作文一:《1996年高考作文及例文》10800字
1996年高考作文及例文
?1996年
仔细观察下面《给六指做整形手术》和《截错了》两幅漫画,完成后面二题:
1、用说明文字介绍两幅漫画的画面内容。
注意:?两幅漫画分别说明,文字不必平均分配。
?说明画面内容时,不要编故事。
?要求内容完整准确,条理清楚,语言简明。
?共200字左右。
2、在一次漫画欣赏会上,对这两幅漫画,有人说这幅好,有人说我喜欢那幅,那么你呢?请以“我更喜欢漫画《 》”为题,写一篇议论文,表达你的看法。 注意:?把你喜欢的那幅漫画的标题填写在作文题目的空白处。
?议论时要有比较,要充分说出自己的感受和理由。
?不少于600字。
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例文:
小作文:
其一:
这里有两幅漫画,第一幅的标题是《给六指做整形手术》,画面中有一只右手,手的大拇指被切掉了,而需要截去的“六指”却安然无恙。第二幅漫画的标题是《截错了》,画面反映的环境是在手术室里,情景在手术之后,画面中共有三个人物:一个患者躺在病床上,右腿被截掉了,包着纱布。一只手拿着“左腿截肢”的纸,一只手指着自己的左腿,大喊大叫,满头是汗,一位医生正在擦手,听到患者的喊叫转过头,一副满不在乎的样子,一位写手术记录的护士歪着嘴,不知如何是好,无法下笔。
这份试卷对画面内容说明得较好,要说的基本上都写出来了,条理清楚,语句也简明,属一类卷。
其二:
《给六指做整形手术》这幅漫画上画了一只做过整形手术的右手。本来,这只手是六指,那多出的小指是枝生在小指旁边的,可是医生截取时,却把大指截去了。现在,这只手也变成了“五指”。画面右边写着题目:给六指做整形手术。《截错了》这幅漫画画的是手术室中,截肢手术完成后,躺在床上的病人忽然满头大汗地发现,他的右腿被截去了,而他手中的证明上明明写着“左腿截肢”呀。面对急得要命的病人,粗心大意的医生与护士目瞪口呆了。原来他们截错了。
这份答卷内容完整、准确、细致,全篇用说明的语言,有条理、有顺序地对两幅画一一加以说明,判为一类卷,得满分20分。
《给六指做整形手术》这幅漫画上画的是一只不知道该算是正常还是不正常的手。因为正常人的手指有五个手指,这只手也有五个手指,但是这只手除去了一个大拇指,而在小拇指后面却多个手指。这样一来缺少了大拇指手的功能就不完整了,而多出来的这个指头想必有一定的用处。《截错了》这幅漫画画的是一个男病人睡在床上,手上拿着手术单上写的是左腿截肢,但他的右腿却被截了,左腿反而没有被截掉,他正在寻问医生。
这份答卷内容完整、准确,条理比较清楚,语言通顺。但说明得不够细致,表述有些地方也欠简明。判为二类卷,得15分。
漫画《给六指做整形手术》画面是一只手,做完手术的手该是正常的手吧?可让人触目惊心的是:整形整的是大姆指,那畸形的六指却完好保存着,可以想象手的主人这时如何痛不欲生。漫画《截错了》有着异曲同工之妙。病人看着自己尚还“健在”的左腿大汗淋漓,两眼发直,举着“左腿截肢”的手术报告给医生看时,医生才像忽然苏醒了一样,可这时还能挽回吗?
这份答卷没有用“说明文字”介绍两幅画,在叙述时带有考生的感情色彩,内容也不够完整、准确,语言比较累赘,将“拇指”错写成“姆指”。该卷被判为三类卷,得10分。
《给六指做整形手术》表现出当代一些人该做的不做。不要做的事偏偏去做。另一方面有一些做事不分主次。说明现代的人做事情要看清全局,不要不分清红皂白,最终给别人造成巨大的损失。
《截错了》也表现出一些不看清事物发展的动向,只要有问题,立即给予解决,但是造成的后果往往没有考虑到。如果一个国家的领导机关像这样的话,那会给人民造成巨大的损失,以及人民对国家信任程度降低。造成以后工作上的不便。
这份答卷对两幅画未做任何介绍,写成了议论文。判为四类卷,得3分。
其一:
我更喜欢漫画《给六指做整形手术》
《给六指做整形手术》和《截错了》无疑都是针砭时弊的漫画佳作。但仔细品评把玩一番,我更喜欢《给六指做整形手术》,因为它构图更简洁、创意更新奇、寓意更深广。 构图简洁是《给》的第一大特点。整个画面就是一只整形后的手,拇指被截掉,多余的小指还留着,此外别无他物。漫画是艺术,艺术的最高境界是简洁。《给》可谓达到了以少胜多的艺术境界,仅此一只手,给读者以多么丰富的联想和想象的广阔的空间。而《截》在这方面就颇为逊色,构图繁琐,画面复杂,医生病人充塞画面,给人以繁冗拖沓之感。 创意新奇是《给》的第二个特点。一只张开的大手,被切去的拇指留下的残缺,小指边上那多余难看的枝指,构成了一种新奇的审美意象。叫人在触目惊心之时自然把切去的拇指和多余的枝指联系起来,进而由此及彼联想翩翩。以一手而包孕大千世界,构思何等奇特,创意何其新巧。而《截》则以叙事的笔法,通过画面告诉你一件离奇的事,因而没能创造出像《给》
那种引人入胜的艺术境界。
寓意深广更是《给》远过于《截》的又一大特点。那蒙冤被整除的拇指,那畸形却依然健在的枝指,会使你想到些什么?当今的社会正处于改革整形之中,可惜我们有时是整掉了优秀的民族文化,却保护了那些畸形变态的低俗文化;一个单位本该优胜劣汰,但被整掉的有时是优秀人才,被庇护留下的往往是庸才。诸如此类,那些良莠不分的颠倒错乱的社会现象,不都是漫画《给》针砭抨击的对象吗?如此深刻的寓意,包含如此广泛的社会内容,正是《截》所望尘莫及的。因为《截》是直接告诉你“截错了”,你一看便知,一想就明,似乎没有什么更深广的寓意值得你去追捉思索了。
两相比较,漫画《给》以简洁的构图、新奇的创意、深广的寓意远胜于《截》。所以我更加喜欢《给》,它令我玩味无穷、爱不释手。
扣住一个“更”字,两相比较,说理充分,是本文的成功之处。起首扣题,总述“我更喜欢”的理由是“构图更简洁、创意更新奇、寓意更深广”,总领全文,出手不凡。接着分三层展开,在比较中赏析说理。从构图说到创意,再说到寓意,都是在比较鉴赏中紧扣一个“更”字,突出一个“更”字。结尾处变换句式,再扣一个“更”字,回眸一笑,意味深长。紧扣题意,遵命作文,是考场作文之大道,本文堪称得道之作,所以它获得满分40分。
其二:
我更喜欢漫画《截错了》
两幅漫画,反映了相同的主题,然而我更喜欢《截错了》。仔细推敲一下原因,也不外乎一点,那就是《截错了》这幅漫画非常生动形象地揭示了主旨,而《给六指做整形手术》在形式上却显得略逊一筹。
古人云:言之无文,行而不远。意思是说没有文采的语言是不能久远流传的。我觉得漫画也应如此。因为只有那些形式生动、易为大众接受的作品,才为人民所喜闻乐道,从而达到漫画的惩戒丑恶、颂扬美好的目的。如果一幅漫画,反映的主旨是非常好的,只是由于形式的古板艰涩而使观者见之如看三维图,那么我想许多人会敬而远之的。当然漫画反映社会这一目的也就不能够实现。
对《给六指做整形手术》和《截错了》两幅漫画进行比较,就会发现前者以做错了手术的六指为画面,确实会使人产生联想,但是对于一些文化品位较低的观者,要深入领会其主旨和精髓,决不能说是轻而易举的事,而《截错了》则不同,它从手术室中病人的愕然、医生的冷漠及无动于衷,反映出个别医生的低劣的道德,其灵魂的龌龊,昭然若揭。我想无论小学生还是老教授,都是易于接受的。如此淋漓尽致的漫画,如果让张飞、李逵之辈看了,说不定也会勃然而大怒的。
写到这里,想起一则轶事。宋祁与欧阳修共同撰写历史,宋祁特爱用艰涩的字眼,比如和尚还俗务农,他写为“发而农”。后来欧阳修便想办法给他提意见,在门上写了“宵寝匪贞,札闼洪休”八个字。宋祁见后不以为然:“不就是夜梦不祥,题门大吉吗?何苦这么写!”欧阳修大笑:“你写历史不是如此吗?比如某事某事,你不该变通一下吗?”宋祁大惭,改掉了自己的毛病。写文章艰涩会让人难懂,漫画不也是如此吗?
艺术源于生活,同时是为了生活。漫画作为大众化的艺术形式,更应该做到雅俗共赏,才能更好地发挥其社会作用,而这正是我喜欢《截错了》这幅漫画的理由。
这是一篇优秀的高考作文。它的一大优点是说理透彻、充分。本文的作者主要是从漫画的形
式上来谈更喜欢《截错了》的理由。首先引用“言之无文,行而不远”以此来阐 明漫画要达到反映社会的目的必须做到“形式生动、易为大众接受”,接着从形式上对两幅漫画进行比较,然后以宋祁与欧阳修撰写历史为例,进一步阐述,最后上升到理论的高度,指出“漫画作为大众化的艺术,更应该做到雅俗共赏,才能更好地发挥其社会作用”。这样,由于作者以理论为指导,以事实为依据,因而使说理透彻而充分。总之,作者没有局限于对两幅漫画的简单比较,而是拓展开去,从漫画这一艺术形式的目的上去谈,足见作者有较高的理论水平和一定的鉴赏能力。得满分。
其三:
我更喜欢漫画《给六指做整形手术》
这里有两幅漫画。一幅《给六指做整形手术》,一幅《截错了》。两种情景,反映的却都是医生马虎,造成失误。有人说第一幅好,有人说第二幅好,我呢,却觉得更喜欢第一幅《给六指做整形手术》。
漫画总是来源于生活,反映生活,又站在一定高度针砭时弊,扬善抑恶的。就拿这两幅漫画来说,虽然反映的都是一些工作不认真、不负责任而造成的恶劣影响,但仔细比较,仍会发现同中有异,第一幅更值得深思回味。
第一幅漫画,整个画面只有一只手,与第二幅相比不可不谓简炼。简炼不是单薄。漫画如同小小说最讲究寥寥几笔见真义,粗粗勾勒知内涵。这一只手的赫然出场,便令人不由心头一颤,再读那句旁白,仔细回味,便觉触目惊心。整形、整形,整去没用的、畸形的,保留有用的、正常的。但是,这只手偏偏整掉了大拇指,一根“小六”却留了下来滥竽充数。不著一字,不闻一语,只朝你面前一伸:自己看吧。此时,无论你是谁,也不会无动于衷,无论是谁也不由你不震惊,不诧异,不心痛,不愤怒!“此时无声胜有声”,我的心难怪要为它抽搐,为它呼号!这是第二幅所不及的。
漫画的责任在于引导人们去反思生活。看到第一幅漫画,那种刺痛的感觉马上使人想起了生活的一幕幕。考场上学生因为马虎丢分,碎了大学梦;森林中游人因为粗心掷下烟头引发了特大火灾;工作中,工作人员玩忽职守,不负责任,给国家、给人民带来了巨大损失。“乌鲁木齐”何以变作了“鸟鲁木齐”?美国航天飞机何以升空后失事坠毁?都是因为总有一些人马虎粗心,使一些本能够避免的灾难不可避免地发生了。
一幕幕情景闪现在眼前,竟都化作了那只病态的手。不说话,却仿佛遍体都在呻吟,都在声讨;不见情绪,却仿佛根根都在摇头叹息,都在警省。这比第二幅中那纷飞的汗水,那失声的叫喊,那惊惶的表情更传神、更丰富、更能打动人心。它批判得出神入化,讽刺得入木三分,生动形象地揭露了某些人的面目,鞭挞了某些人丑恶的灵魂,也将他们不负责任所造成的痛苦形象地表达了出来,从而引起人们深深地思索。
我更喜欢漫画《给六指做整形手术》,它以简洁的画面引起我深深的反思。为什么?为什么?那深刻的教训将引导我们去反省自身,去检讨这人为的灾难的后果。为了国家、集体、人民这双健全的手少受一些伤害,多一些健康完美,我们每个公民都要引漫画为诫,从自己做起吧!认真负责,是我们的美德。
这是一份高考作文满分卷。其优点是:一、审题准。今年有相当一部分考生在审题上失准,多采用引、议、联、结的结构形成,就一幅漫画生发开来。而这位考生却紧扣题目要求,在深刻理解画意的基础上,进行比较,紧扣了题意。二、立意深。虽然这位考生没有较多的漫画理论知识,但他能够根据自己的感受去评论,从漫画的基本手法到内涵,结合自己的理解,抨击了不负责任,马马虎虎的工作作风。内容丰富、评论深刻。三、语言流畅。这是本文最
突出的优点。或整或散,挥洒自如。于整齐中求变化,显示了该生较高的写作功底。尽管有些词句还欠准确,但高考作文毕竟还不是作文竞赛,在有限的时间里,能写出这样的文章,的确是难能可贵的。
其四:
我更喜欢漫画《截错了》
这两幅漫画表面上是在讽刺医生粗心大意,事实上却在讽刺所有的“马大哈”,他们的马虎所造成的损失难以挽回。这两幅漫画的内容和意图十分相近,但相比较而言,我更喜欢漫画《截错了》。
首先,在《给六指做整形手术》中,仅仅是画面主体部分画一只术后的手掌,画面太抽象,若不是漫画题目,叫人很难看懂意思。而在《截错了》中,画面就形象多了,生动多了,病人、医生、护士的动作,神态历历在目、清晰可辨,使看懂这幅漫画成为一件很简单的事。 艺术的目的是让人们在生活中发现美,而漫画作为一种独特的艺术,通过生活中的种种现象,或丑或美,或大或小,或喜或忧,给予人们某种特定的启示,获得一定的美感。所以漫画必须通俗易懂,才能被广大群众所接受。倘若一幅漫画看了之后,叫人百思不得其解,那又怎能称为一幅漫画?倒不如留给考古学家仔细研究一番吧!
其次,《截错了》这幅漫画能够充分利用美术这种工具来表达意图。右腿画成半截儿,再画上绷带,一眼就知道右腿刚做了截肢手术。病人左手拿着手术单,白纸黑字,清清楚楚的写着“左腿截肢”,但右手却指着被截的右腿,一下子把情节中的主要矛盾摆在人们面前。而《给六指做整形手术》,画面稍显粗糙,达不到这样的美术效果。
再次,从画面的效果来说,《给六指做整形手术》呈一种呆板的静态,远没有《截错了》这幅漫画的效果好。看前幅漫画好似看照片,看后一幅却好像看了一场生动的电影。 综上所述,我更喜欢漫画《截错了》。
该文选择漫画《截错了》为题目,是湖北省1996年高考八篇优秀作文中唯一的一篇,其突出特点是:一、题重“更”,同质相比,质为基础理解准确。文章对两幅漫画理解正确,首先肯定共同主旨,然后在此基础上,扣住题目的“更”展开论述。二、写重“比”,同中比异,异中显理会比较。文章在肯定两幅漫画内容相同的前提下,主要从漫画的表现手法方面比较其不同点,做到了言之成理。另外该文语言流畅洗炼,结构井然有序,也是其优点。得满分。
我更喜欢漫画《给六指做整形手术》
看了这幅漫画,真是令人哭笑不得,的确手术后病人从六指变回到五指,可是被截掉的却不是应截的第六指,而是病人的大拇指。可见这个给六指做整形手术的医生有多么不认真负责,可现在在各行各业中不都类似有这样的事件发生吗?如果这些对工作不认真负责的人不断增多,那么我们社会主义现代化建设的宏伟目标还怎么实现呢?
所以说,我们在日常生活、学习、工作中对待每一件事都应有严谨的态度,对工作一定要认真负责。
给六指截错了手指,只是给一个人带来不幸,如果我们重大工作和问题上也不认真负责,那么将会给国家和整个人类带来不幸。
美国发射的一颗卫星,在组装时,由于组装人员将一颗仅比计划长了几厘米的螺丝拧了上去,在发射后,这颗螺丝钉引起了电路的短路,使整个卫星报废,损失了数亿美元。这只是一个工作人员的一时疏忽,可就使整个航天计划破产。如果在日常工作中常出现这样的小错误,
虽然不会出现巨大的损失,但这些损失加在一起也是个惊人的数字,如果这样我们的国家承受的了吗?
当做,以上的问题只是少数,我们中的大多数还都在各自的工作岗位一丝不苟地认真工作。像众多的科学工作者,他们以严谨的态度,认真负责的工作精神去探索,去追求,为人类社会做出着重大的贡献。
我们不能像漫画中那样去实现六指向五指的转变,那样只能是事倍功半。我们要使“六指”变成像常人的一样的“五指”,我们就要以严谨的态度,认真负责去完成每一项工作,只有这样,通过我们每一个人的努力,我们才能实现社会主义现代化建设的宏伟目标。
1996年高考作文试卷,有不少考生谈喜欢某幅漫画的理由,都谈到要对工作认真负责,不然的话,就会造成严重的后果。应该说,这样理解也是正确的恰当的,不能认为这种分析就比较浅薄,一般化。像这份考卷,也是谈这个问题,中心明确,条理也清楚,能层层推进,有理有据,语句通顺,就一般情况看,写得还是可以的。但这份试卷存在一个明显的缺欠,就是没有按照题目注意事项中指出的“议论时要有比较”的要求写,这也是不少试卷共同存在的问题。其实对这两幅画作比较并不难,从不同的特点上分析一下,也就可以说出个所以然来。如果只习惯于一种套路,不能根据不同的要求写,思考、分析的能力受到阻滞,缺乏敏锐的思维能力,作文水平是很难得到提高的,这要引起作文教学的重视。这份试卷可评为9+10+7+4=30
我更喜欢漫画《给六指做整形手术》
我看到漫画《给六指做整形手术》和《截错了》后,想,如果这要是真事,那岂不荒唐啊! 这不禁让我联想到当今社会的医风。现在,由于改革开放,出现了很多“不合格”的医生。他们有的谋取私利、追求名气,有的假公济私,有的接受贿赂……我就不一一列举了。这些说明了歪风邪气在慢慢的滋长。现在,只要一去医院看病,就能感受到。轻者,看到他们对病人恶狠狠的,如同“横眉冷对千夫指”;重者,那就可想而知了。
不仅现在的医风如此,其它行业的风气也不好。有的商场里,售货员对顾客很凶,根本没有一点儿像他们的墙上所贴的“顾客是上帝”的感觉。有的顾客把买的不合身的衣服拿来,想换换,顾客说尽好话,多么客气,但售货员就是板着一副面孔,没有理由非要找理儿,瞅着干干净净的衣服非说是赃了,宛如一副“铁面包公”的表情。
两幅漫画,一个手指整形,一个截肢,它们虽然表达的内容不同,却反映出一个共同的问题,医生没有严谨的态度。一个是糊弄,图省事儿的办法,截去了一个拇指了事;一个是粗心马虎,还没有弄清问题是什么,就囫囵吞枣,截错了肢。 其它行业与医学都是同样的道理,虽然本质不同,但其性质是相似的。如果这类风气还不制止的话,将会蔓延,致使整个社会出现混乱的局面,严重危害着社会的生存与发展。
让我们都有一个严谨的态度吧,去创造美好的未来!
这份试卷,除了没有按题意要求作比较外,还有一个较大的问题,就是文章中心不明确,这是写议论文的大忌。文章虽然联系社会实际谈了一些问题,但基本上只是摆现象,看起来好象也说了一些情况,但没有贯串全文的明确的观点,或者说,文章没有明确说出喜欢某幅漫画的理由是什么,要扣住题目写的没有写出来。对漫画没有理解好,急于联系实际,就只好就事论事,罗列现象了。可评为5+7+5+3=20分。
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要学会“遵命作文”
评阅,,年高考作文答卷,最突出的感受是:我们的很多考生不善“遵命作文”。 高考作文必须“遵命”,除非你不想得分。一道作文题,总是体现了命题者的意图和旨趣的,“遵命作文”就是通其意、悟其趣、为其文。例如,,年的高考作文,题型是供料的小说明文加大议论文。提供的是两幅漫画,要求先写一段说明文字,介绍其画面内容,再以“我更喜欢漫画《 》”为题写一篇议论文。这道题的旨趣在于:以小作文考查认识、理解、说明的能力,以大作文考查认识、鉴赏、议论的能力。那么如何“遵命作文”呢?小作文应以平实的说明文字准确完整地介绍画面内容,条理要清楚,语言要简明。大作文则应紧扣命题中“我更喜欢”的“更”字,充分论说“我更喜欢”的理由。从漫画的选材、构图、创意和寓意等方面,将两幅漫画进行比较鉴赏,说长道短,可从艺术角度审美鉴赏,也可联系实际抒写感受,只要能说清楚我为什么“更喜欢”的理由,就算是“遵命作文”了。
可惜的是,偏离题意、误入歧途的大有人在。先说小作文。不是用说明文字介绍画面,而是用叙述语言编写故事。例如,“一个人的右手长了六个指头,他觉得很不美观,于是到医院里去做整形手术。但因为他没给医生送红包,结果被医生切掉了大拇指,多余的小指反而留下了。”这不在说画面,而是添枝加叶地说故事。还有过多地抒情议论,或者颠三倒四,错漏残缺说而不明者,也大有人在。大作文的普遍问题是不会扣住一个“更”字作比较鉴赏,而只是说我喜欢漫画某某,因为它使我认识到什么联想到什么,大多是在一种给材料确立观点发议论的常规套路上误入歧途了。此外,虽有所比较但比较点不集中,空发议论,或联想不合理等,也都是得不到高分的原因。
考生的失误再一次说明,学会“遵命作文”,乃是作文备考的第一关。高考《语文说明》对写作的第一条要求就是“能准确全面地理解题意”,这实际上是既强调要“遵命作文”,又指出了其要求和训练途径。
.说明类小作文
形式一:说明图画
【考题】仔细擦下面《给六指做整形手术》和《截错了》(图略)两幅漫画,用说明文字介绍两幅漫画的画面内容。
注意: ?两幅漫画分别说明,文字不必平均分配。?说明画面内容时,不要编故事。 ?要求内容完整准确,条理清楚,语言简明。?共200字左右。
【失误一】误将说明写成记叙文。例如:
手术室里,躺着左腿要截肢的病人阿毛。他的腿疼痛难忍,两名医生三下五除二就给截下来了。由于医生给他打了麻醉针,等他醒来一看,把嘴张得大大的,大呼:“大夫,我左
腿截肢,右腿怎么不见了”大夫回头一看,说:“行了,我再把你的左腿截了算了,免费赠送双拐,怎么样,”
【分析】,这是一篇四类卷的失误文。该文的失误主要在于文体错了,命题中已用着重号标明了用“说明文字”介绍两幅画面的内容,而且在“注意”中第二项也特别提示考生“不要编故事”。而该考生显然是在编写故事,作文中几平没青说明性的语言,这就严重背离了命题的要求,直接影响了作文的成绩。
【失误二】误将说明写成议论文。例如:
事情总是有个对立面的,就拿仔细和粗心来说吧,这就是一组对立面。两幅漫画都是说的粗心马虎带来的恶果。
本应截去一个枝指却截去了拇指,本应截去左腿却截去了右腿;有疾的不医,无疾的乱医,可见做事情马虎粗心会使人一事无成。
【分析】该文的失误同样是将文体写错了,把说明性文章写成了议论文,而幅两幅漫画混在了一起,既没育按题目要求分别说明,也没有介绍画面上的内客,反而把该说明的内容当成了议论“马虎的危害”这一论点的论据。因此,就整体而言,尽管文字还通顺,条理也是清晰的,但文体严重失误。
【优秀作文】
刚刚看到两幅主题颇为相似的漫画,耐人寻味。一幅名叫《给六指做整形手术》,不知做手术的是一位怎样粗心的大夫,画面上出现的尽竟是一只被切除了健康的大拇指、保留了畸形小指的大手~另一幅叫做《截错了》,画面上一位刚刚做完截肢手术的病人,正高举着清清楚楚写有“左腿截肢”的诊断书,气愤而惊恐地冲着大夫和护士大叫。而此时的大夫和护士,望着这个被截掉的右腿和完好无损的左腿,正是一副瞠目结舌、不知所措的模样。 【考题】1991年小作文三南(湖南、云南、海南)卷仔细观察下面的讽刺漫画:
妈妈喜欢吃鱼头,我从小就知道
描述这两个画面,正确表现画面的内容,主要用描写的手法。要求内容具体,描写生动,200字。
【解析】把第一幅漫画和第二幅漫画,作纯客观的描写即可,不必引申论理、抒情议论等。可以分开来描写,也可以合起来描写,注意内容要具体些,不要过于笼统。
【优秀作文】这两幅漫画一幅画了一位母亲在给儿子夹鱼肉,而另外一幅则画了一个儿子在给母亲夹鱼头,下面有一行话:妈妈喜欢吃鱼头,我从小就知道。第一幅漫画上,母亲和儿子都很开心,而第二幅漫画上,母亲却不开心,显然是儿子的不懂事,让母亲很伤心。母亲为了让孩子吃好,说自己喜欢吃鱼头,而儿子长大后,依然不能明白母亲的苦心,这怎么能让母亲不伤心呢,
【评点】这段文字,很好地描写出来画面的内容,内容具体,描写生动。并显示出了,儿子未能理解母亲的良苦用心,母亲的失望、伤心。
形式二:说明事物
【考题】1993年小作文.根据下图,写一段关于圆规的功能、构造和使用方法的说明性文字。200字左右。
【解析】读书的人很少不知道圆规的,大多数人都使用过圆规。根据我们使用的体验去说明,应该是不会很难的。看图示,它有三部分:圆规主体、延伸杆和墨线脚。先说明圆规的构造,再说明用圆规画圆或画弧线的方法即可。
【优秀作文】圆规是用来画圆和弧的工具。它由三个部分组成:圆规主体、延伸杆、墨线脚。圆规主体像个无臂的“人”形,两脚可以自由开合。一脚是尖针,是用来定圆心的;另一脚可以装上铅笔芯等,用来画弧和圆。画圆时,调节两脚距离就可以确定圆的半径,尖脚不动定为圆心,使装有铅笔芯的另一脚旋转360?,即可画出要画的圆。如需画出较大的圆,可先旋松尖脚上的螺丝,取下尖针,接上延伸杆,并在另一脚上续接墨线脚,使之与延伸杆的尖脚长度相等,再调节所需半径即可。
【评点】这段文字对所说明的圆规的结构和功能介绍得很清楚,语言准确而简练。并特别说明了用圆规画圆或画弧线的方法。
【真题】2005年小作文重庆卷,以“筷子”为对象写一篇说明文。
要求:?符合说明文文体特点。?字数不少于200字。 【解析】“筷子”这说明对象并不是罕见的,是大家天天都在接触、运用的物品,所以,每个人都应该是有话可说的。说明“筷子”,可从筷子的种别、用途、运用方法等方面入手,也可特地提及不用公筷、倡议环保等,还可从筷子的历史演化、筷子所代表的中华历史文明等方面入手。可用平实的说明,就像普通说明文那样;也可用生动的说明,如“筷子的自述”等等。只要我们熟习它,将说明的层次分清,尽量用新奇、生动的言语进行描画即可。 【例文】
筷子
我是一双结构复杂的筷子,出生于中国,还被荣幸地称为“中国的第五大发明”。
自从我在中国扎下了根,经过发展,我们筷子家族越来越庞大了,姐妹特别多。有竹制的、木制的、塑料制的,还有象牙制的、金制的、银制的,等等。通常状况下,我们的身高
约为25厘米,下端圆,上端方,看上去匀称,令人心仪。
人们吃饭时简直离不开我,由于我是他们吃饭的工具,人们吃饭前,都会将我从筷兜里悄然取出,在桌上放好,等饭菜做好后就直接动用我;吃完后,又会把我收起来清洗洁净后
送回筷兜里。如此循环,直到我们“老掉牙”,最后“死掉”。
【评点】本文采用了拟人的说明方法,用第一人称,经过“我”(筷子)的自述,给我们介绍了筷子的历史、种类、结构、作用等。全文条理、层次清楚,语言生动,亲切感人,生动说明了筷子的特点,是一篇符合要求的应试说明文。文章开门见山,直接引出说明对象,然后依次介绍了筷子的历史、荣誉称号、种类、结构、作用等。同时,采用分种别、举数字等说明方法,清楚、准确地说明了筷子的种类、结构等特点。“看上去匀称”“直到我们‘老
掉牙’,最后‘死掉’”等言语,不只生动,而且准确无误地说明了筷子的特点。
作文二:《[精品]1996年高考作文》5800字
1996年高考作文
作文题:仔细观察下面《给六指做整形手术》和《截错了》两幅漫画,完成下题。
1(用说明文字介绍两幅漫画的画面内容。
注意:?两幅漫画分别说明,文字不必平均分配。
?说明画面内容时,不要编故事。
?要求内容完整准确,条理清楚,语言简明。
?共200字左右。
2(在一次漫画欣赏会上,对这两幅漫画,有人说这幅好,有人说我喜欢那幅,那么你呢,请以“我更喜欢漫画《 》”为题,写一篇议论文,表达你的看法。
?把你喜欢的那幅漫画的标题填写在作文题的空白处。
?议论时要有比较,有充分说出自己的感受和理由。
?不少于600字。
审题分析
1996年的高考作文属漫画作文,在历届高考中并不常见。小作文以说明性文字为主,要求用描写手法表现画面内容,属于介绍性的,准确简明地介绍说明事物是这类题型的重点,要求考生具备一定的概括说明、准确描述的能力。大作文是考对事物的自我认识的文学评论。很多考生不能区分读后感和读后评的写法的差别,导致审题的失误,议论方向不明。读后感重在“感想”,关键在于联系实际,包括个人实际或社会实际。写读后感,应该用作品中的人物、事迹、观点来衡量自己以往的言行,决定取舍。读后评重在“评析”,它的说理过程往往采用叙——析——评的剖析方式。一般不需要联系实际,而是就作品论作品,评析作品本身所具有的价值。
1996年高考大作文就应该写成读后评,应该对作品作精辟深刻的分析,通过对两幅漫画的比较或根据漫画本身的魅力(主要是反映生活的力度)来议论,说明自己更喜欢的理由。读后评是文学评论,范围较广。对于中学生来说,写读后评,从内容着手可以评析作品的主题或选取材料的特色;从文章的结构着手可以评析作品在前后照应、过渡或剪裁等方面的特色;从章法着手可以评析文章的抑扬、对比、映衬或铺垫等方面的技巧;从文章的表现手法着手可以评析作品写人绘景状物等方面的特色。1996年高考作文就应从漫画的表现手法切入。写读后评的步骤可概括为:观点——回评——析理归纳。首先根据作文要求,就材料内容确立自己的看法,提出中心论点。然后再根据中心论点,回到原材料中去,对材料条分缕析,从不同角度给予阐释(可以采用分论点的形式进行)。最后在回评的基础上,进入更深一层的挖掘,综合分析,达到认识上的升华,归纳出结论。但要注意一点,写读后评应抓住原作品最明显的特点作为评论点,切不可面面俱到,蜻蜓点水。
例文
[小作文]1
这里有两幅漫画,第一幅的标题是《给六指做整形手术》,画面中有一只右手,手的大拇指被切掉了,而需要截去的“六指”却安然无恙。第二幅漫画的标题是《截错了》,画面反映的环境是在手术室里,情景在手术之后,画面中共有三个人物:一个患者躺在病床上,右腿被截掉了,包着纱布。一只手拿着“左腿截肢”的纸,一只手指着自己的左腿,大喊大叫,满头是汗。一位医生正在擦手,听到患者的喊叫转过头,一副满不在乎的样子。一位写手术记录的护士歪着嘴,不知如何是好,无法下笔。
简评;这篇习作对画面内容说明得较好,要说的基本上都写出来了,条理清楚,语言简明,且观察仔细,细节刻画比较生动。
[小作文]2一等卷
这里有两幅漫画,第一幅的标题是《给六指做整形手术》画面中有一只右手,手的大拇指被切掉了,而需要截去的"六指"却安然无恙。第二幅漫画的标题是《截错了》画面反映的环境是在手术室里,情景在手术之后,画面中共有三个人物:一个患者躺在病床上,右腿被截掉了,包着纱布。一只手拿着"左腿截肢"的纸,一只手指着自己的左腿,大喊大叫,满头是汗,一位医生正在擦手听到患者的喊叫转过头,一副满不在乎的样子,一位写手术记录的护士歪着嘴,不知如何是好,无法下笔。
[小作文]3二等卷
左图画了一只右手,在手的右边写着一行小字"给六指做整形手术"。这只手原有六个指头,多长了一个很小的指头,它长在小拇指的右侧,连指甲都没有,可以说是没有任何作用。但是这只手的大拇指却被截去了,保留了那个小指头。
右图画了在手术室里的一幕。图的右下角写了"截错了"三个小字。图中病人包扎着右腿,左手拿着一张纸,写有"左腿截肢",病人哭的泣不成声。站在手术室门口的医师和护士看着病人手中的纸,已是目瞪口呆了。
,简评,例3与例2相比较,问题就较明显了。虽然该文将漫画的主要内容写了出来,但语言方面的毛病较为明显:如"画了在手术室里的一幕"的说明欠准确。
更重要的是这篇作文对漫画中好脚被截,病人愤怒地手指保留下来的坏腿,这样一个重要内容遗漏了。
[小作文]4三等卷
《给六指做整形手术》这幅漫画画了一个作了六指整形手术的手,医生本应切除那个发育不完全的,长在小拇指下边的"第六指",但不知是粗心还是故意地把发育正常的大拇指砍了下去,结果这只手不伦不类地少了一个正常的大拇指,多了一个畸形的"小指"。
《截错了》描绘一个本来要做左腿截肢手术的病人却被那个大马虎医生截去了右腿,而那个马虎医生不但没有向病人道歉反而站在一旁准备再做一次截肢手术,小护士也正做术前检查,批评了某些医务工作者不负责的歪风。
,简评,这份试卷的问题较多,其中语言不准确更为突出。如:将第六指称之为"发育不完全的",应说"多余的枝指(或小枝指)"。说"医生准备再做一次截肢手术""小护士也正做术前检查",这些是考
生自己的主观推测,有"编故事"之嫌。这样不但不合题目要求,也不合说明文文体特点的要求。
为了使考生对高考作文的要求有更多的了解,再选录一些高考中出现的优秀作文,供参考。
因为前面已就高考作文的有关问题进行了某些分析,所以在此不再对例文作评析。
[大作文]1
我更喜欢漫画《给六指做整形手术》
应该说《给六指做整形手术》和《截错了》这两幅漫画都有一个共同点,那就是所表现的内容大致相同,都是做手术出现了差错,事与愿违。但在我看来它们所要反映的更深层次的东西却不同,也许这是我更偏爱《给六指做整形手术》这幅漫画的一个重要原因。
细细分析,两幅漫画从两个不同的方面反映了如今的社会问题。就《截错了》这幅漫画而言,它反映的问题是如今医生对工作不负责,医疗事故屡有发生。医生的责任心不强,是造成这一现象的主要原因。不过这一现象毕竟是少数,它还不足以成为影响整个社会风气的大问题。而《给六指做整形手术》这幅漫画却不仅反映医生对工作不负责这一个问题。
我们不妨细细推敲一下。当我看到这幅漫画的时候,我并不惊异于整形手术的失败,而首先是想到正常手指与畸形手指的不同,随即联想到这两种不同的手指似乎代表着两种不同类型的人。正常的手指代表着那些勤勤恳恳、默默无闻,为祖国的发展贡献自己力量的人们。他们用自己的双手推动着社会的发展,起到了中流砥柱的作用,像孔繁森、李润五。正是因为有了他们,祖国这双充满力量的手才能克服一切困难,变得更加生气勃勃。而那根畸形的手指似乎又代表着一些阻碍社会前进的社会寄生虫。如果从这个角度看,这幅漫画所反映的就是一个"去善兴恶"的不良现象。这一现象在某些地区确实存在。恶霸横行乡里的事件并不是没有。好在我们社会对这些现象很重视,正如漫画所表现的内容,毕竟正常的手指占多数,社会环境还是一个健康的氛围。应该说这幅漫画恰到好处地揭示了这一问题,值得引起我们每个人的认真思考。
另外我偏爱这幅画的另一个原因,就是作者以简洁的笔画,表现出了一个很值得思考的问题。它的清新简洁使读者在不知不觉中感受到了一个并不轻松的话题。我以为这正是作画者的高明之处。
两幅画有类似之处,又各有千秋。而我更深地被《给六指做整形手术》这幅画所反映的问题所震撼,更深地被它的简洁所吸引,因此,我更喜欢漫画《给六指做整形手术》。(1996年高考作文三类文)
,简评,这篇作文对两幅漫画作了比较,分别从两幅漫画反映的深层次的东西不同,和肯定《给六指做整形手术》画得清新简洁,这两方面进行比较。
考生在评论中谈了个人看法,说明喜欢这幅漫画的理由--"反映一个'去善兴恶'的不良现象"。这个见解较深刻。
这篇作文比较重视说理,而不是空下结论。这就是有分析,即有论证过程。
文章层次分明,语言表达清楚,语句顺畅。
[大作文]2 我更喜欢漫画《给大指做整形手术》
看了这幅漫画,真是令人哭笑不得,的确手术后病人从六指变回到五指,可是被截掉的却不是应截的第六指,而是病人的大拇指。可见这个给六指做整形手术的医生有多么不认真负责,可现在在各行各业中不都类似有这样的事件发生吗?如果这些对工作不认真负责的人不断增多,那么我们社会主义现代化建设的宏伟目标还怎么实现呢?
所以说,我们在日常生活、学习、工作中对待每一件事都应有严谨的态度,对工作一定要认真负责。
给六指截错了手指,只是给一个人带来不幸,如果我们重大工作和问题上也不认真负责,那么将会给国家和整个人类带来不幸。
美国发射的一颗卫星,在组装时,由于组装人员将一颗仅比计划长了几厘米的螺丝拧了上去,在发射后,这颗螺丝钉引起了电路的短路,使整个卫星报废,损失了数亿美元。这只是一个工作人员的一时疏忽,可就使整个航天计划破产。如果在日常工作中常出现这样的小错误,虽然不会出现巨大的损失,但这些损失加在一起也是个惊人的数字,如果这样我们的国家承受得了吗?
当然,以上的问题只是极少数,我们中的大多数还都在各自的工作岗位上一丝不苟地认真工作。像众多的科学工作者,他们以严谨的态度,认真负责的工作精神去探索,去追求,为人类社会作出着重大的贡献。
我们不能像漫画中那样去实现六指向五指的转变,那样只能是事倍功半。我们要使"六指"变成像常人一样的"五指",我们就要以严谨的态度,认真负责去完成每一项工作,只有这样,通过我们每一个人的努力,我们才能实现社会主义现代化建设的宏伟目标。(1986年高考作文二类文)
,简评,本文中心明确,条理较清,有推理过程。但是本文存在一个最大的毛病--论证中缺少对两幅画的"比较"分析,而不合题目"议论时要有比较"的要求。问题出在审题上,对"比较"一词在这里的重要性认识不足。
可见,审题之重要,它对如何行文有极大影响。
[大作文]3 我更喜欢漫画《给六指做整形手术》
我看到漫画《给六指做整形手术》和《截错了》后,想,如果这要是真事,那岂不荒唐啊!
这不禁让我联想到当今社会的医风。现在,由于改革开放,出现了很多"不合格"的医生。他们有的谋取私利、追求名气,有的假公济私,有的接受贿赂??我就不一一列举了。这些说明了歪风邪气在慢慢的滋长。现在,只要一去医院看病,就能感受到。轻者,看到他们对病人恶狠狠的,如同"横眉冷对千夫指";重者,那就可想而知了。
不仅现在的医风如此,其他行业的风气也不好。有的商场里,售货员对顾客很凶,根本没有一点儿像他们在墙上所贴的"顾客是上帝"的感觉。有的顾客把买的不合身的衣服拿来,想换换,顾客说尽好话,多么客气,但售货员就是板着一副面孔,没有理由非要找理儿,瞅着干干净净的衣服非说是脏了,宛如一副"铁面包公"的表情。
两幅漫画,一个手指整形,一个截肢,它们虽然表达的内容不同,却反映出一个共同的问题,医生没有严谨的态度。一个是糊弄,图省事儿的办法,截去一个拇指了事;一个是粗心马虎,还没有弄清问题是什么,就囫囵吞枣,截错了肢。
其他行业与医学都是同样的道理,虽然本质不同,但其性质是相似的。如果这类风气还不制止的话,将会蔓延,致使整个社会出现混乱的局面,严重危害着社会的生存与发展。
让我们都有一个严谨的态度吧,去创造美好的未来! (1996年高考作文三类文)
,简评,这份试卷,作为议论文论点不明确,"千古文章立意为本",该文失了"本"。作者只是摆了一些社会现象,但仅在于"摆",不知摆的目的是要说明道理,这又是写议论文的大忌。
文中没有"比较"内容,不合题意要求。
造成这份答卷失利的主要原因:一是对议论文的文体特征不明白,对如何写议论文也就更不清楚了。此外,这份答卷还反映了考生审题能力较差。
我们再看两篇更喜欢《截错了》这幅漫画的一类文。
[大作文]4
我更喜欢《截错了》
《给六指做整形手术》和《截错了》这两幅漫画各具特色,但是从欣赏的角度看,相比之下,我更喜欢漫画《截错了》。
首先,《截错了》的讽刺力更强。
《给六指做整形手术》画面上的手掌多了一个枝指,这虽有碍于美观,但尚能运用自如。切掉重要的拇指,会给生活带来诸多不便,但生活上仍能"独立自主、自力更生"。《截错了》就不同了。健康的右腿被错截后,有病的左腿亦得截掉。结果,病人的两条腿都没有啦,真是寸步难行,生活上只好"依靠外援"了。所以,《截错了》更能一针见血地道出那些不负责任者所造成的不可挽救的严重恶果,使人们对那些不负责任的人更为憎恶,因而使这幅漫画具有更强的讽刺力量。
其次,《截错了》这幅漫画运用了夸张的手法,真实地反映了现实生活,具有震撼人心的艺术魅力,教育意义更大。
报纸上曾经披露过这么一例医疗事故,某医学院附属医院,由于医护人员粗心大意,竟将两个不同病因等待手术的患儿弄错,一个本该做扁桃体剥离术的患儿被误做了心内修补术,另一个该做心内修补术的患儿竟被摘除了扁桃体。这样阴差阳错的手术,使只有四五岁的患儿惨遭不应有的痛苦,险些危及生命。可见,作为一名医生,认真负责的精神多么重要;作为一名工作者,一丝不苟的工作态度多么重要。《截错了》确是现实生活的反映,源于生活,用夸张的手法,又高于生活,更集中,更典型,体现了生活的真实和艺术的真实,同《给六指做整形手术》相比,具有更大的教育意义。
最后,从构图上看,《截错了》更为生动。
《给六指做整形手术》这幅漫画画面上只有一个手掌,构图似乎过于平板单调了些,画面是静态,没有给人以动感。而漫画《截错了》构图疏密有致,人物神态各异,栩栩如生,富有动感,具有动态美。这就使《截错了》更能吸引欣赏者的注意力,更能引起欣赏者的思索,更能引起欣赏者的共鸣。
总之,这两幅漫画,无论从讽刺的力度看,或者从教育的意义看,还是从构图上看,《截错了》都优于《给六指做整形手术》,所以我更喜欢漫画《截错了》。
,简析,本文作者审题能力强,从全文处处紧扣题目要求就可得出以上结论。
作者有欣赏能力,全文分别就漫画的讽刺效果、夸张手法、教育意义、构图方式几方面进行扼要的评论,言之有理,持之有故,以理服人。
本文在谈《截错了》的教育意义时,认识有一定深度。
作文三:《1996年高考英语满分作文(九篇)》6000字
1996年高考英语满分作文(九篇)
作文题目
你是李华, 申请到一家外资企业工作。 对方要求你用英语写一篇短文, 介绍
注意:1.情况介绍必须采用短文形式:
2.词数 100左右;
3.第—句已为你写好。
生词:竞赛— petition(n.)
My name is Li Hua.
满分作文(一)
My name is Li Hua. I’
ve seen the advertisement. I want to apply for the job. I was born i n February, 1977. I e from Dalian, Liaoning. I studied in Guang Ming primary school from 1984 to 1990. Then I studied in No.6 Middle School in Dalian from 1990 to 1996. The main subjects are Chinese, M aths, English, Physics, Chemistry and Computer. I am good at English and Computer. Last year I won the first prize in a puter petit ion in my school. In my spare time, I like swimming, skating, collect ing stamps and listening to pop music. I will be glad to work in you r pany.
满分作文(二)
My name is Li Hua. I was born in Dalian, Liaoning Province in Fe b. 1977. I started my school in Guangming Elementary School in 1984 a nd graduated there in 1990.
Then, I entered Dalian No.6 Middle School. The main subjects I studi
ed at school were Chinese, Mathematics, Physics, Chemistry, English a nd Computer. I was fond of English and Computer and good at them. Wh at the most important was that I won the first prize in the school co mputer petition last year. Now, I am very interested in it. I have a lot of hobbies in my spare time, such as, collecting stamps, swimm ing, skating, pop music, etc. I think I am petent for the job. I a m sure I will exert all myself to work hard.
满分作文(三)
My name is Li Hua. I was born in Dalian, Liaoning province in Fe bruary 1977. I entered Guangming Primary School at the age of seven a nd studied there from 1984 to 1990. Then I t to No.6 Middle Schoo l of Dalian and graduated recently. I studied Chinese, English, Physi cs, Chemistry and Computer at School. Of all the subjects I like Engl ish and Computer best and I learn them well. Last year I took part in the school puter petition and won the first place. I am fond o f listening to music and collecting stamps. My favourite sports are s wimming in summer and skating in winter.
满分作文(四)
My name is Li Hua. I was born in Feb. 1977 in Dalian, Liaoning p rovince. From 1984 to 1990, I studied in Guang Ming Primary School, a nd from 1990 to 1996 I studied in the No.6 Mid-school in Dalian city. The main subjects which I have learnt are Chinese, Maths, English, P hysics, Chemistry, Computer and so on. I am especially good at Englis h and Computer. I won the first prize in the puter petition in our school last year. I also have some hobbies. I like swimming, skat ing, collecting stamps and listening to music in my spare time. 满分作文(五)
My name is Li Hua. I was born in Dalian, Liaoning Province in F ebruary 1977. I studied in Guang Ming Elementary School between 1984 and 1990. Then I t to
the 6th Middle school in Dalian to continue my study during the years from 1990 to 1996 and graduated this summer. My major subjects at sc hool are Maths, Chinese, English, Physics, Chemistry and Computer. I got especially interested in English and puter. Last year, I won the first prize in School Computer Competition. And I have pass ed TOFEL last year also.
My hobby is swimming and skating. And I also like collecting st amps and listening to the pop music. I hope very much to work in you r pany and work as hard as I can.
满分作文(六)
My name is Li Hua. I was born in Dalian, Liaoning province inFeb ruary 1977. At the age of seven I t to school. I studied in Guang ming Primary School from 1984 to 1990. From then on I studied in No.6
Middle School of Dalian. And I graduated this summer. The subjects I have to learn at school are Chinese, Maths, English, Physics, Chemis try and Computer. I am very good at English and puter. I won the first prize in the puter petition of school last year. In spare time I like listening to the pop music and collecting stamps. And I like swimming and skating, too.
满分作文(七)
My name is Li Hua, and I was born in Feb. 1977. The city of Da lian in Liaoning is my hometown. I studied in Guangming primary schoo l from the year of 1984 to
1990. Then, I began my junior school in No.6 Middle School in Dalian . In the year of 1996, I graduated from that school when I finished m y senior courses.
I studied Chinese, Maths, English, Physics, Chemistry and Comput er as main subjects in my middle school, and I did well in English an d Computer science. I got the first prize in the petition of pu ter in my middle school with great honors.
I always spend my leisure time in swimming, skating as well as c ollecting stamps. I am fond of pop music, too.
满分作文(八)
My name is Li Hua. I think I have the ability to work in your co mpany. Now I want to introduce myself to you, hoping this can help y ou to know me better.
I was born in Dalian, Liaoning province in February 1977. I stud ied in Guangming Primary School from 1984 to 1990. After that I t on with my study in No.6 Middle School of Dalian, and graduated this summer. In the school, the main subjects that I have learned are Chin ese, maths, English, Physics, Chemistry and Computer. Of all the subj ects, I like English and Computer best. Last year I won the first pri ze in the school puter petition. In my spare time I like collec ting stamps, listening to popular music, swimming in summer and skat ing in winter.
I think all of these above will help me do my work well in the f uture, so please give me a chance and you will be surprised at my ach ievements.
满分作文(九)
My name is Li Hua. I was born in February 1977 in Dalian, Liaoni ng. I bagan my schooling in 1984 when I was seven. From 1984 to 1990, I studied in Guangming
Primary School. And then I studied in No.6 Middle School of Dalian fo r six years. Chinese, Maths, English, Physics, Chemistry and Compute r are the main subjects which I have learned at school. My favourite subjects are English and Computer, so I do well in them. Last year I
won the first prize in the school puter petition. I also have a lot of hobbies, such as swimming, skating, collecting stamps and l istening to pop music.
作文四:《1996年高考英语满分作文(九篇)》6300字
1996年高考英语满分作文(九篇)
作文题目
你是李华,申请到一家外资企业工作。对方要求你用英语写一篇短文,介绍
自己的基本情况。短文应包括下表所列全部内容。
姓名 李华 出生年1977年2出生地 辽宁大连
月 月
1984一1990光明小学
学历
1990—1996大连市第六中学
所学主要课 语文、数学、英语、物理、化学、电脑
程
特长 英语、电脑(去年在全校电脑竞赛中获第
—名)
业余爱 游泳、滑冰、集邮、流行音乐
好
注意:1(情况介绍必须采用短文形式:
2(词数100左右;
3(第—句已为你写好。
生词:竞赛—petition(n.)
My name is Li Hua(
满分作文(一)
My name is Li Hua. I’
ve seen the advertisement. I want to apply for the job. I was born in February, 1977. I e from Dalian, Liaoning. I studied in Guang Ming primary school from 1984 to 1990. Then I studied in No.6 Middle School in Dalian from 1990 to 1996. The main subjects are Chinese, Maths, English, Physics, Chemistry and Computer. I am good at English
and Computer. Last year I won the first prize in a puter petition in my school. In my spare time, I like swimming, skating, collecting stamps and listening to pop music. I will be glad to work in your pany.
满分作文(二)
My name is Li Hua. I was born in Dalian, Liaoning Province in Feb. 1977. I started my school in Guangming Elementary School in 1984 and graduated there in 1990.
Then, I entered Dalian No.6 Middle School. The main subjects I studi
ed at school were Chinese, Mathematics, Physics, Chemistry, English and Computer. I was fond of English and Computer and good at them. What the most important was that I won the first prize in the school puter petition last year. Now, I am very interested in it. I have
a lot of hobbies in my spare time, such as, collecting stamps, swimming, skating, pop music, etc. I think I am petent for the job. I am sure I will exert all myself to work hard.
满分作文(三)
My name is Li Hua. I was born in Dalian, Liaoning province in February 1977. I entered Guangming Primary School at the age of seven and studied there from 1984 to 1990. Then I t to No.6 Middle School of Dalian and graduated recently. I studied Chinese, English, Physics, Chemistry and Computer at School. Of all the subjects I like English and Computer best and I learn them well. Last year I took part in
the school puter petition and won the first place. I am fond of listening to music and collecting stamps. My favourite sports are swimming in summer and skating in winter.
满分作文(四)
My name is Li Hua. I was born in Feb. 1977 in Dalian, Liaoning p
From 1984 to 1990, I studied in Guang Ming Primary School, arovince.
nd from 1990 to 1996 I studied in the No.6 Mid-school in Dalian city.
The main subjects which I have learnt are Chinese, Maths, English, Physics, Chemistry, Computer and so on. I am especially good at English and Computer. I won the first prize in the puter petition in our school last year. I also have some hobbies. I like swimming, skating, collecting stamps and listening to music in my spare time. 满分作文(五)
My name is Li Hua. I was born in Dalian, Liaoning Province in February 1977. I studied in Guang Ming Elementary School between 1984 and 1990. Then I t to
the 6th Middle school in Dalian to continue my study during the years
from 1990 to 1996 and graduated this summer. My major subjects at school are Maths, Chinese, English, Physics, Chemistry and Computer.
I got especially interested in English and puter. Last year, I won the first prize in School Computer Competition. And I have passed TOFEL last year also.
My hobby is swimming and skating. And I also like collecting stamps and listening to the pop music. I hope very much to work in your pany and work as hard as I can.
满分作文(六)
My name is Li Hua. I was born in Dalian, Liaoning province inFebruary 1977. At the age of seven I t to school. I studied in Guangming Primary School from 1984 to 1990. From then on I studied in No.6
Middle School of Dalian. And I graduated this summer. The subjects I
have to learn at school are Chinese, Maths, English, Physics, Chemistry and Computer. I am very good at English and puter. I won the first prize in the puter petition of school last year. In spare
time I like listening to the pop music and collecting stamps. And I like swimming and skating, too.
作文(七) 满分
My name is Li Hua, and I was born in Feb. 1977. The city of Dalian in Liaoning is my hometown. I studied in Guangming primary school from the year of 1984 to
1990. Then, I began my junior school in No.6 Middle School in Dalian. In the year of 1996, I graduated from that school when I finished my senior courses.
I studied Chinese, Maths, English, Physics, Chemistry and Computer as main subjects in my middle school, and I did well in English and Computer science. I got the first prize in the petition of pu
in my middle school with great honors. ter
I always spend my leisure time in swimming, skating as well as collecting stamps. I am fond of pop music, too.
满分作文(八)
My name is Li Hua. I think I have the ability to work in your pany. Now I want to introduce myself to you, hoping this can help you to know me better.
I was born in Dalian, Liaoning province in February 1977. I studied in Guangming Primary School from 1984 to 1990. After that I t on with my study in No.6 Middle School of Dalian, and graduated this summer. In the school, the main subjects that I have learned are Chinese, maths, English, Physics, Chemistry and Computer. Of all the subjects, I like English and Computer best. Last year I won the first prize in the school puter petition. In my spare time I like collecting stamps, listening to popular music, swimming in summer and skating in winter.
I think all of these above will help me do my work well in the future, so please give me a chance and you will be surprised at my achievements.
满分作文(九)
My name is Li Hua. I was born in February 1977 in Dalian, Liaoning. I bagan my schooling in 1984 when I was seven. From 1984 to 1990,
I studied in Guangming
Primary School. And then I studied in No.6 Middle School of Dalian for six years. Chinese, Maths, English, Physics, Chemistry and Computer are the main subjects which I have learned at school. My favourite subjects are English and Computer, so I do well in them. Last year I
won the first prize in the school puter petition. I also have
a lot of hobbies, such as swimming, skating, collecting stamps and l
istening to pop music.
作文五:《1996年高考阅读》8500字
1996年高考阅读
A
We walked in so quietly that the nurse at the desk didn’ t even lift her eyes from the book. Mum pointed at a big chair by the door and I knew she wanted me to sit down. While I watched mouth open in surprise, Mum took off her hat and coat and gave them to me to hold. She walked quietly to the small room by the lift and took out a wet mop. She pushed the mop past the desk and as the nurse looked up, Mum nodded and said, “Very dirty floors.”
“ Yes, I’ m glad they’ ve finally decided to clean them,” the nurse answered. She loo ked at Mum strangely and said, “ But aren’t you working late?”
Mum just pushed harder, each swipe(拖一下 ) of the mop taking her farther and farther down the hall. I watched until she was out of sight and the nurse had turned back to writing in the big book.
After a long time Mum came back. Her eyes were shining. She quickly put the mop back and took my hand. As we turned to go out of the door, Mum bowed p olitely to the nurse and said, “Thank you.”
Outside, Mum told me, “Dagmar is fine. No fever.”
“You saw her, Mum?”
“ Of course. I told her about the hospital rules, and she will not expect us until tomorrow. Dad will stop worrying as well. It’ s a fine hospital. But such floors! A mo p is no good. You need a brush.”
51. When she took a mop from the small room what Mum really wanted to do was _____.
A. to clean the floor B. to please the nurse
C. to see a patient D. to surprise the story-teller 52. When the nurse talked to Mum she thought Mum was a _____.
A. nurse B. visitor
C. patient D. cleaner
53. After reading the story what can we infer about the hospital?
A. It is a children’ s hospital.
B. It has strict rules about visiting hours.
C. The conditions there aren’ t very good.
D. The nurses and doctors there don’ t work hard.
54. From the text we know that Dagmar is most likely _____.
A. the story-teller’ s sister B. Mum’ s friend
C. the story-teller’ s classmate D. Dad’ s boss
55. Which of the following words best describes Mum?
A. Strange. B. Warm-hearted.
C. Clever. D. Hard-working.
B
When you want to see if a library has the book you want, you can use the catalogue (目录 ) in the library. Most catalogues of books in a library take the form of
small cards kept in boxes. One way of arranging the cards is in ABC order by the family names of the writers.
Catalogue cards usually give the following important information: (1) the name of the writer, (2) the shelf-mark, that is, the Dewey number which helps people to find where the books are, (3) the title of the book, (4) the year of publication and the publisher, and (5) the number of pages in the book.
56. If you know the title of a book and want to find out if it is in the catalogue, what else do you need to know?
A. The shelf-mark. B. The name of the writer.
C. The Dewey number. D. The year of publication.
57. Which of the following is the kind of catalogue card described in the text?
C
Most animals have little connection with animals of a different kind, unless they hunt them for food. Sometimes, however, two kinds of animals e together in a partnership which does good to both of them. You may have noticed some birds sitting on the backs of sheep. This is not because they want a ride, but because they find easy food in the parasites(寄生虫 ) on sheep. The sheep allow the birds to do so because they remove the cause of disfort. So although they can manage Sometimes an animal has a plant partner. The relationship develops until the two partners cannot manage without each other. This is so in the corals(珊瑚 ) of the sea. In their skins they have tiny plants which act as “dustman”, taking some of the waste products from the corals and giving in return oxygen which the animal needs to breathe. If the plants are killed, or are even prevented from light so that they cannot live normally, the corals will die.
58. Some birds like to sit on a sheep because _____.
A. they can eat its parasites
B. they depend on the sheep for existence
C. they enjoy traveling with the sheep
D. they find the position most fortable
59. The underlined word “they” in the last sentence of the first paragraph refers to _____.
A. birds and parasites B. birds and sheep
C. parasites and sheep D. sheep, birds and parasites
60. It can be learnt from the text that the coral depends on the plant for _____. A. fort B. light
C. food D. oxygen
61. What does the second paragraph mainly discuss?
A. Some animals and plants depend on each other for existence.
B. Some animals and plants develop their relationship easily.
C. Some plants depend on each other for food.
D. Some animals live better together.
D
In the 19th century England people liked to go to the seaside. In those days, ladies wore long bathing dresses, and men wore bathing suits. Women did not walk about on the beach in their bathing dresses. They hired a bathing machine. A bathing machine was used for changing in, and for taking the bather down to the sea. It cost 2 pence to hire a machine and an attendant(侍者 ) . When she had paid, the bather climbed up the back steps and got into the bathing machine. Then she changed into her bathing dress. When she had changed, the machine was pulled down to the sea. The bathing machine stopped in the water and the bather t down the front steps into the water. If she did not want to get into the sea, the attendant pulled her in.
62. A 19th century English lady bathing in the sea would wear something like:
63. Who used the bathing machine?
A. Women bathers. B. Both men and women bathers. C. Bathers who couldn’ t swim. D. Bathers who couldn’ t walk. 64. A bathing machine was mainly used for _____.
A. giving the bather a pleasure ride on the beach
B. giving the bather some exercise before getting into the water
C. protecting the bather from catching cold from the sea wind
D. protecting the bather from being seen in a bathing dress out of water
65. In 19th century people who used the bathing machine usually did the following things. Which is the right order for doing them?
a. Changing into bathing clothes.
b. Getting out of the bathing machine.
c. Paying 2 pence.
d. Getting into the bathing machine.
e. Being taken down the beach.
f. Getting into the water.
A. e, d, a, b, f, c B. c, d, a, e, b, f
C. c, d, e, a, b, f D. d, a, e, b, f, c
E
EVENTS(赛事 )
A bike tour and race will be held on August 26 and 27(Sat. & Sun.). At 5:30am, the riders will leave Tian’ anmen Square and ride the first 35 kilometers as a training Then the next 55 kilometer leg, from Yanjiao to Jixian, will be the first petitive (竞争性的 ) part of the tour. The riders and their bikes will then be taken from Jixian to Changli.
The second racing leg of the tour will be from Changli to the seaside of Nandaibe, covering a distance of 20 kilometers. Saturday night includes the stay at Nandaihe and supper. Sunday morning is free for play at the seaside. At noon all the people and their bikes will be taken back to Beijing.
Cost: 200 yuan. Telephone: 4675027.
The Brazilian Football Club will play Beijing Guo ’ an Team at the Workers Stadium on August 26. The club has four national team players. Also ing is 1994 US World Cup star Romario who has promised to play for at least 45 minutes. Ticket prices: 60, 100, 150 yuan.
Time/Date: 4:30 pm, August 26(Sat.) Telephone: 5072.
The Third National Rock Climbing Competition will be held on August 26-27 at the Huairou Mountain-climbing Training Base. More than 10 teams from Beijing, Wuhan, Dalian, Jilin and other places will take part in it. A Japanese team will give an exhibition climbing. Free for spectators(观众 ) .
Take a long-distance bus from Dongzhimen to Huairou.
Time/Dates: 9-12 am, August 26 and 27.
Telephone: 7143177, 7144850, Wang Zhenghua.
66. The main purpose of announcing the above events is to give information about _____.
A. visiting teams
B. famous players
C. things to do for the weekend
D. prices to pay for the sports events
67. If you take part in the bike tour, you will ride for _____.
A. 35 kilometers B. 55 kilometers
C. 75 kilometers D. 110 kilometers
68. The underlined word “leg” in “Bicycle tour and race” probably means _____. A. race B. practice
C. part of the training D. part of the tour
69. What is special about the rock climbing petition?
A. A foreign team takes part in it.
B. You can watch it without paying.
C. You don’ t have to be a sportsman to take part.
D. The bus trip to the place of the petition is free.
70. If you want to find something to do for Saturday afternoon, which telephone number will you call?
A. 4675027. B. 7143177.
C. 5072. D. 7144850.
51— 55 CDBAC 56— 60 BAABD 61— 65 ADADB 66— 70 CDDBC
作文六:《1997年~1996年高考作文题选登》1700字
1997年,1996年高考作文题选登
?1977年各省,自治区,市作文命题
北 京,我在这战斗的一年里
天 津,1,他像雷锋同志那样
2,宏伟的目标鼓舞着我
上 海,1,“知识越多越反动”吗
2,在抓纲治国的日子里
——记先进人物二三事黑龙江,每当我唱起《东方红》
吉 林,伟大的胜利
——难忘的1976年10月
辽 宁,1,在沸腾的日子里
2,谈青年时代
河 北,1,我将怎样度过今后不
平凡的23年
2,园丁之歌
——记我最尊敬的一
位老师
河 南,我的心飞向**纪念堂
山 东,难忘的一天
山 西,为四个现代化做贡献
1
江 苏,苦战浙 江,路
安 徽,从“科学有险阻,苦战能过
关”谈起
江 西,1,,理科生,难忘的时刻
2,,文科生,当我想起雷
锋的时候
福 建,《大庆见闻一则》读后感
广 东,大治之年气象新
广 西,1,难忘的日子
2,我们要继承前辈艰苦
奋斗的优良传统
云 南,1.攻书莫畏难
2,青松赞
贵 州,大治之年气象新
四 川,《一个青年矿工的变化》读
书感
湖 南,心中有话向党说
湖 北,学雷锋的故事
陕 西,1,难忘的一天
2,致全国科学大会的一
封信
青 海,一万年太久,只争朝夕
2
宁 夏,1,我在报考大学的时候
2,难忘的一天
甘 肃,不到长城非好汉
新 疆,1,,文科生,每当想起敬
爱的**
2,,理科生,驳“难”
3,,理科生,在攀登的起
点上
4,,理科生,大治之年里
的几件小事
内蒙古,1,谈实事求是
2,在红旗下
西 藏,1,我的革命理想
2,难忘的一件事
3,批判“四人帮”的一个,
反动论点
台 湾,《仁与恕相互为用说》
?1978年
缩写《速度问题是一个政治问题》
?1979年
改写《第二次考试》为《陈伊玲的故事》
?1980年
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读《画蛋有感》
?1981年
读《毁树容易种树难》
?1982年
《先天下之忧而忧后天下之乐而乐》
?1983年
根据一幅题为“这里没有水,再换个地方挖”的漫画,写一段关于画的说明文字并自拟题目写一篇议论文。
?1984年
根据所给材料,写一篇对中学生作文的看法的议论文。题目自定。
?1985年
给《光明日报》编辑部写一封反映环境污染的信,呼吁尽快解决。
?1986年
树木?森林?气候——谈——
?1987年
1,写一篇简讯,报道育民小学举办游泳训练班取得的成绩。
2,写篇短文,谈理论对实践的指导意义。
?1988年
习惯
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?1989年
一位同学为填报高考志愿的事情感到苦恼,请你给他写封回信。
?1990年
根据一对小姑娘对玫瑰花有刺的不同看法,进行表情、动作、肖像描写,就第一个小姑娘的说法,自拟题目,展开议论。
?1991年
一、根据“圆”作想像作文。
二、某班开辩论会,一方的观点是“近墨者黑”,一方的观点是“近墨者未必黑”。请你选定方,写一篇发言稿参加辩论。
?1992年
1,根据众人对待垃圾的不同行为,写一篇记叙文。
2,根据材料进行分析,写篇议论文。
?1993年
围绕给同学补课该不该拿报酬的事,给校广播室写一篇广播稿。
?1994年
《尝试》
?1995年
一、根据寓言诗《鸟的评说》,任选诗中两种鸟,以《××与××的对话》为题写一个对话片断。
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二、根据《鸟的评说》,自拟题目,写一篇议论文。
?1996年
给两幅漫画,一是《给六指做整形手术》,一是《截错了》。要求为漫画配说明文,再写一篇“我更喜欢漫画《 》”的议论文。
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作文七:《1996年高考作文回顾与展望》3900字
作者:周振岳司君云
语文教学与研究 1997年01期
一、如何看今年的高考作文
图示作文在高考中已是第三次出现了。如1981年的《读〈毁树容易种树难〉》、1983年的漫画《挖井》、到今年的两幅漫画《给六指做整形手术》和《截错了》,经历了一个由简单向复杂、由单一向多样逐步发展的过程。图示作文是对传统命题形式的一种扩展与补充,它突破了命题作文和文字材料作文的某些局限和思维定势,给考生开阔了视野,为考生提供了写作上的灵活性和趣味性,与命题作文相比,更能检测考生综合运用阅读、理解、想象、分析、综合能力,同时它不易猜题,有较高的客观公正性,所以说今年的高考作文是成功的。
今年的高考作文,体现出稳中求变的原则。题型是考生熟悉的,但增加了难度,说明文中强调了内容的准确与完整,议论文侧重于两幅漫画的比较与分析,表达方式考查全面,学生有话可说,试题难度符合考试说明,它的最明显之处是明白无误地告诉我们这样一个信息:高考作文重在检测能力。
从导向性来讲,也给我们的作文教学留有很多启示。要想写好今年的作文,靠猜题押题、对号入座不行,脱离生活、脱离社会的封闭式教学也很难适应这种考查方式,靠背《作文大全》、《优秀作文选》过日子的人更是不起作用。因为这个作文题它不仅仅考查学生基本的写作能力,它更侧重于考察学生认识观察社会、分辨是非的能力。
另一方面,这种图示作文也有较大的局限。漫画这种艺术形式文字信息量有限,不利于检测学生的阅读理解力,这种艺术形式的最大特征是夸张和讽刺,这对老于世故的成年人来说,体会其中寓意不会有大的困难,但对十七、十八岁的中学生来说,无论从阅历、经验来讲,要理解准确、掌握分寸是很难的,这和一般文章表情达意是有别的,它掺杂进许多其它因素,稍有疏忽,就会影响文章的准确性,所以用鉴赏漫画这种形式来考学生,偶而用用可以,多了就会走向反面。这两幅漫画,一幅刊登于《大众日报》,另一幅刊自《羊城晚报》。把它们选用在全国语文考试试卷上,作为作文题,在社会上也引起不小振动。有关卫生部门还因此提出抗议,据说理由是歪曲事实。我们不去追究是非,但它至少也说明了一个问题,对艺术与真实,社会上还有相当的人搞不清楚,要让我们的学生搞清楚讽刺的寓意也确非易事。
二、如何把握今年高考作文的寓意
今年高考作文属图示型(漫画作文),图示就是依据画面所示的图景,把它转换成语言文字,再按题目规定的要求来写作。要写好这类作文的前提是考生必须认真仔细观察画面所提供的每一细节,从中筛选出有价值的信息(画中人的情态动作、提示语中隐含的信息、对画面环境的理解),然后再对图中事物所示作由此及彼、由表及里、由现象到本质的具体分析。这个分析过程是理清寓意脉胳的关键,是一个逻辑思维的过程。
说明文要把握住画面内容的四个要素:医务人员(医生、护士)病人、病手、病脚、提示语。可以从人物的行为入手,把病人绝望痛苦的神态和医务人员惊骇、悔改、笑眯眯的神态、动作作出生动真实的简洁说明,并由此很自然地把四个要素剪辑成篇。这里要不折不扣尊重考题提出的四项要求,缺一不可。
议论文要据画立意,立意要符合画意,如果画外生意,就是离题,如有个别考生错误地认为这所医院管理混乱,手术室、病房连为一体,医务人员心不在焉是发生医疗事故的原因,这就是借题发挥、偏离题旨了。如何分析这两幅漫画的内容呢!要从构成漫画的材料入手,通过图画的语言来理解寓意;两幅漫画有共同点,同属医疗事故,但其性质有异,一幅截错手指,一幅截错了腿,一般考生分析到这一步就停止了,把它们的共性作为分析寓意的切入点,然后联系现实,进行褒贬。多数考生把漫画的寓意归纳为意在讽刺医务人员职业道德败坏、医风不正、责任心不强,似是而非,错在分析不深不透,望图生意(据一个考场分析,这样写的考生在60%以上),考生没有仔细琢磨提示语,其中一幅是“给六指做整形手术”,另一幅是“截错了”,仔细琢磨,两者有明显的差异。提示语文字含蓄蕴藉,有弦外之音,只要你从提示语入手分析寓意,就不难发现漫画的深刻含义。什么叫整形?整形就是通过外科手术使人体上先天的缺陷或后天的畸形,恢复正常外形或生理机能。你看,本来想使先天畸形的小手指通过整形使它恢复生理机能,这是患者的愿望,但手术后却把有正常功能的大姆指给截去了、畸形小手指还原封不动被保留着,事与愿违。另一幅是截错了腿,把好腿截去了,坏腿却留下,这是一起典型的医疗事故。两幅漫画的性质有何不同呢?“给六指做整形手术”不纯属医疗事故,它还有更深的思想意识和思想方法甚至价值观,它讽刺的是一种病态的社会现象,即一些正常的有价值的东西被“砍掉”,而一些畸形的毫无价值的东西却被保留了下来。进一步深思社会上的怪事:如该管的不管,不该管的却去管;该做的不做,不该做的却做了;该重用的不重用,不该重用的重用了;该学的不学,不该学的却学了……。它发人深思,引人联想,有强烈的艺术效果,所以它比“截错了”那一幅漫画思想内容更深刻,更耐人寻味,更有现实意义。“大众日报”原画中的提示语是“给六指动手术”,显然与“截错了”内容雷同,出题人把“动手术”改为“整形”,意在突出分析和鉴赏,重在能力的检测。
三、考场作文失误简析
1.综合分析能力差
综合能力,指的是总体上对事物作出本质的判断和概括力。在本次高考作文中,试题特别提醒考生“议论时要有比较”,题目明白无误地写着“我更喜欢漫画《 》”,学生很明白要求的是什么,但面对两幅漫画,无从下笔,心里很惘然,为什么?是对两幅漫画的寓意把握不准,比较不出异同来;多数考生在权衡哪个手术给病人带来的危害和痛苦更多,所以他们在找漫画讽刺的对象到底是医生还是美容师。有的考生也想到了要从艺术效果上进行比较,但找不到突破口,只好选择避难就易的手法,选择“截错了”这幅进行说理论证,这恰恰违背了命题人的意图,这说明考生不能充分利用画面所提供的信息进行分析比较归纳、综合,这是这次考试高水平的作文比往年少的主要原因。
2.不看整体,只看局部
有的考生不是从画面的整体形象作为切入点,而是只简单地抓住其中一、二个画面来展开分析议论,这样就很容易偏离题旨。如考生一看“截错了”这幅漫画,就马上把注意力集中在病人腿上,看是左腿还是右腿,分析是不是医疗事故,而对另一幅漫画只粗略一看,得出也是截错了手指的结论,这样自然会得出医疗事故发生是医德医风败坏的直接结果的结论,显然是一知半解。
3.不看本质,只看现象
相当多的考生把截错腿和手指简单地孤立地看成是一种粗心大意、责任心不强、办事不严谨的一般医疗事故并大加鞭笞,给人以似是而非之感。考生对漫画的寓意只停留在浅层的感性认识,而没有作本质分析,大量的社会现象是有诸多因素起作用的,我们切忌看问题表面化、简单化,我们要让学生学会从材料所提供的浅层信息中能筛选出深层信息的本领,这是需要考生动一番脑筋的。
四、几点启示
1.今年的作文题告诉我们:作文题增大难度主要是体现在分析与鉴赏上,这是写作中较高层次检测,我们不能停留在简单的评议论述上,要有意识训练比较鉴赏能力和分析综合能力。
2.连续多年来的材料作文经验告诉我们,影响学生文章水平的主要是审题能力,审题即正确理解题意,从所供材料获取所需信息的能力,它直接关系到学生作文是否贴近或远离中心。去年《鸟的评说》偏离题旨的现象很严重,今年情况还是没有根本好转。作文审题失误虽然有各种客观原因,但学生对客观事物的分析、理解能力的低下是主要原因,如对鸟的评说的材料,考生能从整体上去把握而不是只抓一言半语,偏离题旨的现象就会大大减少;同样今年对两幅漫画只要认真进行比较、找出异同,理出寓意也并非难事,考生对画面提示语理解有误才出现偏离题旨现象的不在少数。
3.要有得分意识
从考场试卷评阅中发现今年作文卷面分失分较多的是结构和书写。考生在展开议论时往往一个层次即过去了,没有把对比分析中的道理讲清楚,其中最明显的是议论无层次,不分主次,两幅漫画比较分析要让阅卷老师清楚地看出你的逻辑思路。考生往往出现模棱两可的语言,丢分不少。另外,考生必须书写工整。笔者在阅卷过程中了解到字迹工整、卷面整洁是赢得阅卷老师第一印象很重要的环节。书写得分出入仅为五分,但这第一印象要直接影响到其它三项的评分,它远远超过分项中的五分。教师要告诫学生,这大意不得。有的考生语言舒畅,观点新颖,分析有深度,但就是在卷面上龙飞凤舞,对这样的作文轻则降一级,有的降二级。你考生如果了解真情,也是有苦难言。
五、展望1997年高考作文
1997年高考作文还会继续改进与完善,它会在多样性与防范性上进一步出新招,当然,它还会遵循稳中求变的原则,高考作文测试的重点在表达和分析的能力上。
多样性:目前高考作文的体裁还只局限记叙和议论两大类,小作文则侧重于说明和描写,但不排除某些实用文体的出现,特别要注意今年高三统编教材的修补,它会影响到1997年高考试题动向,今年议论文体出现比较鉴赏,这种增加难度的精神还会保持下去。
防范性:作为一份全国性的试卷,客观公正是对它的第一要求,所以防范试题被押被猜中也是出题人首先考虑的防范措施。值得一提的是多年考试实践证明只有材料作文被猜中的机率几乎为零,而只要是命题作文,就有被猜中的先例。这也从一个侧面告诉我们:1997年高考作文还可能以材料作文的形式出现,命题形式不会有大的动作。我们教师还是要切实从写作基本功上下功夫,努力提高学生的写作能力。
作文八:《1996-2015年全国卷高考英语作文范文》22700字
1996—2015年高考英语作文汇总及范文
1996年
假设你是李华,申请到一家外资企业工作。对方要求你用英语写一篇短文,介绍自己的基本情况。短文应包括下表所列全部内容。
注意:1. 情况介绍必须采用短文形式;
2. 词数100个左右。
范文:
My name is Li Hua. I was born in Dalian, Liaoning province in February 1977. I started school in 1984 when I was seven. I studied in Guangming Primary School from 1984 to 1990. After that I t to No.62 Middle School of Dalian and graduated this summer. The main subjects I studied at school included Chinese, maths, English, physics, chemistry and puter. I like English and puter best and I am very good at them. Last year I won first prize in the school puter petition. In my spare time I enjoy listening to popular music and collecting stamps. My favourite sports are swimming in summer and skating in winter.
1997年
下列图画描述的是你的一段亲身经历,请据此为一家中学生英文报的故事专栏写一篇短文。
注意:1. 短文必须包括图画所表现的主要内容,可以适当增减细节,使其连贯、完整;
2. 叙述必须用第一人称;
3. 词数100左右。 生词:违章者--offender n. 十字路口--crossroads
n.
范文:
The other day my brother and I t to the cinema by bicycle. My brother was riding with me sitting on the seat behind. As we came to the crossroads a young man and a girl came up and stopped us. “We've found you at long last,” they said. But we didn't know them. Pointing to a policeman not far away, the young man explained, “He stopped us about half an hour ago and made us catch the next offender. So e on, stand here. Hope you don't have to wait as long as we did. Good luck.”
1998年
5月3日,你参观了一个农场。请根据下列图画用英语写一篇日记
注意:
1、日记须包括所有图画的内容,可以适当增减细节,使日记连贯;
2、词数100左右。
范文:
Today we visited a farm. Early in the morning we met at the school gate and t there together. The farm workers gave us a warm wele. Then the head of the farm showed us around. How glad we were to see the crops and vegetables growing well. At noon we had a piic lunch in the sunshine. After a short rest, we had great fun singing and dancing, telling jokes or stories. Two of us even played a game of chess. The time passed quickly. Before we knew it, we had to say goodbye to the workers.
1999年
假设你是李华,在一所中学读书。最近收到美国朋友Smith先生的来信。他三年前参观过你校,听说现在变化很大,希望了解有关情况。参照下图,给他写一封信,介绍你校的变化。
注意:1.回信须包括图画的主要内容,可以适当增减细节,使内容连贯;
2.词数100左右。
范文:
Dear Mr Smith,
I was so pleased to hear from you and am writing to tell you something about my school. You are right. Quite a few changes have taken place. On one side of the road there is a new classroom building. On the other side, where the playground used to be, now stands another building --- our library. In it there are all kinds of books, newspapers and magazines. The playground is now in front of the school. We have also planted a lot of trees in and around the school. I hope you e and see for yourself some day,
Best wishes,
Yours,
Li Hua
2000年
假设你是李华,在美国探亲。2000年2月8日清晨,你的目击一起交通事故。警察局让你写一份材料,报告当时所见情况。根据下列图画写出报告。
注意:1、目击者应该准确报告事实; 2、词数100左右; 3、结尾已为你写好
范文:
It was 7:15 on the morning of February 8, 2000. It was walking along Park Road towards the east when an elderly man came out of the park on the other side of the street. Then I saw a yellow car drive up Third Street and make a right turn into Park Road. The next moment the car hit the man while he was crossing the road. He fell with a cry. The car didn't stop but drove off at great speed heading west. I noticed the driver was a young woman and the plate number was AC864. About two minutes later I stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital. Li Hua
2001年
假如你是李华。你的澳大利亚朋友Dick听说中国的中小学正在减轻学生的学习负担,来信询问有关情况。请你根据下表提供的信息,写一封回信,谈一谈减负给你的学习和生活带来的变化。
范文:
Dear Dick,
How nice to hear from you again. You want to know what is going on in schools
in China? In short, things have begun to improve since schools were called on to reduce learning load. I don't know about others, but I used to have to work even at weekends doing endless homework and attending classes as well. Now I have more free time. I can follow my own interests such as reading books, visiting museums, and taking puter lessons. In the evenings I can watch news on TV or read newspapers. What's more, I can go to bed earlier. As far as I know, everyone is happy about this new arrangement of things.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
2002年
最近,你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。讨论的主题是:公园要不要收门票?请你根据下表提供的信息,给报社写一封信,客观地介绍讨论情况。
注意:
1、信的开头已为你写好。 2、词数:100左右。 3、参考词汇:门票:entrance fee 范文:
Dear Editor,
I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we’ve had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks.
Opinions are divided on the question. 60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. They believed a public park should be free of charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. What is more, it will bee necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city.
On the other hand, 40% think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardeners and other workers and to buy plants and young trees. They suggest, however, fees should be charged low.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
2003年
假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文,来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息,写信介绍住房的情况,并告知住房面积为25平方米,月租500元。
注意: 1.词数:100左右。 2.参考词汇:房租— rent (n .)。
内容要点:
1.开头
2.公寓(一室带浴室、厨房)
3.面积、家具(25平米、床、沙发、书桌、椅子)
4.公寓位置(芳草街,离学校一站远)
5.月租500元 6.结尾
说明:1.内容要点可用不同方式表达。
2.对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分。
3.开头、结尾的内容须合乎逻辑、语言得体。
范文:
Dear Bob,
I’m so glad to learn that you’re ing in September. I’ve found a place for you. It’s a small flat of 25 square meters, with a bedroom, a bathroom and
a kitchen. In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair. The rent is 500 yuan per month. The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxiu Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you straight to the school. In fact, it’s only one stop. Do you think you’d like it? If not, I can try and find another place for you. Just let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
2004年高考英语作文 全国卷I & II
2004年全国卷I英语作文
第二节 书面表达(满分25分)
假设你是李华,你在报上看到北京电视台今年七月将举办外国人“学中文,唱中文歌”才艺大赛。你的美国朋友Peter正在北京一所大学学中文,你觉得他应去试一试。请按以下要点给他写信告知此事,并表示可以提供帮助。
比赛时间:7 月18日 。报名时间:截止到6月30日。报名地点:北京电视台
注意:1.词数:100左右 2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯 3.参考词汇:才艺大赛—talent show
内容要点:1.才艺大赛的内容和对象2.比赛时间3.报名时间和地点4.建议参加,表示可提供帮助
Dear Peter,
I read in a newspaper today that a “Learn Chinese, Sing Chinese Songs” Foreigners’ Talent Show will be held in Beijing Television Station on July 18. I know you like singing, and you are in Beijing during that period. I think this is a good chance for you to show your singing talent, and how well you’ve learned Chinese. If you would like to try, you' U have to go to the TV station to sign up before the end of June. If there is anything I can do for you, I would be more than glad to help.
Yours,
Li Hua
2004年全国卷II英语作文
第二节 书面表达(满分25分)
假设你是李华,加拿大一所学校将于今年暑假组织学生来你校访问。其间,Andy Smith将借住你家。请你代表全家写信给Andy,欢迎他的到来,并告知有关事宜。信的要点如下:
1.上午:学校活动2.下午:游览市区3. 晚上:看电视,玩游戏,聊天
注意:1. 词数:100左右2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯3. 参考词汇:安排arrange One possible version
Dear Andy,
I am glad to learn that you are ing to China and will stay at my home. My parents and I are very pleased to have you with us. Now let me tell you what we have arranged for you. I know the school will organize a lot of things for you to do in the morning, but in the afternoon, I’ll show you around and take you to some places of interest. We’ll mostly stay at home in the evening watching TV,
playing games, and meeting people. I’m sure we’ll have a wonderful time and enjoy each other’s pany.
I’m looking forward very much to meeting you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
2005年高考英语作文 全国卷I & II
2005年全国卷I英语作文
第二节 书面表达(满分25(分)
假定你是李华,正在英国牛津参加短期语言培训,计划星期天去伦敦旅游。互联网上一则广告引起了你的注意,但一些具体信息不明确(箭头所指内容)。请给该旅行社发一封电子邮件,询问有关情况。
注意:1. 词数100左右,信的格式已为你写好。2. 可根据内容要点适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3. 参考词汇:牛津—Oxford 费用—fee
Dear Sir/Madame,
I’m writing for more information about the day tour to London.
As a student at Oxford University, I’d like to know if you have any special price for students. As for the money you charge, does it cover the entrance fees for visiting the places listed? What about lunch? Is it included? Or do I need to bring along my own food?
How long will the tour last? Since I need to prepare my lessons for the next day, I’d like to know the time to return. Besides, is there any time for shopping? I really want to have a look at the big stores in London.
Yours,
Li Hua
2005年全国卷II英语作文
书面表达(满分30分)
假设你是李华,最近国内一家英文报纸正在讨论北京动物园是否应迁出市区。以下是你所在班级讨论的情况。请你给该报写一封信,反映讨论结果。
赞成迁出: 1. 游客多,交通堵塞2. 郊区环境好。 反对迁出:1. 建于1906年,中外闻名2. 搬迁易造成动物死亡
注意:1. 词数100字左右,信的开头已为你写好。2. 可根据内容要点适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3. 参考词汇: 郊区—suburb
June 3, 2005
Dear Editor,
Recently, our class have had a heated discussion about whether the Beijing Zoo should be moved out of the city. Some of my classmates are in favor of the move. They say large crowds of tourists to the zoo will result in traffic jams. They also say that once moved, animals will have more space and better living conditions in the suburbs. However, other students are against the idea, saying that the Beijing Zoo, built in 1906, has a history of 100 years, and is well–known at home and abroad. So it should remain where it is. What’s move more ore, moving may cause the death
of some animals. To move or not, this is a big decision which has to be made by people in Beijing.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
2006年高考英语作文 全国卷I & II
2006年全国卷I英语作文
假定你是李华。应英国朋友Bob的要求, 写一封短信介绍你校图书馆的基本情况。内容须包括下面两幅图中的相关信息。
注意:1、字数100左右2、可以适当增减细节,以使行文连贯3、开头语已为你写好 (注:上面的小字是:借阅须知:每人每次5本,借期10天。下面的小字是:开放时间:周一至周五,早9:00至晚7:00,周末馆。)
例文:
Dear Bob,
Thank you for your last letter asking about our library. Our library is the center of the school. There is a beautiful garden in-front of it an our classroom building is right behind it. The library is big. When you get inside, you will see many shelves full of books on different subjects. There are also lots of newspapers and magazines. We borrow books and do some reading in the library. According to the rule, every student can borrow up to 5 books each time and keep them for 10 days. It is open from 9 am to 7 pm from Monday to Friday and closed on weekends. We all like our library very much.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
2006年全国卷II英语作文
假定你是李华,亚洲冬季运动会将在你居住的地方举办,现正在招募志愿者,你希望成为其中一员。请按要求用英文给组委会写一封信。内容应包括:1.个人情况:年龄,性别,学历 2.个人条件:英语好,爱好体育,善于交际,乐于助人,熟悉本地情况 3.承诺:提供最佳服务
注意:词数100左右,开头语已为你写好;可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;生词:申请—apply (v. ), application (n.)
志愿者—volunteer
Dear Sir / Madam:
My name is Li Hua. I would like to work as a volunteer for the Winter Asian Games. Yours faithfully,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Li Hua
2007年高考英语作文 全国卷I & II
2007年全国卷I英语作文
假定你是李华,希望通过外籍教师Peter找一位笔友。请写一封短信,描述一下你理想中笔友的条件,并说明为什么选择这样的笔友。具体条件包括:1.年龄; 2.性别; 3.爱好(旅游、运动、宠的等)注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头语已为你写好。
Dear Peter,
I’m writing to ask whether you are able to do me a favor.
I want to have a pen friend, hopefully a girl in her early tties, and with interests similar to mine. In my mind, she is someone who is interested in travelling, swimming, and playing table tennis. Beside, it would be better for her to have a pet dog as I have kept one at home for some time. With such a pen friend, I hope I can share with her our experiences in travelling, taking care of pets, or whatever we have in mon. And I believe I will improve my English by doing so and learn more about her country.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Best regard,
Li Hua
2007年全国卷II英语作文
一家宾馆新开业,为吸引外国宾客,希望在互联网上进行宣传。请你用英语为其 写一篇文字介绍。主要内容包括:
1.地点:距白山入口处500米;2.房间及价格:单人间(共20间),100元/天;双人间(共15间),150元/天;热水淋浴;3.餐饮:餐厅(中、西餐),咖啡厅(茶、咖啡);
4.游泳池:全天免费开放; 5.欢迎预定。
注意:1.词数100左右,开头语已为你写好;2.可适当增加细节,以使地文连贯。 答案:
Wele to Baishan Mountain Hotel
Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for business.
Our hotel stands 500 meters away from the entrance to Baishan Mountain. It has 20 single rooms and 15 double rooms, all with hot showers. A single room is 100 Yuan and a double room 150 Yuan for one night. You are advised to book in advance. The hotel serves three meals a day and there are Chinese food and western food for you to choose from. You can also enjoy yourself at the cafe drinking tea or coffee in the evening. We also have a swimming pool, which is open all day and free of charge.
All are wele!
2008年高考英语作文 全国卷I & II
2008年全国卷I英语作文
假定你是李华,从小喜爱大熊猫(panda),一直通过有关网站(website)关注三年前在美国圣迭哥动物园出生的大熊猫“苏琳”和她的母亲“白云”。现在苏琳即将三岁。请根据以下要点给动物园工作人员写一封信:
1、 自我介绍;2、 祝贺苏琳生日;3、 感谢工作人员;4、 索取苏琳三岁生日照。
注意:1、词数100左右;2、可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3、开头语已为你写好。 例文:
Dear Sir/Madam,
Greetings from China!
I’m Li Hua, a student in Sichuan. I’ve been a panda lover since I was a child. About three years ago I was delighted to learn that Baiyun gave birth to her daughter Sulin and I’ve been watching her grow on your website,. Now she’s going to be
three. I’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.
By the way, could I have a photo of Sulin taken on her third birthday? Thank you very much in advance.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
2008年全国卷II英语作文
假定你是李华, 你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文,请你根据下列要点写回信。
要点:1. 参加中文学习班;2. 看中文书刊、电视;3. 学唱中文歌曲;4. 交中国朋友。 注意:1.词数100左右;2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3. 开头语已为你写好。 例文
June 8, 2008
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.
Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as you’ll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible.
Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so you’ll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. You can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.
Try and write me in Chinese next time.
Best wishes
Li Hua
2009年高考英语作文 全国卷I & II
2009年全国卷I英语作文
书面表达(满分25分)
假定你是李华,正在英国接受英语培训,住在一户英国人家里。今天你的房东Mrs Wilson不在家,你准备外出,请给Mrs Wilson写一留言条,内容包括:
1.外出购物 2.替房东还书3.Tracy来电话留言:
1)咖啡屋(Bolton Coffee)见面取消 2)此事已告知Susan 3)尽快回电
注意:1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
范文:
Mrs Wilson,
I’m going out shopping, and won’t be back until about 5:00 pm. I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library. At about I o’clock this afternoon, Tracy called, saying that she couldn’t meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to. She felt very sorry about that, but said that you could set some other time for the meeting. She wanted
you to call her back as soon as you are home. She has already told Susan about this change.
Li Hua
2009年全国卷II英语作文
假定你是李华,你的美国朋友打算暑期来北京旅游,来信询问改建后前门大街的情况。请你写信回复,简单介绍以下内容:
1、简况:长800米、600多年历史、300余家商铺;
2、位置:天安门广场南面;
3、交通:公共汽车17、69、59等路,地铁2号线;
4、特色:步行街、当当车、茶馆、剧院等。
参考词汇:步行街:pedestrian street 当当车:trolley car 地铁:subway
注意:1、词数100左右,开头语已经为你写好;2、可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 作文范文:
Dear Sarah,
Thank you for your letter asking about the rebuilt Qianmen Street. Here is something about it.
Qianmen Street is a famous street of over 600 years old. Along this 800-metre street, there are more than 300 shops. As the street is in the center of Beijing, just to the south of Tian’anmen Square, it’s very convenient to get there by bus. You may take Buses No.17, 69 or 59.subway Line 2 has a stop there too. Qianmen Street is a pedestrian street, but there are trolley cars to take you not only to the shops, but also to theaters and teahouses where you can experience a truly Chinese way of life, I’m sure you’ll like it.
Yours,
Li Hua
2010年高考英语作文 全国卷I & II
2010年全国卷I英语作文
假设你是育才中学学生会主席李华,你校将举办一次英语演讲比赛(speech contest),希望附近某大学的外籍教师Smith 女士来做评委,请参照以下比赛通知给她写一份信,
注意:词数100左右。
Dear Ms .Smith,
I’m Li Hua. Chair of the Student Union of Yucai Middle School, which is close to your University. I’m writing to invite you to be a judge at our English
speech contest to be held in our school on June 1st. It will start at 2:00 pm and keep for about three hours. Ten students will deliver their speeches on the given topic “Man and the Nature”. We hope you will accept our invitation if it is convenient for you. Please call me at 446765560. if you have any questions. I am looking forward to your reply.
With best wishes Li Hua
2010年全国卷II英语作文
假设你是李华,你的美国笔友Peter层表示希望来中国教书。你校现在需招聘外教,请给他写封信,告知招聘信息。内容主要包括:
1.教授课程:英语口语、英语写作、今日美国、今日英语等
2.授课对象:高中生(至少三年英语基础)
3.工作量:—每周12学时,任选三门课 —担任学生英语俱乐部或英语校报顾问(advisor) 注意:
1.字数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头语已为你写好,请将完整的回信书写在答题卡上。 Dear Peter, I remember you told me you were interested in teaching in China. Our school is looking for a native-speaker to teach some courses to senior students. If you e, you can choose three of the following four courses: Speaking, Writing, Britain Today and America Today, and teach 12 hours a week. The students who are going to take these courses have at least three years of English learning experiences. Besides teaching, you will also work as an advisor to our students’ English club or our school’s English newspaper.
Please let me know if you are interested and if you have any other questions. I’d be more than happy to help.
Best,
Li Hua
2011年全国卷I英语作文
假定你是李华,正在一所英国学校学习暑期课程,遇到一些困难,希望得到学校辅导中心(Learning Center)的帮助。根据学校规定,你需书面预约,请按下列要点写一封信:
1.本人简介:
2.求助内容;
3.约定时间;
4. 你的联系方式(Email:lihua@6 ;Phone:45678)。
注意:1词数l00左右;
2可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3结束语已为你写好。
2011年全国卷II英语作文
假定你是李华,你所喜爱的Global Mirror周报创刊五周年之际征集读者意见.请你依
据以下内容给主编写封信,内容主要包括:
1.说明你是该报的忠实读者
2.赞赏该报优点:
1)兼顾国内外新闻
2)介绍名人成功故事
3.提出建议:刊登指导英语学习的文章
注意:1.词数100左右,开头语己为你写好;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Editor-in-Chief,
Congratulations on, the, 5’h anmiversary, of Global Mirror!
I’m a regular reader of your newspaper. I like it very much mainly for the following two reasons. First, it covers both national and international news so that, by simply turning the pages, I can learn all important things that have happened during the week. Equally attractive are the success stories of world-famous people, which help me understand how a person can work hard to make the world a better place.
As a young student, I suggest that Global Mirror carry s to guide us in our English learning , and I hope that it will bee even more popular.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
河北省2012-2014三年高考英语作文及例文
2014年河北省(新课标Ⅰ卷)高考英语作文题目
假定你是李华,计划暑假间去英国学习英语,为期六周。下面的广告引起了你的注意,请给该校写封信,询问有关情况(箭头所指内容)
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3.参考词汇:住宿-acmodation
2014年河北省(新课标Ⅰ卷)高考英语作文例文 Dear Sir/Madam,
I am a student in China and I plan to go to Britain to attend a summer school during the vacation. I’ve seen your ad, and I’d like to know something more about your six-week English course. First, when will the course start and how many class hours are there per week? Besides, I wish there would not be too many students in a class. I’d also like to know How much I have to pay for the course and whether acmodation is included. Would There be host family or university dormitory? I am looking forward to your early reply. Yours faithfully, Li Hua
2013年河北省高考英语作文题目
假定你是李华。请你给笔友Peter写封信,告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在城市开会,带去他想要的那幅中国画,同时询问他是否可以接机。信中还需说明:
李明:高个子,戴眼镜
航班号:CA985
到达:8月6日上午11:30
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。
2013年河北省高考英语作文例文
Dear Peter,
How are you doing?
I’m writing to tell you that my uncle Li Ming is going to your city for a conference, and I’ve asked him to bring you the Chinese painting you’ve asked for before.
Also, I’d like you to do me a favor. Would you please meet my uncle at the airport and take him to his hotel since this is his first visit to the U.S.? Thank you in advance!
His flight number is CA985, and it will arrive at 11:30 am, August 6. My uncle
is tall and he is wearing glasses. And he will be in a blue jacket.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
2012年河北省高考英语作文题目
假定你是李华,从互联网上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡((Singapore)举办夏令营,欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。
内容主要包括:
I.自我介绍(包括英语能力);
2.参加意图(介绍中国、了解其他国家);
3.希望获准.
注意:
1.词数100左右:
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.邮件开头和结尾已为你写好。
2012年河北省高考英语作文例文
Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm Li Hua, a middle school student from China. I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it. I know that you wele students from different countries and I'd like to take part in it. I've been learning English for 10 years, and I speak fluent English. What is more, I'JI be able to tell students from other countries about China and learn about their countries as well. I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp.
Looking forward to your reply!
Regards,
Li Hua
2013年高考英语作文题目(河北卷)
第二节 书面表达(满分25分)
假定你是李华。请你给笔友Peter写封信,告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在城市开会,带去他想要的那幅中国画,同时询问他是否可以接机。信中还需说明:
李明:高个子,戴眼镜
航班号:CA985
到达:8月6日上午11:30
注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。
2013年高考英语作文范文(河北卷)
Dear Peter,
How are you doing?
I’m writing to tell you that my uncle Li Ming is going to your city for a conference, and I’ve asked him to bring you the Chinese painting you’ve asked for before.
Also, I’d like you to do me a favor. Would you please meet my uncle at the airport and take him to his hotel since this is his first visit to the U.S.? Thank you in advance!
His flight number is CA985, and it will arrive at 11:30 am, August 6. My uncle is tall and he is wearing glasses. And he will be in a blue jacket.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
2014年河北高考英语作文题目
假定你是李华,计划暑假间去英国学习英语,为期六周。下面的广告引起了你的注意, 请给该校写封信, 询问有关情况(箭头所指内容)
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3.参考词汇:住宿-acmodation
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am a student in China and I plan to go to Britain to attend a summer school during
The vacation. I’ve seen your ad, and I’d like to know something more about your six-week
English course. First, when will the course start and how many class hours are there
Per week? Besides, wish there would not be too many student in a class, ’d also like to know
How much I have to pay for the course and whether acmodation is included. Would
There be host family or university dormitory?
I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours faithfully, Li Hua
假定你是李华,你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登介绍美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿。
一、要点如下:
1、栏目介绍;
2、稿件内容
3、稿件长度:约400字
4、交稿日期:6月28日前
Dear Peter,
How are you doing?(问候)Recently, our school newspaper will started a column about western life and culture in order to cultivate our interests, broaden our horizons and enrich our afterschool life.(写信背景+白银裤衩+八大万能利)As a result, I am writing to ask you to write an on it.(写信目的)
Here are some details about it.(经典主题句)To begin with, you may talk about your life in your middle school, so that we Chinese students can know more about you.(简单句+白银裤衩)Besides, you can introduce a western festival, such as the Christmas Day, the New Year or the Thanksgiving Day, which must be not only meaningful but also interesting.(简单句+平行并列结构+白银裤衩+八大万能利)What’s more, your should be at least 400 words.(简单句,不用升级,以便“长短结合”)Finally, I hope you would be so kind as to send it to be before June 28th, so that it can be published in time.(求助信套话+白银裤衩)
Hopefully, you could do me the favor.(六大结尾句之一)I have the confidence that everyone will like your .(六大结尾句之二)Thanks for reading my letter in such a hot summer.(书信必备结尾句)I’m looking forward to your reply and your .(书信必备结尾句)
Best wishes,
Yours,
LiHua
作文九:《1996—2003年高考英语作文汇总及范文》5400字
1996— 2003年高考英语作文汇总及范文
1996年
假设你是李华,申请到一家外资企业工作。对方要求你用英语写一篇短文,介绍自己的 基本情况。短文应包括下表所列全部内容。
注意:1. 情况介绍必须采用短文形式;
2. 词数 100个左右。
范文 :
My name is Li Hua. I was born in Dalian, Liaoning province in February 1977. I started school in 1984 when I was seven. I studied in Guangming Primary School from 1984 to 1990. After that I t to No.62 Middle School of Dalian and graduated this summer. The main subjects I studied at school included Chinese, maths, English, physics, chemistry and puter. I like English and puter best and I am very good at them. Last year I won first prize in the school puter petition. In my spare time I enjoy listening to popular music and collecting stamps. My favourite sports are swimming in summer and skating in winter.
1997年
下列图画描述的是你的一段亲身经历,请据此为一家中学生英文报的故事专栏写一篇短 文。
注意:1. 短文必须包括图画所表现的主要内容,可以适当增减细节,使其连贯、完整;
2. 叙述必须用第一人称;
3. 词数 100左右。 生词:违章者--offender n. 十字路口--crossroads n.
范文 :
The other day my brother and I t to the cinema by bicycle. My brother was riding with me sitting on the seat behind. As we came to the crossroads a young man and a girl came up and stopped us. “We've found you at long last,” they said. But we didn't know them. Pointing to a policeman not far away, the young man explained, “He stopped us about half an hour ago and made us catch the next offender. So e on, stand here. Hope you don't have to wait as long as we did. Good luck.” 1998年
5月 3日,你参观了一个农场。请根据下列图画用英语写一篇日记
注意:
1、日记须包括所有图画的内容,可以适当增减细节,使日记连贯;
2、词数 100左右。
范文:
Today we visited a farm. Early in the morning we met at the school gate and t there together. The farm workers gave us a warm wele. Then the head of the farm showed us around. How glad we were to see the crops and vegetables growing well. At noon we had a piic lunch in the sunshine. After a short rest, we had great fun singing and dancing, telling jokes or stories. Two of us even played a game of chess. The time passed quickly. Before we knew it, we had to say goodbye to the workers.
1999年
假设你是李华, 在一所中学读书。 最近收到美国朋友 Smith 先生的来信。 他三年前参观过 你校,听说现在变化很大,希望了解有关情况。参照下图,给他写一封信,介绍你校的变化。 注意:1. 回信须包括图画的主要内容,可以适当增减细节,使内容连贯;
2. 词数 100左右。
范文:
Dear Mr Smith,
I was so pleased to hear from you and am writing to tell you something about my school. You
are right. Quite a few changes have taken place. On one side of the road there is a new classroom building. On the other side, where the playground used to be, now stands another building --- our library. In it there are all kinds of books, newspapers and magazines. The playground is now in front of the school. We have also planted a lot of trees in and around the school. I hope you e and see for yourself some day,
Best wishes,
Yours, Li Hua 2000年
假设你是李华,在美国探亲。 2000年 2月 8日清晨,你的目击一起交通事故。警察局让 你写一份材料,报告当时所见情况。根据下列图画写出报告。
注意:1、目击者应该准确报告事实; 2、词数 100左右; 3、结尾已为你写好
范文:
It was 7:15 on the morning of February 8, 2000. It was walking along Park Road towards the east when an elderly man came out of the park on the other side of the street. Then I saw a yellow car drive up Third Street and make a right turn into Park Road. The next moment the car hit the man while he was crossing the road. He fell with a cry. The car didn't stop but drove off at great speed
2001年
假如你是李华。你的澳大利亚朋友 Dick 听说中国的中小学正在减轻学生的学习负担,来 信询问有关情况。请你根据下表提供的信息,写一封回信,谈一谈减负给你的学习和生活带 来的变化。
范文:
Dear Dick,
How nice to hear from you again. You want to know what is going on in schools in China? In
short, things have begun to improve since schools were called on to reduce learning load. I don't know about others, but I used to have to work even at weekends doing endless homework and attending classes as well. Now I have more free time. I can follow my own interests such as reading books, visiting museums, and taking puter lessons. In the evenings I can watch news on TV or read newspapers. What's more, I can go to bed earlier. As far as I know, everyone is happy about this new arrangement of things.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
2002年
最近, 你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。 讨论的主题是:公园要不要收门票? 请你根据下表提供的信息,给报社写一封信,客观地介绍讨论情况。
注意:
1、信的开头已为你写好。 2、词数:100左右。 3、参考词汇:门票:entrance fee 范文:
Opinions are divided on the question. 60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. They believed a public park should be free of charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. What is more, it will bee necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city. On the other hand, 40% think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardeners and other workers and to buy plants and young trees. They suggest, however, fees should be charged low.
Yours truly, Li Hua 2003年
假设你是李华,你的英国笔友 Bob 将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文,来信 请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息,写信介绍住房的情况,并告知住 房面积为 25平方米,月租 500元。
注意:1.词数:100左右。 2.参考词汇:房租 — rent (n .)。
内容要点:
1.开头
2.公寓(一室带浴室、厨房)
3.面积、家具(25平米、床、沙发、书桌、椅子)
4.公寓位置(芳草街,离学校一站远)
5.月租 500元 6.结尾
说明:1.内容要点可用不同方式表达。
2.对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分。
3.开头、结尾的内容须合乎逻辑、语言得体。
范文:
Dear Bob,
I’m so glad to learn that you’re ing in September. I’ve found a place for you. It’s a small
flat of 25 square meters, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair. The rent is 500 yuan per month. The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxiu Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you straight to the school. In fact, it’s only one stop. Do you think you’d like it? If not, I can try and find another place for you. Just let me know.
Yours , Li Hua
作文十:《1996-2011年全国卷高考英语作文范文》17300字
1996—2011年高考英语作文汇总及范文
1996年
假设你是李华,申请到一家外资企业工作。对方要求你用英语写一篇短文,介绍自己的基本情况。短文应包括下表所列全部内容。
注意:1. 情况介绍必须采用短文形式; 2. 词数100个左右。 范文:
My name is Li Hua. I was born in Dalian, Liaoning province in February 1977. I started school in 1984 when I was seven. I studied in Guangming Primary School from 1984 to 1990. After that I t to No.62 Middle School of Dalian and graduated this summer. The main subjects I studied at school included Chinese, maths, English, physics, chemistry and puter. I like English and puter best and I am very good at them. Last year I won first prize in the school puter petition. In my spare time I enjoy listening to popular music and collecting stamps. My favourite sports are swimming in summer and skating in winter.
1997年
下列图画描述的是你的一段亲身经历,请据此为一家中学生英文报的故事专栏写一篇短文。
注意:1. 短文必须包括图画所表现的主要内容,可以适当增减细节,使其连贯、完整; 2. 叙述必须用第一人称;
3. 词数100左右。 生词:违章者--offender n. 十字路口--crossroads n.
范文:
The other day my brother and I t to the cinema by bicycle. My brother was riding with me sitting on the seat behind. As we came to the crossroads a young man and a girl came up and stopped us. ―We've found you at long last,‖ they said. But we didn't know them. Pointing to a policeman not far away, the young man explained, ―He stopped us about half an hour ago and made us catch the next offender. So e on, stand here. Hope you don't have to wait as long as we did. Good luck.‖
1998年
5月3日,你参观了一个农场。请根据下列图画用英语写一篇日记 注意:
1、日记须包括所有图画的内容,可以适当增减细节,使日记连贯; 2、词数100左右。
范文:
Today we visited a farm. Early in the morning we met at the school gate and t there together. The farm workers gave us a warm wele. Then the head of the farm showed us around. How glad we were to see the crops and vegetables growing well. At noon we had a piic lunch in the sunshine. After a short rest, we had great fun singing and dancing, telling jokes or stories. Two of us even played a game of chess. The time passed quickly. Before we knew it, we had to say goodbye to the workers.
1999年
假设你是李华,在一所中学读书。最近收到美国朋友Smith先生的来信。他三年前参观过你校,听说现在变化很大,希望了解有关情况。参照下图,给他写一封信,介绍你校的变化。
注意:1.回信须包括图画的主要内容,可以适当增减细节,使内容连贯; 2.词数100左右。
范文: Dear Mr Smith,
I was so pleased to hear from you and am writing to tell you something about my school. You are right. Quite a few changes have taken place. On one side of the road there is a new classroom building. On the other side, where the playground used to be, now stands another building --- our library. In it there are all kinds of books, newspapers and magazines. The playground is now in front of the school. We have also planted a lot of trees in and around the school. I hope you e and see for yourself some day,
Best wishes,
Yours, Li Hua
2000年
假设你是李华,在美国探亲。2000年2月8日清晨,你的目击一起交通事故。警察局让你写一份材料,报告当时所见情况。根据下列图画写出报告。
注意:1、目击者应该准确报告事实; 2、词数100左右; 3、结尾已为你写好
范文:
It was 7:15 on the morning of February 8, 2000. It was walking along Park Road towards the east when an elderly man came out of the park on the other side of the street. Then I saw a yellow car drive up Third Street and make a right turn into Park Road. The next moment the car hit the man while he was crossing the road. He fell with a cry. The car didn't stop but drove off at great speed heading west. I noticed the driver was a young woman and the plate number was AC864. 2001年
假如你是李华。你的澳大利亚朋友Dick听说中国的中小学正在减轻学生的学习负担,来信询问有关情况。请你根据下表提供的信息,写一封回信,谈一谈减负给你的学习和生活带来的变化。
范文: Dear Dick,
How nice to hear from you again. You want to know what is going on in schools in China? In
short, things have begun to improve since schools were called on to reduce learning load. I don't know about others, but I used to have to work even at weekends doing endless homework and attending classes as well. Now I have more free time. I can follow my own interests such as reading books, visiting museums, and taking puter lessons. In the evenings I can watch news on TV or read newspapers. What's more, I can go to bed earlier. As far as I know, everyone is happy about this new arrangement of things.
Best wishes, Li Hua 2002年
最近,你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。讨论的主题是:公园要不要收门票?请你根据下表提供的信息,给报社写一封信,客观地介绍讨论情况。
注意:
1、信的开头已为你写好。 2、词数:100左右。 3、参考词汇:门票:entrance fee 范文: Opinions are divided on the question. 60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. They believed a public park should be free of charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. What is more, it will bee necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city.
On the other hand, 40% think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardeners and other workers and to buy plants and young trees. They suggest, however, fees
should be charged low.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
2003年
假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文,来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息,写信介绍住房的情况,并告知住房面积为25平方米,月租500元。
注意: 1.词数:100左右。 2.参考词汇:房租— rent (n .)。 内容要点: 1.开头
2.公寓(一室带浴室、厨房)
3.面积、家具(25平米、床、沙发、书桌、椅子) 4.公寓位置(芳草街,离学校一站远) 5.月租500元 6.结尾
说明:1.内容要点可用不同方式表达。
2.对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分。 3.开头、结尾的内容须合乎逻辑、语言得体。 范文: Dear Bob,
I’m so glad to learn that you’re ing in September. I’ve found a place for you. It’s a small flat of 25 square meters, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair. The rent is 500 yuan per month. The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxiu Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you straight to the school. In fact, it’s only one stop. Do you think you’d like it? If not, I can try and find another place for you. Just let me know.
Yours, Li Hua
2004年高考英语作文 全国卷I & II 2004年全国卷I英语作文 第二节 书面表达(满分25分)
假设你是李华,你在报上看到北京电视台今年七月将举办外国人―学中文,唱中文歌‖才艺大赛。你的美国朋友Peter正在北京一所大学学中文,你觉得他应去试一试。请按以下要点给他写信告知此事,并表示可以提供帮助。
比赛时间:7 月18日 。报名时间:截止到6月30日。报名地点:北京电视台
注意:1.词数:100左右 2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯 3.参考词汇:才艺大赛—talent show 内容要点:1.才艺大赛的内容和对象2.比赛时间3.报名时间和地点4.建议参加,表示可提供帮助 Dear Peter,
I read in a newspaper today that a ―Learn Chinese, Sing Chinese Songs‖ Foreigners’ Talent Show will be held in Beijing Television Station on July 18. I know you like singing, and you are in Beijing during that period. I think this is a good chance for you to show your singing talent, and how well you’ve learned Chinese. If you would like to try, you' U have to go to the TV station to sign up before the end of June. If there is anything I can do for you, I would be more than glad to help.
Yours, Li Hua
2004年全国卷II英语作文 第二节 书面表达(满分25分)
假设你是李华,加拿大一所学校将于今年暑假组织学生来你校访问。其间,Andy Smith将借住你家。请你代表全家写信给Andy,欢迎他的到来,并告知有关事宜。信的要点如下: 1.上午:学校活动2.下午:游览市区3. 晚上:看电视,玩游戏,聊天
注意:1. 词数:100左右2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯3. 参考词汇:安排arrange One possible version Dear Andy,
I am glad to learn that you are ing to China and will stay at my home.
My parents and I are very pleased to have you with us. Now let me tell you what we have arranged for you. I know the school will organize a lot of things for you to do in the morning, but
in the afternoon, I’ll show you around and take you to some places of interest. We’ll mostly stay at home in the evening watching TV, playing games, and meeting people. I’m sure we’ll have a wonderful time and enjoy each other’s pany.
I’m looking forward very much to meeting you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
2005年高考英语作文 全国卷I & II 2005年全国卷I英语作文 第二节 书面表达(满分25(分)
假定你是李华,正在英国牛津参加短期语言培训,计划星期天去伦敦旅游。互联网上一则广告引起了你的注意,但一些具体信息不明确(箭头所指内容)。请给该旅行社发一封电子邮件,询问有关情况。
注意:1. 词数100左右,信的格式已为你写好。2. 可根据内容要点适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3. 参考词汇:牛津—Oxford 费用—fee Dear Sir/Madame,
I’m writing for more information about the day tour to London.
As a student at Oxford University, I’d like to know if you have any special price for students. As for the money you charge, does it cover the entrance fees for visiting the places listed? What about lunch? Is it included? Or do I need to bring along my own food?
How long will the tour last? Since I need to prepare my lessons for the next day, I’d like to know the time to return. Besides, is there any time for shopping? I really want to have a look at the big stores in London.
Yours, Li Hua
2005年全国卷II英语作文 书面表达(满分30分)
假设你是李华,最近国内一家英文报纸正在讨论北京动物园是否应迁出市区。以下是你所在班级讨论的情况。请你给该报写一封信,反映讨论结果。
赞成迁出: 1. 游客多,交通堵塞2. 郊区环境好。 反对迁出:1. 建于1906年,中外闻名2. 搬迁易造成动物死亡
注意:1. 词数100字左右,信的开头已为你写好。2. 可根据内容要点适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3. 参考词汇: 郊区—suburb June 3, 2005 Dear Editor,
Recently, our class have had a heated discussion about whether the Beijing Zoo should be moved out of the city. Some of my classmates are in favor of the move. They say large crowds of tourists to the zoo will result in traffic jams. They also say that once moved, animals will have more space and better living conditions in the suburbs. However, other students are against the idea, saying that the Beijing Zoo, built in 1906, has a history of 100 years, and is well–known at home and abroad. So it should remain where it is. What’s move more ore, moving may cause the
death of some animals. To move or not, this is a big decision which has to be made by people in Beijing.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
2006年高考英语作文 全国卷I & II 2006年全国卷I英语作文
假定你是李华。应英国朋友Bob的要求, 写一封短信介绍你校图书馆的基本情况。内容须包括下面两幅图中的相关信息。
注意:1、字数100左右2、可以适当增减细节,以使行文连贯3、开头语已为你写好 (注:上面的小字是:借阅须知:每人每次5本,借期10天。下面的小字是:开放时间:周一至周五,早9:00至晚7:00,周末馆。) 例文: Dear Bob,
There is a beautiful garden in-front of it an our classroom building is right behind it. The library is big. When you get inside, you will see many shelves full of books on different subjects. There are also lots of newspapers and magazines. We borrow books and do some reading in the library. According to the rule, every student can borrow up to 5 books each time and keep them for 10 days. It is open from 9 am to 7 pm from Monday to Friday and closed on weekends. We all like our library very much.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
2006年全国卷II英语作文
假定你是李华,亚洲冬季运动会将在你居住的地方举办,现正在招募志愿者,你希望成为其中一员。请按要求用英文给组委会写一封信。内容应包括:1.个人情况:年龄,性别,学历 2.个人条件:英语好,爱好体育,善于交际,乐于助人,熟悉本地情况 3.承诺:提供最佳服务
注意:词数100左右,开头语已为你写好;可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;生词:申请—apply (v. ), application (n.) 志愿者—volunteer Dear Sir / Madam:
My name is Li Hua. I would like to work as a volunteer for the Winter Asian Games. Yours faithfully,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Li Hua
2007年高考英语作文 全国卷I & II 2007年全国卷I英语作文
假定你是李华,希望通过外籍教师Peter找一位笔友。请写一封短信,描述一下你理想中笔友的条件,并说明为什么选择这样的笔友。具体条件包括:1.年龄; 2.性别; 3.爱好(旅游、运动、宠的等)注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头语已为你写好。
Dear Peter,
I want to have a pen friend, hopefully a girl in her early tties, and with interests similar to mine. In my mind, she is someone who is interested in travelling, swimming, and playing table tennis. Beside, it would be better for her to have a pet dog as I have kept one at home for some time. With such a pen friend, I hope I can share with her our experiences in travelling, taking care of pets, or whatever we have in mon. And I believe I will improve my English by doing so and learn more about her country.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Best regard,
Li Hua
2007年全国卷II英语作文
一家宾馆新开业,为吸引外国宾客,希望在互联网上进行宣传。请你用英语为其 写一篇文字介绍。主要内容包括:
1.地点:距白山入口处500米;2.房间及价格:单人间(共20间),100元/天;双人间(共15间),150元/天;热水淋浴;3.餐饮:餐厅(中、西餐),咖啡厅(茶、咖啡);4.游泳池:全天免费开放; 5.欢迎预定。
注意:1.词数100左右,开头语已为你写好;2.可适当增加细节,以使地文连贯。 答案:
Wele to Baishan Mountain Hotel
Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for business.
Our hotel stands 500 meters away from the entrance to Baishan Mountain. It has 20 single rooms and 15 double rooms, all with hot showers. A single room is 100 Yuan and a double room 150 Yuan for one night. You are advised to book in advance. The hotel serves three meals a day and there are Chinese food and western food for you to choose from. You can also enjoy yourself at the cafe drinking tea or coffee in the evening. We also have a swimming pool, which is open all day and free of charge.
All are wele!
2008年高考英语作文 全国卷I & II
2008年全国卷I英语作文
假定你是李华,从小喜爱大熊猫(panda),一直通过有关网站(website)关注三年前在美国圣迭哥动物园出生的大熊猫―苏琳‖和她的母亲―白云‖。现在苏琳即将三岁。请根据以下要点给动物园工作人员写一封信:
1、 自我介绍;2、 祝贺苏琳生日;3、 感谢工作人员;4、 索取苏琳三岁生日照。
注意:1、词数100左右;2、可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3、开头语已为你写好。 例文:
Dear Sir/Madam,
Greetings from China!
I’m Li Hua, a student in Sichuan. I’ve been a panda lover since I was a child. About three years ago I was delighted to learn that Baiyun gave birth to her daughter Sulin and I’ve been watching her grow on your website,. Now she’s going to be three. I’d like to wish her a happy
birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.
By the way, could I have a photo of Sulin taken on her third birthday? Thank you very much in advance.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
2008年全国卷II英语作文
假定你是李华, 你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文,请你根据下列要点写回信。
要点:1. 参加中文学习班;2. 看中文书刊、电视;3. 学唱中文歌曲;4. 交中国朋友。 注意:1.词数100左右;2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3. 开头语已为你写好。 例文
June 8, 2008
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.
Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as you’ll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible.
Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so you’ll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. You can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.
Try and write me in Chinese next time.
Best wishes
Li Hua
2009年高考英语作文 全国卷I & II
2009年全国卷I英语作文
书面表达(满分25分)
假定你是李华,正在英国接受英语培训,住在一户英国人家里。今天你的房东Mrs Wilson不在家,你准备外出,请给Mrs Wilson写一留言条,内容包括:
1.外出购物 2.替房东还书3.Tracy来电话留言:
1)咖啡屋(Bolton Coffee)见面取消 2)此事已告知Susan 3)尽快回电
注意:1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
范文:
Mrs Wilson,
I’m going out shopping, and won’t be back until about 5:00 pm. I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library. At about I o’clock this afternoon, Tracy called, saying that she couldn’t meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to. She felt very sorry about that, but said that you could set some other time for the meeting. She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home. She has already told Susan about this change.
Li Hua
2009年全国卷II英语作文
假定你是李华,你的美国朋友打算暑期来北京旅游,来信询问改建后前门大街的情况。请你写信回复,简单介绍以下内容:
1、简况:长800米、600多年历史、300余家商铺;
2、位置:天安门广场南面;
3、交通:公共汽车17、69、59等路,地铁2号线;
4、特色:步行街、当当车、茶馆、剧院等。
参考词汇:步行街:pedestrian street 当当车:trolley car 地铁:subway
注意:1、词数100左右,开头语已经为你写好;2、可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 作文范文:
Dear Sarah,
Thank you for your letter asking about the rebuilt Qianmen Street. Here is something about it. Qianmen Street is a famous street of over 600 years old. Along this 800-metre street, there are more than 300 shops. As the street is in the center of Beijing, just to the south of Tian’anmen
Square, it’s very convenient to get there by bus. You may take Buses No.17, 69 or 59.subway Line 2 has a stop there too. Qianmen Street is a pedestrian street, but there are trolley cars to take you not only to the shops, but also to theaters and teahouses where you can experience a truly Chinese way of life, I’m sure you’ll like it.
Yours,
Li Hua
2010年高考英语作文 全国卷
I & II
2010年全国卷I英语作文
假设你是育才中学学生会主席李华,你校将举办一次英语演讲比赛(speech contest),希望附近某大学的外籍教师Smith 女士来做评委,请参照以下比赛通知给她写一份信,
注意:词数100左右。
Dear Ms .Smith,
I’m Li Hua. Chair of the Student Union of Yucai Middle School, which is close to your University. I’m writing to invite you to be a judge at our English speech contest to be held in our school on June 1st. It will start at 2:00 pm and keep for about three hours. Ten students will deliver their speeches on the given topic ―Man and the Nature‖. We hope you will accept our invitation if it is convenient for you. Please call me at 446765560. if you have any
questions.
I am looking forward to your reply.
With best wishes Li Hua
2010年全国卷II英语作文
假设你是李华,你的美国笔友Peter层表示希望来中国教书。你校现在需招聘外教,请给他写封信,告知招聘信息。内容主要包括:
1.教授课程:英语口语、英语写作、今日美国、今日英语等
2.授课对象:高中生(至少三年英语基础)
3.工作量:—每周12学时,任选三门课 —担任学生英语俱乐部或英语校报顾问(advisor) 注意:
1.字数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头语已为你写好,请将完整的回信书写在答题卡上。
a native-speaker to teach some courses to senior students. If you e, you can choose three of the following four courses: Speaking, Writing, Britain Today and America Today, and teach 12 hours a week. The students who are going to take these courses have at least three years of English learning experiences. Besides teaching, you will also work as an advisor to our students’ English club or our school’s English newspaper.
Please let me know if you are interested and if you have any other questions. I’d be more than happy to help.
Best,
Li Hua
2011年全国卷I英语作文
假定你是李华,正在一所英国学校学习暑期课程,遇到一些困难,希望得到学校辅导中心(Learning Center)的帮助。根据学校规定,你需书面预约,请按下列要点写一封信:
1.本人简介:
2.求助内容;
3.约定时间;
4. 你的联系方式(Email:lihua@6 ;Phone:45678)。
注意:1词数l00左右;
2可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3结束语已为你写好。
2011年全国卷II英语作文
假定你是李华,你所喜爱的Global Mirror周报创刊五周年之际征集读者意见.请你依据以下内容给主编写封信,内容主要包括:
1.说明你是该报的忠实读者
2.赞赏该报优点:
1)兼顾国内外新闻
2)介绍名人成功故事
3.提出建议:刊登指导英语学习的文章
注意:1.词数100左右,开头语己为你写好;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Editor-in-Chief,
I’m a regular reader of your newspaper. I like it very much mainly for the following two reasons. First, it covers both national and international news so that, by simply turning the pages, I can learn all important things that have happened during the week. Equally attractive are the success stories of world-famous people, which help me understand how a person can work hard to make the world a better place.
As a young student, I suggest that Global Mirror carry s to guide us in our English learning , and I hope that it will bee even more popular.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
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