作文一:《给父母提建议作文》1900字
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给父母提建议作文
我感到你们对我的学习压力太大 ,有时我写完作业,刚想要出去玩,你们发现了,便“逼”着我去复习,我被“逼”无奈,只能乖乖地服从命令。你们这样让我没有自己的想法,我想要一个属于我自己的空间。
我知道,在爱的过程中,你们训斥我,打骂我。我觉得你们用这种方式来体罚我是不对的。你们在训斥我时也会感到特别的心痛,我也知道你们很爱我,可是你们用的方法不对,我们小孩子不听话的原因,就是你们用体罚的方法不对,我们加以抵抗。我建议你们换一种教育我们的方法,让我们得到更多的爱。同时也改掉那些不好的习惯,我想给你们提些建议,比如:
1.孩子做错了事就不要打孩子。要是孩子做错了事,你们最好不要上来就打孩子,要给孩子说一说道理,给孩子讲一讲怎样来补救,然后,让孩子找一找原因。
2.孩子考试如果考得不好,不要给孩子说一些不好听的话:如:你再考不好我就不要你了,你考不好就别吃饭??你们这么对孩子说,孩子在考试的时候会很紧张,就更考不好。等到老师念成绩了,孩子考不好,就非常害怕,有时老师让签字,有的孩子考不好,就不愿意拿出卷子来让父母签字了。要是孩子考试考不好的话,你们家长们不要对孩子又打又叫的,这样孩子就会更加害怕,时间长了就会有离家出
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走的现象,这主要与家长们平常对孩子打骂有关系,所以,家长们要站在孩子的那一边想一想。我希望家长们的这些坏习惯,都应该好好反省一下,用最温暖的爱来关心你的孩子,教育你的孩子。
平常,你们训斥我之后,我都会顶嘴。现在我长大了,我知道错了,也跟你们说一声“对不起”,我知道你们都是对我好,我也希望你们能改正你的教育方法,让我健康快乐的成长。
爸爸妈妈,我知道你们“望女成凤”的心情,但如果你们改变方法,合理安排的教育我们,也许会更好!
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亲爱的爸爸妈妈:
你们好!你们为了我的健康成长,辛苦了!为我的衣食住行你们付出了很多,却从来没有一句怨言。你们尽自己最大的努力,给我最好的学习生活环境。
在我走过的十一个春秋,你们都在为我辛勤劳动,用自己的汗水换来我的快乐,用自己的衰老托起我的成长。
如果问我世上什么让我最感动,除了真情,还是真情,你们对我的爱使我在快乐中长大了,在你们希望浸润的目光中,我长大了,更加懂得人间这一份深深的、浓浓的骨肉亲情。
每当回想小时候和你们在一起的时光,心中就会油然
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生出一丝甜蜜。“但愿人长久,千里共婵娟??”只有在家里,才能体会那一份温馨;只有在家里,才能品尝那一丝甜蜜、一丝温暖。
每天晚上,我做作业,爸爸看报,妈妈干家务。每一顿饭,一家人团团圆圆,从餐桌上飘出的笑声撒满乾坤。早晨,吃完热气腾腾的早饭,爸妈上班,我上学,新的一天又开始了。我为有这样一个家感到十分开心、十分快乐。
在家里,爸妈和我都能关心他人,因此制造了一个美好的生活环境。平时,我们都要完成各自的学业和工作;周末,我们一起看电视、玩电脑、打羽毛球,生活充实愉快;我爱我家,快乐甜蜜的家。”
每当我取得成功时,我都会为此感到兴奋、喜悦,但是,如果没有你们的辛勤灌溉,哪来花朵的迎风怒放?我要把所有的优异成绩送给你们,回报你们为我的付出。
当最后一片树叶飘落时,它不会忘记哺育过它的树根;当最后一只雏鹰飞出巢穴后,它心中仍然刻着家乡和父母;当最后一只卵孵出的小鱼游进江河时,它不会忘记小河湾里带大它的母亲??只要有生命,就会有亲情。世界上最深的海不会有父母的爱深,宇宙中最高的天不会有子女的情高!
没有最大,只有更大,亲子之情会超越一切,战胜一切,愿世上充满这一份真诚的爱!
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作文二:《英语作文 感谢父母》3200字
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英语作文 感谢父母
Dear dad and mum,you’re so selflethat you always keep all good things for ‘re so diligent that you keep on working all day long in order to make a you for giving my you for your believe will try my best,I want to see the smile in your love you forever .
would like to thank you for the trust that you have placed in me as your child’s teacher. While my position here was only temporary, this experience what every teacher I know hopes to encounter- cooperation between parents and teacher to ensure that their child has succehere in school.
I hope that as I go into a classroom of my own this fall I will encounter parents like you. Thank you for allowing me to see firsthand the great things that can be acplished in the life of a child when parents and the teacher work together for the best interest of the child.
Thanksgiving parents English position
Everyone should have a life down on feelings - Thanksgiving, we have Thanksgiving life, family Thanksgiving, Thanksgiving life, the munity
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Thanksgiving ... ...
If, like me to choose my first Thanksgiving to the parents. They let me e to this colorful world, and they spared no effort to support me grow up in their harvest success, I am pleased to join with me, and sow the tears of joy; they are in my frustration, I am encouraged by, I am inspired; loud voice exhort, and look forward to a report, the parents of the heart and blood flowing from time to time in my whole body.
If you only Thanksgiving parents may be too narrow. We would also like to live Thanksgiving. As long as grateful, then your life will be happier! Life is fair, she will not deceive you, as long as you pay, there will be a return. Despite the sometimes smooth, sometimes despite the numerous reefs; singing, even though at times laughing, even though at times sad depression. This is the life, gave us hot Suanku salt, gave us flowers and sunshine. No matter the kind of situation is that Thanksgiving should live, or where colorful? !
But also everyone around Thanksgiving. Grateful to those who encourage you, because he brought you to power; grateful for your help, because he told us what
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to give; spur thank you, because he removes your karma; grateful to those who have hurt you, because His temper your mind; to thank those who have deceived you, because he has enhanced your knowledge; to thank those who have abandoned you, because you have to teach him self-reliance; grateful for your trip, because he strengthens your ability to ... ...
Thanksgiving did not know how a person, not like a fish breathe, can not survive a moment;
Thanksgiving know a person, just like the flowers bees encounter, as encountered in the desert oasis, just like horses came face in the world so beautiful!
Let’s hearts with gratitude, singing aloud in front of the world, “the heart of Thanksgiving, thank you, with my life ... ...”
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作文三:《感谢父母 英语作文》2100字
Only in the baby from crying wah-wah, that we invoke the first words whispered parents learn to walk the first time to walk small foot staggering along. The first time carrying a bag to school, the first test scores back, the first from their parents ... ... maybe you've never noted this many times in the first, in the growth of this long road to the parents how much to pay into the How much love. Every time you smile, every success, and even failed every time, every mistake in the minds of parents will never forget, to acpany you around, give you the support of silence ... ...
We e from? To hear this issue, I am sure you will say that parents bring us up in the world. Yes ah, the day thirteen years ago, our parents with tears, smiles and happiness to greet our arrival. We came to the world from the moment that many parents have a heavy work - to take care of us. Although this is a heavy burden, but the baby's
Small, I always love their parents as a matter of course, because I do not understand the hard work their parents do not know. Now, I grew up, and I know with a heart of Thanksgiving to appreciate their parents, should take care, the responsibility of your parents.
Dear dad and mum,you're so selfless that you always keep all good things for me.You're so diligent that you keep on working all day long in order to make a living.Thank you for giving my life.Thank you for your love.Please believe me.I will try my best,I want to see the smile in your eyes.I love you forever .
Mama,thank you for so many years of my education and training,ignorance of the past,I always make you angry,but now I grow up,self-reliance,and I feel that I should not be so naive.I will work hard at all the subjects.I will not live up to your expectations!I'm really grateful to my mother to take care of me.When I was sick,my mother is always did her best take care of me.When I failed the examination,my mother also
encouraged me to refresh,not to bee disheartened.Really grateful to what my mother has done.I know it was my mother's help that made me learned how to perform well in my life.I really would like to thank my mother.I think in this world,I love you more than anyone.
作文四:《感谢父母 英语作文》3300字
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感谢父母 英语作文
Dear dad and mum,you’re so selflethat you always keep all good things for ‘re so diligent that you keep on working all day long in order to make a you for giving my you for your believe will try my best,I want to see the smile in your love you forever .
关于感恩的英语作文 感谢母亲Mama, thank you for
so many years of my education and training, ignorance of the past, I always Jalan you angry, but now I grow up, self-reliance, and I feel that I should not be so na-iv-e, and her mother, I will work hard Learning, you will not live up to my expectations! Really very grateful to my mother to take care of. When I was sick, my mother is always in every possible way to take care of me. When I failed the examination, the mother also encouraged me to refuel, not to bee disheartened. Really grateful to my mother has done, I know it was my mother I love the performance, really would like to thank my mother. I think in this world, I love you people, my mother
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Thanksgiving parents English position
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Everyone should have a life down on feelings - Thanksgiving, we have Thanksgiving life, family Thanksgiving, Thanksgiving life, the munity Thanksgiving ... ...
If, like me to choose my first Thanksgiving to the parents. They let me e to this colorful world, and they spared no effort to support me grow up in their harvest success, I am pleased to join with me, and sow the tears of joy; they are in my frustration, I am encouraged by, I am inspired; loud voice exhort, and look forward to a report, the parents of the heart and blood flowing from time to time in my whole body.
If you only Thanksgiving parents may be too narrow. We would also like to live Thanksgiving. As long as grateful, then your life will be happier! Life is fair, she will not deceive you, as long as you pay, there will be a return. Despite the sometimes smooth, sometimes despite the numerous reefs; singing, even though at times laughing, even though at times sad depression. This is the life, gave us hot Suanku salt, gave us flowers and sunshine. No matter the kind of situation is that Thanksgiving should live, or where colorful? !
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But also everyone around Thanksgiving. Grateful to those who encourage you, because he brought you to power; grateful for your help, because he told us what to give; spur thank you, because he removes your karma; grateful to those who have hurt you, because His temper your mind; to thank those who have deceived you, because he has enhanced your knowledge; to thank those who have abandoned you, because you have to teach him self-reliance; grateful for your trip, because he strengthens your ability to ... ...
Thanksgiving did not know how a person, not like a fish breathe, can not survive a moment;
Thanksgiving know a person, just like the flowers bees encounter, as encountered in the desert oasis, just like horses came face in the world so beautiful!
Let’s hearts with gratitude, singing aloud in front of the world, “the heart of Thanksgiving, thank you, with my life ... ...”。
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作文五:《父母英语作文》1300字
父母英语作文
父母
Is who has given me bright eyes? Is who has given me the health body and spirit? Is who has given me the fine mind? The parents, are my parents!
The world, the mother is most let's the human change countenance. I also have such a mother, although she is very ordinary, but in my heart, she is actually great. Mother, very fat, also is not high. She to me always strict, but also very kind. Is sad in me, she can use the silent motion to show loving care for me; Is defeated in me encourages me with the warm language; Makes mistakes in me, be relentless points out mistakes I ......Is she lets me know that, The success is mother of the defeat; Causes the human to be progressive modestly, arrogant is the human falls behind ......These life truth, causes me to benefit greatly. A strict teacher, a loving mother, loves me very deeply very deep ......
父母
是谁给了我明亮的双眼?是谁给了我健康的体魄?是谁给了我美好的心灵?父母,是我的父母!
人世间,母亲是最让人动容的。我也有这么个母亲,虽然她很平凡,但是在我心里,她却是伟大的。母亲,很胖,也不高。她对我总是很严格的,但也很和蔼的。在我伤心的时候,她会用无声的行动关怀我;在我失败的时候用温暖的语言鼓励我;在我犯错的时候,毫不留情地指正我……是她让我知道:成功是失败之母;谦虚使人进步,骄傲是人落后……这些人生的道理,使我受益匪浅。一个严师,一个慈母,爱我很深很深……
母亲让人动容,父亲便如同一座大山般伟大。他的爱是很粗矿的,从不用言语表达;有时候又是很细微的,让人难以察觉,就像一个眼神,一个动作……我的父亲,很高大,很强壮,在我面前是个威严的爸爸。他不会在我成功的时候夸奖我,只会在我失败的时候批评我,让我意识到自己的错误;他不会在我做好事的时候表扬我,只会在我做坏事的时候职责我……尽管如此,我也深深地感受到了也个父亲浓浓的爱,爱只是来源于一个不起眼的动作,一个不让人注意的眼神……
母亲的爱,如春雨般滋润着我;父亲的爱,如大山般养育着我。父母很爱很爱我,所以,我也很爱很爱他们!
作文六:《感恩父母英语作文》1000字
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感恩父母英语作文
感恩父母英语作文
今年央视春晚,一曲《时间都去哪儿了》让许多观众深
受感动。假设你是九年级一班的李明,你将代表班级参加学
校举行的“感恩父母”英语演讲比赛。
包括:
1.讲述一件你和父母之间难忘的事情;
2.你对“感恩父母”的认识;
3.具体的感恩行动(至少两点)。
4.表达祝福与愿望。
Hello, everyone! I'm Li Ming from Class 1, Grade 9. Today the topic of my speech is love for my parents. My parents do many things for me. When I was 10 years old, I caught a cold and had a high fever at midnight. I felt so terrible. My mother took me to hospital
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immediately. She took good care of me without a rest during the whole night.
My parents give me almost everything. However, they don't want to get any reward from me. From now on, I will help my parents do more housework. My mother's birthday is ing, I will make a birthday card for her. I must thank her by studying hard. I hope my parents are in good health forever.感恩父母作文感恩父母的作
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作文七:《英语作文感谢父母》6600字
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英语作文感谢父母
Is a warm thanks to the emotion, like a stream flowing slowly, softly sang, in the heart and the heart passed between the human world of the most pure beautiful message.
Most of all I thank my parents. Their open minds with deep love and embrace all my advantages and disadvantages, generously gave me a room for my own, let me extend his arms, I want to embrace life.
I thank my parents, they gave me into this world power.
My childhood in parents’ love and care be light of heart from care to spend. Sunny day, they sent me a beautiful piece of clear sky; rainy snowy season, they’ve held a warm umbrella.
Teen time acpanied by studying the passions, but included the number of parents t sour. Parents often look very happy because my joy, often because of my trouble and worry in the heart. I know, parents are eager to have a good result, one day in the future, their daughter to be able by virtue of their ability, to better life.
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Finally one day, parents wish: finally has one to belong to my happy home.
Parents smiled, in this heartfelt smile, but I saw parents forehead when covered with wrinkles, also many strands of white hair at the temples.
Their heart is still full of countlethoughts, about her daughter, worried about their little grandson. Then, to my work, my family and my children, parents in their close already sixty years old of age, also with the granddaughter of “old maid”, see granddaughter as childhood I clever clever appearance, parents meet smile. Just, they are no longer young ... ...
I thank my parents, and when I am no longer young, when I quietly counting the parents head wisps of hair, as I gently stroked parents face wrinkles;
I thank my parents, when parents are no longer young parents, as time rolls on a silent love still stay with my journey, when parents kindly eyes filled with countlecare and warmth;
I thank my parents, and when I was a new mother full of love to take care of the baby, when I gently singing the song.” So I happy you happy” ... ...
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I finally understand:
My parents, give me the whole world!
I thank my parents.
Their parents worked hard to know how much
Write down the topic at the time, I also feel very embarrassed. Because I was a few years ago to know their parents birthday, can we truly appreciate parents on every head a white bearing fatigue and the vicissitudes of life. It is in the past few days, really feel the hand of every penny weight. It is a few days ago, I solemnly diary first leaf wrote: mother the hands of line, wandering body suit. Carefully she sews and thoroughly she mends, dreading the delays that will keep him late from home. Who statement inch graheart, offer three inch across. And just the other day, in a league secretary meeting, MiZhao ‘s words: their
parents worked hard to know how much, let my heart once again was on the live.
These days, I always think and parents together bit by bit, whether happy, or sad, total want to pick up the telephone, telephone her, tell her that her son love her very much. But when I think of the time be
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overe by one’s feelings, tears will flow out of, always feel to owe their parents too much, always feel to say this sentence will make themselves more guilt and remorse, but depressed in heart will be more.
In the University, not we are adults, and not necessarily we mature many, knew a lot of. In fact, we are very na-iv-e, but also the fundamental experience that wearing what? What to eat? It is the only clothes and dishes?
In our life, parents care and love is the most extensive and most selfless, the ex-rearing parents never told endless: sucking mother’s milk from the infant; grabbing parents heart taken the first step in life; in the sweet songs sound sleep, in the meticulous care in grow sturdily. Parents for our sick spent many sleeplenights; for our parents to read or fees to how much effort; this is higher than the sky more than Earth, kindness, and we can appreciate how much? We return to the number? Crazy night flight, my love, absenteeism, late, this is we return? Sit in the cafe, have nothing to do the hit CS, playing three stars, called Xuanyuan, I don’t know you, is it right? Can now think parents,
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think parents head that new hair; in your girlfriend gamble at high stakes, I don’t know if you dare to look out loeis it right? To bear the parents, think of a day and night also faced off the parents. In the University, I have had such a childish silly days, at that time, I have not thought of these, but I do not want to. Only the ignorant of his own conscience and” smart” doing stupid things.
Always with a kind of thought was cool way to suck left cigarette ejecting, always with a kind of thought that it was very relaxed tone that he wasted time, always with a kind of thought that it was very romantic expression took his girlfriend’s hand, usually in a thought very proud attitude truancy Internet, always with a thought is very natural and unrestrained life to cope with life, is na-iv-e, childish ridiculous. It is silly, is for his silly show. While our parents? Always with a kind of thought is very rich way to give us money, always in a fancy of relaxation breath told us not to go to work tired, always with a kind of thought that it was very extravagant way to eat dumplings, always with a happy tone told us that we have such a
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son. But we had not thought of return, even for our parents to pay hard work we have in mind, we also have human parents the day, when our hearts taste which is now our parents bear.
Even Homer sometimes nods. Whatever we did, as long as we now give yourself a quiet day, think about our parents pay drops, we think the responsibility of tomorrow. Pick up those forgotten by us textbooks, relieved by sitting in the classroom, careful listening to each class, carefully through every day, I think our parents that broad mind will hold, because we once na-iv-e and waste the time.
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作文八:《英语作文建议 英语作文》20300字
篇一:建议类英语作文
建议类作文
home What’s more, It is necessary for the passengers
toobey traffic rules
least
篇二:高中英语作文--建议信
建议信(1)-----阐释原因;提出建议类
请你代表你班同学给校长写一封信,反映一下你校食堂的
几点问题,以引起学校重视,并针对问题提出两条合理建议。
问题包括:
1. 菜价昂贵,菜市单一;2. 排队时间长,浪费午休时间;
3. 味道不佳,浪费现象严重。
注意:1. 词数不少于120; 2. 开头和结尾已给出,不
计入总词数;3. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 参考词
汇: 食堂 canteen Dear Principal,
Recently, many students are discussing the problems of
the canteen.
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sincerely hope you can adopt my suggestions. Thank you!
Yours, Li Hua
作文范文: Dear Principal,
Some students think the prices of the dishes are too high and that the choices are too limited. Another concern is that the time spent in waiting is so long that we have less time to have a rest. Meanwhile, some students think that the taste of the food is awful, which leads to a lot of waste. the prices be more reasonable and the choices of dishes be more various.需注意的词汇、表达:
1. delicious waiting taste(n.味道) tasty (adj.可口的)
cook (n.厨师) cooker (n.炊具)
price 价格
2. lower /bring down the price 降低价格 3. at a
lower/reasonable price 以较低的价格 4. varieties of dishes
种类多样的菜品 5. For one thing,……. For another,……
6. make sb (not)do sth
7. wait /stand in line / in a queue for a long time 8. The kinds of food are . 表达食堂出现的问题:
9. The prices of dishes are so high that many of us can’t
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afford them.
10. There are so few dishes to choose from, which is far from satisfactory. / which can’t satisfy our
needs.
11. It takes us so much time to stand in line, which decreases our time of rest at noon. 12. The food in the canteen doesn’t taste .
The taste of food in the canteen isn’t
13. The food in the canteen tastes so bad that a lot of food is left and wasted 14. It’s a waste of time to stand in
line for a long time.
15. The food in the canteen tastes so bad, which leads to a severe phenomenon of wasting food. 16. In the long run, it’s
bad for our health and study.
17. It goes without saying that it will influence our sleep in the afternoon. 表达提出的建议:
18. Improving the taste of the food is also a good solution to the problems. 19. I think it’s necessary to provide more
kinds of food. 20. It’s high time that we took measures to
solve the problems.
So it’s high time for us to take measures
21. To solve the problems, I think the canteen should set
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up a new figure(形象) and improve the
present condition to satisfy the students’ needs.
22. We hope the canteen can provide us with dishes of a high quality at a reasonable price. 23. The canteen should open more windows so that we needn’t wait so long.
24. As far as I’m concerned, the canteen should attach importance to the quality. What’s more,
different kinds of food should be provided.
25. Measures are supposed to be taken to improve the conditions of the canteen.
建议模板: Dear ….,
I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to…….(引出话题). Here are a few suggestions. First of all, it is important to do sth. Then, it also helps to do sth. Besides, it should be a good idea to do sth.
建议句型积累:
1. Many ways can contribute to solving the problem, but I think the following may be the most
effective ones.
2. I’d like to make some suggestions on ……. 3. It’s of
great importance for sb to do sth.
It’s necessary for sb to do sth
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4. It would be a good idea for sb to do sth. / It would be a better idea if……. 5. It contributes /helps a lot if ……… 6. I suggest that …../ My suggestion is that …
It’s suggested / advised / remended that…… 7. You’
d better do sth./ We’d better do sth
It’s better to do sth
8. Measures are supposed to be taken to do sth
We are supposed to take effective measures to do sth 9. It’
s high time that sb sth. / It’s high time for sb to do sth
建议信(2)-----阐释原因;提出建议类
假定你是中学生李华。在一位名叫Sad Mother的学生家
长的博客上,你看到如下内容。请你根据博客内容、写作要
点和要求,用英语给这位家长回复。
I’m the mother of a fourteen-year-old. Recently I have found that my daughter told lies to me. The other day she told me that she did well in the final exam. However I found out she failed in math and English. What should I do?
写作要点:
1.表明了解她的问题; 2.帮她分析孩子撒谎的原因; 3.
提出至少两条建议 要求:
1.短文须写在答题卡的指定区域。 2.短文词数不少于100
(不含已写好的部分)。 3.内容充实,结构完整,语意连贯。
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4.书写需清晰、工整。
Hi,Sad Mother,
I have learned
that_____________________________________________
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作文范文: Hi,Sad Mother,
she is afraid you will punish her if she tells you the truth.
Besides, nowadays, parents put too much pressure on their kids. In order not to let you down, she lie .
–heart talk with her, making her know being honest is more important than scores. In addition, don’t be too strict.
微小的) mistakes.
需要注意积累的词汇、短语、和句子:
daughter女儿expectation 期望 be worried / concerned
about 担心 calm down 冷静下来 at a loss 迷惑不解
keep in touch with 保持联系 be strict with sb in sth 在某方
面对某人要求严格 heart-to-heart 推心置腹的
idea 注意想法 test 测试 text 文本 cheat 欺骗 want
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sb to do sth 想让某人做某事
1. It was because she didn’t want to let you down
that she pretended to achieve high scores. 2. She isn’t
aware that the lies have hurt both you and herself.
3. Being a teenager, she needs to be encouraged. And it’s
you who can do this. 4. It is probably your high expectations to her that makes her decide to lie.
5. You should figure out the reason why she lied to you before solving the problem. 6. It goes without saying that lying is bad behavior.
7. The reason why she didn’t tell you the truth may be
that she didn’t want to let you down.
8. It is suggested that you should have a face-to-face talk with her so that she might open her heart to you.
9. To avoid the lies, you should encourage her rather than blame her when she fails in exams 10. The reason that leads to the problem may be various.
11. Confronted with (面对) these problems, you should
take a series of effective measures to help you daughter.
12. As far as I’m concerned, it’s better to municate
with her in a friendly way to let her know it’s wrong to tell
lies.
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13. It’s suggested that you should attach more importance to physical and mental health. Moreover, it’s better to
encourage her to do what she wants. 改错:
1. There are some advice.
2. Don’t sad.
3. You should give her more encourage.
4. She may afraid that if she fails in the exam, you will punish her.
5. If she has difficulty in learning, you should inspire she
and help she out. 6. She doesn’t want you angry. 7. Please not to be so worried.
8. One of the reason is that she isn’t dare to tell you the truth. 9. Because she afraid parents.
10. So she don’t want to mention it. 11. You should apology to her.
12. You’d better to encourage her to be a honest people. 13. You’d better be care about her health and study. 14. I’
m very understand your condition. 15. She may doesn’t
want you to be angry.
建议信(3)
为了帮助中学生健康成长,某中学英文报开辟了
“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie,
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收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了
自己的困扰:近日容易发脾气,使正常的学习和生活受到了
影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。 内容要点如下:
1(表示理解并给予安慰; 2(提出建议并说明理由。 注
意:
1(词数120左右;
2(信中不能出现与本人相关的信息;
3(信的开头与结尾已为你拟好,不计入总词数。 参考词
汇:temper n. 脾气,情绪 Hi Worried,
I’m sorry to know that you’re having such a had time at
the moment.
Yours, Jamie Hi Worried,
I'm sorry to know that you're having such a bad time at the moment. The truth is that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, I quite understand how you are feeling now and there is no need to worry about it so much. The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything you’ll regret. Here are three useful tips.
First of all, talk to someone you trust about the trouble you’re faced with, which is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself. Second, go outdoors
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and play team games with your friends as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger. Last but not least, remain optimistic about your future. Having a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits. I hope you'll soon bee calmer and better.
Yours,Jamie
Highlights:
1. First, you are supposed to figure out what makes you upset,and then keep away from it. 2. What’s more, you are
supposed to take an active part in outdoor activities to relax.
3. To solve the problem as soon as possible, you can open your heart to a good friend, talking about
your trouble.
4. Carried by two, burdens are lighter.
5. It’s high time that you should relieve your pressure.
6. Measures are supposed to be taken to control your temper.
7. There is no denying that everyone will lose his temper when something unexpected happens. 8. Instead of being angry, what is important for you is to learn to control your temper from now on.
9. It’s mon for teenagers like you to lose your temper,
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which of course will have a bad effect on your normal study and life.
建议信(4)
高二下期已经过去半学期,高三已经在向同学们招手。随
着学习和心理压力日益加大,一些同学的正常生活受到影
响,如睡眠不好,身体也开始亮起了红灯。请你根据以下要
点,给学校的英语刊物写一篇稿子,向同学们提出建议,并
简述理由或举例说明:
1、劳逸结合; 2、健康饮食; 3、适当锻炼; 4、保
持乐观心态。 注意:1、短文必须包括所列内容;2、词数
120左右;
3、文章开头已给出; 4、写成一篇完整的短文,不要逐
条列举。
作文范文:
preventing them sleeping well and causing problems with their health. In order to improve the condition, I’d like to
offer some advice.
First, Combine work with rest. Keep in mind that all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. Second, it is important to keep a healthy and balanced diet. Staying away from junk food and eating healthy food like vegetables and fish will benefit you. Third, go outdoors and take regular exercise, as
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physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of pressure. Last but not least, good health means being both physically and mentally healthy. Keeping an optimistic state of mind will contribute to a good physical state.
I sincerely hope that the suggestions above will be of great help to you. 句型及短语积累: 1. My advice is as follows. 2.
The following is my advice.
3. Finally, remain optimistic about your future. Such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits.
4. Then it also helps to take proper exercise. Not only can it strengthen your health, but also it can make you feel relaxed.
5. Go outdoors and play team games with your friends as it is an effective way to keep healthy. 6. Second, you may as well take some exercise, which is a good way to keep healthy.
7. Third, go outdoors and take exercise. Not only can it help students keep healthy, but also it is a good way to reduce pressure.
8. First of all, I think it is a good idea to bine study and a good rest, which can help us keep energetic and active.
9. Second, you are supposed to eat healthy food as it will
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offer students enough energy.
10. In addition, you must eat healthy food so as to keep fit, which is of great importance to your study. 11. As an old saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy”.
12. Gone are the days when we were at senior 2 and the senior 3 is saying hello to us.
13. Go out to breathe fresh air and relax your brain.
14. Keeping a healthy diet is essential to you, which helps you keep fit.
15. The most important thing I think is to seek for the balance between study and pleasure.
16. keep a balance between study and relaxation 17. keep fit/healthy keep( in) good health
keep in good condition/shape keep in a good state of health 18. with time going by /as time goes by 19. take exercise 纠错:
1.Exercise everyday so that you will be much stronger. 2.remain a optimistic attitude towards life
3.Eat more vegetables, which can strength your health. 4.In addition, have a balanced diet can keep your health. 5.Only if you believe in yourself you can carry on as normal. 6.take good rest
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7.Under pressure of study, not only do our lives affected, but also we are in poor condition.(两处错)
8.Last but not least, remain optimistic is a good way to lift your spirits. 9.Taking exercise properly contributes to make you full of energy. 10.You should eat something which agrees with you .
11.At the same time, we are faced with much stress that results in many students can’t sleep well.
12.Here are some advice on how to solve it.
13.Only you ensure enough nutrition can you study better.
14.Finally, keep an optimistic attitude to life, it will be helpful in lifting your spirits.
15.write---_________---___________---____________(写出过
去式,过去分词,现在分词)
occur---______________---______________---__________
篇三:英语写作范文---提建议.
英语作文范文---提建议
1. 08年一模写作
在我们小的时候,父母和老师们就告诉我们要对别人有礼
貌,你是如何做的呢,请举出三个以上的例子,并谈谈你对
有关讲礼貌的看法和提出建议。
提示词语:young, tell, polite, for example, think, the 29th
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Olympic Games
Our parents and teachers told us to be polite to others when we were very young. Now I am doing things as they tell me. For example, I always wait in line while doing shopping and give my seat to the old on the bus. I never forget to greet teachers when I meet them in or out of the school. And I also say the words “Thank you”, “Sorry” and “You’re wele” to others whenever necessary.
In my opinion, politeness is very important to us all because it can help us not only get on very well with each other, but also make the society better and warmer, especially in the year of 2008, when the 29th Olympic Games will be held in Beijing. So I strongly suggest that we all should be polite to each other.
2. 08年一模写作
你的笔友Kate 昨天给你写了一封e-mail, 向你诉说她与
好友之间发生了矛盾,相处很不愉快,希望你能帮助她。假
如你是刘梅,请你给她回一封e-mail, 告诉她你也有类似的
经历,对她的问题提出你的建议,并谈谈你对朋友之间应如
何相处的看法。 注意事项:
1)提示的词汇供选用;
2)词数不少于60;
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3)信的开头和结尾已给出,文中不得出现真实的校名和
姓名。
提示词语:experience, fight, talk, write a letter, help, share
I can understand you. I have the same experience as you. Friendship is important to us. But the best friends may have fights. I think you need to have an honest talk with her when there is no one around. If she doesn’t want to talk, you could
write a letter to her. I think as good friends we should listen to their plaints when they are in trouble, and do our best to help them. We should make each other happy and share our lives.
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3. 08年一模写作
你的笔友Kate 昨天给你写了一封e-mail, 向你诉说她与
好友之间发生了矛盾,相处很不愉快,希望你能帮助她。假
如你是刘梅,请你给她回一封e-mail, 告诉她你也有类似的
经历,对她的问题提出你的建议,并谈谈你对朋友之间应如
何相处的看法。
注意事项:
1)提示的词汇供选用;
2)词数不少于60;
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3)信的开头和结尾已给出,文中不得出现真实的校名和
姓名。
提示词语:experience, fight, talk, write a letter, help, share
I can understand you. I have the same experience as you. Friendship is important to us. But the best friends may have fights. I think you need to have an honest talk with her when there is no one around. If she doesn’t want to talk, you could
write a letter to her. I think as good friends we should listen to their plaints when they are in trouble, and do our best to help them. We should make each other happy and share our lives.
4. 08年一模写作
根据中文大意,写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词
的短文。所给英文提示词语供选用。
假设你叫露西,昨天收到了朋友Nick的e-mail,得知他
马上就要期末考试了,但是每次考试之前他总是紧张,不知
道做些什么。请你用英文给他回复一封e-mail,介绍一下你
在考试前的一些做法或体会,并提出你的建议。(信的开头
和结尾已给出,其字数不计入所完成的短文内。)
提示词语:have a plan, work hard, rest, not to worry, sure
Dear Nick,
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Thanks for your letter. You asked me for some advice about revision(复习). First, I think you should have a good plan. Keep notes of what you want to revise each day. Second, don’t try to go over too much at a time. Work hard two or three hours and then have a short rest. Then do some more studying. When I was preparing for my exam, I also tried to eat healthy food and get plenty of sleep. I t for walks and sometimes I met my friends to talk about other things. And last try to keep calm and not to worry. I’m sure
you’ll be fine.(94word)
Yours,
Lucy
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5. 08年一模写作
学校的英语报正在就倡导节约进行征文。请你列举身边出
现的浪费现象(如:浪费学习用品、食物、水、电等), 分
析造成的原因,并提出你的改进建议。
注意事项:1)必须包括三个方面的内容;
2)提示词汇供选用;
3)词数不少于60。
4)请不要写出真实校名和姓名。
提示词语:good living condition, the only child(独生子
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女), waste,habit, make full use of (充分利用)
We are having good living condition. And most of us are the only child in the family. Our parents love us so much that we can have what we want. But some of our classmates don’t take good care of these things. They throw away their pen and paper. Some of them even waste food. I think it is bad habit. As students, we should make full use of what we are given. If we don’t need something, we can give it to those who are in great need. It’s important to save the resources
and it’s also our duty.
6.
6. 08年二模写作
根据中英文提示,写出内容完整、意思连贯、符合逻辑的
稿件。(字数不少于60词,英文提示词供选用)
有些学生不爱吃学校的午饭,常到校外去吃他们所喜欢的
食物。但有些食品并不利于他们的身体健康。“英语角”打算
针对这个问题展开讨论。请你准备一篇讨论稿,谈谈你的看
法和建议。
参考词汇:not like, go out of school, be afraid, be back, more delicious, offer
We know that some of our students do not like eating lunch at school because the food isn’t delicious. So they
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often go out of school to buy something they like to eat. But I’m afraid it’s bad for their health to eat lunch outside because some of the food they buy isn’t healthy enough. In
my opinion, if our schools want more students to be back and enjoy lunch inside, they should make the food more delicious, and they should offer our students a larger choice of food as well.
7(08年二模写作
根据中英文提示,写出内容完整、意思连贯、符合逻辑的
稿件。(词数不少于60词,英文提示词供选用)
一家英语俱乐部准备在假期组织同学们去国外举办夏令
营,请你就此发表自己的意见。内容包括:你是否愿意参加
本次夏令营,你对夏令营的活动有哪些建议,以及你的理由。
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提示词语:be glad, hear the news, would love, take part in, the summer camp(夏令营), hold parties, visit, relax, help
I’m very glad to hear the news. I’d love to take part in
the summer camp. Here are some suggestions. First we’d
better hold some parties with foreign students in order to know each other better. Next we can visit some museums, places of interest to open our eyes. Finally I hope we will have a chance to live in foreign families. I think it’s a good
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way to understand the different culture between two countries. I really want to make friends with foreign students because we’re in the same world. At the same time, the activities can help us relax after the examinations and improve our English.
05年中考大纲卷写作
假设你叫王明,昨天收到了笔友David的e-mail, 得知他
不久要到北京来学习中文。他想了解如何学好中文。请你用
英文给他回复一封e-mail, 介绍学习中文的体会和方法,提
出你的建议,以及表达你帮助他学好中文的愿望。
(信的开头和结尾已给出,其字数不计入所完成的短文内。)
提示词语; Chinese, be, useful, many foreigners, learn, now, difficult, different from, it is important…., listen, talk, read, write
Dear David,
I’m goad you’ll e to Beijing to learn Chinese. ____
Dear David,
I’m glad you’ll e to Beijing to learn Chinese. Chinese is very useful, and many foreigners are learning it now. It’s
difficult for you because it’s quite different from English. You have to remember as many Chinese words as possible. It’s also important to do some reading and writing. You can
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watch TV and listen to the radio to practise your listening. Do your best to talk with people in Chinese. You can learn Chinese not only from books but also from people around you. If you have any questions, please ask me. I’m sure you’
ll learn Chinese well. (90词)Hope to see you soon in Beijing.
Yours,
Wang Ming 4
06年中考大纲卷写作
假如你叫李玲,是英国中学生露茜的笔友,你收到了她的
电子邮件。请根据她来信的内容写一封回信。针对她的困惑,
谈谈你的看法,同时提出一些建议,告诉她应该做什么,不
应该做什么。
Hi Lucy,
Yours,
Li LingHi Lucy,
Nice to hear from you. Everyone has his favorite stars and there’s nothing wrong with that. I understand you. But I don’t think what you do is right since you are a student. You’d better read more interesting books and have more sports in your free time. Stop writing to him and watching his films. You may also tell your problem to your parents and teachers. I’m sure they’ll help you. Running away to
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Hollywood is a wrong idea. Work hard on your lessons and
get ready for the exams. Your future is in your hands. (91
词)
Yours,
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作文九:《给父母的一封建议书作文》2600字
给父母的一封建议书作文
在各类建议书的作文中,有不少写给父母的相关文章。下面是爱汇网小编给大家整理的给父母的一封建议书作文,供大家参阅!
给父母的一封建议书作文篇一
孩子读初中之后,更需要父亲的关怀。作为父亲,必须意识到自己肩上的教育责任,一定要记住:下班的路应该是回家的路。与父母一起吃饭的孩子更优秀。据研究机构调查:与父母一起进晚餐的初中生,能获得较好的营养,较高的学业成绩,很少出现抽烟、喝酒、吸毒、打架、提早性行为等。不要在孩子吃饭和睡觉时进行教育;不要把和孩子交谈,都变成对孩子的教。
2、父母好好学习,孩子天天向上。
父母改变,孩子改变。孩子的问题大多是父母教育不当造
成的。孩子生病,父母一定要吃药。好父母就是一所好学校。父母是孩子的最好的范本。身教重于言教。做父母的,要与孩子一起成长。
3、教育孩子的前提是了解孩子。把孩子当人,了解孩子的成长规律。做父母的,一定要理解孩子,找到与孩子沟通的语言密码,但要注意惜言如金。成熟的父母,应该学习儿童教育学、心理学,多看一些家教书刊,了解孩子不同成长阶段的特点和规律,经常与孩子沟通,明白孩子在想什么,在做什么。
4、一定要管孩子,关键是怎么管。教育的最基本的目的是培养正常的人。 一只手、一只眼和一根筋教育均不可取。 换一种思路教育孩子。努力丰富自己的教育方法。
5、做一个懂爱会爱的家长。不少父母爱得糊涂,爱得错位,有时又爱得过分。不要培养超级婴儿。爱是一门艺术。爱需要表达也需要行动。有时一个拥抱胜过千言万语。爱要适度,不要让你的爱泛滥成灾。溺爱的结果是伤害。
6、不能当众教育孩子。即使孩子做了最糟糕的事情,你要教育他也应该把孩子带回家,当众责骂、殴打,往往后果非常严重。对孩子的教育,最安全而又有效的方式,是应该在私下进行的,表扬可以公开,批评做到秘处,即使你的出发点是对的,但方式如果不当,不但没效果,甚至适得其反。
我们要意识到无论对孩子的表扬与批评都是一种情感互动,父母太强势,往往导致孩子没出息,父母太粗暴,孩子往往性情同样狂躁。有智慧的教师不需对学生严辞斥责,有智慧的父母,时刻能够意识到教育孩子不能追求立竿见影的效果。
教育最重要的是要尊重人的人格尊严,要保护孩子的心灵,做不到这一点,就没有真正的教育可言。
7、不要完全把孩子交给长辈或保姆。
任何人都需要获得两个基本要素:一是爱,二是安全。幸
福的人之所以幸福,是因为他既有爱又有安全感。不幸的人之所以不幸,要么因为只有爱而没有安全感,要么因为只有安全感而没有爱。最不幸的人是那些既没有爱又没有安全感的人。
对孩子来说,他极度地渴望爱,又极度地渴求安全感。在爱与安全感两个要素之间,任何一个要素的缺失,都将对孩子的成长构成不可修复的伤害。
孩子的安全感来自他的父母的陪伴。父母在哪里,哪里就是他的家。伏尔泰:对亚当而言,天堂是他的家;然而对于亚当的后裔而言,家是他们的天堂。
8、在孩子面前多夸老师。
学会用赏识的眼光看老师。家长和老师是同一战壕的战友,一定要与老师结成同盟军。如果家长在孩子面前总是絮絮叨叨诉说老师的不是,批评老师,甚至与老师争吵,只会增加孩子对老师的排斥心理。久而久之,受害的是孩子,吃亏的是家长。
给父母的一封建议书作文篇二
亲爱的爸爸:
我知道您爱喝酒,可是不能经常喝啊,这样会伤害您的身体的,要是你的身体出了问题那可不得了。最重要的是,您可是部队飞行员呀!喝醉了,再开飞机,要是在飞机上睡着了,那多危险啊!再说了,您飞行时不在家、要是休息了还不在家的话,您看看妈妈瘦弱的身体,她能撑得住吗?要是妈妈累出病了,我还要上学,谁来照顾妈妈呢?
可您总是控制不住自己,竟然下了班还喝酒liuxue86.,回来的时候都八九点了,害得妈妈忍着腰疼干重活,还要辅导我的作业和签字。想到这些事儿,您难道就不心疼妈妈,您就这样心甘情愿地连累妈妈吗?
我一直控制您喝酒,可您就是不听我的话,还说什么喝酒
是因为有事儿了、没办法了、酒可以热身、也含有一定营养什么有事儿、没办法了?您要是不喝,别人还强迫喂您喝不成?对身体有什么营养啊?要是有营养的话,我早就抱着酒瓶子喝个没完没了了。爸爸,我想问您一下:酒真的好喝吗?要是好喝,那为什不让我们小孩子喝酒呢?
所以,亲爱的爸爸,我建议您还是少喝酒啦!您记住了吗?
给父母的一封建议书作文篇三
亲爱的爸爸:
我知道您爱喝酒,可是不能经常喝啊,这样会伤害您的身体的,要是你的身体出了问题那可不得了。最重要的是,您可是部队飞行员呀!喝醉了,再开飞机,要是在飞机上睡着了,那多危险啊!再说了,您飞行时不在家、要是休息了还不在家的话,您看看妈妈瘦弱的身体,她能撑得住吗?要是妈妈累出病了,我还要上学,谁来照顾妈妈呢?
可您总是控制不住自己,竟然下了班还喝酒,回来的时候都八九点了,害得妈妈忍着腰疼干重活,还要辅导我的作业和签字。想到这些事儿,您难道就不心疼妈妈,您就这样心甘情愿地连累妈妈吗?
我一直控制您喝酒,可您就是不听我的话,还说什么喝酒是因为有事儿了、没办法了、酒可以热身、也含有一定营养什么有事儿、没办法了?您要是不喝,别人还强迫喂您喝不成?对身体有什么营养啊?要是有营养的话,我早就抱着酒瓶子喝个没完没了了。爸爸,我想问您一下:酒真的好喝吗?要是好喝,那为什不让我们小孩子喝酒呢?
所以,亲爱的爸爸,我建议您还是少喝酒啦!您记住了吗?
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篇一:小学作文:给父母的一封建议书
给父母的一封建议书
爸爸妈妈:
我感到你们对我的学习压力太大 ,有时我写完作业,刚想要出去玩,你们发现了,便“逼”着我去复习,我被“逼”无奈,只能乖乖地服从命令。你们这样让我没有自己的想法,我想要一个属于我自己的空间。
我知道,在爱的过程中,你们训斥我,打骂我。我觉得你们用这种方式来体罚我是不对的。你们在训斥我时也会感到特别的心痛,我也知道你们很爱我,可是你们用的方法不对,我们小孩子不听话的原因,就是你们用体罚的方法不对,我们加以抵抗。我建议你们换一种教育我们的方法,让我们得到更多的爱。同时也改掉那些不好的习惯,我想给你们提些建议,比如:
1.孩子做错了事就不要打孩子。要是
孩子做错了事,你们最好不要上来就打孩子,要给孩子说一说道理,给孩子讲一讲怎样来补救,然后,让孩子找一找原因。
2.孩子考试如果考得不好,不要给孩子说一些不好听的话:如:你再考不好我就不要你了,你考不好就别吃饭??你们这么对孩子说,孩子在考试的时候会很紧张,就更考不好。等到老师念成绩了,孩子考不好,就非常害怕,有时老师让签字,有的孩子考不好,就不愿意拿出卷子来让父母签字了。要是孩子考试考不好的话,你们家长们不要对孩子又打又叫的,这样孩子就会更加害怕,时间长了就会有离家出走的现象,这主要与家长们平常对孩子打骂有关系,所以,家
长们要站在孩子的那一边想一想。我希望家长们的这些坏习惯,都应该好好反省一下,用最温暖的爱来关心你的孩子,教育你的孩子。 平常,你们训斥我之后,我都会顶嘴。现在我长大了,我知道错了,也跟你们说一声“对不起”,我知道你们都是对我好,我也希望你们能改正你的教育方法,让我健康快乐的
成长。
爸爸妈妈,我知道你们“望女成凤”的心情,但如果你们改变方法,合理安排的教育我们,也许会更好~
篇二:给景区的建议书
旅游景区开发建议书
一、项目名称: 项目
二、项目点基本情况 (村委会、村小组及开发点情况概述)
三、项目实施的具体内容共分两个片区开发:(一)自然风景打造项目,包括国有林仙人洞景区项目(包括溶洞景
观、攀岩、原始森林探秘等)、水上娱乐项目(主要有游艇、摩托艇、水上自行车、水上滑翔
伞、江上游泳池等)、拓展训练项目(以打造团队凝聚力及互信精神为主的专业训练)、热带
水果自采项目、新渡口拉祜文化休闲体验区(包民风、民俗传统文化展示)等五个主体项目;
(二)农耕文化传播及农事体验区,包括野谷潭科普教育基地、农事体验区、农产品初
加工区、种植示范区。
三、项目拟建规模
景区规划建设面积 亩:(一)自然风景打造项目亩;(二)农耕文化传播及农事体
验区 亩。
四、项目投资估算及资金来源
(一)项目投资估算:预计项目总投资万元。
(二)资金来源:
1、自筹资金:该项目通过合资万元。
2、其他来源:申请上级专项资金万元。
五、经济效益预测
项目建设成后,年可接待游客 万人次,远期可达 万人次,按人平消费 元计算,年
可实现营业收入万元,远期年营业收入可达万元。
六、项目建设期
项目建设期为四年
七、项目建成后的社会效益一是该项目的建成将有效解决当地大部分村民的就业问题,同时增加村民的长期、稳定
经济收入;二是景区建成后,以其
优美的自然风光和农业生态旅游主题吸引旅游者,并将旅
游者的休闲娱乐、开展多项体育活动融于一体,发挥出其他风景名胜区不可替代的作用。篇
二:关于景区运营方面的建议鼎商国际管理公司关于黄河小浪底风景区 运营管理的建议 为了更好的提高小浪底景区的管理服务形象和服务品质,河南鼎商国际管理公司有幸与2013年接管景区进行经营管理工作。在小浪底风景区
领导的指挥下,通过半年时间的深入调研和具体工作调整,发现景区目前运营管理方面存在
以下问题:
1、在景区售票和检票处,存在三方共管的局面。三 方的权利和责任没有明确和制度化的分工,三方员工的服装、仪容仪表、语言行为规范
和日常行为管理不能统一,整体服务形象和服务品质无法得到根本的改变。在检票环节,由
于各方的接待安排和责任的推诿,会造成私自放人的现象,管理和协调难
度极大。
2、在售票和检票处,存在重要服务窗口的卫生保洁 状态和服务要求不符的现象。由于工作性质和工作标准的不同,在服务区域的卫生要求
也就不一样,这样造成各个部门的要求都达标,但是游客不认同,领导不认同的现象。虽然,
主任或领班可以及时沟通,但是效果不太理想。在景区检票处,保安应该根据游客状态,积
极配合检票员做到门前秩序 1 / 6
的维护,游客的分流和安全的提醒工作,但在实际工作中很难进行有效配合。景区检票
员只负责检票通道,无法对其他通道进行管理,所以无法做到景区实际入园人数与检票人数
相符的状态。另外无法对南门进行管理,无法对进入景区的车辆进行管理,都会造成入园管
理的混乱。
(本文来自:WWw.HNboxU. 博 旭 范文 网:向父母写旅游建议书作文)3、景区的商户管理,难度极大。景区
对于商户的管 理是个系统的工作,是必须赋予相对应的权利的,现在旅游服务部没有制约商户的有效
手段,只能采取积极的诱导方式,虽然制定了商户具体的管理制度,但是处罚的权利,合同
管理的权利的缺失,使得工作成效较小。
4、在册导游的管理,我们可以进行规范。但是,无证件的野导在景区外部截留游客,从
被破坏的围墙进入景区,属于违法行为,我们旅游服务部很难进行打击,从根本上解决这个
问题发生。
5、旅游公司和鼎商管理公司关于合同认知的差别,不利于景区实际运营工作的开展。主
要表现在以下方面:
5.1旅游公司和鼎商管理公司关于运营管理成本,费用方面的认知差别。在实际工作中
反映为展厅的花卉租赁费用的支出,宿舍物品配备和相关费用的支付应不属于合同规定的运
行管理工作所涉及到的相关费用的范畴,另外我们需要明确为景区产品提升项目所产生的物
品的购买应该属于景 2 / 6 区硬件设施或设备的投入,不应计入合同所规定的费用支出项目和为景区接待所产生的
费用,也不应计入鼎商管理团队的运营费用中。
5.2旅游公司和鼎商管理公司关于旅游管理项目的认知差别。按照合同规定的受托项目
设计:售检票服务管理,导游讲解服务,商品服务,游客咨询服务和人员管理。其中关于售
检票服务,合同涉及的是服务形象的提升和管理体系的建立,不能等同于游客的入园的管理。
游客入园的管理,包括检票通道的管理和保安通道的管理。作为鼎商管理公司,只能根据所
赋予的权限,对检票通道进行制度化的管理,确保检票通道的服务质量的提高和改善,而不
是游客入园的管理得规范化。
鼎商国际管理团队结合旅游行业发展趋势和国家政策,通过科学的分析,提出以下建议:
1、建议组建黄河小浪底风景区股份有限公司,整合旅游管理公司,济源市旅游局和孟津县旅游局的股份。建立公司董事会和监事会,委托
鼎商国际管理公司全权管
理,改变现在互相派人,形象混乱,多头指挥的多头管理的混乱局面。只有建立了规范
的公司化的管理体制,才能在根本上解决景区目前服务形象的混乱和服务品质低下的状态,3 / 6 才能整合景区的产品资源和管理资源,统一形象的进行景区的品牌化市场运作,才能改
变景区运营管理成本过高的状态,增强景区的竞争力和盈利能力。
2、建议调整小浪底枢纽风景区内部管理板块功能,确定二线部门服务一线部门的管理思
想,增加对于景区旅游服务部的政策支持和关注力度。使旅游服务部能够真正成为服务游客,
展示景区形象的核心。拥有可以迅
速解决可能发生或者已经发生的问题的与相关部门沟通的
主动权利和简化的沟通渠道。
3、建议成立联合执法小组治理野导私自截留游客放人的现象。联合执法小组专项负责,
严格查处并严肃处理破坏景区围墙等安全设施的人和事件。
4、建议公司在景区入口安装监控,做到入口的监控管理。划清景区检票与保安人员对通
道控制的职责,建立工作人员入园门岗管理制度和证件管理制度。只有职责分清,制度明确,
才能从根本上解决景区门前私自放人现象。
5、关于商户管理,建议整合公司资源,委托部分权利给景区旅游服务部,便于景区旅游
服务部根据游客需求,强化商户的服务形象管理,增加特色商户,丰富景区产品完善景区的
服务功能配套。4 / 6
6、小浪底景区目前展现出来的主题较为单一,大型水利工程的核心——大
坝和发电厂没
有对外开放;黄河文化产品和水文化产品开发和维护力度不够;小浪底坝前山水景观线没有
得到有效利用。景区没有对产品进行组合,告知游客景区的建议游玩路线和游玩方式。移民
文化景观展示方式单一,民俗化和体验化打造不足。娱乐产品开发力度较小,游客在景区留
不住。针对以上问题,我们将会近期提出景区软文化产品的提升方案,以供景区领导参考。
7、东门是景区接待游客入园最重要的形象窗口,目前建筑特色缺失,游客中心等服务接
待设施缺失,入口闸道太少,设施落后,很难对游客形成好的第一印象并有效解决游客入园
问题。而且东门入口在景区停车场内,车辆没有和景区做到分离,再加上员工车辆,造成东
门形象及其混乱,有好多外地车辆从景区停车场前穿过,再倒回停车场入园的现象。我们认
为,东门就是我们整个黄河小浪底风景区的脸面,建议公司领导在旅游淡季,尽快解决东门
目前的现状。十一前,我们希望景区和公司领导能够临时性解决东门入口的遮阳临时通道,
再开辟2个入口通道和专用出口,解决游客入园问题;景区售票处如果可以适当改变结构,
安装整块钢化玻璃,就能好的提升形象。员工停车处建议再向北移,空出地方设立游客咨询
处和导游服务处,完善景区的服务功能。 5 / 6 篇三:红龙湖景区建设项目建议书 红龙湖风景区旅游开发项目建 议 书
一、项目概况
红龙湖风景区位于古蔺县城北部,距县城20公里,距泸州180公里,与省基建项目龙爪
河饮水工程紧密相连。全区海拔在1130—1835米之间,景区总面积20平方公里,年均降雨
量1200毫米,年均温度12?c,无霜期为190天,森林植被覆盖率达98%,
负氧离子含量极
高。景区蜿蜒曲折十余里,湖面水明如镜,有山皆绿,无水不清,湖光山色引人入胜;冬季
一片银装素裹,是川南独有的冰雪奇观,经四川省林业厅批准建立为省级森林公园。 以红龙
水库为主的红龙湖景区,共建有水库四座,人工水面达763亩,区内无人居住、无耕种作业,
主要特色有:
1、峰峦丹霞地质景观:青龙峡,红龙瀑布,舍身崖、风动岩,石笋峰等。
2、云海景观:位于古蔺县最高海拔1834米的斧头山,气候温和湿润,云雾缭绕,晨曦
日出、夕阳晚霞尽收眼底。
3、森林植物景观:区内植物种类繁多,亚热带季风气候哺育出丰富多彩的植物景观,常
绿落叶、针叶、阔叶交相辉映、春绿夏浓、秋艳冬白,植物的季节变化勾绘出五彩斑斓的风
光画卷。
4、人工湖泊景观:景区内共建有四
个水库,以红龙湖为主,其它三个分别是黑串崖水库、
大烂坝水库、廖灌岩水库,四库各- 1 - 具特色,自成一体。
二、项目背景和政策支持
(一)项目提出的背景和必要性2007年古蔺县生产总值(gdp)为336049万元,城镇居民人均可支配收入达8235元,
农民人均可支配收入达2552元。2007年古蔺县第十次党代会明确提出“稳农”、“强工”、“兴
旅”、“活城”、“招商”促进社会经济发展的“五篇文章”,把旅游业做为第三产业的龙头来抓,
作为古蔺经济持续发展的新动力,古蔺旅游得到前所未有的发展。
(二)国家相关的政策支持
1、景区建设期间的建设用地,涉及到的公共基础设施建设,由政府无偿提供。对于旅游
设施用地,按照招拍挂的形式向政府购买,或者是直接向政府租用,政府按照一定标准,安
排旅游发展专项资金补助开发商用
地。
2、景区开发初期,业主投资开发景区的银行贷款,经双方协商,政府可对业主开发景区
的银行贷款贴息补偿。
3、投资商享受我县支持旅游开发的相关税收方面的优惠政策,同时,县政府帮助投资商
向上争取资金和项目,用于旅游开发建设。
4、投资商需要的其它优惠政策,经双方平等协商后,一企一策进行约定。
5、实行“一站式”服务,及时帮助投资商办理各种手续和- 2 - 解决开发建设中的有关问题。
(三)项目的投资人概况项目投资人具有一定的旅游发展理念和发展思路,对发展休闲度假游有独特的认识,能
坚持一次规划,分步实施,滚动发展的理念。
三、项目定位和选址
(一)项目定位
以高端的商务度假为打造方向,在夏季,做足湖泊旅游的文章,抓住高端
旅游市场,开
拓高档的避暑度假旅游市场;在冬季,瞄准冰雪观光度假市场,积极发展冰雪观光项目。依
托红龙湖景区优势大力发展:“商务会议”、“餐饮娱乐”、 “游艇观光”、“体育运动”、“滨水
休闲度假”、“疗养保健”、“休闲垂钓”、“旅游地产”等项目,整合人文旅游资源,配套独具
现代特征的度假型产品,打好“高山湖泊”牌,做足休闲度假文章,进而推动度假旅游,带
动本区旅游全面发展。
(二)项目选址
古蔺县位于四川盆地南缘,泸州市境内,大娄山西段北侧,紧邻贵州,赤水河三面环绕。
全县幅员面积3182平方公里,森林覆盖率45.4%,辖26个乡镇,居住有十三个民族,总人
口83万。距川南中心城市泸州157km,距成都420km,距重庆320km,距贵阳310km,距遵义
240km。321国道(西南出海辅助通
道)大方至纳溪段,系本县过境公路;已开工建设的川黔
高速和茅遵
- 3 - 高速从古蔺边缘经过,我县已完成连接两条高速公路的快速通道建设(叙永—古蔺—茅
台的一级公路133km)。
县委、县政府高度重视红龙湖景区开发,目前正按总体规划的要求,进行度假区的基础
设施建设,红龙湖风景区位于古蔺县城北部,距县城20公里,县城—红龙水库的25公里水
泥路已通至库尾,有3.45公里的泥结碎石道直达大坝右端。乌龙—大寨—黄荆—红龙湖—县
城的旅游环线公路正在紧急策划中。
(三)项目投资的必要性该项目已被纳入我县重点旅游开发项目,资源类型丰富,适宜发展旅游观光和休闲度假
游。与蜀南竹海、兴文石海、重庆江津四面山、贵州赤水十丈洞以及泸州合江佛宝构成完整
的丹霞地貌体系,是川、黔、渝生
态旅游金三角的重要组成部分,同时县内的太平四渡赤水
红色经典景区、以郎酒、赤水河漂流而著称的二郎美酒河景区也闻名遐迩。随着旅游产业的
转型升级,该区域具有较高的旅游开发价值。
四、项目开发思路及初步规划
(一)本项目开发的目标及指导思想 总体目标是把红龙湖风景区打造为全国一流的高端度假旅游胜地。近期(2009-2010年):
完成基础设施,旅游接待服务区建设,年接待游客达5万人次;中期(2011-2015年):基本
形成商务会议、疗养保健基地,年接待游客达8万人次;远期(2016-2025
年):进一步充实
度假旅游产品,优化产品结构,- 4 -
提升服务档次,年接待游客达10万人次以上。
(二)总体规划布局和功能分区
1、环湖观光游道
提升游客的可参与性,为游客提供一条与红龙湖“亲密接触” 的方便快捷
的“绿色通道”,
游道由环湖电瓶车道和自行车道组成。
2、湖畔度假村
度假村由二大部分组成:一部分以度假为主,分别建有欧美式或具有浓郁川南民居特色
的度假别墅或高档宾馆。另一部分以商务、会议、娱乐为主要内容,建有会议、娱乐中心、
餐饮中心等。
3、风情街
建设一条类似成都锦里的风情街,以步行街的形式,设有邮局、书报亭、咖啡屋、酒吧、
工艺品商店、服饰店、茶楼、风味小吃、土特产等特色街区,形成与商务区的鲜明对照,以
体现中西文化的对话、交流和融合。并在特定节日举行具有鲜明民俗特色的主题活动。
4、游艇俱乐部
游艇俱乐部是旅游业的高端产品,是国内休闲运动领域的一个新形势。游艇俱乐部将和
国际市场接轨,采用会员制管理模式,开发挖掘红龙湖丰富的水上旅游资源。俱乐部集度假、观光、垂钓为一体,建有一流的水上游艇专- 5 -篇四:景区旅游开发项目项目建议书xx景区旅游开发项目
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第十章 目 录 项目概况 项目开发必要性 项目开发规模及实施进度计划市场预测分析 项目
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第一章 项目概况
一、区位条件
篇三:家长给学校的建议书
家长给学校的建议书
作为学生家长,我想向校方提一些建议。这些建议也是我们许多学生家长的心愿。建议学校多组织学生进行社会实践活动,学校还可以多组织艺术节或读书节之类的,丰富学生的课外生活。为了培养学生的口才,还可以举行演讲比赛。
孩子是祖国的花朵,是社会主义建设的接班人,关心孩子健康成长是一件很重要的事情。学校应建立一支优秀的教师队伍,制定严格的管理制度,设计高标准的教育方案,运用灵活的教学方法,来促使学生的健康成长。
把孩子从分数和名次中解放出来。应试教育在目前还存在,因此彻底摆脱分数与名次的压力还是有些难度。所以父母要端正观念,并与孩子逐步形成共识;只要努力了,即便没有考好也不必太在意。奋斗者的脚下总是有路可走的。
尊重孩子的想法,对前途的选择要
符合孩子的实际情况。要真正解放孩子,最重要的是尊重孩子,只有彻底尊重了他们,才能使他们远离枷锁。
家长们对学校和老师充满了感激和肯定。说实在的,想到自己平时再苦再累也值了。在此,也非常感谢家长的支持、理解和鼓励。下面就将我校的家长代表填写的建议和意见和大家分享:
1、 感谢学校六年来对学生的付出。爱心、耐心是学校的最优秀的特色。
2、 既抓好了学生的基础知识,又培养了学生的综合社会实践能力,为学生的人生之路打下了一个好的基础。
3、 学校的整体发展的理念是先进的,是同社会的发展进步吻合的,能够充分挖掘学校、家庭、社会的联系,使学生成为一个负责任、有爱心,有同情心的人。
感动之余,我不断地反复地咀嚼着这样几句话“抓好学生的基础知识,培养学生的综合实践能力,为学生的人生之路打下一个好的基础”,又不断地反思自己的教育和教学,想到班上基础知识还不够扎实的学生,我忧虑。我还将加大力度抓好学生的基础知识,培养学生
的综合实践能力,才能真正地为学生的人生之路打下一个好的基础。
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