作文一:《个人情感初中英语作文》25100字
篇一:2014届中考英语作文专题范文:Unit6 Feelings and
Moods (情感与情绪)
Unit6 Feelings and Moods (情感与情绪)
1、 What’s Cool?
This week, I asked students about fashion. I showed each student six things and asked them about each one. Some of their answers were interesting. Here are their likes and dislikes:
Jack Smith likes the key ring. Her friend Jeff says he can’
t stand the scarf. “It’s for moms!” he said. William Jones
loves the wallet, and his classmate Gina Taylor loves the watch. (Her best friend Ann Rice doesn’t mind the watch,
but she really likes the sunglasses!) Jerry Green also likes the sunglasses.
And the coolest thing was the belt. Everyone loved it!
2、 Dear Mary,
I have a problem, an I need your help. I always thought I was popular at school. But I just found out that my friends
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were planning a birthday party for my best friend, and they didn’t invite me. Everyone else in my class was invited except me, and I don’t know why. I can’t think what I did
wrong. I’m very upset and don’t know what to do. What do
you think? Can you help me? Yours, Lonely Kid
3、Restaurant science
Restaurant owners have to know how to make food. They also have to know how to make money. Here are some things they’ve learned from scientific studies. The color red makes people hungry. Red also makes customers eat faster. Many fast food restaurants, therefore, have red furniture or walls. Soft colors like pink and light blue make people relaxed, so they spend more time eating their meals. Soft lighting makes people look good, but it makes food look bad. Loud music may be nice at first, but it soon makes people want to leave. Hard seats also make
customers want to eat quickly and leave. Many
restaurants, especially fast food restaurants, use this knowledge to make customers eat faster. Customers only sit for about 20 minutes before they leave. Because customers don’t stay very long, small restaurants can serve many people every day.
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4、Advertising: pros and cons
In the modern world, advertising is everywhere! Some people think that ads are great. Others hate ads, saying that they make our cities and countryside look ugly. Many ads are aimed
specifically at teenagers, and some young people see more than 100 advertisements a day. It’s true that some ads can
be very useful. For instance, they can help you to pare two different
products so that you can buy the one you really need. They can also help you save money. When
prices are listed, you can go to the store with the lowest price. Ads also tell you when stores are having sales. However, some advertising can be confusing or misleading. Sometimes the words sound good but don’t really tell you
anything about the quality of the product. At other times, the picture in an ad looks a lot better than the real thing. And you have to be careful. At times an ad can lead you to buy something you don’t need at all.
5、Dear Diary,
I thought today was going to be really bad. To start with, it was raining, and rainy days make me sad. And it was my
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birthday, but when I got up, no one was home, and Mom and Dad hadn’t left me a note. I walked to school with my best friend, Gu. She didn’t say anything either. This made
me a little angry. After all, I remembered her birthday last month. In class, the teacher asked me for my homework, but as I was so tense when I left home, I had forgotten to bring it with me. That made me annoyed with myself. But things got better. Gu invited me for lunch. I was so
surprised. Mom and Dad and all my friends were there. I had a wonderful surprise birthday lunch. That made me VERY happy.
Unit 7 School Life and Language Learning (学校生活
与语言学习)
1、Dear Jane,
It’s Tuesday, November 11. I’m really busy! At 8:00 I
have math. I don’t like math. Then at 9:00 I have science. It’s difficult, but interesting. Next, at 10:00, I have art. It’s
boring, but at 11:00 I have P.E. That’s my favorite subject! I
eat lunch at 12:00. After lunch, I have music. Music is relaxing. I like music teacher, Mr Cooper. He’s fun. My last
class is at 2:00. After class I have volleyball for two hours. Our teacher is very strict and I’m usually very tired after
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class. Then I have Chinese history club. It’s really
interesting!
Lin Mei
2、Dear grandma,
How’s it going? I hope that grandpa is well now. I was sorry to hear that he had a cold last week. I hope you are in good health.
Things are fine here. I finished my end-of-year exams last week and got my report card today. I always get nervous when I see the envelope from school in the mail, but luckily I did OK this time. I had a really hard time with science this semester, and I wasn’t surprised to find that my worst
report was from my science teacher. She said I was lazy, which isn’t true. It’s just that I find
science really difficult. Another disappointing result was in history. My history teacher said I could do better. The good news is that my math teacher said I was hard-working. And my Spanish teacher said my listening was good.
Well, that’s about all the news I have for now. Mom and Dad send their love. Love, Alan
3、 How do you learn best?
This week we asked students at New Star High School
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about the best ways to learn more English. Many said they learnt by using English. Some students had more specific suggestions. Lillian Li, for memorizing the words of pop songs also helped a little. When we asked about studying grammar she said, “ I never study grammar. It’s too
boring.”
Wei Ming feels differently. He’s been learning English for
six years and really loves it. He thinks studying grammar is a great way to learn a language. He also thinks that watching English movies isn’t a bad way because he can
watch the actors say the words. Sometimes, however, he finds watching movies frustrating because the people speak too quickly.
Liu Chang said that joining the English club at school was the best way to improve her
English. Students get lots of practice and they also have fun. She added that having conversations with friends was not helpful at all. “We get excited about something and then
end up speaking in Chinese,” she said.
4、 How I learned to learn English
Last year my English class was difficult for me. First of all, it wasn’t easy for me to
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understand the teacher when she talked to the class. To begin with, she spoke too quickly, and I couldn’t understand
every word. Later on, I realized that it doesn’t matter if you
don’t understand every word. Also I was afraid to speak in class, because I thought my classmates might laugh at me. I couldn’t always make plete sentences, either. Then I started to watch English-language TV. It helped a lot. I think that doing lots of listening practice is one of the secrets of being a good language learner. Another thing that I found very difficult was English grammar. So I decided to take lots of grammar notes in every class. Then I started to write my own original sentences using the grammar I was learning. It’s amazing how much this helped. Now I am
enjoying learning English and I got an A this term. My teacher is very impressed.
篇二:2014中考英语作文范文
2014中考英语作文范文
2009年广东中考作文
The Teacher I Never Forget
How time flies! Three years have passed since I became a middle school student. I had very good memories of my classmates and teachers. The teacher I never forget is Mr
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Zhang, an English teacher. He is kind and friendly. He helped us not only in class but also after class. About two years ago, Mr Zhang noticed that I was worried about my poor pronunciation. So he offered me many suggestions to improve it, and he also gave me every chance possible to speak in class. With his help, my pronunciation has greatly improved.
I must say many thanks to Mr Zhang. I wish him a healthy and happy life in the future!
2010年广东中考作文
How to Keep Safe in School
Do you know our school life could be dangerous if we are not careful enough? For example, one day, two students ran after each other in the hallway. Suddenly, one of them fell down and hurt his leg because of the wet floor. Therefore, he had to stay in hospital for two weeks. So I think students should always walk but not run in the hallways. And the teachers had better keep an eye on the students after class and stop them from running. At last, I hope all the students should pay attention to their safety in school.
2011年广东中考作文
My Earth Hour 2011 (没参与)
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The Earth Hour was from 8: 30 pm to 9:30 pm on Saturday, March 26th this year. It was a pity that I didn't realize it was Earth Hour until I watched news on TV. At that time, I was shopping with my mother at the mall. As a student, I have done lots of things to protect the environment. For example, I always carry a cloth bag while shopping. Besides, I often ride a bike to school instead of taking a car. I think we can care for the earth by doing so. Let’s take part in the Earth Hour next year. I believe that we can make our earth a better place to live in.(86 words)
My Earth Hour 2011 (有参与)
The Earth Hour was from 8: 30 pm to 9:30 pm on Saturday, March 26th this year. It was the moment my friends and I waited for a long time. We talked and played games at home with all the lights off. We were glad to be in the Earth Hour. As a student, I have done lots of things to protect the environment. For example, I always carry a cloth bag while shopping. Besides, I often ride a bike to school instead of taking a car. I think we can care for the earth by doing so. Let’s take part in the Earth Hour next year.
I believe that we can make our earth a better place to live in. (90 words)
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2012年广东中考作文
Dear Editor,
I read the stories on BBC World Have Your Say today. I am interested in Mike's story, because I had the same experience when I traveled in Guangzhou. I can't stand bad manners in public, either. In fact, I really get angry when people jump the queen and smoke in
non-smoking areas. I think it's wrong to break the rules in public. In my opinion, we should know more about good manners. On the other hand, we had better stop people around us from being rude. If we can't stop them, we can always ask the police or someone like that for help.
Yours,
Li Ming (92 words)
Dear Editor,
I read the stories on BBC World Have Your Say today. I am interested in Wu Peigen's story. Because one of my friends is a left-behind child, too. He has been living with his grandparents since he was six. I can understand how hard life is for left-behind children. I think it’s best for children
to grow up under the care of their parents. In my opinion, we can join some social groups to offer help to left-behind
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children. We can visit and make friends with them. On the other hand, they should be allowed to go to school in the city for free.
Yours,
Li Ming (92 words)
2013年广东中考作文
面对谎言
Good morning, everyone! Let me introduce myself first. My name is Li Ming, a student from Class One, Grade Nine, Hongxing Middle School. Yesterday afternoon, the student on duty said he had to see the doctor. I offered to do the cleaning for him. Later I found him playing basketball on the playground. I was quite unhappy. He needn’t tell the lie.
I would do the duty for him if he asked.
As students, we should always tell the truth even if others might not agree with us. When others tell lies, we’d better
make them understand that honesty is the best policy.
That’s all. Thank you.(95 words)
面对骗局
Good morning, everyone! Let me introduce myself first.My name is Li Ming, a student from Class One, Grade Nine, Hongxing Middle School. Last year, I received a chain
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letter saying that only kind people could receive the letter. If I sent it to as many people as possible, I would get good luck. But if I didn’t , I would die the next day. I was so scared that I sent it to some of my friends.
As students, we shouldn’t forward such chain letters. If
we don’t know how to
deal with them, we’d better ask our teachers or parents
for help.
That’s all. Thank you.(95 words)
面对谣言
Good morning, everyone! Let me introduce myself first.My name is Li Ming, a student from Class O
ne, Grade Nine, Hongxing Middle School. I heard a rumor of the same kind this year. It is said that a Chinese medicine called Banlangen could kill the flu of H7N9 or some diseases like that. So it was sold out in our city very soon. I thought it was so silly and I didn’t believe it at all. I would rather ask the doctor for advice than buy the medicine.
As students, we should keep calm when we face such rumors. Besides, we shouldn’t believe or spread them.
That’s all. Thank you. (98 words)
写作话题一览表
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1. 个人情况 (2013年中考 书面表达?)
2. 家庭、朋友与周围人 (2009年中考 书面表达)
3. 周围环境
4. 日常活动
5. 学校生活(2013年中考 阅读理解A)
6. 兴趣与爱好
7. 个人情感(2013年中考 书面表达?)
8. 人际关系(2013年中考 完形填空)
9. 计划与愿望 (2013年中考 书面表达?)
10. 节假日活动
11. 购物
12. 饮食
13. 健康 (2006年中考 书面表达)(2013年中考 阅读理
解C)
14. 天气
15. 文娱与体育
16. 旅游与交通
17. 语言学习
18. 自然 (2013年中考 阅读理解B)
19. 世界与环境 (2010年中考 书面表达)
20. 科普知识与现代技术 (2007年中考 书面表达)
21. 热点话题
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校园安全(2010年中考 书面表达)
地球一小时 (2011年中考 书面表达)
文明礼仪、留守儿童 (2012年中考 书面表达)
诈骗、谎言、留言 (2013年中考 书面表达)
22. 历史与地理(2013年中考 短文填空)
23. 社会
洪战辉事迹 (2008年中考 书面表达)
24. 文学与艺术
2014年中考书面表达预测(个人观点)(参考2014年省
中考备考研讨会的课件)
1. 兴趣与爱好
2. 计划与愿望
3. 旅游与交通
4. 语言学习
5. 人与自然
6. 文娱与体育
7. 饮食与健康
8. 热点话题
9. 购物
话题作文范例:
1. 个人情况
(2010定西)
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Dear Friend,
I’m very happy to be in this Summer Camp to know about the famous universities in London. I’m glad to
introuduce myself to you. My name is jenny. I'm fifteen years old. I live in Guangzhou. One of my favorite subjects is English. I'm also interested in drawing. In my free time, I often draw some pictures of animals, listen to music and enjoy the singing of birds in nature. I also like reading English books. I want to be a teacher when I grow up.
I feel lucky to join you. I hope we can be good firends.
That's all.Thank you for listening.
2. 家庭、朋友与周围人
Bill is my best friend. He is 15 years old . He is in No 5 Middle School. He is tall with short hair. He is very handsome and lovely. He is a good student. He always does well in his lessons .After school, he likes playing football and plays very well. So he is very strong. He is also very outgoing and helpful. He likes helping others and all his classmates like him. Once I have difficulties, he always encourages me to e over them. We are good friends .
假设你们班级即将召开以“感恩”为主题的班会,要求向
大家介绍一下你最想向谁表达感恩之情,他或她为你做了什
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么,你又将怎样回报他或她的付出。请结合上文内容,以
“Thank you, my?”为题写一篇发言稿。
要求:
1(句子通顺,语意连贯。
2(包括所有提示内容。
3(不少于80词。
Thank You, My Mother
Wherever we are today, whatever we are, we owe it to our parents who have given and taught us so much, so we should thank them, especially, thank our mother. I think my mother is one of the best mothers in the world.
She is the busiest one in my family. She does chores for the family and cares
about my study. She has taught me a lot. She does lots of things for me. But she never wants anythings in return.
How will I show my thanks to my mother? First, this year, I am going to give her a surprise birthday party and buy her a special present. Second, I’ll do well in school. Third, I’ll
help her do housework when I’m free. I want to make her
happy. In a word, I love my mother.
3. 周围环境
(2013四川南充)
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Nanchong is now making its effort to bee a civilized city. As students, what should we do?We must respect our teachers and be polite to others. We should also help those who are in need and be friendly to the people around us. Besides, we must obey the traffic rules. When we cross the street, we should walk on the zebra crossing. And we mustn’
t go across the street when the traffic lights are red. What’s
more, we should protect our environment. For example, we mustn’t step on the grass and climb the trees. Litter mustn’
t be thrown everywhere.
Nanchong is our hometown. Let’s try our best to make it
a civilized city.
生活在社区里的孩子们生活单调:几乎不认识周围的邻
居,没有兄弟姐妹。 社区负责人黄叔叔注意到这个问题,
于是向大家征集解决问题的建设性意见。假如你是Li Ping,
请你写一篇80词左右的邮件向他提出你自己的建议。
内容包括:
1(吸引孩子们参加上文提到的社区青年俱乐部并参加其
组织的活动。
2(给孩子们提供一个娱乐交流的地方。
3(组织社区里的孩子参加清洁本小区的公益劳动
Dear Uncle Huang,
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Thank you for reading my e-mail! I am living in this munity. I don’t have any sister or brothers. I also have no friends here. Luckily, you want to help us. Here are my suggestions.
First, we can organize the children in this munity to clean up our
neighborhood. Through this activity, we can know each other and make new friends. Second, I hope we can be offered a room to do homework, and then we can help and learn from each other.
Third, I think we can ask children to join our Youth Club. We can take part in a lot of interesting activities, such as holiday camps and discos, regular visit to the old people, evening parties and concerts. Our life will be fun and colourful.
Best wishes!
Yours truly,
Li Pin
4. 日常活动
话题:上网的利弊
篇三:初三英语作文题及范文
Passage 1
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假如你刚从英国回来,你的英语老师要求你在课上谈谈中
英两国学生的一些差异,请根据
80-100。参考词汇:清理clean up;零花钱pocket money
Hello, everyone! I’m glad to be here to talk about some
differences between the English students and the Chinese students. In England, students usually take the school bus or ride bikes to school. After school, they often clean up the garden and look after the pets. What’s more, they have to
make pocket money by working in their free time. However, in China, students often go to school in their parents’ cars.
They spend most of their time on study after school and hardly do chores at home. Also, parents provide the pocket money for their children. Different countries
have different cultures. I think we should study hard, but we should practice living skills at the same time.
Passage 2
注意:1.文章必须包括所给要点,可适当增加细节;2语
句通顺,书写规范
Hello, everyone! I’m important for us students to find
some time to exercise. So we should exercise in our free time. However, I found that now many students seem to study all day. They think taking exercise is a waste of time. And some
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students think they have so much homework to do every day that they have no time to exercise. But in my opinion, taking exercise is a good way to relax and keep fit. And a healthy body can help us study better. And we can always find time to take exercise if we want to do. So let’s go out to exercise
together.
Passage 3
随着网络技术的不断发展,人们传递情感的方式也在不断
变化。假如你叫王强,上周你就“使用纸质卡片还是电子卡
片,”在班级展开了一项调查。请你给China
Daily报社写一封信,
要求:1.表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;2必须包括所
有相关信息,并作适当发挥 Dear Editor,
I am writing to tell you about the survey I’ve made on
“Using paper cards or e-cards?” in our class.
About 30% of the students want to use the paper card. Firstly, people can make them by themselves and they can show people’s real feelings. Secondly, people can take them everywhere they go and keep them for a long time. Thirdly, people don’t have to read them through puters.
However, about 70% of the students prefer to use e-cards. E-cards can carry much information and people can send
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them quickly. Besides, using e-cards can save paper so that the environment can be protected well. What’s more, people
can make different kinds of designs that they like.
As for me, I like to use both of the two kinds, because when I am free, I can use the paper cards, but when I am busy, I can use e-cards.
Yours sincerely,
Wang Qiang
Passage 4
你校决定组织学生到医院照顾病人,以此作为教育学生的
一种方式。这件事在学生中引起了
注意:短文应包括表中的所有内容,可适当发挥,但不能
主句翻译
参考词汇:尊重respect
Some students say most of them are the only child in our family. We have been given much love. We are not able to do hard work. To look after the patients is a good way to teach us hoe to do difficult jobs. By looking after the patients, we’
ll learn to understand and respect others’ work.
On the other hand, some students think taking care of patients is dirty. It’s easy for us to get sick. They don’t think
the job is suitable for us. We have more important things to
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do . looking after brothers or sisters at home is a good idea.
In my opinion, it’s quite a good way to develop our
independence, but we should be careful not to get sick when caring for patients. I think the school should think about this problem.
Passage 5
假如你们学校正在开展研究性学习(exploring learning
strategies),请你根据下表提供的信
Great changes haven taken place in our studies since our school began to carry on exploring learning strategies. In the past, teachers kept on explaining the language points in class. We students just listened and took some notes. So we didn’t
have enough time to think about problems by ourselves. We had to do much homework after class.
But now teachers show the problems to us first, then we discuss them for a while in pairs or groups. We try to find out the ways of solving problems, through which we’ve
learnt how to cooperate with others. After class, we can have different activities. For example, we can read books we like, go to the library or use the Internet for useful information and so on.
In a word, exploring learning strategies is very good for us.
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Now we are the owners of our study and we’re happy.
Passage 6
对于是否参加英语夏令营,同学们有不同的观点,请你根
据下面表格内容的提示,写一份报告交给Mr. Dean,陈述同
学们的观点及理由,并附上你的观点及理由。
The students of our school have different ideas about if we would like to take part in the English summer camp.
Some agree while others don’t. Those who want to take
part in the activity think they can relax themselves in the camp. Also they can improve English and make lots of friends. However, some of the students are not interested in English. They think it’s too long to stay away from home.
Their parents won’t allow them to do so.
As for me, I don’t want to take part in the summer camp. I have to go to lots of lessons during summer holiday, so I have no time. Besides, I like to stay at home better.
Passage 7
目前,许多学生不重视课外阅读,请你根据下表内容写一
篇短文,对这一现状进行分析并提出建议,要求80词左右。
开头已给出,不计入总词数。要点:
lot of students have too much homework so they have little time for reading. Secondly, many students don’t have
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the habit of reading. Thirdly, some students spend their spare time on TV or on the Internet.
However, it’s good for us to read. Through reading we can learn more about the world. Reading can also help us think better and make our life more colorful.
In my opinion, teachers should give students more time to read. And students can join a reading club to read more.
Passage 8
假设你班上周就“Is it OK to tell white lies?”开展了一场
讨论,请你根据下表所提示的
注意:短文包括所给内容要点,可适当发挥,使文章连贯;
参考词汇:善意的谎言a white lie
Is it OK to tell white lies?
Last week our class had a discussion on whether it is OK to tell white lies. The students have different opinions.
Some think it is all right to tell white lies out of kindness. Besides, white lies can often help people get on well with each other. Sometimes, they may make one more confident.
However, some people take telling lies very seriously. They believe that white lies are lies after all. They do harm to friendship. What’s more, lies never go far.
In my opinion, I have to day that all people lie at times. As
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long as we’re true to each other, lies, whatever kinds they are, won
’t stand in our way.
Passage 9
Life is just like a mirror, you smile at it, and it smiles at you, too.请你以“Learn to Smile”为题,根据下表所列的要点
写一篇100词左右的文章。
要求:短文必须包括所有被容要点,不要逐字翻译,可
适当发挥,使短文连贯通顺。参考词汇:对某人微笑smile at
sb. 误解 misunderstand
Learn to Smile
I remember a song by Westlife, the first line of it is “Just a smile and the rain is gone.” Do you like smiling? I think you should learn to smile.
First, learn to smile at yourself when something unpleasant happens in your life. It you fail an exam or you are misunderstood by your friends, don’t be sad. Just smile
at yourself. Smiling at yourself can bring back your confidence. Sometimes the one who beats you is not others, but yourself. And smile can also keep you healthy.
Secondly, learn to slime at others. It will make you municate better with others. Smiling at others makes
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yourself happy as well.
In a word, smile is a kind of language belonging to everyone. It passes love and friendship and helps shorten the distance between you and other people. Living with a smile, every day will be great.
Passage 10
目前,学生考试作弊现象严重,请围绕以下要点谈谈其中
的演员以及个人的看法和建议。 原因:1考试泛滥;2自身
勤奋不够;3把大量的时间用在上网和玩游戏上;4为了骗
取家长和老师高兴。
看法与建议:1作弊有害;2要做人诚实,发奋学习;3
学校应减少考试。
要求:词数80-100;围绕要点可适当发挥
At present, a number of middle school students have picked up a bad habit—cheating in exams. There are four
main reasons. First, schools have given students too many exams, some of which are too difficult. Second, some students are not hard-working enough and they don’t work
hard at their lessons. Third, some students waste a lot of time playing games or using the Internet. So they don’t have
enough time to prepare for the exams. Finally, students have to do so to make their teachers and parents happy.
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In my opinion, cheating in exams does great harm to our study. We students should be honest and hard-working. Only in this way can we improve our study and make progress. Besides, our teachers should offer us fewer exams and more time to study for ourselves.
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作文二:《高考英语作文话题之个人情感和人物关系》4900字
话题作文一 个人情感和人物关系
【课标解读】
个人情感指个人的喜怒哀乐、骄傲、孤寂、担忧、紧张、害怕等,以及微笑、大笑、大哭、大喊、面部表情、手势等情感表达的方法,也意指学生对学校生活的切身体验及由此产生的心情。
人际关系指人与人之间的交往与友谊,与家人、朋友、邻居、亲戚或他人之间的情感交流或沟通,如师生关系、父子关系、同学之间的友情等;对他人的感谢、感恩、宽容、道歉、赞扬、微笑等,请求他人同意和帮助、解决问题、处理矛盾冲突、和解,等等。
【命题预测】
基础篇:针对个人感情话题,高考命题人可能会要求考生叙述发生在身边的一件事,并表达自己的情感;描述考生在学校所参加的一次活动,并谈谈自己的体会。
人际关系方面,高考命题人可能会选择上述“课标解读”中的某一个话题,如宽容、赞扬等,要求考生通过自己或他人的一次经历来发表看法。
【必背词句】
1. 个人情感
(1)be happy / sad / upset / nervous / lonely高兴/难过/不安/紧张/孤独 (2)be pleased with对……感到高兴
(3)be worried about / worry about 担心,担忧 (4)be / get angry with sb. about sth. 因某事生某人的气
(5)be disappointed at sb. 对某人感到失望 (6)be confident of sth. / in sb. 对某事/某人有信心
(7)We are deeply grateful to you for your support. 我们深深感谢你的支持。
(8)It is a pity that we shall have to leave tomorrow. 我们明天必须离开,真是遗憾。
2. 人际关系
(1)learn from each other 互相学习 (2)promote the friendship 增进友谊
(3)improve the relationship改善关系 (4)show love and concern for sb. 爱护和关心某人
(5)Good listening can really enable us to get closer to each other. 善于倾听使我们彼此走得更近。
(6)A good relationship between teachers and students is of great importance for our studies.良好的师生关系对我们的学习很重要。
(7)To build a good relationship, we should trust in each other. 要建立良好的关系,我们应该彼此信任
(8)Only in this way can we enjoy an equal relationship. 只有这样我们才能享有平等的关系。
(9)They find it easy to municate with their teachers. 他们发觉很容易和老师沟通。
(10)With their help, I tried my best to study hard and succeeded in entering a key university. 在他们的帮助下,我努力学习,成功地被一所重点大学录取。
(11)We should value this harmonious relationship between teachers and students. 我们应该珍惜师生之间这种和谐的关系。
(12)With the encouragement and support of my father, I have overe many difficulties in our life. 在父亲的鼓励和支持下,我克服了生活中的许多困难。
【写作内容】给刚从外地转来的新同学的一封信
假设你是新华中学的学生李华,班里从外地转来一名同学李明,他一时无法融入到新的班集体中,感到很苦恼。 请根据下列要点用英语给他写封信:
(1)帮他分析原因:害羞,怕同学取笑。
(2)给他提出建议:学习普通话,跟同学交流意见。
(3)陈述你帮助他的具体打算。
注意:1. 内容包括以上要点,但不要逐句翻译
2. 字数100左右,文章开头已提供,不计入总词数
3. 参考词汇 普通话 mandarin 痛苦的;焦虑的 distressed
Dear Li Ming,
I’m sorry to know that you feel distressed at your new class. ____________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope you can adapt to the new school life as soon as possible.
Best regards,
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Li Ming,
One of the reasons, I believe, is that you might be too shy to talk confidently with your classmates and maybe you are afraid that your classmates will make fun of your accent.
I am sure, with your effort, you can manage to overe these difficulties. In my opinion, learning to speak Putonghua and paring notes with your classmates frequently are good ways for you to make new friends.
In our spare time, I’ll invite you to play basketball or go to some parties. Also, I’d like to introduce my good friends to you.
Dear Li Ming,
One of the reasons, I believe, is that you might be too shy to talk confidently with your classmates and maybe you are afraid that your classmates will make fun of your accent.
I am sure, with your effort, you can manage to overe these difficulties. In my opinion, learning to speak Putonghua and paring notes with your classmates frequently are good ways for you to make new friends.
In our spare time, I’ll invite you to play basketball or go to some parties. Also, I’d like to introduce my good friends to you.
Dear Li Ming,
One of the reasons, I believe, is that you might be too shy to talk confidently with your classmates and maybe you are afraid that your classmates will make fun of your accent.
I am sure, with your effort, you can manage to overe these difficulties. In my opinion, learning to speak Putonghua and paring notes with your classmates frequently are good ways for you to make new friends.
In our spare time, I’ll invite you to play basketball or go to some parties. Also, I’d like to introduce my good friends to you.
作文三:《英语情感作文》1400字
这是我在网上看的一篇作文,希望对亲们有帮助 《真爱,零期待》
I once had a friend who grew to be very close to me. Once when we were sitting at the edge of a swimming pool, she filled the palm of her hand with a little water and held it before me, and said this:
You see this water carefully contained on my hand? It symbolizes Love. As long as you keep your hand caringly open and allow it to remain there, it will always be there. However, if you attempt to close your fingers around it and try to posses it, it will spill through the first cracks it finds. This is the greatest mistake that people do when they meet love… They try to posses it, they demand, they expect… and just like the water spilling out of your hand, Love will retrieve from you.
For love is meant to be free, you cannot change its nature.
If you have people you love, allow them to be free beings. Give and don't expect. Advise, but don't order. Ask, but never demand. It might sound simple, but it is a lesson that may take a lifetime to truly practice. It is the secret to true Love. To truly practice it, you must sincerely feel no expectations from those who you love, and yet an unconditional caring.
我曾有个朋友,我们的关系很亲密。有一次我们坐在游泳池边上,她载手掌里盛了点儿水,捧在我面前,说:
你仔细看我手上这水了吗?那代表爱。只要你充满关爱地弯曲着你的手指,并允许它保持在那儿,它会永远在那儿。但是,如果你试图把你的手指在它周围合起并试图占有它,它会通过它找到的缝溢出去。这是人们当他们遇到爱时犯的最大的错误…他们试图占有它,他们要求,他们期待,那样就像溢出你的手掌的水一样,爱会从你身边撤退。
因为爱意味着自由随意, 你不能改变它的本性。
如果你有爱的人,允许他们自由随意的存在。给予而不指望;建议而不命令;请求而不要求;可能听起来简单,但这需要一辈子去实践。这就是真爱的秘诀。真正去实践它,你必须对那些你爱的人没有期望,并给予无条件的关爱。
作文四:《作文需写出个人真实而独特的情感》1800字
生活是多样化的,每个人眼中、心中的生活更是异彩纷呈的。作文本来就是对认识到的生活的真实的反映,写出真实独特的感受,才是真正的作文。在同学们的作文中经常出现一些“感受”不成功的例子。比如无病呻吟,矫揉造作,感受不真实;比如鹦鹉学舌,陈词滥调,感受不独特;比如浮躁马虎,浅尝辄止,感受不深刻。究竟如何写好自己的独特感受呢?在这里我谈谈自己的体会。 写作是情感的流入,若为写作而写作那只能是无病呻吟。。罗丹言:“美是到处都有的。对于我们的眼睛,不是缺少美,而是缺少发现。”我们要观察和思考生活,从生活中来,实践中取材,留心观察身边的事物,从中捕捉灵感,发展自己的创新思维。这样,留心各种各样的事物和社会现象,由此及彼,从而拓展视野,获取丰富感人的生活素材。如我班学生徐梦鸽的作文《这也是一种美》,作者别具慧心去观察平凡生活中种种美得事物。文中这样写道“一群刚刚大学毕业的学生们放弃了良好的就业岗位,而回到了自己的家乡和贫困的地方。在那里,他们帮助人们劳作,带去新鲜的食物,教孩子们读书。他们迎着朝阳一起和孩子们奋斗。他们虽然辛苦地在那些贫困的地方工作,却从来不求回报,是他们给那些地方送去了温暖。这是一种美,是一种奉献的美。”美如一杯咖啡,只需我们在生活中细细品味。作者别具慧心去观察平凡生活中种种美的事物,挖掘其思想内涵与价值意义,呈现给世人一份别样的美,很有启示性。因此我们需要观察生活,才能表达出真实的体验。 其次我们还需要抓住景物特点,写出独特情感。学生一写到景物总是用“鸟语花香”,鲜花总是“张开了笑脸,风一吹,像翩翩起舞的蝴蝶,散发着阵阵清香”,还有“这里的景色多美啊!”“眼前的美景太迷人啦!”类似的句子。很明显,这是忽视了对景物观察和感受的重要性。山之高,水之清,草之绿,这些都是景物的特点。只有仔细观察景物,抓住特点写具体,才能让人有身临其境之感。 在写作时,我们可以抓住景物的形状、大小、色彩、数量、声响、神韵、变化等方面,充分展开联想、想像,运用比喻、拟人、夸张、对比、引用等多种方法,将观察到的景物描绘出来。“一切景语皆情语。”如“情深深雨蒙蒙”是一种浓情,“一起去看流星雨”是一种纯情,“何当共剪西窗烛,却话巴山夜雨时”是一种伤情“执手相看泪眼,竟无语凝噎”是离情,“这次第,怎一个愁自我了得”是一种愁情。景物是有感情的,景物中融入了作者或人物的喜怒哀乐。如果我们能把自然之景与人物之情结合起来,写出的文章才会独具特色。比如我在教学《登柳州城楼寄漳汀封连四州》这篇文章时抓住景物的特点去分析诗人的情感。体会“惊风乱飐”、“密雨斜侵”与比喻“江流曲似九回肠”的运用之妙,领会诗中的愁苦悲情。 “景”之点需要学生详加感悟,景的冲击力对情而言是巨大的,特别于诗歌而言,诗歌的鉴赏不需要面面俱到,抓其一点兼及其余,但这一点必须得到集中和典型的展示,如“大荒、惊风、密雨”等以景冲击人视觉震撼人情感的诗句让学生真正明了一切情语都可以用景语来抒发。 因此,春华秋实,潮涨潮落,鸟语花香,电闪雷鸣,这些都是自然赋予人类的美景,需要我们去心观察去感受它们的美丽和神奇。只要能抓住这些景物的特点,然后运用多种表达方式,或叙述,或描写,或抒情,就能写出景物独特神韵和自己独特的情感。 深入体验情感,追求独特情愫。平常的人在平常的生活中,所经历的大都是小事,因为是细小而琐碎,因此易让人忽视,其实只要我们细心去体会,去挖掘其中的内涵,那些凡人小事一样可以写得真挚感人。如我班吴倩同学的作文《值得珍惜的爱》,作者写了母亲对自己的爱,抓住细小琐事来抒发敬母之情。我选取了其中一个片段“雨哗啦啦的下着,坐在教室的我冻得直哆嗦,心里想着‘早知道就该听母亲的话,多穿件衣服,这天气冷得,真让人郁闷’。下课后,正在讲台上擦黑板的我突然听见有人叫我,往外一看,原来是母亲。我走出教室,母亲将手里的毛衣给我穿上,边穿还边唠叨:‘叫你多穿件衣服,你不听,现在知道是在遭罪受了吧,冷感冒了,谁有时间来照顾你!’听着母亲的话,受着母亲的责备,我心里很是温暖。母亲的话虽然听起来是骂我,其实是充满了母爱的‘骂’。”生活中我们除了感受到母爱,还会感受到许多其他的爱,都是值得我们珍惜的。我给她的评语是文章虽欠深度,但文从字顺,表达敬母之情,感情真挚。 总之,一定要把自己跃然心头的感受真真切切地抒写出来。一定让自己指尖流出“真心”、“真情”之韵,拨动“个性”、“创新”之弦,弹奏“感受独特”、“体验真切”之曲。
作文五:《2016初三英语话题作文:预测范文16个人情感(优秀篇)》1100字
2016初三英语话题作文:预测范文16个人情感
2016初三英语话题作文:预测范文16个人情感
下面是汶川地震中的一张照片。它记录了一个叫郎铮的三岁男孩在
地震十小时后被解放军从废墟中救出。躺在担架上的他慢慢地举起右
手向救他的人敬礼。请你以"感动"为题,用英语简单描述这个故事并
写出你的感想。
要求:故事描述要包括提供的所有信息。字数:80---100。短文开
头已给出,不计入总字数。
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At 14:28 on May 12, an earthquake broke out in Wenchuan. Soon people all
over China ent to the rescue. _______________
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At 14:28 on May 12, an earthquake broke out in Wenchuan. Soon people all
over China ent to the rescue. A three-year-old boy named Lang Zheng as rescued
from the debris by the PLA men ten hours after the earthquake. While he as
lying on the stretcher, he sloly raised his right hand and saluted to the
soldiers. His salute not only expressed his thanks to the people ho saved him,
but also moved the people around him. I as also deeply moved by his salute. As
a three-year-old boy, he kne that the first thing to do as to express his
thanks after he as saved. It is the good nature of the Chinese people.
作文六:《情感作文的培养》1500字
情感作文的培养
作文是表达思想观点与感受,进行信息和情感交流的重要工具和载体,是认识世界、认识自我、进行创造性表述的过程,也是发展个性、培养创造精神和实践能力的重要途径。情感作文是小学这高年级语文教学的主要内容,是实施素质教育的重要课题。我自从2008年担任语文教学以来,就小学生情感作文教学进行了探索,积累了一些经验与认识。
一、音乐式作文。
音乐是情感的艺术。根据写作题材的需要,选择相应的音乐来渲染气氛,把学生带进写作的美妙景象中,给学生以强烈的感染。例如,课前让学生观看展现家乡崭新面貌的风光片(配乐、配解说),课上启发学生结合自己收集的材料,用各自喜欢的文体形式,来歌颂家乡发生的可喜变化。又如上《田野欢歌》时,选择一段表现大自然声音的音乐让学生想象,并提示学生:你听到了怎样的旋律?想象到了怎样的画面?产生了怎样的情感体验?联想到了生活中的哪些故事???这样,让学生在愉悦的环境里产生表达欲望。
二、图画式作文。
图画式作文是让学生根据自己的想象,先在头脑中形式一定的图象,然后用笔画出来,最后根据自己画出的图,写成一篇作文。学生可以自由地想,自由地画,自由地写。
三、状物式作文。
让学生依据看到的事物进行想象习作训练。例如,课前,让学生准备自己喜欢的事物(动物、植物、小制作、小标本等);课上,指导学生观察自己喜欢的这些事物,激励学生在认真比较、发现、认识的基础上,抓住事物特点写状物作文;课后,鼓励学生继续观察,练写系列观察日记。又如:面对城市的规划图、大自然的美景、一张获奖证书、一张旧照片等,回忆其来历或展开想象,并写成一篇作文。
四、专题式作文。
根据学生的需要、喜好,确定一个问题,让学生深入社会,进行实地调查,了解情况,掌握数据。学生在经过认真研究、分析、处理信息后,学写调查报告。
五、活动式作文。
活动是习作的很好素材。如组织游览或考察活动时,教师先提出注意事项,号召学生写保证书;实地游览或考察回来后,要求学生及时记下游览的过程、感受或写出考察报告。让学生在活动的过程中,注意观察、积累。学生把所见、所闻、所思、所想写入作文,作文真实而有内容。
六、生活式作文。
把学生带入生活的情境中,在“边作文、边生活”中学好作文、体验生活。要求学生想说什么,就说什么;看到什么,就写什么。让学生用笔记录下心灵成长
的点点滴滴,让学生在“边作文、边生活”中健康成长。
七、多媒体作文。
利用多媒体形象性、再现性、可控性的特点,将人、事、物、景等写作材料通过实物、图片、录音、投影、录像、电脑等多媒体进行再现,让声、光、色、像充分刺激学生感官。为学生创设一个形象逼真、色彩鲜艳、动静相生的教学情景,唤起学生的审美感受,触发学生的想象力,激发学生的创造和表达的欲望。
八、动手式作文。
让学生自己动手,从实践中获取作文材料。例如,提供简单几何图形,启发学生任意拼一拼,然后根据拼得的事物写想象作文;鼓励学生利用自己手中的图画,剪一剪、贴一贴或画一画,然后展开想象创编故事;指导学生做一做工试一试(小制作、小实验等),然后练写小制作、小实验报告。在这种情境中,学生边做边想,以做促想,以做促写,学生很容易就写出想象丰富、文字通顺的作文。
总之,作文教学要善于培养学生思维习惯。思维习惯就是一种经过反复练习而形成的自动的思维活动方式,它与动作和行为习惯一样,是经过有意识和无意识的反复练习而形成的。作文教学中思维习惯的培养就是在作文教学中经常训练学生的某种思维从而使学生在写作中习惯按照某种思维写作的过程。思维训练有自身的原则,也只有在坚持思维开放性、深刻性、独立性的基础上进行训练,才能真正培养出独具魅力的创造性思维能力的作文。
作文七:《作文:情感的畅游》1900字
作文:情感的畅游
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报,刊协会会长李学谦,全国妇联中国儿童中心主任丛中笑等领导出席并
为获奖选手颁奖.(本刊编辑部)
作文:情感的畅游思想的果实
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大赛侧记
张琳王臻杨甜子
本次决赛的特点之一就是不仅考作文,而且要进行”综合素质考核”,
分为现场作文,文化常识考核,考官面试和主题演讲四个部分,听说读写
样样齐全.首轮面试后,40名佼佼者冲进演讲总决赛,他们分成两组,采
用抽题的方式来进行每人两分钟的演讲.来自吉林大学附中的丛莹第一
个上台,凭借”青青子衿,悠悠我心,但为君故,我叫丛莹”的开场白成为了
初中组选手中的”人气王”.
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鲞
一
,要善于用思想提炼生活
“一
个人的媒体,微博的力量”,”电脑游戏是玩还是不玩”,”说说中国
人眼中的君子”,”说说南京的梧桐树”,这些十分热门的话题让参赛学生
有点蒙.从演讲的情况来看,大城市的学生表现得比较突出,这可能和孩
子的视野和机会有关.一位大赛评委老师指出,演讲的好坏除了语言表达
能力外,更重要的是学生的思维深度.很多学生没有生活经验,对生活缺
乏思考,是谈不出个所以然来的.
二,日常训练的价值导向:注重社会思考度
据悉,此次作文大赛决赛的试题都是材料作文.初中组的作文题为
“纯真”,高中组的考题为”角度”.在阅卷过程中不少评委感到心痛,因为
40%以上的学生存在着文章角度牵强,思维散漫等诸多问题,真正能够文
采飞扬真情流露的文章很少.
大赛评委,本刊主编姚卫伟认为,内地学生在文章的情感上要比香港
学生逊色很多.内地学生书写个人小情感的比较多,不少学生在写”心灵
原色”这样的题目时缺少中学生的朝气与生机.大赛给出了2O道考题,大
陆学生选择心灵情感类作文题的占到了60%,而香港学生则更喜欢选择
和社会生活相关并有一定思考深度的考题,如”当灾难来临的时候”等.
“向往纯真不代表回到幼稚,名校学生更应该在文章的选材,角度等
问题上具有一些社会思考深度.”姚主编呼吁,学校的日常作文训练应注
意阅读与写作的价值导向.
三,模式化教学让中学生作文水平连年下降
一
位作文大赛阅卷的评委直言不讳:”近5年的中学生作文水平在走
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墨鲞查
下坡路!”一位上海学生在接受面试时直接就说,觉得”应试作文和真正的
作文是两种东西”,因为应试作文里”自己想的”和”能够写的”完全是两码
事.”我们老师在作文教学时喜欢给我们设定一个模式,比如考试作议论
文时应该严格按照是什么,为什么,怎么办的模式来进行,这样文章就能
确保不会跑题.”一位参赛学生如实说.
四,”电子书”越来越多也影响了作文水平
台湾明道大学中国文学系主任罗文玲博士也是此次大赛的评委之
一
,她同时也是台湾大学联考的阅卷委员之一.”我感觉近年来台湾中
学
生的作文水平下降的趋势也很明显.”罗文玲分析认为,这主要有三个原
因:一是台湾中学追求多元化学习,这样一来就压缩了国文课,这对学生
学语文能力造成影响;二是学生普遍阅读能力不够,阅读量也不够;三是
学生接触”实体书”的机会少,更多的是在看”电子书”,看上去都在看书,
但差别却很大.对这一点,罗文玲做了解释,”拿到实体书,心是安定下来
的,而且可以边读书边思考,有想法和心得还可以随时记在书的空白处;
电子书看似很方便,却是浮躁的.而且触摸实体书本身的温度,感觉,都是
和电子书不同的.”
她告诉记者,台湾的语文试卷对作文也相当重视,lO0分的试卷,写作
占到54分.包括三项内容:一是给篇现代文,让学生写200—250字的分析
文章;二是翻译古文;三是写一篇跟时事有关的作文.比如前年,台湾经历
“八八风灾”,很多珍贵的木头从山上漂流下来,去年的作文题就是”漂
流
木的独白”,让学生以第一人称写漂流木的感受.今年的作文题则是《学生
与学校》,也是考量学生”社会思考度”的.
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作文八:《写情感的作文》2700字
写情感的作文一:感受冬天小小的阳光
冬天已经来到,阳光柔柔小小的,远不如春天的灿烂,夏天的猛烈。也许,有人认为这点阳光已经无足轻重了,但我却认为,这阳光依旧灿烂如春,温暖如夏,因为它充溢着爱。
前不久,我的外婆来到了我的家,由于外婆的房间在西边,我的房间在东边,所以我每天都能欣赏到旭日东升的壮观,感受到中午太阳的灿烂和温暖,但是外婆只能够看到太阳从西方落下来的景色。要知道,早晨的阳光是一缕缕的,中午的阳光是一团一团的,傍晚的阳光是一片片的,怎样才能让外婆也获得灿烂的阳光呢?于是我想了一个办法,有一天早晨,我趁外婆出去时,把外婆的棉被拿到阳光下晒了几个小时,再铺到外婆的床上,中午外婆要睡午觉了,她觉得很暖和,我便告诉外婆事情的经过,这样外婆和我一起感到了灿烂的阳光,看着外婆满脸灿烂的笑容,我在心中开心地笑了!
啊!冬天里小小的阳光,照耀着大地,温暖着人们,我要把这阳光送给更多无法得到阳光的人。
写情感的作文二:从吃画梅谈感情
以前总认为画梅很酸,所以不曾多吃。
因为一次偶然的机会(其实是买的时候误拿的),我买了一大包话梅回来。心头十分的苦恼,于是就跟朋友说!
朋友说,“这有什么呀?我一整包包吃完都行!”
“为什么啊”我问?
他说,“他很其实喜欢吃话梅的。因为那在吃的过程可以体味酸甜咸,就像人的感情一样。一开始总是美好的,而在慢慢了解的过程中,就会嗑嗑碰碰的。有些人会为过程中的某些事或矛盾而选择放弃这段感情,这就像你吃话梅吃到酸,咸就会选择吐掉一样;而有些人则会选择坚守!这则像我吃话梅一样!”
“而吃到下面的时候,可谓“苦尽甘来”。在慢慢的诅嚼,十分有味。这就是人的感情的“终端”吧!而我也就明白了她的重要!“
我听玩,疑惑的看着她,再看看手中的话梅。然后拆开包来,那一个吃,尽量不吐出来。
在慢慢的“品味”的过程中,感觉还不错。发现朋友讲得还蛮有道理的,也发现我竟然一连吃了几颗!
写情感的作文三:感受乡村
初以为,乡村便是童话的乐园。它褪去了城市的浮华,洗尽了尘世的繁杂。它也许是梵高画布上的阿尔,有明镜般纯粹的蓝天,有油彩般绚烂的花海,那金黄的向日葵在阳光的哺育下长出希望的种子;它也许是陶潜诗中的田园,在雾气迷蒙中演绎着仙侣的故事,斜斜的日光轻洒,便是悠然游然。
那只是诗中画中的乡村,当我们真实的走进乡村,用心去感知乡村,便会发现,我们的乡村在经历着苦痛。那里也有阳光,那阳光不是温暖而是毒辣地炙烤着这片土地。远望去,土地上那个佝偻的背影,在朝夕间,在春秋中,在这片土地上耗尽心力。他在这片土地上成长,他的汗水滋养了这片土地;他在这片土地上学会坚强,他的脚步坚实了这片土地;他生于黄土又归于黄土,世世代代,生生不息。风暴来了,他的心如那田间摇曳的庄稼般颤动,他的泪水在他满是沟壑的脸颊上纵横,如那淹没田间的水,层层漫过他的心田,浸没他的呼息。干旱来了,庄稼如他枯瘦的身体一般摇坠,他看不到希望,看不到丰收,他混沌的眼干涸空洞。
他们也有快乐的时候,只是这种幸福仿佛如此卑微。他们最大的幸福就是丰收,饱满的谷粒仿佛是一粒粒珠宝,他们的眼角笑成了月牙。他们最渴望的生活便是风调雨顺,他们只想也只要这样平凡的生活。
这样的乡村会不会让我们感到失望,当我们面对这样的图景?而其实,乡村正因这份残酷的美丽而更见真实。感受乡村,别总是做一个悠闲的观光者,在体味它的宁静与纯净的同时,给它的苦痛多一点目光,给它的辛苦多一点理解与悲悯。
感受乡村,感受农耕文明跳动的脉搏,感受中国最浑厚的呐喊,感受那片土地的厚重,感受那片土地浸润的血汗;感受中国农民最纯朴的执著与坚忍,感受中国农民所经历的苦痛与无奈。
当我们用鄙夷的目光看着他们,我们是否想过是他们用血汗带给了我们生的希望。
看中国的农民用最卑微的姿势在中国的历史上站成了永恒,也且让我们用心去感受乡村!
写情感的作文四:感受友谊的枫叶
在一次收拾房间时,不小心,打掉了放在书架上的一本书,落在地上。打开它,里面的半片枫叶进入我的眼睛,于是,我将它拿起,放在手中,默默地站在那儿,想了很久,想起了她——我的小学同学。 也许是因为我们是邻居,也许是因为上学时我们被分在一个班,在同一桌的缘故,我们两人十分要好,总是在一起写作业,讨论问题,谈理想,说未来,我们结下了深厚的友谊,可是…… 那是一个深秋的晚上,上完晚自习回家,在中途她突然说想停下来休息片刻。我知道是什么原因,她爸爸的工作漂忽不定,要转到外地去了,不得以她也要转学了。 我们来到一棵高大的枫树下,她倚着枫树不语,我也只是默默地低着头。这样的沉默大概持续了五分钟,她突然说: “我要走。” “我知道。” “可是我不想走。” 这一次我却没有说话,又一次低下了头。这时高高的枫树上落下了一片火红的枫叶,她伸出手,枫叶正好落在她的手里,她看着枫叶突然掏出了钢笔,在枫叶上写下了两个字:“珍重”。 “送给你,算是最后的礼物吧,也许以后再也看不到你了。” 我接了过来。拿在手中,但是我拿出了小刀,将那半片枫叶划成两半。 “这半你留着,作为一个永远的回忆,‘海内存知己,天涯若比邻’,我会祝福你的。” 她接过那片枫叶,转过身朝路灯走去。 第二天,她便走了,后来母亲告诉我她在临走前来过我家,她的眼睛是红红的,只是没看我。很久很久,我才回过神来,又将那片枫叶放回了书里,它是那样红。
写情感的作文五:当冠军的感受
冠军是每一个人都想得到的。每次看到冠军们高兴地走上领奖台,校长请自为他们颁发金灿灿奖状,我感到万分的羡慕,总是想着:如果冠军是我该多好啊!并且,我一直在心底暗暗下了决心:取得冠军这个宝座!好好努力!加油!
终于今天,我实现了这个梦想,终于登上了梦寐以求的冠军宝座!当广播上出现“五年级一等奖有李嘉欣”这几个字眼时,我整个心都沸腾了,竟然有一些不可思议:真的是我吗?广播上是不是念错了?或者是我听错了?
就但我愣在那里时,傍边的同学催我说:“快点啊!快去领奖!”同学们帮我证实了我就是第一名是,我欣喜若狂,努力压抑着自己兴奋的情绪。当我疾步走上领奖台的时候,校长为我发了一个茶杯作为奖励,接着又亲手把金灿灿的奖状给了我。我双手捧过奖状,把它举在胸前。它是我努力的成果,但这也意味着我要继续努力,创下更多佳绩的开始!它是多么神圣啊!
我情不自禁的笑了出来,就在这时,巴老师一按快门,把这一美好的瞬间储存了下来。这是多么美好的回忆啊!带着同学们羡慕的目光,我回到了班里。一回到班里,就引起了轩然大波:“李嘉欣,给我看看你的奖品!”、“李嘉欣,给我看看你的奖状!”、“李嘉欣,你太厉害了!”“……”受到了同学们的称赞,我心里比吃了蜜还甜呢!
今天,真是令我难忘的一天!
做冠军的感受真好啊!
作文九:《情感,作文的灵魂》2000字
【摘要】:叶圣陶说过:“多思索,多观察,必将有所见;多读作品,多训练语感,必将渐能驾驭文字。二者结合起来,写出的东西纵不是名作,也决不会一无足观了。”所以,多读,多练,多想,然后将自己的真情实感表达出来,是写好一篇文章的关键所在。
【关键词】:真情实感 多看 多练
【中图分类号】G427 【文献标识码】A【文章编号】
有人曾说过,文学是苦闷的象征。这句话中的苦闷正是代表了人的情感,所以,写作离不开情感的驱动作用,许多热爱写作的人在谈到自己当初的写作动机时,都把情感作为最重要的因素。可见情感因素在人们写作中所占的重要位置,而一篇成功的作品必定也具有的作者的真情实感,作文亦是如此。可是,现在很多学生的作文是为了应付考试,应付老师而写,缺乏自己的真实情感,长此以往,造成了学生怕写作文、不愿写作文、视作文为负担的情况,甚至有的学生还将写作文之难,视为难于上青天。从中可以看出学生对作文的恐惧心理。为了改变此种局面,最重要的就是要让学生明白,写作不是负担,而是一种享受。是自己表达内心真实情感的一种方式,如同我们吃饭、喝水般是自身的一种需要。具体来说需要做到以下两点:
一、 敢于表达自己的真情实感
敢于表达,指学生要有勇气将自己内心的真实情感说出来。否则,一篇缺乏真情实感的作文肯定称不上是一篇好作文。可是,现在的学生过分注重写作技巧、语言等方面,而忽视了作文中的情感因素,将自己的真情与作文分隔开。有个例子是这样的,在物质文明充分发展、网络越来越普及的时代,人们越来越忽视心灵的发展。针对这种情况,一位教师让自己的学生以“真我”为话题写一篇文章,以此了解学生心里的真实想法。可是等作文收上来后,这位教师发现所有学生的作文都是千篇一律,没有自己的特点。难道是所有的学生都一样的想法吗?当然不可能的,“世界上没有两片完全相同的树叶”,同样,世界上也没有两个完全相同的人,每个人都有独属于自己的特点和想法。可是为什么会出现这样的结果呢?问题在于学生不敢、也不愿将自己内心的真实想法说出来,他们宁愿在网络的虚拟空间上通过游戏、聊天等方式释放自己的情感,也不愿意在现实生活中借助文字表述出来。作文只是应付老师或者考试,拿高分的一种工具而已。而在此种心理下写出来的作文假、大、空,没有什么能够感动人的情感蕴含在文中。由此看来,要想写好一篇作文,首要的就是学生敢于敞开心扉表达自己的真实感情。
二、 善于表达自己的真情实感
很多学生可能都有过类似的感受,有时候心里想得挺多,感触也颇多,可是等到拿起笔想将自己的所感所想表达出来的时候,却什么也写不出来。这些学生所出现的问题是有想表达自己的欲望,可苦于自己文笔拙劣无法很好地表达自己。为了解决这个问题,要从以下两个方面入手:
(1)多看
俗话说“读万卷书,行万里路”,对于农村的学生来说,行万里路在实际生活中可能有些困难。但我们尽最大力量做到读万卷书。一方面可以增长自己的见识,另一方面可以帮助学生积累词汇、优美句子等等。这样在写作文的时候才不至于出现言不及义的情况。可是学生现在的问题是各门作业太多,尤其是高中同学,课业负担太重,又面临着高考,根本没有很充裕的时间来阅读。因此,教师可以抽出每节语文课的前几分钟,让每个学生轮流去讲台前朗读自己课下读到的好文章,每节课一篇,既不占用过多的课上时间,又不过多耽误他们过多的课下时间。而且每位同学读完之后,再和全班同学简单讨论听完之后的感悟,以此来扩大他们的知识面。刚开始的时候,学生可能有点胆怯,需要教师多加引导,长期以往,学生的水平肯定会提高。
(2)多练
“金字塔不是一天建成的”,同样,写作文不是一天能够速成的,要靠日常的积累。我们平常说熟能生巧,这同样适用于写作文。平常有了感触,即使再小,也要用笔把它记下来。至于写作的字数、时间、内容、体裁等等不必作过多的限制。例如:魏书生老师的经验是要求学生每天写500字的文章,开始的时候学生觉得很难,但是,日积月累下来后,很多学生都能够完成任务,而且有的学生还超额完成任务。对此,教师可以采取多种办法来提高其写作的积极性。例如:规定学生每人准备一个笔记本,每个人可以以自己的喜好为自己的本子想一个类似网络空间的名字,在本子上尽情宣泄真实的自己,笔记本是属于他们的个人空间。写得自己认为不错的经其本人同意可以在全班传阅。多练笔,慢慢改变他们有话难以表达的困难。一段时间过后,不仅锻炼了学生的文笔,还会增加老师与学生之间的情感。很多学生在里面记载了心里的烦闷,困惑,希望得到老师的帮助,平常羞于当面提问,现在通过这种方式表达出来,让老师能够更好地理解学生。
以上所述,是关于写作文的一些方法。主要是想让学生通过学习这些方法能够真正把握好自己的情感,写一篇情文并茂的好作文。作为一名合格的语文老师,任务还是任重而道远,在以后的工作中,还要继续学习各种理论知识,通过多种方式和学生沟通交流等等,更好地提升自己的业务水平,提高学生的作文水平。
作文十:《作文的情感表达》5000字
作文的情感表达
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标签: 文分类: 教育乱弹
化
云南
感动
感情真挚
大西北
教育
【要义点拨】
情这个生活中永恒的主题,千百年来,不知道有多少文人墨客讴歌它、赞美它。古人云:文章不是无情物。感“”“”“
人心者,莫先乎情。没有感情的文章是难以打动读者的。所以考场作文要想拿到高分,一个最为有效的方法就”
是写得感人,让动人的情感去感动、感染阅卷老师。感情真挚从年开始高考作文基础等级里增加了一条“”2001
新要求,这也是作文感人的最基本的要求。
真挚的感情就是真、善、美的思想感情:它发自内心,真实而真诚,不是矫揉造作,不虚情假意;它符合社“”
会进步的总趋势,扬善惩恶,表达对社会和人民的良好愿望,对自己和别人起到一定的鼓舞作用;它使人的心灵受到美的陶冶,给人以美的感受。
感情真挚和和思想健康是相辅相成,相得益彰的。只要考生作文所表达的思想不是消极的、庸俗的、片面的,感情不是虚假的、苍白的、颓废的,就都应视为思想健康,感情真挚。“”
【方法点睛】
感情基调真善美
唯有真情实感,才能打动别人。无病呻吟的感慨,虚假空洞的口号,是不会引起他人的共鸣,所以感情真挚的前提是真。但是真而不善,真而不美,却是写作的大忌。一个小偷,强烈地想偷别人的东西,把这种“”“”“”“”“”
感情写入文中,感情是真实了,但太丑恶,令人厌恶。情感也有高尚与卑劣之分,美好与丑恶之别,应该唯有以高尚的、健康的、积极的、美好的感情去引发读者共鸣的。如果是卑俗的情感、低级趣味的心理,写得越真实,除了越能引起别人的厌恶之外,与动人的效果就越远。“”
例文
我的选择,我的爱
湖南一考生
亲爱的妈妈:
您好~昨天晚上躺在床上,我听着您走进屋子给我掖被角时的疲惫哀伤的脚步,和您隐约发出的几声啜泣,
我再也忍不住我的眼泪。妈妈,在这离别的时候,我多么希望能够看到您欣慰的鼓励的微笑,能够没有任何牵挂地,挥一挥手,不带走一片云彩,可是,妈妈,您的不理解与怨怒却成了女儿行走时的羁绊。“”
妈妈,在您眼中,我一直都是循规蹈矩的乖女儿,是您的骄傲。我是品学兼优的学生,然后,又能从名牌
大学以最好的成绩毕业,我知道所有这些带给您的安慰与满足,可是现在,我却要离开您,离开母校给我的薪水丰厚悠闲轻松的工作,去那荒凉贫瘠的大西北,对您来说,这简直是难以理解的。您三番五次地与我争论,甚至私自跑到学校想在去西部的名单上划掉我的名字。妈妈,其实这些都是无用的,您也知道,我早已不在是那个优柔寡断没有主见的小女孩了。
妈妈,我不知道您是否看到了昨晚我特意放在写字台上的关于希望工程的报纸,是否读懂了那些衣裳破烂
头发蓬乱的小孩子们眼中的追求与渴望,您也是教师,您应当清楚启蒙教育对一个孩子的重要,您忍心让他们眼中对知识对真理的渴求的火焰被贫苦生活的冷水浇灭,您忍心让大西北这么世世代代地荒凉冷落下去吗,
妈妈,我知道,您是疼我,不忍心让您柔柔弱弱的女儿去那样黄沙漫天苦难重重的地方,可是,每个人都
有自己人生的选择,既然选择了远方,选择了苦难,我就不能再有任何的犹豫与畏缩。何况,我从那一双双眼
睛里看到的不是无奈与绝望,而是希望,对未来,对自己的希望~我相信,我能把这些希望的星星之火燃成燎原之势的,我能让大西北腾飞的~秀美的江南水乡赋予了我温柔善感的心性,却磨不灭我对理想对我自己心灵的抉择的执著追求。我相信,在大西北,我能找到最原始的真善美,也从而能找到属于我自己的真正的幸福和快乐,体现出我人生的价值。
妈妈,收起您的眷恋与哀伤,用一颗博大的母亲的心去尊重我今生的选择,依旧为我骄傲,为我祝福吧~
您的理解与尊重,才是我行走远方时的最好的背囊~
爱您的女儿
解剖:这篇考场满分作文,采用了书信体的形式,用第一人称的形式,以饱含真挚感情的语言,向人们娓
娓道出了我在人生道路上做出的一次心灵的选择。文章多处写到妈妈对女儿的选择的不理解与怨怒,而这“”“”一切都是源于妈妈对女儿的疼爱,不忍心让柔柔弱弱的女儿去那苦难重重的地方,这是为人父母者之常情,这种情感真实而感人。但女儿把丰厚的学识、火热的青春投入到荒凉贫瘠的大西北建设之中去,那用让大西北“”“腾飞来体现出我人生的价值的心灵选择,这种感情崇高而伟大。”“”
例文
父亲,我爱你~
云南一考生
尊敬的父亲:
父亲,当我以这两个有些沉重的字称呼你时,我的心更加沉重;在这安静的考场,想到了你,以这样的形式
写信给您,我想哭。
曾经,当妈妈还在时,你是那样的健朗。在我心中,你是我的偶像,我时时为你感到自豪。从妈妈幸福的眼眸里,我知道了你是妈妈一生的依靠。而你,确实是那一把伞,风雨里为我们挡去潮湿;烈日下为我们遮去酷暑。您,我的父亲,妈妈的依靠,我的偶像。
还记得吗,曾经我们的家是那样的穷,妈妈在家带孩子,你一人在外面风里来雨里去,每月拿着那一点微薄的工资糊家,可你从无厌倦。那日,你下岗了。妈妈一人坐在沙发上垂泪,她不知以后家里的日子要怎样过下去,不知以后的路怎样熬下去。父亲,我亲爱的父亲。你走到妈妈面前,握着妈妈的手,一字一句地说:凤啊~别哭,天塌下来我顶着,我一个堂堂男子汉,难道连个家都养不活。是的,以后的日子,你早出“”
晚归,靠着健康的体魄和别人一些微薄的资助,你重新开始,向人心险恶的商海中摸爬滚打,不知疲惫。每次看到你熬红的双眼,苍老的面容,日益增多的白发,妈妈眼里总是蓄着泪水,而我总是一次次告诉自己,长大后要像父亲一样有出息。
那年,阳光和暖,你将你一年辛苦赚来的钱放到母亲手里,告诉母亲:凤儿,你以后和孩子有好日子过“
了。母亲一面点头一面泪落如珠,而你也哭了,当你把脸别到一边时,我告诉自己:父亲,即使你一无所有,”
但只要有你,我们依然活得快乐,父亲,我亲爱的父亲。
那天,天气阴冷,像今天。妈妈在艰难地支撑了半年后,终被那可恨的病魔夺去了生命。那天,你眼睛红肿,衣服单薄,我一时觉得你苍老了许多,像一棵茁壮的树突然被人一下子砍倒。那晚,你告诉我,孩子,以后的路你要自己走了,父亲,为什么要告诉我这些,为什么,
多少个夜晚,我坐在家门口等你,而你总是醉醺醺地回家,对于流泪的我,你却似乎已看不见,别人说你会打麻将了,我吃惊,当终于在一天帮你洗衣服,看到那个欠条时,我信了。又有人说,你会跟村里的几个人去抽一种很特别的烟时,我呆了,连眼泪都落不下来了。父亲,我亲爱的父亲,告诉我,这不是真的,我不愿失去母亲后,再失去一个健全的父亲,我永远不愿自己变成一个孤儿。
母亲,如果你在天堂里,能看到我们,那你告诉父亲:即使是已没有了我,但也并不等于失去了一切,“
这一些困难与曾经艰苦的日子相比,这又算得了什么,父亲,知道吗,这点挫折,算不了什么,即使失去,”
我们也可在人间为母亲祝福,母亲希望我们过得好,能为我们顶起生活的一片蓝天,一片希望。父亲,我爱你,从头开始,母亲为我们祝福,我永远不愿失去你~
此致
敬礼
女儿
解剖:字字情,声声泪,这是一篇饱含着父女深情的优秀散文,读来令人感叹嘘唏,热泪盈眶。昔日勇于面对艰难困苦、战胜挫折的父亲,一个能为妻儿遮风挡雨,顶天立地的男子汉,竟在妻子病故之后,放大痛苦,精神崩溃,急遽地沉沦下去。女儿为此万箭穿心,痛心疾首,她详细地哭诉往事,希冀唤起父亲面对挫折时的坚毅与勇气,再度坚强地站起来,顶起生活的蓝天。文章写得情真意切,没有丝毫的夸饰和矫情,朴实无华,感人肺腑。尤其是文中那些对父亲深情的呼唤,一声声,一句句,重重地叩击着读者的心灵……
写这类文章,要调动生活积累,回忆起曾经让我们感动的人或事,情或景,并选取其中内蕴丰富,值得反复
咀嚼、玩味的材料组织到文章里来。可以写伟人壮举,也可写凡人小事,也可写造化奇观,鬼斧神工。但有一点,这绝对是令你感动,也能令读者感动的事情。
文章可以记叙,可以抒情、可以描写,更可以综合运用多种表达方式,写法可以多样。以记叙为主,将上述
材料写成文章的主体部分,然后引发必要的抒情或议论,是一种写法;依据行文需要,将上述材料加以梳理,穿插在文章的各个部分,写成形散神凝的散文,也是一种写法;甚至只有叙事,没有抒情或议论,将感情融“”
入叙事当中,含蓄地表达自己的情感,让读者自己去揣摩,去把玩,也未尝不可。文无定法,只要文章内容能够围绕话题,阐发感动的深层内涵,表现积极的价值取向,应该说,就都合乎题意要求。“”
翻书的时候,一片银杏叶悄然滑落。我弯腰,拾起,惊觉这是初中毕业时同桌送给我的,背面上写着珍 “
重,朋友~不记得当时是否有种想哭的冲动,只是现在,枯黄的叶片上早已是滴滴泪痕。想起,这世上还有”
一种心情叫感动。很长一段时间,我似乎已经忘了感动的滋味,是我心已冷漠,还是我的心被一些无关紧要
的东西充斥得没有了空间,
曾有朋友写给我这样一句话:我们之所以会擦肩而过,不是因为无缘,而是我们的生活中少了两个字感“——
动。的确,我们的心因此不再敏感,我们不再用心收藏起身边的一丝一毫感动,只有当我们错过它,再回首”
时,才发现原来我们真的失去了很多。
总有人抱怨这世上可感动的事情越来越少。可是,只要我们静下心来想一想,你就会发现,其实感动无时不在,无处不在。
读书累了,父母为我们削个苹果,是感动;口渴了,朋友帮你打回一杯水,是感动;沮丧时,得到一句宽慰
的话,是感动;高兴时,有朋友与你一起分享快乐,是感动;平凡的日子,收到一份小小的祝福,哪怕只是一片花瓣,一片树叶,也是感动……
人啊,每天被多少平凡的事情感动着~或许,有时正是由于它们的平凡才让我们视而不见。有这样一句话:
人之所以会感动,是因为他生活在爱之中。红尘有爱,人间有情,我们又有什么理由要让庸碌蒙住我们的眼“”
睛而无法感受感动的滋味呢,
感动是什么,一千个人有一千种答案。但,无论是谁,都无法对一个毫无感情的人说出感动究竟是什么。因
为感动不是用嘴说出来的,而是用心品出来的。
感动,如沁人心脾的甘泉。畅饮甘泉,我们的内心变得澄澈而又明亮。
感动,如熏人欲醉的海风。感受海风,我们的内心变得纯净而又宽敞。
感动,如令人心折的白雪。领略白雪,我们的内心变得安静而又平和。
这个世上已无感动的足迹的时候,那它也就随之成了一个冰封的天地。冷酷,亦无情。
朋友,请把心从泥淖中拔出来吧~请腾出一点小小的空间来承载这足以让我们回味一生的感动吧~ 解剖:本文有两点值得学习,一是取材生活,虽然零碎,但以感动之线串之,虽散而整。再一个是语言表达“”
热情洋溢,特别是文末,一组比喻、排比,不仅使得感动这个抽象的东西具体形象起来了,而且也把感情抒“”
发推想高潮,具有很强的感染力。
总之,我们要选取真实的材料。王国维在《人间词话》上说过:能写真景物,真感情者,谓之有境界。“”
一篇文章,如果材料失真,只能给人一种矫揉造作的虚假的感觉,根本不可能使人感动。近年来发现考生编造情节的现象较普遍,一些考生为博同情得高分,不惜编造,如家里父母离婚、死亡之类的假情节,很明“”“”显看出是编的;还有的考生动辄编造一些离奇荒诞的故事,如星球大战、未来世界等。编造的东西是难以写出真情的。那些老掉牙的人们熟悉的材料虽然真实,但不宜入文,不能像往年一样,为数不少的学生不约而同的选择了狼来了的故事来表达自己对诚信的理解。喜新厌旧,人之常情,单调熟悉的材料会降低读者“”“”“”
体会文章感情的兴趣。第二,忌舍近求远,要善于从生活中找素材。选择那些曾经经历过的或者最熟悉的情感素材来写,如父子情、母女情、兄弟情、同学情等等。身边的人和事、现实的生活、现实的世界,才是作文的源头活水。高考作文正是考查学生观察生活、积累生活、感受生活、认识生活、反映生活的能力,所以高三的学生千万别忘了关注生活、关注时代、重视人生体验,用自己的眼睛发现生活的可贵之处,用自己的笔去抒写自我的真实感受。
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