作文一:《写关于美食的作文改错,-,百度》9000字
写关于美食的作文改错,-,百度
篇一:改错,作文
短文改错
I was recent told that listening to loud music is graduallymaking people hard of hearing. I'm sure it has already been happened to my neighbor. For years she has turned a deafear to my requests to turn her radio down. When she gave a party she isn't have to invite the rest of the street. Everyone can dance in her music in his own room. Now a scientist has discovered a certain electronic sounds have strange effects on rats. He declares they break down; almost paralyze(瘫) with legs trembled. Then it
is simply a matter of throwing themout by their tail. I wonder if the same thing will happen tomy neighbor some day.书面表达
Can money buy happiness? 有人认为金钱是幸福,有人认为金
钱不能买到很多珍贵的东西,比如时间和友情。作为高中生的你
一定有自己的理解。请认真思考这句话,然后按要求用英语写一
篇短文。
内容要求: 1. 你的观点; 2. 议论说明; 3. 恰当的结尾。
词数:120左右
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短文改错:
1. recent?recently 2.去掉been 3.?
4. gave?gives 5. isn't?doesn't 6. 第一个in?to 7. 去
掉a
8. with后加their
9. trembled?trembling 10.tail?tails
书面表达
Can money buy happiness? Different people have different opinions.It is true that with enough money one can buy all the things one wants, and live a life of fort and security. However, it is equally true that lack of money causes great distress. It is a mon view that "money is the root of all evil.The pursuit of
money drives many people to cheat and steal. In some places there is nothing that cannot be bought with money, resulting in corrupt societies where everybody is miserable.Money does not necessarily mean happiness. It all depends on how it is used. If we make honest and sensible use of money, it can be a stepping-stone to happiness. Although money cannot buy happiness, it can make happiness possible if it is employed sensibly.
篇二:关于美食的作文:吃货的世界
关于美食的作文:吃货的世界
关于美食的作文:吃货的世界
我是一名资深吃货,不管走到哪里,都会迫不及待的品尝当地
美食。这次暑假我们来张掖之前,我便在网上查足了资料。听说
张掖的物产资源十分丰富,被世人赞誉为“金张掖”。我想,物产
这么丰富的地方,肯定会有很多美食,这让我十分期待这次张掖
之行。
一大早,我们便来到张掖,长途车程,已让我饥肠辘辘。在当
地人热情的推荐下,我们便直奔大佛寺附近的一家卖牛肉小饭的
小店。一进店门,一口大锅便呈现在面前,一股香飘飘的牛肉汤
味,让我更饿了。排了好久的队终于到我了。只见大师傅深深的
从锅底舀了一勺,里面的东西可真不少,有晶莹剔透的粉皮儿、
颗颗饱满的面粒儿、喷香的牛肉、豆腐等等。舀满之后,再撒上
香菜、葱花,一碗香喷喷的牛肉小饭便摆在我面前。我迫不及待
的尝了一大口,“太好吃了”我大喊道。面粒虽然很小但是很有咬劲,一大碗“牛肉小饭”三两下就被我消灭了,连平时不好好吃饭的妈妈也赞不绝口。陪同我们的张叔叔说,牛肉小饭因其面块小、肉片小、豆腐小、菜丁小,以小料做成而得名。小饭所用辅料为当地产红豆、粉皮和牛肉。营养丰富,价格非常实惠,只有5元一碗~真是早餐绝佳之选啊。
中午,我们来到了张掖著名的“苗氏卷子鸡”。我们要了一个小份的“卷子鸡”。上来之后,让我十分惊讶,居然是一个非常大的盘子,里面是满满的鸡肉和面卷子。让人不由得赞叹张掖人的憨厚实在。鸡肉块儿是金黄色的,和面卷子夹在一起十分诱人。我尝了一口,十分好吃。面卷充分吸收了鸡肉油脂的香味,使鸡肉肥而不腻,面卷酱香浓郁。真是面食与菜肴的经典融合。
晚上,我们来到了特色小吃街。这里各种小吃应有尽有,各路食客云集,好不热闹。而我们是奔着张掖的名小吃——“炒拨拉”而来的。在一块不大的铁板上,放上羊心、肝、肺、肠等羊杂,加上动物油脂和各种调料,师傅不断的来回拨拉,再适时的加大火力,爆炒起来,香味迅速扑鼻而来。吃起来麻辣适度,肥而不腻,美味可口。
张掖盛产面粉,于是勤劳聪明的张掖人就把面做成各种样子。“搓鱼子”便是其中的代表,它的形状中间粗、两头细,长约一寸,非常像两头尖尖的小鱼,因此而得名。把它炒出来或烩出来都很好吃。吃起来好像是一条条小鱼在自己的嘴里游动。喜欢吃
面的爸爸就一连吃了几顿各种“搓鱼子”。
在张掖的几天里,我们还品尝了张掖的炒炮仗、鱼儿粉、粉皮、
面筋、粳粉、臊面、油糕、杏皮水等等很多风味小吃,个个好吃,
样样一绝,让人赞不绝口,欲罢不能。
张掖真是一个美食天堂。
篇三:作文改错
错文:A Visit to Beijing Zoo
Last Sunday morning, I and my friend go to visit the Beijing Zoo. We t by bike. It take us about half a hour to get there. When we get to there, it is already crowded with people. There was a lot of foreign visitors, too. It is said that the Beijing Zoo is largest in Asia and one of the largest in the world. There are hundred of different kinds of animals. It will take a whole day to see all the animals there. So we decided to saw some of the most interesting ones. We saw the elephants first and then the monkeys. Finally we go to see our favourite "friends"--the giant pandas. We w(本文来自:
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delighted to see them waving to us. We really have a wonderful time in the zoo.
正文: A Visit to Beijing Zoo
Last Sunday morning, my friend and I t to visit the Beijing Zoo. We t by bike. It took us about half an hour to get there. When
we got there, it was already crowded with people. There were a lot of foreign visitors, too. It is said that the Beijing Zoo is the largest in Asia and one of the largest in the world. There are hundreds of different kinds of animals. It would take a whole day to see all the animals there. So we decided to see some of the most interesting ones. We saw the elephants first and then the monkeys. Finally we t to see our favourite "friends"--the giant pandas. We were delighted to see them waving to us. We really had a wonderful time in the zoo.
错文: National Day
National Day is ing soon, and I has a plan on that day. Firstly, I needs to plete all my homeworks. After that, I is going to invite my friends to e to my house and playing the games. Secondly, I am going to cook some delicious food to my family. Lastly, my family members is going to my cousin's birthday party. I think the National day is a wonderful day!
正文: National Day
National Day is ing soon, and I have a plan on that day. Firstly, I need to plete all my homeworks. After that, I am going to invite my friends to e to my house and play the games. Secondly, I am going to cook some delicious food for my family. Lastly, my family members are going to my cousin's birthday party. I
think the National day will be a wonderful day!
错文:
My mother is tallest than my father.I'm heavyer than my brother.We like both sports, although he is more athletic(擅长运动
的,活跃的) than me. He is more outgoinger,and I'm very
quieter.I think I'm smarter than his. He run faster than me do . However We both enjoy go to parties. We like to do same things.
错文:There are many subjects at school,like Chinese math English science history and so on.I think the math is more difficult than Chinese.And English is more popular than Chinese.So I like English very much.science is also good.But I think history is more interesting than science.
My mother is taller than my father.I'm heavier than my brother.We both like sports,although(虽然) he is more athletic(擅
长运动的,活跃的) than me. He is more outgoing(外向的,友好
的),and I'm quieter.I think I'm smarter than him. However(然而)We both enjoy(喜欢)going to parties.(聚会)We like
to do the same(相同的) things.2.My subject
正文:There are many subjects at school,like Chinese math English science history and so on.I think the math is more difficult than Chinese.And English is more popular than Chinese.So I like English very much.science is also good.But I think history is more
interesting than science.
错文:
Hello everyone! My name is Wu Cao .How time fly! It was two years since I e to the high school. And I became taller and taller than before. Because of my hard study, I think that I'm smart than before. I made friends with my classmates ,so I bee more and more popular in my class. Two years ago, I am a very shy boy ,but now I was more outgoing, because I often played basketball or soccer with schoolmates and I believe our friendship is forever. I also believe I am a better student than others because I usually help someone who is poor .
正文:
Hello everyone! My name is XXX .How time flies! It was two years since I came to the high school. And I bee taller and taller than before. Because of my hard studying, I think that i'm smarter than before. I make friends with my classmates ,so i bee more and more popular in my class. Two years ago, i was a very shy boy(Girl) ,but now i'm more outgoing, because I often play basketball or soccer with schoolmates and i believe our friendship will be forever. I also believe i am a better student than others because i usually help someone who is poor .
作文二:《改错卷子乌鲁木齐2010》2100字
乌鲁木齐2010—2?011学年第二学期四?年级期末考试 一、看?谁算得对
1.直接写?出答案:
2.5+0?.9= ?4.7-2.8= ? 3-1.4?= 7.?8+1.6= ? 1-0.04= ? 7.3×1?000= 6?30?90= ? 6-0.37= 3?00×18= ? 100+100×0?= 60×0?= 2.7?3+0.27= 4.?3?1000= ? 0.01×10?0=
2.计算下面各?题,怎样简便就怎样计?算:
88×125 ? 13?5+39+65+11? (75+?240)?(20-5?)
5400?4??25 ? 483.4-(39?.5+98.8) ? 9.14-1.4?3-4.57
二?、填一填
1.一个小?数,百位和百分位上都?是5,其他各位都是0?,这个数写作( ? ? ),读作( ? ? )。 2. 9?.0968精确到十分?位约是( ? ),保留两位小数约?是( )?,保留整数约是( ? )。?
3.把25缩小到它?的( )是0?.025,把7.8的?小数点向右
? ? ( )
?移动两位是( ? )。
4.? 306900四舍?五入到“万”位约是(? ),把?687430000该?成用“亿”作单位的数?是( ? )。
5. 13×?5×2=13×(5×?2)=13×10=1?30,这里运用了( ? )律。
?6.在?填上“,”、?“,”或“=”。
? 4吨50公斤?4.?5吨 25?×100-1?25×?99
45厘米??0.45米 ? 6.08?6.?8
7.小红、小青和?小兰三个小朋友同时买?了同样的一枝铅笔,三?天后小红用去2.03?厘米,小青用去2.4?5厘米,小兰用去1.?9厘米,他们三人中(? )剩?下的铅笔最长。 8.?一个两位小数取近似值?后是3.8,这个数最?大是( )?,最小是( ? )。
9.一?根木料锯成3段要8分?钟。如果每锯一段所用?的时间相同,那么锯成?7段需要花( ? )分钟。
?10.一个等腰直角三?角形,三个角的度数分?别是( ?)、( ? )和( ? )。
11. ?0.?9,0.7中,??里最大能填( ? )。 1?2.用4、1、2和小?数点组成的最大的小数?是( ?),最小的小数是( ? ),?它们的和是( ? ),差是?( ? )。
三、判断?下面个题,对的画“??”错的画“×”。 1?.一个三角形中最多有?3个锐角。( ? )
2.小数都比整?数小。( )?
3. 2.40米?和2.4米大小相等,?计数单位也相等。( ? ) 4.在一?个小数的末尾填上三个?“0”,这个小数就扩?大了它的1000倍。?( )
5?. 0.6和0.8?之间只有一个小数0.?7.( )? 四、选一选。
1.?直角三角形有( ? )高。
A.? 1条 B.2?条 C.3条? D.4条
2?.下面( )?组小棒不能拼成一个三?角形。
A.3、?4、5 B?.3、3、5 ? C.2、6、8 3?.三角形的一个顶点到?对边的( ?)是三角形的高。
A?.直线 ? B.线段 ? C.垂直线段 ?4.把一个小数的小数?点先向右移动一位,再?向左移动两位,这个小?数( ?)。
A扩大10倍 ? B.缩小10 C.倍?缩小10?0倍 5.25×13?×4=13×(25×?4)=1300,这里?运用了( )?。
A.乘法交换律 ? B.乘法结合律 ? C.乘法交换律和结?合律
五、请你?画一画。
1.把右图?分成一个直角三角形和?一个长方形。
六?、解决问题。
1.王?老师买了9支钢笔和9?支圆珠笔,钢笔共用去?270元,圆珠笔共用?去45元。每支钢笔比?圆珠笔贵多少元,
?
2.亮亮看一本28?0页德故事书,用了7?天时间看完,前3天共?看了120页,后4天?平均每天看了多少页,?
3.修一条长1?500米的路,已经修?了3天,平均每天修2?40米,还剩多少米没?有修,
4.地?球表面积是5.1亿平?方千米,其中陆地面积?是1.49亿平方千米?。海洋面积比陆地面积?多多少亿千米,
?5.育才书店二月-十?月图书销售变化情况统?计图 (1)从图中可?知,( )销售量最?高,是( )本;(? )的销售量最低,?是( )本。
(2?)从几月到几月的销售?量持续上升,
?6.李大爷家有一块菜?地,如右图,这块地的?面积有多少平方米,?
作文三:《关于英语专八的一点考经(听力、改错、作文、翻译)》9700字
关于英语专八的一点考经(听力、改错、作文、翻译)
关于英语专八的一点考经(听力、改错、作文、翻译) 来源: 谢秦川的日志
首先声明一下,这些所谓的考经基本上都是自己在很短的复习时间内收集和总结出来的,不是什么高端货,但应该还算蛮适合英语成绩中等的学生的。我的专八成绩是79分,貌似有点可惜,但其实我已经很知足了,因为英语一直都是我的弱项,而且大学四年也没好好学过,作为上外新闻系的学生,到毕业的时候也没有养成阅读NYT之类外刊的习惯。
不过本人的长处是考试的技巧比较好,善于投机取巧和临场装逼。虽然不是什么考试都可以靠考前突击拿到高分的,但只要求及格的话,还是可以通过技巧的学习来“开外挂”的。 当然,投机取巧也是踏踏实实的投机取巧。比如在复习人文常识的时候,我选了一本参考书,没有去买什么语言学的名著,没有去查阅wikipedia,花了一个礼拜,在医院和家里(老爸生病)把那本书的讲解部分断断续续背出来了,就这么去考试,发现十道单选都在自己的复习范围之内。我绝不敢说自己对语言学、欧美文学、英语国家常识有深刻了解,甚至连皮毛都不会,但这次考试的分数我拿到了。
如果我的经历能够引起你的小小的共鸣,我想这些考经就是无用的了,你完全可以根据自己的经验总结出最好的、最适合自己的版本。
英语专业八级听力应试技巧
Mini Lecture
·享受过程,集中精力
最好的心态莫过于享受这个过程。在平时的训练中就不断挑战自己集中注意力的极限,培养抗干扰能力和调整能力。
·听记为主,笔记为辅
争取做到一心两用,做笔记的时候耳朵不能休息;对于那些大量罗列又细枝末节的信息,记个首字母甚至不留笔记都可以,关键是听清楚,记在心里。
·听懂句子,抓住实词
做这个部分的听力时要以句子为单位去听,在笔记中体现出来的应该是实词,即传达句子中心意思的名词、动词、形容词。
·紧跟提示词,笔记有条理
一般来说材料都会比较有条理,因此做笔记的时候宜采用非线性的框架化笔记,体现出明显的层次结构,有利于回忆和答题。这就要求我们对一些带有提示性的语料特别敏感,主要包括以下几类:1.解释性、态度性插入语;2.祈使句;3.疑问句;4.逻辑关联词。
·高度重视首尾部分
这两个部分出题的概率应该在90%以上了吧,通过记下开头部分的主题句拿分是最容易的,而结尾部分的句子也是常考的地方,因为注意力分散导致没有听到是很可惜的。
·填写要细心
很多人都会因为大小写、单复数、时态错误之类低级错误的丢分,因此一定要谨慎。
Conversation & News Report
·预先读题,拎出考点
这个当然地球人都知道了,但是还是需要强调一下读题的策略和效率问题。如果时间充裕,可以把这个题目读完,反之则迅速浏览题干,暂时抛开选项。我个人的习惯是听到题目的introduction部分时如果没有读完所有题目,那么剩下的部分着重看题干就行了。读题的好处在于将被动的“听”转变为主动的“听”,为了使这个过程更主动,读题的时候就要拎出考点,建议用铅笔勾画或者标注一下。常见考点:1.观点、态度;2.目的、起因、过程、结果、影响;3.优点和缺点;4.身份、职业。
·对话听力和新闻听力的区别
前者重点考察整体理解,后者重点考察信息收集。在做对话听力的时候,我们可以保持一定的距离感,以句子为单位,冷静地去听其内在的意思,这样一来,即使面对一些需要“二次加工”的题目(加减乘除、同意转化等),也会从容很多。新闻听力的时间较短,但是我们最好亢奋一点,扣住时间、地点、数字等细节去听。另外,根据新闻的倒金字塔原则,大家会发现听懂新闻的导语是多么重要,经常能够直接拿分。
·细心始终很重要
做了这么多年的英语题,我不知道在“NOT/EXCEPT”上面载了多少跟头……可能还有一些更隐蔽的陷阱在等着你,总之,小心为妙,安全第一。
英语专八改错解题思路
1. 1. 宏观层面分析
(1) 句子结构(理顺整个句子的结构,必要时检索上下文)
(2) 逻辑关系(关联词选择:并列、递进、因果、转折、假设、让步等)
(3) 时态和语态(完成时和虚拟语气是考查重点)
1. 2. 微观层面分析
(1) 缺漏(介词、代词、引导词)
(2) 冗余(两个主语、同义重复)
(3) 误用(词性、分词、正反义、主被动、形容词和副词级别)
(4) 一致性(名词单复数、主谓一致、先行词)
(5) 词义与固定搭配
1. 3. 注意事项
(1) 即使按照语感很快找到了疑似错误,也要坚持读完全句再做判断,可能会有新的发现。过于相信第一感觉而带来的失分是划不来的。
(2) 分两次改比较合理,因为毕竟只有少数人能够在第一遍看材料的时候就找出所有的错误,尽管这些错误不见得隐藏得多深。
(3) 常考题型,高度警惕。
1. 冠词:the变a, a变the,补the补a,删a删the,每年都玩的把戏。
2. 单复数:无非是his变their之类的,关键是细心。
3. 近义词:例如distinct和distinctive,move和movement,interest和interests…
4. 反义词:尤其看到dis, un, im,in,non之类的,更要琢磨一下。
5. 关联词:几乎是保留节目,and, but, however, though, moreover, therefore…
6. 非谓语动词:见了ing想ed,见了ed想ing, 就是这么贱。
7. 形容词比较级:多半是把原形改为比较级。考的频率也蛮高的。
8. 虚拟语气:注意一下还是比较容易看出来的,多长个心眼儿吧。
9. It:有时要加,有时要删,有时要变itself,总之多盯“它”几眼。
10. 动词词组:其实主要是介词的问题,这个没办法临时抱佛脚,要靠积累。
英语专八作文备考材料
一.结构
(共25句,长短句结合,平均长度控制在15-20字;注意内部衔接)
二.特殊句型
·强调句
·非谓语动词、独立主格
·倒装句
·介词短语
三.通用句式
·开头
In recent years, we have witnessed a favorable/an unfavorable social phenomenon that… With the approaching of…
Faced with the question whether…
This question evoked various responses from experts, as well as the general public. …has aroused public concern and arguments among people.
…which is applicable to every aspect of our life.
…presents a situation that is probably easy for many people to relate to: … ·转折
But the view that…is ridiculous.
Others think otherwise.
Though…there are some aspects to improve.
It only tells half of the truth. The whole story is that…
·引入
There are three possible reasons to account for this phenomenon.
Many factors contribute to this issue.
Opinions on this problem vary from person to person.
·分类
First of all / Further more
To begin with / What’s more / In the third place
On the one hand / On the other hand
First and foremost / In the second place / Last but not least
·议论
It’s beneficial to the individuals and the country as whole.
…is none of other people’s business.
In my opinion / in my regard / As far as I’m concerned,
A is to B what C is to D. / …, just as…
The golden rule for…
We gives due weight to…, but we ignore the fact that…/fail to realize that… Many people are under the illusion that…
Just as the saying goes, “…”
Take…for example,
As a consequence,
In this sense / In terms of / When it es to / With regard to…
A far outweighs B.
…should be directed in the right direction, otherwise…
·总结
To sum up, / Generally speaking, / All in all,
Take all these factors into consideration, we may reasonably draw a conclusion that…
Weighing the pros and the cons of such a new trend, we can naturally arrive at a conclusion that…
From what have been discussed, we can safely arrive at the conclusion that… ·统计
A recent survey indicates that…
As is apparently betrayed in the chart,
…climb / rocket / plunge / fall to…
With an average increase rate of 10%
四.名言和谚语精选
Knowledge is power. (Francis Bacon 培根)
Knowledge is the food of the soul. (Plato 柏拉图)
A little learning is a dangerous thing. (Alexander Pope 蒲柏)
Education is not the filling of a pail, but the lighting of a fire. (William Yeats 叶芝) The value of a man should be seen in what he gives and not in what he is able to receive. (Albert Einstein 爱因斯坦)
He is the happiest, be he is King or peasant, who finds peace in his home. (J. W. Goethe 歌德)
Prevention is better than cure. (Charles Dickens 狄更斯)
Courage is the ladder on which all the other virtues mount. (Clare Luce 卢斯,美国剧作家)
Love is the only sane and satisfactory answer to the problem of human existence. (Erich Fromm 弗洛姆)
Living without an aim is like sailing without a pass. (Alexandre Dumas 大仲马) The only limit to our realization of tomorrow is our doubts of today. (Franklin Roosevelt 罗斯福)
A man is not old as long as he is seeking something. (J. Barrymore 巴里摩尔,美国演员)
Necessity is the mother of invention. (Plato 柏拉图)
Punishment is justice for the unjust. (Augustine 奥古斯丁,英国作家)
Discontent is the first step in progress of a man or a nation. (Oscar Wild 王尔德) Adversity reveals genius; fortune conceals it. (Horace 贺拉斯,古罗马诗人)
The Chinese word for crisis is divided into two characters, one meaning danger and the other meaning opportunity. (Burejer 布莱杰,英国作家)
Although the world is full of suffering, it is full also of the overing of it. (Helen Keller 海伦凯勒)
People who cannot find time for recreation are obliged sooner or later to find time for illness. (J. Wanamaker 沃纳梅克)
Self-trust is the first secret of success. (R. Emerson 爱默生)
If winter es, can spring be far behind? (P. B. Shelley 雪莱)
Where there is a will, there is a way. (Thomas Edison 爱迪生)
The first wealth is health. ( Ralph Waldo Emerson 爱默生)
Most folks are about as happy as they make up their minds to be. (Abraham Lincoln 林肯)
Time is money. (Benjamin Franklin 本杰明·富兰克林)
Unpolished pearls never shine. 玉不琢不成器。
Life is but a span. 人生苦短。
Nothing in the world is difficult for one who sets his mind to it. 世上无难事,只怕有心人。
Circumstances are the rulers of the weak, instruments of the wise. 弱者屈于环境,强者利用环境。
A fall into a pit, a gain in your wit. 吃一堑,长一智。
Adversity leads to prosperity. 穷则思变。
Every coin has its two sides. 有利有弊。
Think twice before we leap. 三思而后行。
No garden without weeds. 没有花园无杂草。
No sweet without sweat. 苦尽甘来。No sweat, no sweet.
Actions speak louder than words. 事实胜于雄辩。
A young idler, an old beggar. 少壮不努力,老大徒伤悲。
Constant dropping wears the stone. 滴水穿石。
Every profession produces its own best. 行行出状元。
Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧。
Diligence redeems stupidity. 勤能补拙。
Each man is the architect of his own fate. 每个人都是他自己命运的建筑师。 Birds of a feather flock together. 物以类聚,人以群分。
More haste, less speed. 欲速则不达。
五.词汇:同义词、近义词替换
解决:Solve, deal with, cope with, handle, resolve, address, tackle
损害:Damage, hurt, injure, harm, impair, undermine, jeopardize
给与:Give, offer, render, impart, provide, supply, afford
培养::Develop, cultivate, foster
优势:Advantage, merit, virtue, benefit, upside, strength
缺陷:Disadvantage, demerit, drawback, downside, weakness
使迷惑:Puzzle, bewilder, perplex, baffle
重要的:Key, crucial, critical, important, significant, vital, substantial, indispensable, imperative
认为:Think, believe, insist, maintain, assert, conclude, deem, hold, argue, be convin
ced, be firmly convinced, be fully convinced
保护:Protect, conserve, preserve
确保:Assure, ensure, guarantee, pledge
有害的:Bad, baneful evil, harmful, detrimental
要求 :Request, demand, needs, requisition
消除 :Eliminate, clear, remove, clear up, take away, smooth away
导致:Lead to, bring about, result in, cause, spark off, conduce to, procure, induce, generate
因此:So, therefore, thus, hence, consequently, as a consequence, accordingly, as a result, because of this, as a result of this
增长至:Grow to,rise to,increase to,go up to,climb to,ascend to,jump to,shoot to
降低至:Dip to,fall to,decline to,decrease to,drop to,go down to,reduce to,slump to,descend to,sink to,slide to
保持稳定:Level out,do not change,remain stable,remain still,remain steady,be stable,maintain the same level,remain unchanged,be still,remain the same level,stay constant,keep at the same level,level off,stabilize,keep its stability,even out
急剧地:Dramatically,drastically,sharply,hugely,enormously,steeply,substantially,considerably,significantly,markedly,surprisingly,strikingly,radically,remarkably,noticeably
平稳地:Steadily,smoothly,slightly,slowly,marginally,gradually,moderately,mildly
宣称:Allege, assert, declare, claim
发生:Happen, occur, take place
原因:Reason, factor, cause
发展:Development, advance, progress
有益的:Useful, helpful, beneficial, profitable, rewarding,advantageous
影响:Influence, impact, effect
明显的:Clear, obvious, evident, self-evident, manifest, apparent, crystal-clear
占:Comprise, take up, account for, constitute, consist of, make up, occupy, hold, pose
与…相比:Compared with,pared to,in parison with,in parison to 对比而言:By contrast,in contrast,on the other hand,on the contrary=,conversely
展示:Show, reveal, illustrate, demonstrate, depict, present, represent, describe 大约:Approximately,almost,about,around,nearly,roughly
波动:Fluctuate,go ups and downs,display a fluctuation,demonstrate a fluctuation
事实上:Practically,in practice,essentially,in essence,in reality,in effect,in fact,as a matter of fact,it is a fact that
换言之:Namely,that is to say,in other words,to put it like this,to put it differently,to put it from another way,to put it from another angle
作文四:《关于英语专八的一点考经(听力、改错、作文、翻译)》9600字
关于英语专八的一点考经(听力、改错、作文、翻译)
首先声明一下,这些所谓的考经基本上都是自己在很短的复习时间内收集和总结出来的,不是什么高端货,但应该还算蛮适合英语成绩中等的学生的。我的专八成绩是79分,貌似有点可惜,但其实我已经很知足了,因为英语一直都是我的弱项,而且大学四年也没好好学过,作为上外新闻系的学生,到毕业的时候也没有养成阅读NYT之类外刊的习惯。不过本人的长处是考试的技巧比较好,善于投机取巧和临场装逼。虽然不是什么考试都可以靠考前突击拿到高分的,但只要求及格的话,还是可以通过技巧的学习来“开外挂”的。当然,投机取巧也是踏踏实实的投机取巧。比如在复习人文常识的时候,我选了一本参考书,没有去买什么语言学的名著,没有去查阅wikipedia,花了一个礼拜,在医院和家里(老爸生病)把那本书的讲解部分断断续续背出来了,就这么去考试,发现十道单选都在自己的复习范围之内。我绝不敢说,我对语言学、欧美文学、英语国家常识都有深刻了解,甚至连皮毛都不会,但这次考试的分数我拿到了。如果我的经历能够引起你的小小的共鸣,我想这些考经就是无用的了,你完全可以根据自己的经验总结出最好的、最适合自己的版本。
英语专业八级听力应试技巧
Mini Lecture
·享受过程,集中精力
最好的心态莫过于享受这个过程。在平时的训练中就不断挑战自己集中注意力的极限,培养抗干扰能力和调整能力。
·听记为主,笔记为辅
争取做到一心两用,做笔记的时候耳朵不能休息;对于那些大量罗列又细枝末节的信息,记个首字母甚至不留笔记都可以,关键是听清楚,记在心里。
·听懂句子,抓住实词
做这个部分的听力时要以句子为单位去听,在笔记中体现出来的应该是实词,即传达句子中心意思的名词、动词、形容词。
·紧跟提示词,笔记有条理
一般来说材料都会比较有条理,因此做笔记的时候宜采用非线性的框架化笔记,体现出明显的层次结构,有利于回忆和答题。这就要求我们对一些带有提示性的语料特别敏感,主要包括以下几类:1.解释性、态度性插入语;2.祈使句;3.疑问句;4.逻辑关联词。
·高度重视首尾部分
这两个部分出题的概率应该在90%以上了吧,通过记下开头部分的主题句拿分是最容易的,而结尾部分的句子也是常考的地方,因为注意力分散导致没有听到是很可惜的。
·填写要细心
很多人都会因为大小写、单复数、时态错误之类低级错误的丢分,因此一定要谨慎。
Conversation & News Report
·预先读题,拎出考点
这个当然地球人都知道了,但是还是需要强调一下读题的策略和效率问题。如果时间充裕,可以把这个题目读完,反之则迅速浏览题干,暂时抛开选项。我个人的习惯是听到题目的introduction部分时如果没有读完所有题目,那么剩下的部分着重看题干就行了。读题的好处在于将被动的“听”转变为主动的“听”,为了使这个过程更主动,读题的时候就要拎出考点,建议用铅笔勾画或者标注一下。常见考点:1.观点、态度;2.目的、起因、过程、结果、影响;3.优点和缺点;4.身份、职业。
·对话听力和新闻听力的区别
前者重点考察整体理解,后者重点考察信息收集。在做对话听力的时候,我们可以保持一定的距离感,以句子为单位,冷静地去听其内在的意思,这样一来,即使面对一些需要“二次加工”的题目(加减乘除、同意转化等),也会从容很多。新闻听力的时间较短,但是我们最好亢奋一点,扣住时间、地点、数字等细节去听。另外,根据新闻的倒金字塔原则,大家会发现听懂新闻的导语是多么重要,经常能够直接拿分。
·细心始终很重要
做了这么多年的英语题,我不知道在“NOT/EXCEPT”上面载了多少跟头……可能还有一些更隐蔽的陷阱在等着你,总之,小心为妙,安全第一。
英语专八改错解题思路
1. 1. 宏观层面分析
(1) 句子结构(理顺整个句子的结构,必要时检索上下文)
(2) 逻辑关系(关联词选择:并列、递进、因果、转折、假设、让步等)
(3) 时态和语态(完成时和虚拟语气是考查重点)
1. 2. 微观层面分析
(1) 缺漏(介词、代词、引导词)
(2) 冗余(两个主语、同义重复)
(3) 误用(词性、分词、正反义、主被动、形容词和副词级别)
(4) 一致性(名词单复数、主谓一致、先行词)
(5) 词义与固定搭配
1. 3. 注意事项
(1) 即使按照语感很快找到了疑似错误,也要坚持读完全句再做判断,可能会有新的发现。过于相信第一感觉而带来的失分是划不来的。
(2) 分两次改比较合理,因为毕竟只有少数人能够在第一遍看材料的时候就找出所有的错误,尽管这些错误不见得隐藏得多深。
(3) 常考题型,高度警惕。
1. 冠词:the变a, a变the,补the补a,删a删the,每年都玩的把戏。
2. 单复数:无非是his变their之类的,关键是细心。
3. 近义词:例如distinct和distinctive,move和movement,interest和interests…
4. 反义词:尤其看到dis, un, im,in,non之类的,更要琢磨一下。
5. 关联词:几乎是保留节目,and, but, however, though, moreover, therefore…
6. 非谓语动词:见了ing想ed,见了ed想ing, 就是这么贱。
7. 形容词比较级:多半是把原形改为比较级。考的频率也蛮高的。
8. 虚拟语气:注意一下还是比较容易看出来的,多长个心眼儿吧。
9. It:有时要加,有时要删,有时要变itself,总之多盯“它”几眼。
10. 动词词组:其实主要是介词的问题,这个没办法临时抱佛脚,要靠积累。
英语专八作文备考材料
一.结构
(共25句,长短句结合,平均长度控制在15-20字;注意内部衔接)
二.特殊句型
·强调句
·非谓语动词、独立主格
·倒装句
·介词短语
三.通用句式
·开头
In recent years, we have witnessed a favorable/an unfavorable social phenomenon that…
With the approaching of…
Faced with the question whether…
This question evoked various responses from experts, as well as the general public. …has aroused public concern and arguments among people.
…which is applicable to every aspect of our life.
…presents a situation that is probably easy for many people to relate to: … ·转折
But the view that…is ridiculous.
Others think otherwise.
Though…there are some aspects to improve.
It only tells half of the truth. The whole story is that…
·引入
There are three possible reasons to account for this phenomenon.
Many factors contribute to this issue.
Opinions on this problem vary from person to person.
·分类
First of all / Further more
To begin with / What’s more / In the third place
On the one hand / On the other hand
First and foremost / In the second place / Last but not least
·议论
It’s beneficial to the individuals and the country as whole.
…is none of other people’s business.
In my opinion / in my regard / As far as I’m concerned,
A is to B what C is to D. / …, just as…
The golden rule for…
We gives due weight to…, but we ignore the fact that…/fail to realize that… Many people are under the illusion that…
Just as the saying goes, “…”
Take…for example,
As a consequence,
In this sense / In terms of / When it es to / With regard to…
A far outweighs B.
…should be directed in the right direction, otherwise…
·总结
To sum up, / Generally speaking, / All in all,
Take all these factors into consideration, we may reasonably draw a conclusion that…
Weighing the pros and the cons of such a new trend, we can naturally arrive at a conclusion that…
From what have been discussed, we can safely arrive at the conclusion that… ·统计
A recent survey indicates that…
As is apparently betrayed in the chart,
…climb / rocket / plunge / fall to…
With an average increase rate of 10%
四.名言和谚语精选
Knowledge is power. (Francis Bacon 培根)
Knowledge is the food of the soul. (Plato 柏拉图)
A little learning is a dangerous thing. (Alexander Pope 蒲柏)
Education is not the filling of a pail, but the lighting of a fire. (William Yeats 叶芝) The value of a man should be seen in what he gives and not in what he is able to receive. (Albert Einstein 爱因斯坦)
He is the happiest, be he is King or peasant, who finds peace in his home. (J. W. Goethe 歌德)
Prevention is better than cure. (Charles Dickens 狄更斯)
Courage is the ladder on which all the other virtues mount. (Clare Luce 卢斯,美国剧作家)
Love is the only sane and satisfactory answer to the problem of human existence. (Erich Fromm 弗洛姆)
Living without an aim is like sailing without a pass. (Alexandre Dumas 大仲马) The only limit to our realization of tomorrow is our doubts of today. (Franklin Roosevelt 罗斯福)
A man is not old as long as he is seeking something. (J. Barrymore 巴里摩尔,美国演员)
Necessity is the mother of invention. (Plato 柏拉图)
Punishment is justice for the unjust. (Augustine 奥古斯丁,英国作家)
Discontent is the first step in progress of a man or a nation. (Oscar Wild 王尔德) Adversity reveals genius; fortune conceals it. (Horace 贺拉斯,古罗马诗人)
The Chinese word for crisis is divided into two characters, one meaning danger and the other meaning opportunity. (Burejer 布莱杰,英国作家)
Although the world is full of suffering, it is full also of the overing of it. (Helen Keller 海伦凯勒)
People who cannot find time for recreation are obliged sooner or later to find time for illness. (J. Wanamaker 沃纳梅克)
Self-trust is the first secret of success. (R. Emerson 爱默生)
If winter es, can spring be far behind? (P. B. Shelley 雪莱)
Where there is a will, there is a way. (Thomas Edison 爱迪生)
The first wealth is health. ( Ralph Waldo Emerson 爱默生)
Most folks are about as happy as they make up their minds to be. (Abraham Lincoln 林肯)
Time is money. (Benjamin Franklin 本杰明·富兰克林)
Unpolished pearls never shine. 玉不琢不成器。
Life is but a span. 人生苦短。
Nothing in the world is difficult for one who sets his mind to it. 世上无难事,只怕有心人。
Circumstances are the rulers of the weak, instruments of the wise. 弱者屈于环境,强者利用环境。
A fall into a pit, a gain in your wit. 吃一堑,长一智。
Adversity leads to prosperity. 穷则思变。
Every coin has its two sides. 有利有弊。
Think twice before we leap. 三思而后行。
No garden without weeds. 没有花园无杂草。
No sweet without sweat. 苦尽甘来。
Actions speak louder than words. 事实胜于雄辩。
A young idler, an old beggar. 少壮不努力,老大徒伤悲。
Constant dropping wears the stone. 滴水穿石。
Every profession produces its own best. 行行出状元。
Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧。
Diligence redeems stupidity. 勤能补拙。
Each man is the architect of his own fate. 每个人都是他自己命运的建筑师。 Birds of a feather flock together. 物以类聚,人以群分。
More haste, less speed. 欲速则不达。
五.词汇:同义词、近义词替换
解决:Solve, deal with, cope with, handle, resolve, address, tackle
损害:Damage, hurt, injure, harm, impair, undermine, jeopardize
给与:Give, offer, render, impart, provide, supply, afford
培养::Develop, cultivate, foster
优势:Advantage, merit, virtue, benefit, upside, strength
缺陷:Disadvantage, demerit, drawback, downside, weakness
使迷惑:Puzzle, bewilder, perplex, baffle
重要的:Key, crucial, critical, important, significant, vital, substantial, indispensable, imperative
认为:Think, believe, insist, maintain, assert, conclude, deem, hold, argue, be convin
ced, be firmly convinced, be fully convinced
保护:Protect, conserve, preserve
确保:Assure, ensure, guarantee, pledge
有害的:Bad, baneful evil, harmful, detrimental
要求 :Request, demand, needs, requisition
消除 :Eliminate, clear, remove, clear up, take away, smooth away
导致:Lead to, bring about, result in, cause, spark off, conduce to, procure, induce, generate
因此:So, therefore, thus, hence, consequently, as a consequence, accordingly, as a result, because of this, as a result of this
增长至:Grow to,rise to,increase to,go up to,climb to,ascend to,jump to,shoot to
降低至:Dip to,fall to,decline to,decrease to,drop to,go down to,reduce to,slump to,descend to,sink to,slide to
保持稳定:Level out,do not change,remain stable,remain still,remain steady,be stable,maintain the same level,remain unchanged,be still,remain the same level,stay constant,keep at the same level,level off,stabilize,keep its stability,even out
急剧地:Dramatically,drastically,sharply,hugely,enormously,steeply,substantially,considerably,significantly,markedly,surprisingly,strikingly,radically,remarkably,noticeably
平稳地:Steadily,smoothly,slightly,slowly,marginally,gradually,moderately,mildly
宣称:Allege, assert, declare, claim
发生:Happen, occur, take place
原因:Reason, factor, cause
发展:Development, advance, progress
有益的:Useful, helpful, beneficial, profitable, rewarding,advantageous
影响:Influence, impact, effect
明显的:Clear, obvious, evident, self-evident, manifest, apparent, crystal-clear
占:Comprise, take up, account for, constitute, consist of, make up, occupy, hold, pose
与…相比:Compared with,pared to,in parison with,in parison to 对比而言:By contrast,in contrast,on the other hand,on the contrary=,conversely
展示:Show, reveal, illustrate, demonstrate, depict, present, represent, describe 大约:Approximately,almost,about,around,nearly,roughly
波动:Fluctuate,go ups and downs,display a fluctuation,demonstrate a fluctuation
事实上:Practically,in practice,essentially,in essence,in reality,in effect,in fact,as a matter of fact,it is a fact that
换言之:Namely,that is to say,in other words,to put it like this,to put it differently,to put it from another way,to put it from another angle
作文五:《作文:卷子里的密秘》500字
“同学们,今天我们要进行一场课外知识大比拼。”周老师宣布,喔!这个简单!同学们笑嘻嘻地谈笑风声,“请同学们注意审题!”
啪啪!试卷发了下来,我接过试卷,呀真简单。呀!林凡一还在看题目嘞!这时,她哦的一声,开始答题。“回答时间为5分钟!”啊?我大吃一惊,不由分说开始答题“沙沙沙”教室里静的出奇,连钟表的滴答滴答声都听地清清楚楚,我抬头看见林凡一只做了一大题就不做了。就连谢泽亮也一样,真奇怪!算了,他们考鸭蛋又不是我的事看着同学们争分夺秒地答题,我也不由自主地唰唰地写起来。“哈哈,这次一定会有不少的0蛋哦!考试时间到!”周老师话音刚落。教室里马上响起了一阵抱怨声,“啊我还没写完嘞!”“怎么办怎么办?我也还剩半张。”唉,周老师像包公审案-------铁面无私。哎?那几个只做了一两道题的人怎么不动声色,自顾自地聊天。“现在宣布分数,某某0分,郑鸿逸零分!”“什么?我辛辛苦苦地做完了一页半,也得50分吧!”我已瞬间石化了!错在哪?这时我的目光转到了最后一行字:本卷子只要大家做一、二道题!我竟无言已对,周老师早已说过了要注意审题,卷子上有友情提醒。
是啊,平时的我做选择题的时候,要打勾,我却画横线;老师说要写感想,我却把2它抛到九宵云外,因为我的做事没有顾全大局,也没有三思而后行。我陷入了沉思………。
作文六:《初二作文卷子上的》26800字
杭州市西湖区:
你们学校的英国学生Jenny想给远在英国伦敦的朋友
Peter发一封e—mail,谈论杭州学生与伦敦学生生活上的一
些异同。
2(可适当发挥,80词左右。
Dear Peter
I’ve been here for half a year. The life of students here is different from that of London though they have something in mon.
In
Hangzhou,_________________________________________________________________ Please write to me soon!
Yours, .
Jenny
One possible version:
Dear peter,
I’ve been here for half a year. The life of students here is different from that of London though they have something in mon.
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In Hangzhou, the weather is often sunny. The students speak Chinese and most of them go to school by bike or by bus. They sometimes get together to have fun. And teachers have many rules for the students. The students usually have much homework to do after class. However, in London, it rains a lot. The students there speak English because English is their mother language and they go to school on the school bus. They often get together to make them relaxed and teachers are less strict. They give the students more freedom. The students have less homework at home. It’s interesting,
isn’t it?
Please write to me soon!
Yours, .
Jenny
温州市:
春节就要来到了。请写篇文章谈谈你的新年愿望,以及你
准备在春节第一天所
要做的事情。
注意:1(内容必须包括以上提示中的信息,可适当发挥。
2(不得出现真实的人名和校名等相关信息。
3(文章长度:约80词。
参考词汇:get good grades,exercise more,go to the
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movies,visit grandparents,do the dishes One possible
version:
Spring festival is ing. I have a lot of New Years resolutions. I am going to work harder in school this year to get good grades. I want to eat more vegetables and exercise more to keep healthy. On the first day of the spring festival. I am going to visit my grandparents. I will help them do the dishes and sweep the floor. In the evening, I am going to the movies with my friends.
I cant wait the spring festival because I’m enjoying this
festival.
杭州市余杭区:
假如你叫李强,你的笔友Peter询问你打算如何度过即将
到来的寒假,请给他写信答复。80词左右,开头和结尾已给
出,不计入总词数。
以下活动安排供参考:
1(read,study,travel
2(do chores
3(visit grandparents
4?(
Dear Peter,
Thanks a lot for your e-mail(
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The winter vacation is ing(I have some plans for
it(First,_______________________
_______________________________________________________________________________ I’m looking forward to the
winter vacation!
Yours,
Li Qiang
One possible version:
Dear peter,
Thanks a lot for your e-mail.
The winter vacation is ing. I have some plans for it. First, I will read more English every morning to improve my English and study math because Im not good at math. Second, I will spend more time with my parents and help them do the chores, such as cleaning the room, doing the dishes, making the bed and taking out the trash. Third, I will visit my grandparents and stay some days with them. What’
s more, Im going to take part in more activities so that I can help others better. Im sure Ill have an interesting but busy winter vacation. I’ll make myself happier and healthier.
Im looking forward to the winter vacation.
Yours,
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Li Qiang
临海市:
上星期天,你们学校进行了一次学校旅行,你一定有很多
感想。请根据表格内容,以“A
A Trip to an Aquarium
We had a great time on the school trip last Sunday(We
t to an aquarium(
One possible version:
A Trip to an Aquarium
We had a great time on the school trip last Sunday. We t to an aquarium. It was sunny in the morning. At seven thirty, we took a bus there. We t to the Visitors’ Center
to watch a seal show. It was very funny and interesting. Everyone laughed to tears. We took a lot of photos there. In the afternoon, it began to rain. We t to a big room to see a movie about sharks. It was also wonderful. We also played games after that. We didn’t e back until it was 5 o’clock.
I really enjoyed the trip to the aquarium. It was exciting and relaxing.
绍兴市属:
假如你是张鹏,今年寒假你将和你的父母开车去杭州西湖
及动物园玩。请你根据下表信息给你在杭州的好友Jenny写
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一封信,告诉她你们的行程安排,并与她约定一个见面的时
间。 注意:1(文章必须包括表格中的所有信息,可适当
发挥;2(信的开头和结尾已给出,
Dear Jenny,
I’ve got good news to tell you(This winter vacation my
parents and I are driving to visit
Hangzhou(_____________________________________________________________________ I’m looking forward to
seeing you(
Yours,
Zhang Peng
One possible version:
Dear Jenny,
I’ve got good news to tell you(This winter vacation my
parents and I are driving to visit Hangzhou. We are going to leave for Hangzhou on the morning of January 20 and stay in Hubin Hotel which is 2 kilometers away from West Lake. Next day we’ll have more activities. In the morning we’ll go
to West Lake to go sightseeing and go to the zoo to enjoy the monkey show in the afternoon. In the evening, I think I am free that time, so we’d better meet to have fun Can we meet then? We plan to go back to Shaoxing on January 22.
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I’m looking forward to seeing you(
Yours,
Zhang Peng
上虞市:
班会课上大家在逐一介绍自己的朋友。假如Lucy是你在
网上结识的美国笔友,请根据提示向你的同学介绍一下她的
情况。
2(文章开头已给出,不计入词数,只需接着写。词数:80
词左右。
Lucy is my best pen pal(She is from
America._______________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________
I’m looking forward to ing.
One possible version:
Lucy is my best pen pal. She is from America. She was born on June 18,1998. Lily is her twin sister. They look the same, but Lucy is more outgoing and stronger than Lily. She has a healthy lifestyle. She exercises every day and eats lots of vegetables and fruit. The school is about 2 kilometers from her home. It takes her 30 minutes to ride a bike to school. She likes China very much. Next week she is going to
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Beijing with her family. They will stay there for a week. They are going sightseeing and eating Beijing Roast Duck in Beijing. Do you think it’s great? I’m looking forward to
ing.
绍兴县:
寒假即将来临,怎样安排一个有意义的假期呢,请你先介
绍一下Paul的假期计划(见下表)
要求:1(短文要求包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥;
2(短文要求简洁,正确流畅;
3(词数80左右,开头部分已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:review lessons复习功课
The winter vacation is ing. Paul is thinking about what to do during the vacation._______ One possible version:
The winter vacation is ing. Paul is thinking about what to do during the vacation. He is going to play puter games on Internet. He is also going to a movie with his friends. He is going to read English in the morning and play basketball in the afternoon. He thinks it’s good for his
health. As for me, I am going to review the lessons for I didn’t do well in the final exams. I’m also going to help my
parents do the housework. I am going to exercise for an hour every day during the vacation. At the same time, I’ going to
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practice playing the piano because I like music very much. I
want to be a pianist when I grow up. I will have a very meaningful vacation. 宁波市鄞州区:
愉快的寒假即将来临,Mary为自己制定了一个寒假计划。
请根据所提供的信息,用英文写一篇介绍Mary寒假计划的
短文。短文要求:包含所给信息,也可以适当拓展。词数:
80。开头已写好,不计入总词数。
Mary’s Winter Vacation Plan
1(每天花半个小时(spend half an hour)锻炼。
2(帮助父母亲做家务活(do chores)。比如说:洗餐具、打
扫房间。
3((when)当天气晴朗的时候,骑车去图书馆看书(read
books)。
4(春节(Spring Festival)打算全家去哈尔滨旅游(travel)。
顺便去看看表兄(cousin)一家。
One possible version:
Mary’s Winter Vacation Plan
Winter Holiday is ing(Mary planned to have a
different holiday this year. She is________
Mary’s Winter Vacation Plan
Winter Holiday is ing. Mary planned to have a different holiday this year. She is going to spend half an hour
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exercising every day. And she’s going to help her parents do
chores, such as sweeping the floor, doing the dishes, cleaning the floor and so on. When it is sunny, she is going to the library to read books. She’s going there by bike, because she thinks it is a good way to keep healthy. During the Spring Festival, she’s going to travel to Harbin with her family. She’s also visiting her cousin there. And they are going skating there. I think she will have a good holiday. 湖州市:
盼望已久的寒假就在眼前了,你打算怎样度过这个假期呢?
请写一写你的寒假计划。 以下词组仅供参考:have…lessons,
find a part-time job, make money, visit…, stay at home… 要
求:语言通顺,表达准确,意思清晰无误,6,8句话即可。
开头已给出。
Everybody has their own plans for the ing winter vacation. As for me, ______________ One possible version:
Everybody has their own plans for the ing winter vacation. As for me, Im going to learn an instrument this year. So I’m going to have some piano or drum lessons. If possible, I’m going to find a part-time job to make some money. Then I can buy something I like and also buy something for my parents as their New Year’s gifts. And of
course, I’m going to visit my grandparents. I love them a lot
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and I want to spend the Spring Festival with them. What’s
more, my family are going to have a trip this winter vacation. It’s so exciting. I hope to go somewhere warm. Sanya sounds like a fantastic place. When I e back, I will stay at home and get ready for my new term. It must be a nice vacation. I can’t wait!
奉化、宁海、象山三县:
请根据表格内容,写出你和你朋友的理想工作和新年计
划,以及你们为了实现新年计划所要采取的行动。
Different people have different dream jobs. I want to be a singer when I grow up. __________ One possible version:
Different people have different dream jobs. I want to be a singer when I grow up. So I am going to take singing lessons. My New Year’s resolution is to learn to play the piano. My friend Jim is going to be a soccer ball player. So he is going to play soccer every day. And he is planning to teach other students to play in New Year. As for my another friend Ken, he wants to be a puter programmer. And he is going to try his best to learn math. His New Year’s resolution is to
ask teachers for help. I hope our dreams will e true.
余姚市:
八年级第一学期紧张的学习生活快要结束,你在过新年的
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同时又可以度过一个轻松有意义的寒假。请根据下面方框内的提示写一篇短文,谈谈你的寒假计划。
要求:1(文中应包含提示词,适当发挥,内容充实,结构完整,语意连贯;
篇二:初二作文试卷分析
试卷分析(作文)
西太阳中学:杨格 作文在语文试题上有?半壁江山?之称,本份试题的作文题目为二选一的形式,分别是:命题作文《我的出彩一刻》、半命题作文《带着 前行》,我将从以下几方面对本次作文进行分析。
一、命题特点:
1、紧扣新课标要求,引导学生关注自我、关注生活、志存高远,写出真
情实感。着力考查学生审题、立意、选材、构思的全方面作文能力。
2、二选一的形式,给学生提供了自主选择的广阔空间,但自由中又有限制,有效形成梯度的要求,达到?百花齐放?的效果。
3.作文的命题贴近学生的生活实际,让学生有话可说,有内容可写,比
较好地满足了各类不同层次学生的写作要求。
二、学生的总体写作情况:
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1、从学生的选题来看,90%的学生选择的是《带着 前行》,而仅有10%的学生选择了《我的出彩一刻》。
2、本次考试一类作文有10%左右,但得分都不是很高,大多集中在(45分、46分)这两分数段,但整体作文亮点不够突出,不能达到文质兼美的境界;四类作文也有10%左右;二三类作文居多,作文整体分数集中在(42分、43分、44分)这几个分数段。
3、从学生的写作情况来看,99%的学生都能达到字数的要求;90%的学生都能围绕主题写作,语言比较流畅,内容上都积极乐观,志存高远;75%的学生书写工整,态度端正,卷面美观,大方;大部分学生
也能注重语言素材、作文素材的积累,从作文写作中也能看出较好的语文功底。
4、学生写作中的亮点是:
(1)选材立意,关注生活,角度巧妙,小处着笔。从内容上看,丰富多彩,涉猎广泛,呈明显的多维思考。很多文章敏感的捕捉生活,能从平凡的生活中撷取不平凡的镜头,寻找感点,以情动人。体现了立意之巧。
(2)构思巧妙灵活,结构完整紧凑。
(3)文笔流畅优美,语言真切自然。很多学生在在写作中语言流畅,描写、修辞点亮文采,也有个别学生写的是《我的精彩一刻》,敏感的捕捉生活,能从平凡的生活中撷取不平
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凡的镜头,寻找感点,以情动人。巧引活水,能从积累的素材中借鉴并发挥。
三、学生写作中存在的主要问题是:
有25%的学生比较心浮气躁,字迹潦草;有20%的学生只是在列举名人的事例,没有关注自己的生活,内容比较空洞;有15%的学生作文结构布局不合理,套用作文生硬牵强;也有个别学生半命题作文的补充词语比较牵强,如:带着?个性、他人、敌人、清雅、时间、兄弟……?前行,当然内容是生拉硬套;也有一些学生思维不够慎密,本是?带着‘歌声’?前行,却写成了?带着‘唱歌’前行?、本是写?带着‘勇气’前行?却写成了?带着‘勇敢’前行?等等;本次作文还发现有少数的学生有抄袭试卷上的现代文、说明文的现象。
四、今后教学的建议:
1、狠抓语文基本功训练,,强化书写训练,端正书写态度,养成良好的书写习惯,将书写训练作为常态化的工作,持之以恒,坚持不懈。
2、把握练习内容,收集作文习作素材
3、注重写作思维的训练,保护学生的写作兴趣,让每个学生都能体味成功的喜悦 。
4、作文批改中应强化学生主体参与意识,注重积累。
5、将作文教学和阅读教学相连接 。
篇三:初二下册试卷范例作文
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初二下册试卷范例作文
一(请从下面描述心情的词中选择一个,以“I Feel These
Days”为题,写一篇小短文。
要求:1. 可选词汇为:lonely, upset, happy, unhappy,
angry, disappointed, excited, frightened
worried
2. 意思连贯、通顺,词数在60—80之间。
3. 适当发挥,注意写出为什么、怎么样以及后来怎么样等。
I Feel Unhappy These Days
Last Sunday, Lin Tao and I t to the gym. When we did exercise, I fell down on the ground. I got hurt so badly that we couldn’t go on exercising. So we had to go back. Because I was hurt, I couldn’t walk, and we had to take a bus. When I got off the bus, I fell down once again. Oh, my God! In the end, I had to go to the hospital. The doctor told me that I must stay in bed for three days. My classmates came to visit me, and they brought me some flowers. They also helped me with my study. Their ing pleased me, and now I am feeling much better.
二(每个人都不可能没有烦恼。当你有烦恼时, 请试着控
制你的情绪, 因为情绪可以影响你生活中的很多方面。所以
生活中我们应当相信自己, 笑对人生, 多与父母、朋友沟通。
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请展开你丰富的联想,写一篇短文。
要求:意思连贯、通顺,词数在60—80之间。
提示词语:feel happy, mirror, the best, help others in need, believe, have a nice day, express, feelings, talk with ...
Nobody can be happy all the time. When you bee unhappy, you should try to control your feelings. Because bad feelings can make you lose your friends and give you other bad effects. Here are some ways to make you feel better.
(1)Look in the mirror and speak to yourself, “I’m the best
in the world. I can do anything.”
(2)Do something for others. You will feel happy if you always help others in need.
(3)Smile when you get up in the morning and believe you will have a nice day.
(4)Write down your thoughts, dreams or anything you want. Writing always helps you express
your feelings.
(5)Stay with your family. You may talk with your parents, relatives, friends and so on.
三 我们知道,天气会影响人们的情绪。原准备的一场球
赛,一次野餐,会因为一场大雨而泡汤,那时你的心情如何,
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如果阴雨连绵长达数日,突然天空放晴,那时你心情又是如
何,所以关注天气预报已成为人们生活的一部分。请你根据
以上内容,适当发挥,不要直接翻译,写一篇短文。
要求:1. 意思连贯,语言通顺。
2. 可参考词汇:directly or indirectly(直接或间接地);
arrange(安排);based on(根据);
besides(而且);indoors(室内)
Weather affects all of us in one way or another, directly or indirectly. For example, good weather makes people happy. Bad weather makes people sad or sick. Besides, on a fine day, one can go out for a walk or play a game in the open air. On a rainy day, however, he can only stay indoors. In a word, weather is a part of life for all of us.
The first thing that many people do after getting up is to see what the weather is like. With a knowledge of the weather, people can arrange(安排) work and life of the day.
If it is fine, he may decide to go on a piic. If it is cloudy, he will have to take an umbrella. One plans his activities very well based on it.
四 上个星期天晚上,你和家人一起去看京剧。谈谈去之
前你的心情及看过之后的体会。词数80个左右。
提示词语:look forward to ... , national opera, express
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Chinese culture, famous stories, facial paintings, wonderful gestures and fighting, have a nice evening ... 开头已给出,
不计入总词数。
Last Sunday evening, my father, mother and I t to see Beijing Opera. I was looking forward to seeing it, because I heard that it was our national opera with a history of 200 years. It expresses Chinese culture. It’s full of famous stories,
beautiful facial paintings, wonderful gestures and fighting. On the night before we started, I felt so excited that I couldn’t sleep well. When we got to the theater, I found there were so many people. They looked very excited, too. Then I had a nice evening there. After seeing it, I think it is really wonderful.
五, 为自己设计一个旅行计划,要包括下列问题:
1. 想去哪,为什么,
2. 想在那儿待几天,
3. 怎么去,
4. 打算什么时候开始旅行,
5. 在这次旅行期间,打算做些什么,
要求:意思连贯、通顺,词数在60—80之间。
提示词语:countryside, air, food and vegetables,
environment, fresh, quiet, poor, give, the school things ...
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A Plan for a Trip
Tomorrow morning, I’d like to go to the countryside for a trip because the environment there is quite good. The air there is fresh, and I can enjoy a quiet life. The food and vegetables are good, too. I’m going to stay in the countryside for a week. I plan to go there by bike. In this way, I can take exercise as well. When I go there, I’ll take some school
things, like books, pens pencils and so on. I decide to give them to the poor students in the countryside. And I’ll try my
best to help them with their study. I think I’ll be very tired
but I’ll enjoy myself.
六(根据以下中文提示,以“Travel”为题写一篇60—80
词的短文。
1. 当你对工作或学习感到厌烦时,可以选择旅行。休闲的
同时也可以领略大自然的美丽风光,呼吸新鲜空气,结交新
朋友,散心等。
2. 有时旅行会有烦恼,如天气多变、被雨淋湿等。
3. 出发前应充分了解天气情况,最好结伴同行,可以互相
照应,以免发生
意外。
除以上需要注意的几点外,你还可根据你的理解自由发
挥。
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提示词语:be tired of doing sth., enjoy the beauty of nature, breathe, prepare yourself, panion, cause accident ...
Travel
Travel is a very good activity. When you are tired of working or studying, or when you have time, you can go to a beautiful place to enjoy the beauty of nature. You can breathe fresh air, make some new friends, relax yourself and so on.
But sometimes it may cause trouble. The weather often changes. You may get wet in the rain and may have a cold. You should prepare yourself carefully before your trip. You should know something about the weather. You’d better find
a panion so that you can help each other to avoid accidents. In this way, you’ll have a wonderful trip.
七(随着人口的增长和家庭轿车的普及,交通安全问题
已成为千家万户关注的焦点。作为初中生的你是怎样去上学
的呢,围绕下面的几点要求展开思考,写一篇60—80词的
短文。
1. 乘什么交通工具去上学,是公交车,小汽车还是自行
车,
2. 乘车时应注意哪些交通规则,
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要求:结构完整,条理清晰,语言通顺。
Do you like riding a bike? I like it very much. I am a student in a middle school. I often go to school by bike, because it is good for our body. It makes us healthy and saves energy. But we must obey the traffic rules. We should ride a bike slowly and ride it on the right-hand side of the road. If the traffic lights are red, we must stop. Now let’s
leave cars and buses, and just cycle.
八 (A)假设你参加了学校组织的志愿者活动,请根据下
面表格所提供的内容写一
homeless people. They gave out food at a food bank. On Thursday, Group Two helped kids with their schoolwork. Group Three worked outside and helped clean up the city park on Saturday. They were very happy.
九(根据中文和英文提示词写出意思连贯、符合逻辑的短
文。所给英文提示词需全都用上,词数在60—80之间。
假如你叫刘辉,是仁爱国际学校的学生。美食节过后,你
和同学们积极清理现场,捡废纸,拾塑料瓶,再卖到回收中
心,然后给贫困地区儿童捐款。
提示词语:废纸 waste paper;塑料瓶 plastic bottle;回
收中心 a recycling center;捐钱 donate the money;贫困地
区 poor areas
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My name is Liu Hui. I’m a student in Ren’ai
International School. I know some
children in poor areas need money for school. So my friends and I decided to collect waste paper and plastic bottles after the food festival. After we cleaned the playground of our school, we sold all the waste paper and plastic bottles to a recycling center, and then donated the money to the children in poor areas. Although we felt very tired on that day, we were very happy!
十 你的美国笔友想学做一道中国菜,这有一个食谱,试
着向你的朋友介绍一下做法,词数在40—50之间。
原料:豆芽(bean sprouts),盐。
步骤:首先把锅放在火上。然后在锅里倒一些油,油热了
之后,放入豆芽、盐,翻炒(stir fry)一两分钟。最后将豆芽
盛入盘子里。Now let me show you how to make fried bean sprouts.
First, put the pan over the fire. And then pour some oil into it. When the oil is hot, put the bean sprouts into the pan. Add some salt. Stir fry them for one or two minutes. Finally, put the bean sprouts on the plate.
十一 汤姆和迈克常到学校附近的三家快餐店吃饭,他们
做了一个调查,结
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Tom and Mike did a survey among three restaurants. This is what they told us. The price of the hamburger in Ham is lower than that in Billy, but its quality is better than Billy’s.
And Ham’s service isn’t as
friendly as Billy’s. The price of the hamburger in Pizza is the highest, but its quality is the best and the service is the most friendly of the three.
十二 根据汉语提示完成一篇短文,词数在60—80之间。
上周,比尔和妈妈一起去购物。他们买了围巾,棉风衣和
皮鞋,后来又一起吃了日本寿司。比尔和妈妈度过了愉快的
一天。
Bill’s mother likes going shopping a lot. Last Sunday she t shopping with Bill. First, they saw a beautiful scarf, so they bought it. Then they t to the Men’s Clothing
Section. Bill’s mother chose a cotton windbreaker for Bill. The windbreaker made Bill look more handsome. Then they t to the Shoes and Hats Section. There they bought a pair of leather shoes for Bill’s father. After that, they t to eat Japanese sushi. They felt very tired, but they were very happy.
十三. 书面表达。(A题5分, B题15分,共20分)
(A)根据通知,写一则海报。 News e and watch it.
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(B)假设你是林华,今天在学校的公告栏上看到了上面那则
海报并且观看了校时装展。请描述一下你所看的时装展。
内容包括:1. 举行时装展的时间、地点;
2. 同学们的表现;
3. 自己的感受。
要求:词数在60个左右。
关键词:make poses 摆造型
(A)
Poster
Place: School Hall
Time: 8:30 tomorrow morning
Program:A School Fashion Show
(B)
A School Fashion Show
Yesterday morning, our school held a fashion show. Many boys and girls t to model in the show. They wore all kinds of clothes, and they looked attractive and lovely. They made different poses to show their own styles and rich fashion cultures. The other students watched it excitedly and cheered for their favorite models. What a wonderful fashion show! I love it.
十四. 书面表达。(A题5分,B题15分,共20分)
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(A)假如你是梅梅,本打算今天(4月21日)去芳芳家做作
业,可是你的父母要带你去郊游。请写一个30词左右的留
言条给芳芳,告诉她你的情况,并请她原谅。
___________________________________________________
_______________________
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(B)世界上有许多种爱,母爱、父爱、师生情、手足情等等。
你已是一名中学生了,在十几年的关爱中慢慢长大,母爱的
细腻、父爱的含蓄??请你以自己的切身体会,写一篇60词
左右的短文,介绍一下在你的心目中哪种爱最伟大。 要求:
1. 通过一则细小的事情体现爱的伟大。
2. 表达真实可信,内容连贯正确,语言流畅,文中不得使
用真名。
(A)
April 21st Dear Fangfang,
I’m very sorry to say that I can’t go to your home to do homework with you. Because my parents will take me out
for a spring field trip.
Meimei
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(B)
There are many kinds of love in the world, such as mother’s love, father’s love, friends’ love and so on. But
I think mother’s love is the greatest of all.
When I was young, my mother taught me to walk, speak and think. She took good care of my life. When I grew up little by little, my mother helped me to study well. She tried her best to keep me healthy. She often talked with me like my good
篇四:2011-2012人教版八年级语文上册期末考试卷及答
案、作文例文
2011-2012人教版八年级语文上册期末考试卷及答案、作
文例文
一、选择题(共21分)
1(下列加点字注音正确的一组是 ()(3分)
A、蹒跚(pán) 愧怍(ò ) 吊唁(yàn) 罄竹难书(qìnɡ)
B、嶙峋(xún) 两栖(xī)老妪(yù ) 风雪载途(zài)
C、荒谬(miù) 仄歪(zè)阻遏(yè) 毛骨悚然(sǒnɡ)
D、尴尬(ɡān) 潮汐(xī)伧俗(chānɡ) 在劫难逃(jié)
2、下列名组中没有错别字的一组是()(3分)
A、鞠躬 遗骸 锐不可挡 张皇失措
B、狼藉 烦躁 荡然无存 消声匿迹
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C、轩榭 藩篱 惟妙惟肖 因地制宜
D、归咎 喷嚏 铸剑为犁 穿流不息
3、下列句子中加线的成语运用正确的是 ()(3分)
A、同学们经常向老师请教,这种不耻下问的精神值得提倡。
B、王小明同学心直口快,对有缺点的同学总是一针见血地指出来。
C、运动会上,他借的一身衣服很不合身,简直是画蛇添足。
D、他这样做自以为很稳妥,其实是塞翁失马,稍不注意就会出现错误。
4、下列句子没有语病的一项()(3分)
A、通过收看专题片,使我们认识到人类要与动物和谐相处。
B、2(转 载于:.zaIdian.cOM 在 点 网:初二作文卷子上的)003年10月16日,我们靠自己力量完成了我国首次载人航天飞行,这是中国人永远值得纪念和骄傲的
日子。
C、我们要确保安全生产,防止万无一失。
D、近段时期以来,小王电脑水平有了明显的增强。
5、下面古诗句描写的景色不同的一项是 ()(3分)
A、诗家清景在新春,绿柳才黄半未匀。 若待上林花似锦,
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出门俱是看花人。
B、杨柳阴阴细雨晴,残花落尽见流莺。 春风一夜吹乡梦,又逐春风到洛城。
C、山明水净夜来霜,数树深红出浅黄。 试上高楼清入骨,岂如春色嗾人狂。
D、清明时节雨纷纷,路上行人欲断魂。 借问酒家何处有,牧童遥指杏花村
6、下面这首诗,所写的节日是()(3分)
中庭地白树栖鸦,冷露无声湿桂花。今夜月明人尽望,不知秋思落谁家。
A(中秋B(重阳 C(端午 D(除夕
7(下列句子运用的描写方式正确的一项是( ) (3分)
(1)那极短的发,似刚收割过的庄稼茬,高低不齐,灰白而失去了生机。
(2)他仿佛觉得有许多目光在望他,就尽力把胸挺得高些。
(3)父亲的精力却很旺盛,脸上总是挂着笑容……
(4)父亲拍拍我后脑勺说,这样是会吃苦头的!
A(外貌 神态 动作 语言B(外貌 心理 动作 语言
C(外貌 心理 神态 语言D. 外貌 动作 神态 语言
二、判断正误,正确的在题后的括号内记“A”,错误记
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“B”。 (共6分)
8、钱钟书,江苏无锡人,学者、作家。著有长篇小说《围城》。《谈艺录》《管锥编》代表了钱钟书先生学术
上的最高成就,它们都是新中国成立后发行的。 ()
9、“……踏平坎坷成大道,斗罢艰险又出发…”是电视剧《水浒传》主题曲()
10、《<浣溪沙山下兰芽短浸溪》(苏轼)一词中表现了作者执着生活,旷达乐观的人生态度,“谁道人生无
再少,门前流水尚能西~”一句以景取喻并抒发作者感叹。
11、对于新闻(消息)要素,西方有五 “w”之说,即WHAT(何事)、WHO(何人)、WHEN (何时)、WHERE(何地)、
WHY(何因)。()
12、古代刻在器物上用来警戒自己或称述功德的文字叫做“铭”,后来就成为一种文体,这种文体一般都是不
用韵的。 ()
13、杨绛女士翻译的《堂?吉诃德》是西班牙作家塞万提斯的作品,小说的主人公是个骑士。 ()
三、知识积累(共10分)
14、根据拼音,写出语境中的汉字。(2分)
(1).我在家听到打门,开门看见老王直僵僵地镶qiàn( )在门框里。
(2).大殿廊下,鸣钟击qìnɡ( ),乐声悠扬。
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15、默写填空(6 分)
(1)、在人生中,有境遇看似无望却忽逢转机便豁然开朗的情形,这种情形正契合了陆游《游
山西村》中“, ”一句。
(2)、杜甫《望岳》中点明全诗主旨,抒写自己不怕困难,敢于攀登绝顶、俯视一切的雄心
和气慨的诗句是:“, 。”
(3)、《记承天寺夜游》中有精彩的月色描写,这是:
,盖竹柏影也。
16、名著阅读(2分)
“人生最宝贵的东西是生命。生命对于我们只有一次。一个人的生命应当这样度过:当他回首往事的时候,
他不因为虚度年华而悔恨,也不因为碌碌无为而羞愧——这样,在临死的时候,他能够说:?我整个的生命和
全部精力,都已献给世界上最壮丽的事业——为人类的解放而斗争。?”这段激动人心,被千千万万青年引以为座右铭的文字,出自原苏联小说家 的小说。
四、阅读理解:(43分)
(一)三峡 (12分)
自三峡七百里中,两岸连山,略无阙处。重岩叠嶂,隐天蔽日。自非亭午夜分,不见曦月。
至于夏水襄陵,沿溯阻绝。或王命急宣,有时朝发白帝,
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暮到江陵,其间千二百里,虽乘奔御风,不以疾也。
春冬之时,则素湍绿潭,回清倒影。绝巘多生怪柏,悬泉瀑布,飞漱其间,清荣峻茂,良多趣味。 每至晴初霜旦,林寒涧肃,常有高猿长啸,属引凄异,空谷传响,哀转久绝。故渔者歌曰:“巴东三峡巫峡长,猿鸣三声泪沾裳。”
17、解释下列加点的字。(3分)
) )
18、翻译下列句子。(4分)
(1)自非亭午夜分,不见曦月。
(2)清荣峻茂,良多趣味。
19、第三段写三峡春冬景色时,既描写了“”的静景,也描写了“ ”的动景,动静结合,相得益彰。(2分)
20、如果你有机会去三峡旅游,你会选择哪个季节前往,为什么,请用自己的话说明理由。(3分) 答:
(二)、《大自然的语言》片断(15分)
几千年来,劳动人民注意了草木荣枯、候鸟去来等自然现象同气候的关系。据以安排农事。杏花开了,就好像大自然在传语要赶快耕地;桃花开了,又好像在暗示要赶快种谷子。布谷鸟开始唱歌,劳动人民懂得它在唱什么:“阿公阿婆,割麦插禾。”这样看来,花香鸟语,草长莺飞,都是大自然的语言。
这些自然现象,我国古代劳动人民称它为物候。物候知识
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在我国起源很早。古代流传下来的许多农谚就包含了丰富的物候。到了近代,利用物候知识来研究农业生产,已经发展为一门科学,就是物候学。物候学记录植物的生长荣枯,动物的养育往来,如桃花开、燕子来等自然现象,从而随着时节推移的变化和这种变化对动植物的影响。
物候观测使用的是“活的仪器”,是活生生的生物。它比气象仪器复杂得多,灵敏得多。物候观测的数据反映气温、温度等气候条件的综合,也反映气候条件对于生物的影响。应用在农事活动,比较简便,容易掌握。物候对于农业的重要性就在这里。
21、根据所供材料,请你给物候学下个定义(所填不超过15字)。(2分)
物候学就是: 的科学。
22、文中划线的句子分别采用了__ ______和______ __的说明方法。(2分)
23、第一自然段中所选的三个例子能否调换顺序,为什么,至少说出两个理由,多说一个加一分(4分) 答:
24、联系你所观察到的生活实际举一个物候现象的例子,或举出一个含有物候学道理的谚语。(用一、二句话表述) (3分)
答:
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_____
25、地球是人类的家园,人类的生存要适应大自然的规律。但近年不断传出某地杏花、桃花在年前就开放,某种鸟改变了迁徙、栖息习性的消息,这都给人类敲响了警钟,学了《大自然的语言》这一课,联系其它有关文章,你认为在维护自然与人类和谐相处方面,我们应怎样努力,(4分)
篇五:八年级上册期末考作文
八年级上册期末考试作文
初中的期末考试作文命题习惯以中考作文作为风向标,所以,我们先从中考作文命题谈起。
一、剖析中考命题作文中常见几种样式:
1、命题作文的题目从形式上大体分为两种。一是直陈式,一是材料引述式,第二种形式考生在考试中出错的最多。把“为题”理解成了“为话题”。“为题”、“为话题”,一字之差,要求相去甚远:前者为题目固定,不可更改;后者是一个范围,题目需要另拟。
2、命题作文的题目从立意上分两种形式:一是立意型命题。如“一个平凡的人”“我为此而自豪”“母亲的爱”“榜样”等,此类题目一般范围清楚、立意明确;一是非立意型命题。如“雨中”“老师,我想对你说”“校园的早晨”等,这一类题目需作者根据题目的含义和暗示等信息认真分析,发挥想象,自己立意。虽可自己立意,但仍不可改题目,如真有需要,
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可在命题题目下起个副标题,这在考试中是允许的。每一个作文题目中,都有一个决定作文中心立意点的词语,我们可以把它称为“主题词”。如果作文题是一个词语的话,那么它的主题词通常就是题目本身,如《喝彩》《我》等;很多时候作文题是一个短语,那么研读题目,找出主题词,进而挖掘主题词所蕴涵的思想、情感就显得尤为关键。
3、在此基础上,练习话题作文、半命题作文和材料作文的命题。
二、东莞近三年中考作文题目
2012广东省东莞市中考语文作文:
“最美”半命题作文
2011广东省东莞市中考语文作文:
前行是脚步的积累,成长是不断前行的过程。前行的路上,有风景、梦想,有期盼、关爱,有欢笑、痛苦;前行离不开目标、坚持……一路前行,你有过怎样的经历和体验,前行引发了你怎样的思考,
请自拟一个包含“前行”这个词语的标题,写一篇不少于500字的文章,文体自选,文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
2010广东省东莞市中考语文作文:
生活中并不缺乏快乐,只要用心体味,你总能从中悟出快乐的真谛,找到获取快乐的办法,捡到打开快乐之门的钥匙……
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请以“那天,我捡到了快乐的钥匙”为标题,写一篇记叙文,不少于500字,文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
思考:1.初中作文常用主题——亲情、成长、自然、人生哲理
2.初中生作文常见文体——记叙文
3. (1)有些题目,命题者故意藏头去尾,使题目带有迷惑性,增加审题难度,用以考查考生思维的深刻性和敏捷性。如《前行》这个题目,具有一定的迷惑性,审题有难度。对于这类题目,我们可以采用添加因素法“在星辉斑斓里前行”“带上宽容前行”“前行的叮咛”等,这样,题目的意思就明确了,文章体裁也就很容易确定了。
(2)另一些带有比喻或象征性的题目,如《那天,我捡到了快乐的钥匙》等,则应注意其本体与喻体之间的关系,挖掘出这些题目背后的象征意义。钥匙,一般都是锁的心脏,只要有锁,就可以打开大门,寻觅所有的神奇。在这里,“钥匙”具有比喻义,喻指打开快乐之门的方法或方式。其实在我们的周围,有很多写作的题材,只要我们细心留心一下就能发现~
(3)对于一些抽象性的题目,如《最美》《追求》《宽容》《合作》《友善》等,写成记叙文,你可以构思成“通过一个我看到(听到,读到)的有关×××人不美或美??的故事,告诉大家生活需要??”,这时,题目“最美)”就是你的记叙文的中心思
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想所在。
三、八年级重点单元记叙文作文——“让世界充满爱”
思考之一:让世界充满爱,就是让爱心作主来关注身边每一位需要关注的人,歌颂充满爱心的人物,呼唤奉献爱心的行为。
思考之二:下笔之前,围绕中心从多方面作广泛的思考,以便打开思路。一方面,这个世界,是一个充满爱的世界,助人为乐者有之,慷慨解囊者有之,见义勇为者有之,为民请愿者有之,无私奉献者有之??选择这样的事例诉诸笔端,歌颂他们爱心的博大,感动自己和读者。另一方面,社会在进步,经济在发展,可有些人的爱心却渐趋泯灭。 “学雷锋”走过场的多了,扒手猖狂作案众人视而不见司空见惯的多了,英雄流血又流泪也时有发生了,??当我们耳闻目睹类似的情形,也可将这些内容来个“笔伐”,像当年鲁迅先生一样大声呐喊——“救救爱心~”
思考之三:用恰当的方法表达。1、以小见大。写作时,我们可以让“一滴水反映太阳的光辉”,于半瓣花上道爱心,于小事情上看大问题。“以点带面”,反映现实,观照人生。2、细节点化。“于细微处最见精神”,真实、典型、有表现力的细节最能刻画形象,表现主题,产生感人至深的效果。如一声轻轻的问候,一次及时的搀扶,一个鄙视的眼神,等等。
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四、八年级上册期末考试作文
(一)
爱,是润滑剂,是氨基酸,是人生的蜜糖。因为爱,我们的心田碧波荡漾;因为爱,我们的生活洋溢着芬芳;因为爱,我们的学业蒸蒸日上;因为爱,我们的灵魂熠熠生光……
请以“让世界充满爱”为话题写一篇文章,题目自拟,除诗歌外文体不限,不少于500字。
要求:1、写自己熟悉的人,写自己切身的事,做到以小见大。
2、写自己的真情实感,语言生动,中心明确。
参考命题:《这就是爱》、《这也是爱》、《博大的爱》等。
(二)
题目:你的 ,让我记住了你
要求:1.写一篇记叙文,写出自己的真实经历和感受
2. 不少于500字
3. 文中不得出现真实地名、校名和人名。
(三)
父母的一言一行如阳光洒遍我们成长的道路;老师的一言一行似春雨滋润我们干涸的心田;朋友的一言一行像炉火温暖我们如歌的岁月……因为,在这一言一行中,有浓浓的关爱,有谆谆的教诲,有善意的提醒,有真诚的帮助……
请以“一言一行总关情”为题,写一篇文章。
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要求:1.有真情实感,力求有创意
2.要写记叙文
3.不少于500字
(四)
凝聚亲情,才会有幸福的家庭;凝聚友情,才会有温馨的集体,凝聚爱心才会有和谐的社会;凝聚智慧和力量,才能战胜困难、实现理想……
请以“凝聚”为题目,写一篇文章。
要求:
1. 不限文体(诗歌除外)
2. 字数在500字以上
3.
(五)
成长的路上,我们品尝过多少人生百味。妈妈的一碗热汤,同学递来的一方手帕,花儿的芬芳,浩瀚书海的心香,“千里共婵娟”的情怀……带给我们许多感动。
请以“ 的味道”为题写一篇作文。
要求:1.请将题目补充完整;
2.立意自定,文体自行(诗歌除外);
4. 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名;
5. 不少于600字。
总结:请有八年级学生的老师们注意在考前从人情入手
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多给学生指导写作方向。要是想要把作文写得比较有深度,可以从冰心的诗集《繁星 春水》等优秀哲理诗文中寻找灵感。
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作文七:《关于心理描写的小学四年级作文-发卷子》1100字
发卷子
“丁零零??”我迈着沉重的步子走进教室,心里不断念叨着:今天成绩出来了,我能不能在妈妈期望的“前三名”中?万一又有粗心出错的题呢?“同学们!”老师微笑着说:“大部分同学考得很好,只是个别同学——考得不太理想。”听了老师的话,我的心紧张地提到了嗓子眼。我低下头,不敢看老师的眼神。开始发卷了,教室里鸦雀无声,只有老师发卷子的声音。当发到我跟前时,我胆怯地看了老师一眼,恰好与老师目光相逢。我看到老师微笑着脸,向我点了点头,从老师眼里,我似乎看到了老师对我的鼓励、赞赏、信任、关怀。接着,老师发下了试卷。
当我看到我的分数时,不由地大吃一惊,根本不相信自己的眼睛。“嘿!你考了多少分?”我的思绪被同桌的声音拉回来,他一边说,一边抢了我的卷子。“哇!考这么好!”惊呼一阵,还回了卷子。 知道了考试成绩后,我感觉我心里有无数只小鹿在跳。啊!自己的努力没有白费,别人玩游戏、聊天时,我在复习本上自己复习;别人上课做小动作时,我认真听讲,积极发言;别人在家玩电脑时,我在跑来跑去上补习班;今天的成绩,全靠自己的努力和汗水得来的。“全班第一名,赵晓敏,语文99分,数学、英语100分??”老师读着成绩,全班同学将羡慕的眼神投向了我,我心里不禁甜滋滋的。
发卷子
怀着忐忑的心情,我一步一步的迈进了学校的大门,心中有喜也有忧。喜是终于可以知道成绩了,忧是怕考不好回家后无法向爸爸妈妈交代。
刚进班级就听见同学们叽叽喳喳的议论着:“***打了多少分?***考了第几名?”听着他们的议论,我坐立不安,忙问他们:‘知不知道我考了多少分?咱班谁考第一?“还没等得到答复,只听见门吱吱的开了,大家立即回到座位上,原来是老师来了。
老是梳着一头卷发,手中拿着帽子和手套,用她那美丽而又冰冷的眼眸审视着每一位同学,看得我的心有些发慌。老师审视完毕后开始留寒假作业,而我却有些心不在焉,此时的焦急只为等待成绩公布的那一刻。
“??现在我公布期末考试成绩!”老师的声音在我的耳边回荡,我立即竖起耳朵立即听老师公布:“赵佳宁第一,全市第十四名,刘梦林??”我的心里慌慌的,我到底排第几名呢?“王宇鑫第六,全市第四十五名??”我悬着的心放下了,可又不免有些紧张,我才考全班第六,这么不理想的成绩,回家不会被批评吧?就这样,我怀着不安的心情向家走去。
刚进家门,妈妈就迫不及待的问我:“考了多少分?第几?”望着妈妈那期待的目光,我只好如实的说了。意想不到的是,妈妈并没有批评我,而是和蔼的对我说:“没事,考得不错,下次继续努力!”听
到妈妈的话,我有些释然了,一次考试证明不了什么,只要下次努力就好了。我一定把这次失败的教训当做进步的阶梯,一步步走向成功的顶峰!
作文八:《作文:感谢你批我的卷子》600字
感谢你批我的卷子
我是一个偏科的孩子,因为数学和语文分数差的太远,所以成绩硬生生的被挤下中下等。慢慢的,我们就要升学,老师渐渐把目光瞥向中间两组的尖子生身上了,我们班的升学率,还是得靠他们来挽救。在这里,我谢谢我的老师,你们还是把我留在中间两组。
考试的卷子,被硬生生的分成两沓,一沓是批的(尖子生的卷子),另一沓,是老师不屑一顾的卷子。以前,语文老师还是看在我的作文的份上,批改我的卷子。现在,时间越来越压缩了。可批可不批的卷子都不批了。我硬生生的被挤了出来,好在老师还保留着我的位子。渐渐地,考试次数越来越多,一张张卷子又发了下来。我的数学分数还是惨不忍睹。但数学老师仍然给我批卷子。以前我多么希望,我也被pas掉,可是,我发现,数学老师还在耐心的批我的卷子。语文老师都放弃我这个特别偏科生了,为什么你还不放弃?我感到一阵疑惑、一阵感动。
老师,我这个特别偏科生,没有什么能报答你的。我只能以后老老实实的听你的课。其实,学生们以为自己理所应当的,甚至是老师批自己的卷子,在毕业班眼里是有多么可贵。老师的竹鞭抽在手心是有多么刻骨铭心,这辈子我都忘不了,班主任皱着眉头给我的那几鞭子爱。我们从来就不像自己想象中的那么独一无二,之所以有人能从五十多人的班级里找到你,批改你的卷子,就是源于,那一份执着,那一份想要改变你的恒心!
如今,没有了红笔印的卷子显得好空旷,而我唯一能做的,只有努力学习。
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作文九:《[优秀作文]藏卷子的启示》900字
“今天要发卷子了,哈哈!这次第一名非我莫属!又可以吃肯德基了!耶!”我正在自我陶醉中。“呀,什么事把你乐成这样?”同桌问我。“昨天的考试题真简单呀,上次我考了第一,这次肯定也是第一!”“噢,是吗?那我祝贺你喽……”
“叮铃铃!”上课了,罗老师捧着一叠试卷进了教室。“啊!惨了!惨了!,老师非把我‘竹笋炒肉’不可!”“这次我考得很差,怎么办?”同学们正七嘴八舌。“安静!”罗老师猛地一拍桌子,教室里立刻变得鸦雀无声。罗老师说:“这次考试考得不够好,现在报分,李欣悦92分,王晨玥90分……”怎么还不报到我,哼,这些人算什么,我肯定比他们分高”我正想着,突然老师报到:“欧阳昊轩79分”犹如一声晴空霹雳,班上所有同学都把诧异的目光投向了我,我感到脸上火辣辣的,恨不得找个地洞钻进去。我拿着卷子,脑子里顿时一片空白,都不知道自己是怎么回到座位上的。看着试卷上的一把把鲜红的叉,我仿佛看到了妈妈愤怒的脸。
很快到了放学的时间,我垂头丧气,闷闷不乐地走在回家的路上,天不是那么蓝了,花儿也不笑了,小鸟叽叽喳喳地叫着,仿佛也在训斥我。回到家里,妈妈还是像往常一样微笑着看着我,从我身上卸下书包,放在了书桌上,就像往常一样去干活了。回到书桌上,我心不在焉地写着作业,心里忐忑不安,像十五个吊桶打水——七上八下的。怎么办呀?我焦急得似热锅上的蚂蚁一样团团转。讲实话肯定要挨骂,隐瞒又怕妈妈发现,想来想去,最后决定来个三十六计――藏为上计。于是,我迅雷不及掩耳之势将试卷藏进了书柜里,然后装着若无其事的样子继续做作业。吃饭的时候,妈妈问:“卷子发了没?”“没……没发。”我吞吞吐吐地回答道。妈妈没有再追问,谢天谢地,总算惊险过关。
第二天,我像一只快乐的小鸟一样走在回家的路上,至于试卷的事,我早就忘得一干二净了。谁知这天一进门,妈妈便板着脸问我:“你是不是藏了试卷?你知道这是什么行为吗?”“我……”我哑口无言。接下来就是一场严厉的训斥。沉默了一会儿,妈妈语重心长地对我说:“学习赶不上不要紧,但是你这样撒谎,就是欺骗的行为!一个人做人的基本品质就是诚实啊,孩子!”“妈妈,我知道错了。”我惭愧地低下了头。
一个人要诚实,这是做人的基本道理,这就是藏卷子的启示,它将使我受益无穷!
作文十:《古诗词卷子的作文》400字
六年的小学生活即将过去。回想起入学到现在,我发觉我变了。 我从一个小学一年级的小学生变成六年级的小学生;我的身高变 了;我的体重变了;从一个写字马虎的我,开始改变。 不知何时起,我发现自己在变,在微妙的变,在别人不易察觉的 变。我感觉自己变得有礼貌了,变得认真倾听了,连思想和心理也在 变。 有一天,我发现自己平时放纵大哭,变成小声抽泣;我发现我突 然从一个无知少女, 变成会处理同学之间的关系, 会注重老师的脸色; 我就觉得连自己平时讨厌写作文,文笔不好,变成喜欢写作文,也变 成“老作”了。我开始注意起自己的仪态、尊严、面子、语气…… 阿!我变了,我变了,我变了,但这一切是变好还是变坏我也不 清楚。尽管自己还有看电视、爱独立自由自在一个人,会顶一下妈妈 嘴。但如果时光允许,我宁愿不长大!我渴望回到那天真烂漫的小时 候,我渴望小时候的只看不做。我不想理那么感情丰富的世界,进入 少女时期的那种促约。不想理那些复杂的大人问题……但这一切是不 可能的! 我们只有面对生活, 面对现实, 解决这个最好的方法就是—— 活出精彩。
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