作文一:《高考英语议论文作文范文》23500字
篇一:高中英语各种话题作文范文
高中英语“话题作文”背诵范文及配套练习
40个话题,40篇范文,40个写作练习。背熟这些文章,
会为写作打下坚实的基础;完成40篇作文练习,会学以致
用。
1 人际关系
Teachers and students should live in harmony with each other. Firstly, teachers respect the personalities and
characteristics of their students. Secondly, teachers should love their students attentively and treat each student fairly. On the other hand, students should respect their teachers and admit their work and achievements although they have different opinions from their teachers. Only in this way can teachers and students trust each other and get along well.
作文练习:Friendship 写作提示:友谊的重要性;互相
信任才有真诚的友谊;如何使友谊之树长青。
2 语言学习
Recently, to improve the students’ listening and speaking
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abilities, the English teacher in Class 3 conducted a survey among the whole class on whether they should have a three-minute speech in English at the beginning of a period. According to the survey,
65% of the students firmly support the idea, for they think this method will be helpful to their English learning and it is a good chance for them to practise their listening ability as well as speaking ability. However, 35% of the students are strongly against it, saying that it costs the limited time in class. What’s worse, if they can not make sense of the
speeches, they will lose confidence in learning English. As for me, I think it is a good idea to have a three minutes’ speech
at the beginning of a period because I believe practice makes perfect.
作文练习:How I Learn English 写作提示:学好英语重
要;过去学不好英语的原因;现在的方法(听、读、写);
结论。
3 旅游交通
Guangzhou, with a history of 2,200 years, is known as “the flower city”, which is the starting place of “the silk road on sea” in ancient China. It has a population of 10 million and an area of 7,434.4 square kilometers. Guangzhou lies on
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the south China sea, with Hong Kong to the southeast and Macao to the south. It is rich in traveling resources, such as the famous “eight scenery of Yangcheng”. Tourists from home and abroad are attracted by its beautiful scenery.
作文练习1:Bikes—an Important Means of Transport 写
作提示:中国号称自行车王国;自行车便宜、避免交通堵塞、
健身;自行车与汽车的比较;自行车的未来。
作文练习2:A Happy Journey 写作提示:旅行前;旅
行中;旅行结束及感受。
4 自然灾害
Earthquakes now happen more frequently than before, so it is necessary for us to know how to protect ourselves. If you are inside a building when an earthquake strikes, you mustn’t rush out without order but hide yourself under some hard furniture with your head and neck protected by your arms or bag, avoiding things that hang above your head, like ceiling, lamps, fans and so on. Besides, when you run for safe shelters, don’t forget to cover your head with
something hard. What’s more, you should put out fire, turn off the gas and electricity and stop using the lift. Once you are outdoors, try to get into an open area away from trees, buildings, walls, signs and power lines.
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作文练习:A Thunderstorm 写作提示:暴风雨前;暴
风雨中;暴风雨后。
5 崇拜偶像
Born in a poor family in Chongqing on September 7, 1937, Yuan Longping studied hard, showing great interest in agriculture. As a matter of fact, since his graduation from university in 1953, Yuan has done research on rice for over half a century, devoting all his time and energy to the study of agriculture. Because of his research, China’s rice
production is increasing rapidly, solving the problem of the lack of food for many countries. As a result, he is honored as “Father of Hybrid Rice” and was rewarded with many prizes for his great contributions to the world. Though he is famous, he lives a simple life and cares little money and fame.
作文练习:The Person I Admire Most 写作提示:最崇
敬的人是英语老师;外貌描写;老师耐心、课精彩有趣、教
学安排好;结论。
6 历史文化
The Great Wall, the longest wall in the world, is one of the greatest architectures in ancient China. The structure which was built in a time when countries were at war, once served as a barrier to keep out invading enemies. It remains a
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mystery how people built the Great Wall without the help of any high technology two thousand years ago. But there is no doubt that the Great Wall, with rich history and magnificent appearance, attracts a great
number of tourists, scientists and historians every year. All visitors think highly of the wisdom of ancient Chinese.
作文练习:Protect the Cultural Heritage 写作提示:文
化遗产的意义;为什么要保护我国的文化遗产;中国政府设
立了一个“保护文化遗产节”;你对保护文化遗产的建议。
7 体育活动
Dear editor,
I am Li Hua, a reader of your paper. I am writing to tell you some suggestions on how to make the best of the stadiums after the 29 Olympic Games were hosted in Beijing.
First of all, the stadiums can be opened to the public, where they can strengthen their bodies conveniently. Secondly, the stadiums can be rented to sports panies which organize matches, thus bringing in much more profits. Last but not least, they can be used as tourist attractions, because many of them are so well designed with strong Chinese features that they will surely be attractions for visitors from all over the world. th
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篇二:高中英语作文范文
高中英语作文范文
Protecting the Environment-保护环境
Environmental problems are being more and more serious all over the world. For example, cars have made the air unhealthy for people to breathe and poisonous gas is given off by factories. Trees on the hills have been cut down and waste water is being poured continuously into rivers.Furthermore, wherever we go today, we can find rubbish carelessly disposed. Pollution is, in fact, threatening our existence.
The earth is our home and we have the duty to take care of it for ourselves and for our later generations. Fortunately, more and more people have realized these problems. Measures have been taken to cope with these problems by the government. Laws have been passed to stop pollution. I hope the problem will be solved in the near future and our home will bee better and better.
全世界的环境问题变得越来越严重。例如汽车污染的空气
影响了人们的呼吸,工厂释放污染的气体,山上的树木被砍
伐,污水不断被排人河里。另外,无论我们走到哪里,到处
可见随意丢弃的垃圾。事实上,污染正威胁我们的生存。
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地球是我们的家园,我们有责任为我们自己和我们的后代
去照顾好它。庆幸的是,愈来愈多的人们已经意识到这些问
题。政府已经采取了很多措施去解决这些问题,法律已被通
过以制止污染。我希望这些问题在不远的将来能得到解决,
我们的家园变得越来越好。
Environmental problems are being more and more serious all over the world. With the development of industry and agriculture, cars make GREat noises and give off poisonous gas. Trees on the hills have been cut down,and waste water is being poured continuously into rivers. Furthermore,wherever we go today, we can find rubbish carelessly disposed. The whole ecological balance of the earth is changing. Massive destruction of environment has brought about negative effects and even poses a great threat to man's existence.
We must face the situation that exists and take actions to solve our environmental problems. For instance, new laws must be passed to place strict control over industrial pollution, the pub!ic must receive the education about the hazard of pollution and so on. We hope that all these measures will be effective and bring back a healthful environment.
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全世界的环境问题在变得越来越严重。随着工农业的发
展,汽车制造噪音、排放毒气,山上的树木被砍伐,污水不
断被排入河里。另外,无论我们走到哪里,到处可见随意丢
弃的垃圾。整个地球生态平衡正在改变,环境的巨大破坏已
带来负面影响,甚至对人类生存带来巨大威胁。
我们必须面对现实,采取行动解决环境问题。例如必须通
过新的法律严格控制工业污染问题,大众必须接受污染危害
的教育等。我们希望这些措施的有效实施能带给我们一个健
康的环境
我的理想
When I got settled, the total use of the microwave to do their own things to eat. One day, my father saw me, I am afraid to say that I grew up as a cook. I immediately shaken like a rattle-drum head, you said : That is not my ideal. When I grow up I want to IT (information technology) industries. Yes, I bought a puter five years ago after his father, I am familiar with it day by day. Until last year, and I have formed a deep bond with it. From then on, I want success in the information technology industry to make contributions to the cause of national puter. But my father said I could only do in the field testing the game, is what the new game, and always let me play with, the report
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there will be any games. I think what he said is not their fault, I always play games recently, those who do not have a veteran like Flash. In recent days, I sprouted out of a bad idea : I will be playing the game that the network server to the black. My account will revise the highest level. However, I Xiangliaoyouxiang, this is wrong, but was caught by the police network is not good. When hackers but also need high puter skills. As a member of the IT industry is my ideal, I would like to advance this goal, to improve their puter skills
当我闲得没事时,就总自己用微波炉做点东西吃。一天,
爸爸看见我这样,说我长大恐怕是要当厨师了。我立刻把头
摇得像拨浪鼓似的,说:“那不是我的理想,我长大想做IT
(信息技术)行业。”
没错,自从五年前爸爸给我买来电脑后,我就一天天地
熟悉它。到了去年,我已经和它结下了不解之缘。从那时候
开始,我就想要在信息技术行业取得成就,为国家计算机事
业做出贡献。
可是爸爸说我在这个行业中只能做“游戏测试员”,就是
什么游戏新出来,总是先让我玩玩,报告游戏中有什么错误。
我觉得他说的没有错,我最近一段时间老是玩游戏,那些
FLASH之类的老也不用了。
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最近几天,我萌生出了一个不好的想法:将我玩的那个
网络游戏的服务器给黑了,将我的账号修改成最高级别。可
是,我想了又想,这样做是不对的,而且被网络警察抓到也
是不好的。而且当黑客也需要很高的电脑技术的。
成为IT行业的一员是我的理想,所以我要向这个目标前
进(转载于:.XltkWJ.Com 小 龙文档 网:高考英语议论
文作文范文),提高自己的电脑技术.
英语的重要性
英语的重要性在于,它被世界上大多数国家作为语言交流
的工具。例如一个德国人和一个中国人彼此都不会讲对方的
语言,但他们都懂英语,于是他们之间的语言交流就不成问
题。我们每个人都能够认识它的重要性,都能够认真学习。
要想学好英语,关键是背单词。单词是语言大厦的墙砖。
认识了它们才能驾驭好他们。学好英语还要多听英语广播、
多接触外国人,锻炼自己的听力,这样才能学有所用。
The importance of English rests with the language being used in most countries in the world as a municating tool. For example, a German and a Chinese can't speak opposite side's language, but they both know English. And then there is no problem between their language munication. We must know the importance and learn the language earnestly.
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The key to learn English well is to recite words. Words are the bricks of language building.Only keeping them in our mind, can we master them. To learn English well,we need to listen more English broadcast and contact with more foreingers so that we can practise our listening
prehansion. Only in this way, can we study for the purpose of application
我的故乡英语作文
My beautiful home, where its spring scenic.
Spring, my hometown, green grass and flowers are in bloom. Out of the tree branches, birds singing in the merry. Looking around is the continuous mountains, mountains and rolling hillsides in the spring, as if a domesticated hen the carpet, until the sky. Graceful flowers blossoming in a dotted mountains, attract colorful butterflies; in the depths of the mountain is the terraced rows of shapes, by definition, is the same as the stairs rice; a winding path to rice into the ever-changing shape, some like crescent, and some, like boats, some as sickle ... ... in the spring, when seedling growth, fresh green color of the home that add still more beautiful.
Summer, sun spit fire, but the hills in the home full of
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trees, in the shade of the shelter, the very cool; also known bird burst into song. Kind of ripe watermelon in the mountains, home of the watermelon usually round and bright, and that the air moon, as round; cut, I saw a bright red flesh, sweet and delicious; black seeds, like the eyes of swarthy .
Autumn is a golden rice, breeze, rice started singing a harmony of the song, when hard-working farmers are harvesting rice; rice harvest of the cheerful sound of voices and interwoven success of the harvest of the symphony .
Winter, although the trees have been dying, but is everywhere in the roadside grass and wild flowers, which stand at attention in the cold. They tell you: If winter es, can spring be far behind?
This is my beautiful hometown, my favorite home
五一_My May Day Holiday
I had a great time throughout my May Day Holiday.
On Monday, I t BBQ with my classmates who threw a celebration party at our middle school principle's flat. Our parents were invited to the party. Everybody was excited about the
holiday. I ate a lot of delicious food at that time.
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On Tuesday, I t visiting my uncle's family with my parents. We t to celebrate our good time at a fancy restaurant in Shanghai. Later that day, we sang karaoke in my uncle's house. We stayed for the night.
On Wednesday, I t shopping with my cousins. We bought some brand name t-shirts and pants. In the afternoon, my cousins gave me a fun ride on the city highway. They also taught me how to drive their fancy car, so I tried to do some turning and parking. It was not easy first. But I learnt quick.
On Thursday, we returned home with many gifts from our trip. I tried to get some rest. At night, I chatted with my classmates on the phone, and I watched CCTV before going to bed.
From Friday on, I started to finish up my homework assignments on my personal laptop. Some of my assignments were quite boring. After I finished the homework, I emailed them to my teachers. That was the end of it. I started to prepare things for school on this ing Monday.
All in all, I enjoyed my May Day Holiday in many ways.
写人的英语作文素材
我最好的朋友 My Best Friend 与To introduce myself
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自我介绍 希望大家喜欢,谢谢大家对-的支持。
he has a short hair but long cilia,and he is a friendly student who never bicker with others,so he is very popular,too. In a word,Tom is a good student.
To introduce myself 自我介绍
I’m 15 years old and I live in the city of Wuhan .I study very well.
I have a brother. Everyone loves us. But they often pare my brother with me. This makes me angry. I don’t
want to be like my brother. I only want to be myself.
I am an active boy. I like sports very much. I am good at swimming . I also like riding a bike. Because my home is far from school, I ride to school every day.
I am kind-hearted. If you need help, please e to me . I will try my best to give help to you . I hope we can be friends.
描绘人的词汇
外貌 Physical Appearance -
在描写人时,通常会描写其外貌特征,如:年龄,身材,体形,头
发(长短,颜色,发型),脸型,肤色,眼睛,衣着,表情,情趣,爱好,个
性等,但不必面面提到,一般要抓住某人比较明显的特征来描
述.在描写人的外貌时,用一般现在时。
常用词汇
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外表(appearance) -
beautiful, pretty, good-looking, ill-looking(其貌不扬的) -
cute / lovely 可爱的,ugly 丑 old 老的,young 年轻的sexy 性感
charming, sweet, handsome, funny, ugly, rough(adj. 粗糙的,粗略的,大致的,粗野的,粗暴的)
体格(build) -
fat 肥胖的; thin 瘦的; slim 苗条的; overweight 超重的 slight 瘦小的; 身高 (height) tall 高的; short 矮的; tallish 有些高的; -
(of) medium height中等个子(of) medium build 中等身材
脸型(face): -
round 圆的; thin 瘦的; long 长的; square 方的-
She eats too much these days , so her face is getting round .
她最近吃得太多了,所以她的脸变圆了-
头发(hair): -
发型(hair style)
straight 直的; curly 卷发的; pigtails 辫子 bald秃头的-
性格(character/nature) -
sensitive敏感的, easy-going 随和的active 积极的,主动的
introverted['intr?v?:tid] adj. (性格)内向的
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extroversive[.ekstr?'v?:siv] adj 外向的
关于家乡变化的英语作文
Life is always exciting winter vacation in the winter vacation, I've learned a lot, seen a lot, also felt a great deal. However, the most so I was surprised that the home change is so fast. From black and white TV to color TV, from phone to phone, from the small, inadequate housing to the tall, luxurious villas ... ... home has undergone an enormous list goes on!
Changes in home really fast. Previously, the family house is very old, broken everywhere, and even some corner of the moss has grown, made a mold. Under heavy rain, the housing estate, take the ride for the next subtitle of the rain, so the house really good live. Now, the family room is very strong, and they have plete sets of equipment, these devices are advanced, and some do not even have
manual.Moreover, high-rise buildings springing up along the road going up.
Changes in home really fast. Previously, hearing his mother say, when there is Shiji Li far from home and school to school are to go on foot a long time. There is a bike ride to school has been a very bad condition, but also a long time so
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in the past. If to a rainy day, the ground bumps and hollows, and go to school, the water was splashing mud all clothes, dirty. If the summer, a big back to school bags, clothing and certainly all wet, can squeeze water from it. And now, home has a new high-tech - car, this way, even if the long way again, it does not charge leg muscles, but also not worry about anything happening.
Changes in home really fast. Previously, clothes are always broken supplement and plement the Zaichuan. Now, each bought a set of clothes for Gesanchaiwu.
Changes in home really fast. Previously, hard to eat things that are their own species, and so mature and re-hired to eat. Now, people eat on the feast at the table.
Changes in home really fast, I believe that in the near future, we will use our hands to create a better, more advanced equipment, allow people to truly live a fortable life. Let us for future efforts,hard bar!
寒假生活总是多采多姿 的,在寒假中,我学会了许多,
看到了许多,也感受到了很多。但是,最让我感到惊讶的是,
家乡的变化是如此之快。从黑白电视机到彩色电视机,从电
话机到手机,从矮小、简陋的房屋到高大、豪华的别墅??家
乡的变化真是举不胜举呀~
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家乡的变化真快。以前,家里的房子很破旧,到处都有破损,甚至有的墙角还长出了青苔,发了霉。下大雨时,屋内也滴滴搭搭的下着小雨,这样的房子真不好住。而现在,家里的屋子很牢固,并且都有成套的设备,这些设备都很先进,有的甚至不用手动。而且,路两旁的高楼大厦如雨后春笋拔地而起。本文来自作文地带。
篇三:高考英语作文优秀范文分类背诵
晨 诵 篇 目
1、表达观点类
在英语课堂上,你喜欢你的老师授课时只用英语,还是英语、汉语兼用,某英语杂志社就此话题邀请中学生发表看法。请围绕“How do you prefer your English classes to be
taught?In English only,or in both English and Chinese?”这个问题,参考所给要点,选择一种授课形式,写一篇英语短文。
授课形式一:只用英语
优点:有助于提高听说能力等
缺憾:不易听懂等
结论:??
授课形式二:英语、汉语兼用
优点:易于理解等
缺憾:英语氛围不浓等
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结论:??
注意:1.词数 100~120,短文开头已给出(不计词数)。
2.参考词汇:atmosphere 氛围
I prefer my English classes to be taught in...
满分文(一)
I prefer my English classes to be taught in both English and Chinese, whose advantage is that it is easy for us to understand what the teacher talks about. The teacher first teaches the class in English, and then she explains those that are hard to understand to us so that we get a better knowing of the passage. That will be good for us.
However, teaching the class in two languages will make the English atmosphere not so strong. Some students who wish to be taught in English will be disappointed.
Except for the disadvantage, I think it is really good to hear two languages in classes. It can make us more familiar with the foreign culture.
名师点评:
审题是作文的第一要素,本文的审题准确无误。无论是要
点的把握还是结构的组织都证明了这一点。本文运用多种复
杂句式,整体看来是不错的。文中的一个复合句式显示了作
者的英语功底。其他出彩短语的使用也很地道,可以参看好
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句中的分析。
背诵内容:
好词1.advantage n.优点2.be familiar with,对某人熟悉
3. atmosphere n.气氛
1. I prefer my English classes to be taught in both English and Chinese, whose advantage is that it is easy for us to understand what the teacher talks about.
我更喜欢采用双语教学,其优点是可以更好地理解老师的
话。
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2. Some students who wish to be taught in English will be disappointed.
满分文(二)
I prefer my English classes to be taught only in English because it is helpful for us to improve the ability of speaking and listening in a very short time. I have strong interest in English study and foreign culture, so I’d like to be totally
immersed in the atmosphere of English so that I can quickly make progress. That’s why I prefer total English. However, since we are all English beginners, it’s really hard to
understand all that the teacher says. Sometimes we need Chinese explanation. So my viewpoint is that we are taught
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not only in English but also using Chinese as a minor way to explain things that are hard to understand.
名师点评:
本文写作十分成功。语言和句式是本文最大的特点。好词
中词汇的使用,将作者的意思表达得完整而准确,从而映衬
了词汇的重要性;其次,本文的句式以复杂句为主,表语、
定语和状语从句的使用都十分到位。
应背好词:1. immerse v.沉浸2. explanation n.解释3.
make progress 取得进步
应背好句:1. I have strong interest in English study and foreign culture, so I d like to be totally immersed in the atmosphere of English so that I can quickly make progress.
2. So my viewpoint is that we are taught not only in English but using Chinese as a minor way to explain things that are hard to understand.( 表语从句)
因此,我的观点是,用英文教授,同时对于一些难以理解
的内容用中文进行辅助讲解。
练习篇目:
请根据下列内容,在你校英语校刊上发表一篇稿件。
1、目前中国西南部发生严重干旱。
2、学生会将于5月6日中午12:30在餐厅门口举行用自
己的零花钱为受灾地区孩子买水的活动。
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3、希望全校同学从我做起,节约水资源。 参考词汇:
干旱drought 注意:词数不少于60。
From the news we know that there is a severe drought in
southwest China now. Most ,we hope that all of us can realize the 2
2、演讲稿
假设你是晨光中学的学生会主席李华。学生会将举办每年
一度的英语演讲比赛,本年度的主题为“The English Novel I Like Best”。作为组织者,你将在演讲比赛开幕时发言,请
你根据以下提示用英语写一篇发言稿。(2009?天津)
1. 说明比赛的意义,如提高英语听说能力,养成读书的习
惯等;
2. 说明比赛的注意事项,如每人演讲不超过5分钟,语言
流利,发音准确等;
3. 预祝比赛圆满成功。
注意: 1. 词数:不少于100词;2. 可适当加入细节,以
使行文连贯。
范文背诵:
Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen,
Wele to this year’s English speech petition. In order to improve the abilities of both English speaking and
listening, we continue to hold the English speech petition.
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I believe it will be of great help to form the good habit of reading, too.
There are some important points every speaker should be aware of. Please listen to me carefully. First of all, the speech must be finished within five minutes. Second, you should speak fluent English. At last, everyone should pronounce correctly. We expect to hear the fluent expression and standard pronunciation.
Finally, I’d like to wish the petition a great success and I hope every petitor can perform at your best!
Thank you!
句型背诵
?In order to improve the abilities of both English speaking and listening, we continue to hold the English speech petition.
?I believe it will be of great help to form the good habit of reading...
?...I’d like to wish the petition a great success and I hope every petitor can perform at your best!
练习篇目
假如你是李华,美国一所友好学校准备与你们学校共同创
办一份中学生英文刊物,该校格林先生来信询问有关情况。
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请你给她写封回信,假如你是李华,美国一所友好学校准备
与你们学校共同创办一份中学生英文刊物,该校格林先生来
信询问有关情况。请你给她写封回信,主要内容如下:
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l 表示赞成。 l 提出你喜欢的栏目。 l 简要说明理由。
注意: 1. 词数100左右。 2. 新的开头和结尾已为你写
好。
3. 适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 4. 参考栏目:栏目
—column Dear Mr. Green,
I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together. That sounds great! And I definitely agree with you on that.
Some of the columns which you mentioned in the letter are really my cup of tea. Say, “culture express” gives us a better understanding of the world. Since people from different parts of the world have different values, it’s
necessary to learn from each other. This will offer a wonderful chance. Apart from that, “blurt out” is pretty good for Chinese students to learn English idioms and improve oral English. Last but not least, “entertainment” is so cool! The popular singers, actors and celebrities are so catchy and attractive that you absolutely can’t miss it!
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Teenagers are just fond of the trendy things.
Well, I can’t list more. I really can’t wait to read that magazine!
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【名师点评】
这是一篇满分作文。仔细分析了这篇文章,写的的确是好,
很地道的美式英语,一些词语的大胆使用,这么地道标准的
英语,可不是一朝一夕所能写出来的。比如说:my cup of tea, apart from that, oral English, last but not least, celebrities,
catchy和trendy的大胆运用,list, can't wait to 简直是
perfect! 况且文章中没有一个错误,不管是书写还是语法。
(3)利弊分析类
假设你班最近就圆明园是否重建开展了一场讨论,同学们
观点有分歧,各自理由主要如下表所示,请根据表格提供的
讨论情况写一篇英文报道。
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注意:1(词数:150左右 2(标题、开头已经写好,不
计入词数。3. 要自拟结论。 参考词汇:故宫the Palace Museum; 颐和园the Summer Palace
Should Yuanmingyuan Be Rebuilt?
Recently my classmates had a discussion about whether it
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should be rebuilt or not.
Supporters of rebuilding the garden say only by doing so can we see the original sight of the garden, which reflects the Chinese civilization(文明). And it will be another place of
interest for tourists. If partly rebuilt, it will provide a parison and help us remember the history.
Those who disagree think it more reasonable(合情合理)
to keep the garden like this. The ruins will remind us of the past. We should never forget the history. Other buildings like Palace Museum and Summer Palace can also be symbols of the Chinese culture, so it isn’t necessary to rebuild this
garden. Some also worry that the environment will be destroyed when the construction goes on in this district.
Personally, it is advisable to rebuild Yuanmingyuan , which will add beauty to the city . What’s more , the new
scenic spot will no doubt promote the economic development of the local.
练习篇目
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作文二:《高考英语写作系列-优秀范文(议论文)》9000字
The Good and Bad Sides of Setting off Firecrackers
燃放鞭炮的利与弊
Dear Editor,
I’m writing to tell you about our discussion we had on the afternoon of last Wednesday about the good and bad sides of setting off firecrackers during the Spring Festival. 20 boy and 20 girl students attended the discussion. As a result, 40% of them believe that setting off firecrackers certainly adds pleasure and joy to the festival, therefore, it is a wonderful tradition. But another 40% of the students think that setting off firecrackers causes air and noise pollution, and what’s worse, it sometimes causes terrible accidents to us and to our property. The other 20% have never thought about it or don’t care a bit.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
the good and bad sides of setting off firecrackers
燃放鞭炮的利与弊
as a result 结果
It is a wonderful tradition. 它是一个优良传统。
what’s worse 更糟的是
think about 想起,想到
Disability
残疾
There are too many disabled people in the world. They have no differences from country to country. Some of them were disabled when they were born, the others were injured or hurt in all kinds of accidents, which made them disabled. Almost all of us feel sorry for them. We miserate with them because they are another kind of people. But some disabled people refuse others’miseration. They think they can do everything by themselves. They don’t consider themselves as people who have defects. They think they are the same as normal people.
In fact, a great number of people with disabilities should be taken care of by others. They get help from the government or some beneficent organizations in society. But that’s not enough. They must look after themselves on their own. When a baby with disabilities is born, it should be taught to learn some particular skills to live. Or else, it would fail in the future. So one with disabilities must have abundant confidence to fit the hard life without others’help.
too many disabled people 太多残疾人
miserate with them 同情他们
consider themselves as 把自己当作……
the same as 和……同样
taken care of 照看,照顾
look after themselves on their own 自己照顾自己
or else 否则in the future 将来
Encouraging Buying Cars Isn’t Fit For Today
目前不适合鼓励买车
Nowadays, we can often hear the discussion whether buying cars should be encouraged. Some people suggest that we should buy cars. But others claim that driving cars is not a wise idea. As far as I am concerned, I am in favor of the latter opinion.
To begin with, there are few parking lots, so the streets are made narrower by the cars parked along the roads. For example, my father could not find any place to park when we t to the supermarket.
Moreover, many drivers do not obey regulations, because people do not pay enough attention to the rule of traffic. For instance, I often se
e people cross the road when the traffic lights are still red.
Last but not least, the growth of new roads’construction is usually slower than the increasing number of cars. For example, the length of the road has gone up by 20% in 2002. However, the number of cars increased by 50% in the meantime.
From what have been discussed above, we could draw a conclusion that encouraging buying cars is not fit for today.
as far as I am concerned 就我看
in favor of 赞成
to begin with 首先
for example =for instance 例如
moreover 并且
last but not least 其次
in the meantime 同时draw a conclusion 得出结论
Duties Of A Student
学生的责任
Education is the very thing that we want to receive. Our parents send us to school so as to enable us to get knowledge and achieve great things in the future. The following are the duties of a student which we should keep in mind.
In the first place, we should be faithful to our parents and respectful to our teacher.
In the second place, we have to study as hard as we can.
In the third place, we must not tell lies.
Last of all, we must not criticize others.
To sum up, the above-mentioned rules are the very duties of a student.
so as to enable us to get knowledge 为了使我们获得知识
achieve great things in the future 在将来获得成功
keep in mind 牢记
be faithful to our parents and respectful to our teacher
忠实于父母,尊敬老师
the above-mentioned rules 上面所提到的规则
English Language Changing
变化中的英语
The English language is different from any other language.Yet English words do not stay the same. The language is always changing.We need new words for new inventions and new ideas.Different words e into use, or older words are used in new ways. English can change by borrowing words from other languages. Now new space and science words are being borrowed from other countries, too.Adding two words together also makes new words. Sometimes new words are shorter forms of older words. The names of people and products can bee new words.
be different from 与……不同
stay the same 保持不变
e into use 投入使用
in new ways 用新的方式
borrow from 向……借
If I Won Five Million Dollars In the Lottery
假如我获得福利彩票五百万元
If I won five million dollars in the lottery, I would help those who lead a miserable life. First of all, I would donate half of the money to some orphanages in the south of Taiwan. For one thing, I live in the south, and I think I had better begin charity at my native land. Another reason is that my loving parents provide me with sufficient food and clothing, so I wish those orphans to eat and dress as well as I.
Secondly, I would give one fourth of the money to other charities, such as the institutions for the homeless aged people. It is the most pitiful thing on earth for the elderly to be deserted by t
heir children. Therefore, I hope they can live decently. As to the rest of the money, I would, anytime and anywhere, send to those that are reported to be in distress for money in the TV news program or in the newspapers.
Anyway, I would help these people live better by giving them the money won in the lottery.
lead a miserable life 过着痛苦的生活
first of all = for one thing 首先
donate half of the money to some orphanages 捐赠一半的钱给孤儿院
provide me with sufficient food and clothing
提供给我充足的食物和衣服
the institutions for the homeless aged people 养老院
Pollution
污染
River pollution, as China Daily reports, exists not only in the Huaihe River but also in many other places of our country. Besides river pollution, there are also air pollution, noise pollution and so on. All kinds of environmental pollution do great harm to human beings. Now more and more people have e to realize how serious this problem is. Our government has been trying its best to take measures and call on people to fight against pollution. Though we’ve done lots of work, we still have a long way to go. But we’re sure that we’ll win the battle against pollution in the end.
China Daily 中国日报
do great harm to human beings 对人类有极大的危害
try its best to take measures 尽力采取措施
call on people to fight against pollution 号召人们同污染做斗争
win the battle against pollution
在同污染的斗争中取得胜利
描写本类主题常用语言集锦
1.表述观点的文章(一分为二)
有些题目涉及某一事物的正反两个方面。比如“失败是坏事还是好事”,“少看电视多看书还是多看电视少看书”。对此类文章,可以参考如下模式:
第1段:
Nowadays more and more people...; ...plays an important part in...Like everything else..., has / have both favourable and unfavorable aspects (both advantages and disadvantages). Generally, the favourable aspects (advantages) can be listed as follows.
第2段
First... Secondly... In addition (What’s more)...
第3段
Every coin has two sides. The negative aspects (disadvantages) are also apparent (obvious). To begin with... To make matters worse...
Worst of all...
第4段
Through above analysis,/All things considered, we can see that the positive aspects ( advantages )outweigh the negative ones (disadvantages). Therefore...
2.表述观点的文章(两者选一)
有些题目要求在A或B两者之间作一比较或选择,比如“乘车上学还是骑自行车上学”,“你愿意生活在城市还是生活在乡村”。这两者往往各有优势,对此类题目可以用以下模式:.
模式1
第1段:
Some people hold the opinion that (A) is superior to (B) in many ways. Others, however, argue that (B) is much better. Personally, I would prefer (A) because I think (A) has more advanta
ges.
第2段:
There are many reasons why l prefer(A). The main reason is that(赞同A的原因之一). Another reason is that(赞同A的原因之二).
第3段:
Of course, choosing(B)also has advantages to some extent, (列出1~2个B的优势).
第4段:
But if all these factors are considered, (A) is much better than(B). From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that...(总结观点)
3.我认为……(My View—)
表述观点的文章比比皆是,“有人认为考试没有必要,有人认为学生参加考试很有必要,你对目前考试的看法”,“你对课外阅读的看法”,“孩子是否应该做家务”等。对于此类题目可以采用如下模式:
模式l
第1段:
People’s views/ideas/opinions on...vary from person to person.Some people think that...is necessary. They hold this opinion because(简述正方理由). However, others hold that...is unnecessary. In their opinion,(简述反方理由).
第2段:
As to me, I am in favour of...The following are the reasons of my viewpoint.
第3段:
First...Secondly...In addition...
第4段:
Therefore, (In a word, )...
4.怎样……(How to...)
学会如何解决问题是每个学生应该学会的本领。像“怎样充分利用时间”,“怎样克服学习中碰到的困难”,“怎样保护环境”等题目。此类文章均可以采用下面的模式:
第1段:
简述要讨论的某种现象或简述问题的起因。
第2段:
Many ways can be used to solve(contribute to solving)this serious problem, but the following ones may be effective.
第3段:
First of a11...Besides.../Another way to solve the problem of...is...Finally...
第4段:
From my experience, I feel there is no shortcut in doing everything. Maybe these are not the best or only measures we can take. But it should be noted that we should take strong actions to/take great pains to...
作文三:《高考英语写作系列-优秀范文(议论文)》9200字
高考英语写作系列 -优秀范文 (议论文 ).txt 同志们:别炒股,风险太大了,还是做豆腐最安 全!做硬了是豆腐干,做稀了是豆腐脑,做薄了是豆腐皮,做没了是豆浆,放臭了是臭豆腐! 稳赚不亏呀!优秀范文 (议论文 )
The Good and Bad Sides of Setting off Firecrackers
燃放鞭炮的利与弊
Dear Editor,
I’ m writing to tell you about our discussion we had on the afternoon of last Wednesday about the good and bad sides of setting off firecrackers during the Spring Festival. 20 boy and 20 girl students attended the discussion. As a result, 40% of them believe that setting off firecrackers certainly adds pleasure and joy to the festival, therefore, it is a wonderful tradition. But another 40% of the students think that setting off firecrackers causes air and noise pollution, and what ’ s worse, it sometimes causes terrible accidents to us and to our property. The other 20% have never thought about it or don’ t care a bit.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
the good and bad sides of setting off firecrackers
燃放鞭炮的利与弊
as a result 结果
It is a wonderful tradition. 它是一个优良传统。
what’ s worse 更糟的是
think about 想起,想到
Disability
残疾
There are too many disabled people in the world. They have no differences from country to country. Some of them were disabled when they were born, the others were injured or hurt in all kinds of accidents, which made them disabled. Almost all of us feel sorry for them. We miserate with them because they are another kind of people. But some disabled people refuse others’ miseration. They think they can do everything by themselves. They don ’ t consider themselves as people who have defects. They think they are the same as normal people.
In fact, a great number of people with disabilities should be taken care of by others. They get help from the government or some beneficent organizations in society. But that ’ s not enough. They must look after themselves on their own. When a baby with disabilities is born, it should be taught to learn some particular skills to live. Or else, it would fail in the future. So one with disabilities must have abundant confidence to fit the hard life without others’ help.
too many disabled people 太多残疾人
miserate with them 同情他们
consider themselves as 把自己当作??
the same as 和??同样
taken care of 照看,照顾
look after themselves on their own 自己照顾自己
or else 否则 in the future 将来
Encouraging Buying Cars Isn’ t Fit For Today
目前不适合鼓励买车
Nowadays, we can often hear the discussion whether buying cars should be encouraged. Some people suggest that we should buy cars. But others claim that driving cars is not a wise idea. As far as I am concerned, I am in favor of the latter opinion. To begin with, there are few parking lots, so the streets are made narrower by the cars parked along the roads. For example, my father could not find any place to park when we t to the supermarket.
Moreover, many drivers do not obey regulations, because people do not pay enough attention to the rule of traffic. For instance, I often see people cross the road when the traffic lights are still red.
Last but not least, the growth of new roads’ construction is usually slower than the increasing number of cars. For example, the length of the road has gone up by 20% in 2002. However, the number of cars increased by 50% in the meantime. From what have been discussed above, we could draw a conclusion that encouraging buying cars is not fit for today.
as far as I am concerned 就我看
in favor of 赞成
to begin with 首先
for example =for instance 例如
moreover 并且
last but not least 其次
in the meantime 同时 draw a conclusion 得出结论
Duties Of A Student
学生的责任
Education is the very thing that we want to receive. Our parents send us to school so as to enable us to get knowledge and achieve great things in the future. The following are the duties of a student which we should keep in mind.
In the first place, we should be faithful to our parents and respectful to our teacher.
In the second place, we have to study as hard as we can.
In the third place, we must not tell lies.
Last of all, we must not criticize others.
To sum up, the above-mentioned rules are the very duties of a student.
so as to enable us to get knowledge 为了使我们获得知识
achieve great things in the future 在将来获得成功
keep in mind 牢记
be faithful to our parents and respectful to our teacher
忠实于父母,尊敬老师
the above-mentioned rules 上面所提到的规则
English Language Changing
变化中的英语
The English language is different from any other language. Yet English words do
not stay the same. The language is always changing . We need new words for new inventions and new ideas. Different words e into use, or older words are used in new ways. English can change by borrowing words from other languages. Now new space and science words are being borrowed from other countries, too. Adding two words together also makes new words. Sometimes new words are shorter forms of older words. The names of people and products can bee new words.
be different from 与??不同
stay the same 保持不变
e into use 投入使用
in new ways 用新的方式
borrow from 向??借
If I Won Five Million Dollars In the Lottery
假如我获得福利彩票五百万元
If I won five million dollars in the lottery, I would help those who lead a miserable life. First of all, I would donate half of the money to some orphanages in the south of Taiwan. For one thing, I live in the south, and I think I had better begin charity at my native land. Another reason is that my loving parents provide me with sufficient food and clothing, so I wish those orphans to eat and dress as well as I.
Secondly, I would give one fourth of the money to other charities, such as the institutions for the homeless aged people. It is the most pitiful thing on earth for the elderly to be deserted by their children. Therefore, I hope they can live decently. As to the rest of the money, I would, anytime and anywhere, send to those that are reported to be in distress for money in the TV news program or in the newspapers. Anyway, I would help these people live better by giving them the money won in the lottery.
lead a miserable life 过着痛苦的生活
first of all = for one thing 首先
donate half of the money to some orphanages 捐赠一半的钱给孤儿院
provide me with sufficient food and clothing
提供给我充足的食物和衣服
the institutions for the homeless aged people 养老院
Pollution
污染
River pollution, as China Daily reports, exists not only in the Huaihe River but also in many other places of our country. Besides river pollution, there are also air pollution, noise pollution and so on. All kinds of environmental pollution do great harm to human beings. Now more and more people have e to realize how serious this problem is. Our government has been trying its best to take measures and call on people to fight against pollution. Though we ’ ve done lots of work, we still have a long way to go. But we’ re sure that we’ ll win the battle against pollution in the end.
China Daily 中国日报
do great harm to human beings 对人类有极大的危害
try its best to take measures 尽力采取措施
call on people to fight against pollution 号召人们同污染做斗争
win the battle against pollution
在同污染的斗争中取得胜利
描写本类主题常用语言集锦
1. 表述观点的文章 (一分为二 )
有些题目涉及某一事物的正反两个方面。比如“失败是坏事还是好事” , “少看电视多看书 还是多看电视少看书” 。对此类文章,可以参考如下模式:
第 1段:
Nowadays more and more people...; ...plays an important part in...Like everything else..., has / have both favourable and unfavorable aspects (both advantages and disadvantages). Generally, the favourable aspects (advantages) can be listed as follows.
第 2段
First... Secondly... In addition (What’ s more)...
第 3段
Every coin has two sides. The negative aspects (disadvantages) are also apparent (obvious). To begin with... To make matters worse...
Worst of all...
第 4段
Through above analysis,/All things considered, we can see that the positive aspects ( advantages )outweigh the negative ones (disadvantages). Therefore... 2.表述观点的文章 (两者选一 )
有些题目要求在 A 或 B 两者之间作一比较或选择, 比如 “乘车上学还是骑自行车上学” , “你 愿意生活在城市还是生活在乡村” 。这两者往往各有优势,对此类题目可以用以下模式:. 模式 1
第 1段:
Some people hold the opinion that (A) is superior to (B) in many ways. Others, however, argue that (B) is much better. Personally, I would prefer (A) because I think (A) has more advantages.
第 2段:
There are many reasons why l prefer(A). The main reason is that(赞同 A 的原因之 一 ). Another reason is that(赞同 A 的原因之二 ).
第 3段:
Of course, choosing(B)also has advantages to some extent, (列出 1~2个 B 的优势 ). 第 4段:
But if all these factors are considered, (A) is much better than(B). From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that...(总结观点 )
3.我认为?? (My View— )
表述观点的文章比比皆是, “有人认为考试没有必要, 有人认为学生参加考试很有必要, 你 对目前考试的看法” , “你对课外阅读的看法” , “孩子是否应该做家务”等。对于此类题目可 以采用如下模式:
模式 l
第 1段:
People’ s views /ideas /opinions on...vary from person to person . Some people think
that...is necessary. They hold this opinion because(简述正方理由 ). However, others hold that...is unnecessary. In their opinion,(简述反方理由 ).
第 2段:
As to me, I am in favour of...The following are the reasons of my viewpoint. 第 3段:
First...Secondly...In addition...
第 4段:
Therefore, (In a word, )...
4.怎样?? (How to...)
学会如何解决问题是每个学生应该学会的本领。像“怎样充分利用时间” , “怎样克服学习 中碰到的困难” , “怎样保护环境”等题目。此类文章均可以采用下面的模式:
第 1段:
简述要讨论的某种现象或简述问题的起因。
第 2段:
Many ways can be used to solve(contribute to solving)this serious problem, but the following ones may be effective.
第 3段:
First of a11...Besides... /Another way to solve the problem of...is...Finally... 第 4段:
From my experience, I feel there is no shortcut in doing everything. Maybe these are not the best or only measures we can take. But it should be noted that we should take strong actions to/take great pains to...
作文四:《高考议论文范文》900字
爱,要懂得放手
爱,顾名思义,是一种紧紧围绕心的感受,但是对于爱的理解,我认为以上的爱只是小爱,真正的大爱是能够放手的。
我这里提及的是父母对子女的爱,也正是现今社会中愈谈愈烈的溺爱。溺爱不是一种爱,而是一种放纵。
爱不是禁锢,正所谓庭院里跑不出骏马,如今的家长因为爱孩子,从而百般呵护,有大过而无不及,因此培养出来的人如同围磨转驴一般的无能和无知。诚然如此,千里马是跑出来的,因怕受伤害而在马厩中练马,这不正如同在没有土壤的地方种树一样荒唐可笑吗!这个浅明的道理也蕴含于自然之中,一个养花的人养了许多花,他因为十分喜欢花,因此从不理会专家指导,每次施肥时都要过分施肥。为此,他还沾沾自喜的自以为是。殊不知,若干天后他的花全都枯死了。这个道理我们都明白,花肥施多了,花会丧失水分而死,这不正如溺爱一样明知是爱却殊不知是害吗?拆去禁锢,放手才叫爱。我父母的同事有一个孩子,在这个孩子七岁时他的父母就要求他自己打理生活,带着不满他每天自己洗衣服收拾屋子。若干年后,他的自主能力得到煅炼,在社会生活中对问题处理得游刃有余。这就是一种放手的爱,因为爱而去经历风雨煅炼自己。
爱要懂得放手,但是放手并不等于放纵。有另一些家长走了另一个极端,因为爱即放手,因此将孩子投入社会任凭逐流。我有一个大爷,家里有三个孩子。他奉行的就是极端主义,因为三个孩子过于难管,因此不认真管教。不出所料,因为自身判断力和控制力的缺失,大爷的三个孩子都名落榜弟。不要把放手的爱当作借口而去放纵,爱的放手是适度的、合理的放任,而放纵则是不负责任、盲目的纵容。不依规矩,不成方圆,凡事都要控制在一定范围内。
放手的爱是为了更好去爱。在一所大学,令所有老师学生吃惊的是,一个学生竟然坐着加长林肯车,托运着十九箱行李来到了住宿部,更令人吃惊的是学生要求单独住一个宿舍,在要求得到否决后竟要求安装空调和独立卫生间,这种程度的溺爱,不可理喻到无以复加。这样培养出来的学生,决对不会成为国家的栋梁之材,如此爱孩子,正是不放手的典型,“四体不勤,五谷不分”是用来形容溺爱机器产生出的寄生虫最好的词藻。
爱,只有放手才彰显扑朔般、若即若离的美。只有放手的爱才是有意义的爱。 因此,爱要懂得放手。
作文五:《高考议论文范文》13900字
读书——生命飞翔的羽翼
著名苏联作家高尔基曾经说过:“书是人类进步的阶梯。”书是一个知识的殿 堂,是人类最好的精神食粮,也是人鸿鹄高翔的羽翼。
“书中自有黄金屋。”书本中的知识是无穷无尽的,读书是为了更好地获取更 多知识,开阔自己的视野,帮助自己创造,实现自己的人生目标。战国时期,苏秦 去秦国以连横说进行游说,多次给秦惠王上书也未被采纳。回到家中,父母妻嫂都 不理睬他,于是他就找出许多书籍发奋研读。终于以合纵之策而身佩六国相印。 读书最重要的不是数量,而是质量。一本好书能使一个人思想精密,见解精辟。 道德高尚,从而塑造自己的性格。那些内容粗糙的“劣制品”完全可以省略不读。 在这一方面,伟大的导师恩格斯就是一个典范。恩格斯虽然只上过中学,但是他发 奋研读许多有价值的好书,因此十九岁就会有十二种语言说话和写文章。在参加工 作后依然多年如一日地勤奋学习更多的知识,终于成为一个知识广博的人,在后来 指导国际共产主义运动和准确传播科学,共产党主义理论中有很大贡献。
所谓“活到老学到老” 。一个人之所以能够不断提高,与他始终如一的学习是 密不可分的。学习可以有很多方法,但是这种始终如一的学习态度是没个人都应该 具备的。庄子说:吾生有涯,而知无涯。一个人活得再长也总有死去的一天,但是 知识的海洋却永不停歇得奔流着。坚持学习让人始终立于不败之地,但若不能不断 补充知识和积累知识,便会被失单的步伐所抛弃。著名作家歌德认为:谁落后于时 代,必将承受那个时代所有的痛苦。在 21世纪这个知识爆炸的年代里,若不能不 断供给自己新的知识,将会被时代所淘汰。
“读史使人明智,读诗使人灵秀,演算使人精密,哲理使人深刻。”可见,不 同的阅读能开发人类不同的信纸,增长不同方面的知识。因此,我们更应该发奋勤 读,让书成为我们生命飞翔的羽翼。
学会舍弃
鸣蝉奋力地甩掉了外壳,因而获得了高空中自由的歌唱,壁虎勇敢地挣断了尾 巴, 因而在危难中保全了它弱小的生命; 算盘若填满自己的空位, 变得 “座无虚席” , 将丧失自己的运算功能。(用自然现象起兴,引起读者联想。)
对那些不该拥有的东西,我们应该舍弃。
现实生活是复杂的,而我们的承受力有限。如果大脑是一个仓库,不管仓库多 大,一种东西充斥其中时,另一种东西定然无法进入。比如读书,当我们痴醉于金 庸古龙梁羽生的刀光剑影中,我们又怎能专注于复杂的几何方阵,怎能用心于浩繁 的英语单词呢?想读的和该读的,你必须在两者间作出选择。
人的一生中有很多事情需要作出类似的选择。舍弃应该舍去的,你便是智者; 舍弃不该舍去的, 你就是愚夫。 世界文豪高尔基在他的房间失火时, 没有顾及家具、 财产、衣物,甚至没有顾及生命,却从熊熊大火中救出了几箱书。舍弃了凡夫俗子 眼中的财富,守住了那些启迪心智、净化心灵的真正的财富。而有些人,终生抱着 “人为财死,鸟为食亡”的信条,追逐着金光闪闪的财宝。为了庸俗的追求,他们 舍弃了人格和道德, 舍弃了人性中的真善美。 错误的舍弃, 使他们的一生龌龊卑鄙。 (以高尔基为例引出两种相反的舍弃,强调人生中需要学会正确舍弃,文意进了一 步。)
正确的舍弃, 往往需要青松秋菊般的高尚风格。 据说安徽桐城有一条 “六尺巷” , 原本是张、叶两家争执之地。张家主人乃当朝宰相,张老夫人致信给他。他回信却 说“千里家书只为墙,让他三尺又何妨,长城万里今犹在,不见当年秦始皇”。于 是张家让出三尺。叶家深感惭愧,也让出三尺,便成了“六尺巷”。那位宰相舍弃 了自己面子上的威严,以宽仁礼让的胸襟,大度能容的气慨,化干戈为玉帛,止争 斗于未起。 如果不是有超出常人的气量和胸怀, 怎会作出如此的舍弃? (怎样取舍? 联想“六尺巷”的故事,论述了正确的舍弃需要高尚风格,层次更进一步。) 正确的舍弃,不会像随手扔掉废纸团那样轻而易举,它还需要勇气、决心和果 敢。赵武灵王废除旧制,提倡胡服骑射时,许多人反对阻挠,但他有勇气有决心,
坚决果敢,最终创下名垂青史的千秋伟业。舍弃的过程是艰难的,尤其在忍痛割爱 的时候。西蜀道上马嵬坡前,唐明皇赐死杨玉环,以政治家的眼光看,用一个贵妃 的死换得半壁江山的暂时安宁,也算是值得的。可是,“宛转娥眉马前死”,“回 看血泪相和流”,偏偏“君王掩面救不得”。此景此情,怎么不让人肝肠寸断,痛 不欲生呢?(怎样取舍?联想赵武灵王与唐明皇的事例,论述了正确的舍弃还需要 勇气、决心和果敢。)
不是每一株幼苗都能长成参天大树,不是每一朵花都能结出丰硕的果实,生活 要求我们必须学会舍弃。算盘要想具有运算功能,必须舍弃多余的算珠。你向往山 居的清静,就必须舍弃都市的繁华;你仰慕奋斗者的成功,就必须舍弃安逸闲散的 生活;你希望走遍千山万水,就必须舍弃乡土乡音的柔美与温馨。(排比句段,由 自然而人事进行联想陈述,既是总结,又是强调。)
我们应该学会舍弃。(回归话题)
魂兮归来
没有核的果实无法在自然界生存,没有米粒的稻穗总是扬着无知的头颅。那么 失却了魂魄的人呢?
在这个传媒众声喧哗的年代,在这个文化、伪文化鱼目混珠的年代,我们是否 已被繁花迷了眼,丢了心?(由自然现象引出话题“传统文化的迷失”。)
康德有云:常有二理,在手心焉;敬而畏之,与日更新;上则为星辰,下则为 德性。但是在今天,当我们只会坐在草地上,四十五度仰望空中生长的朵朵浮云时 (郭敬明),谁还能理解昔日哲人心中的敬畏之情?当“简单”的《老鼠爱大米》 唱红大江南北时, 谁还会重拾 “青青子矜 (衿) , 悠悠我心” 那般泛黄的感动? (摆 出现象。)
当下的文化生活常流于简单、幼稚。无可否认,青春文学确实能带来梦幻般的 感动,通俗歌曲也不失为茶余饭后的消遣,但倘若这一切成为文化的主流,当一个 人沉浸于其中难以自拔时,很难想象他能直面现实,让心智与身体共同成长。(分 析原因。)
当下文化生活的另一股暗流便是平庸、浮躁的喧嚣。每天,大量的娱乐新闻让 人们津津有味地咀嚼名星的绯闻琐事,各类“速读名著”“小故事里的大智慧”常 驻畅销书列。以至于有人不无忧心地说,当绿蒂主动投怀送抱时,维特还有什么烦 恼?(分析原因。)
一个人可以忍受物质生活的贫困,却不能不追求精神生活的高贵。类似的文化 快餐除了提供暂时的声色之娱,还有什么能留驻心田,在心湖里回荡几许波纹的 呢?
个体的精神文化缺失令人遗憾,但当其成为整体性的精神信仰缺席便是可悲甚 至是可怕的情形了。
中国旧有的三纲五常已被破除,新生的文化秩序尚未完全建立,生活在这种环 境中的我们,是否也成为了迷惘的一代?(论危害)
魂兮,归来。
所幸的是,人文精神并未完全流失。当年轻志愿者马骅在梅里雪山间失去生命 时,便将诗人的理想主义带到了那里,成为了插在精神雪峰上的标杆。当昆曲在大 学校园引起轰动时,不由让人相信,传统的文化经典对于麦当劳下长大的年轻人们 仍有着磁石般的吸引力。
一个人仅仅拥有此生此世是不够的,他还应拥有更为广阔的精神世界。对于青 少年而言,精神之魂也许并不在远处,而在被重重伪文化掩盖的内心深处。(提办 法,表期望)
生活,需要经常地清点
我们都知道定期要对自己的物品清理查点,哪些是生活必要的,哪些又是对生 活并不太重要的, 以此来决定对它们的取舍。 其实生活也是如此, 需要经常地清点, 我们在清点生活的过程中, 清点着生命。 (以清点物品起兴, 自然地引出清点生活。 )
人的生命是非常短暂而有限的,而我们渴望得到的东西,希望去做的事却是很 多的,这个好,那个也不错,但是我们必须要清醒地意识到人的生命是有限的,人 的能力也是有限的,总该对自己要做的事有所取舍选择,将自己的精力放在自己最 该去做,最想去做的事情上,专注而有目标,这样做事情才会有希望。如果一个人 在一生中不能够经常地果断地舍弃一些不该投入精力的事情,什么都渴望得到,时 时、处处都劳心劳力,其结果只能是让自己失望,所以,生活真的需要经常清点。 (讲道理,重在阐释为什么要清点。)
舍得舍得,有舍才有得。小草舍弃了活在大树的浓荫里,才生长得更加坚韧; 小鲤鱼舍弃了平淡地游弋在水中,逆水前行克服困难,才迎来了最终跃过龙门的成 功;居里夫人舍弃对享乐的追求,潜心研究,最终为人类对放射性物质的研究作出 了巨大的贡献;陈景润舍弃了安闲自在地作一件平凡的事,而胸怀大志,在简陋的 生活环境中埋头苦干,实现了他多年的目标——证明出了哥德巴赫猜想。他们之所 以取得成功,很重要的一个原因就是他们都将自己的精力放在一件事上,一个目标 中,全身心地投入对理想的追求。(摆事实,为什么要清点。)
每个人都是多梦的,对未来有着各种各样的设想,对要干的事有各种各样的想 法,但要明白的是精力有限,总会有取有舍,有失有得,将自己的精力放在最重要 的事情上,他的追求才会有价值,有希望,即使到头来没有鲜花和掌声,他也是成 功的,因为,毕竟,他没有遗憾。(讲道理,为什么要清点。)
放弃了追求享乐,才能活得更好,更有价值;放弃了纷繁世事,才能集中精力 去做大事; 放弃了思绪乱飞,才能平和心境,追求自然; 放弃了世俗的偏见,才 能寻觅到久已失去的自我。所以,生活,真的需要经常地清点。 (清点什么,怎 样清点。)
评点:本文篇首开门见山,旗帜鲜明地提出观点:生活需要经常清点。第二、 三、 四段谈为什么要经常地清点。 第二段指出因生命和精力有限我们必须学会取舍, 因而必须对生活进行经常的清点。 第三段从自然界的小草、 游鱼过度到人生的取舍, 有力地证明了只有学会取舍才能成就事业和梦想。接下去具体写我们应该如何清点 生活,哪些需要放弃,哪些需要保留,论证层层深入,结构清晰合理,最末三个排 比段的运用,使结尾很有力度,增强了文章的说服力。
善良,成就你的蕙质良心
“风送花香红满地,雨滋春树碧连天。”是的,世界很美,不仅是因为有春的 烟波画船,有夏的朝云暮卷 ! ,有秋的云霞绚烂,有冬的冰肌玉骨,更是因为有善 良的滋润,有关爱的呵护,有理解的支撑,有祝福的陪伴。(由诗句引出话题。) 善良,不是容颜的闭月羞花,不是举止的温文尔雅,不是财富的腰缠万贯;更 不是权势的叱咤风云。 善良, 是黑暗凄冷中的如豆星火, 是干涸枯竭时的点滴甘露, 是迷惘徘徊时的一句点化,是沉迷无助时的一把搀扶。真正的善良是来自心灵深处
的真诚的同情与怜惜,无私的关爱与祝福。真正的善良,无须剪红刻翠,无须粉黛 雕饰, 它本身就是人们内心最原始的一种纯朴的纯洁的感情精华。 (什么是善良。 ) 人之初,性本善。可是在经历了太多的锤炼之后,我们在学会坚强的同时也逐 渐变得冷漠起来。我们匆匆地在人潮汹涌中寻找适合自己的角色,漠然地与一切和 自己不相关的人与事擦肩而过,我们似乎早已习惯了“各自打扫门前雪,休管他人 瓦上霜”的处世哲学,而不愿再牵挂别人的任何困苦。于是,眼看着那颗曾经晶莹 的善良之心在红尘碧红之中慢慢被尘土侵蚀包裹,而后结成厚厚的茧,于是,我又 不得不负载着这颗结茧的沉重的心孤独地在冷漠中艰难跋涉?? (反面论证,为 什么人要善良,因为人丢失了善良。)
当岁月的风尘将皱纹刻上人们的额头,将雪鬓迁上人们的青丝,当我们不知不 觉地在孤独与冷漠中逐渐老去时,在夕阳残照下,剥去心灵的坚冰,去打开心灵的 一隅时,才忽而发觉没有了善良,没有了那颗原本容易受感动的心,而只剩下麻木 的干枯的躯壳和永无止境的疲劳与困顿。(反面论证,为什么要善良,因为人发现 了自己的善良缺失。)
善良,是人生大厦的基础,是人性品质中的瑰丽珍品。拥有善良的人才会懂得 去感激,去回报,才会有“会当凌绝顶,一览众山小”的豪情,才会有“先天下之 忧而忧,后天下之乐而乐”的高尚,才会有“谁言寸草心,报得三春晖”的执著, 才会有“知君有意凌寒色,羞共千花一样春”的坚韧和那份“宠辱不惊,闲看亭前 花开花落,去留无意,漫随天外云卷云舒”的气度与胸怀。(正面论证,为什么要 善良。)
善良的人,即使没有巍峨高山的冷峻与清峭,也可以有平川凡壑的踏实与稳健; 即使没有牡丹玫瑰的雍容绚丽,也可以有芙蓉夕醉的高洁与典雅。善良的人,即使
不能居庙堂之高来兼济天下,也可以处江湖之远独善其身。拥有善良,就拥有了生 命的方向,即使在物欲横流灯红酒绿中穿梭,也会永远来去从容,两袖清风。 善良,不需要太多的诠释,它是寒风中的一只火把,失意处的一句安慰,痛苦 中的一丝爱抚,无助时的一点支援。把善良给别人,也给自己,那么人类将与日月 同辉;留一份善良给世界,那么世界将与星宇同寿。珍爱善良,拥有善良,洒播善 良,那么,你将会开一树灿烂的红花,既使自己美丽,也使别人温暖。(进一步阐 明,人要成为善良的人。)
小议
目前,一股
为什么会出现这股新热潮呢?首先要归根于人们崇洋媚外的思想。 早在旧中国, 洋货充斥市场,人们便与洋货结下了不解之缘;当前随着改革开放步伐的加快,人 们与
崇洋媚外的思想。一些厂家以
其次,由于人们崇拜洋名,某些企业乘虚而入,利用人们的这种心理特征,给 自己的产品打上洋名,以迷惑顾客,打开销路。
洋名扬名者有之。日本
查取洋名无名者亦不乏其例。现在市场上某些产品的洋名,晦涩离奇,令人费 解,甚至连它是食品名、服装名还是其他名都令人搞不清楚,这样的商品,人们只 能敬而远之,更谈不上扬名了。当然也有些商品,名字又太土,令人自然不自觉地 与过去那种落后产品联系起来(这当然是一种偏见),更重要性的是这些商品没有 吸引人的独到的优点,因而没有扬名。
由上观之,无论洋名土名,它们都只是一个名称布局,其主要目的是将不同的 事物区分开来,名是一个表面现象,是产品是否扬名的外因条件。对事物起决定作 用的是事物的
同样,一个人在众人心目中的地位,与他的名字也一相干。马克思、列宁、毛 泽东这些伟人的名字并无特别之处, 但他们的成就、 贡献是全世界人民有目共睹的, 他们的英名将永远被人们记住。 相反, 一些父母即使给孩子取一个外国总统的洋名, 他们的孩子也不一定就成大器。
目前这股
踮起脚尖
踮起脚尖是为了看到整个世界,也是为了让整个世界看见。
—— 题记
我看到过一幅让人难以忘怀的摄影作品, 烈日烘烤下的沙漠中, 几个非 洲的小孩支着瘦弱的身躯,端着发黑的破盆,挤在人群中,讨要救济的食物。 枯 瘦如柴的他们踮起脚尖, 伸长手臂, 一双双大眼睛满是渴望与企盼。 他们踮起脚 尖,只为对着分发食品的人说:“我很饥饿 ! ”
生活本就是普遍性与特殊性的结合。每个事物都可能成为普通中的一
身也成为他人眼中不可名状的美。
当我站在人群中, 静静地看着周围的瞬息万变的时候, 我似乎就要被千 人一面所淹没。 我和他们整天做着同样调繁复的事情, 看着同样索然无味的风景。 我有一种冲动,一种踮起脚尖,奋发向上的冲动。也许踮起脚尖,就能看到更加 美好的明天…… 人生 (们 ) 常说:“千里马常有, 而伯乐不常有。 ” 古人也有 “欲 渡无舟楫” 的生不逢时、 怀才不遇的感叹。 他们可以不满, 可以埋怨, 可以哀叹, 但却断不能失去了“欲上长城,将登太行”的壮志豪情。他们更需要有“踮起脚 尖”的生存智慧。不必“采菊东篱,也不见悠然南山,何不对酒当歌人生得意弄 扁舟 ?
古人云:矮人看戏,越看越急。莫说是矮人,就是一般个头的正常人扎 根在人堆里, 离舞台又远, 也免不了人云亦云地更别说看出什么真知灼见来。 当 你们的人生真的处于“矮人”的境地时,又会怎么做呢 ? 是继续听得云里雾里, 还是干脆蹲下来,或是拍拍屁股走人,不管这戏多精彩,咱都不看了呢 ? 何不踮起脚尖呢 ?
也许你会说,这有用吗 ? 当你踮起脚尖时,你难道不会有一个全新的视 角吗 ? 就算你真的踮起脚尖还是看不到戏,若是台上的演员看到了你,请你到台 上去看呢 ? 现实生活中可真有请矮子上台的人。
提到傻根, 人们总会在脑海中浮现他憨憨的模样。 在成名前, 他是普通 “北漂”中的一员,每天挤在电影厂门口等机会,可机会终于被他等到了。就是 因为在选演员时他举起了手,说他最会演傻子。在关键时刻,他踮起了脚尖, 这 戏——看得值。
人活着需要生存的智慧, 人也如草木般需要适应, 适应自然。 踮起脚尖, 你能看到更高更远的天空;
到你瞩目的光芒……
【评点】全文围绕“踮起脚尖”是一种“生存智慧”行文,审题准确, 立意深刻,中心突出,而又起承大气,转合较自然。其表达较为灵动,多有生动 形象处,如“矮人看戏” 、 “傻根举手”等。但也有文思不够连贯或表达不够恰当 的地方,如开头写“非洲小孩”和中间写“何不对酒当歌,人生得意弄扁舟” 。 计分:内容 23分 +表达 23分 +发展 l0分 =56分。
拥有的方式
摘西瓜, 结果却一无所获, 年幼的我们都对那只可爱的小猴付之一笑。 匆匆间我 们都已长大, 奔忙于晨夕之间, 明白了很多道理, 却依然在上演一幕幕小猴摘果 子的现代剧。 有人忙碌于追求自己的梦想, 却认为失去的才最珍贵; 有人怀揣着 许多的获得,却身心疲惫,不敢放弃。静心去想,其实我们并不快乐。
如果说
饥饿者视粮食贵于金钱, 寒冷者视衣帛重于珠玉, 只因他们真正体会到衣食 的重要。 成功的人珍惜自己的成功, 失败的人珍惜自己的付出, 因为他们知道成 功的不易,付出的辛劳。而智者,居陋室而自娱,无得失而自乐,他们珍惜自己 所拥有的一切。 因为他们知道, 只有现在的拥有才最值得珍惜, 失去的和将来的 只是水中月镜中花,虽美却虚幻。
也有哲人说, 人如负筐采石者, 于岁月的崎岖蜿蜒间采撷心爱的珍宝, 载着 越来越重的行囊, 追赶流逝着的光阴而怀揣曾经希冀的未来。 当衣食使人沦于琐 屑庸俗,成败使人堕为钩心斗角,拥有,竟成了累赘。或许,让昨天随风而逝, 让明天姗姗而至,失去些拥有,我们会更轻松。
有登山者不幸将腿夹于两石间, 呼唤、 推石都不得救, 他竟勇敢地用刀剪将 腿卸下,血流殷红,浸润石土,他忍痛爬行找人帮助。后来他得救了,虽丢失了 健壮的肢体却保住了完整的生命。
去,
壁虎能断尾, 所以弱小的它们勇敢地长存于世; 蜗牛不舍壳, 所以只能缓慢 地爬于尺寸之地。
舍弃,不是浪费。当前进的步伐因行囊而蹒跚,舍掉偌重的负荷,脚步才会 更坚实。 甚至舍弃比拥有需要更多的勇气, 拥有是我们曾经辛苦的汗水、 心爱的 珍品,弃之,几许依依之情丝痛心呵!
许多的选择与行为都令人难以左右, 处于昨日与明朝, 总会有几多惆怅几多 憧憬。人生就似乘车,于一站站的聚合离别而或喜或悲,成熟就在选择中成就。 珍惜自己的拥有,学会割舍自己的拥有,才能真正拥有自我。
【感悟赏评】 文章先通过一个故事引出观点, 然后用对举的方式用事理、 事 例证明,结构完整。作文前,注重了对生活本身的思考和反思,激发了写作的灵 感,在选材上下了一番功夫,材料正反对比,有事例有分析,所以文章显得很有 生活性,有说服力。
莫把情云遮慧眼
湖北一考生
人生活在世上, 是在无数的感情里度过的。 有人说一个人的生命从笑声中开 始又在哭声中结束,这一笑一哭,莫不饱含着浓浓的人情,浸透了感情的一生, 使生命有了支柱、 目标、 希望, 使生命真正饱满、 充实, 使人性有了耀眼的光华。 人们重感情, 人类也许永远也无法理解在一头饥饿的雄狮面前, 它的孩子与 猎物没有区别的那种无情兽性。 然而深深浅浅的感情织成的云却又常常成为一种 遮蔽,让人们原本智慧的眼蹿无法看到青天。
司马迁说, 人情莫不念父母、 顾妻子。 人在很多时候都会自然而然地因情感 的砝码将公正的天平偏向自己更在意更关心的人, 就像俗话所说的 “胳膊肘哪能 朝外拐” 。于是古代有了智子疑邻的寓言而今人也仍旧在走着这条老路,甚至走 得很偏很远。 一个年轻的女职员在她本该拥有幸福家庭, 拥有灿烂前途之时却因 贪污公款被投入监狱, 当人们问她为什么要做这种傻事时, 她的回答只有三个字 :“为了爱。 ”一位母亲,因年幼的儿子身患绝症无药可治,竟抱着儿子一起踏上 了黄泉路。 一个老实的农民, 却也知道讲哥们儿义气, 将儿时同学偷盗来的赃款 藏在了自己的被褥下, 稀里糊涂地便成了窝藏犯……人们所犯的错误, 小到考试 时帮助作弊, 大到杀人放火, 有的只是一时的情不自禁, 美好的情感却真的成了 道家所说的“情劫” 。
的地方, 不同的领域冒出头来。 一样的顾客, 陌生人就可以得到全面周到的服务, 而熟人却被晾到了一边儿 ; 有次品卖不出去,就联系一个熟单位做职工福利。反 正是亲不见怪, 抑或是熟人自然能够体谅, 熟悉的人碍着面子不好说, 只管让他 们自咽苦水。感情又一次左右了人的态度,甚至还成为了一种被利用的工具。 我们景仰包公, 不只是因为他不畏强权, 更因为他大义灭亲, 铡了自己的亲 侄儿。
而事实上, 每个人在感情占了上风的时候, 只要能再有一刻的冷静, 就能摆 脱情感的纠葛, 不论是偏向亲近的人还是故意
人是有感情的,但更是有理智的。当我们注视感情时也切记 :莫把情云遮慧眼。
公则生明
江西一考生
朱熔基总理将
寓言日 :宋国一富人,一日大雨把他家墙淋坏了,他儿子认为不修好,一定会有 人来偷窃,邻家老人也如此认为,是夜,果然富人被窃。富人于是觉得他儿子很 聪明, 而怀疑邻家老人为窃贼。 可见, 富人对被窃一事, 完全受感情亲疏所左右, 自己的儿子、偏私地认为聪明,邻翁却是怀疑对象,这样不客观,很难认识到真 相,或许,事情的真相恰恰相反也未可知。所以,感情上的亲疏远近在很大程度 上影响着人们的判断, 要想获得正确的认识, 必须理智客观地分析研究事物, 不 带一丝感情色彩。
历览古来圣贤人, 无不在对事物做出客观公正的评价, 在处理事情上力求做 到公正不偏私。
我们要向包拯学习,他公正廉洁,不包庇一切罪行。他的铡刀上斩昏君,下 斩黎民,只要是真相,就能在他面前闪光,只要有罪恶贪婪,一律逃不过他公正 无私的眼睛,于是,才在青史上永远携刻着他的名字。
我们要向岳飞学习,他训练的岳家军,行军迅猛,杀敌勇武,这与他的公正 无私是分不开的, 儿子岳云, 犯军规违纪按军法处臵, 不因他是自己的儿子而有 所偏颇, 于是全军上下, 无人不服, 元人不赞, 因此, 岳家军才使金军闻风丧胆, 才使得北宋得以保全,岳飞的精神一样在历史的长河中熠熠生辉。
不论是故去的古人, 还是现存的今人, 只有做到公正无私, 才能在对事物的 认识上得到真理, 才能在对事物的处理上得到赞美。 感情上的偏私只能陷人于不 分青红皂白,不辨是非之中,我们要坚决拒绝让感情主宰理智。
勿以好恶论断之
人有七情, 自有喜好与厌恶之情, 然而, 当这种好恶之情掺入对真理的认识 时,又会有怎样的影响呢 ?
也许腊梅讨厌冬风的肆虐与无忌,却依然在寒冬中吐露芬芳 ; 也许鱼儿讨厌 巨浪的汹涌与狰狞,却依然与巨浪为伴,成全生命的真讳 ; 也许落叶对这个天地 无比依恋,然而,当秋风吹来时,它毅然地飘落,告别那个美好的世界,成全明 年即将萌发的草芽……
勿以好恶论断之,这是一种怎样的人生境界 ! 这是一种何等的明智选择 ! 当一个人可以将对事物的判断游离于感情的亲疏之外,那他必是明哲之人 了 !
公子小白曾被管仲箭射衣带钩, 自是对其痛恨无比。 然而, 当他认识到管仲 的才识时,放下心里的厌恶,重用管仲,终成一代霸主。
刘邦不喜韩信的出言无忌,却委其以重任,让韩信统兵作战,征讨四方,终 于灭了西楚霸王,成为天之骄子。
房玄龄曾为李建成出谋害李世民, 李世民又岂能不恨 ? 然而李世民不计前嫌, 重用房玄龄为臣,遂有
感情的亲疏可以蒙蔽你的双眼, 让你看不清事物的真面目, 阻碍你对真理的 认识,成为你求知路上的绊脚石。
勿以好恶论断之,楚王不听信郑袖之辞而疏远屈原,自不会为秦国所吞并。 勿以好恶论断之,李存勖不宠幸伶人,重用伶官,不谈国事,自不会因一人 之乱而七庙隳,为天下苍生所笑。
勿以好恶论断之, 诸葛亮不听信马谡的信誓旦且, 自不会痛失街亭, 一败千 里,死不螟目。
举目四望,古今中外,有多少英雄豪杰因内心之好恶而惨遭滑铁卢 ? 古代如
此,今天亦如此,或许,将来也如此。
对真理的探求是独立的,对事物的认识也不能掺杂上感情, “做学问就是做 学问” ,陈景润的话也许揭示了这个真理。
自然,人非圣贤,孰能无过 ? 我们不必苛求,不过,不可不求。
勿以好恶论断之,也许你会发现,狗尾草也会开出美丽的花。
感情不是保险绳
陕西一考生
中国是个人情大国,除原有的宗族关系之外,又重新发展了诸如情同手足、 亲如兄弟之类的新感情。在处理各类事务中,喜欢拉关系找后门、找熟人等等, 仿佛这样做才能万无一失,如同上了保险一样。
我们不能否定这样做带来的好处,但靠感情的亲疏来处理事务和认识事情, 是否片面了些, 岂不知这样做的后果往往会得不偿失, 会蒙蔽我们看待事物真实 一面的双眼 !
《韩非子》 中有这样一个寓言, 说宋国有个富人, 一天大雨把他家的墙淋坏 了。他儿子说 :
诚然与你关系亲密的人值得信赖, 可以给予你帮助, 但与你疏远或是完完全 全的陌生人, 就一定会陷你于不义, 想加害于你, 成为被怀疑、 被仇视的对象吗 ? 有一句老话 :
面楚歌的境地无法突围, 当你徘徊于迷途之中不能前进时, 也许有些与你平时亲 如手足的人只会观望, 而许多好心的陌生人会交给你一根救命的稻草。 多少人当 官时门庭若市, 又有多少人下台后门可罗雀,
不要总以审视的目光打量陌生人, 也不要把所有的筹码都正在感情的亲疏关 系上,毕竟感情不是我们认识事情,处理事情的保险绳。
感情不是惟一筹码
情与理
陕西一考生
现实世界申, 理智往往容易被情感淹没, 那么, 怎样才能驾驭住自己的情感 呢 ?
——题记
理智,是一朵花,盛开于智慧的春风申 ; 情感,是一阵雨,常常将这一朵花 摧残。情与理,对立而又共生于现实世界。
一、渴望真情
情感、这一人类与生俱来的元素在一代仁人贤士的一生中抒写得淋漓尽致。 他们将真情吐露,活得满满洒洒,坦坦荡荡,屈原便是这样一位真性情的人。 他 高唱
末悔
冰心先生说 :雨后的青山, 像泪水洗过的良心。 她告诉我们 :惟有真实的情感, 才是一生无悔的追求。倘若将自己的情感囚禁,人生便失去了光彩。
二、超越感情
周幽王为博妃子一笑,令人点燃烽火,戏弄诸侯,终至亡国。
唐玄宗宠幸杨贵妃误国,终遗恨千古。
这些, 都是没有超越感情的结果
人们常说 :三思而后行,说的就是这个意思,
三、驾驭感情
感情犹如一匹野马,需要你去驯服。理智则是它的缮绳。以理智面对世界, 人生便增添了一份自信,一份豁达。
范仲淹遭贬, 然而他仍旧胸怀天下, 以理智的大脑, 平静的眼光向人们昭示 了一个智者的情怀—先天下之忧而忧, 后天下之乐而乐。 这是何等宽广的胸怀啊 ! 无数事实告诉我们,情与理相伴相生,互为两极。理智需要情感的润泽,人 生才显灵动, 情感需要理智的依托, 人生才显智慧, 愿人人都能用情感之雨浇灌 理智之花。
【点评】 :
情理结合,是本文的最大特点。题目涵盖话题的核心,吻合命题意图,简洁 明了, 具有情感与理性的双重韵致, 情感表露与理性抒发相结合, 奠定了全文写 作的基本格调。渴望真情,超越感情,驾驭感情,逐层推进,进而升华。
点面结合,是本文的又一特点。作者善于选材 :屈原的性情铸就他的英名 ; 李 自的洒脱,使他的华彩奇章流传后世 ! 这是真情的体现。周幽王亡国,唐玄宗误 国,这是没有超越感情而酿成的大祸。范仲淹驾驭感情,以天下为己任,体现智 者的用情。从不同侧面对
作为散文。语言的典雅、凝练、流畅,体现了作者良好的语言功底。另外, 题记的令人深思,小标题的提纲享领,都为文章增色不少。
不足是缺乏鲜活的时代色彩的举例,切记 :为有源头活水来。
切莫走近
陕西一考生
古语有去 :君子这交淡如水。小时候对这句话大为不解,总觉得是朋友就应 该亲密无间,为什么要:“淡如水”呢?后来才明白,这句话是蕴含着深刻的人 生哲学。细细玩味,就会愈发赞叹古人的智慧与超然。
人是感情的动物,就是因为这样,人类才成为万物的灵长,也是因为这样, 人类常为自己的情感而左右了对事物的判断。所以,
过于浓烈的感情或亲近会像迷雾一样遮住自己的眼睛, 对事物的认识和判断 便也要不可避免地因此受到影响。偏见、袒护也由此而来。面对矛盾,选择,如 果只一味地想要维护那份亲密,便会导致我们的片面和错误。
马克思和恩格斯这两位伟大的革命导师, 一个穷困潦倒, 一个则是商人。 马 克思的小女儿病死了, 他无钱为她举行葬礼, 即使如此, 他却从未向他的朋友恩 格斯要求过任何经济上的帮助。 然而这样一份友谊却维持了几十年之久, 成为佳 话。这段伟大友谊的背后就是两位伟人对公正、平等、真诚的理解,也体现着他
们对人生的追求。
从小时候对父母亲的盲目崇拜, 觉得大人的话都是对的, 直到我们逐渐成长, 有了自己的思考和判断, 其实我们对这个世界的认识也随着所谓
不要让眼光带上感情
陕西一考生
大是有感情的, 所以往往在某些事情上表现出个人主义。 由于感情, 许多人 处世不公,甚至于包庇罪犯,往往造成极不好的影响。
在当代社会, 我们的生活已经离不开与社会的交流与沟通, 然而频繁的沟通 与交流要求我们有犀利的眼光,而不能感情化。在历史上,
虽然现在来看实在片面, 但是这背后的故事是值得人们深思的。 商朝灭亡是由于
再次敬告 :不要让眼光带上感情,人人公正,事事公正,我们的社会才有进 步 , 我们祖国才更强大 !
切莫感情用事
陕西一考生
魏徵在《课太宗十思疏》中写道 :
如果你是一名律师, 你的亲人犯了罪, 在法庭上你是依法办事, 一切按法理 讲,还是运用你的口才,抓一些漏洞,为亲人尽量摆脱罪名,这实在很难选择 :一边是法理,一边是人情,该顾哪边。违背哪一边你都会不安。但大义灭亲,法 理可容,人们也会慢慢理解你 ; 若你违背法理,自己良心不安不说,整个社会都 会鄙视你。选择正义,有罪就该罚,这才是你的正确选择,切莫感情用事。 物理史上,人们在理解光的本质时,由于著名物理学家牛顿坚持微粒学说, 光波学说其时已经得到验证,但牛顿在科学界的影响很大,人们宁愿相信牛顿, 也不愿相信真理, 使光波学说埋没了 100多年, 直到在实验室里面重新被演示以 后,人们 d 慢慢相信,接受光波学说。在科学史上,人们宁愿相信著名科学家, 而不去相信真理, 这一切都是因为人们感情用事, 认为名人不会错, 孰不知名人 也会有失误乃至错误的时候。孔子曾说 :人非圣贤,孰能无过。切莫因一个人的 名声,而决定他所说的所做的一切。
**是我们伟大的领袖, 在抗日战争期间, 对苏共派来的使者, 他并不因 为自己崇拜马列主义, 而相信使者所指挥的一切都是正确的, 而是根据当时的抗 战形势来决定抗战的路线,并且在井冈山创立了一套适合中国国情的革命策略。 对人感情的亲疏,往往会影响我们对事物的认知,从而造成一些不必要的错误。 判断一件事情的对错、 是非, 切不能因为感情用事而做出错误的判断, 不能
因为盲目的崇拜而相信他人的一切, 遇事应冷静, 仔细考虑认真研究来判断正误
切莫感情用事 !
呼唤理智
陕西一考生
对于一个富有感情的人, 与毫无知觉的机器相比来说, 判断是非为感情所遮 障,是不可避免也无可厚非的。但为了追求一种思想的成熟,我们需要理智。 眼前迷雾索绕,烟雾氖氧,有时还出现怡人的景观,感情告诉你,前方一定 是一片美景,而理智却告诉你那 T 可能是万丈深渊。很清楚地选择,却常有人 落人深渊,一边下落,一边呼喊着理智的名字 ; 选择了感情,往往让人后悔,选 择了理智,即使有莫大的艰难,事后也会无怨无悔。
正因为感情呈现在人眼前的, 是美仑美英的画面, 是悦耳动听的音乐, 是亲 密无间的家人,是面如西施的恋人,是形影不离的友人,是关云长的诚信,是项 羽的大气,是宝璧之间的默契……这才会造就无数大大小小的悲剧,
我们常说让理智战胜情感, 这是何等的艰难。 包拯面对将他抚养长大如亲娘
的嫂娘, 任凭她苦苦哀求依然铁面无私, 挥手压铡。 但谁又不怀疑他内心的矛盾 和痛苦。然作为朝廷命官,是容不得意气用事的。还有孔明挥泪斩马谩,这些都 是何等哀伤之事啊。
尽管感情给我们的是何等美妙的感受。而理智带给我们的仍是无尽的痛 扩 苦。但我们仍旧需要理智,守候理智。因为无数伟业都是在理智中产生的。爱因 斯坦在理智中研究宇宙, 牛顿在理智中研究天体, 霍金也在理智中继承前人的事 业。 可以说人类研究出的任何对自己有用的事物时, 头脑都处于理智中, 而不理 智仅凭自己的感情异想天开的人终不会有所成就。 那个狂妄的亚里士多德就是个 例证。
我们允许人们在感情冲动时暂时的恍憾、 停顿。 因为任何人都会被感情误导。 但如果这种状态持续较长时间的话,那便会以理智丧失为代价。
我相信, 人是富有感情的, 同时也是富有理智的。 只不过在有的情况下感占 了上风, 人们是有能力使自己处在理智的指导下对是非曲折进行分辨的。 理智并 不是天边难以遇知的云彩,只要用心呼唤一定会伴随人的旅途。
勿以亲疏定善恶
陕西一考生
有俗话说得好,
贼, 当然我们不能排除是
所以,我要劝这位富人,
包拯,包青天是妇孺皆知的清官,其为官之清不在于其断案是否详尽周密, 明查秋毫,而在于其得到真相后敢杀恶人,六亲不认,敢有大义灭亲之举,这也 是我最欣赏的地方。而这六亲不认、大义灭亲的背后藏有多少不为人知的故事 ,f 恶之人不是远于被害之人, 而往往是被害之人的最亲之人。 若是人人皆以亲巧定 善恶,那么,这个世上就会让好人遭殃,而恶人猖狂,甚至得了便宜卖乖。 宋代大将岳飞, 是万人景仰的好将军, 每每提到他, 人们心中首先泛起的伯 是个忠宇,还有其母为其刺的
勿以亲疏定善恶, 不要认为朋友永远是朋友, 朋友永远是善良的, 忠诚的也 不要认为和你疏远的人永远都是坏人、恶人,事情永远不可能和我们想的一样, 忠恶善侯永远要用事实说话, 因为事物的本质永远都不是显露在外的, 而是隐藏 在内的。
勿以亲疏定善恶, 它还包括不要认为是亲人, 就可以姑息养奸, 亲人的手一 样可以将亲人引上断头台, 更要让亲人分清善恶, 惩恶扬善, 不时之时更要大义 灭亲。
勿以亲疏定善恶。
作文六:《高考议论文范文》900字
岁月痕迹
时间匆匆,转眼中华人民共和国已经成立 62周年,她经 历风风雨雨, 却始终保持这她那份坚强与毅力, 没有人知道她 是如何度过那些心酸的日子, 像无数的恶魔在身边, 像千只蚂 蚁在吞噬, 这一切的一切只有经历过风雪的她才能懂得, 我为 她骄傲,为她鼓掌。
至新中国成立初期,好多事情都让我们的祖国妈妈头痛, 面对这强大的外敌与不断的内部斗争,在看外强中干的自己, 鲜血已经流很多了, 但自己的孩子却不能得到基本的满足, 她 在心中发誓:一定要将生产提升上去, 让孩子得到足够的温饱。 她开始引进新的技术与不断培养人才, 也许时间不是问题, 但 技术却在不断创新。在很长的时间中,她迷惘过,更伤心过。 于是,她踏遍祖国的每一个地方,开始不断深入研究,让每个 地区因地制宜,发展自己的潜力。到 1978年,从改革开放, 她明白了自己这条路是走对了, 让他国了解自己, 更可以学习 别国的文化技术, 增加国与国之间的了解。 这条路走的很顺利, 很快我们的祖国从贫困中走了出来,人们的生活水平变好了,
经济水平得到了提升, 她有一点成就感, 但看到很多地方因为 地区问题,还是无法走出贫穷,她开始不断找寻方法,让那些 地区可以发展自己的优势,如旅游业,观光业等等。
至 2000年以来,人们的生活水平有了大幅度提升,高楼 大厦建了起来,各工厂办起来了,人人有了工作,农业已不再 成为人们的主要收入来源,工业不断发展。但高功率的工业, 高能量的消耗已然成为一大问题, 环境变差, 空气的污染越来 越严重。时间一天一天的过去,蓝天变成了灰色,河水被污染 了。祖国母亲开始思考了,到底要走一条怎样的道路,才成使 环境与经济同步发展呢。终于,走一条可持续发展的道路,是 好的办法。
经济的发展是每个国人都想看到的结果, 同时有是我们时 代发展的必然结果。 我们欣喜的看到祖国妈妈越来越好, 但同 时人口问题俨然成为最严重的事情。 于是, 我们祖国妈妈提出 了计划生育,要控制好人口,为未来而不断努力。
人生有多少个十年, 我们为祖国的繁荣富强而不断努力过 吗 ? 也许没有,也许有过。但请相信我们,祖国,我的最好的 妈妈,你是我们的骄傲,我也可以成为你的骄傲。
加油吧 ! 人生没有什么做不到,我们可以 ! 在岁月的痕迹 中,我们要不断创造辉煌。
作文七:《高考议论文范文》2600字
导言:以下三篇议论文均为三段论式。
格式基本为:引出话题,第一个分论点(举例论证,详细写)+第二个分论点(对比论证,稍简略)+第三个分论点(举例论证,简略写)+总结上文(升华主题)
对于材料,力争古今中外,详略得当,多种论证方法结合。 用这种格式,记住要思路清晰。
有目标≠成功
我想送这位大学生一句汪国真的话:“既然目标是地平线,留给世界的只能是背影。”诚然,在日新月异的社会中有个坚如磐石的目标固然非常重要。但是,若只是面朝“地平线”,双脚却黏在原地,那留给世界的不只是“背影”啊!还有留在起点的我们。因此,我们要为目标付出,走向成功。
为了目标,审时度势得正解。
一代医圣张仲景以天下为己任,誓解民之疾苦。早年的他秉笔直书,以满腔热血鞭笞社会的黑暗,却饱受诘难,宦海沉浮。中年的他悬壶济世,以满腔热血驱散百姓的疾苦,终得正解,誉满天下。
进而救国济世,退而救民解难这真是张仲景为救民审时度势的纯真写照。还记得饺子的最早起源“祛寒娇耳汤”吗?还记得官场困顿屡遭排挤的他吗?还记得致仕之际见严冬中人民痛不欲生而生悲悯之心的他吗?——但任世事变幻懂得审时度势的他只为解民之疾苦。
为了目标,探索方法得正解。
那时的美国正经历第一次经济大危机:一面是商家把几十亿吨的牛奶倒入河中,一面是人民啼饥号寒,饔飧不继。罗斯福总统为挽救经济大危机,先是大力
兴建公益工程,是人民有活可干;再是对企业进行财政补贴,是产品有的卖;最后加强立法使各项建设有条不紊。各种举措多管齐下挽救了美国的危亡。
南唐后主李煜与之相比可真是相形见绌了。亡国后的他渴望复国,却又不探索救国之要。只是每日沉湎于不幸,吟唱:“流水落花春去也,天上人间。”这诗词之悲痛彻心扉,但仅凭这只言片语又岂能刺破敌军的铁甲?
为了目标,践行坚韧得正解。
是什么让曼德拉消除种族歧视的愿望成真?不就是他那“多少次迎着冷眼与嘲笑”,在狱中熬过二十余年的坚韧?是什么让“慕张芝之书”的王羲之成为一代书生?不就是他那一生练书使墨池尽黑的坚韧吗?是什么让渴望成为体操王子的李亚鹏愿望实现?不就是他那跳上跳下简单动作重复上千次的坚韧吗?
或与你是一位冲击在死亡一线的警察,或许你是一位腰缠万贯的企业家,或许你是一名俯身保洁的的清洁工……无论何种职业,你定有过或大或小的目标,但“当初的愿望实现了吗?事到如今只好祭奠吗?”我们或可审时度势、或可探索方法、或可践行坚韧来实现最初的目标,体验那份最初的感动。
不留退路
我为年轻人鼓掌。若是明悉因划船不认真掉进水中仍有游泳自救这一活路,初学者便可能懈怠松散,而不是全力以赴。初学射箭者也遇到过类似的问题:若是他们带一堆箭去学习,往往十射九空,无所进展。最好的应对方法便是每次只拿一支箭,集全力于唯一,如此,便易取得突破。
因此,有时我们要不留后路。
不留退路能推动我们谨慎前行。
记得路遥《平凡的世界》中那个超脱苦难的孙少平吗?是什么让他一次次挺
过饥寒交迫的打工仔之夜?是什么让他一次次全力争取到更远的地方赴更高的岗位?是什么让他一次次找知识渊博的晓霞借各色读物充实内心?不就是他那种“斩断”自己大后方——家的一种不留退路吗?他离开家后未向家中讨一分钱,也未央求家里托人给他谋一官半职。
正是没了退路,他也全心谨慎地在外拼搏。记得刚到煤矿的筛选吗?记得因为紧张使血压增高而到处讨醋甚至急哭的他吗?
不留退路往往更能激发专注。
我对师傅“有了担心自己落水的想法,便难以专心致志。”的想法不以为然。因为它们一旦明悉仍有退路便可能交头接耳,可能左顾右盼,结果往往不能专注于划船了。
“卧薪尝胆,三千越甲可吞吴。”的故事不可不说家喻户晓。勾践没给自己留退路,不甘于“身为吴王前马,妻女为奴”那苟延残喘的生活,每日卧薪尝胆,专注思索救过之要,终得吞吴后骄傲灿烂的一天。
不留退路更能个坚定我们必胜的信心。
是什么让甘地有了用绝食来推进“非暴力不合作”运动的胆识与魄力?不就是他不驱逐英国殖民者不罢休的决心吗?是什么让**接连指挥秋收起义、井冈山起义进而将革命推向全国?不就是他“男儿立志出乡关,学不成名誓不还”的决心吗?是什么让爱迪生接连失败了几千次仍发明灯泡?不就是他那照亮世界的决心吗?而他们的决心来自哪里呢?不就是不留退路激发出来的吗?一个昏昏度日不思进取的人很难迸发必胜的决心!
或许你是在职场奔波的白领,或许你是为高考奋笔的高中生,我们有时要像那英歌中唱的那样“折断了所有退路”,来逼自己一把,取得更大的成绩。
追逐本心
“我自横刀向天笑,去留肝胆两昆仑。”一句将谭嗣同献身为革命的追逐本心之念书写的淋漓尽致。然而,追逐本心并非得像谭嗣同一样献身方可为之。周浩虽以省内理科前五名的成绩步入了令人神往的北大,但仍因热爱机械而转入名不见经传的技校。
这启示我们要追逐本心。
享受历练,尽情追逐吧!
虽然分家后,家里的经济情况日渐萧条,但他仍然狠下心离家走到“更大的地方”;虽然哥哥再三劝告他留村共同致富,但他仍然选择了工资低、待遇差的工地;虽然整天泡在满是灰尘的工地里,但他仍然挺着,过了一天又一天。
这就是路遥笔下的孙少平。只是一种对新事物的强烈渴望让他冲破重重阻挠来到黄原,让他挺着红红的脊背坚持在灯下读完一本又一本的名著。当我们的本心与现状被历练隔开时,让我们享受历练,尽情追逐本心。
甘于献身,尽情追逐吧!
用“春蚕到死丝方尽,蜡炬成灰泪始干”形容于敏,真的不失言。早年的他,求学北大,专心研究;中年的他,埋名大漠,刻苦攻关;晚年的他,沉心家中,编撰科普。于敏把他的一生献给了他最热爱的祖国。管中窥豹,上世纪中期的科学家大都如此吧,有远渡重洋坚决回国的钱学森,有尽全心研制出空心叶片的师昌绪……
假如上世纪的他们只顾自身,不肯为新中国鞠躬尽瘁,哪来原子弹氢弹震慑世界强国?新中国头上悬挂的刀随时有可能掉下来。因此,我们要甘于奉献,追逐本心。
无视冷漠,尽情追逐吧!
“多少次,迎着冷眼与嘲笑,可却从未放弃心中的理想”《海阔天空》中的这句话走进了很多人的内心;爱迪生面对“你永远发明不出灯泡”的嘲讽,选择了无视,终于在几次实验后“点亮了世界”;曼德拉坚信“如果我仍未忘记仇恨,那么我仍留在狱中。”,无视狱长的歧视,终于打破了南非的种族歧视。
当今青年了不得,十几年学得研究生,却只为一编制出门扫地。真是可惜了!他们倒是要学会享受历练,甘于献身,无视冷漠来追逐本心。难道不是吗?
作文八:《高考议论文范文》1000字
超越缺陷
“人的生命,似洪水奔流,不遇到岛屿与暗礁,难以激起美丽的浪花。” 奥斯特洛夫斯基的这句话形象地告诉我们,人生的道路并不是一帆风顺,这样那样的缺陷会时时阻碍我们到达成功的彼岸。我们只有不断地弥补缺陷、克服缺陷、超越缺陷,在逆境中崛起与奋斗,才能实现美好的人生。
一个人如果没有尝过饥渴的滋味,终究不能真切体会食物和水的甘甜。同样,如果没有真正经受过缺陷的困扰、挫折与失败的磨练,就不能真正体味到成功的喜悦。
人生犹如曲线,永远不会笔直地前进。古有文王拘而演《周易》,仲尼厄而作《春秋》,左丘失明厥有《国语》??今天呢? 今天也一样。
张海迪的名字在我们青年学生当中可谓尽人皆知。正是幼年便成残疾的缺陷,催使她怀着坚定的信念、顽强的意志去拼
搏去进取,决不放弃,决不消沉。终于,她成为了一名作家,并取得了文学硕士学位。她的成功是她用无数个日日夜夜奋斗的泪与汗换来的,是她顽强地与命运抗争获得的。她的身体是有缺陷,但她的人生是丰硕的、充实的,她的精神是闪光的,完美的。
再回到现实中的我。面对过种种缺陷,经历过重重挫折,我已不再是狂妄不羁,而是变得沉默,变得更是成熟。鲁迅先生曾经说过:“不在沉默中爆发,就在沉默中灭亡。”只要我对生活中的缺陷有正确的认识,只要我怀着一颗永不言弃的心,即使面临的失利和打击,我也会看到风雨后的阳光、失败后的胜利。
世界总会有缺陷,而正因为有了缺陷,才更有了美:维纳斯正是因为失去了双臂,才更加体现出美的象征; 史铁生正是因为失去了双腿,才使他更加懂得人生的真谛,更加焕发出生命的光芒; 春节联欢晚会上的《千手观音》的表演者,正是因为她们都是聋哑人,才更以一种精神的力量体现出艺术的美??喜欢寻找完美的我,终于相信:生命是一只被上帝咬过的苹果。
古今中外,大凡成绩卓越者,谁没有经历过挫折和磨难呢? 而谁又不是缺陷的超越者呢? 无产阶级的革命导师马克思面临生活的窘迫和资本主义的排斥,仍继续潜心研究革命理论而创立了马克思主义; 司马迁面临着灵与肉的双重摧残,毅然决然地朝着自己的理想前进,最终写成了千古名书《史记》; 伟大领袖**如果没有面对挫折永不退缩,跌倒了再爬起来的不灭斗志,又怎么会迎来新民主主义和社会主义革命的胜利? 只要认真总结经验,找出失败原因,继续尝试,最终必将拥抱一片灿烂和辉煌。
我们应当明白:缺陷永远是前进与创造的动因。奔流正是遭遇暗礁才会绽放出美丽的浪花,而生命最美丽的姿态便是那浪尖上的奋力一跃。
让我们超越缺陷!
作文九:《高考议论文范文》1000字
风雨后一定有彩虹吗?
曾有人说阳光总在风雨后, 可暴风雨后的天空一定灿烂吗 ? 不,不是这样的,若太阳没有一颗乐观而坚强的心,她将失去 扒开云雾的勇气与决心,带来的只有无尽的黑暗 !
失败,挫折,伤感,人间常态,可有人挺过来了,有人却 因此沉沦, 可能很多困难真的会击溃我们本来坚毅的心, 也许 只有乐观才会促使我们战胜一切,重铸一道心灵的屏障 ! 一次考试, 考场中走出俩个失利者, 前途对于他们来说只 是渺茫的未来, 脚下的路是如此的崎岖, 潸然泪下。 离开考场, 她去了操场,他去了酒吧。接下来的就是截然不同的两种人 生。。。。。。
她,迎着冬日里的阳光,在操场中疯狂地跑着,撕心裂肺 地叫着,她发泄着自己,发泄着几个月来的委屈,发泄过后是 静静的沉思,她又爽朗地笑了,笑得那样的洒脱,乐观的她怎 会被这些所吓倒 ? 她的心中有一颗属于自己的太阳,那颗永不 落下的太阳 !
他, 在昏暗的酒吧里一杯又一杯地喝着酒, 他希望借酒消 愁,可他却不知道借酒消愁愁更愁,痛苦,无奈,一并涌来, 醉醺醺地走在大街上,面对着阳光,他也笑了,笑得那样的狰 狞,那样的可怕,他心中的太阳落下了,永远地落下了,他也 堕落了, 就像黄昏时的太阳, 一点一点最终落下人生的地平线 ! 十年后两人再次相遇, 他们都出名了, 却载入了不同的史 册。她,享誉世界的跨国公司女总裁,拥有着无数的财产与荣 誉 ; 他,因抢劫而坐了十年的牢,一事无成也烙下了一世的罪 名。回首往事,他们都落下泪水。。。。。。她,经历了无数 的磨难,一次次的被击倒,又一次次的站起来,她很想放弃, 但她不能放弃,坚强乐观的她,一步步走上了人生的舞台,事 业的巅峰, 最终站在了梦想的山峰。 他, 因无法从噩梦中走出, 郁郁寡欢,喝酒成性,无法自拔,最终走上了犯罪之路,想回 头时却为时已晚。
十年前, 看似同样命运的两个人却拥有着不同的人生, 十 年前,她选择了操场,选择了乐观,十年后,她得到了未来, 实现了梦想 ; 十年前,他选择了酒吧,选择了退缩,十年后,
他得到了什么 ? 什么也没有,只有臭名昭著。这是天意吗 ? 不, 不是,这是自作自受 !
风雨后一定有彩虹吗 ? 不,不一定,可能暴风雨会来得更 猛烈些,乐观的人克服它,悲观的人哀叹它,就是这样 ! 风雨后一定有彩虹吗 ? 坚强的人说“是的,只要我努力 ! ” 懦弱的人说“我希望是彩虹,可它并不是 ! ”
风雨后一定有彩虹吗 ? 是 ? 不是 ? 不一定 !!
作文十:《高考议论文范文》1100字
生命因为有梦想而精彩
在人生的旅途中, 梦想是最好的伙伴, 如果说梦想是一棵 常青树,那么,浇灌它的必定是出自心田的清泉 ; 如果说梦想 是一朵常开不败的鲜花, 那么, 照耀它的必定是从心中升起的 太阳。太阳与清泉,交相呼应,而我们的生命,也会因为有了 梦想而变得更加精彩。
梦想是用永恒的执着和顽强的韧劲筑起的一道铜墙铁壁, 她固若金汤。有这么一个人,小学三年级便被迫辍学,认识的 汉字也不多, 他每天往返于家和图书馆之间, 在深夜他勤奋的 身影依然清晰。 他日复一日的坚持写作。 汗水与泪水铸就了他 的成功。他就是着名的童话大王郑渊洁。试想一下,当所有人 都对他表示不屑时,他没有退却,依然坚定,他只是很单纯的 爱写作而已,他所做的一切,只为了心中那个作家梦。为了实 现心中的梦想,他付出了多少努力,一个人,一本杂志,十三 年。 他笔下的贝克与舒塔给了无数孩子童年的快乐。 他的梦想 成就了他的人生,他的梦想,给孩子们美丽的童话。郑渊洁的 生命因为有了梦想而精彩。
梦想是用不凋的希望和不灭的向往编制的七色彩虹, 她绚 丽辉煌。人们常说:“失败是成功之母。”但又有多少人能够 面对挫折, 仍然坚挺着呢 ? 美国第 16任总统林肯就是这样一个 人。他出生在一个清贫的家庭,自小就十分好强,参加总统竞 选多次,均以失败告终,那段时间他几乎崩溃,有一天他在窗 户边看到初升的太阳, 恍然大悟, 决心振作起来。 在林肯心中, 当总统或者“为官一任造福一方”,是他一生的梦想,这条路 很艰辛,当他面对挫折的时候,他没有放弃。正是梦想激励着 林肯,在一次次失败后再次崛起。他所做的一切,只为了心中 那个总统梦。他成功了。在他的领导下,美国人民走向了更加 自由,更加幸福的生活。林肯的生命因为有了梦想而精彩。 梦想是用意志的血滴和拼搏的汗水酿成的琼浆, 她历久弥 香。在我心中有一个坚强的身影,她就是舞蹈家邰丽华,在她 两岁那年, 因高烧而失去了听力, 难以想象她当时的寂寞与痛 苦,在她婀娜的舞姿背后,她付出了比常人多好几倍的辛苦。 台上一分钟,台下十年功。她说她爱舞蹈,虽然没有音乐,但 是她用自己的心去伴奏。 她是舞台上一株美丽的奇葩。 她从不 叫苦叫累,只是默默坚持着。她所做的一切,只为了心中那个
舞蹈梦。她成功了。《千手观音》给了观众艺术的美感,她们 优美的舞姿震慑了所有人的眼睛。 邰丽华的生命因为有了梦想 而精彩。
郑渊洁的梦想, 给了自己人生一个成功的诠释, 给了孩子 们快乐美好的童年,林肯的梦想,肯定了自己的能力,给了美 国人民自由幸福的生活, 邰丽华的梦想, 让自己的人生因为舞 蹈而充实,以自己的舞姿感动了千千万万的人。
为了梦想而努力吧,这样,你的人生会更加精彩 !
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