called "after 80s"their views on something shows very diffrent from which in the past
for example后面别忘了加逗号
rise做增加,增长讲,是不及物动词,不能直接跟宾语,换个词increase
"after 80s"后面需要加逗号
their views....shows.. 语法错误
整句修改如下:
for example, recent years there have been increasing great amounts of "new showers" who called "after 80s", their views on many things show dramatically different.
5.many young people agree with him on some degree,they think that every period has its character.
语法错误
many young people agree with them in some degree,they think that every age has its own character.
6.the new time of internet has come now,take along with this,many people has the chance to display their opinion,they think that may be more suitible to this society
这句话问题有点多
新时代多用new age
take along with this做插入成分也该注意时态问题,应该为taking along with this
many people has....,这样的错误一说你就知道,粗心要不得.
they think that may be....从句是不是少主语?
they think that the views may be.....
整句修改如下:
the new age of internet has come now,taking along with this,many people have chances to display their opinions,they think that the views may be more suitible to this society.
7.because they think that was the true way,they are convinced by the long time....
被动用的有问题
because they think that was just the true way, which they were conviced in a long time....
8.they always think that one will easily be successed on the condition of accepting the classics knowlege.
被动表达意思,错了.
they always think that one will easily succeed in the condition of accepting the knowledge of classics.
9....the combine of the classic and fashion will be accept by most people.
combine的用法有错误
应该为:
combining traditional literature and fashionable literature will be accepted by most people.
六级作文
不清楚你要哪样的,给你几个经典的句子看着模仿一下吧。能的高分的
6.There is no doubt that + 句子~ (毫无疑问的. . . )
例句:There is no doubt that our educational system leaves something to be desired.
毫无疑问的我们的教育制度令人不满意。
7.An advantage of ~ is that + 句子 (. . . 的优点是. . . )
例句:An advantage of using the solar energy is that it won’t create (produce) any pollution.
使用太阳能的优点是它不会制造任何污染。
8.The reason why + 句子 ~ is that + 句子 (. . . 的原因是. . . )
例句:The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can provide us with fresh air. / The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can supply fresh air for us.
我们必须种树的原因是它们能供应我们新鲜的空气。
9.So + 形容词 + be + 主词 + that + 句子 (如此. . . 以致于. . . )
例句:So precious is time that we can’t afford to waste it.
时间是如此珍贵,我们经不起浪费它。
10.Adj + as + Subject(主词)+ be、S + V~ (虽然. . . )
例句:Rich as our country is、the qualities of our living are by no means satisfactory. {by no means = in no way = on no account 一点也不}
关于六级作文
作文很精彩,不过还有些小小的瑕疵。第一段最后加一句and the like或and so on或etc.第二段的it is no denying改为there is no doubt是不是更习惯一些(个人见解)?也许作者想用一下高级一点的词汇吧。have given改为have been giving表示一个持续的过程,也许好些。第一个everywhere-->wherever,第二个everywhere-->whenever。study-->studies;knowledges-->knowledge;去掉in 后面的our;there is-->there are或者干脆去掉;they-->which,去掉 things后面的we,以及两个to后面的do。以上纯属建议,忘作者体谅本人的无理。呵呵
英语六级作文写作技巧有那些??
1、中心句放开端
文章中心句是整个文章的主题和写作围绕的中心,通常应该放在段落的开端,这样一方面能够让阅卷老师一眼看出文章表达的主旨意思,起到开门见山的作用;另一方面可以使文章条理层次更加清晰,逻辑性强,文章的整体结构合理。
中心句在作文中可以起到承接上下文的作用,放在段尾也可以起到总结全文的作用。这一方法对于写作初学者来说还是有一定困难的,因此在六级考试中,为了减少不必要的错误和损失,尽量将中心句放到文章的开头以保万无一失。
2、关键词要具体
文章的中心句一般是通过关键词来表现和限制文章的主旨思想的,所以为了突出主题,关键词需要尽量写得具体些。
这里对“具体”的要求主要体现在两个方面:一方面是要具体到能限制和区分文章段落层次的发展;另一方面是要具体到能说明段落发展的方法。精确仔细地突出关键词是清楚地表达文章主旨、写好段落中心句的重要前提之一,这对考生来说有一定难度。
3、设问扩充内容
中心句及关键词确定后,文章的大概框架已经清晰了,这时候就需要选择和主题有关的信息和素材来填充这个框架。实质上,针对关键词测试每一个所选择的素材就是一个分类的过程。
有一种常用的行文方法就是句子展开前加以设问,然后解答,即设问-解答(why-because)的方法,利用问题引出自己需要的话题再加以解答表现自己的观点,同时紧紧围绕主题。
扩展资料:
一、解释现象型
解释现象型作文一般要求考生根据考试提纲引出某种现象,然后分析现象产生的原因,阐述其影响,并给出合理的建议。此类作文在历年真题中所占比例较大,是练习的重点之一。
二、解决问题型
解决问题型作文,要求考生根据考试题目中所反映或提到的问题,提出解决问题的方案或应对措施。此类作文重在考查学生解决问题的能力,因此写作时一定要具体详细地说明解决问题的方法。
三、说明利弊型
说明利弊型作文的标志十分明显,非常容易识别,其要求比较明确,即要求考生比较某事物或现象的利弊,并表明自己的观点。
四、对比选择型
在六级作文中,对比选择型的题目要求非常明确且富有针对性。这类作文一般以问题的形式或两者选一的形式出现,要求考生对两种观点或做法进行比较,然后表明自己的看法,并且给出理由。写这类作文最关键的一点就是在表明个人观点的同时,还要给出支撑观点的充分理由。
参考资料来源:人民网-2015年12月大学英语六级作文写作高分技巧
参考资料来源:人民网-英语六级:四种常考作文类型大集合
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