作文一:《让我记忆深刻的一场电影》500字
那天下午我们实弹射击夏令营全体队员在解放军营地二楼看电影,电影的名字是《冲出亚马逊》,排好队伍,鸦雀无声,经过部队首长办公区域,就这样我们去看电影了。
电影开始了,讲的是有俩个士兵去参加国际举办的猎人学校。这俩个士兵都是中国人,他们一个叫小龙,一个叫王辉。参加这次活动的有美国、澳大利亚、英国、法国等等几个国家。
那些人必须经过12星期的训练,在中间如果有人在受伤48小时内不能归队,将视为自动退出,他们的国旗也会被降下。俩个中国士兵每天都要经过十分艰苦的训练,他们不辱使命,坚持到了最后,我们中国的国旗终于可以在猎人学校飘扬。就这样这场电影结束了。 回去的时候我在想:“如果是我的话,肯定不到一小时就得累倒了。”可那俩个中国军人却在那里训练了12个星期,我既对他们感到敬佩,也为他们是中国军人而感到自豪。 这场电影让我知道了要做一名合格的军人必须要经过艰苦的训练,把每一滴热血都流在祖国的大地上。这场电影让我更珍惜现在的生活了,也像春天里那最明媚的一缕阳光照射在我成长的道路上让我记忆深刻。
教师评语:时间地点交代清楚,感情真挚,人物描写准确,叙事高度概括,能够使用许多灵动鲜活词语。指导教师:张清华
作文二:《一件让我记忆深刻的事》700字
一件让我记忆深刻的事
记得去年的一个星期天阳光明媚我的心情非常开心,因为我要和妈 妈一起去逛商场,我想这真是天助我也,于是起来的很早,然后高高兴兴的洗了个澡,换了一身干净漂亮的衣服就出发了。
我们东西寄存在外面的售货员阿姨那里之后,我们就进去购物了,经过一番“折腾”后,我们的东西已经采购的差不多了。付完帐后,正准备回家的时候,一个声音叫住了我们,只见一个身穿红白相间制服的售货员阿姨正在向我们招手,我感到很奇怪心想:是不是我妈妈没付帐 她才过来提醒我们付账的。于是我问了一下妈妈“妈妈你是不是没付帐,”妈妈说:“刚才我付了帐的,你看发票在这儿呢~”说着妈妈就拿出了发票,我就问那个售货员阿姨:“阿姨你找我们有什么事吗,”那个阿姨气喘吁吁地说:“尊敬的客户,你的包放在我们柜台上忘记带走了~”她拿出了妈妈的包,递给了妈妈,妈妈看了非常感动,我也非常感动,心想这么诚实的售货员还是头一次见,像有些人如果你的东西没拿她都不会提醒你,而是独吞了你的包。我和妈妈夸奖那位售货员阿姨真诚实,那位售货员阿姨急忙说:“不,这都是我应该做的。”她说完就走了,我们望着她远去的背影不由得心里充满了说不出来的感觉。
通过这件事我感受到了诚信是做人的最基本的原则,廉洁是人最基本的守则,只有廉洁和诚信都有才算是一个完整的人,一个值得信任的人,只有靠诚实守信才能真正获得财富和名誉。人们都喜欢和讲诚信的人打交道,只有讲诚信的人才能真正赢得别人的尊重和喜爱。
龙泉第一小学五年级六班 唐皓甜
2011年10月2日
作文三:《一件让我记忆深刻的小事》700字
在我记忆的心扉中,有很多很多平凡的小事,它们有的惊险刺激,有的欢喜交加,有的悲伤不已,它们都令我今生难忘。最记忆犹新的事,还要属我第一次做蛋炒饭。
记得那是四年级刚开学后的不就。一天下午,秋雨下个没完没了,淅淅沥沥的雨珠,像天庭飘下来的千万条银丝;像一只看不见的巨手,在拨弄着一个无限大的筝琴;像一位美丽温柔的姑娘,在听着唱着一首动听的歌曲。“滴答。滴答。”真好听,我被这美妙的歌声所陶醉了。
刚做完作业的我,正准备下楼去玩,可没想到被妈妈抢了个先,把我给叫了过去。妈妈神神秘秘地对我说:“玲儿,妈妈今天要送给你一个礼物!你猜猜。”咦,这位调皮的妈妈今天又是唱的哪出戏啊?我啊真是丈二和尚摸不着头脑。这时,妈妈对我说:“嘻嘻,让我来告诉你吧!这个surprise (惊喜)就是教你做蛋炒饭!“蛋炒饭!切,小事一桩!根本不用学!”我大声地说,用力甩了甩头发,便胸有成竹地走进了厨房。
开始了,我先打俩个鸡蛋,然后搅拌好,接着把火打开,倒一点油。过了一会,油开了,我赶紧把蛋倒了进去。锅里顿时发出了“吱吱”的响声,好像再放鞭炮似的。我不慌不忙地炒了起来。蛋好了,我才突然发现没有准备饭。我又急忙去盛饭,盛好饭后,我闻到一股焦味。啊!我定睛一看,蛋糊了。我手慢脚乱地把火关了。我一会拿饭来炒,一会又把蛋煎糊了。真是忙得我晕头转向。终于,蛋炒饭好了。我连忙请妈妈来品尝。妈妈先是皱了皱眉头,但最终还是笑了。
事后,妈妈对我说:“玲儿,虽然你这次没有取得好成果,但我还是要告诉你做事应三思而行,还有提前把材料准备好,以免到时乱了手脚。”
妈妈之所以这样大费周章,无非就是为了让我能从此事中获得一些启示,这启示就是:做事要三思而行,不能忙碌一阵,到头来却是一无所获。
作文四:《让我记忆深刻的语文课》600字
上课铃刚打,教室里就嘈杂起来。同学们紧张地默背昨天学的《我爱这土地》。我一边背一边紧张地看着门口,祈祷着老师晚点来到。
这时,语文老师踏进教室,我心里紧张到极点:“完了,今天早上背的全忘光了……要是一会提问就惨了……”
老师清了清嗓子,大家背诵的声音停了下来。果不其然,老师说:“下面检查课文背诵。”他锐利的眼神夹杂着些许鼓励扫视全班,教室里鸦雀无声,比上自习时还要静。我偷偷瞅了瞅周围,大家的头都快低到桌子上了,紧张地看着书本。老师又突然来了句:“今天背诵,由同学们提问我。”
我们的头在一瞬间都抬了起来,眼睛齐刷刷地投向老师,都丈二和尚——摸不着头脑。我把疑问的眼神投向同位,她小声说:“老师葫芦里卖的什么药呀?”
老师接着说:“背诵一直是同学们的一个难关,今天晨读时有个同学问我,老师总是要求同学们背诵,自己会不会背?我突然意识到,要让同学们背会,首先老师要做出表率,所以,我决定这节课由我背诵。”
我们顿时兴奋起来,认真看着课本,检查老师背诵时有没有错误。( 书村网 .mcqyy. )
“假如我是一只鸟/我也应该用嘶哑的喉咙歌唱……”老师富于韵味的声音回荡于教室,我们被带入一个崭新的诗歌世界中。这个世界里有诗人对祖国深沉的爱,有对侵略者切齿的恨,有对处于日本铁蹄蹂躏下祖国深沉的爱,有为国献身的热情……
老师背完,我们都还沉浸在声情并茂的背诵中,稍后,教室响起了雷鸣般的掌声。老师脸上绽放开惬意的微笑。此时,室外,风儿沙沙,鸟儿啾啾。
这就是我最喜欢的一堂语文课。
初三:倩倩
作文五:《一次让我记忆深刻的采访》2500字
前言:语文从生活中来,又回到生活中去,学习语文的最终目的就是要更好地为我们今后的生活服务。同时生活又为我们提供了学习语文的广阔天地,作为小学生,我们不仅要善于到生活中去实践,通过亲身体验去丰富我们的语文知识,还要去观察生活,关注社会,这样才有利于我们的成长。六(三)全体同学在11月份里开展了“到社会中采访”的语文实践活动,在采访中,小记者们得到了很大的收获,无论采访取得成功还是失败,对他们来说都是一种全新的体验,感受都非常深刻。下面的采访记录是经过精选出来的,供同学们欣赏。从这些采访记录看,六(三)班的同学们都十分关注生活,关注社会,关注田林未来的发展,表现了他们从小热爱家乡、热爱生活的美好思想品质。(指导老师:李艳珍)
(一)采访小学老师
六(三)班 黄露莹
今天我有幸采访了一位小学老师。
问:请问当年是什么力量使您选择了老师这个职业?
答:教师是人类灵魂的工程师,是园丁。小时候看着老师在讲台上讲课,我就立志长大也要当一名老师。老师像蜡烛一样,燃烧自己,照亮别人。
问:您面对有厌学心理的学生,您是怎样劝说?
答:主要讲道理,动之于情,晓之于理。寻找学生身上的发光点,掌握并了解一个人,才能找出说服他的方法。
问:您受学生欢迎吗?为什么?
答:不是百分之百的欢迎。我是个严厉的老师,我当然希望我教的课学生都懂,但这是不可能的,因为每位学生都有不同的个性和悟性。
问:您一贯坚持的原则是什么?
答:平等对待每一位学生。
问:您用这个原则做成功了什么?
答:成功说不上,只是我对学生像对自己的孩子,不管成绩好坏,人人一样。
问:您最喜欢的文学是什么?
答:我喜欢外国文学,当然也喜欢中国文学,因为从那些文学作品中不仅学到知识,还学到做人的道理。
问:当一位老师您有过后悔的念头吗?
答:没有。为教师这职业我甘愿奉献一生。
问:最使您受感动或您特别感谢的人是谁?
答:是我父亲,我父亲也是位老师。因为他教会我知识的同时也教会
我做一个对社会有用的人。
采访结束了,我谢过了老师,回到家中。我想:“今天这次采访,让我了解了一位小学老师的内心世界。平时我们在上课时不听课,搞小动作都是不尊重老师的劳动成果的表现。从今往后我们一定要好好学习,用实际行动来报答老师!”
(二)就田林县城的环境问题对建设局局长的采访
六(三)班 李佳林整理
小组成员:龚玺.罗琛、罗雨、李佳林。
采访队员:罗琛、罗雨、李佳林。
笔录:龚玺。
采访对象:建设局局长。
问:您对田林县城的环境怎么看?
答:田林县城环卫现在脏、乱、差。
问:为什么?
答:⒈是人员少;⒉是经费少;⒊是设施落后;⒋是市民素质低。 问:您对那些乱扔垃圾的人有什么看法?
答:很不满,⒈是不文明;⒉是不卫生、污染环境;⒊是影响市容市貌。 问:您认为应该采取哪些措施呢?
答:⒈是加强管理,提高环卫队伍素质;⒉是强化服务,提升县城文明品味;⒊是走社会化管理模式;⒋是以市场经济经营环卫服务,提高收费标准,增强环卫经营实力,改善落后设施,壮大环卫事业。
我觉得和这个叔叔说的一样,我们不要乱扔垃圾,为田林的市容和环境做一些贡献,那田林就不会变成这个样子,会变得更美、更好、更舒服。
(三)一次让我记忆深刻的采访
六(三)班 韦丽莎
看了题目,你或许会感到奇怪。采访?你又不是记者,采什么访?又是采访了谁?别着急,让我来告诉你吧。
其实这次采访活动是老师为了锻炼我们的胆识才布置了一道让我们都社会中时间采访的任务。采访的对象不限制,可以是领导,可以是老师,可以是某个市民,也可以是低层的劳动者等等。我和韦莹莹等人一组,我们对菜市的一位菜农伯伯进行了采访。采访过程如下:
记者:您是不是每天都要来这卖菜啊?
菜农:肯定不是咯,哪儿能每天都有菜可以收啊,一个月才能卖几次。 记者:那您卖一次能挣多少钱呢?
菜农:如果菜好,有人来买我的菜,就能卖个十几二十块。要是菜种得不好,连十元也没有。
记者:那您这样卖辛不辛苦啊?
菜农:苦啊(他说着把手伸出来给我们看,我们看到长满茧的双手)! 记者:那您一个月能有多少收入呢?
菜农:如果虫子少,不把我的菜给咬坏了,我还可以挣个三四百,如果菜不好,又碰上了洪水什么的,不仅一分钱也得到,还浪费了我那么久的辛苦。
记者:您的收入很低又很辛苦,为什么还要卖菜呢?
菜农:像我们这种文化低的人,不卖菜吃什么啊?唉(他叹了口气)。 采访结束后,我明白了我们平时吃的青菜就是这些朴素的菜农们用自己的汗水换来的啊,我们不懂得这些菜的来之不易,还铺张浪费,真是太不应该了啊!从现在开始,我们在吃饭的时候,不应该浪费每一颗青菜,每一粒米饭,才能对得起这么辛苦的农民啊!
(四)对田林县印刷厂厂长的采访
六(三)班 张雅雅
11月17日下午上第二节课的时候,李老师给我们一个特别的“任务”,采访一个人物,并把你采访的过程写下来。
经过一番考虑,我决定采访我的爸爸——印刷厂厂长,采访他一是因为他是我爸爸,采访的时候不会紧张。二是因为我爸爸经常在厂里工作,不用担心找不到他。
我来到印刷厂在车间找到了爸爸,他一脸惊奇地问我:“雅雅,你来干什么?”在我说明了来由后,他同意我的采访。
采访开始,我先是问他:“请问您为什么选择了这个职业?”他不假思索地说:“因为我喜欢这个职业。”我接着问他:“当您遇上竞争对手的时候,您会怎么做?”他思考了一会儿,说:“我就面对现实,迎接挑战吧,也就是说,我会尽一切努力把业绩超过他。”我又问他:“您选择这个职业后,有没有后悔?”他肯定地说:“没有,因为我喜欢这个职业!”我继续问他:“您做了这么多年的印刷工作,有没有遇到什么困难?”他想了想,说:“当然有些困难,比如说,市厂竞争,要用什么对策。资金不够,要怎么做。”我再问他:“那么您又是怎么克服这些困难的?”他思索了一会儿,回答:“就是根据实际情况一一解决,市场竞争,我就要
改变经营思维,在价格、服务方面提高。资金不够,就想银行贷款。”我最后问:“您对我们这次活动有什么看法,您觉得我这个小记者当得够不够格?”爸爸笑了笑,说:“你们这些小记者下到生活中来采访,对你们以后到社会上很有帮助,你这个小记者当得不错。”采访就这样结束了。 通过这次采访,我知道了人要做好一个职务是很不容易的,我们要为未来打好基础,将来才不会在社会中淘汰。
作文六:《一件让我记忆深刻的事》600字
其实这只是件小事而已,不过这件事却让我记忆深刻。
那是去年暑假的事了,那天下午我正在家里看电视的时候,“调皮”的爸爸突然出现在我的身后,吓了我一大跳。我正想发脾气的时候,看见爸爸身后的一样东西,转而兴奋的叫了起来:“哇,游龙板!”。你可知道,这是我梦寐以求的东西呀。每当和爸爸到公园散步时,看见很多小朋友踩着游龙板在我们身边滑来滑去,我羡慕极了!
于是我迫不及待地拿起游龙板,拉着爸爸的手到公园里学了起来。原先看见同学们踩游龙板那轻松的样子,让我觉得好像很容易似的,不过真正想学会却不是那么简单。我用双手紧张地握紧爸爸抻过来的双手,想像着别的小朋友在游龙板上摇动的样子,拼命地摇了起来。可是不管我再怎么努力,游龙板还是动不了,只有在爸爸的牵扶下才勉强向前,但是爸爸一放手我马上失去了平衡。我累得浑身无力,满头大汗还是学不会,终于我对自己失去了信心。
“我不学了!”我赌气地踢开游龙板坐在公园的石凳上。爸爸笑着陪我坐了一会儿,突然问道:“你会不会骑自行车?”“当然会。”我感到奇怪,爸爸怎么突然问这个问题。爸爸又问:“当时你学骑自行车时会不会觉得很容易?”我摇了摇头。“那么你现在还不是骑得非常熟了,所以说世上无难事,只怕有心人”,爸爸扶着我的肩膀说:“只要你努力,没有什么会难倒你的!”。我自信地点了点头,和爸爸总结了经验教训,又开始了我的学习历程。
现在的我已经是个游龙板高手了,虽然已经过了一年了,可是当时爸爸说的话我铭记在心。“世上无难事,只怕有心人!”这一年中,我还遇到过很多困难,但在这句话的激励下,我不断地克服它。朋友们,你们是不是也有同感呢?
和爸爸
满头大
我累,
只有在爸
作文七:《2010,让我记忆深刻的order》21600字
2010,让我记忆深刻的order》---年末了,接单了(附往来邮件)
定金终于来了,想想,这单真的是来之不易啊,呵呵,除去夭折的那单,这,应该是我的外
贸第一单吧~现在来回想一下这单的过程。做个小结,希望各位路过的朋友们能花几分钟看
看,指出我的不足,助我成长。
一、初次报价
9.01我给他发了封邮件:
Dear **,
Good day!
I am Anna from **, manufacturer and exporter of M.We offer AM and SM with high quality and petitive prices.
Pls advise me your specific requirements so that I can make my best offer. Thanks. B.RGDS
Anna
9.03回复如下:
Dear Joanna
pleas send me the price for AM. And what is the usualy size of M and what difference should be in the price if we want to cut our exactly size?
with kind regards
当时很难说这是一个比较好的回复,但问到不同尺寸的价格,还是第一次。于是我9.04回复:
Dear**,
Thanks for your email.the standard size is**,and the price is**.
Because the price is related to the utilization of M,I mean,how much we use from the big M when we cut it to smaller.Pls advise me your specific size then I will work it out for you.
Waiting for your early reply.
Best Regards,
anna
我跟他报了一个常规尺寸的价格,并告诉他切的话,价格跟利用率有关,要他告诉我具体尺
寸,再跟他报价。
之后就没再理我了,9.13号跟他发了封跟踪信。
Dear**,
Good morning! Hope you have got a wonderful weekend!
For several days no news from you, my friend. Now I am writing for reminding you about our offer for AM dated 4 September according to your relative inquiry. Have you got the prices or not? As you know,Our M are made of good quality material ,and the price is only for reference,I'll give you our best offer as soon as I receive your size,quantity.
Looking forward to your prompt response.
Yours Faithfully
Anna
还是没理我,9.27号,又跟他发了封邮件,报了个新价,呵呵,其实还是跟以前的一样。
Dear **,
I'm writing for keep in touch with you,and here is our new price with good quality. Pls feel free to ask me if you have any question.
Best Regards,
Anna
二、sample
样品细节
没想到10.04号他跟我回复了。
Dear Anna
we are still interested in MS. For our needs we would like to use M. We would like to know Your price and basic dimensions for SM and AM. Also we would like to discuss some samples order in first case. Just some small sheets about the A4 paper dimensions to send it by some fedex or UPS agent we will pay all expenses ofcourse. We?d like
to order AM and SM and if You have different colour styles we are interested in it also and would like to get some samples of gold, blue, red and green colour. i hope You can understand our needs and we can make some soon cooperation with kind regards
告诉我说他对MS比较感兴趣,原来,这么久的时间,我都是再跟一个对我说的产品没兴趣的
人谈生意~难怪他不回我了。AM是我们自己生产的,价格上会有优势些,SM价格很高,但质
量很好,MS价格低,质量也要差很多,而且我们自己不生产,得买,于是问了下价格,
10.08号回复如下:
Dear **,
Just e back from the holiday,and sorry for the late response.As the SM is superb,so we only have SFM in very good quality,and here are the prices.
With much cheaper price,so I'm afraid the quality is not as good as the FM.Maybe you can try to order FM someday,I think.
Besides,thanks for sharing the expenses for us,pls kindly advise me your fedex courier account number,address,ph number,so we can arrange the sample earlily. Waiting for your early reply.
Best regards.
Anna
给他报了两者的价格,并说了后者质量质量比较差,并问他快递账号,说要寄样品。并开始
计划着让他换产品了。10.08当天,就给我回复了
Dear Anna
thanks for Your quick reply. About the fedex number we dont have it. You can use any of shipping agent. Company name ***and deliver adress is **. my name ** phone number **. Just tell us Your expenses and we can send it by WU to You
thanks in advance
with kind regards
当时,还真不知道WU是什么意思,后来网上一搜,才晓得是西联的意思,问了下同事,说我
们弄不了,于是,我10.09回复:
Dear **,
Thanks for your information,I have contacted my shipping agent, it's much trouble than by express delivery,so how about one or two small pieces(much smaller than A4 paper dimensions) by DHL?I mean just as a sample for your reference if needed. Besides,we have AFM in low quality,and the price is,would you like it? By the way, our usual practise of payment is T/T,30% in advance,and the balance upon the copy of B/L.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Best regards,
Anna
告诉他说,通过船公司寄样,会比较麻烦(呵呵,我问过船公司了,要这单啊,那单的,觉
得好麻烦,还不如用DHL,快又省事),能不能就寄一两片,供他参考,并顺带说了下我们的
付款方式。
10.09当天,他便回复我了
Dear Anna
Ok we confirm sending samples by DHL and should be smaller than A4 dimensions. Pleas send us both types SM and AM to see the differences clearly. Also pleas i You make colour varieties we would like to get some of them also. Red, purple, blue, green, gold we realy appreciate it. Next time pleas tell us the shipping cost. For the payment we can agree. And how about opening L/C at sight are You makeing also this? thanks in advance and have a nice weekend
with kind regards
没想到,他居然同意了~10.11我回复说:
Dear **,
Really sorry that we can not offer M with variety colours.For we mainly produce FM,we have no samples of AMS now,since it's urgent, I wonder if we could arrange the sample of AFM and SFM with good quality for your reference first,and arrange ASM later when we have.
Pls give me a nearest destination port,so I can ask my shipping agent about the freight.Waiting for your early reply,and we will arrange it as soon as hearing from you.
Thanks and Best regards
Anna
在这封邮件中,我告诉他我们目前不能提供ASM样品,因为我们主要生产FM,并问他,能不
能先寄FM,等有了再寄给他,呵呵,其实我们根本就不生产SM,没样品,说以后寄给他,也不
过是缓兵之计,万一不行,我只好让别的厂家给寄过来了。也想试试看,能不能给他换个产
品。
10.11他回复我说:
Dear Anna
everything is ok we mainly need the original SM or AM other colours and not so serious wanted. The destination port should be. For next time I can tell you all needful informations for PI.
thanks in advance and looking forward your reply
with kind regards
呵呵,没想到这次知道了他的原始目的,还说下次跟我发PI信息,真高兴啊,12号我回复
说:
Dear **,
Many thanks for your kindness.The freight this month is,sailing on every Saturday,and
transporting in,then to,about days to reach.
As it takes a long time to produce and deliver,if still need the samples,pls kindly
confirm the followings,so we can arrange the sample as soon as possible. 1)the samples should be
2)the deliver address is:
Looking forward to your early reply.
Best Regards,
Anna
当时真的很傻,想,生产要一定时间,海上运输也要很长时间,居然问他能不能不要样品~
天啦,太幼稚了,后来我觉得,我这是典型的得寸进尺~就仗着客户好说话,每次都能答应
我的要求,居然想出了这个鬼点子~唉,太无知了~
估计是客户对我忍无可忍了,于是发邮件说:
Dear Anna
I would like to ask You about the samples if we understand each other. We just want
to see small M and send it in small box mazbe by some fedex or DHL or TNT by air and
if You can handle it for us and we pay for the air freight. with kind regards Radek
看到这封邮件时,我知道,我已经触摸到客户的底线了,他,生气了~当时的那个悔啊,恨
不得把自己给吃了,好不容易有个潜客户,要是被我这封邮件给埋没了,我岂不是要冤死啊~
于是,我马上回邮件说:
Dear**,
ok,we will arrange the sample and pay the freight in advance tomorrow,and then you
can pay it to us.
Waiting for your early reply.
Best regards,
Anna
接着,客户就说
dear Anna
pleas let us know the cost and we will pay for it.
with kind regards
呵呵,还好,还理我,不过,可以看出来,他还在生我的气~我马上回他说:
Dear**,
I will tell you about the cost after I send the sample tomorrow.many thanks for it.
Best regards,
Anna
寄样收钱
这就是10.12惊险的过程。13号寄了样品后,跟他发了封邮件,
Dear **,
Glad to tell you that we have arranged the samples of A&S M today,and I will tell you about the express bill number after I got it from our DHL agent,maybe tomorrow. Thanks and waiting for your early reply.
Best regards,
Anna
16号去一封邮件
Dear **,
Sorry for the late response,I got the bill number just now,and it's. By the way,the freight is RMB**yuan, about ** dollars,after the discount.you can remit it to our bank accout.enclosed pls find our bank information for remittance. Thanks and waiting for your early reply.
Best Regards,
Anna
当天,他回复了
Dear Anna
thanks for replying and handling the samples for us. I will send you the money immediately. And by the way which shipping agent You choose and they send the goods door to door or just to airport and we will pick it up there?
thanks for answers
with kind regards
呵呵,看到这封邮件时,我还是蛮开心的,因为从邮件中可以感觉出,他没生我气了。当天,
他还发了一封邮件,告诉我说他已经把钱打来了,要我们注意查收。
Dear Anna
now I confirm the payment by TT on my online account. For the payment in USD i choose **I send the amount of USD is it all right? Let me know after You recieve the payment. > with kind regards Radek
18号跟他发邮件,告诉他是送货上门的。
Dear**,
Sorry for the late response.I sent the samples by DHL,and they will send the goods door to door,maybe you will get it tomorrow or the next day,pls let me know when you get it.
Thanks and waiting for your early reply.
Best Regards,
Anna
并告诉他说收到钱了就通知他。
Dear**,
Yes,our sample is free,and dollars is only the courier freight,and that's ok,thanks for paying for it.I will inform you after we receive the payment.
Thanks and waiting for your early reply.
Best Regards,
Anna
19号,收到钱后跟他发了封邮件,并问他收到样品了没。
Dear **,
We have received the payment of dollars,thanks.By the way,have you got the sample?
Thanks and waiting for your early reply.
Best Regards,
Anna
当天,他告诉我说,收到样品了,今天上班的时候就会给他老板看的。然后我就只有等了。
终于,10.22号的时候,他跟我回邮件了,却又是问我钱收到了没。
Dear Anna
Just want to inform You that the samples we already get and how about the payment did You ale recieve it to Your bank account i want to know if I make it correct? with kind regards
当时看到这封邮件时,我真是丈二和尚啊,都不晓得他啥意思,收到样品好几天了,而且我
老早就跟他说钱到了,咋又问,还不提样品的好坏,于是我23号回邮件说:
Dear **,
Yes,you made it perfect,and I've sent you a mail on 19 Oct as soon as we got the payment.By the way,how about the samples,are they ok?as you have shown them to your boss,could you kindly advise me the ments about it?Thanks and have a nice weekend. Looking forward to your early reply.
Best Regards,
Anna
再次告诉他,我收到钱了,并问他老板对样品的意见,当天他跟我回邮件说:
Dear Anna
Its glad to hear that. Samples are in all right and I gave them to my boss. I wait his decision and let You know ASAP
with kind regards
三、二次报价
又是要我等,唉,那就等呗,我也没办法啊,27号,他终于出现了:
Dear Anna
please I would like to know loading capacity in one 40HQ container for AM and SM for both? Also I would like to know if You can cut the M for dimensions** and are You able to grind ? If we order this size of M should be the loading capacity in 40HQ same as usualy size? And please quote us the price for our demands above. Can You provide us colour M (gold red blue) and mix the container?
waiting Your soon reply
with kind regards
呵呵,终于提到order了,还是蛮开心的,不过,都两月了,他才告诉我他的具体要求,于
是,我又重新合计了个价格。28号给他报了过去。
Dear **,
Thanks for your email,now I'd like to give my answers.
1)the shipping panies usually have a limit about the
weight.20'GP:25tons,40'HQ:27tons,it's not worthwhile for you to use 40'HQ for such heavy M,20'GP is ok. Here is the loading capality for a 20'GP.
2)we can cut and grind into your size,but we can not use A,for the utilization rate
is too low,about 67.19%,and the price is much higher,so we'll use B,a not general size.Here are the prices.
3)sorry we cann't provide you colour M.
Thanks and waiting for your early reply.
Best Regards,
Anna
在这封邮件里,我针对他提的问题做了个比较详细的解答,并给了他一些建议,可是报价时,
我却一厢情愿,忽略了个问题,没问他的grind到底是怎么弄。之后证明,我对这个词的理
解,错了。
四、客户消失
之后,就没音讯了。11.02时我发了封信跟踪了下告诉他要涨价了。
Dear **,
For several days no news from you,now I am writing for reminding you about our offer dated 28th,Oct.
I know you're a trustworthy and honest businessman,and always have great sincerity to work with us,so do we.I think you have got my mail,but very busy.For there is a tendency that the price of M will rise recently.so pls kindly let me know your ments for further discussion.
Thanks and waiting for your early reply.
Best Regards,
Anna
去这封信的时候,我是想着,他不回我,肯定是因为价格报高了,后来证明,我又错了。
11.03,工厂来电话,说AM涨价了,于是我又跟客户发邮件说
Dear**,
Sorry to tell you that the price of AM has risen from today.and the new price is,valid in 10days.I'll let you know if the price changes.
Thanks and waiting for your early reply.
Best Regards,
Anna
这里,我犯了个致命的错误,都不知道客户为什么不回我,就又给他涨价了~其实我那会是
想借机再跟他发封邮件沟通下的,我同事说这是很不对的,要等客户联系你了,再谈价格~
从上封邮件之后,一直没回我,跟同事说了这事,同事说要我把邮件地址给他,他跟我客户
发封邮件问问,他说,有时候,换个人,客户也许会问的,于是,他用公司的邮箱,以经理
的身份,给我客户发了封邮件,并给我抄送了一封,却被退回来了,没办法,11.16号时,
我又去了封邮件,跟踪:
Dear **,
How are you?No news from you for a very long time,now I am writing for keeping in touch with you for further business.
In fact,I'm very confused about not receiving your reply to the offer dated 28,Oct.I think it over carefully,and wonder whether if you are not satisfied with our sample,the quality,the price,or others?Or there are some other reasons? I know that you are serious buyer, we are very interested in cooperation with your
pany. Since that, I will try to fix the problems if you can advise me about them. Looking forward to your kind reply, thanks a lot!
Best Regards,
Anna
仍旧是没回,当时,真的有些灰心了,心想,难不成,这个样品又白寄了不成
五、客户现身
11.26号,的确是个好日子,对我特别有纪念意义,也就在当天,沉睡了一个月的客户,终
于跟我回邮件了
Dear Anna
sorry for my late reply we were on the business trip abroad. Pleas can You quote the price for me. 50x50 SM cutted with **total requirment 2500. 40x15 SM cutted and also **500. And the rest of container 500-800 depends on capacity simple SM thanks and waiting Your reply
with kind regards
六、三次报价
一次涨价
收到那封邮件时,别提有多开心了,终于又有盼头啦,也就在此时,证明了我对grind的错
误理解,于是又按客户的要求再次给报了个价,但这次的价格要比上次的高很多,一是原板
涨了,而是加工费高了很多。
当天我便加了会班,核算了价格给报了过去。
Dear **,
So glad to hear from you,and hope you've had a very nice business trip. As the price of SM rosed from November,I'd like to give you the new price. Thanks and waiting for your early reply.
Best Regards,
Anna
我只说了价格涨了,却没说加工费的事,这也是一个错误~我应该实事求是,跟客户实话实
说的~这里犯得错,导致了我后面在价格上差点无法收场~
客户也厉害,听到我说原板价格涨了,马上回邮件跟我说要我报原板价格,于是乎,我合计
合计,又报了过去。
Dear **,
yes, here are the prices.
As we always adhere to the principle of " best quality,best price and best service",so pls feel free to let me know if you have any other requirements or suggestions on products specifications,quality,price,etc.
Thanks and waiting for your early reply.
Best Regards,
Anna
又到月末了,呵呵,上个月客户就是在这个时候消失的,怕他再次消失,我特意强调了下,
要他有话就说的,凡事好商量嘛。
果然不出我所料,客户又没回我了,刚好那几天我的邮箱出了点问题,于是我又重新申请了
个邮箱,于是乎,11.30号我又用新邮箱借机跟客户发了封邮件。
Dear **,
Very sorry that there is something wrong with my former email,it seems that it has been stolen by someone who use it to send spam to the contact person in my mail.So I applied another mail for business,hope you can kindly understand and then contact me by this mail.
By the way,have you got my mail on last Saturday?I'd like to send you another if not. Thanks and waiting for your early reply.
Best Regards,
Anna
呵呵,这会他总算回了,不过又是要我给他报原板价格。
Dear Anna
please quote us the price for SM simple sheets in basic dimension about. waiting Your reply
best regards
随后12.01号时又追加了一封邮件
Dear Anna
please also let us know if You are trading pany or manufacturer. So we have a partner in China which can visit You and the pany to check the production and make some factory audit before and during the production.
waiting Your reply
with kind regards
问我是生产商还是贸易商,我心想,这下完了,估计没多大戏了,他要的这种产品,我们是
找别人买的,所以……唉,还是要回啊
于是,我合二为一,回了以下邮件
Dear**,
Thanks for your mail,here is the price.
To be honest,we are a M manufacturer and G trader,we have AM production lines,and is planning to instal SM production lines in future.so we still work as a trader of SM at present.
Pls feel free to ask me if you have any question.thanks and waititng for your early reply.
Best Regards,
Anna
后来觉得这么回复欠妥,于是我也追加了一封邮件
Dear **,
Pls rest assured about the quality,the SM are from very big manufacturer who can product the M as per your request strictly,and we can guarantee the quality. Besides,pls fee free to visit us,and if you have any other questions or requirements,just let me know.
Thanks and waiting for your early reply.
Best Regards,
Anna
让他放心,质量绝对没问题~之后几天,又没理我,12.06收到他一封邮件
Dear Anna
please send us your contact information we would like to discuss with our partner in China to visit you and the pany to see production materials etc . before placing
the first order is better for us. He is Chinese so he will contact you and discuss
the details ASAP
we are waiting Your reply
with best regards
要我的联系方式,好啊,来就来呗,来了或许还有戏些,于是,12.07回复,告诉他办公室
和工厂的地址。
七、order及PI
12.09时,他给我以前的邮件里发了封邮件,说要下单,让我准备发票,10号上班时,按照
他详细的规格,让老板找人给报个价,刚好碰到老板不在,耽搁了一天。10号下午,客户又
给我的新邮件里发了封邮件,问我收到了没
Dear Anna
did you get my email about our order?
please confirm and prepair the PI pleas
waiting your reply
best regards
既然我当天报不出价,刚好又是周五了,也只好将计就计了.
Dear **,
Very sorry that I read it just now after got this mail.you've sent it to my former
email which I haven't used for a long time.
Now there're something that I need to clarify from the factory.such as the production
time,packing,and the quantity per crate,etc.then I can work out a most favorite plan
for you.as it's later friday, I'll have to give PI to you tomorrow or next Monday.
Really sorry for the inconvenience that caused to you. Best Regards,
Anna
后来他又发了封邮件,要追加另各异规格的产品,但数量极少,我们也做不了,
周一时,从上午就跟老板打电话,让他报价,每次打电话都说在算,一直到下午,还没报来,
唉,新人就是这样,新人的事,不会太放心上的,于是,隔一个小时催一回,终于拿来报价
单了,却发现价格比我跟客户报的要高很多,原板又涨价了,而工厂一直没通知我们,我当
时急了,我才跟客户涨完价,现在又要涨,这会真没戏了~~
三次报价(二次涨价)
于是,我仔细核算了价格,给他涨了下价,但没有当天给他报过去,这回,客户急了,13号
又催我PI了,
14号,去了封邮件
Dear**,
Very sorry for the late response because of the personal leave yesterday. Enclosed pls find the PI,if there is something wrong,just let me know. Also sorry that we have to made some adjustment about the price,as you know,the market is very unstable in China,the SM rose about RMB1.5yuan in the nearly days,if we do as the former price,we'll have a great loss.
From the long contact with you,I know you're very serious businessman,as it's our first transaction,to reach an agreement and establish long business relationship,we made some concession,with the new price,we can only clear our cost. Pls note that all the prices in PI are worked as per pieces.Thanks for your kind undetstanding,hope you can make an earlier desicion,for this price is valid before 31th,Dec.
Waiting for your early reply.
Best Regards,
Anna
再一次跟他涨价了,邮件发出去了的时候,心里特别没底。随后发了封邮件告诉他,PI已经
发了,怕在垃圾箱,要他查收一下。
砍价
15号了,客户回邮件了:
Dear Anna
sorry for my late reply. but we are not in so easy situation now. Last time you send us the final price we have decided between two panies yours and one another. Your price wins the deciding because of all other service and conditions were almost the same. Now as your price raise up we are not sure about placing order because now your price little bit higher then other pany which didnt raise up the price in this week. If you can maintain the last price we can accept and place the order immediately. waiting your reply and keeping the hope
with kind regards
没想到客户会来这一招,这不是明显的砍价么,跟同事一说,我同事说,估计另一个公司是
假的,目的就是让你降价,你再核算核算,给他降降吧,于是,又跟老板打电话,核对价格,
居然发现价格只涨了5毛,呵呵,这下可以降了额,不过,还是挺自责的,价格啊,没有做
到及时的更新~这也是这单过程中的一个致命的错误~
降是可以,但是按原价,已经是不可能的了。于是16号回复
Dear **
Not that we don't want to maintain the last price,just we really cann't,if do,we'll have a great loss.
1)the price was very unstable and rose in the nearly several months due to the raw materials.now it rose again.
2)the last price is worked as a whole container,now the quantity changed,it's much smaller than before,which will increase the cost.
As we have contacted from September,we can see your great sincerity to work with us,for it's our first transaction,to show our sincerity,after talked to our boss,we decide to make a concession.
This is the best we can do,any discount or unexpected cases will make us loss out.so hope you can kindly understand and consider the new price.
Enclosed pls find the new PI,as it's around The Spring Festival,the factory will be very busy,so hope you can make a earlier desicion and allow us to make the goods delivered before the festiaval.
Thanks and waiting for your early reply.
Best Regards,
Anna
跟他来了个情况说明,并再次夸夸他,还催他快点做决定。呵呵,没想到,他这回居然没说
什么了,当天回复如下:
Dear Anna
thanks for your helpful reaction on our plain. Also I would like to ask if its not possible to put more inside the container your PI is calculated on about 1700. Is it possible to put more then this quantity?
Please check and if possible put maximum whats possible
with kind regards
八、确认订单
他说让我给再装点,没说价格了,这个好办,跟工厂核对,再多加了一箱,重新改了PI,回
了过去。
Dear **,
Thanks for your kind understanding and cooperation.
Now we worked out a best loading plan after contacted with the factory and shipping agent.Enclosed pls find the new PI,now it's about 2100,with a total weight of 25 tons,that's maximum,if more,will be overweight.
Pls feel free to ask me if you have any questions,and we will arrange it immediately getting the advanced payment.
Thanks and waiting for your early reply.
Best Regards,
Anna
呵呵,又一次提到确认订单,之后没理我,20号,发了封邮件,又催了下
Dear **,
Since the Christmas is ing,maybe you will have a two week's holiday,so we suggest you deposit and confirm this order in the nearly days,then we can arrange it during your holiday.If you do it after the holiday,I'm afraid that the products will not be delivered timely after produced just because of our spring Festival. Thanks and waiting for your early reply.
Best Regards,
Anna
告诉他,快过年了,要他赶快下定金啊~
12月21号,客户发邮件说,定金打了,要我们查收,呵呵,这单也就初步定下来了。
完了,总结后才发现,好像忘跟他说merry Christmas了~
客户的partner要来验货啦
趁今天有空,赶快整理一下单子的最新进展。呵呵。
1月6号时,跟客户发了封邮件,告诉他货快生产完了。
Dear **‘
Glad to tell you that we're producing the goods,as planed,we can make the delivery about 10days later.
Pls kindly advise me the contact information of the inspector,so we can arrange it and make the goods inspected immediately produced.
Besides,could you pls arrange your shipping agent to contact me to discuss the latest shipment?
Thanks and waiting for your early reply.
Best Regards,
然后当天便收到了他的回复,
Dear Anna
please send me your contact information just the mobile I think our partner in CHina will contact you and discuss all the details for inspection. Also please note that I send your email address to our shipping agent so she will reply you straight away with contact information for contact agent in CHina so you can discuss the booking of container with him.will be waiting your replywith kind regards 接着我便收到了来自国外货代的一封邮件,里面有一些要求及联系信息,
其中有个VIP CODE,我好半天也没理解过来,后来跟船公司的打电话,又跟货代沟通一番,
才明白是怎么回事。
原来,客户是指定了船公司的,vip code叫约号,也有叫vip account的,运费到付时用的。
然后就是盯着生产,安排验货了,由于快过年了,我想年前发货,时间比较紧,正准备催客
户,让他的partner赶紧联系我时,他的partner给我打电话了,呵呵,终于联系上了,然
后就是安排验货的时间了,初步定在14号。
呵呵,虽然不是外国人,但还是蛮期待的,也得去接机啊,什么的,呵呵,希望一切顺利~
祝我成功~加油~~
作文八:《让我印象深刻的老师》700字
让我印象深刻的老师
开学刚一周,我就发现诸多令人难忘的老师:严格要求的地理老师,幽默风趣的数学老师,雷厉风行的英语老师......然而最是让我印象深刻的,却是班主任语文老师。
老师姓张,扎着一束马尾辫,脸上时常挂着笑容。我因腿伤耽误了近一周的课程。课堂上,老师对同学们说:“曲凌枫同学耽误了一周的课程并不可怕,只要肯努力,成绩会追上来的。可怕的是有些同学每天都不好好学习把时间都浪费了。”课后又语重心长的对我说:“耽误一周的课程其实很可怕,你一定要好好学,不要落后啊!”望着老师严肃的神色,回味着老师话语里透出的隐隐担忧,我认真的点了点头,心想:“我一定不能辜负老师的期望!”下了课,同学们在玩,我在抄书;晚上,同学们在看电视,我在补习;大课间,同学们在跑操,老师又安排了全校第一的同学为我辅导;当我松懈时,脑海里老师的话又提醒我继续努力学习。一周过去了,我落下的课程已经补习的差不多了。
张老师上课很有趣,枯燥的内容她却经常讲得妙趣横生。例如学习《观舞记》一课时,学到一个新词“叱咤风云”,张老师怕我们记不住“咤”的读音,一步步开导我们:“叱咤什么意思呀?”稍作停顿,接着说:“威力极大,是不是像炸弹一样?所以念做zhà。”这样一来,连我这个总记不住字音的人也记得牢牢的。还有一次在学习《社戏》一课时,有一个“蹿”字,老师为了加深我们的印象,做了一个“蹿”的动作,只见老师胳膊上下翻飞,惹得我们哈哈大笑。张老师说要带领我们玩语文,而不是学语文,的确如此!
张老师虽然在课堂上潇洒自如,可又有谁能知道老师背后的辛苦呢?批改如上的作业、绞尽脑汁的写教案、备课到深夜,为的是能让全班同学能更好的学习语文知识,这才是老师真正值得我们尊敬之处。在这里,我要深鞠一躬,说声:“老师,您辛苦了!”
作文九:《让我印象深刻的一位老师》1900字
让我印象深?刻的一位老?师
英语师范二?班 高田 05110?209
幼儿园两年?~小学六年~中学六年~大学四年~在我的人生?中出现过许?许多多的老?师~他们性格各?异~教学方法也?不尽相同~但能让我留?下较深印象?的也就那么?几个。而说起印象?最为深刻的?老师~储老师的脸?就立马浮现?在我的脑海?中。
储老师是我?们初中的数?学年级组长?~四十来岁~个子高高的?很挺拔~留着一撮小?胡子~很像语文课?本上鲁迅的?形象~那时候我们?都会戏称他?是“长高版的鲁?迅”。他各个方面?都很出色~教学经验丰?富~和学生相处?的也很融洽?。那时的我~储老师简直?是我崇拜的?模范。下面~我想从两方?面来谈谈~储老师给我?的印象:与学生的交?往方面和教?学方面。
首先谈谈储?老师与学生?交往的方面?。储老师年轻?的时候脾气?很大~也特别容易?动火。待到教我们?那届时~脾气已经小?了不少~可是在遇见?学生在课堂?上调皮捣蛋?还是会发个?小火~发火的时候?还是很威严?让人有点畏?惧的。但是让我惊?讶的是~去年储老师?女儿结婚给?他女儿婚礼?上伴奏的人?竟然是那个?曾经的“问题”学生。储老师与那?个“问题”学生的冲突?从初一就开?始了~一直延续到?毕业才结束?。那时~我经常看见?储老师一下?课就带着这?名学生到办?公室~两人有时还?在课堂上争?吵起来。我非常不解?~在我的理解?范围内~如果有老师?经常找我“麻烦”经常批评我?~等我毕业了?一定不会再?去主动找他?。于是后来我?联系了那名?学生~我想~这中间一定?有什么我不?知道的。后来~他说~储老师虽然?经常找他去?办公室~也在班级里?训斥过他~但是这一切?都是为了他?好~是真的关心?他~不仅仅是训?斥~储老师还经?常找他面对?面聊天~从学习聊到?生活。甚至在毕业?以后~储老师也联?系过他~询问过他的?情况~这让他尤为?感动于是才?自发想到储?老师女儿的?婚礼上伴奏?~现在他们就?像是亲人一?般~时不时就联?系一下。
通过上面的?例子~足见储老师?的人格魅力?~当然~在我初中三?年~储老师给我?的印象远远?不止这些。下面我继续?讲讲储老师?教学方面给?我的印象。
我想拿我自?己作为例子?。我在初中时?的数学成绩?算不上差~属于中上等?~平时测验分?数总徘徊在?八十五至九?十二~三分那里。不管卷子多?难或多简单?~我的成绩总?是很稳定~高高不出哪?也低不出哪?。若是放在一?般老师那里?~像我这样的?学生最让他?们省心了~他们就可以
?把心思更多?的放在尖子?生和“差”生了。而储老师不?同~他对学生的?关心是全面?的~照顾每一位?学生。我这么说也?许有些片面?~原因是我所?在的初中实?行的是小班?制~一个班的学?生总共二十?来人~整个年级才?二百多人~学校里的老?师有更多精?力去关心学?生。不管是不是?以上的原因?~储老师依旧?值得敬佩~正因为他~我的数学成?绩有了质的?飞越~也对数学产?生了兴趣。
一天~储老师把我?叫到办公室?问我愿不愿?意担当数学?课代表~我有点不知?所措~更多的是疑?惑“就我这样能?够担当这个?重任吗,”我心里想的?是~数学课代表?应该是由那?些数学方面?特别好的学?生来担当。我把疑虑告?诉了老师~但是储老师?坚持让我担?当~于是我便成?了班级的数?学课代表。自从担任了?这个职位~我的责任感?也上来了~我不能名不?副实~所以学习也?更加努力了?。同时~储老师让我?每天早晨统?计班上同学?不会做的题?目题号并在?早操前汇报?给他~这样~在上课讲习?题时~他就能有重?点了。在上早操的?那段时间~他也会一对?一先给我讲?一遍那些题?目~然后我上课?时就等于听?了两遍~错题在我心?中的印象就?更深刻了~下一次再遇?到同样或相?似的问题也?就不会再错?。当然老师也?给了我任务?~下课时同学?有不会的问?题也可以找?我询问。就这样下来?~我的成绩确?实有所提高?~不再是半吊?子水平了~时不时我也?能考出个高?分~我对数学的?兴趣也提高?了~不再把学习?数学当做是?一项任务~而是自觉的?去学习去寻?找答案。这一切都多?亏储老师的?教学方法。
再然后~我的数学课?代表职位卸?任留给了那?些曾经和我?一样的同学?~开始实行课?代表轮换制?度~就这样班上?的学习氛围?被带动起来?~积极性也提?高了。
一位好的老?师是可以改?变学生的命?运~我相信储老?师就是那样?的一个人。一名好的老?师不仅应该?具备优秀的?专业知识~还应该学会?因材施教~不同的学生?有不同的教?法~关心学生的?学习成绩并?关心学生的?生活~学会倾听学?生的心里话?。我作为一名?师范生~未来的志向?就是做一名?优秀的人民?教师~做像储老师?一样的受人?尊敬的教师?:
作文十:《最让我印象深刻的老师》300字
小学六年,有许多老师教过我们。但是,最让我印象深刻的,那就属侯老师了!还记得,小学时期,我们班是年级组中的差班,但自从五年级侯老师但让我们班的语文老师兼班主任后,我们班就已经被该造一新了!
记得老师刚来教我们的那几天,侯老师就让我们以一种新的方式——以民主推选出班委和班干部的新方法,打破了往常的指定方法。在这之前,我曾是这个班的“代理班长”,可能是因为我胆子不大的原因,我没有和他们去竞争班长,也因为如此,老师您发现了我的优点——认真、负责。后来虽然您只让我当了个劳动委员,但毕业时您给了我一张“三好学生”奖状,真不敢相信,我会得奖状,而且是“三好学生”的。
这张奖状,是我在小学生生涯结束时得的,也就是最后一张。每当看到这张奖状,都会想到侯老师。
啊!侯老师,是您让竖立了信心;是您,让我认识自己;也是您,让我明白了许多。感谢您!侯老师!
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