作文一:《看图英语作文》600字
为了提高学生的英语口语水平,新华中学将举行一次英语演讲比赛。请你以学生会的名
义按照下面内容写一篇通知:
1.参赛对象:九年级学生;
2.报名时间与地点:截止10月10日,学生会办公
室;
3.比赛时间与地点:11月8日下午2点,学校礼
堂。;
4.比赛前三名优胜者将获奖;
5.欢迎全体学生去听演讲比赛。
注意:1. 词数;80左右;
2. 不可逐字翻译,可适当发挥;
3. 提示词:英语演讲比赛---English Speech Contest
【参考范文】
Notice
Dear students’
In order to improve students' oral English, our school will hold an English
Speech Contest for the junior middle school students in Grade Nine in the school
hall. It will start at 2:00 p.m. on Nov.8. Don’t you want to take the opportunity?
Please sign up before Oct.10. The top three petitors will win the prize and get
nice presents. All the student are wele to attend it!
作文二:《英语看图作文》8500字
Today the quality of our natural environment has bee an important issue. The world population is rising so quickly that the world has bee too crowded.
今天,我们的自然环境质量已经成为一个重要问题。世界人口增长如此之快,世界已变得过于拥挤。
We are using up our natural resources and at the same time polluting our environment with dangerous chemicals. If we continue to do this, life on earth cannot survive.
我们正在利用我们的自然资源,同时污染的危险化学品的环境。如果我们继续做这个地球上,生活无法生存。
Concerned people have made some progress in environmental protection. Governments of many countries have established laws to protect the air, forests and sea resources and to stop environmental pollution.
有关人士取得了一些在环境保护方面的进展。许多国家的政府已建立了法律保护,空气,森林和海洋资源,并停止对环境的污染。
Still more measures should be taken to solve environmental problems. People should be further educated to recognize the importance of the problems, to use modern methods of birth control, to conserve our natural resources and recycle our products. We are sure that we can have a better and cleaner place in the future.
但更应采取措施来解决环境问题。人们应该进一步的教育,认识到问题的重要性,使用现代节育方法,以保护我们的天然资源和循环利用我们的产品。我们相信,我们可以有一个更加美好,更清洁的地方。
What can I do for our environment?
Everyone can do something for our environment. For me, I should try
to save electricity in my daily life. For example, if I am the last person
leave the classroom in the evening, I will always remember to turn off the
lights. In order to protect our forests, I will use paper wisely. I should try
to use both sides of paper whenever it is possible. I will not use things
like paper cups and disposable chopsticks because they are made of
wood. I believe that doing all these small things will improve our
environment and help make our world a better place to live in.
China is a great country with the largest population in the world. In order to solve the population problem, our government decides to implement one-child policy. When it is carried out for some time, many people not only see its advantages but also disadvantages. Thus, people argue that two-child policy should be put into effect. In my opinion, two-child policy should be carried out. 中国是一个人口大国。为了解决人口问题,我国政府决定实施独生子女政策。执行一段时间后,许多人不仅看到了这个政策的优点还有缺点。因此,人们开始推崇二胎政策。在我看来,二胎政策是应该实施的。
First of all, two-child policy is the gift for some only child. For some families, maybe the parents are only child and they also can have only child. Put aside the loneliness of their child, when their child grows up and they grow older, their child marry with an only child girl accidentally, the burden on their child and his wife is unimaginable heavy. Their child and his wife have to take care of two old couples. Usually, a young couple looking after an old couple is a little difficult; if the pressure increasing twice, how can they stand it. But if their parents have two children, they can share the burden of taking care of their parents. It would be much better.
首先,二胎政策对于一些独生子女来说是天赐的礼物。对于一些家庭来说,也许父母都是独生子女,而他们也只生一个孩子。抛开孩子的孤独不说,当他们的孩子长大了,而他们也变老了,他们的孩子又和一个独生子女结婚,这样的话, 压在他们孩子和孩子妻子肩上的压力是不可想象的。他们的孩子和他的妻子不得不照顾两对老人。通常,一对年轻的夫妇照顾一对老人就有点难了;如果压力增加了一倍,他们怎么能忍受呢。但是如果他们的父母有两个孩子,他们就能分享照顾父母的压力。这样会比较好。
Secondly, two-child policy can guarantee the number of Chinese population. As the widely spread of one-child policy, some people have changed their conception about giving birth. If they firmly believe one-child policy, there will be more and more the dink. After several decades, our country
will famous for lack of population.
其次,二胎政策可以确保中国的人口数量。由于广泛宣传独生子女政策,有些人已经改变了他们的生育观念。如果他们认同独生子女政策,就会有越老越多的丁克族。几十年后,我国就会以人口短缺而著名了。
In conclusion, one-child policy has out of date. And tow-child policy is needed and necessary. It can solve the problem of nowadays and the future.
总之,独生子女政策已经过时了。二胎政策是必要和必须的。这可以解决当前和未来的问题。
May day 五一
The pictures vividly reveal that heavy traffic is being increasingly serious all over the world. There is traffic congestion on the road with numerous cars, trucks and buses.
翻译:这些照片生动地揭示了交通拥挤正在全世界变得日益严重。道路上交通堵塞,充满无数轿车、卡车和公交车。
We can deduce from the pictures that the painter is trying to attract our attention to the issue of heavy traffic. First of all, every year men and women crowd into cities in search of employment, a decent living, and the excitement and stimulation of urban life. As people in mounting numbers flood into cities, city services and facilities have been strained to a breaking point. In addition, since in a city with booming industry, land is precious and cannot be extravagantly used by traffic, traffic flows constantly rise to fill whatever scale of roads and highways are provided for them.
翻译:我们可以从这些图片中看出:摄影师正在努力吸引我们关注交通拥挤问题。首先,每年人们涌进城市寻求就业机会、体面的生活以及都市生活的激动与刺激。由于越来越多的人涌进城市,城市服务与设施的承受能力已经到达临界点。此外,由于在工业迅速发展的城市中土地非常珍贵,不能被交通过度利用,无论公路和高速路修建到何种规模,车流总是不断地增加,直至挤满道路。
It is imperative for us to improve this situation. For one thing, the number of private cars should be limited while more bus routes should be opened up because buses can acmodate more passenger. For another, more streets and roads should be constructed. Since neither of the suggestions can effectively solve the problem, there is an increasing awareness that the two solutions may be bined with other possible solutions to produce the best effect.
翻译:我们迫切需要改进这种状况。首先,由于公交可以运载更多乘客,我们应该限制私车的数量,开辟更多公交线路。其次,我们应该建设更多道路。由于这两个措施都不能单独有效地解决这个问题,人们越来越意识到为了达到最佳效果,我们可以把这两个措施和其他可能的措施结合起来。
In the picture, an old lady is sitting in front of a cake. She is saying to herself in the mirror: “The children are not in my pany. I feel rather lonely.” The picture reveals one of the serious problems of our modern society.
With better living conditions and better medical care, people can live much
longer than before. But how to take care of them has bee a big problem,
which we must cope with seriously.
It is reported that there are more than 160 million people aged over 60 in
our country. The percentage of old people is still increasing and many families
are confronted with problems ing along with old people. The fast tempo of
modern life has left people little time and energy to look after their old
parents. On the other hand, some people take their old parents as their burden
and treat them badly. As a result, many old people feel neglected and live in
great loneliness and helplessness, especially when they are suffering from poor
health.
Something should be urgently done to help these lonely old people. First
of all, those who have old parents should take the responsibility to take good
care of them. The government should set up more nursing houses for old people,
especially for those who have no children and who are physically and mentally
disabled. More importantly, there should be more organizations providing
financial, medical and legal assistance for old people. In a word, special
efforts should be made to help old people to spend their later years of their
lives fortably and merrily.
As the mobile phone is more and more widely used in classroom, even on campus began to play popular mobile phone. With the mobile phone function is more and more intelligent, games, chat has bee many student entertainment project, slowly, mobile phone start encroached on students learning time. At the same time, mobile phone also provides great convenience for our lives, interest relatives and friends very fast, very convenient. But in school we should put an end to the mobile phone. In class on mobile phone related class, in the class rules added to mobile
phone use in the classroom, make students feel a heartfelt admiration and acceptance, the parents' meeting to inform parents of this provision, the parents cooperate with.
Every coin has two sides,the same is true of the cell phone.On the one hand,It's a convenient tool for us to municate with others,so that we won't worry about where we are and when it is.On the other hand,as the cell phone games bee more and more popular,many people lose themselves in playing games and kill time doing something worthless.
All in all,for the sake of the development of the cell phone,we people need to use it properly.
如何承接上一个人的话:
If what you said is true, then...
If I understood you correctly, then it is implied that...
I agree with your perspective on XXX, however, I disagree with ...
Thank you for explaining XXX, but I do have a question on XXX
肯定或否定对方观点并提出自己的观点并举例
Your description of XXX is very interesting, but I am concerned about what you said regarding XXX, I, on the other hand, believe XXX, for example, ....
打断(要快!):
yes, yes, you're right...but please do remember, XXX
一般来说,我都不会打断别人(非常不礼貌),如果是小组讨论应该设立发言时间限制。
冷场:
since we are all contemplating on the topic, let me summarize what we have so far: XXXXXXX, any ments?
作文三:《英语看图作文》1300字
观察下面的图画,根据图画的内容写一篇短文,说明你和你的爸爸对暑假的不同看法。
短文必须包括图画的主要内容,可以适当增减细节,使内容连贯。
词数100左右。生词:拐骗 (kidnap vt.)
范文:
The summer holiday which I’m looking forward to is ing. What great fun it is to go
fishing! Playing football is one of my hobbies. I can climb high mountains or ride my bicycle. Sometimes I can play chess with my father. How interesting my holiday will be! But my father is always afraid I will be hurt by a truck, fall into the water, or fall off a tree. He is also afraid I will fight against others or be kidnapped by bad men. But if I’m careful and polite enough, how could these things happen? What’s more, I think it is impossible for parents to keep their children in a cage like birds for safety. I must try my best to persuade my father.
2009年高考英语看图作文预测03
参考例文:
A man is using water as much as he likes washing his clothes regardless of the notice pinned above "Save the water Please."(人们随心所欲的用水洗衣服,毫不在意
“请节约用水”的标牌。)
As we see,water is the source of life. But there is very limited available water resources in our world,so we shouldn't waste it. Of course,we have to use it to
drink,cook,wash,clean and etc. But we must remember not to use it extravagantly. If we didn't stop such wasteful habits,we would cut off the development of the world and the human life. And what will our next generation use,
作文四:《英语看图作文》1900字
第一步:认真看图,确立主题
结合文字和图画,确立所要表达的主题是什么。 主题是:李华要做些家务事来为他的妈妈庆祝“3.8”妇女节。
第二步:围绕主题,提炼要点
第一幅图:李华把他的主意告诉父亲
第二幅图:李华扫地、父亲洗衣服
第三幅图:李华和父亲下厨房做菜
第四幅图:餐桌上有花瓶、饮料、鱼、肉等等
第三步:合理想象,补出要点
第一幅图:李华为什么要把他的主意告诉父亲, 求得父亲的帮助或配合
第二幅图:李华和父亲为什么要选择做家务,这些家务平时都是由母亲做的
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第三幅图:可想象他们做了除图画表现出的 fish, pork外,还有没有其
它菜 。比如: chicken, soup and other delicious dishes. 第四幅图中没有一个人出现,为什么,留给考生进行合理的想象:李
华和父亲是不是藏起来了,其目的是什么 :可能是等母亲回家时以给
她一个惊喜。
第四步:确定时态,译出要点
确定表达时所用的正确时态,将围绕主题初选出的要点和经过合理想
象补出的要点翻译出来。
本篇叙述的是李华一家过去某一天(“3.8”妇女节)所发生的事,应该
用过去时来进行表达。
第一幅图
On March the eighth, Women’s Day, Li Hua had a good idea and told his father that he was going to do something to celebrate it. He asked his
father to help him.
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第二幅图
They decided to do some housework, which was always done by his mother. Li Hua cleaned the house pletely. His father did some washing.
第三幅图
They made a good meal, cooking fish, pork, chicken, soup and some other delicious dishes.
第四幅图
Li Hua laid the table and set a vase full of flowers in the middle of the table. They hid themselves behind the door, waiting for Mother. They wanted to give her a happy surprise. When his mother came back and saw delicious dishes and drinks on the table, she felt very curious and happy.
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It was March the eighth that day, Women’s Day. Li Hua had a good idea
and told his father that he was going to do something to celebrate it. He asked his father to help him. First they decided to do some housework, which was always done by his mother. Li Hua cleaned the house pletely while his father did some washing.
Then they made a good meal, cooking fish, pork, chicken, soup and some other delicious dishes. Li Hua laid the table and set a vase full of flowers in the middle of the table. After that they hid themselves behind the door, waiting for Mother so as to give her a happy surprise. When his mother came back and saw delicious dishes and drinks on the table, she felt very curious and happy. The family had a pleasant festival.
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作文五:《英语看图作文》6200字
第一篇 量体裁衣:具体问题具体分析
Directions: Study the following cartoon
carefully and write an essay in which you
1) describe the cartoo
3) point out its implications in our
范文1
:
This cartoon is silly, and yet
pelling: a large customer holds a
hopelessly small piece of cloth as the tailor carefully measures. Such an image suggests that one needs to consider
practical reality in the pursuance of goals. Merely acting on one's desires, while ignoring the facts at hand, cannot lead to
[Describe and explain the
cartoon]
The fact that currently there are more graduates than jobs reminds us of the importance of rational thinking. Every year approximately 3 million students graduate from universities and begin looking for work. Many of them fail to find suitable employment because there are simply not enough opportunities to acmodate such great numbers of graduates. In addition, however, one might also cite
flawed individual assessment as a reason.
[Use example to interpret the meaning of the cartoon, use concrete/specific example
to expound abstract/general idea]
In order to create a realistic target for one's future, one must make rational decisions and prepare accordingly. A student who aims to be a surgeon, for example[transitional device], must take care to acquire opportunities to do clinical practice and gain sufficient knowledge. In other words, customers would do well to take accurate measurements before purchasing their fabric. A small piece of cloth cannot adequately clothe a large person[echoing the first paragraph]. 范文2
:
In the cartoon we can see a large person being measured by a tailor to get
suitable clothes made. Anything to be done must be measured in advance so that we are able to find a proper way to do it. If the tailor does not take measurements of the man, then he would not be able to make suitable clothes for this person.
[Describe and explain the cartoon]
This same principle applies to solving any other problem. Firstly, when we want to know the reality of something, we must describe it like it is, getting rid of our
prejudices and exaggerations, so that we can have an unbiased view. Secondly, the object should be analyzed in a concrete way so that we can grasp the reasons and
rules of it. Thirdly, we must adapt our approach to solving a problem, for each situation is different from the others. So we must view a problem from different
perspectives. [use parison to expound the cartoon]
The cartoon implies different meanings to different people. A teacher should adopt different teaching methods according to the students in the class; a doctor should prescribe different treatments according to the patient's symptoms; a farmer should seed different plants according to the various conditions of the earth. From a philosophical point of view, dissimilar
problems should be approached differently. Good results e from attentive analysis of a problem. [Use example to interpret the meaning of the cartoon, use
concrete/specific example to expound abstract/general idea]
第二篇 金字塔是由一块块石头积累成的
Directions:Study the following picture carefully and write an essay in which you should
1) describe the picture,
范文1
:
One glance at a pyramid can leave the viewer in awe of its beauty and splendor. Upon closer examination, however, one might be surprised to
discover that such a grandiose structure is posed entirely of ordinary
stones. [Description about the picture]
Most people are familiar with the proverb: Rome was not built in a day. An object as grand as a pyramid is likewise not so quickly or easily constructed. Just
as the greatness of the city of Rome is due to the bination of its smaller parts, a pyramid is only as strong as the stones it is prised of. The image of a pyramid reminds us that great success is in fact an accumulation of small
achievements. [Explain or expound the meaning of the picture, the perspective of the writer]
History proves that many famous artists and scientists are only successful because of their continued efforts, even after numerous failures. One might recall Leonardo Da Vinci's drawing of an egg, Wang Xi Zhi practicing handwriting, or
Thomas Edison inventing the light bulb, for example. The fable that tells us that even water can eventually pierce through stone also points to the importance of patience and diligence. We should take such stories and histories into account and remember the importance of fundamentals;
remember that one can build a pyramid only if one is willing to work with small stones[echoing]. People would be wise to abandon rash inclinations and instead try in earnest. Perseverance is sure to lead to success .[Use concrete/specific examples to expound the meaning of the picture]
范文2
:
We can see in the picture, a great Egyptian Pyramid towering magnificently into the sky. [Description about the picture] At first sight visitors may be overwhelmed by the pyramid and cannot help but marvel at the huge stones in front of them — the embodiment of patience and endurance of an Ancient Egyptian Civilization. During this extended period of building, one can only imagine the amount of patience and endurance that was required by the people before any of this greatness was to be achieved. [Explain or expound the
meaning of the picture/ the perspective of the writer]
The stones of the pyramid remind us of a famous saying: “Rome was not built in a day,” that is, great things are never done without much time and labor.
As human beings, we are eager to win merits for ourselves. It is, however, only patience as well as endurance that can help us to succeed in performing great deeds. [topic sentence] In the case of Si Maqian [example], without those brilliant qualities mentioned above, he could never attain such great achievements. Difficulties are unavoidable, unless we do not engage
in anything at all. In the end, it is patience and endurance that counts.
Some people would give up halfway in the face of what seems to be
insurmountable. Men of such a type can hardly expect to succeed. We must take a step-by-step approach to acplish
everything until we get the final result. The reason is very simple: if one attempts to climb a mountain, however high he
reaches, he has failed if he does not reach the top.[further explanation]
作文六:《英语看图作文》6500字
(一) 做好书面表达题的方法步骤
1.要认真审题
在提笔写作之前,花几分钟时间,弄清题目揭示的内容、格式、时间、环境是非常必要
的。可以避免出现文不对题的现象,也可以避免因反复造成的时间浪费。
审题包括:
(1)仔细阅读写作要求和提示,在重点词下画线,以引起重视和注意。
(2)用、、……或a 、b 、c……等方式排列要点,把材料分成主次。
(3)确定作文的体裁、格式和人物。
(4)在提示和图画旁写出人名、地名和难单词,以避免拼写错误,确保卷面整洁。
(5)确定作文的时间主线——时态。考生的作文最易出错的就是时态,因此要特别注意
运用最恰当的时态来表达写作内容。
审题非常重要,主题把握得不准确,会影响学生水平的正常发挥。以2005年上海高考
为例,作文要求如下:
Directions: write an English position in 120-150 words according to the instructions given
below in Chinese.
古人云:“天生我材必有用”(There must be a use for my talent.)请你描述你生活中的一件
事,说明人各有所长,无论才能大小都能成为有用的人。
这是一篇材料作文,要求考生以“天生我材必有用”为题,根据自己生活中的经历, 写
一篇120-150字的小型议论文,说明人各有所长,无论才能大小都能成为有用的人。笔者认
为这是一篇开放性作文,尽管有明确的写作范围,但是这个范围仍然是开放的;因为每个人
的经历、思维能力等与其他大部分人是不同的,是有独特性的,这就为“百花齐放”创造了
条件。坦率地说,如果考生有代表性、典型性的事件是再好不过了,把事件来龙去脉讲述清
楚,这样的事件真实而且有说服力。但是,如果没有典型的事件该怎么办呢?那就合情合理
地编造,或者把发生在他人身上的事情移植到自己的身上就可以了。(具体范例请参考后文)
2.审题后便可以动笔作文
作文时一定要注意以下几点。
(1)写作一定要切题、抓住要点。题目要求的内容,都应该写进去,以保证内容的完整;
其它细节,虽然相关,也不宜多写,不要“拣了芝麻丢了西瓜”;对于与要求无关的内容不可
随意发挥,更不可为了表现英语水平默写文不对题的句子,画蛇添足。书面表达不是作文(不
能海阔天空,无限扩展) ,不是翻译(无须拘泥原文,一字不漏) ,只要把基本意思表达清楚即
可。如果考生的英语水平不是特别好,就应选一些简单的句型来表达内容。不要使用过于复
杂的句型,避免语法错误。
(2)写作必须注意格式。在写作时,特别是写应用文时要注意它的格式,汉语与英语的
写作格式有很大区别。比如,英语信和汉语信的格式不同。英语信的第一页右上角要写上写
信人的地址,顺序从小到大,从门牌号、街名、城市、省份、直到国名,日期应写在地址的
下面,不少考生把汉语信的格式照搬到英语书信来,日期写在信的未尾签名下边,地址顺序
从大到小。由此可见,考生在平时就要注意英语写作的格式,加强训练。
(3)写作必须注意语法正确及用词得当。
在写作不同题材和体裁的文章时,所用的句式、时态、语言特征及用词也不相同。在写
作时,考生要多从交际的角度考虑问题。以写信为例,要考虑写信的目的,写信人与收信人
之间的关系,什么是对方已知或未知的信息,等等。每写一句话,都要符合写信人的身份,
符合英语的习惯,达到传递信息的目的。写信如此,其它体裁的短文也是如此。
(4)写作切不可用汉译英的方式进行。在写作时,考生不要把题目中的汉语指令直接译
成英语,要尽量消除汉语式的英语,用简练的、地道的英语来写。
(5)写作应连贯、流畅。
要用自己最熟悉最有把握的词句写作,少用复句和长句,多用简单句,短句和主动句,
正确使用连词;要用多样化的句子结构和句型使所表述的语言流畅、自然;一旦遇上一时表
达不出的内容时就换个说法。虽无需像中文作文那样构思谋篇,但仍要有个大体构想,尤其
要开好头。
(6)注意书写规范,大写、缩写、标点符号准确。
3.检查
写完后要认真通读全文,查找是否有下列错误:a .动词的时态和语态;b .单词拼写;
c .冠词;d .语序;e .名词单复数;f .主谓一致;g .句子的完整性;h .标点、格式、字
数等。
不同形式的议论文的写作
在高考写作部分各种体裁的文章中,议论文的比重是最大的,考法是多种多样的,
提示为话题式的、提示为要点式的、提示为数理统计图表式的、提示为文字图表式的、
提示为图画式的和提示为书信式的。议论文(Argumentative Essay) 的作用在于论述某种
道理,论证某个观点,有力地说服对方,让读者对你的观点产生共鸣,表示认同。写议
论文要抓住三个要点:论点(theme)、论据(evidence)和论证(attitude)。如何写好议论文的
首段非常重要。好的首段有利于表达文章的主题和拓展作者的思路。好的开头既是作者
思路的最佳起点,又是这一思路得以进一步拓展以完成总体构思的保证。作文要得高分
的同学,必须注意,每一句句子都不能是多余的,应该善于利用每句话展示你的才华。
首段应该占全文的20%-30%,也就是在20到35个字之间。议论文的结尾段与首段
一样重要。应该精心制作、生动有力。要想方设法将文章的内容加以浓缩、提炼。结尾
也不必把什么都说尽,而是要留下余韵,让读者品尝文章的弦外之音,味中之味。
I hated the room for several reasons. First of all, it was hot. There were a lot of
people crowded together in the room and their bodies gave off a warm, moist heat which
was unpleasant. Second, it was ugly. The walls were gray and bare, and the windows
were dirty. Some of the windowpanes were broken. Most important of all, the room
smelt bad. The air was filled with the smell of sweat and strong perfume. After being
there for ten minutes, I could hardly wait to get out.
[分析]
(1)议论文有时也对否定的事情进行论证。上面的范文就是这样的例子。
(2)首先开门见山提出论点—我不喜欢这所房子,理由有三。
(3)列举理由时要会运用表示层次、排列次序的词语。如:First of all, Second,
Most important of all等,使读者获得一个清晰的概念,从而感到理由充分。
(4)学会有效地选用和巧用连词。本文所用的First of all, Most important of all
引出的理由步步强化,铿锵有力,使读者感到作者提出的理由具有相当的说服力。
(5)文章列举的理由除了从外观上的描述外,更多的是通过作者的感受来写,
字里行间流露出作者的思想感情。
(6)文章中谓语动词用的是过去时态,表示对过去某件事或物的看法。如果写
现在的看法,也可以用一般现在时。
画式议论文
图画式作文是英语高考试题常采用的一种书面表达形式。其特点是通过观察和分析单幅
或一组画,把图画内容转化成文字信息。它能有效地考察学生的观察能力、想象能力和语言
组织及运用能力。
写图画式作文要认真审图。若审图不当或错误,就有可能脱离主题甚至闹出笑话。要审
好图,需从整体上把握图画所呈现的主要内容,处理好人物与时空的关系及局部与整体的关
系,找出文章的线索或主题。图画作文需要丰富的想象,要把平面的、静止的东西向三维扩
展形成立体的、动感的结构。而将这个转变过程紧靠简单、平白的句子是不能达成图画作者
的原意的。因此,“丰满的想象 + 变化的表达”既是对原作的升华,也是获取高分的途径。
图画作文的结构一般如下:第一段描述图画,一般不超过三分之一篇幅,第二段揭示画
旨,一言即可,第三段发表评论或提出建议,占主要篇幅。
Directions: Write an English position in 120-150 words according to the picture and
instructions given in Chinese.
简要描述图片内容,结合生活实际,就图片的主题谈谈自己的感想。
On a crowded bus, an old man hadn’t got a seat. He was so weak that he could hardly keep
standing. But no one offered a seat to him. The young men beside him even laughed at him. This
is a mon occurrence nowadays. But it seems quite out of place in a civilized society.
I think everybody should know how to respect the old. First of all, in public places we should
show concern for the old. On a bus, we should let them get on first. If there is no seat left, we
should be willing to offer them ours. In hospitals, cinemas or railway stations old people should
also be given the highest priority.
In families, the old are always feeling lonely while the young are usually busy with their
daily work. As a younger generation, we ought to find time to talk with them. Sometimes we can
spend the weekends together with our grandpas and grandmas.
When we all realize the importance of respecting the old, everybody will live happily in a
civilized society.
[分析]
本文行文老练,第一段描述了图画大意后,在第二段的开头写出全文的主题句。接着,
作者分在公共场所和在家里如何尊重老人论述,层次清晰。
2006 全国高考作文
假定你是李华。应英国朋友Bob 的要求,写一封短信介绍你校图书馆的基本情况。内容
须包括下面两幅图中的相关信息。
注意:1. 词数100左右; 2.可以适当增减细节,以使行文连贯; 3.开头语已为你写好。
June 8
Dear Bob,
Best wishes,
Li Hua
内容要点:
1. 图书馆的位置:前有花园,后有教学楼
2. 内部环境:宽敞、有书架、报刊、书籍等
3. 图书馆功能:借阅、借阅数量和借期 4.开放时间 5.合适的结尾
One possible version:
June 8
Dear Bob,
Thank you for your last letter asking about our library.Our library is in the center of the
school. There is a beautiful garden in front of it and four classroom buildings are right behind it.
The library is big. When you get inside, you will see many shelves full of books on different
subjects. There are also lots of newspapers and magazines. We borrow books and do some reading
in the library. According to the rule, every student can borrow up to 5 books each time and keep
them for 10 days. It is open from 9 a.m. to 7 p.m. from Monday to Friday and closed on
weekends.We all like our library very much.
Best wishes.
Li Hua
简要描述图片,并谈谈你对学生在业余时间参加过多的补习和培训的看法。
II.Guided Writing.
One possible version:
In the picture stands a boy with furrowed brow and drooping mouth. He was dreaming of playing plane models and sports all the time, yet he is unfortunately pelled to attend different kinds of extra classes. This picture ironically depicts a typical Chinese student.
Although taking extra courses sometimes does help, the positive effects are overshadowed by negative ones. First, theses courses make them sit all day long working problems out. It certainly consumes a lot of time which otherwise can be spent in developing plenty of hobbies. Second, these extra courses are tiresome. Attending so many courses, students may feel tired both physically and mentally. Scientific studies clearly show that the better sleep people enjoy, the clearer mind they will have. And there may be another point we must consider. I think the main reason why many students attend extra classes is that they hope to keep up with others. And that can bring them so much trouble.
I ’m deeply convinced that children under a low pulsory system will actually develop in an all-round way.
作文七:《英语看图作文》1800字
The picture shows that: a little white rabbit wanted to eat mushrooms. But there was a river in front of the road, the river flowed very fast. The little rabbit couldn’t go across the river by himself, so he asked Uncle elephant for help. The Uncle elephant let the little rabbit climb on his back and carried him across the river. With the help of Uncle elephant, the little white rabbit crossed the river, and picked a basket of sweet and fragrant mushrooms. Finally, the little white rabbit gave the mushrooms to Uncle elephant. The picture really set me thinking, and we can learn something important from it. Helping others has always been a virtue in traditional Chinese culture. As an old saying goes, “ Roses given to others, fragrance left in your hand”. In our daily life, we should help other people as much as we can. I believe that helping others will benefit yourself as well.
At the same time, a man’s strength is too small, only cooperation can achieve. Cooperation is the path to success. No matter how fast our society develop, I’m greatly convinced that only cooperate with each other, can we make greater contributions to our society. In a word, it is cooperation that makes the world a better place to live in.
(这是图片的另一种描述,大同小异,只是时态和人称与上边稍有差别,你可以自行选择。
The picture shows that: on a cloudless morning, a little white rabbit wants to eat mushrooms, so it goes to the park happily. But there is a river in front of the road, the river flows very fast. The little rabbit thinks of it: I can’t go across the river by myself, but I can ask Uncle elephant for help. The Uncle elephant said: it’s very simple. Climb on my back. I’ll carry you across the river." With the help of Uncle elephant, the little white rabbit crossed the river, and picked a basket of sweet and fragrant mushrooms. Finally, the little white rabbit gave the mushrooms to Uncle elephant. )
作文八:《英语看图作文》2200字
作文. 训练
【2012四川德阳一诊】2011年12月11日国务院法制办就我国校车安全条例草案征求意见稿正式全文公布,广纳民意。请你根据下列表格的内容为某英语网站写一篇短文。
注意:
1.对所给要点逐一陈述,适当发挥,不能简单翻译。
2.词数150左右。开头已经写好,不计入总词数。
3. 作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。
Legal Affairs Office of the State Council of China publicized the exposure draft of School Bus Safety Regulations on Dec. 11th, 2011 to collect public opinions. ______________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________
【2012厦门质检】
【题目要求】
下面这幅图展现了小明在放学路上因公交车故障欲向路人借手机联系父母的情景。请根据你对这幅图的理解用英语写一篇短文向《中学生英文报·会热点栏目》投稿。
1.简要描述图片内容;
2.结合自身实际,谈谈你的感想。
注意:
1.可根据图片提示及内容要点进行适当发挥;
2.词数120左右。开头己经写好,不计入总词数。
【2012三明市联考】这幅漫画表现了高校考研大军为备战研究生考试去图书馆占座位的情
形,据中国日报报道,今年研究生报考人数突破160万人, 再创历史新高,请写一篇英语
短文,试分析促使越来越多大学毕业生选择考研的原因。
注意:1. 130词左右,开头已给,不计入总词数。
2. 注意语言的得体性、准确性、和连贯性。
参考词汇:job seekers求职者;
professional skills专业技能;
fierce petition激烈的竞争
【2012平顶山期末】假如你是王霞,你的美国朋友Ashley 说他将在三月初来中国。请你
根据下表提供的信息为他推荐两个旅游点。词数:120字左右。
Dear Ashley,
______________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely
Wang Xia
【2012·金华十校期末】 在现实生活中,许多父母亲的要求与子女的行为表现并未能达到
一致。
请根据右边的图片,写一篇短文,内容包括:
1.描述漫画内容;
2.说出其中的寓意;
3.发表你的观点。
注意:
1.可适当增添内容,使文章层次分明,行文连贯。
2.字数120左右。
3.开头语已为你写好【不计入总字数】
As can often be seen in our daily life, many parents have expectations which are too high for
their children to reach.
【2012·宝鸡一次质检】假如你是李华,你的美国网友Mr .Smith 将来你所在的城市
工作,曾发电子邮件希望你为他找一处合适的房子。你正好在淘房网站看到一份招租广告,觉得很符合Mr .Smith 的要求,请你发份英文电子邮件给Mr .Smith 介绍这套房子的情况,并征求他的意见。房子情况如下:(1)位于市中心商业区,交通便利,环境优美。(2)面积80
平方米,宽敞明亮。(3)房间天然气、暖气、家具、空调等必备设施齐全。(4)房租价格合理,每月仅1000元。其房子位置和户型如图所示:
注意:
1、短文须写在答题卡的指定区域;
2、短文的词数不少于l00(不含已写好的部分)
3、内容充实,结构完整,语意连贯;
4、书写须清晰、工整;
5、邮件中不能体现本人真实信息。
Dear Mr.Smith,
I’m very glad to h
【2012·西安一次质检】假设你是李华,学校学英语社团将举办主题为“Live a low-carbon life”演讲比赛,你准备参赛,请你写一份100词以上的发言稿。
写作要点:
1.陈述理由:为什么要过低碳生活?
2.如何过低碳生活?提出至少三条建议。
3.倡议同学们过低碳生活。
要求:
1.短文须写在答题卡的指定区域。
2.内容充实,结构完整,语意连贯。
3.书写需清晰,工整。
Hello everyone,
Thanks.
【2012海淀期末】近期某网站就校车安全问题进行了一次社会调查,结果见下图。请
根据图示用英语写一篇短文,介绍调查结果并谈谈你的看法,供有关部门参考。词数不少于
60。
注意:1.文章的开头已经给出。
2.提示词:报废车
abandoned vehicles
Recently, a survey on school buses has been conducted on a website
【2012湖南四市九校联考】请你根据下面这幅漫画的理解用英语写一篇短文。你的短文应
该包括一下内容:
A. 这幅漫画描述了什么?
B. 这幅漫画想要告诉我们什么?
C. 请结合你的生活经历,发表你个人的看法。
D. 字数:150字左右。 词汇:温室:green house
作文九:《英语看图作文》1800字
how to keep psychologically healthy
众所周知,随着社会的飞速发展,很多人在精神上遭受到不同程度的压力,比如工作压力、家庭压力甚至是情感压力等等。据调查研究表明:全年平均1/4的人会遭受到精神问题的困扰。由此可见,精神问题越来越成为人们普遍存在的一大问题。
那么是什么原因使得现如今精神问题如此普遍呢?当然大部分是来自于工作,比如工作中遇到的不顺心的事,和同事之间的相处问题等等。家庭方面比如当下比较普遍的长辈催促赶快结婚之类,情感方面的比如和恋人之间小矛盾等等。总之只要生活在社会中,多多少少会在精神上受到困扰。这些都可以称之为精神问题,并且是不可避免的。
面对生活中可能存在的精神问题,我们该如何解决呢?我觉得,当我们在精神上有困扰的时候,首先不要极度反感,而是用正确的态度面对它。摆正心态,放松心情;用积极的心态去面对。当你觉得自己无法释怀时,可以求助心理医生,让医生帮助我们解开心结。不要觉得去看心理医生非常丢脸,每个人都或多或少有一些心理问题。我相信,只要早点发现,早点解决,我们就能远离精神问题的困扰,快乐健康地生活下去。
As is known to all, with the rapid development of society, many people have been varying degrees of pressure on spirit, such as working pressure, family pressure, and even emotional stress, and so on.According to the investigation and study showed that the annual average 1/4 people suffered from mental problems.Mental health problems, therefore, more to more widespread existence of a major problem.
So what makes mental problems now so prevalent?Mostly es from the work, of course, such as encountered in the work of those things, get along with colleagues, etc.Family aspects such as the urge to get married when paring mon elders, such as emotional than like and small contradiction between lovers and so on.Anyway as long as life in the society, more or less mentally disturbed.These can be called god problem, and is inevitable.
Problems facing the life of the spirit, how can we solve?I think, I think, when we are troubled in spirit, first of all, don't resent, but with the right attitude to face it.Adjust state of mind, relax;With a positive attitude to face.When you think you can't let go, can turn to the psychological doctor, let the doctor to help us solve.Don't go to see the psychological doctor very embarrassed.i, everyone is more or less some psychological problems.I believe that as long as found early, early solution, we can stay away from the mental problems, happy and healthy life.
作文十:《英语看图作文守株待兔》6400字
英语看图作文守株待兔
篇一:一年级作文:守株待兔
一年级作文:守株待兔
今天,我看了〈〈守株待兔〉〉这篇成语故事。讲的是:有一位农夫在耕地,正好有一只兔子一头撞在了树干上死了。从此以后,农夫也不在种地了,天天坐在树旁等啊等。最后田地也荒了,再也没有撞死的兔子了。
最近,我也遇到过这样的事情。我在学校捡到了一串钥匙,我交给了老师,受到了老师的表扬。从此以后,我天天看有没有钥匙。我真是个小傻瓜~我把偶然当成必然了。
篇二:寓言故事与英文作文
寓言故事與英文作文
摘要
寓言故事因其篇幅短小、語言簡約,同時兼具故事性及道德教訓,可以拿來作為高中生英文摘要及讀後感寫作的最佳練習教材。本文首先介紹寓言故事發展的歷史沿革,並舉希臘伊索、法國拉豐丹、德國雷辛、俄國克雷洛夫、托爾斯泰及美國索伯等寓言故事家的作品為例,說明各寓言的不同精神。第二部分探討摘要及讀後感寫作的基本原則與步驟,並舉學生作品為例,驗證其可行性。結語部分兼論中學英語作文教學的三個迷思。希望透過這個
寓言教材的分析與討論,以提高中學英語文寫作的教學成效。
關鍵字:寓言故事;摘要;讀後感。
壹、前言
今年(2000年)大學入學考試中心首度推出「英文寫作能力」測驗,作為將來英語能力檢測及升大學的參考依據。雖屬試辦性質,但也引起各高中師生、家長、及關心英語教學發展的各界人士的高度重視。英文寫作能力的測驗,以往都附在其他能力的綜合測驗當中,只占部分的比例,未能完全測出學生對英語文運用的真正能力。現在獨立出來自成一科,也相對顯示出寫作能力作為英語能力指標的重要性。
今年的題目分兩部份四類題型。第一部份:句子合併、片語造句、簡答題各五句。配分60分,36分為及格。第二部份:作文。配分40分,20分為及格。作文題目取自伊索(Aesop)的寓言故事,,The Country Mouse and the Town Mouse,(附錄1)。答題要求考生閱讀該寓言後,寫出自己的感想。答題須分兩段作答:第一段包含寓言的摘要及寓言的寓意;第二段則寫出讀完該寓言後的感想或心得。
作文測驗的題型不斷在改變,傳統的方式只出一句話作為題目,要學生依此寫一篇文章。這樣的題型現在已經逐漸被引導式的題目所取代。引導式的題目一般都
以學生的生活經驗為題材。這回以寓言故事來命題,卻是頭一遭。寓言故事因為它的文章結構(form)簡明,但是內容(content)
意涵豐富,非常適合拿來當作中學生的作文練習材料。尤其是寓言故事可以傳達人類共同的生活經驗,學生們除了語文的練習外,還可以透過不同的文化接觸,拓展閱讀的深度與廣度,開啟生命的智慧。
這篇短文分兩部分:第一、簡介寓言故事的性質特徵、歷史發展、及其精神。第
二、針對寓言故事的閱讀與寫作,探討故事摘要的寫作原則與步驟,以及讀後感想的寫作模式。結論部份兼論中學裡的閱讀訓練及寫作時常存有的幾個迷思。
貳、寓言故事
寓言故事是一種古老的文學表現形式。一般而言,它的篇幅不大,文字簡明,結構單純。寓言故事以擬人或比喻手法,間接影射或嘲諷世情,以傳達生活智慧的目的。寓言故事作為一種民間文學,源遠流長,歷久彌新,是一種雅俗共賞的文學體裁。所謂「寓」,即是寄托轉喻。也就是說,寓言故事在語言文字的表面陳述底下,另有一深層的生活哲學寄寓。因此這表面的敘述與底層的寄寓就構成了寓言故事的兩大要件。十七世紀法國著名的寓言詩人拉豐丹(La Fontaine)就有一個很貼切的說法:「一個寓言故事可分為身體與靈魂兩部份。所述的故事好比是身體,所給予人的教訓好比是靈魂」(qtd. in 馮凡 1)。
寓言故事盛行於古老的東方文明古國。最早的寓言寫作可以追溯到西元兩千年前的古印度。佛祖釋迦牟尼的《百喻經》首開宗
教寓言先河,扮演了開啟智慧的法門,成為佛教傳播的利器。中國在春秋戰國先秦時代,也是寓言故事高手輩出的時代。道家的《莊子》、儒家的《孟子》、還有《列子》、《韓非子》、《呂氏春秋》等都含有許多精彩的寓言故事。在這個多元思想蓬勃發展的時代,諸子百家,紛紛採用寓言故事,借其語言生動、說服力強的特性,來傳播一己思想。國人熟悉的「杯弓蛇影」、「愚公移山」、「掩耳盜鈴」、「畫蛇添足」、「自相矛盾」、「守株待兔」、「庖丁解牛」、「狐假虎威」、「黔驢技窮」都是這一時期的精彩作品 。
寓言故事多大都由不同文化的民俗或民間傳說轉化而成。西方的寓言故事源自古西臘,其最著名的寓言故事當屬《伊索寓言》(Aesop?s Fables)。所謂《伊索寓言》,並不是伊索一個人的創作。早在伊索之前,就有許多的寓言故事流傳在世。西元前六世紀,希臘奴隸伊索,因善說寓言故事,獲得賞識,允為自由人。伊索雲遊帝國諸多城邦領地,收集不少各地精采的寓言故事。伊索因自己出身奴隸,再加上走訪各地,第一手接觸市井小民生活,最能了解強權當道下,
社會不公,正義不顯,以及惡政壓榨之下的民間疾苦,因此他的寓言故事常借動物來批判時政與嘲諷人性。伊索死後,後人將這些以詩篇傳頌的故事,加以編撰添補,並以散文的型式將之記載下來並將它稱之為《伊索寓言》。這些故事陸續被翻譯成拉丁文,隨後又被翻譯成各種不同的語言,早已成為世界文化的共同資產。清末林紓翻譯《伊索寓言》,將西洋的寓言故事介紹到中國。現今
我們在台灣的學生對《伊索寓言》中的許多動物故事,例如龜兔賽跑、狼與牧羊人、旅人與熊、狼來了、擠牛奶的女孩、守財奴、,北風與太陽,、,狐狸和葡萄,、,狐狸和烏鴉,、,驢子和主人,等等,早已耳熟能詳。 伊索的寓言故事有一特定的寫作模式:他故事中的主角大抵以動物為主,所選用的動物依據其各自的特性來形塑故事與教訓。例如狡猾的狐狸、貪婪的狼、惡毒的蛇、笨拙的驢子。他的寓言將動物「擬人化」(personification),並穿插士農工商各種不同階層的人物,透過這些人與動物間,或動物與動物間的的對話行動來表達特定的道德教訓。這樣的風格對後世對寓言創作,影響深遠。伊索之後,西方陸續出了不少重要的寓言作家。其中又以法國的拉豐丹(La Fontaine)、德國的雷辛(Lessing)、俄國的克雷洛夫(Ivan Andreevich Krilof)等三人最為著名。
十七世紀法國作家拉豐丹仿伊索的寓言寫作模式,創作了許多充滿醒世與嘲諷的作品。例如,國人熟悉的鐵匠與富翁 (?The Cobbler and the Banker”)的故事(Spector 355-356)。快樂的鐵匠每天早上在騎樓下,一面工作,一面歌唱,賺的錢不多,但是心情愉快,因為自由歌唱,所以從不覺得修補皮鞋是一件辛苦的工作。一位富翁住在樓上,每天一早就被這位鐵匠的歌聲吵醒。這位富翁便告訴鐵匠,說「我給你十萬元,但是以後你工作的時候不能再唱歌」。鐵匠想到不費力,便可得到十萬元,不加思索,便一口答應。此後,鐵匠只能閉著嘴工作,修補鞋子變成一件沉悶
的負擔,心情鬱卒,每天都悶悶不樂。後來幾經思量,決定退回金錢,取回自己的快樂。這個故事告訴我們快樂無價,金錢不能換取快樂。 十八世紀德國啟蒙運動作家雷辛,也受了伊索的影響,寫了許多膾炙人口的動物寓言故事。例如,沒有自知之明的,鵝,( “The Goose”)(附錄2)。有一隻鵝,因為牠羽毛潔白如雪,就自以為是天鵝的化身。於是便刻意遠離牠的同伴,每天單獨、驕傲、得意地繞著池塘展現牠的美姿。牠模仿天鵝,伸長脖子,希望自己不夠長的脖子,能夠像所有的天鵝一般,有一個優美的弧形。但是這一切卻徒然無功,因為牠的頸子,又短又硬,怎麼也沒辦法像天鵝,結果牠不但失掉了同伴的認同,而旁觀的人也從不認為牠是一隻天鵝,牠仍然只是一隻可笑、平常的鵝。雷辛借這個故事批判凡人盲目,自以為是,缺少自知之明的荒謬。
十九世紀的俄國作家克雷洛夫的寓言故事集,承接伊索、拉豐丹的批判精神,以暗諭及旁敲側擊的方式,發揮寓言故事的藝術,針貶世情時事,對當時沙皇的時
政,多所批評。他的作品風箏( “The Kite”)就頗耐人尋味(Krilof 206-07)。一張飛入雲霄的風箏得意的對遨翔在山谷間的蝴蝶說,「當你在下面看到我時,你必須承認你很羨慕、很嫉妒我可以飛得這麼高。」蝴蝶聽了之後馬上回答說:「嫉妒你, 才不呢。你沒有資格如此自豪。雖然你飛得高,但是永遠被一根繩子給緊緊綁住。這種日子怎麼能稱得上是快樂呢,雖然我飛的沒有你高,但是我卻自由自在,愛往哪裡飛,就往哪裡飛。我不是別人的玩物,
也不是他人愚蠢的娛樂而已」。這個簡短的故事說明了自由的可貴,唯有做為自己的主體,擁有自主意識,生命才有存在的價值。
十九世紀末另外一位俄國的大文豪托爾斯泰(Leo Tolstoy),也寫了不少寓言故事。但是他的作品很少採取伊索用一句警語來作結束的傳統,他不為寓言故事下結論,而將故事的詮釋留給讀者自己來決定。他的作品商人與錢包( “The Merchant and the
Purse”)敘述一位商人丟掉皮包,內有兩千大洋,商人昭告大眾,將賞金一千元給拾獲者。有一名工人撿到皮包,交還給商人。商人想到平白損失一千元,心有不甘,便開始後悔。於是他捏造一個謊言,說皮包裡還有一顆寶石,如果這位工人把寶石還給他,那他將給工人兩千元。於是工人上法庭控告商人不守諾言。法官聽完兩方陳述之後,告訴商人說,「這只皮包裡只有兩千元,沒有寶石,所以這不是你丟掉的皮包。工人可以保管皮包,直到遺失者來認領時再歸還。至於你,只好繼續去尋早你丟掉的那只皮包」。這位貪婪的商人,只好乖乖地把一千大洋送給工人(Tolstoy 50)。
寓言故事並不是古代人的專利,現代人也喜歡以寓言的方式來表達思想。例如,索忍尼幸(Alexander Solzhenitsyn)就以篝火與螞蟻 (“The Bonfire and the Ants”)來說明人對故土家園的認同與眷戀。故事的敘述者放火燒枯枝,寄居在木頭裡的螞蟻受不了高溫烈火,拼命往外逃離。敘述者把木頭拿離開烈火,螞蟻很快地逃到沙地和松針上。可是過了不久,螞蟻似乎克服了灼燒的恐懼,開始繞著烈火兜圈子,但尤於某種神秘的力量驅使,他們又回到
熟悉的家園裡去。有許多螞蟻甚至於爬上燃燒中的木頭,壯烈地結束自己的生命(Solzhenitsyn 19)。 當代美國作家索柏(James Thurber)也擅長以寓言來針貶現代人的夫妻關係。他的 “The Unicorn in the Garden” 就是一個很有名的例子(Thurber 65-66)。一天早晨,丈夫告訴妻子說,花園裡有一隻全身雪白,而且頭上長著金角的獨角獸正在吃玫瑰花。妻子睡眼半開,斥責丈夫胡言亂語,與瘋子無異。她說獨角獸只是傳說中的怪獸。丈夫走回花園後,妻子打電話給精神科醫生與警察,說她的丈夫看到獨角獸,請他們快來家裡。精神科醫生與警察到了之後,再次聽到妻子對獨角獸的陳述,兩人機警的交換眼神,迅速將妻子綁起來。這時丈夫走進屋子來,警察問他:「你有沒有告訴你太太說你看見花園裡有一隻獨角獸,」丈夫答道:「當然沒有。獨角獸是只傳說中的怪獸。」精神科醫生與警察立刻將妻子帶走,送到精神科醫院治療。此後,丈夫就過著幸福快樂的日子。這篇預言的教訓
是: “Don?t count your boobies before they are hatched.”。索柏是一位幽默的作家,擅長文字遊戲。這篇短文當然是對伊索預言裡,賣牛奶的女孩,的教訓,, “Don?t count your chickens
before they are hatched.” 的模擬與改寫。
參、摘要及讀後感寫作
寓言故事,一般說來,篇幅短小,文字簡潔,沒有艱深誨澀的修辭,也沒有繁複的情節,同時兼具故事與道德教訓,最適合作為中學生閱讀與寫作練習的教材。當前的英語教學趨勢,強調以
內容為本的(content-based)指導,以此觀之,寓言不但有內容
也有教育價值,是一個理想的教材。今年的寫作能力測驗要求閱
讀伊索寓言後,寫一則摘要與讀後感。以下我就依這個方向,分
兩部分來分別探討相關的教學活動。
一、摘要寫作
根據John M. Swales 和Christine B. Feak的研究,一個好的摘
要必須符合以下三個原則:
1. It should offer a balanced coverage of the original. (There is a tendency to devote more coverage to the earlier parts of the source text.)
2. It should present the source material in a neutral fashion.
3. It should condense the source material and be prese
nted in the summary writer?s own words. (Summaries that consist of directly copied portions of the original rarely succeed.) (Swales 105-106).
摘要的寫作在本質上是對原文的模擬與重述。也就是要將自己
所閱讀的文章以簡短的篇幅作重點式的重述。這種重述必須平均
兼顧文章的主要元素,不能太過於偏頗,也就是比重要均勻。再
者,摘要的目的是要精簡的掌握文章原作者的大意,所以在書寫
的過程要為持一中性的態度。也就是不能對原文添油加醋,也不
發表己見,評論原文長短。但是最重要的一點是,我們必須用自
己的話來書寫摘要。
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