作文一:《中考英语满分作文指路》14700字
中考英语满分作文指路
每年的英语中考都有写作这一考查的内容,所以同学们要重视写作的方法,消除畏惧心理,排除心理障碍。纵观近几年中考英语写作题,题材一般是写人、写事、写物、写景、日记、书信、通知、便条等文体。一般来说,不同的写作题材,它的人物,时间,写作的重点也是不尽相同的。下面简单介绍一下中考英语写作六个要素:审题清,要点明,列提纲,全文顺,无病句,打草稿。
审题要清
看到考题后,先不要急于动笔,要仔细看清题目要求的内容。在自己的头脑中构思出一个框架或画面,确定短文的中心思想,不要匆匆下笔,看懂题意,根据提供的资料和信息来审题。审题要审格式、体裁、人物关系、故事情节、主体时态、活动时间、地点等。
要点明确
要点是给分的一个重要因素。为了防止写作过程中遗漏要点,同学们要充分发挥自己的观察力,把情景中给出的各个要点逐一罗列出。
列出提纲
为写作做好准备。根据文章要点短文的中心思想将主要句型、关键词语记下,形成提纲。
写顺全文
写短文时要做到五个方面:
1.避免使用汉语式英语,尽量使用自己熟悉的句型。
2.多用简单句型,记事、写人一般都不需要复杂的句型。可适当多使
用陈述句、一般疑问句、祈使句和感叹句。不用或少用非谓语或独立主格结构等较复杂的句型。
3.注意语法、句法知识的灵活运用。语态、时态要准确无误;主谓语要一致,主语的人称和数要和谓语一致;注意冠词用法,例如:It takes Tom
half an hour to go to school by bus.中的an不能写成a;注意拼写,例如:fourteen,forty,ninth等不要写成forteen,fourty,nineth等;注意标点符号和大小写。
4.描写人物时,要生动具体,可以选择使用下列词汇,例如:外形:tall,short,fat,thin,strong,weak,pretty等;颜色:red,yel,low,blue,white,green,brown,black等;心情:glad,happy,sad,excited,anxious,interest,ed等;情感:love,like,hate,feel,laugh,cry,smile,shout等。
5.上下文要连贯。同学们应把写好的句子,根据故事情节,事情发生的先后次序(时间或空间),使用一些表示并列、递进等过渡词进行加工整理,使文章连贯、自然、流畅。同学们应注意下面过渡的用法:并列关系:and,as well as,or…;转折关系:but,yet,how,ever…;时间关系:when,while,after,before,then,after that…;因果关系:so,there,fore,asaresult…;目的:in order to,in order that,so as to,so that…;
列举:for example ,such as…;总结性:in general,in all,in a
word,generally speaking…
没有病句
中考作文时,由于时间紧、内容多,同学们出错在所难免。因此,改错这一环节必不可少。中考作文评卷是根据要点、语言准确性、上下文的
连贯性来给分,根据错误多少来扣分。因此中考时花几分钟时间用来检查错误显得尤为重要。检查错误应从以下几个方面入手:(1)看字数是否达到要求,看有无遗漏要点。
(2)看文体格式是否正确规范。
(3)看有无语法或用词上的错误。
(4)看单词拼写、字母大小写是否有错,标点符号有无遗漏或用错等等。
(5)注意时态、语态、人称是否上下文一致。
先打草稿
考试中,书面表达应做到先打草稿,写完后多读几遍,检查是否有误,然后再抄到试卷上,注意字迹要工整,不涂、不画、不勾不抹,避免不必要的扣分。
每年的英语中考都有写作这一考查的内容,所以同学们要重视写作的方法,消除畏惧心理,排除心理障碍。纵观近几年中考英语写作题,题材一般是写人、写事、写物、写景、日记、书信、通知、便条等文体。一般来说,不同的写作题材,它的人物,时间,写作的重点也是不尽相同的。下面简单介绍一下中考英语写作六个要素:审题清,要点明,列提纲,全文顺,无病句,打草稿。
审题要清
看到考题后,先不要急于动笔,要仔细看清题目要求的内容。在自己的头脑中构思出一个框架或画面,确定短文的中心思想,不要匆匆下笔,看懂题意,根据提供的资料和信息来审题。审题要审格式、体裁、人物关系、故事情节、主体时态、活动时间、地点等。
要点明确
要点是给分的一个重要因素。为了防止写作过程中遗漏要点,同学们要充分发挥自己的观察力,把情景中给出的各个要点逐一罗列出。
列出提纲
为写作做好准备。根据文章要点短文的中心思想将主要句型、关键词语记下,形成提纲。
写顺全文
写短文时要做到五个方面:
1.避免使用汉语式英语,尽量使用自己熟悉的句型。
2.多用简单句型,记事、写人一般都不需要复杂的句型。可适当多使用陈述句、一般疑问句、祈使句和感叹句。不用或少用非谓语或独立主格结构等较复杂的句型。
3.注意语法、句法知识的灵活运用。语态、时态要准确无误;主谓语要一致,主语的人称和数要和谓语一致;注意冠词用法,例如:It takes Tom
half an hour to go to school by bus.中的an不能写成a;注意拼写,例如:fourteen,forty,ninth等不要写成forteen,fourty,nineth等;注意标点符号和大小写。
4.描写人物时,要生动具体,可以选择使用下列词汇,例如:外形:tall,short,fat,thin,strong,weak,pretty等;颜色:red,yel,low,blue,white,green,brown,black等;心情:glad,happy,sad,excited,anxious,interest,ed等;情感:love,like,hate,feel,laugh,cry,smile,shout等。
5.上下文要连贯。同学们应把写好的句子,根据故事情节,事情发生
的先后次序(时间或空间),使用一些表示并列、递进等过渡词进行加工整理,使文章连贯、自然、流畅。同学们应注意下面过渡的用法:并列关系:and,as well as,or…;转折关系:but,yet,how,ever…;时间关系:when,while,after,before,then,after that…;因果关系:so,there,fore,asaresult…;目的:in order to,in order that,so as to,so that…;
列举:for example ,such as…;总结性:in general,in all,in a
word,generally speaking…
没有病句
中考作文时,由于时间紧、内容多,同学们出错在所难免。因此,改错这一环节必不可少。中考作文评卷是根据要点、语言准确性、上下文的连贯性来给分,根据错误多少来扣分。因此中考时花几分钟时间用来检查错误显得尤为重要。检查错误应从以下几个方面入手:(1)看字数是否达到要求,看有无遗漏要点。
(2)看文体格式是否正确规范。
(3)看有无语法或用词上的错误。
(4)看单词拼写、字母大小写是否有错,标点符号有无遗漏或用错等等。
(5)注意时态、语态、人称是否上下文一致。
先打草稿
考试中,书面表达应做到先打草稿,写完后多读几遍,检查是否有误,然后再抄到试卷上,注意字迹要工整,不涂、不画、不勾不抹,避免不必要的扣分。
中考英语书面表达背诵范文(二)
一、Great changes in my hometown
More than tty years ago, my hometown was just a small , old and poor town. Most of people were farmers. There were few factories. The people didn’t have enough food to eat and wore old clothes. They had a hard life .
Great changes have taken place in the past tty years . The people have found a lot of ways of making money . Now there are many tall buildings . They are very beautiful . Roads are wide and clean . People can take buses or drive their own cars to go to work . Many people have cell phones and personal puters. People’s living
conditions have improved a lot . Thanks to the government’s efforts .
my hometown is being more and more beautiful .
二、Save the earth
How to protect the environment has bee one of the biggest problems in the world .
It’s our duty to protect our environment . No matter where we live , we should do something to keep our neighborhood clean and tidy . We can collect waste paper or other waste things for recycling. We should plant more trees and we should prevent those factories from pouring waste water into rivers, lakes and fields. We shouldn’t
leave rubbish everywhere and spit in public places . We mustn’t pick
the flowers or step on the grass in public. If everyone tries his best to protect the environment , the world will bee much more
beautiful and our life will be better and better .
三、Improve our environment
Good environment can make people feel happy. To improve the environment means to qualify our life . What should we do to improve our environment ?
We should plant more trees . And we should prevent those factories from pouring waste water into rivers , lakes and fields . Whenever we see litter on the ground , we should pick it up and throw it into a dustbin . Don’t spit in public places . Don’t draw on public walls .
It’s our duty to keep our earth clean and tidy .
四、Pollution around us
In recent years our life is being better and better. But our environment is being worse and worse. It’s very bad for our life.
Now many people have air-conditioners and cars, they produce (give off ) waste gas. More and more trees are being cut down. There are so much sand on the earth (leaving only sand ) . We often see factories pour waste into rivers or lakes. Water in the river is quite dirty. We haven’t enough clean water to drink in cities. Now we are in danger. It’s very necessary and important to protect the environment well. I think if everyone tries his best to protect the environment, the world will bee much more beautiful , and our life will be better and better .
五、Make our world more beautiful !
Protecting the environment is being more and more important to humans . It’s our duty to take care of the nature around us . Animals and plants are our best friends ., and we should share the world with them . We shouldn’t kill wild animals , and we must protect forests because they are animals’ home . We must plant more trees
and grass , they can make the world greener . The more beautiful the world is, the happier lives we will have . Let’s do our best to make
the world beautiful.
六、Keep our school clean
We are studying in this school. It is our duty to keep it clean and tidy. It is not good to spit in public places, such as in the library, in the class. We shouldn’t leave rubbish here and there.
Don’t draw pictures on the wall, they influence the look of our school . We should keep the classroom clean and tidy. And we should do some cleaning often. If everyone tries his best to do something useful for our school, I’m sure our school will be more beautiful .
七、My country life
I like to live in the countryside. I live in a small village. There is a river near it. Lots of trees are around my house. I can see a lot of farms and birds. There is less noise. The air here is cleaner and fresher. There are fewer cars. I read aloud early in the morning. When it is getting dark, the moon is bright in the sky. It’s
very quiet . What a nice place I live in !
八、How to learn English well
As we know , English has bee an international language. It is more popular than any other language in China . English is widely spoken in the world and it is the most useful language around the world . But how to learn it well ?
The best way is to use it all the time . If we can talk in English , think in English we can learn it well . At school , we should learn to hear , speak, read and write carefully . We should spend enough time in practicing English . If we keep on working hard at English , we will be able to be good at it one day .
九、How I learn English
Hello, everyone. It is my honor to talk with all of you about how to learn English well . I like English very much . I always preview and master the main idea of the lesson before class. In class , I listen carefully , speak loudly and write carefully and take notes if necessary . After class , I do my homework carefully . I watch English movies and listen to English songs . I have booked an English newspaper . It’s Times English Post , I can learn a lot from it . I am not afraid of remembering the new words because I master many good methods . I hope you work hard at English and make progress every day . That’s all .
十、How I improved my English
When I began to learn English, I was poor at it. I was quite
worried at that time. Later I 1istened to the teacher attentively in class, and made notes carefully. If I had any question, I asked my English teacher or my classmates for help. Every morning I read the English texts aloud and listened to the English tapes. In the evening, after finishing my homework, I always read some English and magazines.
Now I am one of the best students at English in my class.
十一、The importance of English
English is the most widely spoken in the world. It’s spoken by most people in the USA, Great Britain, Canada, Australia, and New Zealand. It's also very widely used as a foreign language in many other countries of the world. It's widely used for business between different countries. More than three quarters of the information on the Internet is in English, too. It is really a bridge to so much knowledge . English is used by travellers and business people around the world. It's one of the world's most important languages as it is so widely used. That's why more and more people in China are interested in learning English.
English is so useful that we must learn it well . Now let’s work
hard at it and see who learns it faster and better in our class .
十二、I want to be an inventor
TVs, telephone, fridges, cars, planes, puters and many other things are important inventions. They have greatly changed our life.
Many people have their ideas and wishes. They want to invent some new things for the world. I am one of them. I want to be an inventor in the future, Inventions can bring fun and happiness to our life and make our daily life more convenient. Our life will bee better and better. Now I am a high school student. I will try my best to work hard at my lessons to make my dream e true.
十三、I want to be a tour guide
I want to be a tour guide because Beijing will host the 2008 Olympic Games. There will be many people to e to China from all over the world. Most of them don’t know Chinese. They want to visit
many interesting places in China. I can be one of the guides. I can make much money, too. How happy I will be! So from now on , I must study hard. I am going to learn English every day. I will try my best to make it e true.
十四、I like the Internet
The Internet is playing an important part in our daily life. It’s
very useful. I often search the Internet for some information. I can read the latest news, do some shopping, and get all kinds of information from it. I can also download the information that I need and I can send e-mails and make telephone calls to my friends on the internet. The most important thing is that I am able to study all my lessons on the Internet.
The Internet makes my life more interesting and colorful and it
has a wide effect on my study and daily life. I like the internet very much. How about you / Will you have a try ?
十五、The Internet
The Internet is being more and more important to us. Without it, we can’t do work better. We can go shopping without going out of our houses. And we can listen to music or watch movies on the Internet. It can also help a lot with our study. We can learn much knowledge on different subjects, and get information as soon as possible. But now, some of us work, study or play on the Internet for long time, especially for young people to play puter games. It’s bad for our eyes and health. If we make good use of the Internet, it will be our best friends and help us a lot .
十六、Computer
Computer is a wonderful machine. It's a great invention in many years. It develops very quickly. The smallest puter is as big as a note-book. We call it pocket puter. Computer bees more and more important in many ways. It has touched the lives of everyone, even people in faraway villages. It helps us to do with all kinds of information and we get knowledge from it. It can give us a lot fun.
十七、The importance of water
Of all the things we eat and drink, water is the most important. We can live without food for many days, but two or three days without
water, usually makes people die.
However, not all of people understand this. They keep throwing rubbish into the rivers or lakes . Some factories even pour waste water into the river. As a result, many rivers and lakes have bee so dirty that the water is no longer safe for people to drink .
Let’s do our best to keep the water clean to save ourselves .
十八、Water
Water is very important for our life. Every day we use water to drink, too cook and to wash. Water is necessary for all plants. They need water to grow. People can’t live without water. Plants will
die without water. It is important to all living things. However, many people pollute lakes and rivers with waste water, so we must stop some people or some factories from wasting water or polluting water and help keep the water clean. At the same time we should save as much water as possible.
十九、I like sports
I feel that taking exercise is good for our health. I often felt tired when I was studying before. From this term I keep on running when I get up in the morning. After class I often go to play basketball with my friends. Now I feel much better than before and I never feel tired when I am studying And I improve a lot in my lessons. So please take exercise as often as possible .
二十、Introduce yourself
My name is Li Lei . I was born in Fuzhou on December 15 ,2000 . I’m studying at Yucai Middle School. I learn Chinese, math, English, physics, chemistry, politics, and so on. I like English best. My favorite sport is football. My hobbies are drawing and puter. I’m
very happy to live in a happy family. There are 3 people in my family. My father is a doctor. My mother is a teacher. We love each other very much .
二十一、My best friend
My best friend is --- He is 15 years old. We are both in the same class. He works very hard. He is never late for school and he does well in all his lessons. He is always ready to help others. My math is very poor, so he often helps me with my math after class. His parents are both teachers. They are very busy, so he often helps do the housework at home. He is a little shorter than me but he is very strong. He likes playing football very much at school. We often play football together and he plays it pretty well . He gets on well with us . Everyone in our class likes him .
作文二:《短篇英语作文【55】指路》900字
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Giving directions「指路」
Last weekend when I was on the street a Foreigner stopped me to ask directions. Even Though I listen to the English radio station quite Often, but when the man spoke I still had trouble Listening to him; he spoke so fast! I was so excited And nervous that I to k a long breath before I could answer. Actually my mouth could not talk fast enough for all the words going through my head. I took my pen and a piece of paper out to draw a rough map for him. After a few short remarks of thanks and courtesies he took my map and left. Everything took place within ten minutes, but I felt this short exchange was the opening of a bright new world to me.
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作文三:《关于指路的英语作文 关于指路的》1100字
关于指路的英语作文 关于指路的
关于指路的
1.(2002年福州市)根据中文提示和英文提示词语,写一篇意思连贯、符合逻辑的短文。所给英文提示词语必须都用上。词数60,70左右。
(1)昨天晚上我和妈妈出去散步。(2)在路上我们遇见了一个外国人。(3)他向我询问如何去温泉饭店。(4)我告诉他沿路往前走,在第三个转弯处向左拐就能看见饭店。(5)他非常感谢我,我也为能帮他而高兴。
提示词语:gooutforawalk,ontheroad,thewayto,walkalong,ontheleft,thankfor,behappythat.
yesterdayevening,,,
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外国朋友更多地了解北京。外国朋友感谢小明,并认为小明的英语非常好。
外国友人说重庆变化很大 3.(2002年重庆市)根据内容要求写一篇50,80词的短文。要求:书写格式正确,语句通畅、流畅,无语法错误。内容提要:今年四月AAPP要在重庆召开,外国友人受到重庆人民的热烈欢迎。
向外国友人简单介绍黄山(theyellowmountain) (2002年安徽省)安徽黄山被联合国教科文组织定为世界自然文化遗产。假设外国友人到你校参观后,准备去旅游。请根据要点向外国友人简单介绍黄山(theyellowmountain)。(1)位于安徽南部,是中国著名的旅游胜地。
便条 假定你叫李蕾,是英语老师mary的学生,你于2004年5月30日下午6:00去她家通知一件事,并向她借一本英语小说,可她不在,因此你只好给她留一张便条。
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启事 ,中文提示,我叫Steve,在操场丢了一串钥匙,请打电话86856034找我,本人将万分感谢。,范文展示,lostmay4,2004I...
写email网上租房 假如你叫李华,今年暑假你的一位美国朋友打算携全家到北戴河度假一个月。他打算租一套合适的住房,
想请你帮忙。你碰巧在因特网上发现了几则租房广告,并认为其
中的一个较为合适。
作文四:《指路英语》500字
July 31
Asking for and Giving Directions
How do I get to …?
What ’s the best way to …?
Where is …?
Go the front door of the center
Keep walking
Go down stairs
Go straight
Go straight on (until you e to …)
Turn back. /Go back.
Turn left/right.
Go along …
Take the first/second road on the left/right It ’s on the left/right
Straight on
Opposite
Near
Next to
Between
At the end (of)
On/at the corner
Behind
In front of
(Just) around the corner
Traffic lights
Where can I find them?
In Wall Street
Coffee machine, speaking electronic booking board
Outside Wall Street
Subway station, cinema, bank center,
作文五:《英语指路》5000字
1. Take the one-way street. 走这条单行道。
One-way street 就是单行道。这句比较适合讲给自己开车的老外听。
2. You will stay on the street for a while until you hit the first traffic light. 你走到第一个红绿灯那儿。
Stay for a while 通常指五到十分钟的时间,不会太久。遇到某个东西,可以用 hit 这个词,如 hit the traffic light,hit the stop sign 等等。traffic light 也有人说成 light,stop light。
3. Then take a left. 向左转。
向左转可以说成 turn left,take a left 或是 make a left。有时光讲 take a left 不明确,你可以加上路名,明确地告诉人家要转哪一条路,例如 Take a left into Changan Street,或是 Take a left onto Changan Street.
机场:
亨利: Excuse me, I e from the United States, now I am totally lost.(对不起,我来自美国,现在我迷路了。) 机场服务员: I am very happy to help you.(我很高兴帮助你。)
亨利: Thank you very much. I need go to Jinjiang Hotel.(非常感谢。我要去锦江宾馆。)
机场服务员: Ok, you have two choices to get there–Taxi and Airport bus.(你有两个选择,乘出租车或者机场大巴。) 亨利: Thanks a lot! Bye-bye.(谢谢,再见。)
出租车:
出租车司机: Wele to Chengdu. Where do you want to go?(欢迎来成都。请问去哪儿?)
亨利: Jinjiang Hotel Please.(请到锦江宾馆。)
出租车司机: Here we are. 55 Yuan, please.(到了,55元。)
亨利: Thank you. Here is 55 Yuan.(谢谢,这是55元。)
李铮说,“Wele to Chengdu”(欢迎来成都)这句非常必要,请市民们都记住这句,这样更像一个国际化的旅游城市。 公交车站:
亨利:Would you please tell me how can I go to Caotangsi?(请问草堂寺怎么去?)
莉莉:You can take bus No. 47.(你可以乘坐47路公交车。)
马路上:
亨利:Could you please tell me how to get to the nearest hospital?(请问最近的一家医院在哪儿?)
莉莉:Turn left at the first street corner, and keep going straight, then you will see Huaxi Hospital.(在第一个街角左转,然后一直朝前走,然后就能看到华西医院了。)
a T road 丁字路口
一些相关的词汇: be far from 距离某处很远 be nearby 距离某处很近 go straight across/to/through 径直走过/向/过 cross (over) 穿过(某条街道) be next to 紧邻 turn left/right 左转/右转 go up/down 向上(北)/向下(南)
go back/back/back up 向回走 go east/west/south/north 向东/南/西/北 go on/along…till you meet… 沿…一直走,直到… be on sb’s left/right 在某人的左边/右边 be the first/second/third from the left/right 从左/右数第一/二/三个
directly opposite 和…相对 be located behind/in front of 坐落在…的前面/后面
be on the corner of A street and B street 在A和B街交汇的拐角处 be in the corner of 在…的角落里 ground floor (英)首层 wing 配楼/建筑的一部分 annex 配楼/建筑的附属建筑 basement 地下室/第一层
twin building 由两个完全相同的部分构成的建筑 landmark 标志性的建筑 block/plex 由若干个建筑构成的建筑群/街区 stair 楼梯 step 台阶 wheel chair access 无台阶的/残疾人用 aisle 过道 intersection/crossroad 十字路口
a fork on the road 分叉路口 a T road 丁字路口 intersection/crossroads/junction/clover-leaf 立交桥
1. Can you tell me the way to the station?
请你告诉我去火车站怎么走?
Go straight ahead and turn left at the traffic lights.
沿这条路一直向前走,在红绿灯那儿向左转。
1)问路的几种表示方法:
a. Excuse me, but can you tell me the way to the museum?
请你告诉我去博物馆怎么走?
b. Could you tell me how I can get to the museum?
请你告诉我去博物馆怎么走?
c. Would you please tell me where the post office is?
请告诉我邮局在哪儿?
d. Excuse me, but please tell me how to get to the railway station?
请问,去火车站怎么走?
e. Is the zoo far from here?
动物园离这儿远吗?
f. Will it take long to get to the airport?
去机场要很长时间吗?
2).回答别人问路的表示方法:
a. Go along the street until you e to the traffic lights.
沿这条路一直走到红绿灯那儿。
b. Turn right / left at the second crossing. (Take the second turning on the right / left)
在第二个十字路口向右 / 左转弯。
c. Take a number 46 bus, and get off at the square.
坐46路公共汽车,在广场下车。
d. Go straight ahead along the bund and then turn left.
沿着外滩往前走,然后往走转弯。 2. It's only about ten minutes' walk.
那儿离这儿只有走大约10分钟的路。
it常被用来表示距离,后面可以跟表示距离的名词短语,也可以跟“名词(表示时间) + 名词(表示行走方式)”,要注意撇号的位置。例如:
It is three miles to the lake. 这儿离湖有3英里的路程。
My home is not far from here. It's only five minutes' walk. 我家离这儿不远,走5分钟就到。 It is one hour' ride from Shanghai to Suzhou. 从上海坐车到苏州有1小时的路程。
有时地方名称也直接做主语:The post office is two blocks away. 邮局离这儿两个街区的距离。
1).corner前可用不同的介词表示不同的位置概念,街道的拐角可用介词on或at。例如: The dog slept fortably in the corner of the room. 那条狗在屋角舒服地睡觉。
I was about to cross the street when a car came round the corner. 我正要过马路,这时拐角处开来一辆汽车。
2).街道的名称可使用avenue, street和boulevard。avenue指的是宽阔的林荫大道,尤其指美国城市里纵向的街道,与其交叉的横道称为street。boulevard也是林荫大道。
4. Then walk two blocks straight ahead until you e to Cherry Avenue. 然后一直向前走过两个街区,直到切里街。
5. There's a bus stop across the street on the corner of Cherry and Bellflower. 在街对面,切里街和贝尔弗劳尔大道的转角上有一个公共汽车站。
本句中across the street意思相当于on the other side of the street。
6. Take a number 10 bus going down Cherry. 乘沿切里街行驶的10路公共汽车。
1).乘公共汽车, 火车, 电梯等都可以用动词take,如本课后面的例子:
Take the elevator to the second floor.
My brother is going to take a ship for Wuhan.
2).分词短语going down Cherry是修饰bus的定语。down在这里是介词,表示“沿着”,常和along替换使用。请看本课另一句:Then turn to the right and walk one block along Second to the corner of Orange Avenue. 然后向左拐,沿着第二街走,穿过一条马路,到奥兰治街的街角。 这句中的along也可改用down。又如:
The boat t down / along the river. 小船顺河而下。
7. If you follow these directions, you won't have any trouble. 如果你按照上述指引做的话,到保罗的寓所去是没有什么困难的。
示例:
(1)
A : Excuse me. Could you tell me the way to get to the post office from here?
B : Sure. Walk along Second Avenue and you can see it on the right. It's between the shoe store and the shopping mall.
A : Thank you very much.
B : It's my pleasure.
译文:
A: 打扰一下。你能告诉我从这里到邮局的路么?
B: 当然。沿着第二大街走,然后你能看到它在右边。它在鞋店和大型购物中心之间。 A: 非常感谢你。
B: 乐意效劳。
(2)
A : Excuse me. Is there a library nearby?
B : Yes. There's a library, between the drugstore and the post office.
A : Thank you very much.
B : You're wele.
译文:
A: 打扰一下。附近有图书馆么?
B: 是的。在这个药店和邮局之间有一座图书馆。
A: 非常感谢你。
B: 不客气。
作文六:《中考英语满分作文关于指路的》600字
( 2002 年福州市中考)根据中文提示和英文提示词语,写一篇意思连贯、符合逻辑的短文。所给英文提示词语必须都用上。词数 60 - 70 左右。 ( 1 )昨天晚上我和妈妈出去散步。( 2 )在路上我们遇见了一个外国人。( 3 )他向我询问如何去温泉饭店。( 4 )我告诉他沿路往前走,在第三个转弯处向左拐就能看见饭店。( 5 )他非常感谢我,我也为能帮他而高兴。 提示词语: go out for a walk , on the road , the way to , walk along , on the left , thank for , be happy that .参考范文:??? Yesterday evening , I t out for a walk with my mother . On the road , we met a foreigner . He asked me the way to the Hot Spring Hotel . I told him to walk along the road and take the third turning on the left , then he could see the hotel . He thanked me very much for my help . I was happy thatI could help him .
作文七:《中考英语作文范文 关于指路的》600字
( 2002 年福州市)根据中文提示和英文提示词语,写一篇意思连贯、符合逻辑的短文。所给英文提示词语必须都用上。词数 60 - 70 左右。 ( 1 )昨天晚上我和妈妈出去散步。( 2 )在路上我们遇见了一个外国人。( 3 )他向我询问如何去温泉饭店。( 4 )我告诉他沿路往前走,在第三个转弯处向左拐就能看见饭店。( 5 )他非常感谢我,我也为能帮他而高兴。 提示词语: go out for a walk , on the road , the way to , walk along , on the left , thank for , be happy that . Yesterday evening , I t out for a walk with my mother . On the road , we met a foreigner . He asked me the way to the Hot Spring Hotel . I told him to walk along the road and take the third turning on the left , then he could see the hotel . He thanked me very much for my help . I was happy thatI could help him .
作文八:《中考英语辅导作文:关于指路的》700字
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:1 .( 2002 年福州市)根据中文提示和英文提示词语,写一篇意思连贯、符合逻辑的短
文。所给英文提示词语必须都用上。词数 60 , 70 左右。
( 1 )昨天晚上我和妈妈出去散步。( 2 )在路上我们 遇见了一个外国人。( 3 )
他向我询问如何去温泉饭店。( 4 )我告诉他沿路往前走,在第三个转弯处向左拐就能看见
饭店。( 5 )他非常感谢我,我也为能帮他而高兴。
提示词语: go out for a walk , on the road , the way to , walk along , on the left ,
thank for , be happy that .
Yesterday evening , I t out for a walk with my mother . On the road , we met a foreigner . He asked me the way to the Hot Spring Hotel . I told him to walk along the road and
take the third turning on the left , then he could see the hotel . He thanked me very much for my
help . I was happy thatI could help him .
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作文九:《英语指路作文六句话4篇》20400字
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第一篇
中考英语书面表达写作指导
一、概述
英语写作是近年中考乃至高考的必考题型,且所占比重较大,同时也是拉开考生距离
的关键题型。随着我国对外经济、文化、教育等方面的日益频繁,英语写作也成为雅思、托福、GRE (美国研究生入学考试)等诸多考试以及职场应聘的必考内容之一。
近几年来,中考英语写作题型呈以下特点:
1、 题材内容丰富多样,注重对学生情感的渗透;
2、 涉及的素材、问题的设计,情境真实自然,符合学生的年龄特点和生活实际,给
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了学生自由发挥的空间,让他们有话可说 ;
3、 控制性与开放性相结合,有放有收;
4、 试题的体裁多以记叙为主。
二、高分作文的特点
1、书写工整,卷面整洁,很少有涂改痕迹;
2、分段清晰合理,阅卷老师很容易就能找到作文题目要求的重点和重点句子;
3、要点齐全,不缺要点;
4、首尾呼应,自然成一体;
5、使用大量的高级词汇及句型,阅卷老师一看就知道这个同学功底不一般,自然就会给高分了;
6、开头言简意赅、不啰嗦、不偏题、迅速进入主题;
7、段与段之间,句与句之间有适当的连接词,自然成一体;
8、多处表达同一个意思时,没有重复单词句型,说明学生的词汇量不同寻常,阅卷老师一般会给高分;
9、能够恰当使用谚语、格言等为文章添彩。
三、中考作文的评分标准
第四档(12—15分)覆盖所有内容要点。准确使用丰富的词汇和语言结构。全文结构紧凑,有效地使用了语句间的连接成份,符合英语交际习惯;具备较强的语言运用能力。
第三档(8—11分)覆盖所有内容要点。恰当使用较丰富的词汇和语言结构。适当运用了语句间的连接成份,较好地达
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到了交际的目的。
第二档(4—7分)没能覆盖所有内容要点。词汇和语言结构不能完全满足写作任务的要求。文章不够连贯,影响对写作内容的理解。
第一档(0—3分)漏掉较多内容要点或写的内容与规定任务无关。词汇和语言结构错误较多。内容不连贯,无法传达有效信息。
四、写作步骤
1、审:仔细审题,浏览所给信息,弄清文章要表达什么,确定体裁、时态、人称、主题
及词数等要素,然后对所给信息进行组织整理,按照自己的写作思路使之条理化。
2、列:根据题材列出提纲,这样可以使杂乱无章的材料变得井然有序。可使写作思路清晰、不易漏掉知识点、保证卷面整洁。
3、写:写作时应按照已经给出的信息去写,再适当加上自己的发挥,语言表达要流畅,采用―总-分‖或―总-分-总‖结构,开头和结尾注意简洁,最好互相呼应。
4、连:适当运用关连词句,使文章层次清晰,各个部分衔接自然。
5、美:反复检查,包括单词拼写、大小写、标点符号、时态、语态、单复数、主谓一致、完词等,美化文章,在有把
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握的情况下展示自己的语言功底。要求80字的作文,最少达到70字,最高不超过90字,多或少都会扣分。
五、十句话作文法
英语写作中流行的十句作文法是由专家总结的一种高分作文方法,考生在经过短期训练之后便可较大程度地提高作文成绩。需要指出的是:所谓十句作文并非一定是10句,很多考生的高分作文(80字以下)的句子数量都在8至10句之间(以句子长短和结构不同而变化)。如按每个句子平均8~12个单词计算,用7~10个句子便能完成一篇要求在80词左右的作文。其基本模式为:
第一段为开头,包括两句。第一句为
主题句,提出问题并通过问题点明全文主
体;第二句为扩展句,进一步说明和支持
主题句。另外,也可将两句顺序倒过来,
由第一句说明情况,第二句提出问题。
第二段为正文,共七句。第一句为主
题句,提出本段的主体,它应与第一段的
主体相一致。第二句至第七句为扩展句,
说明和支持本段的主体。句与句之间要注
意运用好过渡词,以使行文流畅。
第三段为结尾,简化为一句,是对全文的总结,并说明作
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者自己的观点。
三段之间的衔接要灵活运用―启、承、转、合‖的过渡手段。
例文一
要求:,、词数:,,个词左右;题目及
文章的开头已给出,但不算在词数内。
,、表格中所列内容必须都用上,可适当
增加细节,使行文连贯。
,、不要使用真实姓名及所在学校名称,
否则答案作废。
Notice
Good morning, everyone! I’ll
tell you a piece of good news.
We are planning an outing.
__________
Good morning, everyone!
本文是仿照十句作文法而写的一篇优秀考场作文。文章围绕―Notice‖
这一主题展开,
把表格所提供的信息陈述清楚,要点齐全。文章中语句简练,语句变化多样,有简单句、并列句和复合句,也用上了
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祈使句,过渡自然,结尾表明作者自己对这次郊游活动的祝
愿,增强了感染力。
例文二
你叫林海(英文名叫Joe ),你的朋友John 发给你的电子
邮件中提到了关于学校准备开办英语学习班的消息,你对此
事很感兴趣,请给John 回一封邮件,询问有关英语学习班
的详情。邮件的要点如下:
1(对英语学习班很感兴趣。
2(希望可以练习英语,结识朋友。
3(问英语学习班的上课时间、地点、内容以及费用。
注意:
1(邮件要通顺、连贯。
2(词数80左右,邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好,但不计
人总词数。
3(不能在答卷上透露个人的任何信息(例如具体的学校和
姓名等),否则答案作废。 Dear John,
Thanks very much for the information about the English
evening class.(主题句) It sounds very interesting to me. (扩
展句) You know I want to practise my English and make
some new friends. (扩展句) I think this English evening class will be helpful to me. (扩展句) Could you please tell me a little more about the class? (扩展句) When does it begin and
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how much does it cost? (扩展句) Where will the class be held?
(扩展句) Also, do you have any more information about what we will do in class? (扩展句)
I’m looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible. (结尾句)
Yours Joe 例文三
假设某美国教育代表团将来你校参观访问,请你根据下表
提示的信息,用英语向外宾
注意:1(词数不少于80。文章的开头和结尾已经写好,
不计入总词数。
2(要点完整、层次清晰、语法正确、上下文连贯。
3(文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。
Ladies and gentlemen!
It’s my honor to tell you about the changes to our school.
In the past, there was only a small playground. The books in the library were old and there were only a few kinds of them. The number of the trees and flowers was small.
But things have greatly changed these years. Now we have a bigger playground and more basketball courts.院子 More
different kinds of new books can be lent to us. Our school is as
beautiful as a garden with lots of green trees all year round.
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I think it’s lucky of us to have such good studying
environment. We will work harder and serve the people
better in the future.
I hope you will enjoy your stay in our school. Thank you
very much!
练习:
一、假如你是Daniel 。请你根据下面的提示内容,给你的
笔友Kitty 写一封电子邮件,向她倾述你的烦恼,并请求她
的帮助。词数要求:80词。
1. 着迷于网上聊天,并花费很多时间;
2. 经常回家很晚,不能按时交作业;
3. 父母和老师不喜欢这样,要我放弃这个爱好;
4. 为此常感到有压力,也不知怎么办才好,希望给出一些
建议
二、紧张的初中学习生活就要结束了,你即将迎来一个轻
松的暑假。请根据下面方框内的
注意:1、词数80,100; 2、文中不得出现真实的地址和
姓名;
3、方框内容不必逐字翻译,可适当发挥。
参考词汇:知识 knowledge, 社会活动 social activities
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例文:
Dear Kitty,
How time flies! I haven’t seen you for a long time. I am in
trouble now. Could you help me with my problem? I love chatting on the Internet. I spend a lot of time talking with others so I go home late every night. I’m too tired to do my
homework and I can’t hand it in on time. Both my teachers and parents don’t like me to do so. They hope I can give it up. I feel stressed and don’t know what to do. Could you
give me some advice? Please write to me soon.
Best wishes,
Yours, Daniel
The summer holiday is ing. I’m going to have a good
rest and learn to relax myself. I will read more useful books because reading more books is not only interesting but also can make me learn more knowledge. I will try to spend more time in chatting with my parents and help them to do some housework. I am going to take part in the social activities so that I can know more about the society. If possible, I’d like
to go to Shanghai for a visit of the World Expo. I’m sure I’
ll have an interesting and meaningful summer holiday.
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第二篇
第一段两句话。
议论文:第一句,说明事实情况,第二句,提出论点。
记叙文:第一句,概况发生的事情,第二句,发表作者个人观点。
第二段六句话。
议论文:第一句论点1,第二句论据1,第三句论点2,第四句论据2,第五句论点3,第六句论据3。论点一般为作文要求中所给的信息点,论据可以为信息点,也可为作者自己的例证、数据以及说理性文字。
记叙文:第一句事件1,第二句事件2,第三句议论1,第四句事件3,第五句事件4,第六句议论2。记叙文要根据作文要求写出具体事件,可根据要求增加事件条目减少议论条目,也可减少事件条目增加议论条目。中间段应为边记叙边议论,议论条目一般为作者自己添加的内容,可根据作文内容灵活选择其放置位置,不可过于刻板,不能为了议论而议论。
第三段两句话。
议论文:第一句,表明作者观点,呼应首段。第二句,承
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诺和口号类文字。
记叙文:第一句,总结和体会,内容应和首段观点保持一
致。第二句,展望和希望类文字。
例文剖析
假如你是某中学的一名学生。6月3日,是星期五,在放
学回家的公交车上,你所经历的一件事情让你印象深刻。请
根据以下要点用英语写一篇日记。要点:1. 一位老爷爷和十
来岁的孙子上了车,老人拿着书包和小提琴;2. 你给老人让
座,老人的孙子却坐了下来,老人只得站在旁边;3. 孩子大
声喊着向老人要水喝,并将空水瓶扔到车上;4. 你认为孩子
应该尊敬、照顾老人,保持环境卫生。参考词汇:孙子
grandson 空水瓶 empty bottle 保持……干净keep…clean
要求: 1. 词数:80–100个。2. 日记开头已给出,不计入总
词数。3. 要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
June 3,Friday Fine On my way home on the bus, I saw ______________________ 范文
June 3,Friday Fine On my way home on the bus, I saw an old man and his grandson. His grandson made me really unhappy today。
The old man got on with his grandson of about ten. The old man was too old to walk well enough by himself. However, he was carrying the boy’s schoolbag and a violin.
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At the moment, I felt shame to sit on my seat. Immediately, I gave my seat to the old man. To my surprise, the boy sat down first, while the old man had to stand nearby. What worse, the boy shouted to his grandpa for water and then dropped the empty bottle on the bus. I got very angry with the naught boy. I think the boy should not only respect and take care of the old man but also keep the environment clean。
第三篇
你知道怎样用地道的美式口语翻译下面这段话吗,― 走这
条单行道,在第一个红绿灯时左转, 那里就是 Hemphill Ave.
是一条双线道. 往下走, 你会在你的左边看到一个加油站,
继续走50 码, 直到看到一个三叉路口, 右转, 经过二个
stop sign. 你就会碰到 Wal Mart. 邮局就在 Wal Mart 的
对面. 而杨先生的家呢, 邮局后面就是啦‖。 以下可以作为
参考: 1. Take the one-way street. 走这条单行道
One-way street 就是单行道. 尤其在 Downtown 地区, 以
亚特兰大和纽奥良为例, 其复杂的程度可以用进的去, 出
不来来形容, 实在不是个愉快的开车经验。 2. You will
stay on the street for a while until you hit the first traffic
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light 你会走一会儿, 直到你遇到第一个红绿灯。 有
一次我开车老美坐我旁边, 他帮我指路就是这么说的. Stay for a while 通常指五到十分钟的时间, 不会太久. 遇见某样
东西, 可以用 hit 这个字, 如 hit the traffic light, hit the
stop sign 等等. 而 traffic light 也有人说成 light, 或 stoplight。 3. Then take a left. 向左转 向左转可以说
成 turn left, take a left 或是 Make a left. 有时光讲 take a left 不明确, 你可以加上路名, 明确地告诉人家要转哪一
条路, 例如 Take a left into Hemphill Ave. 或是 Take a left onto Hemphill Ave。 4. It will be Hemphill Ave. It’s two-lane traffic. 那就会是 Hemphill Ave, 它是一条双线道 指路的时候如果能够说出街道名称是最好,所以通常我会把
转到哪一条路的路名也指出来. 至于是几线道一般指路的时
候则比较不会提及. 双线道是指来去各一个车道共二线道而
言,四线道就是 four-lane traffic. 像亚特兰大的 Interstate Highway 有些地方都是十二线道, 那就是 twelve-lane traffice 够惊人吧。 5. Come down Hemphill Ave about
five blocks. 由 Hemphill 街往下走约五个 blocks 英文
这个部份跟中文有异曲同工之妙喔. 我们会习惯地说, 往 ―下‖ 走, 英文也会说e ―down‖ 或是 get ―down‖, 这
里如果只说 Come Hemphill Ave. 听来是不是怪怪的, 至
于 block 指的是一块一块的建筑, 外国人在指路时很喜欢
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用 block 作为计量的单位。 6. You will see a BP gas station on your left. 在你的左手边你会看到一座 BP 加油
站 指路的时候除了路名之外, 明显的地标也是有帮助
的. 通常你可以指出一些明显的建筑物或是加油站来帮助对
方. 加油站的英文是 gas station, 有时会简称 station。 7. Keep going 50 yards before you e to a fork road. 继续
走 50 码, 直到你走到一个三叉路口 继续往下走可以
用 keep going 这个字, 或是 continue straight 或是 keep straight 也很常用. Fork road
就是我们说的三叉路口. 那如果是丁字路口要怎么说,
你可以说, This road will dead end into 10th Street. 就可以
表达出丁字路口的意思了。 8. Make a right, pass two stop signs and you will run into a Wal Mart. 向右转, 经过
二个 Stop sign, 你就会遇到 Wal Mart 有一次我去
Ohio, 由于事先的准备不够,以致于从头迷路到最后. 有一
次有一个老黑跟我报路用的就是 You’ll run into it! 意思就
是, 我会遇到的. 他们也喜欢这么说, You can’t miss it! 就
是说, 你绝不会错过的。 9. The post office is just right
across the street of it. 邮局就在 Wal Mart的正对面 个
人觉的 Right across the street of it 是个很重要的片语, 加
上 ―right‖ across 表示出 ―正‖ 对面的意思. 还有一个很常
用的就是在什么什么的旁边, 这个要用 The office is next to
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it. It 代表之前已经提过的 Wal Mart, 如果之前没有提及, 这里也可以直接说成, across the street of Wal Mart。 10. Mr. Yang’s house is behind the post office. 杨先生的房子就在邮局后面 有一次也是有一个老美路我问路, 由于那个地方不是很远,我就用手指这那里说, It’s over there. 可是事实上那里是被一栋建筑物给挡住了, 所以老美就反问我, Behind this building? 所以我就知道我应该说成 It’s behind this building 会来得比较好些。
第四篇
n大学英语六级作文写作流程
一审:审题
二想:想素材
三列:列提纲
四写:写作
五改:检查
作文开头:
1(名人名言
有人问了,―我没有记住名言,怎么办,尤其是英语名言,‖,很好办:编~
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原理:我们看到的东西很多都是创造出来的,包括我们欣赏的文章也是,所以尽管编,但是一定要听起来很有道理呦~而且没准将来我们就是名人呢~对吧,
经典句型:
A proverb says, ― You are only young once.‖
(适用于已记住的名言)
It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever.
(适用于自编名言)
更多经典句型:
As everyone knows, No one can deny that…
2(数字统计
原理:要想更有说服力,就应该用实际的数字来说明。
原则上在议论文当中十不应该出现虚假数字
的,可是在考试的时候哪管那三七二十一,但编无妨,只要我有东西写就万事大吉了。所以不妨试用下面的句型:
According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of
the college students wanted to further their study
after their graduation.
看起来这个数字文邹邹的,其实都是编造出来的,下面随便几个题目我们都可以这样编造:
Honesty
根据最近的一项统计调查显示,大学生向老师请假的理由
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当中78%都是假的。
Travel by Bike
根据最近的一项统计调查显示,85%的人在近距离旅行的时候首选的交通工具是自行车。
Youth
根据最近的一项统计调查显示,在某个大学,学生的课余时间的70%都是在休闲娱乐。
Five-day Work Week Better than Six-day
Work?
根据最近的一项统计调查显示,98%的人同意每周五天工作日。
更多句型:
A recent statistics shows that …
作文结尾:
1(如此结论
也就是说,开头很好,也必然要有一个精彩的
结尾,让读者眼前一亮,这样,你就可以拿高分了~比如下面的例子:
Obviously(此为过渡短语), we can e
to/reach/ arrive at/draw the conclusion that good
manners arise from politeness and respect for others. 如果
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读者很难―显而见之‖,但说无妨,就当读者的眼光太浅罢了~
更多过渡短语:
to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus ,
更多句型:
Thus, it can be concluded that…, Therefore, we can find
that…
2(如此建议
如果说―如此结论‖是结尾最没用的废话,那么
―如此建议‖应该是最有价值的废话了,因为这里虽然也是
废话,但是却用了一个很经典的虚拟语气的句型。拽~
Obviously, it is high time that we took some
measures to solve the problem.
这里的虚拟语气用得很经典,因为考官本来经常考这个句
型,而如果我们自己写出来,你说考官会怎么想呢,
更多句型:
Accordingly, I remend that some measures be taken.
Consequently, to solve the problem, some
measures should be taken.
写作绝招
写作的―七项基本原则‖:
一、 长 短 句原则
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工作还得一张一驰呢,老让读者读长句,累死人~写一个
短小精辟的句子,相反,却可以起到画龙点睛的作用。而且
如果我们把短句放在段首或者段末,也可以揭示主题:
As a creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although one action
is to meet the primary need of my body
and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of
mind, they are in a way quite similar. 如此可见,长短句结
合,抑扬顿挫,岂不爽哉,牢记~
强烈建议:在文章第一段(开头)用一长一短,且先长后
短;在文章主体部分,要先用一个短句解释主要意思,然后
在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式,定会让主
体部分妙笔生辉~文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。
二、 主 题 句原则
国有其君,家有其主,文章也要有其主。否则会给人造成―群
龙无首‖之感~相信各位读过一些破烂文学,故意把主体隐
藏在文章之内,结果造成我们稀里糊涂~不知所云~所以奉
劝各位一定要写一个主题句,放在文章的开头(保险型)或
者结尾,让读者一目了然,必会平安无事~
特别提示:隐藏主体句可是要冒险的~
To begin with, you must work hard at your
lessons and be fully prepared before the exam(主题句).
Without sufficient preparation, you can hardly expect to
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answer all the questions correctly.
三、 一 二 三原则
领导讲话总是第一部分、第一点、第二点、第三点、第二部分、第一点… 如此罗嗦。可毕竟还是
条理清楚。考官们看文章也必然要通过这些关键性
的―标签‖来判定你的文章是否结构清楚,条理自然。破解方法很简单,只要把下面任何一组的词汇加入到你的几个要点前就清楚了。
1)first, second, third, last(不推荐,原因:俗)
2)firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally(不推荐,原因:俗)
3)the first, the second, the third, the last(不推荐,原因:俗)
4)in the first place, in the second place, in the third place,
lastly(不推荐,原因:俗)
5)to begin with, then, furthermore, finally(强烈推荐)
6)to start with, next, in addition, finally(强烈推荐)
7)first and foremost, besides, last but not least(强烈推荐)
8)most important of all, moreover, finally
9)on the one hand, on the other hand(适用于两点的情况)
10)for one thing, for another thing(适用于两点的情况)
建议:不仅仅在写作中注意,平时说话的时候
也应该条理清楚~
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四、 短语优先原则
写作时,尤其是在考试时,如果使用短语,有两个好处:其一、用短语会使文章增加亮点,如果老师们看到你的文章太简单,看不到一个自己不认识的短语,必然会看你低一等。相反,如果发现亮点—精彩的短语,那么你的文章定会得高分了。其
二、关键时刻思维短路,只有凑字数,怎么办,用短语是一个办法~比如:
I cannot bear it.
可以用短语表达:I cannot put up with it.
I want it.
可以用短语表达:I am looking forward to it. 这样字数明显增加,表达也更准确。
五、 多实少虚原则
原因很简单,写文章还是应该写一些实际的东西,不要空话连篇。这就要求一定要多用实词,少
用虚词。我这里所说的虚词就是指那些比较大的词。比如我们说一个很好的时候,不应该之说nice这样空洞的词,应该使用一些诸如generous, humorous, interesting, smart,
gentle, warm-hearted, hospital 之类的形象词。再比如:
走出房间,general的词是:walk out of the room
但是小偷走出房间应该说:slip out of the room 小姐走出
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房间应该说:sail out of the room
小孩走出房间应该说:dance out of the room 老人走出房
间应该说:stagger out of the room 所以多用实词,少用虚
词,文章将会大放异彩~
六、 多变句式原则
1)加法(串联)
都希望写下很长的句子,像个老外似的,可就是怕写错,
怎么办,最保险的写长句的方法就是这些,可以在任何句子
之间加and, 但最好是前后的句子又先后关系或者并列关
系。比如说:
I enjor music and he is fond of playing guitar.
如果是二者并列的,我们可以用一个超级句式: Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm. 其它的短语可以用:
besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover
2)转折(拐弯抹角)
批评某人缺点的时候,我们总习惯先拐弯抹角说说他的优
点,然后转入正题,再说缺点,这种方式虽然阴险了点,可
毕竟还比较容易让人接受。所以呢,我们说话的时候,只要
在要点之前先来点废话,注意二者之间用个专这次就够了。
The car was quite old, yet it was in excellent
condition.
The coat was thin, but it was warm.
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更多的短语:
despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in
spite of, despite, notwithstanding
3)因果(so, so, so)
昨天在街上我看到了一个女孩,然后我主动搭讪,然后我
们去咖啡厅,然后我们认识了,然后我们成为了朋友…可见,
讲故事的时候我们总要追求先后顺序,先什么,后什么,所
以然后这个词就变
得很常见了。其实这个词表示的是先后或因果关系~ The snow began to fall, so we t home.
更多短语:
then, therefore, consequently, accordingly,
hence, as a result, for this reason, so that
4)失衡句(头重脚轻,或者头轻脚重)
有些人脑袋大,身体小,或者有些人脑袋小,身体大,虽
然我们不希望长成这个样子,可如果真的是这样了,也就必
然会吸引别人的注意力。文章中如果出现这样的句子,就更
会让考官看到你的句子与众不同。其实就是主语从句,表语
从句,宾语从句的变形。
举例:This is what I can do.
Whether he can go with us or not is not sure. 同样主语、宾
语、表语可以改成如下的复杂成分:
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When to go, Why he goes away…
5)附加(多此一举)
如果有了老婆,总会遇到这样的情况,当你再讲某个人的
时候,她会插一句说,我昨天见过他;或者说,就是某某某,如果把老婆的话插入到我们的话里面,那就是定语从句和同
位语从句或者是插入语。
The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine.
I don’t enjoy that book you are reading.
Mr liu, our oral English teacher, is easy-going. 其实很简
单,同位语--要解释的东西删除后不影响整个句子的构成;
定语从句—借用之前的关键词并且用其重新组成一个句子
插入其中,但是whom or that 关键词必须要紧跟在先行词
之前。
6)排比(排山倒海句)
文学作品中最吸引人的地方莫过于此,如果非要让你的文
章更加精彩的话,那么我希望你引用一
个个的排比句,一个个得对偶句,一个个的不定式,一个
个地词,一个个的短语,如此表达将会使文章
有排山倒海之势~
Whether your tastes are modern or traditional,
sophisticated or simple, there is plenty in London
for you.
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Nowadays, energy can be obtained through
various sources such as oil, coal, natural gas, solar
heat, the wind and ocean tides.
We have got to study hard, to enlarge our scope of knowledge, to realize our potentials and to pay
for our life.
要想写出如此气势恢宏的句子非用排比不可~
七、 挑战极限原则
既然是挑战极限,必然是比较难的,但是并非
不可攀~
原理:在学生的文章中,很少发现诸如独立主
格的句子,其实也很简单,只要花上5分钟的时间
看看就可以领会,它就是分词的一种特殊形式,分
词要求主语一致,而独立主格则不然。比如:
The weather being fine, a large number of
people t to climb the Western Hills.
Africa is the second largest continent, its size
being about three times that of China.
1. on the one hand, it is indisputable that
boarding schools are exerting a growing
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important effect, especially in last few years.一方面,寄宿
学校正在发挥越来越重要的作用,尤
其是最近几年,这是无可争辩的
2. students attend a boarding school would
cultivate their independence as apart from
their parents.离开父母上寄宿学校的学生将会培
养他们的独立性
,3. Whats more, living in school can save them
a great deal of time on the way between home and school
everyday, so they would be able to
concentrate more time and energy on their
academic work.而且,生活在学校里能节省大量每
天往返于学校和家的路上的时间,这会使他们有更
多的时间和精力放在学习上。
4. on the other hand, the contribution of day
,schools cant be ignored.另一方面,日制学校的
贡献是不能忽视的。
5. Due to high tuition fee, most of ordinary families cannot
afford to send their children to boarding schools.因为较高的
学费,大部分普
通家庭支付不起他们的孩子上寄宿学校的费用。
6. Since it is unnecessary to consider students routine life,
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day school can lay stress on
teaching instead of other aspects, such as
management of dormitory and cafeteria.由于无
需考虑学生的日常生活,日制学校可以将重点放在
教学上而不是放在像宿舍和食堂管理这些方面。
7. Furthermore, students living in their own home would have access to a fortable life and have more opportunities to municate with
their parents, which have beneficial impact on development of their personal character.而且,学生生活在自
己家中,有舒适的生活,并有更多机
会和父母交流,这对他们个性的培养是有利的。
8. From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that both of day
schools and boarding schools are important to train young students for our society.通过以上讨论,我们可以得出结论,
寄宿学校和日制学校对
我们社会培养年轻学生都是重要的。
9. There is much discussion over science and technology. one of the questions under debate is whether traditional technology and methods are bound to die out when a country begins to develop modern science and technology.关
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于科
学技术存在许多争论,其中一个问题是当国家发展
现代科学技术时,传统的技术方法是否可能会消
亡,
10. as for me, the declining of traditional
technology and methods is not a bad thing; it is the natural result of progress of society.我认为,传统技术方法的消亡不
一定是坏事,这是
社会进步的自然结果。
11. in the first place, some aspects of the
traditional technology and methods are harmful and hampering the development of modern
technology science.首先,传统技术方法有些部分
是有害的,并且会阻碍现代科技的发展。
12. although modern science and technology have proved that such methods are absurd, there are still millions of people use such methods in many remote places nowadays.尽管现代科学技术
已经证明了这些方法是愚昧的,然而在许多偏僻的
地方,仍有成千上万的人们在使用这些方法。
13. in the second place, many values of
traditional technology are out of date and
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should be replaced by modern science.第二点,
许多传统技术方法已经过时,应被现代科技所取代。
14. although many people tend to live under the illusion that traditional technology and
methods are still playing extremely important
,role in peoples life, an increasing evidences
show that it is less useful than many people think.尽管许多
人保持着传统观念,认为传统技术
方法在人们生活中仍发挥着重要作用,但是越来越
多的证据显示它并没有人们想象的有用。
15. from what has been discussed above, I firmly believe that time will prove that traditional technology and methods would die out with the development of modern science and technology. the maintenance of the traditional technology and methods is futile.通过以上讨论,我坚定地
相信时间会证明传统技术方法将会随着现代技术的
发展而消亡,坚持传统技术方法是徒劳的。
16. at the time when technology means ever more
harmful carbon in the air we breathe, we need these forests now more than ever.当技术的发展意味着我们会吸入
更多有害气体时,我们比任何时
候更需要森林。
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17. nothing is more important than to receive
education.没有比接受教育更重要的事。
18. we cannot emphasize the importance of
protecting our eyes too much.我们再怎么强调保护眼睛的
重要性也不为过
19. there is no denying that the qualities of our living have
gone from bad to worse.无可否
认,我们的生活品质已经每况愈下。
20. it is universally acknowledged that trees are indispensable to us.全世界都知道树木对我
们是不可或缺的。
……
Directions: For this part, you are
allowed 30 minutes to write a
position on the topic Is Good
Appearance More Important than
Capability? You should write at least 150 words, and base your position on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1)现在很多漂亮的女孩子尽管没有很强的能力仍能找到很
好的工作,因此一些人得出结论说外貌比能力更重要
2)你是否同意?给出你的理由
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思路:本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点提出一种有争
议的看法,提纲第2点要求表明―我‖的态度,由此可判断本
文应为对比选择型作文。
根据所给提纲,本文应包含以下内容:描述目前很多漂亮
的女孩子找工作更容易的现象,由此引出争议的观点:外貌
比能力重要;表明―我‖是否同意该观点并说明理由;针对外貌
和能力提出―我‖的建议。
Is Good Appearance More Important than Capability?
Old people often tell the young,
―Don’t judge a person by his
appearance‖, meaning capability is
more important than appearance.
However, nowadays, with more
interviewers putting emphasis on looks and the appearance of the applicants, a lot of people e to the
conclusion that
appearance is more important than
capability.
As for me, I can’t agree on this
argument. Good appearance is pleasant, but capability is
more important,
because it demonstrates one’s
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self-cultivation and practical values. It shows the efforts and the glory of
acquiring something through one’s hard work whereas
good looks speak no
struggle of the individual. Besides,
maybe sometimes a beautiful face can help a girl acquire a good position, but in the long run it is her talent not her look that really works in her career
development.
Therefore, those without good
apppearance needn’t feel depressed
because one’s success depends on his
capability; those with good appearance have to work hard since good
appearance cannot bring a person final success.
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作文十:《中考英语满分作文:关于指路的》600字
根据中文提示和英文提示词语,写一篇意思连贯、符合逻辑的短文。所给英文提示词语必须都用上。词数 60 - 70 左右。 ( 1 )昨天晚上我和妈妈出去散步。( 2 )在路上我们 遇见了一个外国人。( 3 )他向我询问如何去温泉饭店。( 4 )我告诉他沿路往前走,在第三个转弯处向左拐就能看见饭店。( 5 )他非常感谢我,我也为能帮他而高兴。 提示词语: go out for a walk , on the road , the way to , walk along , on the left , thank for , be happy that .??参考范文:??? Yesterday evening , I t out for a walk with my mother . On the road , we met a foreigner . He asked me the way to the Hot Spring Hotel . I told him to walk along the road and take the third turning on the left , then he could see the hotel . He thanked me very much for my help . I was happy thatI could help him .
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