作文一:《五句话作文话题模板》19100字
五句话作文?话题模板
一、活动安排:一般将来时?
内容包括:组织者,活动的时间?、地点,活动的原因?、目的和内容?。
组织者 will organ?ize a/an 活动 +地点+时间.There? are many activ?ities?
A, inclu?ding
B as well as C.In this activ?ity, we can not only do A but also do B. If you would? like to join us, pleas?e sign up for it befor?e 时间. Come to the great? fun.
范文:
Dear stude?nts,
The Stude?nts Union? has decid?ed to organ?ise a music? week. which? will be held in the first? week of May. The activ?ities? inclu singi?de?ng pop songs? and playi?ng class?ical and folk music?. In the conte?st the stude?nts will liste?n to part of a song or a
piece? of music?, and then guess? where? it es? from. If you'd like to take part in the music? week, pleas?e e and sign up for it befor?e April? 20th. The place? for the activ?ities? will be annou?nced later?.
Come to the great? fun!
Stude?nts Union? *1-12月份:
二、经历感受:一般过去时?
内容包括:时间,地点,人员,过程,主题,感受
组织者 organ?ized a/an 活动 with the theme?” (主题 内容)” +地点+时间 and 参与者 took part in it. First?, we +V.ed . After? that, we +V.ed . In the end, we +V.ed .By joini?ng the activ?ity, we learn?ed about?…. and ………
范文:
The Stude?nts’Union? organ?ized an activ?ity with the theme? ”Avoid? wasti?ng but encou?rage to eat up every?thing? on your plate?” in front? of the Stude?nt Cante?en at 4 p.m. on March? 4th, Monda?y, 2013 and more than 900 teach?ers and stude?nts took part in it. First?,we saw pictu?res on the board?s that showe?d the terri?ble pheno?mena of wasti?ng in the campu?s. And then we watch?ed video? clipa?nd learn?t that every? year about? 10 milli?on peopl?e are dying? of hunge?r and if we reduc?e food waste? by 5% every? day, we can save over 4 milli?on lives?. In the end, every?one signe?d up to show
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our deter?minat?ion. By joini?ng the activ?ity, we have culti?vated? our good habit?s of savin?g food and avoid?ing waste?.
*记叙活动经?过的顺序连?词:
三、正反观点对?比:一般过去时?+一般现在时?
内容包括:总起句+ (正观点+理由)+(反观点+理由)+ 你的观点
主题句:
某人 agree? that …becau?se…
某人 disag?ree that?for the reaso?n that…
In my opini?on,…
范文:
(总起句)Last week our class? had a discu?ssion? about? wheth?er stude?nts can chat onlin?e, and there? two diffe?rent viewp?oints? about? it. (正观点+理由)About? 62% of my class?mates? agree? that stuen?ts can do so becau?se they think? chatt?ing onlin?e is an excit?ing and relax?ing way of recre?ation?.Besid?es, they can make frien?ds and broad?en their? horiz?ons by chatt?ing onlin?e.(反观点+理由)Howev?er, 38% of them don’t agree? becau?se they think? it is a waste? of time,energ?y and money?.what’s more, they belie?ve some stude?nts may be misle?d or cheat?ed if they chat onlin?e. (你的观点)In my opini?on, if we deal with chatt?ing onlin?e prope?rly, we can benef?it from it. *重点词汇:
做关于…方面的调查?
就…问题进行讨?论 就…问题采访某?人
四、现象分析:一般现在时?
主要内容:现状—原因—后果—建议
现状+原因: 句子 becau?se of A,B and C.(A/B/C:名词短语)
或: 句子 becau?se A and B.(A/B/C:句子)
后果: As we know, 名词/动名词 does harm to our eyes/life/study?/healt?h?.
或:As we know,名词/动名词 affec?ts our eyes/life/study?/healt?h?. . 建议: There?fore, I stron?gly sugge?st that we shoul?d +V…… and V……
Last but not least?, we shoul?d +V .
或:Last but not least?, what we shoul?d do is to .
范文:(现状)As far as I know, some stude?nts don’t eat break?fast,while? other?s eat imbal?anced? break?fast. (后果)As we know, not eatin?g break?fastn?ot only does great? harm to our healt?h but affec?ts our study? effic?iency?. (建议)There?fore, I stron?gly
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sugge?st that we shoul?d get up early?to have a balan?ced break?fast. To eat a balan?ced break?fast, we shoul?d eat grain? with carbo?hydra?tes that can provi?de the energ?y we need every? day. What’s more, we can have eggs and milk that can suppl?y prote?in as well as fruit?s and veget?ables? that help diges?tion.
*列举观点的?连词:
五、采访类:一般过去时?+一般现在时?
主要内容:总起句(时间、对象、主题)—采访的结果?—专家建议
主题句:时间+I had an inter?view with 对象abo?ut 主题.(名词)
采访结果:Accor?ding to 对象,采访的结果?(句子). He also point?ed out that 采访的结果?(句子).
专家建议:The exper?t sugge?sted that …shoul?d…
范文:(总起句:)Last weeke?nd, I had an inter?view with Profe?ssor Wang, an eye-docto?r, about? the probl?em of short?-sight?ednes?s of schoo?l child?ren in China?. (采访结果:)Accor?ding to Profe?ssor Wang, sligh?tly more than half of the schoo?l child?renIn? our contr?y ar short?-sight?ed,ranki?ng the first? in the world?. He also point?ed out that the cause?s for short?-sight?ednes?s are so pl?icate?d that no medic?ine can cure it.(专家建议:)The exper?t sugge?sted that schoo?l child?ren shoul?d avoid? overu?sing their? eyes and do more outdo?or activ?ities?.He parti?cular?ly remin?ded us that how to hold a pen is also relat?ed to short?-sight?ednes?s.
*注意划线部?分的几个动?词短语,记住并运用?~
六、调查报告:一般过去时?+一般现在时?
主要内容:总起句(调查的发起?方、时间、主题)—调查各方的?观点及理由?
—我的观点
主题句:时间+Sb. made a surve?y about? 主题.(名词)
调查各方的?观点:…% of sb. think? that +句子 becau?se…, while? …% of sb. think? that+句子 becau?se…What’s more, the rest sb. +句子 becau?se…
我的观点:From the surve?y , I learn? that…
范文:(总起句:)The Stude?nts’ Union? made a surve?y about? what is happi?ness among? 100 stude?nts of our schoo?l. (各方观点:)32% of the stude?nts think? wealt?h is happi?ness becau?se they think? they can buy anyth?ing if they have much wealt?h.On the other? hand, 45% of them think? that they shoul?d be in good healt?h so that they can enjoy? whate?ver they like.What’s more, the rest 23% of the stude?nts belie?ve that a man with much knowl?edge, which? will bring? him a brigh?t futur?e, is the happi?nest. (我的观点:)From the surve?y I know diffe?rent peopl?e value? happi?ness diffe?rentl?y.
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*重点词汇:
认为 因为 相信 了解
七、说明文:人物简介 一般现在时?+一般过去时?
Born in Taiwa?n in 1954, An Li is a famou?s Chine?se film direc?tor from home and abroa?d. He t to Ameri?ca to pursu?e his dream? of film in 1979, but unfor?tunat?ely, he could?n’t find a job after? gradu?ation?.It was six years? later? that he shot his first? film”Pushi?ng Hands?”, which? was a great? succe?ss.As he becam?e incre?asing? ly famou?s, he began? to direc?t films? of diffe?rent sytle?s.In recen?t years?, he has been award?ed the Best Direc?tor for many times?, he was ackno?wlege?d as one of the great?est direc?tors by an Ameri?can magaz?ine.
相关词汇:
考入…大学 主修…专业
从事… 有着…的天赋 受到良好的?教育/没有受过教?育 致力于… 获得…奖 因为…获得很多奖? 大获成功 凭着无比的?决心 被认为是/作为被铭记?
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八、说明文:1. 地点介绍 一般现在时?
(地理位置)Taiwa?n Islan?d, the large?st islan?d in our count?ry(同位语), lies west of the Pacif?ic Ocean?, with the East Sea on the north? and the South? Sea surro?undin?g its south?west(定语). To the west of the islan?d is Fujia?n, anoth?er provi?nce of China?. (面积、人口)Taiwa?n has an area of about? 36,000 squar?e kilom?eters? and a popul?ation? of over 20,000. (资源、特产)It is rich in natur?al resou?rces and banan?as, rice and tea are famou?s at home and abroa?d. (景色、气候、旅游)The scene?ry is so beaut?iful and the clima?te is so pleas?ant that trave?lers go in a conti?nuous? strea?m for a visit? all over the world?.
文中运用同?位语,定语,with状?语,和so…that提?升句式
仿写
请你用英语?介绍广州市?
别称:五羊城、花城等
面积:7434平?方公里
人口:1300多?万
地位:中国第三大?城市;广东省省会 ?
历史:2200多年历史的文?化名城?,历史上丝绸之路的始发??港
地理:珠江从市中?心穿过,温暖湿润
旅游:风光旖旎,旅游资源丰?富,每年都有大量游客蜂拥??而至
(地理位置、气候)Guang?zhou, (同位语), as Five-lamb City, Flowe?r City and so on with the Pearl? River? going? throu?gh the city and a warm and wet clima?te.(with状?语)
(面积、人口)
. (历史、旅游)Guang?zhou is not only a famou?s city with a histo?ry of more than 2200 years? but also a start?ing port of the Silk Road on
the sea in histo?ry(not only…but also…并列结构)The scene?ry is so beaut?iful and
九、说明文:节日介绍
6月的第三?个星期日是?父亲节。相对于母亲?节,父亲节是人?们比较陌生?的一个节日?,是1910?年在美国华?盛顿州的士?波肯市由杜?德太太发起?的。而我国的父?亲节起源,要追溯到国?民时代。当母亲含辛?茹苦地照顾?我们时,父亲也在努?力地扮演着?上帝所赋予?他的温柔角?色; Falli?ng on the third? week of June.(定语), Fathe?r’s Day, was first? launc?hed by Mrs. Dodo in Ameri?ca in 1910. While? in China?, the festi?val dates? back to the perio?d of the Repub?lic of China?. Compa?red with Mothe?r’s Day(定语), Fathe?r’s Day seems? stran?ger to peopl?e. Howev?er, we shoul?d never? forge?t that when our mothe?rs are takin?g good care of us, our fathe?rs are also carry?
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ing the great? burde?n to suppo?rt our famil?y.
十、说明:产品介绍
《21世纪学?生英文报》“高中版”
创办时间:2001年?10月
读者对象:中国高中学?生
报纸类型:周刊
宗旨:满足高中生学英语的要?求?,提高他们的英语应用能??力
特色:根据高中学生的阅读水?平?,提供国内外的时事新闻? ?
内容:八大版块(secti?on),包括Fro?ntpag?e, Our world?, Campu?s Trend?s等;涉及时事新?闻、文化、社会生活、娱乐、体育等
网址:://.i21st?./
个人感受 这是一份优秀英语报刊??;受益匪浅
st(时间、对象、类型)Found?ed in Octob?er,2001(定语),21 Centu?ry Teens? Senio?r Editi?on, an Engli?sh langu?age weekl?y magaz?ine(同位语), is desig?ned for senio?r high schoo?l stude?nts in China?(宗旨).To meet the needs? of senio?r high schoo?l stude?nts to learn? Engli?sh and impro?ve their? abili?ty in using? the langu?age(目的状语), the Weekl?y provi?des the lates?t news at home and abroa?d accor?ding to their? readi?ng level?.It conta?ins eight? secti?ons, such as Front?page, Our world?, Campu?s Trend?s, cover?ing cultu?re, socia?l life, sport?s,enter?tainm?ent,etc(分词作伴随?状语).Its websi?te
st://.i21st?./ is avail?able now. 21 Centu?ry Teens? Senio?r Editi?on is indee?d an excel?lent Engli?sh newsp?aper, from which? I have benef?ited a lot(非限制性定?语从句).
以下这个句?子还有其它?翻译法吗,
八大版块(secti?on),包括Fro?ntpag?e, Our world?, Campu?s Trend?s等;涉及时事新?闻、文化、社会生活、娱乐、体育等
十一、应用文
1. 书信类 (注意书信格?式)
假设你是李?华,你的英国朋?友Pete?r来信向你?咨询如何才?能学好中文?。请你根据下?列要点写回?信。要点:1.参加中文学?习班;2.看中文书刊?、电视;3.学唱中文歌?曲;4.教中国朋友?。
Dear Peter?,
I’m glad to recei?ve your lette?r askin?g for my advic?e on how to learn? Chine?se well.
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Here are a few sugge?stion?s. First?, it is impor?tant to take a Chine?se cours?e, as you’ll be able to learn? from the teach?er and pract?ice with your fello?w stude?nts. Then, it also helps? to watch? TV and read books?, newsp?apers? and magaz?ines in Chine?se whene?ver possi?ble.
Besid?es, it shoul?d be a good idea to learn? and sing Chine?se songs?, becau?se by doing? so you’ll learn? and remem?ber Chine?se words? more easil?y. You can also make more Chine?se frien?ds who will tell you a lot about? China? and help you learn? Chine?se.
Try and write? me in Chine?se next time.
Best wishe?s
Li Hua
提建议的句?型:
1. I sugge?st that you shoul?d…
2. It is impor?tant/…to V….
3. It shoul?d be a good idea to V…
4. You had bette?r V…
5. It also helps? to V….
2. 通知类(语言简洁,扼要。多用祈使句?和被动句式?)
[作文题目] 你校学生将?为来访的美?国朋友举办?一个晚会,要在学校广?播中宣布此?事,并欢迎大家?参加。为使美国朋?友听懂,请你用英语?写一篇广播?通知。要点如下:宗旨,欢迎来访的?美国朋友;组织者,学生会;时间,8月15(星期六)晚日?7:30。
May I have your atten?tion, pleas?e? I have an annou?nceme?nt to make. The Stude?nt Union? is going? to hold a party? at 7:30 P.m on Satur?day eveni?ng, Augus?t 15, to welco?me our frien?ds from the Unite?d State?s. The party? will be held in the roof garde?n of the Main Build?ing (被动). There? will be music?, danci?ng ,singi?ng, games? and excha?nge of gifts?. Pleas?e bring? along? a small? gift for this purpo?se and remem?ber to wrap it up ,sign your name and
write? a few words? of good wishe?s(祈使句).
Be sure to remem?ber that the party? will be held at 7:30 on Satur?day eveni?ng in the roof garde?n of the Main Build?ing(祈使). Come for the great? fun!
十二招聘竞?聘
1. 招聘类
假如你是校?报负责人,急需在学校?内聘一位同?学任英语版?的编辑,请你用英文?以“An?Engli?sh Edito?r Wante?d”为题目写一?则招聘启事?。内容要点如?下:
1(该工作主要?包括两部分?:
1)从英文报刊?杂志及互联?网上选择适?合学生的文?章;
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2)选择与编辑?同学们的来?稿。
2(希望该同学?满足下列要?求:
1)乐意奉献出?一些业余时?间为同学们?服务;
2)英文与美术?皆好;能熟练使用?电脑。
3(感兴趣的同?学请在本周?内与学生会?(Stude?nts’?Union?)联系
参考词汇:满足要求 meet the requi?remen?ts
注意:1)五句话 2)不要逐字翻?译,要组成一篇?通顺连贯的?短文。
【参考范文】
Engli?sh Edito?r Wante?d
Our schoo?l newsp?aper is looki?ng for an edito?r for its Engli? The job mainlsh editi?on.?y inclu?des two parts?: one is to choos?e prope?r Engli?sh artic?les from other? newsp?apers?, magaz?ines or Inter?net for us stude?nts;the other? is to pick out artic?les from stude?nts in our schoo?l and edit them for use.
We hope that he/she could? meet the follo?wing requi?remen?ts: First?, he/she is willi?ng to devot?e some of the spare? time to servi?ng the other?s. Secon?d, it's neces?sary for him/ her to be
good at both Engli?sh and fine art. Needl?ess to say(毋庸置疑) that the abili?ty to use the pu?ter is impor?tant as well.
Those? who are inter?ested? in the job, pleas?e get in touch? with the Stude?nts' Union? this week.
Stude?nts' Union?
提示:Needl?ess to say that…= There? is no doubt? that…
职位+wante?d : wante?d这里理解?为“招聘”
2. 竞聘类
竞选择俱乐?部副主席
欲参选学校?俱乐部某职?位。 假设你是某?大学的学生?李津,
请按以下提?示,写一篇竞选?演讲稿。
个人优势:1.性格外向,与人相处融?洽
2.善于组织各?种活动
竞选职位:俱乐部副主?席
选后决心:协助主席,服务同学
活动设想:1.举办讲座、英语晚会等?
2. 举办校际辩论赛?、演讲比赛等 ?
表达愿望:望同学们投?票选你
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My dear frien?ds,
My name is Li Jin. Today? I am very glad to have the chanc?e to run for the vice
presi?dent of the Engli?sh club. As for the posit?ion, I think? I am quali?fied for(胜任) the job becau?se I am outgo?ing, getti?ng on well with other?s, and skill?ed in organ?izing? all kinds? of activ?ities?. If I am lucky? enoug?h to be the vice presi?dent, I will try my
best to assis?t the presi?dent and serve? my fello?w stude?nts(条件状语从?句). In order? to impro?ve our Engli?sh and make more stude?nts inter?ested? in Engli?sh(目的状语), I inten?d to(打算=want to/plan to) organ?ize some activ?ities? at schoo?l, like lectu?res and Engli?sh parti?es.Besid?es, I will orgai?nze some inter?schoo?l activ?ities?, such as(列举) Engli?sh debat?e pe?titio?ns and speec?h conte?sts.I since?rely hope(真诚地希望?) you will vote for me, and pleas?e belie?ve me that I will be a good vice presi?dent. Thank? you!
搞定英语写?作长句
1. 同位语+定语
e.g. Born on June 25, 1998(定语),Ming Li, our Monit?or(同位语), is tall, activ?e and healt?hy.
2. with 状语从句 有…,随着…
e.g. With the devel?opmen?t of Inter?net, more and more peopl?e tend to buy goods? onlin?e.
3. 并列句:*… and …
** not only… but also…
** while?
By watch?ing the progr?am, stude?nts can not only enric?h their? knowl?edge of Jieya?ng cultu?re, but also arous?e their? inter?est of learn?ing Engli?sh.
4. 状语从句
目的状语从?句 to…, so that…,
条件状语从?句 if…
原因状语从?句 becau?se+becau?se of+, for the reaso?n that+ 让步状语从?句 altho?ugh/thoug?h…
方式状语从?句 by doing? sth…
5. 定语从句:限定/非限定从
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e.g. 1. Those? who are inter?ested? in the job, pleas?e get in touch? with the Stude?nts' Union? this week. (定从).
Senio?r Editi?on is indee?d an excel?lent Engli?sh newsp?aper, from which? I have benef?ited a lot.(非限定从).
6. 巧用过渡语?
1). 就一个事件?陈述多个观?点/理由/原因:
* First?ly, Secon?dly, Final?ly
** To begin? with, What’s more/Besid?es/In addit?ion此外?, Last but not least?… 2). 一方面…,另一方面,…
*On the one hand, on the other? hand,
*For one thing?, for anoth?er,
3) 众所周知
* As we all know,…
** It is well known? that…
4) 毫无疑问的?是 There? is no doubt? that…=Needl?ess to say 5) 让人…的是, to our surpr?ise让我?们感到吃惊?的是, to our relie?f让我们感?到欣慰的是?, to our excit?ement?,让我们感到?兴奋的是
6) 在我看来, 我认为 In my opini?on, As far as I am conce?rned, ***In my persp?ectiv?e
7) 因此 There?fore, So, As a resul?t,…
8)举例 for examp?le, such as, like
a.My grand?fathe?r is thrif?ty man. For examp?le, he only buys what he needs?. Besid?es. He grows? veget?ables? and fruit? in his small? garde?n.
b.My grand?fathe?r grows? veget?ables? and fruit? such as cabba?ge, straw?berry?, grape? and so on.
c.My grand?fathe?r grows? veget?ables? and fruit? like cabba?ge, straw?berry?, grape? and so on.
9)总而言之 All in all, Above? all, In a word, ***In concl?usion?
7. 时间状语
two years? ago两年?前, when I was 11 years? old我十?一岁的时候?, after? a few days几?天后 soon不?久/很快, after? a while?过了一会儿?, just at that time就?在那时, sudde?nly突然?, from then on/from now on从那时?起/从现在起, durin?g在…期间 after?…在…之后, befor?e在…之前
8. 常用的动词?
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认为:think?(thoug?ht), hold(held) the view that
指出:point? out,
建议:sugge?st that…shoul?d do (书信中还有?其他提建议?的句型) 了解/意识到:learn?, under?stand?, reali?ze
举办/组织:hold, organ?ize
增长见识/丰富知识 incre?ase our knowl?edge(of Chine?se cultu?re)…, enric?h our knowl?edge
取得进步 make progr?ess
唤醒意识 arous?e the aware?ness of (being? thrif?ty)
提高学生…的兴趣 arous?e stude?nts’ inter?est of (learn?ing maths?) 养成…的习惯 form the habit? of (being? thrif?ty)
促进理解/增进友谊 promo?te our under?stand?ing/ promo?te our frien?dship? 开阔眼界 broad?en our eyesi?ght, broad?en our horiz?on
被要求 be requi?red to do…
作为…被记住 be remem?bered? as…
help to do 有助于
9. 常用谚语:
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作文二:《英语五句话作文写节日的》26600字
一. 节日的概况
传统的:有意义的: 重要的:
Sth. is of great importance for sb.
1. 春节是中国人的重要节日。
The Spring Festival is of great importance for Chinese
people.
traditional
meaningful
important
= of great importance
/significant
/significance
二. 庆祝的时间: sth 在…。
St(来自:WwW.zaiDian. 在点网:英语五句话作文写节日的)h. is celebrated on/falls on….
2. 春节在农历新年的第一天。
The Spring Festival is celebrated on the first day of the
lunar New Year.
3. 端午节是在农历五月初五。
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The Dragon Boat Festival falls on the fifth day of the fifth lunar month.
三. 放假: 一般来说,人们在…有…天假。
Generally speaking, people can have … days off/ have a three-day vacation for….
4. 一般来说,人们在农历新年有七天假。
Generally speaking, people can have seven days off /have a seven-day vacation for the Chinese Lunar New Year.
四. 意义: sth.是…的节日,用来…。
Sth. is a…holiday celebrated to….
5. 父亲节是一个传统的节日,用来表达对父亲的感激之
情。
Father’s Day is a traditional holiday celebrated to express our gratitude to our fathers.
非谓语
express one’s gratitude to …
6. 教师节是一个有意义的节日,用来表达对老师的尊敬。
Teachers’ Day is a meaningful holiday celebrated to show our respect to the teachers.
show one’s respect to …
五. 起源: …的起源可以追溯到…。
The origin of … can be traced back to as far as …. / …
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date back to …
7. 在英国,母亲节起源于17世纪初的英格兰 。
The origin of Mother’s day in the UK can be traced back to as far as the early 17th century in England.
Worshipping/ Admiring the moon can date back to as far as the ancient Xia and Shang Dynasties.
8. 赏月
的起源可以追溯到古代夏商时期。
worship/ admire the moon
六. 庆祝活动: 人们庆祝…节日的最常见方式是…
The most mon way in which people celebrate the festival is to do….
9. 人们过中秋节,一家人会聚在月光下,一边吃月饼,一
边赏月。
The most mon way in which people celebrate the Mid-autumn festival is to gather in the moonlight, eating moon cakes and admiring the beautiful moon.
表写一篇短文。
[写作内容]
范文:
The Mid-autumn Festival, which is one of the most important traditional festivals in China/is of great
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significance for Chinese, falls on August 15th of the Lunar calendar every year. Not only is it popular in China but it is also celebrated in many other Asian countries. People believe that full moon is a symbol of reunion, luck and fortune, and it is a custom to express best wishes to the beloved ones/Believing that…, people express… at this particular time. On that day people usually go back home to have family reunion, enjoying a large meal with their family. They will also eat moon cakes, which are round cakes with meat, eggs, nuts and other things inside.
基础写作:假如你是李华,你的美国笔友John通过邮
件想向你了解一下中国春节的情况,请根据下面的表格发一
封电子邮件给他。开头已给出。
节日名称 春节(又称农历新年)
庆祝日期 农历1月初1
重要性 辞旧迎新,是中国最重要的节日
庆祝活动 家人团聚,共贺新年
除夕夜,包饺子,吃团圆饭,看春晚
大年初一,走亲访友,互赠礼物。父母亲戚给小孩发红包
还有人会放烟花,贴对联庆贺新年
Dear John,
I’m glad you are interested in our Spring Festival and I’
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d like to tell you something about it.
The Spring Festival, also known as the lunar New Year, falls on Lunar January 1st . It is the most important festival in China/It is of great importance for Chinese people, which sees out the old year and weles the new one. It has bee a day of family reunion and celebration of a new
year. On the Eve of the new year, the whole family will get together and have a big family feast while enjoying the TV programs. On the New Year’s Day, people will go to visit
their relatives and friends and have meals with them as well as get some presents exchanged between each other while children can get some lucky money from their parents or relatives. Moreover, people may even put on couplets and get firework burnt to celebrate the new year.
假如你是李华,你的美国笔友John通过邮件想向你了解
一下中国春节的情况,请根据下面的表格发一封电子邮件
给他。开头已给出。
Dear John,
I’m glad you are interested in our Spring Festival and I’
d like to tell you something about it. Known as the lunar New Year, the Spring Festival, falls on Lunar January 1st and it is the most significant festival in China/it is of great
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significance for Chinese people, which sees out the old year and weles the new one. It has bee a day of family reunion and celebration of a new year. On the Eve of the new year, the whole family will get together and have a big family feast while enjoying the TV programs. On the New Year’s Day, people will go to visit their relatives and friends and have meals with them as well as get some presents exchanged between each other while children can get some lucky money from their parents or relatives. Moreover, people may even put on couplets and get firework burnt to celebrate the new year.
Dear John,
I’m glad you are interested in our Spring Festival and I’
d like to tell you something about it. Known as the lunar New Year, the Spring Festival falls on Lunar January 1st and it is the most significant festival in China/it is of great significance for Chinese people, which sees out the old year and weles the new one. It has bee a day of family reunion and celebration of a new year. On the Eve of the new year, the whole family will get together and have a big family feast while enjoying the TV programs. On the New Year’s Day, people will go to visit their relatives and friends
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and have meals with them as well as get some presents exchanged between each other while children can get some lucky money from their parents or relatives. Moreover, people may even put on couplets and get firework burnt to celebrate the new year.
How to write English sentences?
篇二:初三 关于节日的英语作文
节日 作文 关于春节的英语作文带翻译一:
The Lunar New Year
The Lunar New Year is a great occasion to the Chinese people. It lasts about the first four days of the year, during
which people do not work except for the workers on duty. Students do not go to school, and shops are closed.
Several days before the new year, people begin to
prepare. Farmers kill pigs, sheep, cocks and hens. City
dwellers buy meat fish and vegetables. Houses are cleaned; coupletsare posted on the doors. Colourful lanterns are hung at the gate. On the eve of the new year,
each family has its members gatherd together and eats a family reunion dinner. After the meal they watch TV until the clock strickes twelve. Then every family sets off long strings of small firecrackers and other fire works to wele
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the new year. On the first day of the new year, almost
everyone is dressed in his or her best. When people meet on the way, they say to each other Happy New Year.
Friends and relatives pay new year calls and gives presents to each other. Children indulge themselves in games.
关于春节的英语作文带翻译一:
农历新年
农历新年是一个伟大的时刻对中华民族来说。它大约持续
了四天的第一年,在这期间不工作,除了值班的工人。学生
不上学,和商店都已关闭。
前几天在新的一年,人们就开始准备。农民杀了猪,羊,
公鸡和母鸡。城市居民买肉鱼和蔬菜。房子干净; coupletsare
门上张贴。色彩缤纷的灯笼挂在门口。
在新的一年的前夕,每个家庭都有自己的成员一起吃
gatherd家人吃团圆饭。吃饭后,他们看电视,直到时钟
strickes十二。然后,每个家庭衬托小爆竹等消防工程,长
字符串迎接新年。在新的一年的第一天,几乎每个人都穿着
他或她最好的。当人们在路上相遇,他们互相说―新年快乐―。
亲戚朋友拜年,并给出礼物给对方。孩子沉迷于游戏本身。
The Mid-Autumn is a very important Chinese festival. It falls on the 15th day of August. A few days before the festival, everyone in the family will help to make the house clean and
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beautiful. Lanterns will be hung in front of the house. On the
evening there will be a big family dinner. People who work far away from their homes will try to e back for the union. After dinner, people will light the lanterns which are usually red and round. Children will play with their own toy lanterns happily. At night the moon is usually round and bright. People can enjoy the moon while eating moon-cakes which are the special food for this festival. They can look back on the past and look forward to the future together. It is said that there was a dragon in the sky. The dragon wanted to swallow up the moon. To protect the frighten the dragon away.
What a great festival!
中秋节是中国一个很重要的节日,在八月十五号。在节日
来临的前几天,家庭中的每一个人都帮着打扫房子,把房子
装扮得漂漂亮亮的,灯笼挂在屋前。 晚上有一顿美餐,离
家在外工作的人也要回来团圆。晚饭后,人们点亮灯笼,一
般是红色的圆灯笼。孩子们会高高兴兴地玩他们的玩具灯
笼。 晚上月亮又圆又大,人们在赏月的同时吃着中秋节特
别的食品——月饼。人们在一起回顾过去,展望未来。据说
天上有一条龙,它要把月亮吞下去。为了保护月亮,孩子们
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要弄出很大的响动把龙吓跑。
中秋是个美好的节日啊!
Spring Festival
My best festival is Spring Festival. It is in Janurary or February. It is the most important festival for the Chinese people. On that day everybody dresses up. First they extend greetings to their parents. Then each child will get money as a New Year gift, wrapped up in red paper.
People in northern China will eat jiaozi, or dumplings, for breakfast, the shape of the dumpling is like gold ingot from ancient China. So people eat them and wish for money and treasure.Burning fireworks was once the most typical custom on the Spring Festival. I like spring festival very much. Its my favourite holiday.
我最喜爱的节日是春节,它在一月或者二月。对于中国
人来说这是最重要的节日。在那天,每个人都认真打扮,他
们会像父母问好,然后每个孩子会得到红包作为新年礼物。
北方人喜欢早上吃饺子或者汤圆。饺子的形状像中国的元
宝,他们吃饺子来期盼财源广进。燃放烟花也曾一度是春节
的传统习俗。我非常喜欢春节,它是我最喜欢的节日。
Lantern Festival
Lantern Festival is a Chinas traditional festival. It is
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celebrated on the fifteenth day of the first month of the lunar year.
I,antern Festival is one of the biggest holidays in China. Several days before Lantern Festival, people begin to make lanterns. Lanterns are made in the shape of different animals, vegetables, fruits and many, other things. While making
lanterns people usually write riddles on lanterns. On the eve of Lantern Festival, all the lanterns are hung up.
On Lantern Festival people go outside to have a look at the lanterns and guess the riddles on the lanterns. Perhaps you call see some wonderful folk performances,Dragon Dance and Yangko. Everything is very interesting and everyone is very happy. Our life is rich and varied.
元宵节
元宵节是中国的一个传统节日。通常在阴历年的第一个月
的第十五天庆祝。
篇三:英语作文-传统节日
假设你是王平,你的英国朋友harry正在学习汉语,想通
过你了解中国的传统节日,请你根据所给的图画和提示,给
harry写一封E-mail,向他介绍我国主要传统节日的情况,
并告诉他你最喜欢的节日及理由。
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提示:
1. 内容要点:以上两个节日的时间,含义(家人团聚的日
子)及主要活动。
2. 参考词汇:lunar, play fireworks, lucky money, moon
cake
3. 词数:不少于80,开头和结尾已经写出,不计入总词
数
4. 春节和中秋节
Dear Harry,
How are you? I’m really glad that you are interested in Chinese traditional festivals. So,I’d like to tell you
something about these festivals. Spring Festival is the most important festival in my country.It is to celebrate the lunar calendar’s new year. Before the festival,we clean our homes and sweep away all the bad luck. On the evening before Spring Festival we have a big family dinner. We eat jiaozi—a
kind of dumpling and other delicious food. After dinner, we will go outside to play fireworks.
In China, another important festival is Mid-autumn Day.It is on the fifteenth day of the eighth lunar month.It is time for family getting together. On that night the moon is brighter and fuller than any other night. .I love it very much.
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Because on that day ,our families will stay outside in the open air to eat a big dinner and moon cakes. The most important thing is looking at the moon, the moon looks brighter and rounder. We call this moon the full moon.
What great festivals ! I love them . I am sure you will love them too.
Write and tell me something about your festivals.
Moon Festival The Moon Festival or Mid -autumn Festival is one of the three major traditional festivals celebrated by Chinese people. Like harvest time in other countries, the Mid-autumn Festival actually began as a thanksgiving celebration, honoring the Soil God and the Crop God. This is also a time for family reunions. Chinese people enjoy moon cakes during this feast just as they eat rice dumplings for the Dragon Boat Festival. It is quite appropriate to bring moon cakes with you in token of festival greetings when calling on people during this season.
The Mid-Autumn Day
August 15th in Chinese Lunar Calendar is the
Mid-Autumn Day. It is one of the most important traditional festivals in China.
On that day people usually go back home to have family
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reunion. Each family will have the members get together to have a big dinner. The most popular food is moon cakes. They are round and look like the moon.
The moon is the brightest this night. People ate the delicious food while they were enjoying a beautiful full moon in their yard. At this time, some old people would like to tell many past events and tell the children a story about the rabbit. The children really believed that there was a rabbit on the moon. They wanted to go to the moon and have a look one day
中秋:
Mid-autumn Day falls on the fifteenth day of the eighth lunar month(农历).On that night the moon is
brighter and fuller than any other night.In
China,Mid-autumn Day is a time for family reunions (团圆).
端午: The Dragon Boat Festival,also called the Duanwu Festival,is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese calendar.For thousands of years,the festival has been marked by eating zong zi and racing dragon boats. Mid-autumn Day is a Chinese festival.It usually es in September or October .On that day we usually eat a big dinner and mooncakes.It is said
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Hou Yi missed his wife,so he made mooncakes.It looks like the moon.There are many kinds of mooncakes.They are small round cakes with meat,nuts or something sweet inside .eating mooncakes has been our custom.Families stay outside in the open air eat a big dinner and mooncakes.The most important thing is looking at the moon,On that day,the moon kooks brighter and rounder.We call this moon the full moon.On that day,families get together,so we call this day getting –together.This is Mid –autumn Day.I love it very
much.Because on that day I can eat mooncakes.And my brother es back home.He works outside all year.Only that day and the Spring Festival.He es back.So that day I am especially happy.On that day my family gets together.
春节:
Spring Festival is the most important festival in China .It’
s to celebrate the lunar calendar‘s new year.In the evening
before the Spring Festival ,families get together and have a big meal .In many places people like to set off firecrackers .Dumplings are the most traditional food Mid-Autumn Festival is the first festival after the beginning of autumn,the day people celebrate the harvest,Because the full moon is round and symbolizes reunion,the festival is also
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known as the festival of reunion.In this harvest and the reunion of the day,people will reunite with their families under the full moon,enjoy the results of hard work; when the full moon rises at the right time,people will put on the table in a rich tribute fruits and mooncakes,Thank god gives people to harvest the fruit,the other to pray for good weather next year.Just as turkeys symbolize Thanksgiving Day,mooncakes symbolize Chinas Mid-Autumn Festival.
中秋节是立秋以后的第一个节日,是人们庆祝丰收的日子,
洽逢十五月圆人团圆,因此中秋节对于华人来讲也象征着团
圆.在这个丰收与团圆的日子里,人们会与家人团聚在满月下,
享用辛勤劳动的成果;当满月升起的时侯,人们会在在贡桌上
摆上丰盛的水果和月饼,一方面感恩上天赐予人们丰收的果
实,另一方面祈祷来年风调雨顺.就像火鸡象征西方感恩节一
样,月饼象征着中国中秋节.
篇四:中国各传统节日英语作文
Dragon Boat Festival, often known as Tuen Ng Festival or Duan Wu Festival, is a traditional Chinese festival held on the fifth day of the fifth month of the Chinese calendar. It is also known as the Double Fifth.[citation needed] It has since been celebrated, in various ways, in other parts of East Asia as well, most notably Korea.
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The exact origins of Duan Wu are unclear, but one traditional view holds that the festival memorializes the Chinese poet Qu Yuan of the Warring States Period. He mitted suicide by drowning himself in a river because he was disgusted by the corruption of the Chu government. The local people, knowing him to be a good man, decided to throw food into the river to feed the fishes to prevent them from eating Qus body. They also sat on dragon boats, and tried to scare the fishes away by the thundering sound of drums aboard the boat and the fierce looking dragon-head in the front of the boat.
In the early years of the Chinese Republic, Duan Wu was also celebrated as Poets Day, due to Qu Yuans status as Chinas first poet of personal renown.
Today, people eat zongzi (the food originally intended to feed the fishes) and race dragon boats in memory of Qus dramatic death.
中文:
龙舟节,端午节经常或端午节,是一种传统的中国节日对
中华历5月5日举行。它也被称为端五。[来源请求]它已经
被庆祝,以各种方式在其他地区以及东亚,尤其是韩国。
端午确切的起源尚不清楚,但一种传统的观点认为,节日
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来源在中国诗人屈原的战国时期。他犯的河中溺死自己,因
为他是由政府的腐败深恶痛绝楚自杀。当地群众,知道他是
一个好人,决定投身到河里的鱼的食物,饲料,以防止吃屈
原的尸体他们。他们还坐在龙舟,并试图吓唬由船上和激烈
的寻找龙在船头头战鼓齐鸣声中的鱼了。
在中国民国初年,段坞也被―诗人节―庆祝,由于屈原作
为中国的第一个著名的诗人的个人地位。
今天,人们吃粽子的曲的戏剧性死亡内存和龙舟比赛(原
本打算饲料鱼类的食物)。
The Dragon Boat Festival is a lunar (阴历)holiday,
occurring (存正)on the fifth day of the fifth lunar month (农历史五月第五天) The Chinese Dragon Boat Festival is a significant (有意义的)holiday celebrated (庆祝)in
China,and the one with the longest history (历史最悠久)。
The Dragon Boat Festival is celebrated by boat races (龙舟
赛) in the shape of dragons. Competing teams (竞争团队)
row their boats forward to a drumbeat (击古)racing to
reach the finish end first. The boat races during the Dragon
Boat Festival are traditional customs(传统习俗)to attempts
to (试图)rescue (搭救) the patriotic poet (爱国诗人)
Chu Yuan. Chu Yuan drowned (溺死) on the fifth day of the fifth lunar month in 277 B.C. Chinese citizens now throw
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bamboo leaves (竹叶) filled with cooked rice into the water. Therefore the fish could eat the rice rather than the hero poet. This later on turned into the custom
of eating tngt and rice dumplings(棕子)。 The
celebration is a time for protection (防护) from evil(邪
恶)and disease (疾病) for the rest of the year. It is done so by different practices such as hanging healthy herbs on the front door, drinking nutritious concoctions (营养品), and
displaying (展示) portraits (画像) of evils nemesis(邪
恶报应),Chung Kuei. If one manages to (成功做??) stand
(直立)an egg on its end at exactly 12:00 noon, the
following year will be a lucky one.
A Chinese holiday is gaining worldwide popularity 一个
逐渐受到全球欢迎的中国节日
Some holidays are so much fun that they catch on outside of their culture. The most obvious example is probably Christmas, which is celebrated around the world by people who aren’t even Christian. Similarly, in recent years, the Dragon Boat Festival has moved beyond China to bee an international holiday celebrated by people who may know little about the holiday’s origins.
有些节日实在是很有趣,所以在本土文化以外的地方也
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很受欢迎。最明显的例子可能就是圣诞节,世界各地的人都
会庆祝圣诞节,即使是非基督徒。同样,最近几年端午节已
经不局限于中国,成为国际性节日,而庆祝的人可能对节日
的由来并不太了解。
The Dragon Boat Festival is one of three major Chinese holidays, along with the Spring and Moon Festivals. Of the three, it is possibly the oldest, dating back to the Warring States Period in 227 B.C. The festival memorates Qu Yuan, a minister in the service of the Chu Emperor. Despairing over corruption at court, Qu threw himself into a river. Townspeople jumped into their boats and tried in vain to save him. Then, hoping to distract hungry fish from his body, the people scattered rice on the water.
端午节与春节和中秋节并列为中国三大节日。这三个节
日中,它可能是最古老的一个,可以追溯到公元前227年的
战国时代。这个节日是为了纪念楚国的大夫屈原,他因为对
朝廷的贪污腐败感到绝望而投河自尽。镇上的人纷纷冲上船
去救他,却没有成功。后来大家把米撒到水里,希望把饥饿
的鱼群从他的躯体边引开。
Over the years, the story of Qu’s demise transformed
into the traditions of racing dragon boats and eating zongzi – a kind of rice wrapped in bamboo leaves. The races have
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certainly captured the imagination of people from all over the world. Every spring there are nearly 60 dragon boat races held outside of China in cities from Vancouver to Sydney, from Gdańsk, Poland to Cape Town, South Africa. Canada alone has nearly 50 dragon boat teams and Germany has nearly 30.
多年以后,屈原逝世的故事逐渐演变成赛龙舟和吃粽子
(一种包在竹叶中的米食)的传统。这些竞赛显然激起了世界
各地人们的想像,每年春天有将近60场龙舟赛在中国境外
的城市举办,从温哥华到悉尼,从波兰的格但斯克到南非的
开普敦。单单字加拿大就有将近50支龙舟队伍,德国则有
近30个。
So what is it about the Dragon Boat Festival that appeals to foreigners? ―It’s an unusual
sport,‖ says one racer from Germany. ―It’s not like
everybody’s doing it. That’s one of the reasons that there’
s such great team spirit in a dragon boat team – everybody
feels like we’re doing something special.‖ And what about the zongzi? ―Ehhh, they’re not bad, I guess,‖ he says.
―Something of an acquired taste. I just haven’t really
acquired it yet.‖
那么,为什么端午节赛龙舟会吸引外国人呢,―这是一项
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不寻常的运动。‖一位来自德国的参赛者说,―这并不是所有
的人都在从事的运动。这正是龙舟队的团队精神如此高昂的
原因之一,每个人都觉得自己在做一件很特别的事。‖那么
粽子呢,―喔,我觉得它不难吃。‖他说,―那是一种需要后
天培养的品味。我只是还没培养出来罢了。‖
The Dragon Boat Festival ,also called the Duanwu Festival ,is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the
Chinese calendar.People always eat rice dumplings and watch dragon boat races to celebrate it.
The festival is best known for its dragon-boat races,especially in the southern places where there are many rivers and lakes. Ití?s
very popular.
The rice dumpling is made of glutinous rice,meat and so on. You can eat different kinds of rice dumplings.They are very delicious.
And Dragon Boat Festival is for Qu Yuan. He is an honest minister who is said to have mitted suicide by drowning himself in a
river.
Overall, the Dragon Boat Festival is very interesting!
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端午节(Dragon Boat Festival)
The Dragon Boat Festival occurs on the fifth day of the fifth moon of the lunar calendar(阴历). It is one of the three
most important of the annual Chinese festivals. The other two are the Autumn Moon Festival and Chinese New Year.
The story of this colorful festival concerns a famous Chinese scholar-statesman(政治家) named Chu Yuan(屈原)
who, some three centuries before the birth of Christ, served the King of Chu(楚怀王)during the Warring States period.
As a loyal minister(大臣), Chu Yuan at first enjoyed the full confidence and respect of his sovereign(君主). Eventually,
through the intrigues of his rivals, he was discredited(不足信
的, 不名誉的).
Chu Yuan was never able to regain(恢复) the emperors
favor and on the fifth day of the fifth moon in the year 295 B.C.(Before Christ), at the age of 37, Chu Yuan clasped a stone to his chest and plunged into the Milo River(汨罗江) in
the Hunan Province(湖南省).
Respecting the minister as an upright(正直的) and
honest man, the people who lived in the area jumped into their boats and rushed out in a vain search for him. This unsuccessful rescue attempt is a part of what the Dragon
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Boat Festival memorates every year.
Probably the most exciting and interesting aspect of the festival is the racing of the Dragon Boats. These races not only symbolize the peoples attempt to save Chu Yuan, they also demonstrate the Chinese virtues(美德) of cooperation
and teamwork.
Another activity of the Festival is the making and eating of a kind of dumpling called Tngt (粽子). When it
became known that Chu Yuan was gone forever, the people, living along the river, threw cooked rice into the water as a sacrifice(祭品) to their dead hero. They wrapped(包) rice in
bamboo leaves(粽叶), and stuffed(填满) it with ham, beans,
bean paste(豆沙), salted egg yokes, sausages, nuts, and/or vegetables.
To the Chinese the fifth lunar moon is more than just the Dragon Boat Festival. Since antiquity(古代), they have
believed that this month is a pestilential and
danger-fraught(瘟疫的及充满危险的) period. Children born
in this month are said to be difficult to raise(抚养), and
people tend to concentrate their efforts during this time attempting to protect their families from ills and misfortune. The day of the Dragon Boat Festival is customarily the time
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when cleaning and sanitation(卫生) are stressed(着重, 强调).
Most families hang calamus(菖蒲) and artemisia(艾草)
above their doors, both as a decoration and as a preventive against pestilence.
Ancient folk medicines(民间药物) such as realgar(雄黄
酒)are added to the food eaten on the Festival day. This is believed to prevent disease and to promote a healthy digestive system(消化器官). The drinking of realgar in wine
supposedly relieves(解除) the effects of poisons accumulated in human bodies.
The sachets (Hsiang Pao in Chinese香包) are very
popular with children and they vie(竞争) with each other to
collect as many as possible. Children are not the only ones who collect Hsiang Pao. Older people are often given them as a symbol of respect, and they are highly prized because of the intricate(复杂的) and beautiful embroidery(刺绣) that
adorns(装饰) them.
The Dragon Boat Festival is an entertaining and enjoyable event. It gives the observer an opportunity to glimpse a part of the rich Chinese cultural heritage
1、Its Chinese name Qing Ming literally means Clear Brightness, hinting at its importance as a celebration of
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Spring. Similar to the spring festivals of other cultures, Tomb Sweeping Day celebrates the rebirth of nature, while marking the beginning of the planting season and other
outdoor activities.
清明节,又叫踏青节,正是春光明媚草木吐绿的时节,
也正是人们春游的好时候,所以古人有清明踏青,并开展一
系列体育活动的的习俗。直到今天,清明节祭拜祖先,悼念
已逝的亲人的习俗仍很盛行。
2、In ancient times, people celebrated Qing Ming Jie with dancing, singing, piics, and kite flying. Colored boiled eggs would be broken to symbolize the opening of life.
3、One theory is that since any number of ghosts rome around a grave area, the less appealing food will be consumed by the ancestors, and not be plundered by strangers.
清明节扫墓英语作文
Last Qingming Festival,i return home to worship my grandfather.Qingming Festival is a folk Festival.In the past,In the past, the Qingming Festival was called Arbor Day. But Today, Chinese visit their family graves to tend to any underbrush that has grown. Weeds are pulled, and dirt swept away, and the family will set out offerings of food and
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spirit money. Unlike the sacrifices at a familys home altar, the offerings at the tomb usually consist of dry, bland food. One theory is that since any number of ghosts rome around a grave area, the less appealing food will be consumed by the ancestors, and not be plundered by strangers.
With the passing of time, this celebration of life became a day to the honor past ancestors. Following folk religion, the Chinese believed that the spirits of deceased ancestors looked after the family. Sacrifices of food and spirit money could keep them happy, and the family would prosper through good harvests and more children.
1、Its Chinese name Qing Ming literally means Clear Brightness, hinting at its importance as a celebration of Spring. Similar to the spring festivals of other cultures, Tomb Sweeping Day celebrates the rebirth of nature, while marking the beginning of the planting season and other outdoor activities.
清明节,又叫踏青节,正是春光明媚草木吐绿的时节,
也正是人们春游的好时候,所以古人有清明踏青,并开展一
系列体育活动的的习俗。直到今天,清明节祭拜祖先,悼念
已逝的亲人的习俗仍很盛行。
2、In ancient times, people celebrated Qing Ming Jie
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with dancing, singing, piics, and kite flying. Colored boiled eggs would be broken to symbolize the opening of life.
3、One theory is that since any number of ghosts rome around a grave area, the less appealing food will be consumed by the ancestors, and not be plundered by strangers.
清明节扫墓英语作文
Last Qingming Festival,i return home to worship my grandfather.Qingming Festival is a folk Festival.In the past,In the past, the Qingming Festival was called Arbor Day. But Today,
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作文三:《英语五句话作文训练 》18300字
英语五句话作文训练
作文类型:人物说明文、地点说明文、报道类、议论文及应用文 (书信 通知 启事 守则 须知)
牢记: 五句话作文写作步骤 (五部曲)
第一步:判断文体,确定时态:一般现在时;一般过去时;一般将来
时;一般进行时;过去进行时;现在完成时;过去完成时;
将来完成时
第二步:整理组合信息,组成有意义的5句话
第三步:写出每句话的主谓宾
(简单句一个谓语动词
并列句 主谓 +并列词+主谓
复合句 主句有谓语动词,关系词引导的从句也要有谓语动词) 第四步:翻译成文(注意连贯性)
第五步:检查:主谓是否一致、名词的单复数、时态等
人物说明文
姓名 李华 出生年,,,,年,月
月
学历 ,,,,,,,,, 光明小出生地 中国广州
学
,,,,,,,,, 广州市
第六中学
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所学主要课语文,数学,英语,物理,化学,电脑 程
特长英语,电脑(去年在全校电脑竞赛中获第一名) 业余爱好 游泳,滑冰,集邮,流行音乐
地点说明文
位置 广东东部 ,省会城市
历史 2000多年
面积 7434.4 平方千米
人口 994 万
特点 四季如春,繁花似锦, “花城”美誉:“五羊”象征 旅
游业,餐饮业,轻工业发达
介绍性说明文
假设你是李华,你将参加你校3月22日举行的主题为“the importance
of water”得演讲比赛。请根据以下提示写一篇英语文章,为比赛做准备。
水与人类水是生命之源,世界万物都离不开它
的关系
水资源的1. 随着人口的增加和工业的发展,用水量不断增加,许现状 多地方水资源变得紧缺。
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2. 河流和湖泊被污染,鱼也无法生存,同时人们的健康
也受到危害。
解决方法 你的看法:应采取措施,保护水资源,与污染作斗争。
议论文
学生不宜使用手机的理由:
手机并不能带来更多的方便,而且加重经济负担。 若课堂接听手机会影响听课, 也会影响老师和其他
同学。
学生玩手机游戏或接发短信,将无法集中精力学习。 手机会引起学生之间的相互攀比,带来不好的影响。
五句话作文之应用文
-----通知,海报,便条,启事,守则,须知等 (一) 通知,海报
1(通知
写作通知时应注意:
(1)人称。通知大多数为第三人称;但如果原文中已有称谓,则常常是第一人称。
(2)注意时态和语态。在通知中,被动语态和将来时态是最常见的 (3)表达要准确,可以应用一些精练的词组,句型;但不要有太多
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的修饰语。
二,实战演练及解析
学校学生会为了帮助大家学好电脑,特邀请广州大学计算机系的
李教授在3月3日,星期六下午2点来校讲座,请根据以下内容,
写一份书面通知,通知时间是2月28号。
主讲人: 广州大学计算机系的李教授
主题: 关于计算机的用途以及如何利用Internet进行学习
地点: 校图书馆三楼
参加对象: 电脑爱好者
其他: 参加者准备一些在学习中遇到的问题,不要迟到
[写作内容]
1)请按内容要求写一份通知,文中开头和结尾已经给出。
2)通知必须包括所有内容要点,但不要逐条译成英语。
[写作要求]只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。
Notice
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.
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You will benefit from the lecture and please be on time. That’s all.
Thank you.
the Students’ Union
Notice
To help students learn more about the puter, our Students’ Union
has invited Professor Li from the Computer Department of
Guangzhou University to give us a lecture on Saturday, the third of
March. Professor Li will give us a talk on the use of the puter and
how to learn by taking advantage of the Internet. The lecture will be
held on the third floor of the school library. Any puter-lover is
wele to attend the lecture. Please prepare some questions in
puter learning, which will be answered by professor during the
lecture. You will benefit from the lecture and please be on time.
That’s all. Thank you.
the Students’ Union
(1)[抛砖引玉]
中秋节即将来临,学生会将举办一场英语晚会,现请你以学生
会的名义发一份英语书面通知,欢迎全校师生参加,通知包含
以下要点:
晚会主题 新年英语晚会
时间 12月30号,8:00-10:00
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地点 学校操场
节目内容 1( 学生表演的英语短剧,演唱英语歌曲,讲英语故
事
2( 邀请外国学生为我们表演中国歌曲
其他 欢迎大家光临晚会,玩得开心
[写作内容]
1)请按内容要求写一份英语书面通知。
2)通知必须包括所有内容要点,但不要逐条译成英语。
(2) [试题分析]
此题为应用文---通知。文中没有对格式予以要求,所以我们可
以不予以考虑。文中粗画,可以得知,它有6个信息点,我们
加以合并,做好拟文的准备。?晚会主题为一句;?晚会时间,
地点合为一句;?节目内容的第一句;?节目内容的第二句;
?其他的内容为文章最后结尾。时态很明显应运用将来时态,
同时应注意被动语态的正确应用。通知的内容很细致,明确,
所以我们在写文章时,应注意语言的言简意赅。
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三,举一反三
假如你是学生会主席,根据下列内容和提示,写一篇通知稿,告
之全校师生。通知包含以下要点:
1(事由:欢迎20名日本学生来校参观。
2(具体安排:
a.(9月15日上午8:45在校门口集合,欢迎来校参观的日本学
生。
b(带客人到接待室(reception room)开联欢会(get-together)。
c(带客人参观图书馆、实验室和教学楼。
d(11:30和日本学生在食堂共进午餐,并互赠小礼物。
[写作内容]
1)请按内容要求写一份英语书面通知,文中开头和结尾已经给
出。
2)通知必须包括所有内容要点,但不要逐条译成英语。
[写作要求]只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。
Boys and girls,
Attention,please.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________. The Japanese students will leave at about 12:00. That’s all. Thank you.
[习作2]
假如你是广州市八十六中学学生会主席,学生会要组织一场英语
演讲比赛,请写一张有关举行英语演讲比赛的海报,海报内容如
下:
举办单位: 学生会
比赛目的: 提高学生讲英语的能力
报名手续: 凡愿意参加者可到各班班长处报名
比赛时间: 5月6日下午2点
比赛地点: 第一会议室
评比办法: 有五位教师作评判员,前十名将获鼓励奖。
[写作内容]
1)请按内容要求写一份英语海报,文中题目和结尾已经给出。
2)海报必须包括所有内容要点,但不要逐条译成英语。
[写作要求]
只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。
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A Poster for an English-Speaking Contest
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.All are wele to be present at the contest.
The Students’ Union
thNumber 86 Senior Middle School
范文1:
In order to celebrate the ing new year, an English Evening party is going to be held by our Students’ Union. It will be held from 8 pm to 10 pm on the mid-autumn festival on our school playground. There will be many activities from the students, such as English short-play performances, English story telling and English songs. What’s more, some foreign students are to be invited to sing Chinese songs for us at the party. You are warmly weled to our English party and we are sure you will enjoy yourself.
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(4) [范文点评]
1)内容完整,表达准确;
2)全文灵活正确的运用了大量的被动语态的句型;
3)在句子结构上使用了非谓语结构,副词连接上下文,突出了文
章的连贯及逻辑性。
范文2:
A Poster for an English-Speaking Contest
In order to improve the students’ ability to speak English, an English-speaking contest will be held by our Students’ Union. It will be held at 2 p.m. on May 6th. in No. 1 meeting room. Anyone who is willing to take part please go to your monitor and enter you name for it. Five teachers have been invited to work as judges. The first ten winners will be given awards as an encouragement. All are wele to be present at the contest.
The Students’ Union,
Number 86 th Senior Middle School
启示
启事有遗失启事和招领启事两种。遗失启事的正文包括遗失物
品,遗失的时间、地点,若有人发现遗失物品应交的人、地点、联系
方式等。启事正文右下角写上失主的姓名,当然可写也可不写,有时
也可以不写写出的时间,标题直接放在正文前。
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招领启事的正文包括招领的物品、拾到物品的时间及丢失者去认领失
物的地点及联系情况等。启事下文的右下角写登这一启事的人或单
位,有时也可以不写落款和写启事的时间,标题后直接写正文。
实战演练及解析
假如你是李燕,高三(7)班学生,本月4日下午在本校操场上遗忘
红色长大衣一件,大衣的一个口袋中装有一个小笔记本,另一口袋中
装有自行车的钥匙。写一则遗失启事,拾到者请交高三(13)班的班
长或本人,将不胜感谢。高三(7)班教室在教学楼三楼。
[写作要求]
只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。
(2) [试题分析]
此文是应用文中的遗失启事,从文章的提示语来看,我们可知道全文
运用第_______人称将是最恰当的。同时,我们可以抓住5个要点:
1. 遗失物品及时间、地点 2.具体物品 3. 遗失者 4. 表示感激5.联系
方式 巧妙拆分信息点,用5句话表达全文.
__________________
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_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
(Loser)
举一反三
假如你是高三(13) 班的王明, 你在操场上打球时,拾到绿色书包一
个,内有两本新教科书、练习本、袖珍英汉词典一本及铅笔盒一个,
请失主到高三(13)班王明或班长处认领,写一则失物招领启事, 高三
(13) 班位于1号楼302室.
[写作要求]
只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。
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_______________________________________________________.
Class 13, Senior Grade 3
Wang Ming
须知
抛砖引玉
某海滨游泳场从今年夏天起将对外宾开放,请你根据下列内容为海滨
用英语写一份“游泳者须知”,内容包括如下:
(1) 游泳者不得越过红线;
(2) 本场借出的游泳衣,救生圈(life buoy)、太阳伞(sunshade)、椅
子不得损坏或带走;
(3) 不准乱扔赃物(litter); (4) 下午6点之前必须上岸; (5) 不
准在游泳区内钓鱼。
游泳者必须遵守以上规定,违者处罚金(fine)50—200元。
[写作要求]
只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。
A Notice of Swimmers’ Rules
Swimmers are required to observe the following rules. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.
【参考范文】
A Notice of Swimmers’ Rules
Swimmers are required to observe the following rules. Nobody is allowed to swim out of the red line. Swimming suits, life buoys, sunshades, chairs borrowed from here are not to be spoiled or taken away. It is forbidden to throw the litters everywhere. Swimmers must get out of water before 6 p.m. and fishing is not allowed here. Anyone breaking the rules will be punished by a fine of 50—200 Yuan.
举一反三
请你为你校阅览室用英语写一份“阅览守则”。为使启事简洁明了,你
可根据下面的提示,列出守则内容.。
(1) 阅览室内要保持安静和清洁 (2) 借阅时要出示学生证,每次限
借一本。
(3) 阅览室不准移动桌移,不准撕坏书本,不准将书带出室外。
(4) 违反规定,要没收借阅卡,并予以适当的罚款。
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[写作要求]
只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。
A Notice of Reading Room Rules
Read this notice before you start reading here.
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
______________________________________________.
试题答案
A Notice of Reading Room Rules
Read this notice before you start reading here. You have to keep the
room quiet and clean when you are in the library. When borrowing the
books, please show your student card and borrow only one book at a
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time. It is not allowed to talk or laugh loudly in the library. Neither can
you move the desks or chairs, nor can you tear off the books and take the
books out. If you break the regulations, your student card will be kept
back or you will get fined according to the rules.
五句话作文之信件
祝贺信 推荐信 投诉信 应聘信 求助信 请求信
1 (祝贺信)
假如你是李平,你的朋友高明经过努力,考上了中山大学,请给他写
一封对高考胜利的祝贺信。信的开头和结尾已给出。
[写作内容]
1)祝贺他考上著名的中山大学
2)对其所付出努力加以肯定
3)对其未来展望,并予以祝福
Dear Gaoming,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ .
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Yours sincerely,
Li Ping
答案 (祝贺信)
Dear Gaoming,
We are very happy to know that you have successfully passed the college entrance examination this year. Please allow me to give my most sincere congratulations on this occasion that you have been admitted into Zhongshan University. We don’t feel surprised the achievement you have got, because you have been working so hard and you do well in almost all the subjects. Your success shows the famous proverb, “no pains, no gains”. We firmly believe that you will have a greater achievement in
your college with your efforts.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ping
2. (推荐信)
假如你是某高中英语教师Mary,想将你的学生王玲推荐去澳大利亚
某语言学院进修。请根据下列简况和要求用英语给对方校长写一封推
荐信。信的开头和结尾已给出。
[写作内容]
1)王玲,本校应届毕业生,现年18岁,2004年进校,三年来在班
上一直名列前茅。
2)她的父母都是英语老师,她本人对英语很感兴趣,希望能有机会
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到国外进一步进修英语。
3)2006年曾获得全国中学生英语演讲比赛冠军
Dear President,
It is a great honor for me to introduce to you one of my very best student, Wangling.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ It will certainly be of great help to her if she could have such a chance . With best regards,
Yours sincerely,
Mary
答案2. (推荐信)
Dear President,
It is a great honor for me to introduce to you one of my very best student, Wangling.
Wangling, a graduate of our school this year, is 18 years old. She has been studying very hard, so she has always ranked high in her class since
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she came to our school 3 years ago. Coming from a family of English teachers, she has a particular interest in English. In 2006, she came out
first at the National Senior Students English Speech Contest. It is her
wish to further her studies on the English language. It will certainly be of
great help to her if she could have such a chance. With best regards,
Yours sincerely,
Mary
3. (投诉信)
假如你是李明,在某商店买了一台电冰箱,使用半年后出现了问题。
即向公司经理写信投诉,并要求来人修理。请按以下要求以英文书信
的形式予以表达。信的开头和结尾已给出。
[写作内容]
1)半年前我在你们商店买了一台电冰箱。
2)但是,最近发现电冰箱时常发出噪音,从低到高,有时甚至停止
工作。
3)我们对此深感失望。希望能尽快派人来修理。来时请打电话联系。
电话:6606.5531
我们将在家恭候。
[写作要求]
只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。
Dear manager,
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_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________. I will be at home this weekend. Please call me before you e. My telephone number is 6606.5531. Thank you very much.
Customer
Li Ming
答案(投诉信)
Dear manager,
I am writing to you to plain about the refrigerator I bought half a year ago from your store. Unfortunately, it begins to make noise when it is turned on lately. The sound is low at first but gradually it bees louder and louder. To make the matter worse, it even stops sometimes. I am very upset about it, so please send somebody to repair it as soon as possible. I will be at home this weekend. Please call me before you e. My telephone number is 6606.5531. Thank you very much.
Customer,
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Li Ming
4((应聘信)
李平从广告上得知某公司需要一名秘书, 请以李平的名义向公司写
信应聘。以下是她的简历。请按以下要求以英文书信的形式予以表达。
信的开头和结尾已给出。
[写作内容]
1)出生于1987年,即将从职业学校毕业。。
2)专业:经济管理(business management)。学英语8年,会计算
机。
3)在过去三年中一直是本校学生报编辑之一,学习成绩在班上优秀。
4) 本人喜欢办公室工作,相信能胜任秘书工作。如果能得到这个机
会将十分感谢。参考词汇:
职业学校:vocational school
Dear Sir:
How do you do? Through the ad, I know you need a secretary. I would like to have this job. Now let me introduce myself to you __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _
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Thank you for your consideration. Your early reply will be highly appreciated.
Sincerely yours,
Li Ping
【试题答案】4. (应聘信)
Dear Sir:
How do you do? Through the ad, I know you need a secretary. I would like to have this job. Now let me introduce myself to you. My name is Li Ping, aged 20 and majored in business management, I will soon graduate from a vocational school. I have been learning English for 8 years with puter experience as well. I have been one of the editors for the student newspaper in our school for the past three years. My grades remain upper level in my class. I would like to apply for the position of the secretary because I like office work very much and I am sure I can do it well.
Thank you for your consideration. Your early reply will be highly appreciated.
Sincerely yours,
Li Ping
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5.(求助信)
假如你是李平,业余时间做兼职工作,为某公司把中文短篇故事翻译
成英语,由于第一次做翻译工作,没有经验。写一封信向你的英语王
老师求助,诚恳地希望他能帮助你修改刚刚完成的翻译文稿。请按以
下要求以英文书信的形式予以表达。信的开头和结尾已给出。
[写作内容]
1)向老师求助。
2)业余时间做兼职工作,把中文短篇故事翻译成英语,第一次做翻
译工作,没有经验。
3)翻译的文章中一定有一些错误和不恰当的中国式英语。
4) 真诚希望老师能够帮助审阅文稿,改正错误,同时提出一些建议。
参考词汇:
文稿:manuscript
Dear Ms Wang,
How are you? I am Li Ping.
______________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.
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Thank you for your help with great respect!
Your faithful student,
Li Ping
【试题答案】5.(求助信)
Dear Ms Wang,
How are you? I am Li Ping. I am sorry to write this letter to ask you to do me a favor. I have tried to translate several short Chinese stories into English for a part-time job. As it is the first time for me to do a translation work, I think there must be many errors and incorrect expressions of Chinese English for my lack of experiences. I sincerely hope that you would read over my manuscripts and correct my mistakes. At last, could you please give me some other suggestions on my translation work? Thank you for your help with great respect!
Your faithful student,
Li Ping
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作文四:《五句话英语作文范文》17800字
五句话英语作文范文
篇一:五句话作文话题模板
五句话作文话题模板
一、活动安排:一般将来时
内容包括:组织者,活动的时间、地点,活动的原因、目的和
内容。
范文:
Dear students,
The Students Union has decided to organise a music week. which will be held May. singing pop songs and playing music week, April 20th. The place for the activities will be announced later.
Come to the great fun!
Students Union *1-12月份:
二、经历感受:一般过去时
内容包括:时间,地点,人员,过程,主题,感受
范文:
The Students’Union ”Avoid wasting but encourage to eat up everything on your plate” in front of the Student Canteen at 4 saw pictures on the boards that showed the terrible phenomena of wasting in year about 10 million people are dying of hunger and
reduce food waste by 5%
our determination. we have cultivated our good habits of saving food and avoiding waste.
*记叙活动经过的顺序连词:
三、正反观点对比:一般过去时+
一般现在时
内容包括:总起句+ (正观点+理由)+(反观点+理由)+ 你的
观点
主题句:
某人 agree that ?because?
某人 disagree that?for the reason that?
In my opinion,?
范文:
(总起句)Last week our class had a discussion about whether students can chat online, and there two different viewpoints about it. (正观点+理由)About 62% of my classmates agree that stuents can do so because they think chatting online is an exciting and relaxing way of recreation.Besides, they can make friends and broaden their horizons by chatting online.(反观点+理由)However,
38% of them don’t agree because they think it is a waste of time,energy and money.what’s more, they believe some students
may be misled or cheated if they chat online. (你的观点)In my
opinion, if we deal with chatting online properly, we can benefit from it.
*重点词汇:
做关于?方面的调查就?问题进行讨论 就?问题采访某人
范文:(现状)As far as I know, some students don’t eat
breakfast,while others eat harm to our health but affects our study efficiency. (建议)
breakfast, we should eat grain with carbohydrates that can provide the energy we *列举观点的连词:
(采访结果:)According to Professor Wang, slightly more than half of the school that the causes for short-sightedness are so plicated that no medicine can cure it.(专家建议:)school
children avoid how to hold a pen is also related to short-sightedness.
*注意划线部分的几个动词短语,记住并运用~
100 students of our school. (各方观点:)32% of the students
think wealth is happiness because they think they can buy anything if they have much wealth.On the other hand, 45% of them think that they should be in good health so that they can enjoy whatever they like.What’s more, the rest 23% of the students believe that a man with much knowledge, which will bring him a bright future, is the happinest. (我的观点:)From the survey I know different
people value happiness differently. *重点词汇:
认为 因为 相信 了解
七、说明文:人物简介 一般现在时+一般过去时
Born in Taiwan in 1954, An Li is a famous Chinese film director from home and abroad. He t to America to pursue his dream of film in 1979, but unfortunately, he couldn’t find a job after
graduation.It was six years later that he shot his first film”Pushing
Hands”, which was a great success.As he became increasing ly famous, he began to direct films of different sytles.In recent years, he has been awarded the Best Director for many times, he was acknowleged as one of the greatest directors by an American magazine.
相关词汇:
考入?大学 主修?专业 从事? 有着?的天赋
受到良好的教育/没有受过教育致力于? 获得?奖 因为?获
得很多奖 大获成功 凭着无比的决心 被认为是/作为被铭记
八、说明文:1. 地点介绍 一般现在时
(地理位置同位语), lies west of the Pacific Ocean, with the East Sea on the north and the South Sea . To the west of the island is Fujian, another province of China. (面积、人口)Taiwan has an area
of about 36,000 square kilometers and a (资源、特产)rice and tea
are famous at home and abroad. (景色、气候、旅游visit all over the
world.
文中运用同位语,定语,with状语,和so?that提升句式
仿写
with状语)
(面积、人口) . (历史、旅游)Guangzhou is not only a famous
city with a history of more than 2200 years but also a starting port of the Silk Road on the sea in history(not only?but also?并列结
构)The scenery is so beautiful and
九、说明文:节日介绍
6月的第三个星期日是父亲节。相对于母亲节,父亲节是人们比
较陌生的一个节日,是1910年在美国华盛顿州的士波肯市由杜德
太太发起的。而我国的父亲节起源,要追溯到国民时代。当母亲
含辛茹苦地照顾我们时,父亲也在努力地扮演着上帝所赋予他的
温柔角色; the third week of June.(定语), Father’s Day, was first
launched by Mrs. Dodo in America in 1910. While in China, the festival dates back to the period of the Republic of China. Compared with Mother’s Day(定语), Father’s Day seems stranger to people.
However, we should never forget that when our mothers are taking good care of us, our fathers are also carrying the great burden to support our family.
篇二:五年级英语作文范文
五年级英语作文范文集
My English Teacher
Miss Tang is my English teacher. She’s very pretty. She is tall and
thin. She has two big eyes and a small mouth. Her hair is long. She likes cats very much. And she likes singing and dancing, too. Her English is very good. We often play games in English classes. She is very kind to us. We all love her.
【要领点评】这篇作文的题目是“我的英语老师”,是一篇介绍
人物的作文。小作者开门见山,直接点题,首先介绍了英语老师
的姓名,然后逐一介绍了她的外貌特征、喜好、英语水平、上课
特点以及师生情感等。
小朋友们在写作文时,要注意使用自己最熟悉的词[组],以免写
出一些错句子。写作时要注意意思连贯、语句通顺、标点正确、
书写清晰、规范等。
My Days of the week
I’m a student and I am in Grade 5.I get up at six o’clock every day.
I have breakfast at half past six, and go to school at seven o’clock. I
have classes from Monday to Saturday. I have an English class on Friday and I have a PE class on Tuesday. I don’t have to go to school
on school, and I like to go swimming on that day.
【要领点评】这篇作文的题目是“我的一周”,小作者没有说一
些空话,而是从自己的亲身经历写起,叙述了自己一周七天的所
作所为,并特别强调了星期天的喜好,写得自然、流畅。 小朋友
们写作文时要注意人称及谓语动词的变化,要依据提示,结合自
己的实际,写自己身边熟悉的事情。
My Favourite Food
Do you know what this is? Guess! Its colour is yellow. It’s long
and thin. It looks like a small boat and crescent. Oh, it is a banana. Do you know what that is? Guess again! Its colour is orange. It’s
round. It looks like a small ball and a small lantern. Oh, it is an orange. I like then a lot. I like ice-creams. I like to chew gum. Chocolates and candies are yummy. I like them very much.
How about you? What’s your favourite food?
【要领点评】My Favourite Food 是一篇很成功的文章,小作者
并不是简单地列举出自己最喜欢的每一种食物,而是有详有略地
进行介绍。整篇文章用词准确、语言流畅、没有语法错误。另外,
文章中出现了一些生词,可见小作者是用心查字典了。
I can help do housework
I am a girl. My name is Li Ling. I’m in Class Three, Grade Five. I’
mhelpful at home. I can water the flowers, empty the trash and sweep the floor. After meals, I can help my mother do the dishes. On Sunday, I can wash the clothes. What about you? Are you helpful, too?
【要领点评】本篇作文的题目是“我可以帮助做家务”,作者主
要叙述自己在家帮助做的事情,介绍自己的名字,所在年级及在
家能做的家务,很详细,到位。
小朋友们在写作时,应尽量写一些亲自经历的事情,这样会避
免在作文时显得太空,因为只有自己经常做的事情印象才会特别
深刻。写作时还要注意大小写和时态。
In The Kitchen
This is the kitchen of my family. It’s big and nice. Look! My
mother is cooking in it. This is a microwave and that is a stove. There is a big table here. There are many things on it. What are these? They look yummy! Oh, they’re strawberries. And what are
those? They are grapes.
【要领点评】这篇作文的题目是“在厨房”里,作者根据自己
家的厨房情况。介绍厨房里有微波炉和电炉,有一张大桌子和桌
子上的物品等,以及妈妈在做饭,非常真实。小朋友们,可以从
观察自己身边的事、物写起,利用所学的句子,描述身边熟悉的
东西来训练习作。
My Village
My village is very beautiful. There are many houses in the village. Near the village, there is a forest. A small river is in front of the village. The water in it is very clean. We can see some fish in the river. Near the river, you can see a mountain. Some flowers and grass are on the mountain. I like my village. Wele to my village!
【要领点评】本文以“我的村庄”为题描述了自己家乡的风景。
介绍了村庄的房屋、森林、河流及大山,使人看了这篇作文后确
实感觉到“我的村庄”的美丽。小朋友们在写作时,可仔细想一
下自己的村庄或所在城市的特点,尽量使用本单元学过的单词或
短语进行叙述。
My house
I am a student now. when I grow up, I want to my own house, a very beautiful house.The house must have two floors. In the house there are many good things that I like, such as a great TV set, a fridge that I can put many delicious food, a big fan, an air conditioner, a puter, and many things that I like. In front the house, there is a swimming pool, behind the house,there is a garden, I can grow flowers and grass.
汉语:现在我是个学生,当我长大的时候,我想拥有自己的房
子,一个非常漂亮的房子。这个房子一定要有两层。在房子里边
有许多我喜欢的好东西。比如说一个极好的电视机,一个电冰箱,
我可以在里边放许多好吃的食物,一个大电扇,一个空调,一个
电脑,还有许多我喜欢的东西。在房子的前面,有一个游泳池,
房子的后边有个花园,我可以种植花和草。
My favourite person
My favourite person is my mother. She is a kind woman. She always friendly to everybody. My mother is _____(职业).She
works from Monday to Friday, she always very busy. She likes_____(兴趣爱好,记住like后面的动词要加ing). She always gets up
early in the morning,then she cooks nice breakfast for my father and me. She looks after me very well, and if I have some questions in my homework, she will help me. I love my mother very much.
每个人心中都有自己最喜欢的人。你最喜欢谁呢,为什么喜欢
她/他呢,请以“My favourite person”为题写一篇小作文。
要求:1、条理清楚,意思连贯,语句通顺,标点正确,书写清
晰、规范。
2、文章不得少于60个单词。
第二学期五年级英语作文专练
一、看图,以“My day ”为题,写一篇短文。(至少5句话)
I get up at 6:50 in the morning. I do morning exercises at 7:10. I go to school at 7:30. I have English class at 10:00. I eat dinner at 6:00 in the evening. I do my homework at 7:00. I go to bed at 9:00.This is my day.
二、根据图画提示写几句话,说说你在周末经常或有时做的事
情。(至少5句话)
I usually (often) climb mountains on Saturday. I visit my grandparents on Saturday. I go
shopping with my mother on Saturday. I play sports on Sunday. I play the piano at home on Sunday, too. Sometimes I take pictures. I like my weekend.
三、请以“My favourite season”为题,从季节、天气、服装、
事情等几方面写一篇小短文。(至少5句话)
四、写一写,你所在或你熟悉的一个地方的四季情况。(至少5
句话)
There are four sesons in a year. I live in DongGuan City. It’s
warm in spring. I (We) can plant trees. It’s hot and sunny in summer.
I (We) can swim in the lake (river). In fall, it’s cool and windy. I (We)
can fly kite and go hiking (climb mountains) with my friends. In winter, It’s not too cold. I (We) can wear my sweater.
五、写你的生日在哪个季节哪一天,并说出季节的特点,你可
以做什么活动 。(至少5句话) My birthday is March 12th. It’s in
spring. It’s warm. The trees are green. I can plant trees. I can fly kites. I can climb mountains with my friends.
六、请写一些你的生日是在哪个月份哪一天,在那天你经常做
些什么事情,吃些什么东西,和谁在一起,心情怎样。要求不少
于五句话。
My birthday is in June. It’s June 3rd. I often go shopping with my mother. I eat birthday cakes with my parents in the evening. I am happy on my birthday.
七、假如现在是晚上7:30,介绍你一家正在干什么,(至少
5句话)
It’s 7:30 in the evening. Everyone is at home. My father is writing an e-mail. My mother is
cooking dinner in the kitchen. My brother is doing homework in the study. My sister is watching TV with me in the living room.
八、假如现在是星期天的中午,根据图片,用英语介绍你的家
庭成员正在干什么。(至少5句话)
It’s Sunday noon. My mom (mother) is cooking lunch in the kitchen. My dad (father) is writing an e-mail in the study. My sister is drawing pictures. My brother is doing homework. What about me? I am watching TV in the living room. We’re busy.(We’re happy.)
九、看图,写写图中什么地方,这些动物在干什么,(至少5
句话)
It’s a funny zoo. There are many animals. The lions are fighting. The kangaroo is jumping. The monkeys are swinging. The pandas are climbing trees. They’re so cute.
十、看图,写一写动物园的情景。动物们都在干什么呢,
十一、看图,图中人物在干什么,(至少5句话
十二、假如你和你的几位同学正在教室值日,想想你们各自正
在做什么,
十三、今天是你生日,爸爸妈妈带你去了动物园,请告诉我们
你看见了什么,它们在做什么,你开心吗,
Today is my birthday. We’re in the zoo. Look! The mother
kangaroo is jumping. The baby kangaroo is sleeping. What a big elephant! It’s drinking water near the river. Some pandas are
climbing trees. Some pandas are eating bamboos. They’re so cute.
Oh, no. The two bears are fighting. The monkeys are swinging in the trees. I’m happy.
篇三:五年级英语作文范文
五年级英语作文范文集
My English Teacher
Miss Tang is my English teacher. She’s very pretty. She is tall and
thin. She has two big eyes and a small mouth. Her hair is long. She likes cats very much. And she likes singing and dancing, too. Her English is very good. We often play games in English classes. She is very kind to us. We all love her.
【要领点评】这篇作文的题目是“我的英语老师”,是一篇介绍
人物的作文。小作者开门见山,直接点题,首先介绍了英语老师
的姓名,然后逐一介绍了她的外貌特征、喜好、英语水平、上课
特点以及师生情感等。
小朋友们在写作文时,要注意使用自己最熟悉的词[组],以免写
出一些错句子。写作时要注意意思连贯、语句通顺、标点正确、
书写清晰、规范等。
My Days of the week
I’m a student and I am in Grade 5.I get up at six o’clock every day.
I have breakfast at half past six, and go to school at seven o’clock. I
have classes from Mond
ay to Saturday. I have an English class on Friday and I have a PE class on Tuesday. I don’t have to go to school on school, and I like to go swimming on that day.
【要领点评】这篇作文的题目是“我的一周”,小作者没有说一
些空话,而是从自己的亲身经历写起,叙述了自己一周七天的所
作所为,并特别强调了星期天的喜好,写得自然、流畅。 小朋友
们写作文时要注意人称及谓语动词的变化,要依据提示,结合自
己的实际,写自己身边熟悉的事情。
My Favourite Food
Do you know what this is? Guess! Its colour is yellow. It’s long
and thin. It looks like a small boat and crescent. Oh, it is a banana. Do you know what that is? Guess again! Its colour is orange. It’s
round. It looks like a small ball and a small lantern. Oh, it is an orange. I like then a lot. I like ice-creams. I like to chew gum. Chocolates and candies are yummy. I like them very much. How about you? What’s your favourite food?
【要领点评】My Favourite Food 是一篇很成功的文章,小作者
并不是简单地列举出自己最喜欢的每一种食物,而是有详有略地
进行介绍。整篇文章用词准确、语言流畅、没有语法错误。另外,
文章中出现了一些生词,可见小作者是用心查字典了。
I can help do housework
I am a girl. My name is Li Ling. I’m in Class Three, Grade Five. I’
mhelpful at home. I can water the flowers, empty the trash and sweep the floor. After meals, I can help my mother do the dishes. On Sunday, I can wash the clothes. What about you? Are you helpful, too?
【要领点评】本篇作文的题目是“我可以帮助做家务”,作者主
要叙述自己在家帮助做的事情,介绍自己的名字,所在年级及在
家能做的家务,很详细,到位。
小朋友们在写作时,应尽量写一些亲自经历的事情,这样会避
免在作文时显得太空,因为只有自己经常做的事情印象才会特别
深刻。写作时还要注意大小写和时态。
In The Kitchen
This is the kitchen of my family. It’s big and nice. Look! My
mother is cooking in it. This is a microwave and that is a stove. There is a big table here. There are many things on it. What are these? They look yummy! Oh, they’re strawberries. And what are
those? They are grapes.
【要领点评】这篇作文的题目是“在厨房”里,作者根据自己
家的厨房情况。介绍厨房里有微波炉和电炉,有一张大桌子和桌
子上的物品等,以及妈妈在做饭,非常真实。小朋友们,可以从
观察自己身边的事、物写起,利用所学的句子,描述身边熟悉的
东西来训练习作。
My Village
My village is very beautiful. There are many houses in the village. Near the village, there is a forest. A small river is in front of the village. The water in it is very clean. We can see some fish in the river. Near the river, you can see a mountain. Some flowers and grass are on the mountain. I like my village. Wele to my village!
【要领点评】本文以“我的村庄”为题描述了自己家乡的风景。
介绍了村庄的房屋、森林、河流及大山,使人看了这篇作文后确
实感觉到“我的村庄”的美丽。小朋友们在写作时,可仔细想一
下自己的村庄或所在城市的特点,尽量使用本单元学过的单词或
短语进行叙述。
My house
I am a student now. when I grow up, I want to my own house, a very beautiful house.The house must have two floors. In the house there are many good things that I like, such as a great TV set, a fridge that I can put many delicious food, a big fan, an air conditioner, a puter, and many things that I like. In front the house, there is a swimming pool, behind the house,there is a garden, I can grow flowers and grass.
汉语:现在我是个学生,当我长大的时候,我想拥有自己的房
子,一个非常漂亮的房子。这个房子一定要有两层。在房子里边
有许多我喜欢的好东西。比如说一个极好的电视机,一个电冰箱,
我可以在里边放许多好吃的食物,一个大电扇,一个空调,一个
电脑,还有许多我喜欢的东西。在房子的前面,有一个游泳池,
房子的后边有个花园,我可以种植花和草。
My favourite person
My favourite person is my mother. She is a kind woman. She always friendly to
everybody. My mother is _____(职业).She works from Monday to
Friday, she always very busy. She likes_____(兴趣爱好,记住like
后面的动词要加ing). She always gets up early in the morning,then
she cooks nice breakfast for my father and me. She looks after me very well, and if I have some questions in my homework, she will help me. I love my mother very much.
每个人心中都有自己最喜欢的人。你最喜欢谁呢,为什么喜欢
她/他呢,请以“My favourite person”为题写一篇小作文。
要求:1、条理清楚,意思连贯,语句通顺,标点正确,书写清
晰、规范。
2、文章不得少于60个单词。
2009-2010第二学期五年级英语作文专练
一、看图,以“My day ”为题,写一篇短文。(至少5句话)
I get up at 6:50 in the morning. I do morning exercises at 7:10. I go to school at 7:30. I have English class at 10:00. I eat dinner at 6:00 in the evening. I do my homework at 7:00. I go to bed at 9:00.This is my day.
二、根据图画提示写几句话,说说你在周末经常或有时做的事
情。(至少5句话)
I usually (often) climb mountains on Saturday. I visit my grandparents on Saturday. I go shopping with my mother on Saturday. I play sports on Sunday. I play the piano at home on Sunday, too. Sometimes I take pictures. I like my weekend.
三、请以“My favourite season”为题,从季节、天气、服装、
事情等几方面写一篇小短文。(至少5句话)
四、写一写,你所在或你熟悉的一个地方的四季情况。(至少5
句话)
There are four sesons in a year. I live in DongGuan City. It’s
warm in spring. I (We) can plant trees. It’s hot and sunny in summer.
I (We) can swim in the lake (river). In fall, it’s cool and windy. I (We)
can fly kite and go hiking (climb mountains) with my friends. In winter, It’s not too cold. I (We) can wear my sweater.
五、写你的生日在哪个季节哪一天,并说出季节的特点,你可
以做什么活动 。(至少5句话)
My birthday is March 12th. It’s in spring. It’s warm. The trees are
green. I can plant trees. I can fly kites. I can climb mountains with my friends.
六、请写一些你的生日是在哪个月份哪一天,在那天你经常做
些什么事情,吃些什么东西,和谁在一起,心情怎样。要求不少
于五句话。
My birthday is in June. It’s June 3rd. I often go shopping with my
mother. I eat birthday cakes with my parents in the evening. I am happy on my birthday.
七、假如现在是晚上7:30,介绍你一家正在干什么,(至少5
句话)
It’s 7:30 in the evening. Everyone is at home. My father is writing an e-mail. My mother is cooking dinner in the kitchen. My brother is doing homework in the study. My sister is watching TV with me in the living room.
八、假如现在是星期天的中午,根据图片,用英语介绍你的家庭
成员正在干什么。(至少5句话)
It’s Sunday noon. My mom (mother) is cooking lunch in the kitchen. My dad (father) is writing an e-mail in the study. My sister is drawing pictures. My brother is doing homework. What about me? I am watching TV in the living room. We’re busy.(We’re happy.)
九、看图,写写图中什么地方,这些动物在干什么,(至少5
句话) It’s a funny zoo. There are many animals. The lions are fighting. The kangaroo is jumping. The monkeys are swinging. The pandas are climbing trees. They’re so cute.
十、看图,写一写动物园的情景。动物们都在干什么呢,
十一、看图,图中人物在干什么,(至少5句话
十二、假如你和你的几位同学正在教室值日,想想你们各自正在
做什么,
十三、今天是你生日,爸爸妈妈带你去了动物园,请告诉我们你
看见了什么,它们在做什么,你开心吗,
Today is my birthday. We’re in the zoo. Look! The mother
kangaroo is jumping. The baby kangaroo is sleeping. What a big elephant! It’s drinking water near the river. Some pandas are climbing trees. Some pandas are eating bamboos. They’re so cute.
Oh, no. The two bears are fighting. The monkeys are swinging in the trees. I’m happy.
作文五:《英语五句话作文训练》16900字
英语五句话作文训练
作文类型:人物说明文、地点说明文、报道类、议论文及应用文 (书信 通知 启事 守则 须知)
牢记: 五句话作文写作步骤 (五部曲)
第一步:判断文体,确定时态:一般现在时;一般过去时;一般将来
时;一般进行时;过去进行时;现在完成时;过去完成时;将来完成时
第二步:整理组合信息,组成有意义的5句话
第三步:写出每句话的主谓宾
(简单句一个谓语动词
并列句 主谓 +并列词+主谓
复合句 主句有谓语动词,关系词引导的从句也要有谓语动词) 第四步:翻译成文(注意连贯性)
第五步:检查:主谓是否一致、名词的单复数、时态等
人物说明文
地点说明文
介绍性说明文
假设你是李华,你将参加你校3月22日举行的主题为“the importance of water”得演讲比赛。请根据以下提示写一篇英语文章,为比赛做准备。
议论文
五句话作文之应用文
-----通知,海报,便条,启事,守则,须知等
(一) 通知,海报
1.通知
写作通知时应注意:
(1)人称。通知大多数为第三人称;但如果原文中已有称谓,则常常是第一人称。
(2)注意时态和语态。在通知中,被动语态和将来时态是最常见的
(3)表达要准确,可以应用一些精练的词组,句型;但不要有太多
的修饰语。
二,实战演练及解析
学校学生会为了帮助大家学好电脑,特邀请广州大学计算机系的李教授在3月3日,星期六下午2点来校讲座,请根据以下内容,写一份书面通知,通知时间是2月28号。
主讲人: 广州大学计算机系的李教授
主题: 关于计算机的用途以及如何利用Internet进行学习 地点: 校图书馆三楼
参加对象: 电脑爱好者
其他: 参加者准备一些在学习中遇到的问题,不要迟到
[写作内容]
1)请按内容要求写一份通知,文中开头和结尾已经给出。
2)通知必须包括所有内容要点,但不要逐条译成英语。
[写作要求]只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。
Notice
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.
You will benefit from the lecture and please be on time. That’s all. Thank you.
the Students’ Union
Notice
To help students learn more about the puter, our Students’ Union has invited Professor Li from the Computer Department of Guangzhou University to give us a lecture on Saturday, the third of March. Professor Li will give us a talk on the use of the puter and how to learn by taking advantage of the Internet. The lecture will be held on the third floor of the school library. Any puter-lover is wele to attend the lecture. Please prepare some questions in puter learning, which will be answered by professor during the lecture. You will benefit from the lecture and please be on time. That’s all. Thank you.
the Students’ Union
(1)[抛砖引玉]
中秋节即将来临,学生会将举办一场英语晚会,现请你以学生会的名义发一份英语书面通知,欢迎全校师生参加,通知包含以下要点:
晚会主题 新年英语晚会
时间 12月30号,8:00-10:00
地点 学校操场
节目内容 1. 学生表演的英语短剧,演唱英语歌曲,讲英语故事
2. 邀请外国学生为我们表演中国歌曲
其他 欢迎大家光临晚会,玩得开心
[写作内容]
1)请按内容要求写一份英语书面通知。
2)通知必须包括所有内容要点,但不要逐条译成英语。
(2) [试题分析]
此题为应用文---通知。文中没有对格式予以要求,所以我们可以不予以考虑。文中粗画,可以得知,它有6个信息点,我们加以合并,做好拟文的准备。①晚会主题为一句;②晚会时间,地点合为一句;③节目内容的第一句;④节目内容的第二句;⑤其他的内容为文章最后结尾。时态很明显应运用将来时态,同时应注意被动语态的正确应用。通知的内容很细致,明确,所以我们在写文章时,应注意语言的言简意赅。
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三,举一反三
假如你是学生会主席,根据下列内容和提示,写一篇通知稿,告之全校师生。通知包含以下要点:
1.事由:欢迎20名日本学生来校参观。
2.具体安排:
a..9月15日上午8:45在校门口集合,欢迎来校参观的日本学生。
b.带客人到接待室(reception room)开联欢会(get-together)。 c.带客人参观图书馆、实验室和教学楼。
d.11:30和日本学生在食堂共进午餐,并互赠小礼物。
[写作内容]
1)请按内容要求写一份英语书面通知,文中开头和结尾已经给出。
2)通知必须包括所有内容要点,但不要逐条译成英语。
[写作要求]只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。
Boys and girls,
Attention,please.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________. The Japanese students will leave at about 12:00. That’s all. Thank you.
[习作2]
假如你是广州市八十六中学学生会主席,学生会要组织一场英语演讲比赛,请写一张有关举行英语演讲比赛的海报,海报内容如下:
举办单位: 学生会
比赛目的: 提高学生讲英语的能力
报名手续: 凡愿意参加者可到各班班长处报名
比赛时间: 5月6日下午2点
比赛地点: 第一会议室
评比办法: 有五位教师作评判员,前十名将获鼓励奖。
[写作内容]
1)请按内容要求写一份英语海报,文中题目和结尾已经给出。
2)海报必须包括所有内容要点,但不要逐条译成英语。
[写作要求]
只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。
A Poster for an English-Speaking Contest
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.All are wele to be present at the contest.
The Students’ Union
Number 86th Senior Middle School
范文1:
In order to celebrate the ing new year, an English Evening party is going to be held by our Students’ Union. It will be held from 8 pm to 10 pm on the mid-autumn festival on our school playground. There will be many activities from the students, such as English short-play performances, English story telling and English songs. What’s more, some foreign students are to be invited to sing Chinese songs for us at the party. You are warmly weled to our English party and we are sure you will enjoy yourself.
(4) [范文点评]
1)内容完整,表达准确;
2)全文灵活正确的运用了大量的被动语态的句型;
3)在句子结构上使用了非谓语结构,副词连接上下文,突出了文章的连贯及逻辑性。
范文2:
A Poster for an English-Speaking Contest
In order to improve the students’ ability to speak English, an English-speaking contest will be held by our Students’ Union. It will be held at 2 p.m. on May 6th. in No. 1 meeting room. Anyone who is willing to take part please go to your monitor and enter you name for it. Five teachers have been invited to work as judges. The first ten winners will be given awards as an encouragement. All are wele to be present at the contest.
The Students’ Union,
Number 86 th Senior Middle School
启示
启事有遗失启事和招领启事两种。遗失启事的正文包括遗失物品,遗失的时间、地点,若有人发现遗失物品应交的人、地点、联系方式等。启事正文右下角写上失主的姓名,当然可写也可不写,有时也可以不写写出的时间,标题直接放在正文前。
招领启事的正文包括招领的物品、拾到物品的时间及丢失者去认领失物的地点及联系情况等。启事下文的右下角写登这一启事的人或单位,有时也可以不写落款和写启事的时间,标题后直接写正文。 实战演练及解析
假如你是李燕,高三(7)班学生,本月4日下午在本校操场上遗忘红色长大衣一件,大衣的一个口袋中装有一个小笔记本,另一口袋中装有自行车的钥匙。写一则遗失启事,拾到者请交高三(13)班的班长或本人,将不胜感谢。高三(7)班教室在教学楼三楼。
[写作要求]
只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。
(2) [试题分析]
此文是应用文中的遗失启事,从文章的提示语来看,我们可知道全文运用第_______人称将是最恰当的。同时,我们可以抓住5个要点:
1. 遗失物品及时间、地点 2.具体物品 3. 遗失者 4. 表示感激5.联系方式 巧妙拆分信息点,用5句话表达全文.
__________________
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_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
(Loser)
举一反三
假如你是高三(13) 班的王明, 你在操场上打球时,拾到绿色书包一个,内有两本新教科书、练习本、袖珍英汉词典一本及铅笔盒一个,请失主到高三(13)班王明或班长处认领,写一则失物招领启事, 高三
(13) 班位于1号楼302室.
[写作要求]
只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。
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_______________________________________________________. Class 13, Senior Grade 3
Wang Ming
须知
抛砖引玉
某海滨游泳场从今年夏天起将对外宾开放,请你根据下列内容为海滨用英语写一份“游泳者须知”,内容包括如下:
(1) 游泳者不得越过红线;
(2) 本场借出的游泳衣,救生圈(life buoy)、太阳伞(sunshade)、椅子不得损坏或带走;
(3) 不准乱扔赃物(litter); (4) 下午6点之前必须上岸; (5) 不准在游泳区内钓鱼。
游泳者必须遵守以上规定,违者处罚金(fine)50—200元。
[写作要求]
只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。
A Notice of Swimmers’ Rules
Swimmers are required to observe the following rules.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.
【参考范文】
A Notice of Swimmers’ Rules
Swimmers are required to observe the following rules. Nobody is allowed to swim out of the red line. Swimming suits, life buoys, sunshades, chairs borrowed from here are not to be spoiled or taken away. It is forbidden to throw the litters everywhere. Swimmers must get out of water before 6 p.m. and fishing is not allowed here. Anyone breaking the rules will be punished by a fine of 50—200 Yuan.
举一反三
请你为你校阅览室用英语写一份“阅览守则”。为使启事简洁明了,你可根据下面的提示,列出守则内容.。
(1) 阅览室内要保持安静和清洁 (2) 借阅时要出示学生证,每次限借一本。
(3) 阅览室不准移动桌移,不准撕坏书本,不准将书带出室外。
(4) 违反规定,要没收借阅卡,并予以适当的罚款。
[写作要求]
只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。
A Notice of Reading Room Rules
Read this notice before you start reading here.
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试题答案
A Notice of Reading Room Rules
Read this notice before you start reading here. You have to keep the room quiet and clean when you are in the library. When borrowing the books, please show your student card and borrow only one book at a
time. It is not allowed to talk or laugh loudly in the library. Neither can you move the desks or chairs, nor can you tear off the books and take the books out. If you break the regulations, your student card will be kept back or you will get fined according to the rules.
五句话作文之信件
祝贺信 推荐信 投诉信 应聘信 求助信 请求信
1 (祝贺信)
假如你是李平,你的朋友高明经过努力,考上了中山大学,请给他写一封对高考胜利的祝贺信。信的开头和结尾已给出。
[写作内容]
1)祝贺他考上著名的中山大学
2)对其所付出努力加以肯定
3)对其未来展望,并予以祝福
Dear Gaoming,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ .
Yours sincerely,
Li Ping
答案 (祝贺信)
Dear Gaoming,
We are very happy to know that you have successfully passed the college entrance examination this year. Please allow me to give my most sincere congratulations on this occasion that you have been admitted into Zhongshan University. We don’t feel surprised the achievement you have got, because you have been working so hard and you do well in almost all the subjects. Your success shows the famous proverb, “no pains, no gains”. We firmly believe that you will have a greater achievement in your college with your efforts.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ping
2. (推荐信)
假如你是某高中英语教师Mary,想将你的学生王玲推荐去澳大利亚某语言学院进修。请根据下列简况和要求用英语给对方校长写一封推荐信。信的开头和结尾已给出。
[写作内容]
1)王玲,本校应届毕业生,现年18岁,2004年进校,三年来在班上一直名列前茅。
2)她的父母都是英语老师,她本人对英语很感兴趣,希望能有机会
到国外进一步进修英语。
3)2006年曾获得全国中学生英语演讲比赛冠军
Dear President,
It is a great honor for me to introduce to you one of my very best student, Wangling.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ It will certainly be of great help to her if she could have such a chance . With best regards,
Yours sincerely,
Mary
答案2. (推荐信)
Dear President,
It is a great honor for me to introduce to you one of my very best student, Wangling.
Wangling, a graduate of our school this year, is 18 years old. She has been studying very hard, so she has always ranked high in her class since
she came to our school 3 years ago. Coming from a family of English teachers, she has a particular interest in English. In 2006, she came out first at the National Senior Students English Speech Contest. It is her wish to further her studies on the English language. It will certainly be of great help to her if she could have such a chance.
With best regards,
Yours sincerely,
Mary
3. (投诉信)
假如你是李明,在某商店买了一台电冰箱,使用半年后出现了问题。即向公司经理写信投诉,并要求来人修理。请按以下要求以英文书信的形式予以表达。信的开头和结尾已给出。
[写作内容]
1)半年前我在你们商店买了一台电冰箱。
2)但是,最近发现电冰箱时常发出噪音,从低到高,有时甚至停止工作。
3)我们对此深感失望。希望能尽快派人来修理。来时请打电话联系。电话:6606.5531
我们将在家恭候。
[写作要求]
只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。
Dear manager,
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________. I will be at home this weekend. Please call me before you e. My telephone number is 6606.5531. Thank you very much.
Customer
Li Ming
答案(投诉信)
Dear manager,
I am writing to you to plain about the refrigerator I bought half a year ago from your store. Unfortunately, it begins to make noise when it is turned on lately. The sound is low at first but gradually it bees louder and louder. To make the matter worse, it even stops sometimes. I am very upset about it, so please send somebody to repair it as soon as possible. I will be at home this weekend. Please call me before you e. My telephone number is 6606.5531. Thank you very much.
Customer,
Li Ming
4.(应聘信)
李平从广告上得知某公司需要一名秘书, 请以李平的名义向公司写信应聘。以下是她的简历。请按以下要求以英文书信的形式予以表达。信的开头和结尾已给出。
[写作内容]
1)出生于1987年,即将从职业学校毕业。。
2)专业:经济管理(business management)。学英语8年,会计算机。
3)在过去三年中一直是本校学生报编辑之一,学习成绩在班上优秀。
4) 本人喜欢办公室工作,相信能胜任秘书工作。如果能得到这个机会将十分感谢。参考词汇:
职业学校:vocational school
Dear Sir:
How do you do? Through the ad, I know you need a secretary. I would like to have this job. Now let me introduce myself to you
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _
Thank you for your consideration. Your early reply will be highly appreciated.
Sincerely yours,
Li Ping
【试题答案】4. (应聘信)
Dear Sir:
How do you do? Through the ad, I know you need a secretary. I would like to have this job. Now let me introduce myself to you. My name is Li Ping, aged 20 and majored in business management, I will soon graduate from a vocational school. I have been learning English for 8 years with puter experience as well. I have been one of the editors for the student newspaper in our school for the past three years. My grades remain upper level in my class. I would like to apply for the position of the secretary because I like office work very much and I am sure I can do it well.
Thank you for your consideration. Your early reply will be highly appreciated.
Sincerely yours,
Li Ping
5.(求助信)
假如你是李平,业余时间做兼职工作,为某公司把中文短篇故事翻译成英语,由于第一次做翻译工作,没有经验。写一封信向你的英语王老师求助,诚恳地希望他能帮助你修改刚刚完成的翻译文稿。请按以下要求以英文书信的形式予以表达。信的开头和结尾已给出。
[写作内容]
1)向老师求助。
2)业余时间做兼职工作,把中文短篇故事翻译成英语,第一次做翻译工作,没有经验。
3)翻译的文章中一定有一些错误和不恰当的中国式英语。
4) 真诚希望老师能够帮助审阅文稿,改正错误,同时提出一些建议。参考词汇:
文稿:manuscript
Dear Ms Wang,
How are you? I am Li Ping.
______________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.
Thank you for your help with great respect!
Your faithful student,
Li Ping
【试题答案】5.(求助信)
Dear Ms Wang,
How are you? I am Li Ping. I am sorry to write this letter to ask you to do me a favor. I have tried to translate several short Chinese stories into English for a part-time job. As it is the first time for me to do a translation work, I think there must be many errors and incorrect expressions of Chinese English for my lack of experiences. I sincerely hope that you would read over my manuscripts and correct my mistakes. At last, could you please give me some other suggestions on my translation work? Thank you for your help with great respect!
Your faithful student,
Li Ping
作文六:《英语五句话作文训练》19800字
英语五句话作?文训练
作文类型:人物说明文、地点说明文、报道类、议论文及应用?文 (书信 通知
启事 守则 须知) 牢记: 五句话作文写?作步骤 (五部曲)
第一步:判断文体,确定时态:一般现在时;一般过去时;一般将来时;
一般进行时;过去进行时;
现在完成时;过去完成时;将来完成时
第二步:整理组合信息?,组成有意义的?5句话
第三步:写出每句话的?主谓宾 (简单句一个谓?语动词
并列句 主谓 +并列词+主谓
复合句 主句有谓语动?词,关系词引导
的?从句也要有谓?语动词)
第四步:翻译成文(注意连贯性)
第五步:检查:主谓是否一致?、名词的单复数?、时态等 人物说明文
姓名 李华 出生年月 ,,,,年,?月 学历 ,,,,,,,,, 光明小学 出生地 中国广州
,,,,,,,,, 广州市第六中?学
所学主要课程? 语文,数学,英语,物理,化学,电脑
特长 英语,电脑(去年在全校电脑竞赛中获第??一名)
业余爱好 游泳,滑冰,集邮,流行音乐
地点说明文
位置 广东东部 ,省会城市
历史 2000多年 ?
面积 7434.4平方千米
人口 994万
特点 四季如春,繁花似锦,“花城”美誉:“五羊”象征 旅游业,餐饮业,
轻工业发达
介绍性说明文?
假设你是李华?,你将参加你校?3月22日举?行的主题为“the import?ance of water”得演讲比赛。请根据以下提?示写一篇英语?文章,为比赛做准备?。
水与人类的关?水是生命之源,?世界万物都离?不开它
系
水资源的现状 ?1. 随着人口的增加和工业的发?展?,用水量不断增?加,许多地方水资?源变
得紧缺。
2. 河流和湖泊被污染?,鱼也无法生存,?同时人们的健康也受到危害??。 解决方法 你的看法:应采取措施,保护水资源,与污染作斗争?。
议论文
学生不宜使用?手机的理由:
手机并不能带来更多的方便?,?而且加重经济?负担。
若课堂接听手机会影响听课??, 也会影响老师?和其他同学。
学生玩手机游戏或接发短信?,?将无法集中精?力学习。
手机会引起学生之间的相互?攀比?,带来不好的影?响。
五句话作文之?应用文
-----通知,海报,便条,启事,守则,须知等
(一) 通知,海报
1(通知
写作通知时应?注意:
(1)人称。通知大多数为?第三人称;但如果原文中?已有称谓,则常常是第一?人称。 (2)注意时态和语?态。在通知中,被动语态和将?来时态是最常?见的
(3)表达要准确,可以应用一些?精练的词组,句型;但不要有太多?的修饰语。
二,实战演练及解?析
学校学生会为?了帮助大家学?好电脑,特邀请广州大?学计算机系的?李教授在3月?3日,星期六下午2?点
来校讲座,请根据以下内?容,写一份书面通?知,通知时间是2?月28号。
主讲人: 广州大学计算?机系的李教授?
主题: 关于计算机的?用途以及如何?利用Inte?rnet进行?学习
地点: 校图书馆三楼?
参加对象: 电脑爱好者
其他: 参加者准备一?些在学习中遇?到的问题,不要迟到
[写作内容]
1)请按内容要求?写一份通知,文中开头和结?尾已经给出。
2)通知必须包括?所有内容要点?,但不要逐条译?成英语。
[写作要求]只能使用5个?句子表达全部?的内容。
Notice?
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__?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?.You
will benefi?t from the lectur?e and please? be?on?time.?That’s?all.?Thank?you.
the Studen?ts’?Union
Notice?
To help studen?ts learn more about the put?er, our Studen?ts’?Union?has?invite?d Profes?sor Li from the Comput?er Depart?ment of Guangz?hou Univer?sity to give us a lectur?e on Saturd?ay, the third of March. Profes?sor Li will give us a talk on the use of the put?er and how to learn by taking? advant?age of the Intern?et. The lectur?e will be held on the third floor of the school? librar?y. Any put?er-lover is wel?e to attend? the lectur?e. Please? prepar?e some questi?ons in put?er learni?ng, which will be answer?ed by profes?sor during? the lectur?e. You will benefi?t from the lectur?e and please? be?on?time.?That’s?all.?Thank?you.
the Studen?ts’?Union
(1)[抛砖引玉]
中秋节即将来?临,学生会将举办?一场英语晚会?,现请你以学生?会的名义发一?份英语书面通?知,欢迎全校师生?参加,通知包含以下?要点:
晚会主题 新年英语晚会?
时间 12月30号?,8:00-10:00
地点 学校操场
节目内容 1( 学生表演的英?语短剧,演唱英语歌曲?,讲英语故事
2( 邀请外国学生?为我们表演中?国歌曲
其他 欢迎大家光临?晚会,玩得开心
[写作内容]
1)请按内容要求?写一份英语书?面通知。
2)通知必须包括?所有内容要点?,但不要逐条译?成英语。
(2) [试题分析]
此题为应用文?---通知。文中没有对格?式予以要求,所以我们可以?不予以考虑。文中粗画,可以得知,它有6个信息?点,我们加以合并?,做好拟文的准?备。?晚会主题为一?句;?晚会时间,地点合为一句?;?节目内容的第?一句;?节目内容的第?二句;?其他的内容为?文章最后结尾?。时态很明显应?运用将来时态?,同时应注意被?动语态的正确?应用。通知的内容很?细致,明确,所以我们在写?文章时,应注意语言的?言简意赅。
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三,举一反三
假如你是学生?会主席,根据下列内容?和提示,写一篇通知稿?,告之全校师生?。通知包含以下?要点: 1(事由:欢迎20名日?本学生来校参?观。
2(具体安排:
a.(9月15日上?午8:45在校门口?集合,欢迎来校参观?的日本学生。
b(带客人到接待?室(recept?ion room)开联欢会(get-togeth?er)。
c(带客人参观图?书馆、实验室和教学?楼。
d(11:30和日本学?生在食堂共进?午餐,并互赠小礼物?。
[写作内容]
1)请按内容要求?写一份英语书?面通知,文中开头和结?尾已经给出。
2)通知必须包括?所有内容要点?,但不要逐条译?成英语。
[写作要求]只能使用5个?句子表达全部?的内容。
Boys and girls,
Attent?ion,please?.______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?_____. The Japane?se studen?ts will leave at about 12:00.?That’s?all.?Thank?you.
[习作2]
假如你是广州?市八十六中学?学生会主席,学生会要组织?一场英语演讲?比赛,请写一张有关?举行英语演讲?比赛的海报,海报内容如下?:
举办单位: 学生会
比赛目的: 提高学生讲英?语的能力
报名手续: 凡愿意参加者?可到各班班长?处报名
比赛时间: 5月6日下午?2点
比赛地点: 第一会议室
评比办法: 有五位教师作?评判员,前十名将获鼓?励奖。
[写作内容]
1)请按内容要求?写一份英语海?报,文中题目和结?尾已经给出。
2)海报必须包括?所有内容要点?,但不要逐条译?成英语。
[写作要求]
?句子表达全部?的内容。 只能使用5个
A Poster? for an Englis?h-Speaki?ng Contes?t
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______?.All are wel?e to be presen?t at the contes?t.
The Studen?ts’?Union
thNumber? 86 Senior? Middle? School?
范文1:
In order to celebr?ate the ing? new year, an Englis?h Evenin?g party is going to be held by our Studen?ts’?Union. It will be held from 8 pm to 10 pm on the mid-autumn? festiv?al on our school? playgr?ound. There will be many activi?ties from the studen?ts, such as Englis?h short-play perfor?mances?, Englis?h story tellin?g and Englis?h songs. What’s?more, some foreig?n studen?ts are to be invite?d to sing Chines?e songs for us at the party. You are warmly? wel?ed to our Englis?h party and we are sure you will enjoy yourse?lf.
(4) [范文点评]
1)内容完整,表达准确;
2)全文灵活正确?的运用了大量?的被动语态的?句型;
3)在句子结构上?使用了非谓语?结构,副词连接上下?文,突出了文章的?连贯及逻辑性?。
范文2:
A Poster? for an Englis?h-Speaki?ng Contes?t
In order to improv?e the studen?ts’?abilit?y to speak Englis?h, an Englis?h-speaki?ng contes?t will be held by our Studen?ts’?Union.?It will be held at 2 p.m. on May 6th. in No. 1 meetin?g room. Anyone? who is willin?g to take part please? go to your monito?r and enter you name for it. Five teache?rs have been invite?d to work as judges?. The first ten winner?s will be given awards? as an encour?agemen?t. All are wel?e to be presen?t at the contes?t.
The Studen?ts’?Union,?
Number? 86 th Senior? Middle? School?
启示
启事有遗失启?事和招领启事?两种。遗失启事的正?文包括遗失物?品,遗失的时间、地点,若有人发现遗?失物品应交的?人、地点、联系方式等。启事正文右下?角写上失主的?姓名,当然可写也可?不写,有时也可以不?写写出的时间?,标题直接放在?正文前。
招领启事的正?文包括招领的?物品、拾到物品的时?间及丢失者去?认领失物的地?点及联系情况?等。启事下文的右?下角写登这一?启事的人或单?位,有时也可以不?写落款和写启?事的时间,标题后直接写?正文。 实战演练及解?析
假如你是李燕?,高三(7)班学生,本月4日下午?在本校操场上?遗忘红色长大?衣一件,大衣的一个口?袋中装有一个?小笔记本,另一口袋中装?有自行车的钥?匙。写一则遗失启?事,拾到者请交高?三(13)班的班长或本?人,将不胜感谢。高三(7)班教室在教学?楼三楼。
[写作要求]
只能使用5个?句子表达全部?的内容。
(2) [试题分析]
此文是应用文?中的遗失启事?,从文章的提示?语来看,我们可知道全?文运用第__?_____人?称将是最恰当?的。同时,我们可以抓住?5个要点:1. 遗失物品及时?间、地点 2.具体物品 3. 遗失者 4. 表示感激5.联系方式 巧妙拆分信息?点,用5句话表达?全文.
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(Loser)
举一反三
假如你是高三?(13) 班的王明, 你在操场上打?球时,拾到绿色书包?一个,内有两本新教?科书、练习本、袖珍英汉词典?一本及铅笔盒?一个,请失主到高三?(13)班王明或班长?处认领,写一则失物招?领启事, 高三(13) 班位于1号楼?302室.
[写作要求]
只能使用5个?句子表达全部?的内容。
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______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?____. Class 13, Senior? Grade 3
Wang Ming
须知
抛砖引玉
某海滨游泳场?从今年夏天起?将对外宾开放?,请你根据下列?内容为海滨用?英语写一份“游泳者须知”,内容包括如下?:
(1) 游泳者不得越?过红线;
(2) 本场借出的游?泳衣,救生圈(life buoy)、太阳伞(sunsha?de)、椅子不得损坏?或带走;
(3) 不准乱扔赃物?(litter?); (4) 下午6点之前?必须上岸; (5) 不准在游泳区?内钓鱼。
游泳者必须遵?守以上规定,违者处罚金(fine)50—200元。
[写作要求]
?句子表达全部?的内容。 只能使用5个
A Notice? of Swimme?rs’?Rules
Swimme?rs are requir?ed to observ?e the follow?ing rules.
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【参考范文】
A Notice? of Swimme?rs’?Rules
Swimme?rs are requir?ed to observ?e the follow?ing rules. Nobody? is allowe?d to swim out of the red line. Swimmi?ng suits, life buoys, sunsha?des, chairs? borrow?ed from here are not to be spoile?d or taken away. It is forbid?den to throw the litter?s everyw?here. Swimme?rs must get out of water before? 6 p.m. and fishin?g is not allowe?d here. Anyone? breaki?ng the rules will be punish?ed by a fine of 50—200 Yuan. 举一反三
请你为你校阅?览室用英语写?一份“阅览守则”。为使启事简洁?明了,你可根据下面?的提示,列出守则内容?.。 (1) 阅览室内要保?持安静和清洁? (2) 借阅时要出示?学生证,每次限借一本?。
(3) 阅览室不准移?动桌移,不准撕坏书本?,不准将书带出?室外。
(4) 违反规定,要没收借阅卡?,并予以适当的?罚款。
[写作要求]
只能使用5个?句子表达全部?的内容。
A Notice? of Readin?g Room Rules
Read this notice? before? you start readin?g here.
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试题答案
A Notice? of Readin?g Room Rules
Read this notice? before? you start readin?g here. You have to keep the room quiet and clean when you are
in the librar?y. When borrow?ing the books, please? show your studen?t card and borrow? only one book at a time. It is not allowe?d to talk or laugh loudly? in the librar?y. Neithe?r can you move the desks or chairs?, nor can you tear off the books and take the books out. If you break the regula?tions, your studen?t card will be kept back or you will get fined accord?ing to the rules.
五句话作文之?信件
祝贺信 推荐信 投诉信 应聘信 求助信 请求信
1 (祝贺信)
假如你是李平?,你的朋友高明?经过努力,考上了中山大?学,请给他写一封?对高考胜利的?祝贺信。信的开头和结?尾已给出。
[写作内容]
1)祝贺他考上著?名的中山大学?
2)对其所付出努?力加以肯定
3)对其未来展望?,并予以祝福
Dear Gaomin?g,
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Yours sincer?ely,
Li Ping
答案 (祝贺信)
Dear Gaomin?g,
We are very happy to know that you have succes?sfully? passed? the colleg?e entran?ce examin?ation this year. Please? allow me to give my most sincer?e congra?tulati?ons on this occasi?on that you have been admitt?ed into Zhongs?han Univer?sity. We?don’t?feel?surpri?sed the achiev?ement you have got, becaus?e you have been workin?g so hard and you do well in almost? all the subjec?ts. Your succes?s shows the famous? prover?b, “no?pains, no?gains”. We firmly? believ?e that you will have a greate?r achiev?ement in your colleg?e with your effort?s.
Yours sincer?ely,
Li Ping
2. (推荐信)
假如你是某高?中英语教师M?ary,想将你的学生?王玲推荐去澳?大利亚某语言?学院进修。请根据下列简?况和要求用英?语给对方校长?写一封推荐信?。信的开头和结?尾已给出。
[写作内容]
1)王玲,本校应届毕业?生,现年18岁,2004年进?校,三年来在班上?一直名列前茅?。
2)她的父母都是?英语老师,她本人对英语?很感兴趣,希望能有机会?到国外进一步?进修英语。
3)2006年曾?获得全国中学?生英语演讲比?赛冠军
Dear Presid?ent,
It is a great honor for me to introd?uce to you one of my very best studen?t, Wangli?ng.______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?__ It will certai?nly be of great help to her if
she could have such a chance? .
With best regard?s,
Yours sincer?ely,
Mary
答案2. (推荐信)
Dear Presid?ent,
It is a great honor for me to introd?uce to you one of my very best studen?t, Wangli?ng.
Wangli?ng, a gradua?te of our school? this year, is 18 years old. She has been studyi?ng very hard, so she has always? ranked? high in her class since she came to our school? 3 years ago. Coming? from a family? of Englis?h teache?rs, she has a partic?ular intere?st in Englis?h. In 2006, she came out first at the Nation?al Senior? Studen?ts Englis?h Speech? Contes?t. It is her wish to furthe?r her studie?s on the Englis?h langua?ge. It will certai?nly be of great help to her if she could have such a chance?.
With best regard?s,
Yours sincer?ely,
Mary
3. (投诉信)
假如你是李明?,在某商店买了?一台电冰箱,使用半年后出?现了问题。即向公司经理?写信投诉,并要求来人修?理。请按以下要求?以英文书信的?形式予以表达?。信的开头和结?尾已给出。
[写作内容]
1)半年前我在你?们商店买了一?台电冰箱。
2)但是,最近发现电冰?箱时常发出噪?音,从低到高,有时甚至停止?工作。
3)我们对此深感?失望。希望能尽快派?人来修理。来时请打电话?联系。电话:6606.5531
我们将在家恭?候。
[写作要求]
只能使用5个?句子表达全部?的内容。
Dear manage?r,
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______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?_____. I will be at home this weeken?d. Please? call me before? you e. My teleph?one number? is 6606.5531. Thank you very much. Custom?er
Li Ming
答案(投诉信)
Dear manage?r,
I am writin?g to you to pla?in about the refrig?erator? I bought? half a year ago from your store. Unfort?unatel?y, it begins? to make noise when it is turned? on lately?. The sound is low at first but gradua?lly it bee?s louder? and louder?. To make the matter? worse, it even stops someti?mes. I am very upset about it,
so please? send somebo?dy to repair? it as soon as possib?le.
I will be at home this weeken?d. Please? call me before? you e. My teleph?one number? is 6606.5531. Thank you very much.
Custom?er,
Li Ming
4((应聘信)
李平从广告上?得知某公司需?要一名秘书, 请以李平的名?义向公司写信?应聘。以下是她的简?历。请按以下要求?以英文书信的?形式予以表达?。信的开头和结?尾已给出。
[写作内容]
1)出生于198?7年,即将从职业学?校毕业。。
2)专业:经济管理(busine?ss manage?ment)。学英语8年,会计算机。
3)在过去三年中?一直是本校学?生报编辑之一?,学习成绩在班?上优秀。
4) 本人喜欢办公?室工作,相信能胜任秘?书工作。如果能得到这?个机会将十分?感谢。参考词汇:
职业学校:vocati?onal school?
Dear Sir:
How do you do? Throug?h the ad, I know you need a secret?ary. I would like to have this job. Now let me
introd?uce myself? to you
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Thank you for your consid?eratio?n. Your early reply will be highly? apprec?iated.
Sincer?ely yours,
Li Ping
【试题答案】4. (应聘信)
Dear Sir:
How do you do? Throug?h the ad, I know you need a secret?ary. I would like to have this job. Now let me
introd?uce myself? to you. My name is Li Ping, aged 20 and majore?d in busine?ss manage?ment, I will soon gradua?te from a vocati?onal school?. I have been learni?ng Englis?h for 8 years with put?er experi?ence as well. I have been one of the editor?s for the studen?t newspa?per in our school? for the past three years. My
grades? remain? upper level in my class. I would like to apply for the positi?on of the secret?ary becaus?e I like office? work very much and I am sure I can do it well. Thank you for your consid?eratio?n. Your early reply will be highly? apprec?iated.
Sincer?ely yours,
Li Ping
5.(求助信)
假如你是李平?,业余时间做兼?职工作,为某公司把中?文短篇故事翻?译成英语,由于第一次做?翻译工作,没有经验。写一封信向你?的英语王老师?求助,诚恳地希望他?能帮助你修改?刚刚完成的翻?译文稿。请按以下要求?以英文书信的?形式予以表达?。信的开头和结?尾已给出。
[写作内容]
1)向老师求助。
2)业余时间做兼?职工作,把中文短篇故?事翻译成英语?,第一次做翻译?工作,没有经验。
3)翻译的文章中?一定有一些错?误和不恰当的?中国式英语。
4) 真诚希望老师?能够帮助审阅?文稿,改正错误,同时提出一些?建议。参考词汇:
文稿:manusc?ript
Dear Ms Wang,
How are you? I am Li Ping.
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?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______?______
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Your faithf?ul studen?t,
Li Ping
【试题答案】5.(求助信)
Dear Ms Wang,
How are you? I am Li Ping. I am sorry to write this letter? to ask you to do me a favor. I have tried to
transl?ate severa?l short Chines?e storie?s into Englis?h for a part-time job. As it is the first time for me to do a
transl?ation work, I think there must be many errors? and incorr?ect expres?sions of Chines?e Englis?h for my lack of experi?ences. I sincer?ely hope that you would read over my manusc?ripts and correc?t my mistak?es. At last, could you please? give me some other sugges?tions on my transl?ation work? Thank you for your help with great respec?t!
Your faithf?ul studen?t,
Li Ping
作文七:《小学关于节日的英语作文五句话》8800字
小学英语五年级上册各单元作文范例及点评
My English Teacher
Miss Wang is my English teacher. She’s very pretty. She is
short and thin. She has two big eyes and a small mouth. Her hairs are long. She likes cats very much. And she likes singing and dancing, too. Her English is very good. We often play games in English classes. She is very kind. We all love her.
【要领点评】
这篇作文的题目是“我的英语老师”,是一篇介绍人物的作
文。小作者开门见山,直接点题,首先介绍了英语老师的姓
名,然后逐一介绍了她的外貌特征、喜好、英语水平、上课
特点以及师生情感等。
小朋友们在写作文时,要注意使用自己最熟悉的词[组],
以免写出一些错句子。写作时要注意意思连贯、语句通顺、
标点正确、书写清晰、规范等。
My Days of the week
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I’m a student and I am in Grade 5.I get up at six o’clock
every day. I have breakfast at half past six, and go to school at seven o’clock. I have classes from Monday to Friday. I have an English class on Friday. I have a PE class on Tuesday. I usually go shopping and watch TV on the weekend.
【要领点评】
这篇作文的题目是“我的一周”,小作者没有说一些空话,
而是从自己的亲身经历写起,叙述了自己一周七天的所作所
为,写得自然、流畅。
小朋友们写作文时要注意人称及谓语动词的变化,要依据
提示,结合自己的实际,写自己身边熟悉的事情。
My Favourite Food
Do you know what this is?Its colour is yellow. It’s long
and thin. It looks like a small boat. Guess! What is it?Oh, it is a banana. Do you know what that is? Guess again! Its colour is orange. It’s round. It looks like a small ball and a small lantern. Oh, it is an orange. I like them very much. I like ice-creams, too. Chocolates and candies are yummy. I like them very much.
How about you? What’s your favourite food?
【要领点评】
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My Favourite Food 是一篇很成功的文章,小作者并不是
简单地列举出自己最喜欢的每一种食物,而是有详有略地进
行介绍。整篇文章用词准确、语言流畅、没有语法错误。另
外,文章中出现了一些生词,可见小作者是用心查字典了。
I can help do housework
I am a girl. My name is Li Ling. I’m in Class Three,
Grade Five. I’mhelpful at home. I can water the flowers, empty the trash and sweep the floor. After meals, I can help my mother do the dishes. On Sunday, I can wash the clothes. What about you? Are you helpful, too?
【要领点评】
本篇作文的题目是“我可以帮助做家务”,作者主要叙述自
己在家帮助做的事情,介绍自己的名字,所在年级及在家能
做的家务,很详细,到位。
小朋友们在写作时,应尽量写一些亲自经历的事情,这样
会避免在作文时显得太空,因为只有自己经常做的事情印象
才会特别深刻。写作时还要注意大小写和时态。
In The Kitchen
This is the kitchen of my family. It’s big and nice. Look!
My mother is cooking in it. This is a microwave and that is a stove. There is a big table here. There are many things on it. What are these? They look yummy! Oh, they’re apples. And
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what are those? They are grapes.
【要领点评】
这篇作文的题目是“在厨房”里,作者根据自己家的厨房情
况。介绍厨房里有微波炉和电炉,有一张大桌子和桌子上的
物品等,以及妈妈在做饭,非常真实。
小朋友们,可以从观察自己身边的事、物写起,利用所学
的句子,描述身边熟悉的东西来训练习作。
My Village
My village is very beautiful. There are many houses in the village. Near the village, there is a forest. A small river is in front of the village. The water is very clean. We can see some fish in the river. Near the river, you can see a mountain. There are some flowers and trees on the mountain. I like my village. Wele to my village!
【要领点评】
本文以“我的村庄”为题描述了自己家乡的风景。介绍了村
庄的房屋、森林、河流及大山,使人看了这篇作文后确实感
觉到“我的村庄”的美丽。小朋友们在写作时,可仔细想一下
自己的村庄或所在城市的特点,尽量使用本单元学过的单词
或短语进行叙述。
小学英语五年级下册各单元作文范例及点评
My weekend
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There are two days on the weekend, Saturday and Sunday. On Saturday, I often go to my dancing class in the morning and do my homework in the afternoon, and I often help my mother do some housework. On Sunday, I always visit my grandparents in the morning and read books in the afternoon. After dinner, I often watch TV with my parents. We often have a good time.
【要领点评】
写法:这篇习作是按照时间顺序记叙周末的活动,记叙了
周六和周日的上午和下午分别做了哪些活动及对活动的感
受。即:周六上午:舞蹈课?下午:做作业和帮妈妈做清洁
?周日上午:看望祖父母?下午:阅读?晚上:看电视,与
父母交流?感受:高兴和愉快。我们还可以选取周六和周日
中的几个比较主要的活动来写,先说明什么时间在什么地方
由什么人做了什么事,有什么感受。再按照活动顺序把活动
内容写清楚,最后抒发一下对这次活动或这个周末的感想。
时态:这篇短文我们可以用三种时态来写: a.一般过去时
(主要描述你上个周末是怎样度过的);b.一般现在时(主要
描述你经常怎样度过周末);c.一般将来时(主要描述你要怎
样过周末)。这里我们来表述平时是如何过周末的,所以采
用一般现在时来写。
注意:活动的相关表达方法可采用旧知识,eg.(例)起
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床get up,和新知识,eg. Climb mountains去爬山中的un
很容易错写成nu。还要注意不要出现病句,eg. “I often watch
TV with my parents.”不要写成 “I often with my parents
watch TV .” 词量上控制在50 ~ 80 之间。
My Seasons
We have four seasons in a year. I can do many things in each season. In spr(转载于:.zaIdian.cOM 在点 网:小
学关于节日的英语作文五句话)ing, the weather is cool and
wind, I can fly kites when it’s wind. And I can go hiking
with my family when it’s sunny and cool. Summer is hot. I often go swimming. I can eat ice-cream. I can also wear my beautiful dresses. In fall I can eat tasty fruits. I can watch the leaves fall. Winter es, it’s often snowy in winter. We
can play with snow and make a snowman, skate and ski. And summer is my favourite season, because I can swim. I love all the seasons.
【要领点评】
写法:这篇短文是描述“我的四季”,在写法上,是根据春、
夏、秋、冬四季的更替来写的,先讲明每个季节的特征,之
后再写在这个季节中的主要活动或比较有代表性的活动。同
时讲一些自己的真实感受,最后阐述自己最喜欢的季节。在
实际的写作的时候我们还可以先写出自己喜爱的季节及主
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要的活动内容,之后再去讲其他几个季节,还可以多讲解一
下地域的季节特征和大自然中的其他景色,如:秋天的田地
里一片金黄,农民在收割等等,这样写出来的四季更贴近实
际。
时态:这篇习作讲的是“我的四季”,是比较惯常的一些行
为,所以我们最好采用一般现在时和情态动词结合活动的写
法。即:在什么季节,天气如何,我们可以做什么。
注意:在写作内容上,不可以像以往的内容那么简单,因
为有四个季节,所以要写明季节,季节天气,季节性活动,
活动的人,活动的感受等,要求句子顺序要正确,在写作中
还要注意关联词的使用,如用了“因为”,就不能用“所以”,
二者不可以同时出现。词量要控制在80个词以内。
My family
There are five people in my family. They are my grandma,
grandpa, dad, mom and I. Look! Grandma is watching TV.
Grandpa is reading a book. Dad is writing an e-mail. Mom is
cooking dinner. I am doing my homework. I love my family!
【要领点评】
写法:这篇习作介绍了自己家的家庭成员,以及此刻他们
正在干什么,表达了自己对家人的感情。
时态:由于本单元主要讲的是现在进行时态,所以建议采
用现在进行时态。
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句型:主语+be+动词的现在分词。
注意:本单元的重点是现在进行时态,注意在写句子时要
保持时态的完整性,即系动词和动词的ing缺一不可。
In the park
It is sunny today .My mother, my father and I are going to the park. We like the park very much. It is very big and beautiful .There are many trees and flowers in it. Look! An old man is reading a book carefully on the chair. Two boys are jumping on the ground. Their mothers are talking. Two birds are flying in the sky. The ducks are swimming in the river. They are very happy. What is the cat doing? Oh, it is running after a mouse.
【要领点评】
写法:这篇习作是用现在进行时描绘出公园里的人和动物
们正在进行的活动还运用了一般现在时叙述了公园美丽的
景色。
时态:这篇文章可以采用一般现在时和现在进行时两种时
态,由于本单元的语法项目是现在进行时,因此,描述的重
点要放在现在进行时态上。
句型:一般现在时:主语+谓语+其他
现在进行时:(1)What +be (am,is ,are)+主语+v.-ing+其
他?
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(2)主语+be(am,is ,are)+ v.-ing+其他。
A Field Trip
It is a nice day. Our class will have a field trip today. We are very excited. Look! Amy is watching insects. Peter is collecting leaves. They want to write a report. Mandy is catching butterflies in the woods. Tim and Bob are playing chess. Some students are having a piic. There is a lot of delicious food. Oh, who’s that over there? Miss White. What
is she doing? She is taking photos. We have a very good time.
【要领点评】
写法:这篇习作是按照郊游时的画面来描述的,记叙了同
学们分别在郊游中做了哪些活动及郊游的感受。
时态:这篇文章可以用一般过去时和现在进行时来写。由
于本单元主要讲的是现在进行时,所以,这里我们采用现在
进行时比较合适。
句型:××. is/are doing sth. She /He is doing sth. They’re
doing sth.
注意:活动的相关表述法采用新旧知识相结合去写。注意
时态的转换、描写感受时用一般现在时。
篇二:小学英语作文题目
一、请以My favorite festival 为题写一篇作文。要求语句
通顺,表达清楚。不少于6句话。
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可参照以下问题写作:1.What’s your festival? 2. When is it?
3. What do people do? 4. What do people eat?
参考节日:Spring Festival, mid-autumn Festival, Thanksgiving, Dragon Boat Festival, the Lantern Festival.
二、假如你是Sam,给你的笔友Laura写一封回信,介
绍你在中国的情况。注意书信格式,不少于7句话。
三、写一篇题目为“My Favourite Animal”的作文,
记住不少于50单词。
参考下列问题:
What’s your favourite animal?
Where does it live?
Does it like children?
What does it eat?
What does it like to do?
题目:Daming’s Weekends
用上所有的提示语,不少于50个单词。
提示词语:speak English, look at English books, sing English
songs, play puter games, write emails to friends, watch
TV, often, sometimes, always, never.
四、以My mother为题写一篇短文。可先描写妈妈的外
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貌、年龄、爱好等特征,在就某一重要特征进行详细叙述,使人物形象更加生动。
五、以My Classroom为题写一篇小作文,向你的爸爸妈妈介绍一下你的教室。
要求:条理清楚,意思连贯,用词得当,语法正确,书写规范。50字左右。
六、给你的亲戚或朋友写一封e-mail,告诉他/她上个星期你干什么了,这个星期天打算干什么事情。
要求:
(1). 条理清楚,意思连贯,用词得当,语法正确,书写规范,注意时态。
(2).单词在50个左右。
七、以My family为题写一篇作文,谈谈自己家庭成员的过去和现在的情况。
八、请以“My likes and dislikes” 为题,根据自己喜欢或不喜欢的食物或运动 活动写一篇不少于50词的作文,文中必须包括以下关键词;a lot, very much , a little , not… at all。
篇三:英语日记5句话
英语日记5句话
today my friend and I to the zoo.We see many
animals.They are very lovely。There are a lot of flowers,too. We see very relaxed~今天我和我的朋友去公园。我们看见
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许多动物。他们非常可爱。这儿也有许多花。我们看到非常
放松~
Sunday, January,15th,2012
2012年,1月15日
It is very important day today, because its my dogs birthday. 今天对于我来说是很重要的一天,因为今天是我
的狗狗的生日。
I bought a big birthday cake for him.
我为他买了一个大蛋糕。
But he is not very happy, do you know why?
但是他不是很开心,你知道为什么吗,
Well, because the cake was eaten by we two.
哈哈,因为蛋糕被我们吃掉了~
But still, happy birthday to my dog!
但是依然祝狗狗生日快乐~
篇四:小学英语作文-Happy Holiday 节日快乐
小学英语作文:Happy Holiday 节日快乐
May Day is ing. Im so happy because my father and my mother take me to Wu Quan Park this holiday.
In the park, I see many trees and beautiful flowers. There are many children and many happy playing games, too.
My parents take me to the zoo. There are lions, tigers,
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eagles, bears, deer, monkeys, and so on. I like the monkeys best because they are very clever and they make us laugh. How lovely they are!
I have a good time that day. What a beautiful and happy holiday!
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作文八:《一、英语写作(五句话作文)》2000字
一、基础写作(五句话作文)
写人作文
常用表达:
(1) 出生及童年
The son/girl of a … family 来自于一个……样家庭的男孩/女孩 With th help of his /her parents 在他/她的父母和帮助下
Her/his father is very strict with she/he 他/她的父亲对他/她十分严格
When he/she was a small boy/girl 当他/她是一个小男孩/女孩时…… As a child 作为一个孩子
During one’s childhood 在某人的童年
Spent one’s childhood in … 在……度过童年
Live a happy/hard life 过着开心/艰苦的生活
(2) 教育
Graduate from… 从……毕业
When at college ,he majored in … 在大学时,他主修…… Receive a … degree 得到……学位证书
Go abroad for further studies 出国深造
(3) 主要事迹
Devote one’s lifetime to … 献身于
Do research on/into … 做关于……的研究
Try one’s best to do sth. 尽力做某事
Encourage sb.to do sth 鼓励某人做某事
Fight for… 为……而奋斗
Give up one’s life for sb/sth 为某人/某事献出生命
Set a new record of … 创造新记录
Work so hard as to improve … 努力工作/学习来提高……
Win a prize in … petition 在……比赛中赢得奖项
(4) 评价
One of the best/most important /most impressive /most moving … 最好的/最重要的/印象最深的/最感人的……
Set sb a good example 为某人树立了好榜样
Sing sb’s praises
Be respected by everyone 被每个人尊重
Speak/think highly of …高度评价……
二、读写综合
(1)、概括文章要点时常用的格式:
1. The deals with/discusses/analyzes /strongly emphasizes
2. This not only describes…but also suggests…
3. This cimpares…and summarizes key findings…
4. This gives an account of/provides an analysis of/provides a method of …
5. This reports the last imformation on …
6. The problem of sth. is discussed …
7. This shows/tells us that …
8. The author finds it necessary to …
9. The author holds the idea that …,giving it an example of sb. who… 10. The author strongly emphasizes the benefits of getting up early such as …
(2)、常用过渡句式:
1.I do agree with the author …
2. In some way, I agree with … but …
3. This point sounds right,but …
4. However,I think …
5. I definitrly believe …
6. In my opinion …
7. Personally,I feel that …
8. As far as I am concerned …
9. I can’t agree more with … Such cases are often seen in our life
10. Attitudes towards … are various
11. As for me, I am in favor of the … idea.
12. People’s opinions on … vary from persion to persion.
(3)、列举例证常用句式
(4)、总结点题常用句式
作文九:《高二英语五句话作文专题》3400字
作文专题
一、基础讲解
写作能力较差首先表现在词汇贫乏、句子语法错误和结构错误、中式表达等。
做到词汇准确,语法无误,句子结构准确,表因此首先要在基础训练上下功夫,
达无误,最好能培养自己一句多译的能力,进行不同词汇和句式结构的表达训练。
因此,可以在表达多样化上有所提升,突破单一句式,使文章生动活泼、结
构紧凑。常用以下表达方式:
1. 使用非谓语动词形式
用非谓语动词可以使句子简洁。例如:
We were surrounded by a variety of buildings. We found ourselves deeply absorbed in the sight. After the visit, we left the park and we felt joyful. ?Surrounded by a variety of buildings, we found ourselves deeply absorbed in the sight. After the visit, we left the park feeling joyful.
2. 使用with的复合结构
with的复合结构, 也就是独立主格结构,常作伴随状语以增加被描绘内容的生动
性,使文章读起来更简洁明了。
例如:
I could not go on studying because there was so much noise troubling me. ?I could not go on studying with so much noise troubling me.)
3. 使用复合句
复合句可以把结构松散的句子连接起来,从而使表达显得高级。例如:
? Occasions are quite rare when I have the time to spend a day with my kids. ? It is our belief that improvements in environment will contribute to the development of our society.
? Additionally, as the data shows, there are roughly 350 million smokers in China, 75% of which are males while 25% are females. What amazes us is that around 540 million people are affected by second hand smoke.
4. 使用倒装句, 强调句, 虚拟语气等
使用这些句式可使文章化平淡为生动,加强语气,使评卷老师感受到作者的强烈
情感。
He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper. ?It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened. (强调句)
?Not until he had read the news in the newspaper did he know what had happened. (倒装句)
综合使用以上句式, 长短句结合,可以增强句子的连贯性和表现力。
要写出好的文章,词句的积累非常重要。恰当地运用一些常用的习惯表达和典型句式既能有效地减少文章中的病句,又能给文章添彩。对课文中出现的佳句,同学们可以进行摘录。笔者创编了下面的几个句子,可以先口头后书面练习: ? 帮助他学习数学, 对我来说也是一个显摆自己的机会。
Here was a chance for me to distinguish myself by helping him learn maths.
(练习表达distinguish oneself )
? 虽然做好了失败的准备,我仍然感到伤心并决定抓住每一分钟更加努力提高我的英语。
Prepared for the failure, I still felt upset and decided to work even harder to seize
every minute to improve my English. (练习过去分词作状语;表达seize every minute to do sth. )
? 被她的耐心所感动,我对自己的粗鲁行为感到尴尬并决定学做有耐心的人,这有助于我与同学、朋友和父母很好地相处。
Moved by her patience, I felt embarrassed for my rude behavior and decided to learn
to be a patient person, which helps me get along well with my classmates, my friends
and my parents.
(练习过去分词作状语;定语从句的用法)
? 只有把竞争和合作相联合,才能有助于我们达到目标并满足自身需求。 Only when petition bines with cooperation can it help in obtaining our goals
and satisfying our needs.
(练习倒装句)
这样,一些好词、好的表达、好的句式,经过反复的语言实践后,已经“内化”成自己的东西,用时自然“轻车熟路”。
在日常英语写作中,最大的问题是词汇量不足,想表达某种意思,但“茶壶倒饺子”,表达不出来,大脑一片空白,绞尽脑汁拼命“挤出”几个单词和几个简单的句子,还有可能词不达意或表达不得体,这与平时不重视词汇积累有关。
作为高二的学生,虽然已经积累了一定的词汇,但还是感觉到平时记的词到了写作文的时候记不起来,不会用。这主要是因为平时记的一些单词,可能是孤立地记的,没有运用,还没有“内化”成自己随时可用的“有效词汇”。
二、五句话作文写作步骤
第一步:审题,明确中心内容,有计划地进行信息的整合
第二步:把要用的短语、语法知识和句型先简单写出来
第三步:按照计划进行写作(注意书写要整洁)
步:检查(单词、语法等有错漏的地方) 第四
三、实战演练
高二英语五句话作文:公共场所禁烟 内容:公共场所禁烟
实施时间:2011年1月1日起
实施范围:全国
目标:所有室内公共场所
无烟措施:张贴禁烟
相关数据:
1)吸烟人数:约三亿
2)分布:男性75, 女性25,
3)受二手烟影响人数:约54亿 4)因二手烟死亡人数:超过10万/年
【写作内容】请根据以上内容用五句话给学校英语墙报写一篇短文,内容包括:1.禁烟决定的内容及实施的时间范围 2.目标和措施 3.相关数据
The Non-Smoking Act es into effect on January 1st, 2011, and covers everywhere in the country. It targets all indoor public places, and signs prohitbiting smoking will be put up. This act is out of the concern for public health. Statistics show that the smoking population is about 300 million, but the population affected by second-hand smoking is 540 million 75 percent of the smokers are male, and the people who die of second-hand smoking exceeds 100 thousand people.
作文十:《五句话作文的句子整合技巧》2200字
五句话作文的句子整合技巧
高考英语基础写作主要考查考生运用语言结构和基本句型,对表达内容进行加工、整合的能力。考生如果没有一定的语言驾驭技巧,要用五句话完整地表达众多繁杂的内容也绝非一件容易的事。下面以2011年广州一模的基础写作为例来谈谈写作的句子整合技巧。
原题:学校英语论坛针对目前城市交通拥堵、污染严重的问题进行了“治堵方案大家谈”的讨论。以下是讨论概要。
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1.存在的问题;
3) The air is seriously polluted.
4) Some solutions are put forward./Everyone is encouraged to offer suggestions.
5) Car owners could reduce the use of private cars.
6) They could share their cars with their friends and workmates.
7) The government should do something to improve the public transport system.
8) The government should build more green lanes.
9) The public transport system should be more convenient for citizens.
10) People should be encouraged to use their bicycles.
11) Money, time and energy will be saved.
12) The measures are friendly to the environment.
其中,1) —3) 涉及存在的问题,4) —10) 表达解决的方案,最后两点是方案的好处。接下来,我们来运用自己的语言知识,将相关的信息点整合起来。
一、 运用短语来整合信息
利用短语是合并信息,使句子简洁明了的有效方法。
1. 运用名词短语 (名词短语,整合信息点②、③)
2. 运用介词短语
People are more aware of the fact that increasing numbers of private cars has given rise to 介词短语充当定语,整合信息点②、③)
3. 运用非谓语短语 (动词不定式短语,整合信息点⑨) (动名词短语作主语和动词不定式短语作定语,整合信息点⑤、⑧、⑩)
There is a widespread concern over environmental pollution and traffic jams 过去分词短语作定语,整合信息点②) 现在分词短语作状语,整合信息点⑤)
4. 运用with 的复合宾语结构或独立主格结构
Hopefully, our city will definitely be an environment-friendly place to live in. (with的复合宾语结构,整合信息点⑥)
5. 运用词语搭配
三、 利用复合句来整合信息
复合句可以整合众多相关信息,同时也是语言功底的表现。
1. 运用名词性从句
运用同位语从句,整合信息点⑤、⑥)
2. 运用定语从句
运用定语从句,整合信息点②、③)
3. 运用状语从句
people to travel. (运用条件状语从句,整合信息点⑦)
当然,在实际写作中,我们要灵活、综合运用,使句子长短有致,简洁明了,同时使用关联词,使句与句之间更连贯流畅。我们可以将以上内容整合成五句话:
Recently, the issue of traffic jams and air pollution caused by private cars has been brought to the concern of all people, especially us students, who came up with some practical suggestions in a discussion. (信息点①——④) In our opinion, citizens could reduce the use of private cars
by sharing with their friends and workmates. (信息点⑤——⑥)Besides, what really matters is that the government improves the public transport system to make it more convenient for people to travel. (信息点⑦、⑨)Meanwhile, the government should have more green lanes built to encourage cycling. (信息点⑧、⑩)By taking the above measures, not only can we save money, time and energy but also we can contribute to a city with better environment.(信息点?——?)