很多语法上错误，我都提出来你别介意追问

不介意 提吧提吧

等一下，我编辑一下图片

还有第二段第一句有两个动词are重复可以在are your fans前加who

其实用强调句会更出彩不知道你学了没有

学了，可怎么用呢？

It is a number of students that are your fans.看起来不复杂却又是高级句式

可我怎么觉得翻译起来怪怪的 正是这许多的学生是你的粉丝 后面是不是要再加点啥

你的文章过于强调那些写作内容的要点了，逻辑性不强，其实在开头加上一些委婉的句子都是可以的

你这句话想表达什么，我帮你加

加什么委婉的句子？

非常期待你的到来

就是感谢你抽时间看写封信

很荣幸邀请到您

之类的

I'm looking forward to your coming

在吗？

麻烦指正谢谢

英语作文评析,高分！

Attention,please!I have something to inform you.All the teachers and students are going to go the Space Museum this Saturday.We are required to gather at 7:30 in the morning at the school gate. We will set off and come back by bus.We need to prepare something to eat for lunch.We had better bring some plastic bags to carry our rubbish .Please do not throw litters about in the Space Museum.We should try our best to show our good quality to others.That's all,thank you.（你好，我基本没有改变你的原意，就是按照你写的改了几处语法错误，尤其中间的 we is going to ……这个用法有点不应该哦，再怎样也得we are going to……你说是不是？现在想起来了吧，呵呵~还有就是文章比较平淡，这是一则通知，首先要把要求用简洁明了的语句表达出来，还要注意不要一个模式的句子通篇下来，这样会显得文字贫乏。

下回多多注意哦，愿你更上一层楼哦）

作文：对老师的评价（四个老师）

My primary school in the second experiment, it is near my house, it is a great school, with more than 100 teachers. Of these, my favorite is my language teacher - Teacher Li.Li, of medium build, tall上架着一副nose glasses, looks and gentle and polite, full of kindness. Do not think you can have our very lax teachers, teachers can be strict for us. Despite this, the students still very fond of her, because she, like her mother did love us.I remember the third grade, we张荣源morning classes after school, students take advantage of a double shift is not a four-year, picked up his ball to play up the playground. Know the owner of the ball after furious. Some trivial matters have become a ＂martial arts battle.＂张荣源the boxes have been thrown into the ground, a meal to sprinkle. Lee teachers know, let me immediately to the office with two fellow students, ask the causes of the matter, kindly said to them: ＂We live in the family of schools, there should be mutual understanding, mutual help, with the error should be brave admit, this event will be of small, trivial and, the It would not have been so serious, and you say it is the truth? ＂Convinced the two are to each other sincerely acknowledge the wrong. At this time, Li 5 out of money, the张荣源said:＂ The faster you buy lunch, not hungry belly. ＂ My poor stomach, often stomach pain. One day, my stomach pain, and to lie on the table, pale. Lee teachers see me as I know the pain闹肚子quickly help a student called me to the health room. Unfortunately, the doctor on duty leave, and I had no choice but to return to the classroom and clutching his stomach.见此scenarios, Li rushed to take me to the office，倒了杯水give me drink, I immediately spit out. No way, Lee had no choice but to call the teacher to meet my grandmother so. At the time, such as grandmother, Li patting my back side, while anxiously watch to see ... ...过了好久， but also to see grandma, Li said: ＂Well,There is still some time away from school, I sent you, go home! ＂I said, patrol adulterated home.Half on the road, I满眶tears止不住. I secretly determined: the future, I also do a teacher, such as Li did not only teach students the knowledge, but also to use their love to care for them.Time flies, among the twinkling of an eye into the high school, the teachers you all right? Three years ago the autumn season, you give us that glimmer of a smile, that the words ＂believe in yourself and you can do it＂ gives us the inner world into a powerful driving force. I can clearly remember the day you first greeted a group of childish our children are not off, you kind of smile that I still remember so far.You get used to class exultant, flying lessons under the expression, so we have to fall in love with your math classroom. You get used to Christmas. To the students each made of Christmas red, after graduating from the generosity invites us to eat, regardless of whether or not the remainder of the economy, you always used to say ＂brothers and sisters, like snowflakes,＂ can we laugh拐个弯to you掉渣territories.Under Section under Section Youtong you the Yin Yin Cantonese played a sad song, o-class students said that what she experienced, we have carefully inquired about the language teacher, used to be you on the Northeast Normal University after graduation, in order for the younger brother, sister university, the school sent on to give up just continue to seek opportunities to become a willing secondary school teachers, we say that you silly people, it was great that you may be accustomed to it that your brothers and sisters like snowflakes.The experience of those of you still remain in the class style, rhythmic writing on the blackboard, thinking clear and thorough way, so that we can hardly go beyond the bounds of mathematics. Powder dust in three years time, your brother, sister who is already into an ideal university. You have always told us that hope that we can, like her siblings realize our vision, also said that the brothers and sisters are born of the snow, fell on the ground, into water, will no longer be separated from the. We believe that it is your sincere and then tell how heavy the weight is ... ...Roadside tall poplars, swaying in the wind fine green leaves, made clear as the voice of water. Fresh leaves in the moonlight under the issue of mapping the faint sheen. Cool and spread over the夜风roaring, enough to make people feel more of them gliding. Dissemination of a silver-white tears deep breath quietly slipped, fell on the night mysterious and deep, spreading the wings fall youth, fell in the bottom of my heart where the softest.Time flies！光阴似箭， now I have entered a middle school affiliated Chittagong, when ...

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(1)Share of Spirit of the Olympic Games As 2008 Beijing Olympic Games is drawing nearer and nearer, we can feel the special atmosphere of the (2)game everywhere through various forms of Olympic advertisements (3)in television, (4)rodio and newspapers. At the same time we are looking forward to this great international event, it is quite necessary (5)of us to take (6)sometime (7)thinking about the spirit of the Olympic Games as well and what we can learn from it. Overall speaking, the spirit of the Olympic Games can be characterized by “mutual understanding, friendship, unity and fair play”. Though invisible, Olympic spirit has always played an indispensable role in the Olympic Games throughout its history by encouraging athletes to observe rules of the games, face and compete (8)with strong rivals as well as respect and cooperate with people from other nations. Since the spirit of mutual understanding, friendship, unity and fair play is (9)in common for everyone of us despite our differences in nationality, career, position and social rank, Olympic spirit is not merely confined to sports and naturally we can share it in other fields and put it into practice in our daily activities. (10)In a word, only by wide spreading and sharing this praiseworthy spirit, (11)can we make greater contributions to (12)Olympic movements ,and perhaps, even the social harmony and development(13).这篇文章写得很流畅，要得15分以上应该没问题。

既然你提出指正和改进，我就与你探讨探讨吧。

1. 既然是标题，应该用sharing 较准确；建议Sharing The Spirit of Olympic Games2. 你指的是奥运会，应该用大写Games，用game会被沦为某一种游戏。

3. 你这里表达的意思应该用 on television。

4. radio 的笔误。

5. 应该用for us。

6. 这里sometime 要分开，否则“一些时间”变成“有时”了。

7. 我建议用to think。

8. 应该是compete against 。

9. 应该是in common with。

10. 既然不能一个字总结，当然就不能用in a word。

建议用In short; In a nutshell。

11. 这句话不该用逗号分开。

12. 这里应该加the 来明确你指的Olympic movements。

意见仅供参考，希望共勉。

评论一个人（人物简介+个人评论）英语作文

aw: when the object is accelerated or changes its speed, the change rate is proportional to the external force. For example, if the force is doubled, the acceleration will also be doubled. The greater the mass (or the amount of material) the object is, the smaller the acceleration is (the same force acting on the object with a mass of two times the acceleration.) The car can provide a well known example of the greater the engine power, the greater the acceler

英语作文影评

《阿甘正传》观后感Forrest GumpIt is one of the greatest novels that I have ever read. The main role called Forrest Gump.Let me introduce him shortly. Forrest Gump, who is unfortunately born with a rather low IQ, has already created a miracle, achieving a great deal of incredible success. He is a football star, a war hero, and later a millionaire. Stupid as he is, he gains his brilliant life indeed.At the beginning of reading this novel, I thought an idiot's life must be more difficult than others. His life must be full of mocks. My thoughts are proved in the book. Because he is an idiot, all the people look down upon him. Most of boys don't want to share one seat with him on bus; many bad guys throw stones to hit him; he cannot be allowed to study into primary school at first; Jenny is the only girl that he loves all his life. But she thinks Forrest Gump doesn't understand what's love at first ……After finish reading this novel, I learned a lot. Sometimes I think he is not a fool but a genius. His attitude to life is even clever than ordinary people.Firstly, he is optimistic. He doesn't do anything wrong but the society is unfair to Forrest. I felt very sad to him. However, Forrest is as optimistic as his mother .he always remembers his mother's words: “ stupid is someone who did stupid things.” He does not do something stupid.Secondly, he has strong willed. Because his IQ is lower than others, he has to concentrate on one thing. So he does well on everything he works. He loves jenny from the first sight at her to her death. At last, he gets married with her and has a son; he runs for 3 years just because he likes running; he loads a gun faster than other soldiers…Thirdly, he is ideal husband. He is a man with a sense of responsibility. He loves Jenny very much. When others hurt her, he tries his best to protect her. He can earn a lot of money and he is a famous person in America.So he is clever than others. Maybe a lot of people say he has good lucks. But I think character is bond to person's fate. His attitude and his efforts to life make him has a happiness results at last.In addition, I want to say something about destiny.Sometimes we think god gives everyone different fates. Someone has good looking while someone is born in rich family; someone is good at sports while someone is good at arts. Take Forrest for an example. He is a fool but he has talent on sports, such as running or playing pingpong.so everyone has his or her own gifts. God gives him a great mother. She is clever. She can earn enough money to support her one parent family. She I is also optimistic. She never feels ashamed of her son. She is proud of her son. She never thinks Forrest is a fool. She wants her son can lead a life as an ordinary person. In order to let him study into school, she has sex with the headmaster. She is also intelligent. Every night she reads some books for Forrest and tells some simple truths to him. Such as “There's an awful lot you could tell about a person by their shoes. Where they're going. Where they've been.” “Life is like a box of chocolates, you never know what you are going to get.”Thus, do not complain that you do not have something. Just like yourself and make your advantages better and better.Sometimes we think we have bad luck. But in fact it is a good thing for us. I remember one classic sentence: life is like a box of chocolates; you never know what you will get from it. For example, because Forrestalways runs to avoid being hit by stones, his speed is faster than others. So he is chosen to baseball team and become to a famous player. He is so excellent that he has got chance to meet president. So whenever you are in trouble, do not think it is a bad luck. It is just a challenge. After overcoming it, you will gain more than you lost.For me, I want to say, last one month I got very bad luck. I got break up with my boyfriend and I met traffic accident on my way to school. And my back was hurt. Because of being shot CT, a lot of acnes appear on my face. Furthermore, my study is influenced.At first I felt very sad. I cannot know how to deal with it. I think I lost a lot of things. After reading the book, I changed my mind. The accidence makes me lost a lot of things. Meanwhile it also made me gain a lot of things. I gained a lot of love from my classmates, my teachers and my relatives. I become mature. And now I pay more attention about my health. If I can overcome this terrible thing, I will be great. And I can lead a splendid life in the foreseeable future.After reading the novel, I watched the movie. As the beautiful music, there is a beautiful feather dancing with the breeze, finally lighting at the foot of Forrest Gump ...

请英语专业人士帮我评评这篇作文..

有几个小的语法错误， Wih the development of our social,more and more people have an idea of relaxing themselves,and listening the music is surely one of the most important ways to do so。

这句话中，social应改为名词society.＂have an idea＂改为＂have the idea＂,listen是不及物动词，应该接＂to＂. 免费最好的说法是：free of charge.整片文章中，music都用了复数，复数是表示不同种的音乐，如果就是指听音乐，那就是单数。

finding music最好用searching for music，有搜索的意思。

make a affect 这个词组是错误的，直接用affect就行了，或者是have an effect on.这两个词很容易弄混淆。

another people 的表达错误，another修饰单数，而people修饰复数。

改为other people。

＂make the music be known ＂中去掉be i think 和 in my view重复了，删掉一个。

最后一句话中的is可以去掉，尽管不去掉本身在语法上也没有什么错误，（feel后面直接接了一个宾语从句）可去掉后会更简练，明快。

推荐去掉。

主要的毛病还是语法上的，一些词组的误用，冠词之类的。

还出现一些啰嗦的句子。

i think this way is a right way.中第一个way可以去掉。

a 变成 the. 还有一句是get music which they like，可能在这个地方，你像运用一下定语从句，可是，这个定语从句用着显得很啰嗦，像在拼字数。

可以直接写成 get their favoriate music. 我这样找毛病是为了能够帮助你提高你的英语写作水平，当然，四级老师改卷子应该不会有这么仔细了，不过一些很明显的小语法错误还是要尽量避免，因为一些老师看的时候会很烦感。

当然，这篇作文引入的很好，第一个句子中用的with结构很不错。

四级应该没问题的，我对你有信心，平时要加强英语一些习惯用法的积累以及多多朗读或背诵一些英语小短文，可以培养语感，那些冠词之类的错误可以减少。

预祝你在四级中能够取得好成绩。

80英语作文评论和建议英语老师张颖,最好附中文

My English teacher is Miss zhang .She has two big eyes ,a small mouth and long curly black hairs .She is very beautiful . She is good with kids ,she likes piaying English Games with us .So we like having English Class very much .She is love us very much .We are good friends .She comes our class every morning ,and teaches us to read English Words.So our English lesson is the best we all love her

关于评论电影的英语作文

第1篇 英文：Although Lei Feng left in a hurry, but leave us precious wealth. -- ＂Lei Feng, the shock of universal name! When it comes to Lei Feng, my heart is always filled with respect and gratitude, especially after watching the movie ＂Lei Feng＂, this move is particularly strong.No smoke of the battlefield on the screen, but each picture was so touching story; no extraordinary, plot twists and turns, but every detail was so exciting......The movie ＂Lei Feng＂ tells the story of Uncle Lei Feng put one's heart and soul into serving the people's story. Was this a seemingly ordinary things, make Lei Feng in the hearts of the people to establish a very tall figure.＂No matter what position, I will do everything in my power, tried in every way to serve the people.＂ This, Lei Feng -- a good son of the people! Outstanding member of the Communist party!Each plot in the film is deeply moved me, however, the most let me unforgettable is Lei Feng for the victims.Once, Lei Feng and his comrades driving transporting flood control materials to the disaster areas, to unload supplies, Lei Feng do not eat rice will return. Before he left, he took the opportunity to sneak an envelope was ready on the table, the envelope marked ＂with one hundred yuan donated to the disaster areas the people's Liberation Army soldiers＂. Beam director of the flood control headquarters after know, hurried to catch up, want to put the money back to Lei Feng, Lei Feng would take? Then, the beam director to see Lei Feng fall down an old pair of socks have mixed feelings, said: ＂you, you're wearing the socks, has donated one hundred dollars!?＂ He turned, the presence of people said: ＂comrades, this is not the one hundred dollars and a pair of thousands of joint million patch socks, this is a tremendous spiritual wealth!＂As you can imagine, this ＂one hundred yuan＂ was how huge amount! This can not but let us ponder: with only six yuan monthly allowance, save one hundred yuan of money is how not easy! However, who knows, Lei Feng's life is very simple: thirsty, refused to drink a bottle of that only five cents of soda; heat, even a sweat towel also did not carry...... But put those old socks, fill fill...... However, the people in the disaster areas have a difficult time, but he had no scruples, loosen one's purse strings generously, this is such a huge contrast!At this time, the screen where everyone was excited; now, I had tears off screen. Who is not for Lei Feng's noble deeds and moved?What is this spirit? This is work hard and perseveringly, thrift revolutionary spirit. Lei Feng's good qualities of this selfless dedication, sacrifice oneself to protect others is proud of the Chinese nation, is the pride of the Chinese people!＂A man's life is limited, but service to the people is limitless. I will dedicate my limited life to infinite serve for the people.＂The film ended, Lei Feng's voice still echoes in my ears, my heart is not quiet for a long time -- although Lei Feng left us too early, however, he has left us with a very great wealth. This wealth, for you, I, he, the benefit of the whole society. I believe, this precious wealth will forever be handed down from age to age！翻译中文：雷锋虽然匆匆地离开了，然而却给我们留下了宝贵的财富。

——题记 雷锋，这个震撼环宇的名字！每当提起雷锋，我的内心总会充盈着崇敬与感激，特别是在观看了电影《雷锋》之后，这种感动尤为强烈。

银幕上没有硝烟弥漫的战场，可是每个画面竟那么感人至深；故事里没有离奇、曲折的情节，可是每个细节竟那么扣人心弦…… 电影《雷锋》讲述的是雷锋叔叔全心全意为人民服务的故事。

竟是这一件件看似平凡的小事，使雷锋在人们的心中树立起无比高大的形象。

“不管在什么岗位上，我都要尽一切力量、想一切办法去为人民服务。

”这，就是雷锋——人民的好儿子！优秀的共产党员！ 影片中的每个情节都深深地感动了我，然而，最让我难以忘怀的是雷锋为灾区捐款的事。

一次，雷锋和他的战友驾车给灾区运送防洪物资，卸下物资后，雷锋饭也不吃就要返回。

临行前，他趁机偷偷地把早就准备好的一个信封放在桌子上，信封上面写着“内有一百元捐给灾区人民解放军一战士”。

防汛指挥部的梁主任知道后，急忙追出来，想把钱还给雷锋，雷锋怎肯收下呢？这时，梁主任见到雷锋落下的一双旧袜子，百感交集地说：“你，你就穿着这样的袜子，却捐出来一百块钱！？”他转过身，对在场的人说：“同志们，这不是一百块钱和一双千缝万补的袜子，这是一笔巨大的精神财富！” 可以想象，这“一百元”在当时是多么庞大的数额！这不能不让我们深思：凭着每月仅仅六元钱的津贴费，积攒下一百元钱是多么不容易啊！然而，又有谁知道，雷锋的生活是多么俭朴：渴了，不肯喝一瓶当时仅仅一毛五分钱的汽水；热...

好心人~帮我评论一下这篇英语作文吧（四级的）

With the development of the Internet, more and more people prefer to shop online these days.（提出现象） Some people are in favor of online shopping for its convenience. While others are concerned about the problem of online shopping, such as the security of customers' accounts, the credit of online shop owners, etc.（陈述大众观点：支持者肯定首要理由是方便，个人认为这里提到government有点多余，另外的观点可以用while连接，担忧可以用be concerned about，另外你所要表达的密码不是code，应该是password，这里就说the security of customers' accounts顾客账户的安全就行）。

As far as I am concerned, online shopping is a reflection of the development of science and technology, which is affecting our everyday life. It brings much more convenience to shopping and has aready been part of our life. As for me, I enjoy online shopping a lot. However, those problems must be solved or it will harm customers' interests. I strongly suggest that the government should have more regulations about online shopping and the customers be more cautious when shopping online.

我对英语的看法 作文

My view on EnglishWhat's the use of learning English. Against I learned over the years has been useless, is a waste of resources and manpower. It is necessary to popularize English? Take a look at the people after graduating from college, now there are a few people really can use English? Spread English so, personally think that is a major national policy mistakes. 70% of the students to study the energy on English, there are some of my classmates speak English more than Chinese more fluently, less grammar mistakes, do you still dare to say oneself is a Chinese? Don't know if you notice, 80% of people are learning English to a result, learned later shelved, in later life is no use. Why not take English as an elective course?Students have interests and hobbies will naturally to study, and learn the along while also won't classmates there would be no need to go to learn English. Someone said, study English is not. Which I see not, first of all is to interest, people will naturally interested in to learn. I dare say, engaged in English work on dinner now are interested in English. Needs the necessity for graduation, employment, and to learn English to several people within a year after again met an English word? Say say early forced to learn English for children. Said Chinese maxim doped inside a few English words almost has become a fashion now, so speak what beauty in where? Seem to be very learned? I'd like to ask, what you said is mandarin or English. I think make now the so-called chinglish grammar that is part of the reason.

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